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成长的岁月像流水,匆匆而来,匆匆而去。不知不觉中,又到了一年中的变更时期。在每一个和我一样的孩子的身边,都有快乐和烦恼灌溉着我们的成长。以下是小编带来写好初中英语作文的技巧的相关内容,希望对你有帮助。

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初中英语作文介绍朋友的Myfriend

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I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven yearsold. He comes from Beijing.Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made great progress in our studies.We have made up our minds to study harder and win success in our studies.

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篇1:初中英语作文春节

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On the thirty, is the new years day, everywhere permeated with a festive atmosphere. Everybody happily sit together to eat dinner, I love to eat fish balls on the table, my sister and brother Sweet and Sour Spare Ribs favorite, favorite braised fish in soy sauce. After the dinner, my brother and sister began to set off firecrackers and fireworks. At this time, I brought a carefully lit fireworks, fireworks, and for a while a green spray, spray red, while spraying purple, is really fun.

My sister brought the firecrackers, the "popping" and "shout shout" sound like thunder, scared us everywhere escape. Brother of fireworks and crackers, is even more magical, while fly to the sky, while flying on the roof of the night dressed as the day, we see dazzling.

Just as we are playing vigorously, "when Dangdang, Dangdang", the bell of zero hour is ringing, the new year begins. Lets all wish the happy new year and the happy family together.

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篇2:初中暑假英语日记

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Today, I returned to the maternal family. The road is very far, my twohours only then. The grandmother warmly comes out greets me, I is veryhappy. In maternal family courtyard flower very many, has the rose,the peony, the orchid and so on, is very attractive. I have enteredthe room, sits watches the television on the soft sofa, chats with thegrandmother. The grandmother some has been old, on the corner of theeye reveals several wrinkles. But in my heart the grandmother is mostbeautiful. Evening, I went to sleep. I dreamed of the grandmother into beckon to me, I rested sweetly...... I love me the grandmother!

今天,我回外婆家了。路很远,我两个小时才到。外婆热情地出来迎接我,我很开心。外婆家院子里的花很多,有玫瑰、牡丹、兰花等,很漂亮。我进了屋,坐在软软的沙发上看电视,和外婆聊天。外婆有些老了,眼角上露出几条皱纹。但是在我心里外婆是最美丽的。晚上,我入睡了。我梦见了外婆在向我招手,我睡得甜甜的......

我爱我的外婆!

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篇3:初中英语作文大全

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This is my first impression of Mr.Lu Xun.He was "Head-bowed as a willing

ox" day and night to change the destiny of the nation rather busy.Frail,he was

literary giant.Mr.Lu Xun humor,and no lack of cordial.He hated the dark as the

devil,but a lot of the benefit of others,to play down their own.In my opinion,he

is ordinary and great people!There is a sub-heat,made a spectrophotometry."Mr.Lu

Xun,Lu Xun article will always be the history of Chinas most dazzling bright

light.

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篇4:初中英语作文:艾米的家庭

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Amy is anAmerican girl .She lives in New York .

There are four people in her family, herparents, her elder brother and her.

Amy’s father is an engineer and he is busywith his work everyday. But he still plays with Amy in his spare time and Amyloves him very much.

Amy’s mother is a teacher. She teaches math in a smallschool. She is thin with golden hair.

What’s more, she is very kind and cookswell. His brother, John is two years older than her and he goes to school withher everyday. John is an active boy and often helps Amy. Amy feels happy tolive in such a family.

艾米是一个美国女孩。她住在纽约。她家里有四口人,她的父母,她的哥哥和她。艾米的父亲是一名工程师,他每天都忙于他的工作。但他仍然在空闲时间和艾米玩,艾米非常爱他。艾米的母亲是一个老师。她在一个小小的学校里面教数学。她很瘦,有着金色的头发。更重要的是,她很善良而且做饭很好吃。他的哥哥,约翰比她大两岁,他每天都和艾米一起去学校。约翰是个活跃的男孩而且经常帮助艾米。艾米很高兴生活在这样一个家庭中。

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篇5:有关交流英语作文初中

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Communication is the activity of conveying information through the exchange

of thought, messages, or information. There are many communicating methods, such

as speech, visuals, signals, writing or body languages.

It plays an important role in social lives of human beings, which some

people consider that it’s the basic of human existence.

On the one hand, it’s the communication that spreads information, making us

know the news although it’s far from us. By communicating with others, people

send and get information that helps us know about our surroundings. We all know

that information is extremely important in our lives. On the other hand,

communication builds personal relationship, which connects different people

together. We live in the same society which makes personal relationship

essential in lives. Only with communication can we build and keep good personal

relationships with others. In addition, communication can eliminate

misunderstandings and promote emotions. When we have misunderstandings with

others, timely communicating is the only effective way to solve it.

In short, communication is essential to all people that everyone should

realize that. Therefore, we should learn how to communicate with other

effectively.

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篇6:初中描写花的英语

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I walk around the Peak, around the flowers are numerous, full of branches, flowers and criss-crossing, as if the fence rows. Looking down from the peak, only an immense display. full of golden-yellow flowers, Down on the ground, not for the intoxicated with the beauty of nature, this beautiful paradise like the Garden of Paradise.

Suddenly, a cold wind blowing, I began to tremble , and winter jasmine, it seems a soldier, is to resist the wind, the yellow flowers with a sword, and the wind is it a duel! I was怔住this scene, the winter jasmine as appears to be weak, so delicate, and in the cold before they are without fear.

They really tenacious vitality ah!

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篇7:描写鲸鱼的初中英语作文

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Nowadays,the whales is in danger.Because many countries kill them for different use,they are dying out.To protect our earth and ocean,especially the diversity of creatures.we must realize that we should take effective measures to protect them.If the whales died out,it would have an important influence on other animals in the sea.Also,the environment will be changed.I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them!

如今,鲸鱼是处于危险之中。因为许多国家杀死他们不同的使用,它们灭绝。为了保护我们的地球和海洋,特别是生物的多样性。我们必须意识到我们应该采取有效措施去保护他们。如果鲸鱼灭绝了,它会对其他动物产生重要的影响。此外,环境将被改变。我真诚地希望我们可以使我们的努力拯救他们!

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篇8:初中英语短语150句推荐

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短语有两方面的功能:一方面是作句法成分,所有短语都能充当一个更大的短语里的组成成分;另一方面是成句,大部分短语加上句调能独立成句。以下是由语文迷为大家提供的英语写作素材:英语短语,希望你喜欢。

1 (see 、hear 、notice 、find 、feel 、listen to 、 look at (感官动词)+ doing

eg :I like watching monkeys jump

2 (比较级 and 比较级) 表示越来越怎么样

3 a piece of cake =easy 小菜一碟(容易)

4 agree with sb 赞成某人

5 all kinds of 各种各样 a kind of 一样

6 all over the world = the whole world 整个 世界

7 along with 同……一道,伴随……

eg : I will go along with you 我将和你一起去

the students planted trees along with their teachers 学生同老师们一起种树

8 As soon as 一怎么样就怎么样

9 as you can see 你是知道的

10 ask for ……求助 向…要…(直接接想要的东西) eg : ask you for my book

11 ask sb for sth 向某人什么

12 ask sb to do sth 询问某人某事 ask sb not to do 叫某人不要做某事

13 at the age of 在……岁时 eg:I am sixteen I am at the age of sixteen

14 at the beginning of …… ……的起初;……的开始

15 at the end of +地点/+时间 最后;尽头;末尾 eg : At the end of the day

16 at this time of year 在每年的这个时候

17 be /feel confident of sth /that clause +从句 感觉/对什么有信心,自信

eg : I am / feel confident of my spoken English I feel that I can pass the test

18 be + doing 表:1 现在进行时 2 将来时

19 be able to (+ v 原) = can (+ v 原) 能够…… eg : She is able to sing She can sing

20 be able to do sth 能够干什么 eg :she is able to sing

21 be afraid to do (of sth 恐惧,害怕…… eg : Im afraed to go out at night Im afraid of dog

22 be allowed to do 被允许做什么

eg: Im allowed to watch TV 我被允许看电视 I should be allowed to watch TV 我应该被允许看电视

23 be angry with sb 生某人的气 eg : Dont be angry with me

24 be angry with(at) sb for doing sth 为什么而生某人的气

25 be as…原级…as 和什么一样 eg : She is as tall as me 她和我一样高

26 be ashamed to

27 be away from 远离

28 be away from 从……离开

29 be bad for 对什么有害 eg : Reading books in the sun is bad for your eyes 在太阳下看书对你的眼睛不好

30 be born 出生于

31 be busy doing sth 忙于做什么事 be busy with sth 忙于……

32 be careful 当心;小心

33 be different from…… 和什么不一样

34 be famous for 以……著名

35 be friendly to sb 对某人友好

36 be from = come from 来自

eg :He is from Bejing He comes from Bejing Is he from Bejing ? Does he come from Bejing ?

37 be full of 装满……的 be filled with 充满 eg: the glass is full of water the glass is filled with water

38 be glad+to+do/从句

39 be going to + v(原) 将来时

40 be good at(+doing) = do well in 在某方面善长, 善于……

41 be good for 对什么有好处 eg : Reading aloud is good for your English

42 be happy to do 很高兴做某事

44 be in good health 身体健康

45 be in trouble 处于困难中 eg : She is in trouble They are in tronble

46 be interested in 对某方面感兴趣

47 be late for = come late to 迟到 eg: Be late for class 上课迟到

48 be like 像…… eg : Im like my mother

49 be mad at 生某人的气

50 be made from 由……制成(制成以后看不见原材料)

51 be made of 由……制成(制成以后还看得见原材料)

52 be not sure 表不确定

53 be on a visit to 参观

54 be popular with sb 受某人欢迎

55 be quiet 安静

56 be short for 表**的缩写 eg: 陶 is short for 陶俊杰

57 be sick in bed 生病在床

58 be sorry to do sth be sorry for sb eg : I am sorry for you

59 be sorry to hear that

60 be sorry to trouble sb eg : I am sorry to trouble you

61 be strict in doing sth 严于做某事 eg : Hes strict in obeying noles

62 be strict with sb 对某人要求严格 eg: Some students are not strict with them selves 这些学生对自己不严格

63 be strict with sb in sth 某方面对某人严格

64 be supposed to do 被要求干什么

65 be sure 表确定

66 be sure of doing sth 对做某事有信心 eg: He is sure of winning I am sure of learning English well

67 be sure of sth 对做某事有信心 eg: Im sure of my head (my teacher 我相信我的大脑(老师)

68 be sure that sth 对做某事有信心 eg: Im suer that he can pass the test 我相信他能通过考试

69 be sure to do sth 一定会做某事

eg: We are sure to pass the test 我们一定会通过这次考试 We are sure to learn English well 我们一定能学好英语

71 be terrified to do sth 害怕做某事

72 be the same as … 和什么一样

73 be used to doing sth 习惯做某事

eg: My father is used to getting up early 我爸爸习惯早起 He is used to sleeping in class 他习惯上课睡觉

He is used to working hard He is used to hard work 他习惯努力工作

74 be worth doing 值得做什么

75 be(feel) afraid to do sth 害怕做某事 be afraid of sth 害怕某物 be afraid that 丛句

76 because+句子 because of +短语

eg : He was late because he had a headache He was late because of his headache

77 begin to do = start to do 开始做某事 start…with…=begin…with… 以什么开始什么

eg : Let‘s begin the game with the song I begin to go home

78 between…and… 两者之间

79 borrow sth from sb 向……借…… lend sth to sb ( lend sb sth 借给……什么东西

eg : I borrowed a pen from him he lent a pen to me ( he lent me a pen

80 both = the same(as) = not different(from) 表相同

81 bother 打扰 bother sb to do sth

eg : I‘m sorry to bother you ,but can you tell me to way to the station

我十分道歉打扰你,但是你能告诉我怎么去车站

the problem has been bothering me for weeks 这个问题困扰了我几个周了

He‘s bothering me to lend him money

82 by the end of 到……为止

83 call sb sth eg : We call him old wang

84 care 关心 eg : Don‘t you care about this country‘s future ?你为什么不关心国家的未来

85 catch up with sb 赶上某人

86 chat with sb 和某人闲谈 take sb to + 地点 带某人去某地

87 come in 进来

88 come over to 过来

89 come up with 提出 eg: Can you come up with a good idea 你能想出一个好办法吗?

90 communicate with sb 和某人交流

91 consider + doing 考虑做什么 eg : Why not consider going to lu zhou 为什么不考虑去泸州?

92 dance to 随着……跳舞 eg : She likes dancing to the music 她喜欢随着音乐跳舞

93 decide to do sth 决定做某事

94 do a survey of 做某方面的调查

95 do better in 在……方面做得更好

96 do wrong 做错

97 Don‘t forget to do sth 不要忘了做某事

98 Don‘t mind +doing /从句 /名词 不要介意……

99 each +名(单)每一个…… eg : Each student has many books 每一个学生都有一些书

100 end up +doing

101 enjoy +doing 喜欢

102 escape from 从……逃跑

eg: The prisoners have escaped from the prison 犯人从监狱里逃跑出来

Some gas is escaping from the pipe 有一些气体从管子里冒出

103 expect to do sth 期待做某事

104 fall down 摔下来 fall off 从哪摔下来

105 fall in love with sb /sth 爱上什么

106 far from 离某地远 eg : The school is far from my home

107 find +it +adj +to do 发现做某事怎么样

108 find sb/sth +adj 发现什么怎么样? eg : I find the book interesting

109 finish 完成+doing(名词)

110 fit to sb = be fit for sb 适合某人

111 forget to do 没有做而忘了 forget doing 做了而又忘了 eg: Don‘t forget to go home I forget closing door

112 from…to… 从某某到某某 eg: From me for her

113 get /have sth down 做完,被(别人)做……

eg: I have my hair cut 我理了发(头发被剪了)

Tom got his bad tooth pulled out 汤母把他的坏牙拔掉了(被牙医拔掉了)

114 get a part-time job = find a part-time job

115 get along well with sb = get on well with sb 与某人相处得好

116 get along with sb = get on with sb 与某人相处

117 get ready for = be ready for 为什么而准备 eg : I get ready for math I am ready for math

118 get sb in to trouble 给某人麻烦

119 get sb to do sth

120 get…from… 从某处得到某物

121 give a talk 做报告 eg: He is give a tall

122 give sth to sb give sb sth 给某人某物

123 go fish 钓鱼 go swimming 游泳

124 go on to do 去做下一件事 go on doing 继续做这件事

125 go out away from go out of

126 go to school 上学(用于专业的) go to the school 去学校(不一定是上学)

127 good way to 好方法

128 hate to do 讨厌没做过的事 hate doing 讨厌做过的事

129 have a party for sb 举办谁的晚会

130 have a talk 听报告 谈一谈

131 have been doing 现在完成进行时 eg : You have been talking You have been sleeping since

132 have been to …( 地方)……去过某过地方 have gone to …(地方) 去了某地还没回来

133 have fun +doing 玩得高兴

134 have sth to do 有什么事要做

eg: I have a lot of homework to do 我有很多家庭作业要做

I have nothing to do 我没什么事情做

135 have to do sth 必须做某事

136 have trouble (problem) (in) doing sth 做什么事情有麻烦

137 have…time +doing

138 have…(时间)…off 放……假 eg: I have month off 我请一个月得假

139 hear sb +do/doing 听见某人做某事/正在做某事

140 help a lot 很大用处

141 help sb with sth one‘s sth 帮助某人某事(某方面) help sb (to) do sth 帮助某人做某事

142 hope to do sth 希望做某事

143 How about(+doing) = What about(+doing)

144 how do you like = what do you think of 你对什么的看法

145 if : 是否=wether

eg: I don‘t know if (wether) I should go to the party 我不知道我是否应该去参加晚会

He don‘t know if (wether) we will arrive on time tomorrow morning 他不知道我们明天早上是否能准时到达

146 if :如果,假如(全部接一般时态)+条件语态从句

eg: I‘ll go to LuZhou if it does‘t rain 假如明天不下雨,我就去泸州

If they change the plan they will let me know 假如他们要改变计划,他们会让我知道的

I‘ll go to England ,if I have enough money next year 如果我明年由足够的钱,我就要去英国

147 in one‘s opinion = sb think 某人认为

148 in some ways 在某些方面

149 in the end = finally(adv) 最后

150 in the north of… 什么在什么的北方 (north 北 sowth 南 west 西 east 东 )

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篇9:关于我的爱好英语作文初中

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I have a wide range of interests and enjoy doing many things during my free

time.

I am fond of reading. I often read after class. My classmates like watching

TV while I prefer to read. I read various kinds of books and newspapers that

they afford me stories and news. The book I like most isThe House on the Mango

Street. I am also a music lover. Pop music is my favorite. I often listen to the

music programs on radio and I also have an MP3 downloading all my favorite

songs. In addition, swimming and badminton are my favorites, too. They help me

build a healthy body.

In short, I enjoy my life in school very much. Reading books, listening to

music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.

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篇10:以互联网的使用为话题的初中英语作文

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In recent years, people are developing aninseparable relationship with Internet. As is known toall, it is convenient for us to click the mouse whensurfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the works needs.

On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media inour daily life. As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are toomuch addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.

Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain fromoverindulgence. After all,Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiencyof our work rather than shackle us with a chain.

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篇11:初中英语作文:城市的变化

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I live in a city, since I was small, I witnessed all the things happened in this city. Now, in my eyes, after so many years, the city has changed so much. First, the transportation has become fluent.

Many years ago, there were less bus stations, people always needed to changed their lines by many cars.

But now, almost all the places can be reached by bus, people don’t need to change the line. Second, the buildings are enlarging, this reflects the city’s economy develops fast.

Indeed, I can go to many newly built public places to have fun, some are for children, some are for the old, all of these are good for people’s communication. The city’s change reflects people keep pace with time.

我住在一个城市,当我很小的时候,我目睹了发生在这个城市的一切事情。现在,在我眼里,交通变得便利。很多年以前,公共汽车站点很好,人们总是需要通过换车来改变路线。现在,几乎所有的地方都可以通过公交车到达,人们不用改变路线。第二,建筑正在扩大,这反映了一个城市经济的快速发展。确实,我可以去很多新建的公共场所玩,一些是给孩子的,一些是给老人家的,所有的这些对于人们的交流是有用的。城市的改变反映了人们与时俱进。

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篇12:初中语文作文写作技巧分享

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一、写外貌不用“有”

作文如何写外貌?孩子的作文里总会看到类似这样的名子:“XX可漂亮了,她有一头卷卷的黄头发,有一双乌黑的葡萄般的大眼睛,有一个高高的鼻子,还有一张樱桃小嘴。”如果你试着让他们去掉文中的“有”,把文字重新串联一遍,会发现作文顺了很多。写上段文字的同学经蒋老师指导后修改如下:“XX可漂亮啦。一头卷卷的黄头发自然地披在肩上。她的眼睛太吸引人了,乌黑乌黑葡萄一般。高高的鼻子,和樱桃小嘴配合起来,有点混血的味道,同学们可喜欢她啦。”是不是读起来舒服多了?

二、写说不单写“说”

让孩子比较以下三句话。

张三说:“……”;

张三无可奈何地说:“……”;

张三摊了摊手,一副无可奈何的样子:“……”

显然,让人物说话有多种方式,写语言可以不用出现“说”而是在语言前面加上动作和神态,通过一定的训练掌握这样的技巧让孩子的写作水平切实得到提升,让他们学会细节描写,不会仅干巴巴的地写“某某说”。

三、写想不出现“想”

遇到描写心理活动时,这样的句子已经被孩子们写滥:“我脑子里跳出两个小人,一个小人……另一个小人……”不用这个句子又该怎么写?最常用的就是“我心想”。如某学生写:“数学老师出了一道难题要带回家写的。我心想:天哪!这该怎么办呢?”

按照蒋老师“写想不用想”的技巧,去掉:“我心想”三个字如何?“数学老师出了一道难题要带回家写的。天哪!这该怎么办呢?”是不是更简洁精练?别忘了提醒孩子要给心理描写加上适当感叹词。

四、不用成语

作文为什么写不长?都是成语惹的祸!蒋老师此言一出震惊四座。不是说多用成语才显得有文采吗?其实不然,在“就是不用成语”写作技巧中,蒋老师指出:当作文中只会按照套路使用成语时,文章细节就没了,还不如让孩子老老实实把自己看到的感受都写出来。什么天高云淡、风和日丽、桃红柳绿、炯炯有神、心旷神怡……这些被用滥的成语还是少出现为妙。

比如,写春天别用“风和日丽”,而是这样写:“风儿拂过林梢,原本平静的湖面漾起了圈圈涟漪,湖边的柳树轻摇着身姿,我也忍不住张开双臂,任风抚过我的每一寸肌肤,暖暖的,痒痒的。”想办法用具体的句子替换掉别人用滥的成语,解决孩子作文写不长写不细的难题。

五、遇到“很”和“非常”想一想

对于文章写不长的孩子,可以训练的另一个技巧是:遇到“很”和“非常”想一想。看过无数学生习作,蒋老师发现出现频率最高的字眼包括“很,非常”。请老师和家长提醒孩子,遇到要写这几个字时不要轻易下笔,停下来想一想,是不是非要出现这个字眼?

比如写热,别出现“很热”两个字,学会用其他的描写来体现热:骄阳似火,没有一丝风,树叶低垂毫无生气……

六、环境里面有“真”“情”

到了五六年级孩子都要学习环境描写。如有的孩子会写:“早上天气还挺好的,放学回家时,却哗哗下起雨来。雨珠在下,泪珠在滴,老天也好像在为我哭泣。”

孩子能用环境衬托自己的心情首先要表扬。但是很多孩子只要一写环境,肯定就是小花微笑,小草点头、小鸟歌唱、小雨哭泣,成了套路,难道世界上只有小草、小鸟、小花吗?为什么不能写身边更真实的东西呢?云、雾、桌子,哪怕是电线杆都可以写,这个技巧是提醒孩子不仅要让人活在环境里,还要让人活在真实的环境里。

七、要动连着动

文章要一波三折才好看,但现在的孩子生活都很平淡,你不能强求他们写出一波三折的内容,那就让他们学会一波三折地使用动词,就这是要动连着动——学会连续使用动词。

某学生写一场乒乓球球赛:“他发了一个旋转球,让人看得眼花缭乱。”(一句话把文章就给写完了)

学会动词技巧后将修改成:“只见他高高地将球抛起,眼睛死死盯着,球接触球板的一瞬间,他手腕轻轻一抖,脚一跺,球高速旋转着,向这边飞来,让人看得眼花缭乱。”一个动词转瞬变成六七个,文字即刻灵动丰富起来。

八、一秒钟的事写三百字

还是针对作文写不长的一种技巧训练:用三百字来描写1秒钟内发生的事。如关于破校运会跳高纪录瞬间的描写原本只有几十字:只见某某纵身一跳,一下子飞过横杆,新的校运会纪录诞生了!

怎么变成三百字?可以有条理地加上动作解剖:如何助跑、起跳、翻越、落地;加上联想:往届校运会有人挑战失败,平时如何一次次练习等等;还可以加上细节来充实,起跳前如何与同学们进行眼神交流,成功后同学如何向他祝贺……家长可以找一些1秒钟的素材让孩子进行写作练习,学会了这个技巧还怕考试写不出四五百字吗?

九、一段话里至少出现6个标点

很多孩子不会用标点,习作中常只有逗号句号逗号句号,甚至逗号都没有,把老师读到断气为止。针对这个现象,可以让孩子进行“一段话至少出现6种标点”的技巧训练。比如,。?!……:“”这些标点你的作文中都有吗?没有的话请尝试用起来。

经过几次训练后,你会发现孩子的惊人变化:意味深长的句子会写了、人物语言会加进去了,心理活动结合进去了,还会用反问句了,这些句子加进去后,文章当然生动起来。一位作家就曾用这种方法对自己作文写不好的孩子进行训练,收效明显,进步很快。

十、字数三四五

这个技巧说白了就是学习写短句。学了一段时间写作的孩子容易在作文中写长句,而长句写不好就变成病句。事实上很多作家也是以写短句见长的,像沈从文、汪曾祺。家长要提醒孩子注意控制每句话的字数,建议把十几个字几十个字的长句改成只有三四五个字的短句,孩子们会发现这样的作文有语感会舒服很多。如某学生的原文:“高高的绿绿的草散发着诱人的清香。一根一根都看得那么清楚,很挺拔的样子。”

经指导后改成:“草绿了,高了,散发着清香。一根一根,看得清清楚楚,很挺拔的样子。”是不是很有节奏感?

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篇13:初中英语

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Miss Li is my English teacher. The first day I met her, I liked her,

because she looked so young and nice. Miss Li liked to write some inspiring

words in our homework. So everytime when I handed in my paper, I was so looking

forward to getting Miss Li’s response. I remembered one time, I did not do well

in an English test. Miss Li wrote the words to me and she believed me I could

make great progress next time. I was so moved, so when I had annoyance, I would

like to talk to her. Miss Li is my guide. She can give me suggestion and lead me

to the right direction.

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篇14:为父母做过的事初中英语作文

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Our parents give us much love every day,so we should give them love,too.That was a holiday,I stayed at home alone.I made a dinner for my parents.Because I was only seven,the meal was really awful.But my mother never stopped saying,"Its very delicious!"She said she was very impressed.

How do you give your parents love?

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篇15:我的朋友初中英语作文

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My friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate.

Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.

We will be friends forever.

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篇16:网购初中英语作文

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Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.

However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.

In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.

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网上购物在我们的日常生活中很受欢迎。这是一种新的购物方式。很多东西都提供了,等待你的选择。方便是最重要的优点。你可以随意买任何东西。你不必和其他购物者排队。同时,它通常每天开放24小时。

然而,网上购物有许多缺点。你真的看不到真正的产品。所以你可能很容易受骗。同时,许多人会错过与朋友相处的好机会,分享购物的乐趣。

总之,我们应该好好利用网络购物。

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篇17:保护环境英语作文初中

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What kind of environment should be? Ought to be beautiful, but also should

be to let people feast for the eyes, but now all of you take a look at the

environment, beautiful? Let people feast for the eyes? The answer is no.

So what should we do? Today, Ill give you some advice to protect the

environment, the content is as follows:

We live earth is deteriorating rapidly, did we have to pay attention to

their own living environment cause harm to nature, you must not throw sundry,

especially those serious pollution of garbage, waste batteries, for example,

because the section waste batteries contain heavy metals, if flow to clean the

water, it is very much pollution, then try to save trees made items such as

paper, pencils, because waste these things is the destruction of the forest.

Also try to use less disposable lunch box, chopsticks and plastic bags and other

items, so as to avoid unnecessary waste and reduce waste.

There are some tips: walking to closing the master switch, in order to

avoid electrical appliances overheating explosion, a waste of money and waste of

electricity, save water, to shut the tap when brushing your teeth, wash dish

water to rice, rice water to water the flowers, wash water can sweep the floor,

so we can reduce some waste. 12 dont hunt wild animals, animal protection is

absolutely cant kill, but dont kill the common animals such as frogs, because

frogs eat 15000 bugs for us, and most are pests. Some people often dont think

that is, the stubborn still, so we should try to eat less wild animals, lead to

wild animals, the drop in sales no longer killing of wild animals.

Our forest is called oxygen plant, so to take good care of flowers and

plants, not to destroy the city greening, and actively participate in. But also

to cut down trees less, dont waste wood items, because waste these things is to

destroy the forest, so be used sparingly, to protect the forests of less and

less.

Use energy saving lamps to replace the ordinary light bulb, although some

expensive but can use less electricity. I appeal to you: in our daily actions to

protect earths environment, let our children and grandchildren live in a

beautiful environment!

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篇18:初中英语作文大全

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It is well known that exercise is important. In our school, we have to do an hours exercise every day. Many students are very happy. In the one hour, some of us play basketball, football and ping pong, and some run around the playground. Everyone is talking and laughing. I love this activity very much. I also hope that there will be more and more sunlight sports in our life after school. That not only makes us happy, but also makes our body healthier.

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篇19:初中英语小日记

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August 25 2014 Thursday Sunny

I am very happy today.

Today I have received the highest honour as I obtained full mark and finally beat Xiaoming in the English test.I have been famous for my ability of studying English and eventually I showed my true power today.Those people who are gossiping behind my back should shut up now.

After school,when I went home, I found a hundred dollar notes.Somebody must have been careless and dropped them.Since this is a deserted road,I would not bother returning the money as I had nowhere to go to.

Then,I helped a blind uncle crossing the road.

I feel that I am really delighted.

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篇20:初中英语作文大全

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English is the international language. Many parents have realized the

importance of mastering English and they spend a lot of time and money to help

their children learn it well. But with the development of Chinese economy, a lot

of foreigners come to China to learn its culture and language, so we cant

ignore the importance of Chinese. I have recited a lot of old poems. It makes me

feel the charm of these classic poems. Every poem uses a different way to show

the history. I find the great joy in learning Chinese. Both English and Chinese

are future language, so we need to master them well.

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