大学新生入学英语自我介绍精选3篇 作文范文【汇总20篇】

介 What impresses me most in Beijing is the Great Wall which is one of the greatest projects in the world. Its not only the cultural heritage, but also a symbol of China. "Its glorious." I think. It looks like a big dragon running across the mountainous area. It starts Shanhaiguan in the east to Jiayuguan in the west. Its so long that nobody can walk from the beginning to the end.

在北京给我印象最深的是长城，是世界上最大的项目之一。它不仅是文化遗产，也是中国的象征。”我觉得“它很辉煌"。它就像一条巨龙穿越山区。从东面的山海关开始一直延伸到西边的嘉峪关。太长了以至于没有人能从走到尾。

It was firstly built in Qin Dynasty and prolonged in Ming and Qing dynasties. It was used to protect the enemies from invading in the past, but now it has become the place of interest which attracts so many tourists both at home and abroad.

它始建于秦朝，一直延期到明清时期。在过去它是用来防止敌人的入侵，但现在它已成为名胜古迹，吸引了很多国内外游客。

When I was standing on the top of the Great Wall, I felt as if I were in ancient days. I could see many laborers working very hard. How could they finish this extremely difficult task by hand?

当我站在长城上时，我感觉我像是在古代一样。我可以看到很多劳动者努力工作。他们怎么能用手工完成这个艰巨的任务?

Hello，everyone！Nice to meet you！ My name is .I come from . junior middle school .I like English very much。 Usually， I listen to some English music. I think that English is very useful in the future so I study hard at it。 I have many friends . We help each other in the study and life。I love them very much. Thank you very much.

转眼之间我的大学生涯就已经进行了一个月，大学的种种幻想都被打破了。本来在高中的时候老师经常会用诸如：大学很轻松；大学很快乐，可以干自己想干的事情，看自己喜欢看的书，甚至可以任意的去挥霍自己来之不易的青春。但是，我深刻地感受到这只不过是高中老师在高考之前给我们的类似于“望梅止渴”的激励而已，真正到了这个时候，我才发现，一切原来都没有那么简单。

大学确实是一个比较开放和自由的地方，但是这儿的“开放，自由。”仅仅局限于我们对于自己时间的支配上。每周的课程都不多，一般一天只用上大半天的课，但是这也就意味着老师就要将自己的课程压缩在很短的时间内教授完成。我们的课程安排的相当不科学，经常都是几节课连堂上一门课。到最后都听得昏昏沉沉的，完全不知道老师在说些什么。最可怕的是老师说的重点内容往往只说一遍，从来不会重复。所以自学就成了占据我大部分时间的一个必修课！

说完学习，来说说室友吧！虽然说室友们都来自五湖四海，但是他们都还不错，但是对于学习似乎都不太重视（可能是他们的高中时代太压抑了，到大学来释放吧！？），上课的时候几乎都是不听课的，作业也喜欢抄袭别人的。这一点我觉得真的很不可取。我是从一个实行宽松教育的高中：芜湖一中走过来的学生，所以我深知，在开学阶段如果没有抓紧的话就会陷入一种被动的学习境地，这样不断下去就会形成一种恶性循环，对于我们未来的学习时间是相当不利的！所以为了一个北航梦，我决定不在乎别人对我的种种评价，好好学习，争取在四年之后可以实现我的目标（北航计算机学院）！

在校园也开展了多种多样的活动，有一个叫做大学生创业协会的部门吸引了我。因为我是一个计算机迷，高中的很多时间都砸在研究计算机安装、检修等方面了！所以我选择了这个协会，并且通过了两轮面试，成功地进入了协会。我们的协会主打的是计算机维修，所以在这里我可以学到计算软件之外的硬件知识！所以我为我高中时候逝去的时间稍稍感到了一点儿欣慰！在未来的生涯中，我会尽我最大的努力，好好学习，不断进步的！

对于爱情，我一直很迷茫，始终找不到方向。看着室友们和女生打成一片的时候，说实话，我真的很羡慕，但是又反过来想一想自己需要为理想付出的代价，我还是觉得这是微不足道的，所以我选择了放弃！

对于未来，无非就是考研与就业，或许是心存不甘吧！我想去实现自己人生中算得上是终极目标的目标————北航，所以我愿意付出我的一切而为之奋斗！加油！

good afternoon, my dear friends.

i am very happy to meet you here.it is my great honor to communicate with you at such a special occation.first of all,please allow me to express my appreciation to you all to listion to me.

i am proud of being a college student.the collegelife is fresh,new teachers, new classmates and new friends. i like the friendship, and their wide knowledge and opening mind. the grand library, school buildings and wide playground attrattde me very much.my college life is better than i expected, i can do anything i like. in the college we can not only learn the professional knowledge,but also develop our comprehensive abilities.if we can make full use of the period,we can learn many useful things.besides,we should have the active attitude to our life,do a contributionto the society.collegelife is the most precious time in our life.most of us want to become an outstanding man. but there are some students still waste their time. they get together for eating, drinking or playing cards. theyre busy in searching for a girlfriend or a boyfriend. they completely forget their task as college students.

finally, i hope everybody can try their best to become a worthy person to our country, and make great contributions to the society!

下午好，我亲爱的朋友们。

我见到你很高兴，这是我莫大的荣誉，在这样一个特殊的occation.first所有与你交流，请允许我表达我的感激你们都要听我的。

我是一所大学的student.the问题自豪的是新鲜的，新的老师，新的同学，新的朋友。我喜欢他们的友谊，他们广博的知识和开放的思想。宏伟的图书馆，教学楼和宽阔的操场attrattde我的大学生活比我预料的好，我可以做任何我想做的事。在大学里我们不仅可以学到专业知识，也培养我们的综合abilities.if我们可以充分利用时间，我们可以学到很多有用的东西。此外，我们应该对我们的生活产生积极的态度，做贡献的society.collegelife是我们大部分人最宝贵的时间，想成为一个优秀的男人。但也有一些学生仍在浪费时间。他们聚在一起吃饭、喝酒或打牌。他们忙着找女朋友或男朋友。他们完全忘记了大学生的任务。

最后，我希望每个人都能尽自己最大的努力成为一个有价值的人，为社会做出贡献！

Thank you for giving me the chance to interview and it is my pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is LiFeng. I major in ……and I will graduate from the…….. Medical University in July, 20XX. Hope a chance to work and develop in your department.

During the past three years, under the strict guidance of my tutor, professor ……in college of ………, I have learned systematically the theory of profession and got the basic manipulative skills about …….. With the help of my supervisor, I have successfully finished the subject “……… ” and grasped some experimental skill , such as cell culture, DNA extraction and other molecular biology technique; abstraction, separation, … I passed the CET band 6 test in20XX, after that, I tried my best to learn Medical English and mastered a lot of professional vocabulary. I am good at listening, speaking, reading and writing.. I can manipulate computer proficiently and master Microsoft Office software, also be familiar with SPSS and Photoshop, etc.

During three-year study in research, I studied hard and strived for excellence in our field. I benefit from working together with excellent colleague. I developed quality of diligence, responsibility, kindness and honesty. My internship in college of ….. could qualify me for this job, and I believe I can be fit for the position quickly. I am looking forward to working in your department. If I am admitted, I will be thankful and try my best to work for you.

[研究生求职英语自我介绍

8College life

When I was young at high school,I couldnt stop dreaming about my college life again and again.Suffering too much pressure form college entrance test,I always admired college students for their relaxed life in college.

In my personal opinion,living in university is  an enjoyment.Every day we can open our eyes naturally,and put on clothes in our own style without warring about teachers rigid control.Communicating with great master is no longer beyond our reach.Each course we take can be a feast for our mind and soul.After class,we will lead a rich and colorful life filled with various leisure activities such as .Library in  university is another factor I pursue.I think its an access to enhancing our comprehensive abilities to read even just scan all  sorts of

writings.Whats more,we will have so much disposable time that we can do whatever worthy.And our contact group will be extended signally via organizing and participating many activities.All in all,I once imagined that I can live a life that is substantial but meaningful.

However,I just have to admit that what I just describe is really dream.Now living in SD I cant figure out what I pursue and make a feasible career planning.So many young cynics in this schoolyard  argue for something meaningless.Worse still,the academic atmosphere has already done with nothing left.I havent found a busy but rich thing to try my best.As a matter of fact,I even cant choose a lifestyle I prefer.What a tragedy it is between dream and reality. 篇二：大学生活的英语作文怎么写

Life in the university is not as satisfactory as what we had expected.

First of all, we are tightly hound by continual classes, excessive homework and exams; some students complain that we are becoming “exam machines”. Secondly, the teaching method is boring; instead of lecturing, some teachers just “read” lessons. Finally, living conditions need to be improved; and food in the dining-hall is far from being attractive and tasteful.

In spite of all these adversities we still enjoy our life in the university. During the four-year university study, we can not only acquire a lot of book learning, but also foster various abilities. All types of extracurricular activities such as sports meets, speech contests, different social gatherings and dancing parties provide opportunities to make friends; many of these friendships may last a long time.

In short,we should value our life in the university. Four years is only a short period when compared with our whole lifetime. In the university we mature, and in the university we prepare ourselves for the real world. Although there are many things lacking, the four years in the university is a worthwhile period in our whole lifetime.

My College---My New Life

New life begins! Ive been expecting this moment for a long time.Finally,I become a college student .

All good things must come to an end ! I am now apart from my family members and many good friends.I am awared that I will have to do everything on my own .

Being responsible is the exact thing that I am supposed to think about! Im now dealing something responsibly with my new rommates.I enjoy being together with them,they just like my good friends in high school,being kind and thoughtful !

My college is a place for a new beginning ,Im sure Im taking a new life ,everything here is full of challenge,quite different from things in high school,teachers are not going to tell you exactly what you are going to do ,you will have to make your own decisions.

So far,Im geting along so well with people aroud me ,college provides me with chances and challenge,Im going to make a difference to my life!And I have every confidence on myself.I will still have to move on......

解释：

我的大学----我的新生

新的生命开始了！ 我期待这一刻很久了。终于，我成为大学生了。

天下没有不散的宴席！我与我的家人和许多好朋友分开了！我意识到我做一切事情都要靠自己了！

有责任感，这是我首先要考虑的！ 我现在能够带着一种责任感与我的新室友一起处理一些事情，我很享

受跟他们在一起的时光，他们就想我高中的朋友，一样的友好，体贴！

大学是一个重新开始的地方，我确信我已经在过我的新活，这里的一切是那么的有挑战性，不像高中的时候，

大学老师是不会什么事都告诉你，你该做什么，要怎么做。你必须自己做决定。

目前，我和身边的人都相处得很好，大学给我提供了很多机会，也同时给我带来挑战，我将使我的人生变得不同，我对自己有100%的信心。我还将继续向前走......

[我的大学英语精选作文

各位同学：

大家好!很高兴假如这样一个温暖的集体。希望大家记住我的名字：***(最好详细的分析一下，有助大家记忆。）

我在初中时的成绩还可以(比较一般/不太好/还不错),但是对于高中新的生活，我觉得它意义并不大。重要的是，我有我的梦想，而且我会为之不懈奋斗。(如果你愿意，可以描述你的梦想)我需要的是更加合理的学习方法，更加不屈不挠的斗志，以及百分之一百二的努力、坚持。有梦，我决不放弃。我知道前面未知的路有欢乐、有收获，也有磨练。我相信，我有勇气有能力去应对一切!梦想永不褪色。

再一次希望大家记住我。

谢谢大家!

I have spent fifteen years in my life. So, this is my ninth year to study. By the way, my name is WengJingru. My father thought hard about my name. He consulted the dictionary two times to find how to name me. Of course, this name is very good and I like it very much.

Sometimes I think I am a little strange. Because I often think the world isn’t full of happiness. And I want to be different from others. I hate superficial people. But always I am very out-going and kind to others. I can’t say ‘no’ to others. So I don’t know how to refuse.

I can’t see I am a pretty girl, but I am not an ugly person, either. I am very general. I can’t say too much about my appearance.

In this term, I make a little progress in my study. In my life, I have my parents’ love, and many, many people’s love. I am happy. I achieved so much, and I also lost so much.   My star sign is Aquarius. It represents kindness and wisdom. But I don’t think I am such a clever person. Maybe I am modest. Aquarius has many friends. It also says that some people think I am strange because I hate to be like others. I try to do everything differently.

I like yellow the most. Yellow is the color of the sun, it can remind me of a warm, sunny day. Yellow is also the color of wisdom. And I like it because it is one of the colors that are vivid.

Of course, most students have problems in their study. I don’t know how to make progress. I think I should work harder. That is the only way.

I like reading very much. My favorite writer is GuoJingming. And now I am reading a book called ‘Gone with Wind’. I keep reading half an hour every day.

I like English and Chinese best. I want to establish an English club. I want everyone to speak English in the daily life.

All above are my real things. I hope everyone will like me.

师兄师姐好，我叫xxx，我觉得自己是一个活泼开朗，积极向上的阳光型男孩。我的座右铭是：简单做人，踏实做事，做最好的自己。什么叫简单做人呢？就是与人交际要随和，要亲切，要有礼貌，还要时刻保持微笑，以真诚之心待人。那什么叫踏实做事呢？就是对待学习和工作，就要收起嘻嘻哈哈的笑脸，认认真真，一丝不苟，对自己所做的事情负起自己的一份责任。而什么叫做最好的自己呢？那就是做人做事最后要形成自己的风格，然后将这种风格由己及人，为他人的学习生活提供一种借鉴。

当然，我也有自己的缺点和不足，比如社会经验缺乏，没有足够的工作经验，而这也正是我希望加入此部门的主要原因，希望借此挺高自己的各项技能，扩宽自己的交际范围，同时也为社团贡献出自己的一分力量。

谢谢！

Good morning. I feel honored to have this opportunity for an interview.

Now I will introduce myself. My name is He Xiangyu， from Zhengzhou No.1 Middle School. I am a hard working student. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult the thing is. I love science， because both of my parents are engineers， they take good care of me. Their love and support have always been my power.

My hobbies are playing basketball and reading. I have been trained in the school basketball team and we are the champion in Zhengzhou. I am the center in our team. I have plenty of glorious memory on the playground. And I like Kobe very much. He is brave， confident and a team player. I have learned a lot from him. I think playing basketball not only builds up my body， but also helps me to learn to work in a team.

My favorite magazine is “News Weekly”. By reading the newspapers and magazines， I’ve learned what’s happening around the world and develop an interest in important issues.

The Northeastern (Hunan) University has a long history. And it’s famous in China. I am willing to study here.

That’s all.

Thank you.

Good evening, Sir/Maam, my name is XXX, I am a sophomore who major in English. I came from XXX province, which is a bit far from here. Generally speaking, I believe that i am an outgoing and easygoing girl/boy who always loves to make new friends.

As for hobbies, I do have a lot of them. Firstly, I am a huge fan of dancing and singing. My idol is Briteny Spears and I watch her music video every single day. In fact, my very wild dream is to become someone like her, someone who can rock this world! However, unlike

the first one, my second hobby is reading, which is sort of indoorsy, I suppose~(此处可笑一下）Reading makes this world become increasingly imaginable to me, that is why it could amuse me all the time!

[自招面试英语自我介绍

今天，终于来到了**，来到了美丽的大学校园。其实，在今年的三月份，我曾经4次踏入这座有着悠久历史的城市。可是呢，那些传说中美丽如画的风景区：中山陵，莫愁湖，秦淮河，夫子庙，当时我却从没有想过要去看一看。那些颇有名气的小吃，我也没有想过要去尝一尝。新街口那些繁华的商业中心，我更没有想去逛一逛。

为什么呢?因为我很清楚我来**的目的是参加艺术类广播电视编导的考试。记得那时侯为了给自己多一种选择的机会，我在老师和同学困惑的目光中，常常背着小提琴清晨4点就坐上了南下的列车。

那是一段怎样的日子呢?一边忙于文化课的复习，一边又要坚持练习小提琴协奏曲梁祝，一边背诵着历史地理课本，一边又得拿出时间看影评，编故事，练习现场评论，命题演讲。甚至是有一些基础的素描，也不敢放松。大家可能知道：在南京艺术学院的隔壁就是一个公园，我从报考南艺时的看考场，初试，看榜，复试，再到去省统考所在地南师大，我不清楚一共要经由这个公园多少次，8次?又或者是10次?但是直到今天我都不知道那个公园的名字究竟叫什么?

当南京艺术学院专业考试分数下来，全省第五名的成绩也并没有给我带来喜悦。我还是在学习，在练琴，一丝一毫都不敢懈怠。老师说：你文化课成绩已经不错了，为什么还要搞艺术?同学说：你的小提琴水平早已通过了中国音乐学院8级考试，为什么还要练琴直到深夜呢?我不知道应该如何回答，只知道必须努力，甚至竭尽全力。为了梦想，为了能够步入大学的殿堂。

终于梦想成真了，我热爱艺术，但我更热爱的是汉语言文学。尽管我放弃了艺术，但是曾经为艺术洒下的汗水并没有浪费，因为艺术本来就能够帮助我们更好的理解文学，使文学与艺术相互结合，开出美丽的花，结出幸福的果。

谢谢大家!

自我介绍是向别人展示你自我介绍好不好，甚至直接关系到你给别人的第一印象的好坏及以后交往的顺利与否。同时，也是认识自我的手段。以下是小编整理的高中学生英语自我介绍，欢迎阅读！

Teachers，good afternoon. Allow me to briefly talk about myself.

My name is - Xianning graduated from the south gate of the private secondary schools. Tourism now studying at the school in Hubei Province. Studying hotel management professional.

I was a character，cheerful girl，so my hobbies is extensive. Sporty. In my spare time likes playing basketball， table tennis，volleyball，skating. When a person like the Internet at home，or a personal stereo. Not like too long immersed in the world of books，and family members have told me，Laoyijiege is the best. Talking about my family，then I will talk about my family has. Only three people my family，my grandmother，grandfather and my own. My grandfather is a engineer，I am very severely on peacetime，the Church me a lot. Grandma is a very kindly for the elderly，care for my life in every possible way. Therefore，I have no parents in their care，childhood and growth were full of joy.

I like this hotel management professional，because I like to live in a strict order of the management environment. I have my professional self-confidence and hope，as long as the efforts will be fruitful，this is my motto. Since I chose this profession，I will follow this path，effort，perseverance path.

Thank you teachers. I finished presentation.

中文翻译：

各位老师，下午好。请允许我简单介绍一下我自己。

我的名字叫——毕业于咸宁南门私立中学。现就读于湖北省旅游学校。学习饭店管理专业。

我是一个性格开朗的女孩子，所以我的兴趣爱好很广泛。热爱运动。在我闲暇的时候喜欢打篮球，乒乓球，排球，溜冰。一个人在家的时候喜欢上网，或者听歌。不太喜欢太长时间的沉浸在书的世界里，家人曾经告诉过我，劳逸结合是最好的。说到我的家人，那我就要说说我的家庭了。我家里只有三口人，我的奶奶，爷爷和我自己。我爷爷是个工程师，他平时对我很严厉，教会我很多东西。奶奶是个很慈祥的老人，对我的生活照顾得无微不至。所以没有父母的我在他们的照顾下，童年和成长都充满了快乐。

我喜欢酒店管理这个专业，是因为我喜欢生活在一个有严格管理秩序的环境里。我对我的专业充满自信和希望，只要努力，就会有收获，这是我的座右铭。既然我选择了这个专业，就会沿着我这条路，努力的，坚持不懈的走下去。

谢谢各位老师。我的介绍完毕。

Good morning, everyone! My Name is Lu Xin. I am so happy to stand in front

of you to introduce myself. I am thirteen years old. I graduated from the No.1

Primary School of our city. I like reading books and playing badminton. I hope

we can take exercises after class. Besides, I like watching movies and listening

to pop music. I am sure there are some classmates have the common interests with

me. Therefore, we can communicate with each other. In primary school, I did well

in Chinese but math is not so good. I hope I can make progress in middle school.

I am very excited to be a classmate of you and I hope we can make progress and

have good days together.

On the New Years Eve，our clahad a party. The atmosphere was good. It was out of the ordinary from the very begining. The boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. We saw a boy named Li Xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. Then with three resounding crow of a cock echoing in the hall，the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

Then，the representative of the bedroom Zhu Guozhang asked us to guea line of a poem related to the above situation. He added that Li Xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. They left us all in confusion. And it was our monitor who was quickwitted. He shouted our， "The day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn." The hall After that，they had another item. This time Li Xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. While he was standing there，the other three stood around him，each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. It was an idiom. This time I got it right："The dog stands out among a group of chickens."

Hi, good morning everyone.my name is xxx and xxx is my English name.Im from China and I was born in xxx.Im an 18-year-old boy/girl.my hobbies are reading books like novels or comics and listening to music.chotolate `fruit is my favorite foods.There are four members in my family.my sister is very lovely.I often play with she and we had a good time.

I like making friends. Do you want to making friends with me ?

大家早上好,我的名字是XXX,XXX是我的英语名字.我来自中国.我出生于XXX.我是一个18岁的男孩/女孩.我的兴趣爱好是看书,像小说或连环画之类.和听音乐.巧克力和水果是我最喜欢的食物.(当然楼主你可以换成其他东西,不一定照搬)我家有四个成员,我的妹妹很可爱,我经常和她玩得很开心.

[简单介绍自己英语作文

I have a good friend. Her name is Betty. She a lovely girl. She is 14 years old . I`m one year older than her. Her eyes are bigger than mine. Her hair is black and long. My hair is longer than hers. Betty is 156 centimeters tall. Im two centimeters taller than her. She is about 40 kilos. Im 50 kilos. So she is thinner than me. Betty is a beautiful and helpful girl. She does better in English than me. She often helps me with my English. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes dancing very much. She wants to be a dancer one day. She dances beautifully. I can learn a lot from her. I think well be good friends forever.

part-time job: 兼职工作

full-time: 全职

position / vacancy: 职位，空缺

manager: 经理

director: 主任

president: 董事长，总经理

General Manager: 总经理

salesperson: 推销员

engineer: 工程师

accountant: 会计

degree: 学位

introduce:（动词）介绍

introduction: （名词）介绍

Let me introduce myself. / Let me do some introduction. 让我来介绍一下自己。

Which aspect do you want to know about me?

或者 What do you want to know about myself? 您想知道我哪方面的情况？

面试英语自我介绍的常用基本的句子

1. I noticed that you advertised a job in this morning’s paper. 我看到你们在今早的报纸上刊登的招聘广告。

2. I’m coming for your advertisement for …. 我是来应聘你们广告上的……职位的。

3. I have applied for the position of …. 我申请了贵公司的……职位。

4. Do you have any job for a part-timer? 你们需要兼职吗？

5. I’d like to know if you need any full-time secretary. 我想知道你们是否需要全职秘书？

6. I’m looking for a job. Are there any vacancies? 我在找工作，请问你们有空缺吗？

面试英语自我介绍的常用句型

1. I got a degree in Literature and took a course in typing. 我获得了文学学士学位，还学过打字。

2. I haven’t done anything like that before. 我以前没有做过这种工作。

3. I think I’m quite fit for assistant’s job. 我觉得我很适合做助理的工作。

4. I used to work as a sale’s manager. 我以前做销售经理。

5. I’m quite familiar with editing. 我做过很多编辑工作。

6. I want a job with a vacation every year. 我想找个每年都能度假的工作。

7. I was thinking of a job in a school. 我打算到学校找份工作。

8. I worked in the accounting section of a manufacturer of electrical products. 我曾在电子产品制造商的会计组工作。

9. I love playing tennis. 我喜欢打网球。

Where possible, reduce the use of "which," "who" "that" "whom" "whether... or not" etc.

少用关系代词

学会运用关系代词是你学习英文过程中的一个重要的阶段。学会少用它们则表明你取得了更大的进步。在校对你的作品时，仔细检查一下所有的which’s, who’s that’s和whom’s是否必要。删除不必要的关系代词会使你的文章更精彩。

Example:

Unnecessary: It is a truth that is universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

(用两个 that’s，读起来很别扭)

Better: It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

-- Jane Austin

注：被动语态修饰的名词通常不须用关系代词。

Unnecessary: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, which was built with American assistance.

Improved: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, built with American assistance.

Unnecessary: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation which was undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.

Improved: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.

Unnecessary: Justice theories have a long tradition, which goes back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.

Improved: Justice theories have a long tradition, going back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.

Unnecessary: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million that she made by tap dancing which made her famous in the movies.

Improved: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million she made tap dancing her way to fame in the movies.

Unnecessary: We told them they were the victims who deserved sympathy the most.

Improved: We told them they were the victims, most deserving of sympathy.

Unnecessary: Only a person who is oblivious* to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.

Better: Only a person oblivious to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.

Unnecessary: Not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea, whether it contains caffeine or not.

Better: With or without caffeine, not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea.

Unnecessary: Usually the Washington family married people who were socially better off than themselves, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.

Better: Usually the Washingtons married their social betters, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.

Unnecessary: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach the person to whom the letter is addressed.

Better: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach its intended receiver.

看来就我回答你饿，还是帮你想想吧，我是的学生了，文笔应该可以达到你的要求了。。。 自我介绍如下：

大家好~我叫xxx（大名），平时大家可以叫我小依（小名），今年刚好14岁了。说道自己的性格，其实我自己也不是很清楚，有的时候很细心,有的时候很粗心.有时候的很暴躁,也有时候的很耐心. （这话打上去很有个性的，挺脱俗的）

我平时最喜欢的事是坐在自己的书桌前，拉开窗帘，让温暖的阳光照在身上，塞上耳机，播放自己最喜欢的音乐《xxx》（这里一定要是抒情歌曲），之后握起一枝笔，在自己的本子上记录下自己的心情、体会、经历，那样我会感觉很安逸~~

其实我还有一门“本领”，那便是“p图”，那时一种在网络上已经是十分受欢迎的一门美化照片的技术，如果同学或老师需要，我一定会让他们的照片更加阳光、靓丽~

要说我这人的毛病，那就是“懒”了，因为我一直不喜欢运动，所以体育成绩一直不是很好，新学期我会坚决改掉这个坏毛病。

接下来要进入初中生活了，怎么说呢，心中既有向往又有一种莫名的恐惧，呵呵~反正都是要面对的，我不如怀揣着一颗乐观的心去接受它吧~~面对这么多的新同学，我很有信心成为他们每一个人的知心朋友~

谢谢~

Today, as the development of technology, people can change their faces by doing plastic surgery, because of the commercial ads, people are highly effected by the exaggerated facts that they can be the shining stars. So people pay special attention on the outlooks, they want to look perfect, as far as I am concerned, the true beauty is nothing with perfect looking, only the inner beauty makes you shining. In the fairly tale of Cinderella, the prince chooses the poor girl instead of the beautiful girls, because he admires Cinderella’s inner beauty, though she is nobody. Though it is just a story, it tells people that inner beauty makes one outstanding. People can make their faces perfect, but there is no way to fulfill their inner beauty by technology. Inner beauty is the most precious thing, beautiful outlook will fade away with the time, but inner beauty won’t, it only getting valuable.