我的家乡英语满分作文1000字【精选20篇】

Hometown is the place where a person belongs. Chinese people have special

feelings about their hometown. No matter where they go, they won’t abandon it

and always make some time to visit. My hometown brings me so many happy memories

and I wish it could keep its original face forever.

Two years ago, I lived in my hometown. It is a small village, so people

there get familiar with each other. When we walked on the country road, everyone

smiled when we saw each other. There was no distance for us. In the daytime, I

liked to go boating in the small river with my friends, or sometimes I could

catch fish. The green trees around me and I could hear the birds singing all the

time. It was a paradise for me.

However, even the small paradise can’t avoid being polluted seriously. The

environment is no more clean, the river becomes smaller and the water is so

dirty. When I see this, I feel so pity. If we lose the clean land, how can we

survive for long. Protecting the environment is in need.

Great changes have taken place in my hometown for recent years.big department stores and factories are everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets.with the development of the society，The life of the us is greatly improved.

I used to live in a small house and small houese surround the whole city. the qaulity of our life is very low,people were always worried that they would have no money for using or they can not get what they like. we could seldom see any foreign tourists.

But now, with the support of the government . My hometown has developed quickly and has changed a lot.people are living in a rich and high quality society,almost each person has a car,the transportation is convinient,meanwhile. more and more high buildings are being built which brings our hometown a new look. many wonderful places have been opened up that attracts many tourists.

Also,the people in my hometown are getting busier, everywhere you can see peoples footprints.

myhometownis beautiful place it stands near a wide river at the foot of low green hills. it has many tall buildings and wide streets. there are trees and flowers everywhere.

but it has not always been like that. in the old days, it was a sad dirty little town. landlords and merchants lived in the few good houses. for the working people there were only dark, unhealthy rooms in old buildings and huts in narrow muddy streets. nearly everyone was poor and many had no work.

everything has changed since liberation. the people, led by the party, have got rid of the mud and dirt. they have put up schools, theaters, shops and flats. they have an assembly hall and a hospital. along the river they have built offices, hotels and parks. a lot of factories have sprung up. on the river, streamers and boats come and go busily, day and night. they carry the products of our industries to all parts of the country.

i love my hometown, and i love its people. they also have changed. healthy and happy, they are going all out to build socialism.

光阴似箭，日月如梭。转眼间，20年过去了，我已是人人皆知的科学家了。尽管我在这儿生活得很好，但我还是想回家乡看看。

坐在飞机上，我想着：我的父母哥嫂家人怎么样了?现在母校变成什么样的呢?同学们变成什么样的了?家乡发生了哪些变化?这些问题时时回绕在我的心里。

回到家乡，走进家门，爸爸妈妈住在宽敞明亮阳光充足的别墅里，妈妈对我说：“这二十多年家乡变化可真大，你出去转转吧!”我的第一件事，就是把家乡转个够，呵，变化还真大!一幢幢高楼大厦直入云天。汽车的尾气也不排放了，变成了太阳能汽车，不用汽油了。而且，还有一位科学家发明了臭氧层，使天空又变的清亮美丽了，空气又清新了。还有，另一位发明家也发明了水净化器，使小河变得更加清澈了。

家乡的变化真大，!我的心里不禁这样嘟哝着。

还有更令人惊奇的呢!我去了一趟母校，母校和二十年前相比，差别太大了。过去的痕迹一点都没有了，全变样了。校园里没有一点点杂草，干干净净的，空气也比外面更加清新了!这是怎么回事，我的心里涌出了一个大问号。20年后得我”当舞蹈老师的作文小学生500字

这是怎么回事?我想着。忽然，吓了我一跳，有人在拍我的肩膀。我转过头去，原来，是校长在拍我的肩膀。这校长怎么这么熟悉，挣着一条马尾辫，眼睛是那么的亮。我想了好半天，才想起来：原来，是罗慧茹!哈哈：“原来是罗慧茹!”“终于说出来了!看来，你还没有忘记我这个朋友啊!”我们聊了几句，我兴致是那么的高。然后，我问她：“为什么校园里这么的干净呢?”她听了，笑着回答：“你这个科学家，连自己的发明都忘了。”“哦!经你这么一提醒，我想起来了，我发明了去杂草剂和空气清洁剂，去除杂草剂只要喷在地上，就会??”“别讲你的大道理了，问你一下，你知道学校在哪儿么?”“我还想问你呢?”“你看!”说着，罗慧如打了个响指，学校便展现了出来。“哇，高科技就是和21世纪的时候不一样了。”我赞叹道??

告别了母校，我还要去逛逛森林里!从前人们不注意绿色保护，到处砍伐树木，到处都是荒山秃岭的。现在却变成绿油油的，一片片的大森林。啊!多么美丽的大森林啊!

夜幕降临，在树林里发出一道道的光，就像光的海洋。还有，那些动物穿上了人的衣服，和人成了好朋友。人们也懂得了保护动物的重要性利了。

故乡的今天你是那么的美丽，科技那么发达。这次回故乡，不只是让我和家人团聚，还让我看到家乡日新月异的变化，看到儿时的玩伴，现在活得那么的有意义，真是高兴!

故乡，你给我们带来了欢乐和幸福，我爱你!我的故乡。

I’m an outgoing girl and my name is Shi Yun. I love singing songs,

especially pop songs. My favorite singer is Jay Chou.

As we all know, Jay is a superstar of Asia. He has excellent music skills.

He started to play the piano at 5 years old and studied hard. When he was 15

years old, he was able to write songs. But the environment in which he lived is

not very good. When he was a child, his parents were divorced and as a result

his childhood was full of depression. He lived with his grandparents. He was

always silent and didn’t like talking to others. At the age of 16, he was

attracted by the bass’s low voice. So his mother bought one for him and he

started to play the bass. His success is filled with tears and sweat.

From his story, I know if I want to be successful, I should work harder. I

want to go in for music, although I know the way to success is very difficult

for me. Now that I choose this way, I’ll do my best to realize my dream. Of

course I will tell myself I will be a superstar someday.

I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It

took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We

stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day， I just stayed in

the hotel and rested. On the second day， my brother and I went to Nanjing Road.

It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there， there were lots of

people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs

of trousers for the ing summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white

because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On

the third day， my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full

of people. I played many kinds of gamesthere. I had a good time. The other days，

I went to some other interesting places， such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV

Tower， the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t

forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.

Times are changing day by day. Doing the shopping is easier. Most people

are better-dressed and they enjoy modern life.

Girls are changing, too. There are many differences between the older and

younger generations.

I know a twelve-year-old girl, who, to my surprise, has little time to

play. She told me that she dreamt of being a dancer, so she must learn to dance,

play music and so on. Sometimes, she is out of breath under such pressure, but

she can’t stop because modern life is busy.

In addition, I find those girls know more and more. Although they are

little girls, they know how to dress fashionably. Sometimes they look older than

their age, though.

As an older female, I realize that compared with the modern girls, my

generation is less well-educated and takes part in fewer leisure activities. I

realize that we don’t make full use of our time the way they do. Therefore, we

should try our best to value our time and pursue our dreams.

Confident, proud and energetic, modern girls represent new times.

家乡如何才算美?在每个人的心里，它的尺度是不可能一样的，在我看来，总能发现他人身上优点的人，就会认为自己的家乡是美丽的。 How is my hometown be beautiful? In everyones heart, its scale is not the same. In my opinion, people who always find others have the advantages of others.You will think that your hometown is beautiful.

我的家乡是一个并不知名的小镇，四面环山，田野中，小溪小河随处可见。环的是苍翠可爱的无名小山，没有名山的雄伟挺拔，有的是那股青绿。一年四季，那些小山总是葱绿的，它们可快乐自由呢!而那些“不像样”的小河，它们并不净，不长，却造福着一方的百姓，灌溉着成百上千亩的良田，它总能给我清静幽闲的感觉。家乡为数最多的，除了那颇具古风的房屋，就是一望无际的田野，绿油油的。老人们的根都扎在那儿，我的心也系在那了，老人们常唠叨，土地田野是村子的根本，没了，就等于失去一切。

童年的记忆里，最爱的就是家乡的日出。记得那年，我还是个乳臭未干的小毛孩，五六点醒了，自己推门来到大庭院呼吸新鲜的空气，看到院子外的竹林，透露着那气度非凡、光艳照人的橙红色的光芒，染红了东边的天空，真正感受到人们所谓的“一米阳光”，最后奋力一跃，一轮旭日就展露在眼前。

期初它并不刺眼，有的只是柔和和它天然给予的威严，我的心中有种说不出的惊喜。过了一会儿，几片霞云飘来遮住了太阳的一角。这样“犹抱琵琶半遮面”，更使我感到朝阳的美和神秘。很快，大街小巷里，就可以看见早起的人们匆匆的背影，年轻人赶早班车去城里上班，十几岁的孩子们骑着自行车正赶往学校，在镇中心的中学里，早早地就传来学生们朗朗的读书声。

家乡的人们是淳朴的，他们都和蔼可亲。熟人之间若有空闲，就牵着孩子到彼此家中窜门。老爷子喜欢边聊天边泡茶，老太太就喜欢带上自家做的糕点请大家一同品尝。现在时代不同了，老年人的生活越来越丰富了，到了晚上，镇文化中心广场上聚集了很多妇女和老人跳起了广场舞，虽然说不上是翩翩起舞，但个个精神抖擞，满脸含笑，充满了幸福和满足。

啊!我美丽的家乡，这儿的人是你的子女，这儿的田地是你的心脏，这儿的山是你的四肢，而那美丽的朝霞则是你动人的眼睛!

已是深秋，金黄的树叶离开了大树妈妈的怀抱，飞舞在空中，在阳光的照耀下，一闪一闪的，如金色的蝴蝶在金秋的凉风中翩翩起舞，告诉人们深秋的来临。路两侧，高大的梧桐数挺着他那魁梧的身体，在金风中望着远方，似乎在想着什么。 is already late autumn. The golden leaves leave the arms of the big tree mother.Dancing in the cool breeze of the golden autumn, telling people the advent of late autumn.On both sides of the road, the tall sycamore number holds his burly body and looks into the distance in the golden breeze, as if thinking about something.

农村的秋天是个丰收的季节。金黄的大豆咧开了嘴，一不小心就会把豆子露出来，地里，白白胖胖的花生藏在土壤里，等待着人们来收获它，路两侧，高大的玉米立在那里，咧着嘴笑着，把那金黄的身体都露了出来。乡村小路上，秋风习习的吹着。田野上，快乐的小孩跑来跑去，追着那美丽的蝴蝶。

来到海边，大海掀起一波又一波的波浪，海滩上，只要随便挖一挖海沙，就能发现许多东西，如贝壳呀，小螃蟹呀等等。海面上漂着一只又一只的渔船，勤劳的渔民每天收网打鱼，从不停歇。秋天的浪不象夏天那么激情豪壮，轻轻柔柔，抚摸着我们，舒服极了，这就是孕育我们生命的母亲大海。所有生命的起源都在这里，海与海滩连接在了一起，成了一幅美丽的画。清晨，橙红的阳光染红蔚蓝的大海，此时此刻，水天一色，壮观极了。

秋天的山上更为美丽。大大小小的石头衬托着树的美丽。山谷里，细泉缓缓流淌，汇入溪中，溪旁有棵树，巨大的树冠做了一个天然的休息亭，爬山的人累了可以歇一歇，还能喝几口清泉解解渴呢。山顶，笼罩着薄薄的雾，秋天的雾不象冬天的.雪那样洁白，也不象春天的细雨下个不停，而秋天的雾更像妈妈，轻轻的柔柔的。它变化着，一会儿分散，一会儿聚拢，一会儿慢慢升起，一会儿滚滚向前，让人琢磨不透。

啊，家乡的秋天，你带来了丰收，带来了快乐，使家乡变的如此美丽，我爱你秋天，但我更爱我的家乡。

我的家乡在安阳这座古城内西部的一座小村庄，这里是我永远的乐土，因为这儿有我最喜欢的味道——皮渣的味道。皮渣是家乡婚宴三下锅文化、三道版文化、八大菜系文化的主要食材，是独具地方特点的美味菜肴。

每逢过年，我都会回到这个美丽的宁静的村庄，和家人一起辞旧迎新，度过这喜庆非凡的节日。而在众多饭菜中，皮渣一定是最引人注目的，它既可煎可烩，也可炒菜做汤，我曾经无数次看着奶奶做出这种晶莹的佳肴，奶奶首先把正宗的红薯粉条与淀粉糊融合在一起，两者是1比1的，还要加“调味”，绿绿的葱丝，黄黄的姜穗，白白的蒜蓉，奶奶挥手一洒，就像雪花般飞舞，飘飘然，均匀落在已熔好到糊糊里，顿时一股清香飘出。然后把它放在容器中，如锅、盘之类，上笼开蒸40分钟即可，一出锅，那浓浓的混着姜、蒜辣的气味扑鼻而来，过会儿就会慢慢的香起来，就不像那般猛烈了，却有丝带温柔划过鼻尖。最后，把皮渣切成一块块，它看着已是晶莹剔透十分精致，不过这时候可不能尝噢！要耐心，因为它十分烫，凉后尝起来可是果冻般弹软，看似软软，却十分筋道，不会碎，不会变成糊，香而不腻，厚味绵长。每次当我大口咀嚼着这喷香的皮渣，忙活很久的奶奶都会坐在一边慈爱的看着我，满足地笑着。

我爱家乡的味道，就是饱含着奶奶对我爱的皮渣味道。

姑姑告诉我，皮渣除了给自己人吃，还有给来访的客人邻居，以及给远在外打工的儿女。没错，每逢春节村子里就会被浓浓的皮渣味弥漫香，香而浓郁，看起来烟雾缭绕，实际是皮渣的热气儿，往而平静宁和的小村庄，这时沸腾起来了，热闹非凡。人们在村子里来往穿梭，敲敲东家门，拍拍西家窗，给对方送上自己的一份祝福，有礼有节，笑脸相迎。各家的皮渣有各家的味道，浓缩着各家的情，不同的人家做出的皮渣自然各有特点，但那种祝福与期望美好的朴实情感早已包在这可爱软软的皮夹里了，这是一种异曲同工的味道更是热情友爱的味道，

我爱家乡的味道，是饱含着热情有礼的景色味。

甜而暖，红而香的皮渣是家乡人民最朴实最实在的情，像红色丝带般系在每个家乡儿女的心中，将他们紧密的连在一起。那带着皮渣出门打工的儿女们就像是带着家味，无论走到哪儿，无论遇到多少挫折，都不会忘记那份温暖，也会永远记住，总有家在身后等着你凯旋归来，在心中和行动上也会越来越有劲，不负家乡所盼望，不忘初心，懂得感恩之情。

我爱家乡的味道是皮渣的味道，人情的味道，爱的味道。

【试题回放】

假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：

1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

【例文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【译文】

亲爱的先生/女士,

来自中国的问候!

我是李华,四川的一个学生。我被一只熊猫的爱人因为我还是个孩子的时候。大约三年前,我很高兴得知白云产下女儿Sulin和我一直看着她成长在你的网站上,。现在,她将是三个。我想祝她生日快乐,来表达我的感谢你的辛勤工作,因为Sulin和她的父母在美国生活愉快、健康的生活。

顺便问一下,我可以要一Sulin了她三岁生日的照片吗?非常感谢你提前。

敬启

李华

Our English Teacher

Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.

She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says,"Practice makes perfect."

She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English playS.

She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her.

Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.

我们的英语老师

黄老师是我们的英语老师，她1970年来到我们学校，已经当了30多年的英语老师。她工作努力，多年来一直是模范教师。

课下，她对我们很友善，但课堂上却对我们要求很严。她经常带鼓励我们多说多读英语，常常说“熟能生巧”。

她教得很好而且尽可能使每节课都上得生动有趣。她常给我们放幻灯片，教我们唱英语歌曲，还帮助我们排演英语小话剧。

她不仅是我们的老师，同时又是我们的朋友，我们都尊敬和爱戴她。

明天，她将出席一个重要会议，而且由于她的先进事迹将在会上受到表彰。

[关于我的英语老师的英语满分作文

【网络综合 - 英文写作翻译英语作文】

My hometown is beautiful scenery, rich products, beautiful, and is a beautiful place.

My hometown is in ji hills, although not a big place, it is a very intelligent and a town. In the west of her was a famous JiShan temple, the tomb. Is a national key protection object, trees lush, hill strewn at random have send, has now become a tourist area. Attracted many domestic and foreign tourists to come and visit.

JiShan is rich in rice, fish, animal husbandry developed. JiShan fish sell well all over the country, JiShan dragon meters and color white, taste sweet, is famous at home and abroad.

Every village of JiShan repaired smooth tarmac. It was built JiShan people, walk in the street, mood is extremely happy. In the field ?

我的家乡风景优美,物产丰富,人杰地灵,是一个美丽的地方.

我的家乡在纪山镇,虽说不是一个很大的地方,却是一个很有灵气的一个名镇.在她的西部是有名的纪山庙,古墓众多.是国家的重点保护对象,这里树木茂盛,小山错落有致,现已成为旅游区.吸引了许多国内、国外的游客前来游玩.

纪山盛产大米、鱼牧业发达.纪山鱼畅销全国各地,纪山的龙米色泽洁白、口感香甜,更是名扬国内外.

纪山的各个村都修了平整的柏油马路.这是纪山人民修建的,走在马路上,心情极其舒畅.田野里是辛勤劳动的叔叔、阿姨、伯伯们,是他们造就了我们美丽的纪山.

我爱我的家乡,我爱家乡的人们,我的心在家乡.

某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置品与他人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发帖，发布物品交换信息。内容应包括：

·你将拿出什么物品进行交换

·具体介绍该物品

·你希望换回什么物品

·请愿意交换的朋友给你留言

注意：

(1)词数100左右;

(2)格式不限;

(3)文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。

满分作文1

Title: Want a second-hand bicycle? Here it is!

Content:

内容：

Since I am going to graduate, the bicycle that I have ridden for three years is of no use any more. So I want to exchange it with whoever needs it.

自从我毕业后，我已经骑了三年的自行车不再使用了。所以我想和任何需要的人交换它。

The bike is in plain black and easy to ride. Though it’s designed for racing, you can use it for everyday life as well. With a lock behind the seat, it can be locked anywhere you like, removing the trouble of parking. Old as it, the bike functions well. And I’m sure you will love it at the first sight.

这辆自行车很黑，很容易骑。虽然它的设计，赛车，你可以使用它的日常生活，以及。有了一个锁在座位后面，它可以被锁在任何你喜欢的地方，消除了停车的麻烦。老了，自行车功能很好。我敢肯定你会爱上它的第一眼。

If you have a MP4 player and don’t want to keep it, you can exchange it with me. Anyone who has the intention please leave a message here, and I will contact you later.

如果你有一个MP4播放器，不想要它，你可以和我交换。有意者请在这里留言，稍后我会联系你的。

Thanks.

谢谢

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

To Jeff

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home. So we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

[高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信

(Mothers Eyes)

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong. Therefore, I could face difficulties.

When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise. Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties. But whenever I was frustrated, my mothers eyes alwaysgave me hope and encouragement. Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons. Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better. At last I overcame the difficulty. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。那双眼睛能洞察我的心情，给我鼓励，促我坚强，因此我能面对一切困难。

孩提学步时，妈妈总是帮助我，鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠地扑进她怀抱时，她的双眼充满了赞扬之情。成长过程中，我遇到了很多困难，但灰心失望时，妈妈的双眼总给我以希望和鼓励。一次我考试不及格，妈妈没有责备我，而是鼓励我找出原因，提高我的成绩。最后我终于度过了难关。现在，我长大了，不用再让她操心了。但每当遇到挫折时，妈妈的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

[高考英语满分作文:母亲的眼睛

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. Besides,football is our favourite sport. We like watching football match. Zhang Dong works hard at his lessons. He often studies late into the night. No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects. He loves popular songs and classical music, too.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He dreams of being a lawyer in the future.

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. I highly value the friendship with him.

张东是我最要好的朋友，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。此外，我们两人都喜欢足球，爱看足球赛。张东学习很努力，他经常学习到深夜。不管他多么累，他都坚持完成他的功课，所以他各科功课都很好。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他梦想将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。我珍视同他之间的友谊。

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车;

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳;

3.饮食要健康;

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑;

2.80—100词左右;

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

亲爱的爸爸(妈妈)，

你每天这么忙，你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡，是吗?为什么不步行到办公室吗?你最好锻炼，每周至少一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是，它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。

爸爸，请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康!

您的爱子(女)

汤姆(玛丽)

[给父母的一封信高中英语满分作文

dear eric,

My hometown is beautiful place It stands near a wide river at the foot of low green hills. It has many tall buildings and wide streets. There are trees and flowers everywhere.

But it has not always been like that. In the old days, it was a sad dirty little town. Landlords and merchants lived in the few good houses. For the working people there were only dark, unhealthy rooms in old buildings and huts in narrow muddy streets. Nearly everyone was poor and many had no work.

Everything has changed since liberation. The people, led by the Party, have got rid of the mud and dirt. They have put up schools, theaters, shops and flats. They have an assembly hall and a hospital. Along the river they have built offices, hotels and parks. A lot of factories have sprung up. On the river, streamers and boats come and go busily, day and night. They carry the products of our industries to all parts of the country.

I love my hometown, and I love its people. They also have changed. Healthy and happy, they are going all out to build socialism.

The Longhu villa in my hometown Pengshui County, where the fog is floating, (.) is a magical and beautiful place.

The flag up to an altitude of about 1000 meters high, halfway up the mountain air is very sweet, very refreshing. The mountain long rows of trees under the tree is a wild profusion of vegetation, and insects and other small animal snake, so you walk can hear small animal sounds.

The most interesting, is that the top of the thick fog, one or two months a year, on the top of the mountain will have a thick layers of fog, you can put the fog blowing a "hole" in one breath, but it closed in neither fast nor slow, steep peak, have a piece of egg shaped stone. Its a good place to watch the fog, but prone to hallucinations sitting on the stone, you will feel as if you are sitting in the clouds is Sun Wukong, somersault cloud, all of a sudden to jump down! And its easy to sit on the stone and jump down! You know, this stone is surrounded by a cliff! So, its better not to sit on the stone, because its a safe one!