介绍长城的英语作文初二(实用20篇)

I‘m twelve years old.I am a student of Class 1,Grade 7.I like playing

basketball and reading.My favourite fruit are banans and apples.Also,I like

eating hamburgers.I am a good student in my class.I like English and math

because they are interesting.Im friendly.I like sports.Do you want me to be your

friend?

I like this hotel management professional,because I like to live in a

strict order of the management environment.I have my professional

self-confidence and hope,as long as the efforts will be fruitful,this is my

motto.Since I chose this profession,I will follow this path,effort,perseverance

path.

Thank you teachers.I finished presentation.

这是今年十二岁的梅。我是1班的一名学生，7年级。我喜欢打篮球和读书。我最喜欢的水果是香蕉和苹果。另外，我喜欢吃汉堡。我在班里是一个好学生。我喜欢英语和数学，因为它们很有趣。我很友好。我喜欢运动。你想让我成为你的朋友吗?我喜欢酒店管理这个专业，是因为我喜欢生活在一个严格管理秩序的环境。我对我的专业充满自信和希望，只要努力，就会有收获，这是我的座右铭。既然我选择了这个专业，我会走这条路，努力的，坚持不懈的走下去。我的介绍完了。

Holiday, my father and I went to Beijing tourism. We visited our great the Great Wall. The Great Wall a total of three species, they are sea the Great Wall, the Great Wall and the Great Wall hill road. The starting point of the Great Wall in Qinhuangdao, at the end of Jiayuguan, is about 6000 kilometers long.

First of all, we climbed up the mountain is the famous the Great Wall -- the the Badaling Great Wall. I saw the the Great Wall is like a dragon lying in the ups and downs of the mountain. Despite the hot weather, the slope high and steep, but I still to overcome difficulties, done in one vigorous effort to reached the top of the Great Wall, received a "less than the Great Wall of non hero" certificate. On the peak, I have a feeling to become an immortal.

The third day, we went to the sea the Great Wall -- Qinhuangdao Ning Haicheng attractions, it is to resist the enemy attack from the sea and the troops off the place. I picked up some shells, in the play under the sea, took several photos later went to the Great Wall road -- Shanhaiguan the Great Wall. It has "the best in all the land" said, "the best in all the land off" five words per word 1 meters high. Because of the way the Great Wall is not very long, so I only spent more than an hour to go over it.

By visiting our ancient the Great Wall, I think the ancients created is really great, I was a Chinese proud!

My hometown has many scenic places, there are four spring like Longtan cave, fruit fragrance has a charming scenery and pinnacle, psc...... But my favorite is the mountain of my hometown.

In the hot summer day, my father took me to climb the mountain and looked up from the foot of the mountain. "The peak is so high that it seems to be in the sky." Look at the steep stone steps, one layer and one layer. It seems that there is no way to find it, alas! As I wanted to give up, my father said to me, "do things to the end!" At last, I began to climb the mountain. I grabbed the weeds with my hands. My legs pressed hard. Soon we climbed half the mountain, and I climbed and climbed in this steep mountain. I didnt know that I was so flexible. At this time, my stomach rumbled up, suddenly a red fruit aroma drifting, I smell the fragrance found a tall red fruit tree, the tree node is full of big and sweet red fruit, I just want to greedy DC slobber, climbed up the tree to pick one to eat, suddenly. A ripe red fruit from the tree fell down, I quickly picked up the red fruit, Dakoutaikou to eat it, "ah, really sweet!".

After a long time, we arrived at the top of the mountain and looked out. It turned out that Miyi was located in the mountain. I roared, "ah... Ah... Ah...! " I hear the echo from the mountain.

I love my hometown, I love the mountain of my hometown.

In my neighbor Liu grandmother at home, there is a very cute little white rabbit. Long ears, red eyes, small nose, short tail, a white hair, it became a lively and lovely little white rabbit.

When the white rabbits eat, vigilance of the incredible, it first walked around the food, and staring at the food, walked for about a minute, and then slowly close to touch the food with his feet, and then flew Open to determine the safety, and then come back to eat! Sometimes, the little white rabbit and I am very warm. I got my hand close, at first it was very frightened, flew away, motionless, and then slowly approached, rubbed my hand with my head, and I gently stroked it, it was happy to roll on the floor, naughty The

If the white rabbit would like to sleep, then, will lie on the side, motionless, while fell asleep. Little rabbit is very cute when sleeping! It is lying on the body, four legs straight, and sometimes, it is still asleep legs still moving it! May be dreaming! Children, this little rabbit is very cute, right?

尊敬的各位领导：

你们好!

我是xx师范大学外语学院英语系xx级的一名学生，即将于明年七月完成本科学业，真正地步入社会，开始人生的新一段征程。

上 大学后，我最郑重地告诉自己的一句话是：学通你的专业，利用它为你的人生开辟道路。于是我以交际英语为方向，首先侧重于打好基础，从听、说、读、写几方面 训练基本技能，在达到自如地运用英语的基础上，我涉猎了英美概况、英美文学、语言学等相关专业知识。同时，我还自学了部分经贸英语知识，这些努力不仅使我 的专业水平每年都有相应提高，而且扩展了视野、丰富了头脑，并使我于大二时以良好的成绩通过了英语专业四级考试，还将于明年三月参加专业八级测试。

深知语言交际作用的重要性，我特别注重学以致用。除了积极地、有选择地参加院、校组织的活动外，我还时常参加英语角，陪同外国访问团，翻译一些资料，在课外辅导班做兼职教师等。这让我有机会结交了很多朋友，丰富了阅历，而且感到生活更加充实。

我 没有任何引人注目的特长，也不善于领导人，所以三年多来只是通过尽心尽职地学习和工作而得到了大家的认可，但有一点我绝对可以保证，了解我的人也定会认 可，那就是只要我接手的事，我一定会付出百分之百的精力去做好，凭着这股劲儿和几年来的知识经验，我的第一次试讲被指导教师作为典范讲评，我在今年九月的 实习中获得优异成绩。

大学四年里，有收获也有遗憾，但欣慰的是，这些经历使我学会了冷静、执着，使我变得愈加独立、坚韧;教我学会在人生的 坐标上寻找适合自己的位置，并不断调整和完善自我;更让我意识到要勇于在人生的不同阶段迎接新的挑战。所以当又一次走到人生的十字路口时，我诚挚地希望能 加入你们这群充满生命力、竞争力和挑战力的精英当中，在各方英才的领导和帮助下，为公司的再度发展和腾飞推波助澜!

祝贵公司事业蒸蒸日上!

此致

敬礼

自荐人：xxx

xxxx年xx月xx日

The Moon Festival or Mid -autumn Festival is one of the three major traditional festivals celebrated by Chinese people. Like harvest time in other countries, the Mid-autumn Festival actually began as a

thanksgiving celebration, honoring the Soil God and the Crop God. This is also a time for family reunions. Chinese people enjoy moon cakes during this feast just as they eat rice dumplings for the Dragon Boat Festival. It is quite appropriate to bring moon cakes with you in token of festival greetings when calling on people during this season.

The Mid-Autumn Day

August 15th in Chinese Lunar Calendar is the

Mid-Autumn Day. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.

On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion. Each family will have the members get together to have a big dinner. The most popular food is moon cakes. They are round and look like the moon.

The moon is the brightest this night. People ate the delicious food while they were enjoying a beautiful full moon in their yard. At this time, some old people would like to tell many past events and tell the children a story about the rabbit. The children really believed that there was a rabbit on the moon. They wanted to go to the moon and have a look one day.

What a great festival!

中秋节

农历八月十五日是中秋节，在中国它是最重要的传统节日之一。 在那一天，人们通常回家与家人团聚，一家人聚在一起饱餐一顿。最流行的食品是月饼，它们圆圆的就像月亮。

中秋节晚上的月亮特别地圆。人们都在自家的院子里一边赏月一边吃着可口的月饼。这个时候；一些老人会讲述许多古老的故事，如月亮上的玉兔，孩子们信以为真，他们真想有一天登上月球看个究竟。 中秋是个美好的节日啊 !

[难忘的中秋英语作文

如果用英语来介绍某一种动物，那么你要怎么表达呢？下面就是小编跟大家分享一篇英语作文：介绍野生动物，欢迎大家阅读！

篇一：河马

hippopotamus hippopotamus amphibius the hippopotamus is one of the world’s largest and heaviest land animals.it lives partly in water and partly on land.although strictly a plant eater,the hippopotamus has massive jaws with formidable tusks.hippos have an unpredictable temperament and are capable of biting through small boats and slicing crocodiles in two.hippos trample riverbanks and lakeshores,creating a maze of waterside paths and wallows that they use to get access to the plants they eat.hippos spend their days lazing in or near water,emerging after dark to feed.

篇二：长颈鹿

the giraffe is the tallest moden land anmail.it can be over 5.5 metres tall. its neek alone may be 1.9 metres long. yet the giraffe has only seven bone in is neck than in a tall giraffe.

each bone in a giraffes neck is very long, wehille the bones in human neck are small. the makes the difference. a female iraffe gives birth to one baby at a time.the baby, called a calf,is about 1.9 metres tall at birth by the age of eight it is full grown.

the giraffe eats mostly leaves.because is has a long neck, it can reach the leves high up on the trees.

篇三：蛇

a snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places. it has no legs or feet, but can move very fast on its stomach. snakes usually have green,yellow or black skins, which make it difficult for their enemies to find them.some kinds of snakes live in water. they can swim as freely as fish.

snakes are cold-blooded animals. they take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs, birdseggs, pests and so on. as snakes are dreadfullooking, people are afraid of them.

in fact, snakes are not as dreadful as they look. they can help us to kill mice and pests. they can provide us with delicious meat. their blood is a good drink.poisonous snakes are especially useful. we can make valuable drugs with them.

篇四：斑马

zebras are members of the horse family.they are grass-eating animals in parts of africa,most famous for their distinctive striped coats.they have muscular bodies ,immense speed and strength.they can use powerful jaws and heavy hooves to attack their enemies when threatened.they also have unusually large ears which give these animals a very good sense of hearing .

篇五：大熊猫

panda is one of the scarcest animals. people in the world like it very much. there used to be many pandas in china long ago. as the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less. but at present, the number of pandas is increasing year by year. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.

nowadays, the biggest nature park for panda in china is in sichuan. there is a research centre for nature and wild life there. scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

篇六：大象

Elephant is the largest animal on land today. It weights some ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born. When it is 12 years old, it studs over three meters and does not grow any more. Elephant is usually grey in color, having a long trunk with large ivory tusks protruding from each side of its mouth. Usually moving in groups and caring for each other, Elephant is know to be a very and gentle creamre. For many years people have used the strength of these poweful animals to move trees and heavy logs. Elephant has been and is a vital tool for people to do many things that would normally be imposs-ible. Elephant is and will continue to be one of the greatest creatures man has ever come into contact with. Its size. beauty, and power willforever be useful to man.

My favourate animal is tiger,because tiger is very strong and powerful,it is the king of the forest.Tiger looks handsome as well, the skin has two corlors:yellow and black,and they are both my favourate colors.

I like tiger,and the year 201X is just the Chinese tiger year.I hope all the people will keep healthy,just like tiger.

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People usually

decorate the doors and windows with red papercuts. becouse red means good luck.

People usually clean house too. becouse they want to sweep away bad luck.

Children can get some new clothes or presents from their parents and

grandparents. On New Years Eve,family always have a big dinner. Everybody are

watch TV and talk. In the midnight,there usually fairworks. On New Years

Day,people usually put on their new clothes and visit their femily and friends.

They usually say:"Happy New Years Day. " The Spring Festival finishes at the

Lantern Festival after two weeks. People usually eat a kind of rice dumpling

called yuanxiao. It can take people good luck all the year round.

I have a good friend, we met each other when I was five years old. She is

my neighbor and the first time I saw her, she smiled at me. It was her smile

that made me feel she was a nice person to get along with. Indeed, she was a

reliable friend. When I was in trouble, she would be the first person to give me

a hand. Once I lost my key, when she heard, she tried hard to help me remember

where I lost it. I am so lucky to have her as my friend. It is hard to meet

someone who can make you feel safe and she is the one. She is the angel in my

life.

My mother was my first teacher. All the memories of my childhood are in one way or another connected with mother. I can still remember clearly the days when she told me stories, played games with me and taught me simple maths.

Mother has some good qualities. As a primary school teacher, she is kind to all her students. And she love her work.I have seen her working at her desk late at night when I wake up many times. She is a responsible teacher. As her daughter I also learn a lot from her. She is indeed a good mother.

I love my mother. And I want to be a person like my mother.

我的妈妈是我的第一位老师。我童年所有的记忆都或多或少跟我的妈妈有联系。我仍然还记得她给我讲故事，跟我做游戏,教我做简单的数学题的那些日子。

妈妈有许多优秀的品质，作为一名小学教师，妈妈对所有的学生都非常好的，她热爱本职工作。有好多次，当我深夜睡觉几次醒来，还见她在书桌旁工作，她是一个负责任的老师。作为她的女儿，我从她身上也学到了许多。实际上，她也是一位称职的母亲。

我爱我的妈妈，我希望自己也能成为一个像她那样的人。

It was raining when Tom was on his way home. He opened his umbrella and

walked faster. Suddenly he saw an old woman staggering forward with a stick in

her hand. She hadnt got an umbrella with her and was wet all over. Tom went up

to her and tried to share his umbrella with her. But the old woman was tall and

he was too short to hold it high enough. Then he saw the old womans stick and a

good idea came to him. He tried hard to tie the stick to the handle of the

umbrella. Then the umbrella was long enough for both of them. The old woman

thanked him again and again. Then they went on walking home.

Today, as the development of technology, people can change their faces by doing plastic surgery, because of the commercial ads, people are highly effected by the exaggerated facts that they can be the shining stars. So people pay special attention on the outlooks, they want to look perfect, as far as I am concerned, the true beauty is nothing with perfect looking, only the inner beauty makes you shining. In the fairly tale of Cinderella, the prince chooses the poor girl instead of the beautiful girls, because he admires Cinderella’s inner beauty, though she is nobody. Though it is just a story, it tells people that inner beauty makes one outstanding. People can make their faces perfect, but there is no way to fulfill their inner beauty by technology. Inner beauty is the most precious thing, beautiful outlook will fade away with the time, but inner beauty won’t, it only getting valuable.

Go down the hillside and see a piece of green sugar cane forest. The tall and tall sugar cane stood there straight, as if waiting for the soldiers to review, great and mighty! That kind of like a spear-like leaves, hand in hand, shoulder and shoulder, honey honey layers. The breeze passing, dancing, rustling.

Bypassing the sugar cane forest, presented in front of me is the vast expanse of rice fields. Rice ripe, heavy rice paddle bent rice Wo waist, a burst of autumn wind scouring, rice waves laughing, rolling, a layer of driving a layer of Yong Xiang far away. Farmer uncle standing on the edge of the river, see this grain full of rice, my heart is how sweet it!

Through the paddy fields, I strolled through the field path. Look, the sorghum red face, corn and yellow and large, sweet potato seedlings grow very lush, after the land covered with fields. Fan big taro leaves, with the autumn wind swinging west pendulum.

Suddenly, a burst of fragrant nostrils. I look forward, the original is a large orchard. Red persimmon like a small lantern like hanging in the branches, very bright. Orange tree more lively, and large and small orange red Yan Yan, yellow 嶝 嶝, and more bending the branches. A sentence, like a bell, as if the jingle is ringing.

Ah, autumn poetic, colorful autumn, it makes people beaming, it is people feast for the eyes.

It is my honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself. Dear Sir:

My name is yangyan, I major in Clinical pharmacy and I will graduate in July this year.

Generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in. i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.

During the past few years, I have learned systematically the theory of profession and got the basic manipulative skills about Pharmacy experiment . I have alreadypassed CET-6 in english and CCT-2 (=the second level) on computer . Also I have won several honors . In the hospital, through the year of internship , I learned a lot of knowledge in clinical practice. It may be helpful to my future study .

Thank you .

[医生求职英语自我介绍

Time like running water, quietly walked around us. Yes, time flies like an arrow, the sun is like a boat, glance left and right of the summer vacation has finally arrived, I like a caged bird fly freely outside. We is the master of the summer vacation in this summer vacation, we can relax.

But as for me, we cant get nothing in this summer vacation, every day to travel. Our parents will make sure that our classes, on this day that, mom and dad to take us in the scorching sun of summer. Of course we cant live up to the expectations of my parents and teachers, make this summer have a full and happy. Give yourself "come on" in the summer vacation.

The beginning of the summer vacation, I booked a summer vacation plan: every morning at 7 a.m. start, every day for three days in the summer vacation homework assignments, and then review the phonetic symbol, listening to the phonetic symbol, the phonetic symbol, and then write an English composition, finally back idioms, idioms. But also want to review what we have learnt before, as the saying goes: consider ".

Lets have a good this summer, full, happy.

时光像流水一样，在我们身边悄然走过。是的，光阴似箭，日月如梭，左顾右盼的暑假终于到了，我像关在笼子里的鸟在外面自由自在地飞翔。在这个暑假里我们是暑假的主人，我们可以放松自己。

而我呢，我们不可能在这个暑假里一无所获，每天游山玩水。我们的家长保证会让我们上补习班，每天上这上那，爸爸妈妈在这骄阳似火的夏天送我们。当然我们不能辜负老师和爸爸妈妈的期望，让这个暑假过得又充实又愉快。在暑假里给自己“加油”。

暑假的一开始，我就订了暑假计划：每天早上7点30分开始做，每天做三天《暑假作业本》里的作业，接着复习音标，听音标，默音标，再写一篇英语作文，最后背成语，默成语。不过也要复习复习以前学过的内容，俗话说的好：温故而知新”嘛。

让我们这个暑假过得美好,充实，愉快吧。

Hello, everyone! My name is and my English name is . I’m 15 years old. I’m a student in a very beautiful school called Liangbing Middle School and I am in Class 1 Grade 7. My hometown Liangbing is also a beautiful town.

I’m very happy and I like to make friends with others. I also like singing but traveling is my favorite, I have been to many interesting places in China but I haven’t been to other countries. What a pity!

At school, I study Chinese,math, English, history, politics and so on. I like all of them. I often help my teacher take care of my class and I think I am a good helper. I live with my parents and we go home on time every day.

When I am at home, I often help my mother do some housework and my mother said I am a good helper, too. My mother is a barber.She cuts hair very well.She is kind.Many people like her. she often teaches me the way of learning well, if you want to learn English well, here is some of my advice. At first , you must read many articles and know many words, if you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary, you should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. If you keep working hard, you will be successful. Then, you ought to speak English as much as possible. Remember an old saying, Nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it. That’s all, thank you.

Hello！大家好，我叫王晓，现在在高密市开发区埠口中学初二学习。

我有一张圆圆的脸，一双乌黑的眼睛，短头发。我今年12岁了，不小了吧？却总也脱不掉那满脸的稚气。

我的爱好就是爱看书。说起看书，我还有一段小故事呢！那天，我看见我的一个朋友买了一本《苦儿流浪记》，这本书我已经向往了许久，可是爸爸始终没有答应我的要求。我的自尊心很强，从小到大几乎没有央求过别人，这次，我硬着头皮，只好向他去借。谁知，他说可以是可以，可得拿动物图书跟与交换，我只好把书给他，向他要了那本《苦儿流浪记》。我的缺点就是爱掉“金豆豆”。咳，你可别笑，这也是我的爱好哩！养的宠物死了，哭！受朋友欺负，哭！考试不好，哭！看书看到感人处，鼻子一酸，又落下两排“大珍珠”。不过，我丝毫不觉得难为情，古人云：“当笑则笑，当哭则哭，无须掩饰。”

要说我不爱的，就数运动了。体育成绩自然不好了。三年级时，垒球扔个四五米顶天了，成绩还没过70分。不过，这个缺点，以后我要改。

我这个人，不仅爱哭爱笑，爱读书爱剪纸，还爱交朋友。你愿意和我交个朋友吗？

My name is Fang Yu, 11 years old this year, grade five.

I have long hair, thin eyebrows below the mosaic of a pair of glossy black eyes, slender figure. My hobbies are playing guzheng and painting. But my biggest hobby is reading and playing chess. Let me first talk about the book bar.

Books are an essential part of my life. I love reading, and sometimes Im crazy about it. Mom said I was a little bookworm. Once, I was reading a book, watching it, my mother asked me to go downstairs to buy sugar. I was seeing a joke and laughing. I later learned that my mother asked me to go downstairs to buy things, and I hurried to buy them. I bought a book again. Mother asked: How did you buy salt? I was so careless!

The next thing is to say chess. When I feel bored, I play chess with my brother. If a tie, I will come here again. If I win, I jump three feet high. If I lose, Ill go to the heart of my happy pet guzheng.

I should say my happy pet, I learned the guzheng for two and a half years, the play is good, the competition still won the two prize! Envy? Painting does not say.

Look at my self - introduction. Do you want to be a friend with me?

我叫方雨，今年11岁，上五年级。

我有长长的头发，细细的眉毛下面镶嵌着一双乌亮的眼睛，苗条的身材。我的爱好有弹古筝、画画。不过我最大的爱好是看书、下象棋。我先说说书吧。

书是我生活中必不可少的一部分。我爱看书，有时看的都着了迷。妈妈说我是个小书迷。有一次，我正在看书，看的津津有味，妈妈叫我下楼买糖，我正看到一段笑话，哈哈大笑。后来才知道妈妈叫我下楼买东西，我连忙去买。买回来我又去看书。妈妈问: 怎么买的是盐? 我真粗心呀!

下面该说象棋了，当我觉得无聊时，就和弟弟下棋。如果打成平局，我还要再来一次。要是我赢了，我一蹦三尺高。要是我输了，我就找我的快乐宠物古筝谈(弹)心去了。

该说我的快乐宠物了，我学古筝两年半，弹的还不错，比赛中还得了二等奖呢!羡慕吗?画画就不说了。

看了我的自我介绍，你想和我成为朋友吗?

Good morning everyone!Im Nickle. Im 24. I graduated from Hunan Normal University on XX Campus. My major is English Education. After graduation, I have worked for one year in Li Yang Kids English. My students are between 5 and 12 years old.Im outgoing and open-minded. In my spare time, I have broad interests. Such as reading, surfing the internet, listening to music and even chatting with foreign friends online if possible. I like children very much. I think children are active, innocent and pure. With them, I feel very relaxed, pleasant and younger. Therefore, I learned a lot from my one year working experience.Teaching children English is very interesting but it is also challenging. Because children are always active, even sometimes very naughty. So teachers need a lot of patience to deal with children. The most important that I have learned from my one year teaching experience is that a teacher should have the mind that always wants to go on learning. Teaching is a job at which one will never be perfect. If I have the chance, I will try my best to be a good primary English teacher.

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对英语试卷的评价与建议

篇一:介绍自己情况英语作文

每一次考完试之后，仅仅由别人的评价来判定自己是不全面的，当自己也沉淀下来，窥探自己的内心，写下自己的自我评价，这样才可以不断进步。但是自我评价要怎么写呢?下面是小编为大家带来的对英语试卷的评价与建议，相信对你会有帮助的。

对试卷的评价与建议篇一

一、 试卷基本结构分析

安徽卷英语试卷卷面满分150分，共86道题目。全卷由选择题和非选择题组成，第Ⅰ卷选择题包括听力、英语知识运用和阅读理解三个部分;第Ⅱ卷为第四部分写作，分为第一节任务型阅读和第二节书面表达。具体情况分布如下表：

二、总体评价

本套试卷是严格按照XXXX年安徽省高考英语《考试说明》,结合新课标《考试大纲》精心命制的，难度适中。整套试卷立足教材,突出语篇,强调应用,注重交际,语言考查的灵活性更强,

完全符合安徽高考英语试题的命题原则。其特点有下列几个方面:语言注重时代性及隐含的情感态度和文化意识,关注社会热点,语言考查的灵活性增加。

三、具体分析

第一部分 听力

.听力注重以考生熟悉的话题考查考生听英语的能力,从今年的听力试题可以看出,直接获取信息的试题有所减少,推断题有所增多。选用的材料特别注重语言的真实性和交际性,对话的内容涉及面较广,口语化程度较高。

第二部分：英语知识运用

(I)单项填空

单项填空题在保证知识覆盖面的基础上,突出一贯倡导的语境化、交际化的特点,题干力求语言生动、地道,语境真实、新颖,所选考点都是《考试说明》中所列的语法知识和要求掌握的词汇。该部分涉及动词时态和语态、固定搭配考查的有24、26、28题，33题考查倍数表达法，25、35题考查交际用语。同时兼顾对代词、形容词短语等项目的考查。整体考查全面,要求考生掌握好基础知识。

XXX年安徽卷单项填空试题考查项目数据统计：

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出，2013年高考在单项填空部分考查了考试大纲所要求的基本考点，考查的项目多达13项。主要考查了动词的时态与语态、非谓语动词以及交际用语。但去掉了对冠词、主谓一致和其它特殊句式的考查。各题题干简洁，却能够给考生创设一个个较为完整的语言情景，这有利于考查学生在具体语境下对所学过语言知识的掌握情况。

(II)完形填空

完形填空是一篇议论文，作者谈了如何学好一门语言，难度属于中等。综合考查考生在语篇中对词汇的掌握和运用能力,以及对篇章逻辑的理解和把握能力。从考点上看，主要考查实词，兼顾虚词。请看下表。

2010-2013年安徽省高考英语完形填空考点分布：

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出，高考完形填空题重点考查名词、形容词、和动词等实词。这就要求考生在了解语篇的基础上，加强语义、语境的深层次理解，同时还应具备一定的逻辑思维能力。所以在平时的学习中一定要注意高频词汇的积累，对于这些常考词的词性、词义与用法要准确无误的把握。

第三部分：阅读理解

根据考试说明，阅读理解主要考查学生六个方面的能力，即理解事实细节、理解主旨要义、推理判断、猜测词义、理解文章的基本结构、理解作者的意图，观点和态度。下面是近四年的阅读理解题的考点分布表。

XX安徽省高考英语阅读理解相关考点统计表：

从上表可以看出，2013年试卷阅读理解选材广泛。文章涉及健康习惯调查、如何确保有足够的生活用水慈善基金会、网络的发展让人们忽视了现实中交往、探戈舞的介绍等话题, 题型设计多样 ,细节理解题、推理判断题考查较多,兼顾对主旨大意、句意推测题的考查,试题整体难度适中。

第四部分：写作

该部分共分两节，第一节为任务型读写，考查考生对书面语言的监察能力;第二节为书面表达题，考查考生根据所提供的话题和特定的要求进行书面表达的能力。

(I)任务型读写

任务型读写题与2012年相比,难度相当,内容是关于幸福，学生读起来较为轻松，题目设置有梯度，答题要求简练和规范。涉及词语释义、同意替换、归纳演绎、细节理解等。 近几年安徽卷任务型读写所选文章以说明文为主，内容贴近现代社会生活。2013年此题的难度与往年持平。这就要求考生在阅读理解的基础上，对文中所提供的信息的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括，并根据表格的形式，把加工后的信息准确、有序地完成与短文有关的表格，这一题型共10题，每个空格只能填一个词。其特点是任务型阅读属于综合能力考查题，考查的能力有：(1)捕捉信息能力，属基础题，快速获取信息的能力;在这十个空中，捕捉信息题要占一半。(2)组织信息能力，属活用题，考查学生组织信息和表叙信息以及对文中的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括的能力。(3)概括信息能力，属概括题，要求学生在获取相关信息后，根据表格相关要求，对所获取的信息进行二次加工，这主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。

(II)书面表达

XX年安徽省高考英语书面表达题统计表：

书面表达依旧属于话题作文，关于文明校园征稿，难度不大。命题贴近考生生活,符合考生的认知水平,能够让不同层次的考生都能不同程度地发挥自己的英语水平,体现考试的公平性。

总之,整套试卷命题科学,充分体现安徽新课标高考的精神。紧扣时代热点,整套试题渗透着对考生人文素养的培养,让考生在答题的同时受到思想感情、文化意识、价值观等方面的启发和教育。

对试卷的评价与建议篇二

期中考试已经结束了，这次考试是对于不少刚刚接触英语的初一新生而言是一次重要的考试，是全面衡量学生这段时间学习情况的一次考试。下面我主要从以下几个方面来分析：

一、考试质量分析

1.试题方面

就整个试题而言，考点分布均匀，覆盖面广，考题难度适中，大部分试题能够体现目前注重基础、体现能力的考试命题要求。

2.试卷方面

本次考试题型，分为听力部分、辨音、单项选择、阅读理解、完形填空，词汇运用，阅读表达，翻译句子和写作几个大部分，各部分难易程度不同。大部分题都比较基础，和平时的练习比较起来相对集中一些，更能反映出学生在这一阶段学习中的问题。

此次英语考试的听力部分，内容为与日常教学相关的材料，与所学教材难度相当，较为简单。朗读速度适中，对平日教学的听力训练有着良好的导向作用。但在第一节中还是有部分学生容易犯书写不规范的错误，也有些学生“g”、“j”不分，“r”、“l”混淆，因而造成较多失分。这学期对学生在听力方面的练习不是很多，除了在课堂上少量练习外，平时课下学生几乎得不到练习。

单项选择，突出了课本和平常练习中较基础的知识，学生训练较多，此部分得分较好。

完形填空，对于我校大部分基础较薄弱学生而言觉得难度较大，因选项具有大的灵活性，而学生在平时对单词的记忆和对句子的积累还不够牢，而且也没有掌握好做题技巧，没有联系上下文推测出正确答案，以至于此部分得分较低。

翻译句子，由于平时练习较多，且反复强调大小写及单词、字母的正确书写，因此这部分得分比预计要好。阅读表达学生在此题得分较少，不是多了这个就是漏了那个，答的不好，得分非常低。

写作部分大部分学生书写较差，只有极少数学生在这部分未动笔。

二、分析原因

教师方面的原因：

这段时间由于课时多，时间紧，因此对学生部分知识掌握情况的落实不够，这也是这次考试成绩不高的原因之一。从这次考试中应该吸取这样的教训。在以后的英语教学中，加大管理力度，提高学生在课堂上的学习效率。

学生方面的原因：

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实，且大部分学生毫无学习习惯而言，记忆知识极难，遗忘知识快，过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高，不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强，完形填空、阅读理解失分较多，不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。很容易漏掉be动词。

三、今后采取的措施

抓好单词、词组过关，狠抓知识落实。在进行单词和词组教学时，首先让学生读准音，然后反复读单词和词组，并找出同义词、反义词、类似用法的词一起记。在进行句型时，以小组合作等方式举一反三，反复练习课堂上学习的句型。平时督促学生多听录音磁带，一星期集中训练两次听力，在培养学生的听力技巧和听力能力上多下功夫，提高他们的听力能力和听力技巧。

在阅读教学中，设计一些问题，通过学生自读文章找出其答案，在整体上感知文章内容。而且讲解文章时，注意生词在句中的运用、注意文章里出现的词组，注意对关键句子的理解。针对学生阅读能力差的问题，将通过大量阅读来培养学生的语感以及通过上下文捕捉信息的能力，还要注意文化背景知识的学习，拓宽学生的知识，开阔学生的视野。

不会用英文写作文是绝大多数学生的通病。作文是由句子构成，一个正确的句子需要用正确的句型、正确的词组，正确的时态构成。训练学生的答题技巧和书写方面的好习惯。写好作文，没有诀窍，只有多写多练。

在今后的教学中，我们将继续抓好双基知识的训练，打牢基本功;引导学生梳理知识，掌握语法规则，逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力;培养学生上课时的听课习惯，要求学生全神贯注，要和老师同步思考出现的问题;讲课时，尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言，坚持用英语教学，让学生用英语来想英语;在平时要通过阅读，培养学生阅读多种文体的能力，如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性，同时，启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想，逐步培养良好的英语语感。在培优辅差上下功夫，大面积提高学生的优秀率和合格率。

对试卷的评价与建议篇三

英语测试对于提高教学质量起着有效的促进作用。通过测试一方面教师可以取得教学工作的信息反馈，另一方面，可以调动学生的学习积极性，使学生在今后的测试中不断发扬成绩，克服缺点，取得最佳效果。测试的重要性是显而易见的，对试卷的评讲就显得尤为重要。高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

高质量的试卷评讲会让师生收益非浅。有效的评讲，能让老师更成功地总结教学经验，分析学生学习情况以改进教学，提高教学效率和教学效果。有效的评讲，能让学生找到自己的不足和改进学习的方法。

有效地评讲英语试卷应该坚持三个原则：

一、评讲的内容和细节必须由学生实情决定。学生才是课堂的主体，教师只是引导者。学生在测试中暴露了他们自己在英语各方面存在的问题或漏洞，学生有他们自己的难点和疑惑。教师具体该讲什么和怎样讲必须根据学生的情况和特点来进行。对于学生普遍存在的难点，应该仔细分析，详细评讲。对于个别学生存在的难题，可以个别辅导，个别评讲。

二、评讲必须结合试卷特点。尽管都是英语测试，但不同阶段，不同时间的测试试卷是有其自身的特点的。教师应该在认真分析和研究试卷的基础上评讲试卷，切不可千篇一律的对待各种英语试卷。试卷的评讲步骤和时间长度都要根据试题的难度来定，当然必须结合学生实际。对于不同类别的试卷应该有不同的评讲方式，对于试卷中的不同题型也应该用不同的方法。

三、评讲时必须给予学生必要的反馈和消化的时间。英语课堂的师生互动性很强，即使是评讲试卷也应如此。评讲时切不可让老师一个人唱独角戏，其间必须穿插必要的互动和反馈。尤其在评讲典型错题时，有必要先让学生自述答题思路，然后由老师根据学生的错误根源进行讲解，最后让学生再读题目和正确的解答依据。学生始终是受教育的主体，教师切勿包办一切。

简而言之，评讲试卷必须结合试卷的特点和学生的实际情况，切不可草率行事。 怎样才能有效的评讲英语试卷呢?

第一、认真了解和初步分析试卷。在评讲前，教师有必要用自己教给学生的方法亲自把试卷做一遍，以便确定试题的检测范围和感受试题的难度。在做题的过程中可以预测学生的难点，也可以根据学生所学内容，看看哪些题目超出了学生的学习范围。当然，也可以检阅试卷的不足，以便今后选择并合理利用英语试卷。

第二、认真统计学生成绩。在批阅完学生试卷后，认真统计学生的成绩是很有必要的。统计的项目主要有：求出平均值和求出差距。在统计出平均成绩后，可以参照其他班的情况分析，确定该班的成绩位置。平均分较低，就说明该班的成绩较差。如果平均分较高，那该班的整体情况就较好。另外，还要排列出全班考生中的最高分和最低分，找出二者之间的差距。差距越大，两级分化就越严重，教学的难度就越大。在排列学生成绩时，最好由高分到低分排列，找出中间位置考生的分数，并把该成绩列为全班成绩的中位数。在评讲试题时，要特别注意中位段的学生的反映和效果。

第三、根据学生的成绩和分析情况，再次分析试卷，并做好学生的错误统计。在分析学生成绩后，及时的看学生答题的错误率，从中找出学生的典型错题。错误率较高的题目，就是要评讲的重点部位。这部分题目，既是学生应该关注的，也是教师应该详细评讲的。在统计错误率后，教师应该耐心的查阅典型错题，分析学生答错的原因，反思自己教学上的不足。对于，教师很难作分析的题目，要及时与学生进行交流，然后再确定学生做错的根源。 第四、认真耐心的评讲试卷。在试卷发给学生之后，教师可以安排学生自主讨论和简单分析自己的试卷。教师最好要提示学生如何讨论和分析。例如，要求学生发现自己的错题，并尽力分析出错题的知识类别：是宾语从句还是动词不定式，还是动名词或是其他的。

在学生分析错误类别后，可让学生互相讨论解答的方法或依据等，让学生达到初步了解解答出错的根源，并试着改正自己的错误。对于学生猜对的题目，也要要求学生诚实地标出来，一并作为错题对待，设法杜绝学生答题的侥幸心理。在学生讨论分析试卷后，教师就可以开始评讲试卷了。对于学生错误率较高的试题，教师必须详细的评讲。评讲时不光要书写答题的根据，还要多举相关的例子，最终要让学生能正确解答这些题和相似的试题。对于错误率较低的试题，蜻蜓点水般的评讲就可以了。当然，这部分错题的分析可以让成绩优秀的学生来完成。既可以从分发挥优生的能力，又能给其他学生提供鲜活的榜样。最后，就要解答学生的疑问了。

在评讲试题时，教师最好不要全部评讲，而是留一些小的疑问给学生。这样便于引导学生学会提问和思考。在教师评讲了主要错题之后，可以让学生之间互相讨论，让他们尝试相互探讨相互学习。在讨论和研究的过程中，激发学生学习的激情，启发他们思考和解决问题。在学生提出疑问后及时有针对性地给予解答，并随时肯定学生的质疑能力和探讨精神。

第五、师生认真翔实地做好总结。在师生互动地评讲完试卷后，教师和学生都有必要进行各自的总结。学生需要总结初自己在知识和能力上的薄弱环节，并写好错题集。在学生收集错题时，教师应要求他们写明解题的正确依据。英语教师也有自己的总结。要总结学生的薄弱环节，要总结自己评讲时出现的不足(范围过大，语言不清楚，讲解欠通俗等)。教师也要收集学生的典型错题。以便今后检测时插入以往的错题，让学生巩固和弥补以前的不足。

总而言之，坚持实事求是的原则，坚持师生互动的方式，让英语试卷的评讲体现教师、学生、试题和环境之间的相互作用的关系，让英语试卷的评讲更有效，才能真正的体现英语检测对学生的评价和督促作用，才能真正地增强英语教学的实际效果。

高考英语满分作文-我的秘密

篇二:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文:我的秘密

This evening there was a broadcast of an exciting football match on TV. It was between Chinese team and the team of the United Arab Emirates. I am a loyal football fan and I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I found a little boy crying. He lost his way. Considering his parents must be very worried, I

immediately decided to send him home. Seeing their son back, the boys parents showed their gratitude. They also invited me to stay for supper. But thinking of the football match, I refused them politely. When I got home, it was very late. Therefore, I missed the match,However, I felt very happy because I helped other people. Although my mother asked why ! came back so late, I said nothing.Perhaps this will become my own secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。我是一个忠实的足球迷，而且我盼望这场比赛很长时间了，所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我发现一个小男孩在哭。他迷路了。考虑到他的父母一定很担心，我立刻决定送他回家。看到他们的儿子回来，小孩妁父母感激之情溢于言表。他们留我吃晚饭，但想着足球比赛我婉言拒绝了。 我到家时已经很晚了，因此我错过了比赛。然而我很高兴因为我帮助了他人。

尽管妈妈问我为什么这么晚回来，我什么也没说。或许这将成为我自己的小秘密。

Oct. 10 Saturday Fine

There was an exciting football match on TV this evening. It was played between China and the United Arab Emirates. As a loyal football fan, I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I saw a little boy crying. He told me that he lost his way. Maybe his parents were worrying about him. Thinking of this, I decided to send him home. It was a long way. It took us much time to reach his home.Seeing their son, the boys parents were very grateful and asked me to stay for supper. I refused politely because I still wanted to watch the match.

But when I arrived home, it was so late that the match had been over.What a pity! However, I was very happy all the same because I helped others. I told nobody about it. It was just my secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。作为一个忠实的足球迷，我已盼望这场比赛很长时间了，所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我看见一个小男孩在哭。他告诉我他迷路了。可能他父母正担心他呢p想到这，我决定送他回家。那是一段很长的路。到他家花了很长时间。看到他们的儿子，小孩的父母非常感激并留我吃晚饭。我婉言拒绝了，因为我依旧想看比赛。

但是我到家太晚了，比赛已经结束了。真遗憾!然而我仍然很高兴因为我帮助了他人。我没有将这件事告诉其他人，这只是我的秘密。

高考英语作文优秀范文分类(全)

篇三:介绍自己情况英语作文

经典范文

1、表达观点类

在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语

优点：有助于提高听说能力等

缺憾：不易听懂等

结论：??

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用

优点：易于理解等

缺憾：英语氛围不浓等

结论：??

注意：1.词数 100~120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)。

2.参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围

I prefer my English classes to be taught in...

满分文(一)

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.

名师点评：

审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。

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背诵内容：

好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with，对某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.气氛高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.

我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。

2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

满分文(二)

I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

名师点评：

本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。

应背好词：1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步

应背好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)

因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

练习篇目：

请根据下列内容，在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

2、学生会将于5月6日中午12：30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。

3、希望全校同学从我做起，节约水资源。 2

参考词汇：干旱drought 注意：词数不少于60。

From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places we hope that all of us can realize the

2、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。（2009·天津）

1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意： 1. 词数：不少于100词；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。

范文背诵：

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.

There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.

Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can

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perform at your best!

Thank you!

句型背诵

①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.

②I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...

③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

练习篇目：

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

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Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。

（3）利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

注意：1．词数：150左右 2．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。 参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization（文明）. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the

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高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

篇四:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

July 17th Fine

This morning, on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A little girl was calling for help in the river nearby. I immediately got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. At last the girl was saved, After sending the girl back home, I hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

However, in the afternoon the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. Soon the story spread all over the school. TherefOre, the teacher knew why I was late this morning and he apologized to me. The headmaster also praised me and called on all the students to learn from me.

7月17日 晴

今天早晨，在上学的路上，我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩正在附近的河里喊救命。我立即跳下车，脱掉衣服，跳到河里。女孩终于得救了。把小女孩送回家后，我急忙赶到学校，但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因，老师批评了我。

然而下午小女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿，很快我的事迹传遍了整个校园。由此老师知道了我今早迟到的原因，他向我道歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。

July 17th Fine

Today I did a thing that was well worth doing although I was misunderstood at the beginning.

This morning on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A girl fell into the river! I got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. After a few minutes struggle, I finally saved the girl, I informed the girls parents and then hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

In the afternoon, the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. After the teacher learned the whole thing,he made an apology to me. And the headmaster praised me and also called on all the students to learn from me. I felt very proud.

7月17日 晴

今天我做了一件非常值得做的事情，尽管开始我被误会了。

今天早晨，在上学的路上，我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩落水了!我立即跳下车，脱掉衣服，跳到河里。几分钟的努力后我终于救了小女孩。我通知了小女孩的父母然后就急忙赶到学校，但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因，老师批评了我。

下午女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿。老师知道了整件事后向我道了歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。我感到非常自豪。