如何备考英语作文怎么写【精品八篇】
导语:人的天职在勇于探索真理,为真理而斗争是人生最大的乐趣。以下是小编整理如何备考英语作文怎么写的资料,欢迎阅读参考。
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8篇1:2024年高三英语高考全国卷英语作文最后几天的备考资料
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+ 加入清单全国卷英语作文最后几天的备考资料。备考目的性、指导性、猜押性都很强。最后几天一定
要看的。
一、全国卷书面表达分析
2015全国I:应用文、写信约稿、介绍美节日风俗和中学生生活。
2015全国II:应用文、邮件邀约、去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。
2014全国I:应用文、写信咨询、英语学习班广告的咨询。
2014全国II:应用文、报社正文、十年后的我
2013全国I:应用文、写信问是否接机(带着中国画)
2013全国II:应用文、写信让友代卖中国结
2012课标卷:应用文、写邮件、申请参加夏令营
2012大纲卷:应用文、邀请信、邀请外教参加生日聚会
二、综上分析,干货如下:
1.都是应用文。
说明文、议论文、夹叙夹议文不考,尤其要杜绝那些高大上的,平时经常训练的正反观点对
比的文章也要果断抛弃。
2.与学生生活、学习、交友息息相关。
生活相关:15I、15II、14II、13I、13II、12大纲
学习相关:14I、12
交友相关:12大纲
注意生活、学习、交友三大话题。有些作文也许会跨其中两个话题。凡是不符合这三个话题
的作文,高考最后这10几天少复习,甚至不复习的好。地震、环保、食品安全、雾霾、河流
空气污染、交通拥挤、良心道德、服不服等等的高大上,都抛弃吧(这些都是大学作文解决
的问题)。所以与学生生活、学习、交友相关的词汇、句式还是好好总结的。
3.渗透传统文化的元素。
传统文化:2015II重阳节、2013中国画。
这方面的词汇还是要适当准备一些滴。例如:paper cutting 剪纸,Lantern Festival 元
宵节, Mid-autumn Day 中秋节,tang yuan/ sweet rice dumpling 元宵,Chinese New Year’
s Eve 除夕,Dragon Boat Festival 龙舟节,DoubleNinth Festival 重阳节, Chinese tea
中国茶
4.生活、学习、交友三大话题·必须掌握的【词汇 + 短语】
①schools English newspaper,Chinese / foreign cultures, more information,
volunteer, great fun,opportunity, confidence in, experience,lecture,
excellence in, speech competitions, a better idea,
②be popular with/among,especially, exciting,excited, patiently,be
patient with,be interested in,the most important, various, outgoing,
successfully, successful, be good at/for, more than glad, be willing to help you
with,be familiar with,delicious, with joy
③welcome, spend their holidays,invite you to join us,make dumplings,intend
to join,enjoy,invite sb. to, gave him a warm welcome, have a try,give
me a piece of advice, takeseriously,depend on, get a higher education,
improve ourselves,would like to, interview,I believe,learn a great deal
fromabout, organize class activities,deal with, stick to, share
with,express myself, go for an outing, manage to do,persuade, accept,
receive,have a good/wonderful time,benefit, benefit from,different,
give up, have a picnic, go to a museum, have lots of fun,take pains to improve,
get prepared for, be able to, get along well with,have a good command of,
appreciate, made up my mind to do, make a great difference (to someone), think
highly of, pay much attention to,take notice of,keep it in mind that,in
return, helpwith, feel nervous, make you familiar with, long to, broaden
my mind, have trouble doing,communicate,suffer from, speak English fluently,
visit some famous places, chat with, participate in, take part in, won prizes,
take into consideration, it’s necessary to do,respect, trust,protect
from,agree with, in order to,encourage sb. to do,organize
5.必须熟练运用的【句型 + 连接词】
Im writing to tell you
I wonder if youd like to
Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I am writing an e-mail to tell you something about
Only in this way can we make a great contribution to
If I could ,I would
Hard work pays off.
We shouldWe’d betterIt is better to do
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if
you could give me a kind consideration.
Only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make great progress
Could you give me some advice on how to
If you are able to come with us, please let us know and
Im looking forward to hearing from you.
Looking forward to your reply.
May I have your attention
First,Second,Third
so long as,even though, at the same time, By the way, Besides, not onlybut
also, What’s more, as well as
6.三大从句和非谓语的运用是必不可少的。每篇文章这两类至少运用一次。同学们都知道,
在此不必多说。
三、透过2015年全国I的作文,看清标准范文的猫腻
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。
请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1.栏目介绍; 2.稿件内容; 3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。
注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.
下面把标准答案给与了分解,同学们务必要逐字逐句地研读,找出标准范文为什么这样
写,发现范文写作时的思考过程,挖掘范文和作文原题中的一一对等的字眼提示。通过研读
分析,再回扣题目本身。写作也就那么回事儿,其实一点也不难。希望同学们可以悟出基本
的写作思路、技巧。以下英语连起来就是标准范文。
称呼,已给:
Dear Peter,
开头语,已给:
Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.
开篇,介绍“外国文化”栏目概况 (要点1:点出栏目名称、特点popular、进行栏目介绍):
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.
It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home
countries. (搭配be popular among、carry一词用得好、过去分词短语written by作后
置定语)
进行约稿 (写作目的,这可是正事儿):
Would you please write something about the culture in your part ofthe United States
稿件内容 (要点2):
And (and一词虽然简单,但用得巧妙,呈上衔接,过渡自然,读起来还有抑扬顿挫之感觉) we
would especially (强调递进) welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays
and festivals (节日风俗,扣栏目) and the life of American high school students (中
学生生活,扣栏目).
适当拓展,根据字数灵活安排
You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. (高
级词汇、so long as好句式)
稿件长度 (要点3):
400 words would be fine.
交稿日期 (要点4):
Could we have your article before June 28
合适的结尾 (万能句式,一定背下):
Im looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、2016作文模拟猜押如下:
(一)书信/邮件
Passage 1(建议信、学习、文化)
你打算毕业后到美国留学, 想咨询你的美国朋友Chris。请你根据以下提示写一封信。
1.目的:增长见识,体验文化;2.困惑:语言障碍,学业压力;3.征求建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已给出,不
计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Joe
One possible version
DearChris,
I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school.
I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I
can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this
country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English.
I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure
from college courses.
I hope you can offer me some practical advice.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Joe
Passage2(学习、文化)
假如你是李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求
教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1.对英语学习的认识。
2.自己目前的英语水平。
3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题。
4.对英语教学的两点建议。
注意:1.词数100左右。2.信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher
_________________________________ Thank you!
Li Hua
One possible version
Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more
important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel
it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking
English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.
Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can
make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua
Passage3(学习、文化)
作为班长,请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr. Smith 写一封信,向他表示欢迎并转达同学们
对英语课的希望:
1.介绍西方文化;2.组织多样活动;3.关注学生发音。
注意: 1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计
入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_____________________________________________________________
Yours,
Chris
One possible version
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.
First, we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture. We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language. Besides, we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do. Thank you very much. Looking forward to meeting you!
Yours,
Chris
Passage 4(生活)
假定你是刘芳。今年暑期加拿大的一所中学将组织该校的学生来你所就读的学校访问。其间,Lucy将借住在你家。请你给她写封信,代表全家欢迎她的到来并告之有关事宜,内容要点如下:
上午:参观学校各教学场所及设施。
下午:游览繁华市区及周遍景点。
晚上:看电视、玩游戏、聊天等。
注意:词数100左右;
Dear Lucy,
_____________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Liu Fang
One possible version
Dear Lucy,
I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home.
My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. As far as I know, you will be shown around the school in the morning, but in the afternoon I’ll take you to the downtown and then some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, or meeting people. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time and learn more about Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Fang
Passage5(生活、文化)
假设你是高三(1)班的学生李华。你的英国朋友Chris八月份来北京度假,来信向你咨询如
篇2:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧
全文共 1044 字
+ 加入清单要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
篇3:小升初英语备考英文写作中的词语选择_700字
全文共 635 字
+ 加入清单在The Right Word at the Right Time的“序言”中,编者对词语选用的重要性作了一个很好的比喻:“Using the right word at the right time is rather like wearing appropriate clothing for the occasion:
it is a courtesy to others,and a favor to yourself-a matter of presenting yourself well in the eyes of the world."
显然,说话或写文章时用词适当比穿着适当难度大得多,因而也具有更大的重要性。在我国,古人写文章时常为一个词语的选用具思苦想,因而有“语不惊人死不休”的说法。
成语“一字值千金”也说明了选择词语的极端重要性。有时“一字之差”造成令人遗憾的败笔,或招致成千上万的经济损失。这些反面的教训也告诉我们必须重视词语选用的问题。
2.词语选择的可能性
实际上,我们每个人的脑子里都有了一个或大或小的词库,只要我们肯去发掘,往往可以得到更好的表达方式。这是我们做好词语选用的主观条件。
从客观条件广看,我们有各种类型的词典和参考书,只要我们平时多翻译、多阅读,写作时勤查考,就会在词语选用上不断进步。当然,一部好词典也不会毫无缺点,更难以面面俱到,因此在这里我们应牢牢记住著名英国作家、评论家和辞书编纂家Johson的话:
篇4:中考英语备考拯救地球的作文题目
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+ 加入清单地球是我们人类共同的家园,人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前,我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,写一篇80词左右的短文参评。
1。重要性:只有一个地球
2。主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难
3。措施:停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇:disaster n。灾难 protect V。 保护
注意:(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;
(2)文章标题已给出,但不计入总词数;
(3)可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
★ 范文
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China。 A lot of fishes died。 The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land。 The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather。
So everyone should do something to save our environment。 First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water。 For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water。 Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on。 Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories。
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment。 Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!
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篇5:必备的10句谚语中考英语作文备考资料
全文共 490 字
+ 加入清单1. Every coin has two sides.每个硬币都有两面,比喻事物的两面性。
2. The winter is coming and the spring is not far.冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?
3. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
4. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
5. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
6. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。
7. A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
8.Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事,今日毕。
9.Time and tide wait for no man.时不我待。
10.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
篇6:英语作文题目专项训练题中考备考
全文共 728 字
+ 加入清单根据下面的汉语提示写一个60字左右的口头通知:
假如你是班长,你们要举办英语讲座(lecture)。
1 时间:3 月1日星期五下午3 点至五点
2 地点:阶梯教室(lecture theatre)
3 讲座人:北京大学李平教授
4 报告的内容:怎样学英语
5 要求大家准时出席 (attend),并且可以向他咨询有关的问题
例文:
Announcement
Girls and boys / Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attention,please ? / Attention,please.
I ve got announcement to make./ I m very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be held in the lecture hall / theater from 3 p.m .to 5 p.m. on Friday,March 1st.It will be given by Professor Li Ping from Beijing University. The topic is How to learn English well .You may take notes if you like. And you may ask any question on English learning / study after the lecture. Please attend the lecture on time / don t be late.
That s all,thank you.
篇7:SAT优秀作文欣赏英语备考辅助
全文共 1768 字
+ 加入清单Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below.
To change is to risk something, making us feel insecure. Not to change is a bigger risk, though we seldom feel that way. There is no choice but to change. People, however, cannot be motivated to change from the outside. All of our motivation comes from within.
Adapted from Ward Sybouts,Planning in School Administration:A Handbook Assignment
What motivates people to change? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from you reading,studies, experience, or observations.
Sample Essay - 6分范文
What motivates people to change is a relentless and innate desire for self-improvement. Rarely ever has history seen a man or society kick back, relax, and say Well that about does it. Not much else to do here! Within every person is the potential to achieve greatness in some form; be it athletically, mentally, spiritually. This inherent potential demands that people continue to explore and change both their environments and themselves throughout their lifes course. Never should a man be idle for too long. After acknowledging the changes a man has already made to his environment, the pursuit of self-improvement will once again stir within his soul and call him to action. This internal desire, this pursuit of challenge and perfection, does not prohibit man from being happy with his status and achievements. On the contrary, the device serves more to allow the man to constantly strive for greater change, newer innovation. What motivates people to change is the ongoing need to redefine peoples lives and identities to elevate them to higher levels of eminence and sucess.
篇8:广东高考英语写作基础题备考策略
全文共 4324 字
+ 加入清单导语:小编就高考英语广东卷写作题将由基础写作(满分15分)和任务型写作(满分25分)两节组成。为了更有效地备考基础写作题,需要搞清楚基础写作题的特点和对考生写作能力的要求。本文将探讨这两个方面的问题,并对备考给出一些建议,供考生参考。
一、基础写作题的特点
高考设置基础写作题目的目的是要检测考生最基础的书面语言表达能力,如用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。因此,基础写作题与往年的书面表达依然会有很多相似点,但也会出现一些新的特点。
1. 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。历年来高考作文题的题材都非常贴近考生的学习和生活,如校园活动、校外见闻、交友、旅游,和考生有关的话题讨论等。可以预料明年高考写作题的题材还会在这些范围之内,并为所有所考所熟悉。
2. 写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文。基础写作题的体裁主要有故事性描写和应用文写作两大类。命题形式可能是看图写故事、看图表说明、根据表格信息完成一封短信或一份通知这类的应用文等。
3. 内容呈现的方式具有半封闭性。作文试题逐步走向开放将是大势所趋。但是,基础写作题还只能是半封闭的,其特点是写作的内容是被规定了的,考生必须将文章所规定的信息点完整、全面地表达出来,但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些必要的信息等,考生又有一定的自主构思空间。
4. 用5句话表达。这是基础写作题与往年书面表达题最显著的不同点。往年是规定字数(100词左右),句子的数量不作规定,所以很多考生为了不犯句法错误总是用一些简单句。而基础写作只能用5句话来表达题目所给的全部信息点,但所给的信息点与往年的书面表达相比并不会减少,所以,用5个简单句很难完成任务,必须使用复合句或并列句来综合多个信息点,而且还要照顾句子之间的衔接和语意上的连贯。从这一点来说,基础写作题对考生运用语言能力的要求大大提高了。
二、基础写作题提出的新要求
由基础写作题的特点可以看出,它对考生提出了一些新的要求。
1. 信息组织能力。笔者认为,信息组织能力包括信息归类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。对于题目所提供的各种信息点,考生首先需要依照一定的标准将信息进行归类,并初步计划将哪些信息放到同一个句子中;其次是将信息进行合理的排列,排列必须依照一定的标准,如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等;第三是选择信息表达的秩序,确定句子之间的先后关系,这既要考虑语法上能否衔接,还要考虑语意上的连贯。在组织信息的过程中,还要对某些信息进行必要的增删,使文章意思连贯、语言畅通、逻辑严密。
2. 运用复杂句子的能力。在整理和归类信息点之后,就需要正确地使用比较复杂的句子,综合地表达信息。复杂句子主要有三类:
第一类是复合句,包括含有名词性从句的复合句,含有定语从句的复合句,含有状语从句的复合句。
第二类是并列句,包括具有递进关系的并列句, 如由and,then,besides,in addition, furthermore,moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句,具有转折关系的并列句,如由but,however,on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句,具有平行选择关系的并列句,如由both…and…,as well as,as well,neither…nor…or,either…or…,not only…but also…等连接的并列句。
第三类是一些特殊句型,如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。
正确地使用各种句型,不仅能够完成题目所要求的任务,还能使文章的句式变得丰富、行文更加流畅、中心和主旨更加突出。
三、基础写作题的备考策略
在基础写作的备考过程中,一方面要重视养成一些良好的写作习惯,如认真审题、巧妙构思、常写草稿、工整誊写、仔细核对等好习惯,另一方面在组织信息和训练复杂句子结构方面要多下些功夫。下面我们以“广东省普通高等学校招生全国统一考试广东省英语科考试说明”中的样题为例,探讨如何备考基础写作题。
第一节:基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)
假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中考生英语演讲比赛并获奖,该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动,下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。
活动时间
7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日
活动内容
参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲
听英语讲座 表演英语短剧
看英语电影 教外宾学中文
【写作内容】
电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求用英语以书信形式给予答复。
1. 选择适合你的时间并说明理由;
2. 解释你只能参加其中的两项活动(听英语讲座和教外宾学中文),虽然你认为所有的活动都很有意义;
3. 说明你选择的理由:听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息;教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。
【写作要求】
1. 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Sir or Madame,
I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
【评分标准】
句子结构的准确性和复杂度;信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
由此我们可以看出,信息点的数量与往年的书面表达题相比并没有减少,要想用5个句子把所有的信息都表达出来,考生必须从以下三个方面进行备考:
1. 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题:
思考的问题
样题分析
要写的文章主题是什么?(topic)
参加夏令营。
为什么要写这篇文章?(purpose)
电视台邀请参加夏令营,写信回复
要写文章的信息点有哪些?(information items)
选择的时间、参加活动的内容、解释为什么。
怎样安排信息点的逻辑顺序?(order)
说明要参加的活动并解释原因—→说明要参加的时间并解释原因。
动作是什么时候发生的(时态)?(when)
夏令营还没有开始,文章主要用一般将来时。
2. 提高组织信息的能力。组织信息的过程包括信息分类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。这些步骤看起来好像很繁琐,但对于中下成绩的考生来说,一步一步地思考这些问题是很有必要的。现以样题为例,说明该怎样组织信息。
信息分类
信息排列
信息表达
时间信息:两个时间段。
内容信息:6项活动。
选择信息:其中的两个活动及其理由。
夏令营的内容信息点排列:可以将自己要参加的两项活动放在前面,其它信息点可以略写。
作者的选择信息点排列:依照自己所参与的活动顺序逐项表述,紧接着给出选择的理由。
结合已经给出的头和尾,写作的顺序可安排如下:
很高兴被邀请(已给出)——感谢安排这么多的活动——说明活动的意义——表达自己只能参加两项活动的遗憾和原因——说明参加的活动内容及原因(两项活动用两句话)——说明自己选择的时间及原因。
3. 夯实基础,掌握基本的句子结构及其用法。对于大多数考生来说,用词不准和句子结构错误是写作失分的“罪魁祸首”。夯实基础、掌握基本的句子结构及其用法是基础写作备考的主要任务,完成这项任务可以分步骤进行:
第一步:练习写简单句,练就写简单句基本不犯语言错误的“真功”。简单句大体上可以分为两个基本类型,考生必须掌握:“主语+谓语+(其它成分)”“主语+系动词+表语”。
第二步:练习运用复杂句。要提高运用复杂句的能力,考生必须要攻克三个易错点:一是主句与从句之间主谓结构混乱,造成主句缺谓语;二是没有掌握关联词的用法,错用、多用、漏用关联词;三是该使用简单句的地方人为地复杂化,如可以用分词或介词短语来表达的,却偏要用从句。
下面以样题为例,介绍笔者是如何思考写这篇文章的(为了分析方便,笔者将5个句子进行编号),仅供参考:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp. ①Thank you very much for arranging so many activities, such as English corner, English lectures, English films, English songs, English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. ②I am sure all the activities will do a lot of good to us students. ③But it’s a pity that I can only take part in two of them, because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project. ④I would like to listen to the lectures, by which I will learn more about western culture, and help foreigners learn Chinese, as more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
⑤I want to see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-July, so I am going to attend the camp from August 15th to 22nd.
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
第①句顺应已给出的句中的glad心情,表示感谢安排这么多的活动,具有较好的连贯性。同时很自然地将活动内容做一介绍。
第②句用简单句表达活动的意义,语意上连贯,句式上没有继续用“长”句,有变化。
第③句用but转折并用it’s a pity 句型表示委婉的歉意,然后解释原因。
第④句用一个长句子表达自己要参加的两个项目,并解释原因,解释原因的第一句用定语从句,第二句用状语从句,使句子结构富于变化。
第⑤句解释参加的时间并给出解释。之所以把时间放在后面,主要是考虑它与题目已经给出的句子之间在语意上的连贯性不够。