思考食品安全的高考英语作文（通用20篇）

Immoral Behavior in Public

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。

2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。

3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。

【范文】

To witness immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.

只要访问北京的地铁，就可以目睹公众场所的不道德行为。我还记得我第一次在北京做地铁。那是一个清晨。我急于去学校。当我努力买票的时候，我发现很多人在前面等着，但是没有一个人在排队。

Immoral behaviors in public initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.

公众场所的不道德行为引发了一系列问题。其中最严重的是，它可能会对我们的社会责任感产生负面影响。我们将继续忽视其他人的权利和感情，反过来，我们也有一天会不被尊重的。

The reform of this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical implementation and cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.

改变这一现象肯定是不容易的。从实际的执行和成本效益上看，我认为社会应该在各方面明确指出谁不尊重共同利益将受到严厉的惩罚。应该尽快制定这严厉的政策来纠正这一现象。

We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone shares the huge responsibility of demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.

我们都希望“天下无贼”。所有人都该承担巨大的社会责任在适当的时候展示他或她的正义感。个人的责任是构建社会主义和谐社会的关键。

[公共场合不道德的行为高考英语作文

假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：

1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

好词

1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育

好句

I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。

Obviously， it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?

更多句型：

Accordingly， I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently， to solve the problem， some measures should be taken.

君以民为天，民以食为天，食以安为先近几年，跟随着祖国腾飞的步伐，经济蒸蒸日上，生活水平日益提高，人们就是想吃就吃，但自从一庄庄触目惊心的食品案接连爆发，人们对食品安全的问题越来越关注了，转变成了想吃而又不敢吃的问题了。

有幅对联说得很对：人品、食品、品品相照；苍生、民生、生生相联，生命只有一次，健康是人生最重要的财富，没了它就如同行尸走肉，但是仍旧有一些人为了满足自己的食欲，去一些没有卫生许可证的小摊上买东西吃，可是他们在品尝的同时，也许这些美味已经严重地威胁到了自己的健康。

现在每天放学后，学校附近的小摊上，同学们总是蜂拥而至。摊主嘹亮的吆喝声吸引了一批又一批的学生，里三层，外三层。看到同学们吃得这么津津有味，我也情不自禁地走上去凑热闹。老板，我要……还没等把我把话说完话，他就说：你等一等！说着，她用抹布随手一抹，便摆弄一些油炸食品。不经意中，我看到：油腻的抹布上停着苍蝇，在同学们手上的除了油炸食品就是三无食品，所谓三无食品，也就是无生产场家，无生产日期，无保质期的食品。每每看到这个场景，我都想冲上去大声说：你们别吃了……，可是看着同学们吃得津津有味，我怯步了。

我看过一部名为《给我最大号》的记录片，在这部记录片中，年轻的美国导演摩根？斯普尔洛克用自己的身体做了一个实验：连续30天，他三餐只吃麦当劳的食物，只喝麦当劳的饮料。结果，在拍记录片之前，身高1米9的斯普尔洛克身体健康，体重不到84公斤。在试验了两个星期之后，医生说他的肝受到严重损伤，应当停止试验，但他没有听从医生的劝告。三周左右，他的心脏开始异常，一个月后，他的血压大大提升，体重也增加了11公斤。中国营养学会理事李庆天指出，第一大杀手就是炸烤食品，炸薯条之类的油炸食品是导致心血管疾病的元凶。而烤鸡翅等烧烤类食品含大量的致癌物质，会加重肾脏、肝脏负担。有研究说，1个炸鸡腿等于60支香烟的毒性。高脂食品尤其会损害孩子正在发育的神经通道，可能对孩子的大脑和思维素质造成永久性的伤害。

我们是二十一世纪的雏鹰，是祖国的新新之火，我们的生命就像一朵含苞欲放的花儿，只有健康是我们生命唯一的选择，决不能让危害健康的食品在我们身边有一席之地！零食问题相当于冰山一角，可这一角不留意了也能撞沉铁达尼，我们在卫生监管部门的大力整治时，也要擦亮自己的眼睛，毕竟，我们管不了别人的良心，就只好先管住自己的嘴巴。

今天中午，我看了家里的《健康时报》，大为震惊：现在人们还能吃什么食品呀！几乎没有让人们放心的食品了。

自从三鹿奶粉中国免检产品中检测出了超标的三聚氰胺，每买回一种食品，我们全家都要议论一番：这种食品是否可以吃，安全不安全。

一天，妈妈买回一瓶“蒙牛大果粒酸奶”，我们就开始看这里面是否有很多添加剂。奶奶拿起放大镜，一字一顿地念道“柠檬黄、日落黄、卡拉胶、稳定剂、安赛蜜”她摇了摇头，皱起眉头：“以后要少喝加果粒的酸奶，最好喝原味的。”哇，蒙牛的酸奶里也加这加那，太不可思议了吧！

到了中午，我们每人吃了一根大油条。大家议论纷纷。爸爸边吃边看着油条说：“这油条真香！”妈妈则不以为然地说：“不知道卫生不卫生。”爷爷担心地说：“这油条炸得这样直挺，有可能是加洗衣裳粉的油条。”姨奶一拍桌子：“对！现在街上到处卖洗衣粉油条。可是”“这油条味道不错，不一定加了洗衣粉。”爸爸再次发表了自己的观点。我也加入了讨论的队伍：“还是小心谨慎一点好。油条是油炸食品，吃多了也不好。油条还是少吃吧！”

下午，我和堂妹、表妹在一起吃水果。堂妹咧着嘴说：“我这个苹果太难吃了，一股怪味。可能是没洗干净吧！”她洗完回来接着说：“或者是农药还残留在上面。”我也有些担心：“会不会为了让苹果保鲜，特地加了延长苹果保质期的药了呢？一定对人体有伤害！”

一天早上，爷爷吃了一盘豆芽菜。这豆芽也太特别了吧：生出的芽又粗又长，活像一群巨型蝌蚪。奶奶十分惊讶：“这豆芽如此之长，会不会加化学药水了呢？”爷爷肯定地说：“不会，不会！虽然不是自家生的豆芽，但是我跟卖菜的老板是熟人，他怎么会卖给我劣质豆芽？”“报纸上都登了，有的无良商家想多赚钱，把小豆芽都放进药水里泡，小豆芽才变成这个样子。”奶奶也不甘示弱，跟爷爷开起了“辩论会。”

我越来越糊涂了：现在的食品到底哪些安全，可以食用？希望食品经销商和食品制造商凭良心经销，生产让人们吃着健康、营养、安全、放心的食品。

[关于食品安全的800字优秀作文

Water

Water is very important for living things. Without water there can be no life on earth. All animals and plants need water. Man also needs water.

Water is found atmosteverywhere. Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.

As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container. When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.

Although about 70 percent of the earths surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water. So we should make good use of water on earth.

译文：

水对生物很重要，没有水，地球上就没有生命。所有的动植物都需要水。人类也需要水。

水几乎无处不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空气中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固态、液态和气态。当它是固态时，它可以像砖一样硬；当它是液态时，你可以将它从容器中倒出；当它是气态时，你看不见或感觉不到它。

虽然地球表面70％是水覆盖着，世界上仍有许多地方缺水。所以我们要好好利用地球上的水。

[高考英语满分作文： Water

随着我国的经济发展与社会进步，人民对环境与健康的关注程度也日益增强。近几年，许多食品安全卫生问题严重，抽查检测不合格，造成了广大群众人身安全的严重影响。为此，学校利用了健康教育活动，校园板报等宣传形式，对全校师生进行了食品安全教育，树立我们食品卫生安全的意识，增进自我保护的意识。

观看了学校有关于食品卫生的宣传活动后，我受益不浅，不公明白了“民以食为天，食以安为先”的道理，还体会到了食品安生的重要性。

的确，食品安全直接关系着群众的身体健康和生活质量。以前，学校周边有无数摊点，那诱人的“美食”发出阵阵香味，同学们抵挡不住零食的诱惑，你五角，我一元地买了许多零食，结果，买零食的同学都因为买了不卫生食品面拉肚子，有的甚至中毒导致住院。而那些快餐店更是毒辣，为了市场上的恶性竞争，放弃了追求质量的提高而开始降低成本，将一些农物残留物或生长激素类产品和一些加工过程中化学添加剂、防腐剂过分使用，使食品的不安全因素日趋多样化和复杂化，而大多数打工人员又为了省钱到一些不规范的快餐店吃饭，导致了多种疾病的产品

以上一切事例都足以证明食品安全的重要性，食品安全关系着经济的发展和社会的稳定，关系着全人类的健康问题，因而，我们要坚决打击制售各种危害人类的伪劣产品，建立起我国现阶段国情的食品安全卫生及食品企业市场准入法律体系，它将促进人类身心健康起着重要作用。

我在此呼吁大家：“食品安全要注意！”

面对中学生“出国热”，社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题，根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。

Advantages Disadvantages

1.良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。

2.拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。

3.传播各民族间的不同文化。 1.年纪小，缺乏生活经验，自理能力差。

1. 情感孤独，思乡。2. 生活学习费用高。

注意：1）第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。 2）词数100 左右。

3）参考词汇：媒介，中间人 mediator

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.________________________

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study. Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are many advantages in attending schools abroad. First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.

However, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick. Of course the costs are much.

[高考英语作文素材

俗话说的好“民以食为天”、“人是铁，饭是钢，一顿不吃饿得慌。”这两句话充分说明了食物对人们的重要性，因此对于食物的安全程度，我们不得不关心。但是随着我们生活水平的不断提高，对于食品的安全程度，似乎变得不再重要，一些黑心的厂商就是抓住了消费者的心理，才弄出了一系列的食品安全事件。

例如：2010年7月，三聚氰胺超标奶粉事件“卷土重来”，在青海省一家乳制品厂，检测出三聚氰胺超标达500余倍，而原料来自河北等地。2010年7月5日报道最近有调查发现，美国的麦乐鸡竟然含有橡胶化学成分“聚二甲基硅氧烷”。2008年10月19日，卫生部通报了暂停山西太行药业股份有限公司生产的茵栀黄注射液销售和使用。该药物引起陕西省延安市志丹县医院的4名新生儿产生不良反应，其中1名死亡。2010年3月19日，调查负责人武汉工业学院教授何东平召开新闻发布会，建议政府相关部门加紧规范废弃油脂收集工作，再次引起了人们对食品安全的担忧。据报道，目前我国每年返回餐桌的地沟油有200至300万吨。医学研究称地沟油中的黄曲霉素强烈致癌，毒过砒霜100倍。2008年8月，人造“新鲜红枣”流入乌鲁木齐市场。主要经过两道工序，铁锅里放进酱油，使青枣变成红色，并保持光泽。再次放进加入大量糖精钠和甜蜜素的水池中浸泡，使其口感泛甜。过量食用会造成血小板减少，酿成急性大出血等直接身体危害。

吃动物怕激素，吃植物怕毒素，喝饮料怕色素……什么到底才是纯天然无污染的绿色食品?吃什么才对我们的身体无害?我们真的应该好好地想一想。

看看上面这些事例，食品一个给我们消除饥饿的好东西，逐渐变成导致人们生癌、染上肠道寄生虫病、人体组织被大量破坏……的“毒药”，我在此呼吁大家：应该高度重视食品卫生，为自己的身体负起责任!

我建议：1、有关部门加强打击三无产品的力度，把个别厂家的三无产品进行销毁。

2、在购买食品时小心小心再小心，必须注意生产厂家，产品名称，检验合格证以及生产日期并保留购物小票。

3、社会各界大力宣传食品安全的重要性。

以上就是我对食品安全提出的建议，希望大家都能注意食品安全，吃上绿色健康无污染的食品。

有幅对联说得很对：“人品、食品、品品相照;苍生、民生、生生相联”，生命只有一次，健康是人生最重要的财富。

在人的生活当中，衣食住行，样样缺不得。特别是食品，它是与我们每个人紧密相连的，是我们每天的必需品。俗话说得好，民以食为天，人是铁，饭是钢，一顿不吃饿得慌。所以我们更该关注食品安全。

记得六年级的时候.老师给我们讲了一个真实的故事：一个16岁的学生，由于小时侯吃了太多了垃圾食品，已经身患绝症，现在他还十分的后悔。我们要记住这个悲惨的教训，看看这些厂家，都已“金钱第一”“利润最多”的道德观念做出发点，为了市场上的竞争，竟全然不顾消费者的健康。想想苏丹红，想想因便宜食物的诱惑的人在病床上如何的后悔。

现在改革开放好，人民富有了，跟着改革开放的步伐，家家都是独生子女，一个个受父母的宠爱惯了，一声：“妈妈，可以给点钱买东西么?”妈妈一句话也不说，掏出一张鲜红的百元大钞，“给，省着点花，不够妈在给。”就这么一句话。我们一把抓了过去，放学时，东荡荡，西游游，看到路东有一片烤羊肉串，苍蝇漫天飞舞，“老板，来10根羊肉串。”那老板笑呵呵的递上一把烧了又烧而且“香喷喷”羊肉串，那人手上拿了一大把羊肉串，另只手还拿着一根冰棍，兜里还放着一些糖果，真想用一首歌来唱唱：“左手一把羊肉串，右手一根冰淇淋，口袋里还放着一把糖果哦。”弄来弄去最后伤的还是你自己，拉肚子，发烧“哎哟，哎哟”的叫着，父母看了又着急，花了大笔的钱来治。你说这样合算么，买东西花钱，治病也花钱，食品安全要警钟长鸣，不容忽视。国家为了广大的中小学生能够放心的使用食品，增强全我们对食品安全的参与意识，普及食品安全知识，宣传《食品卫生法》、《产品质量法》、《标准化法》等法律法规能够深入人心、家喻户晓，营造食品放心消费环境。

我们是二十一世纪的雏鹰，是祖国未来的接班人，我们的生命就像一朵朵含苞欲放的花儿，只有健康才是我们生命唯一的选择，决不能让危害健康的食品在我们身边有一席之地!垃圾食品问题相当于冰山一角，可这一角不留意了也能撞沉铁达尼号，我们在卫生监管部门的大力整治时，也要擦亮自己的眼睛，毕竟，我们管不了别人的良心，只好先管住自己的嘴巴。

One possible version

There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I

noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a

discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his

office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon

afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to

park our bikes there.

食品安全关系到消费者的身体健康和生命安全，关系到社会经济的发展和稳定。为保障消费者健康权益，保证餐饮食品安全，本单位郑重承诺：

1、严格遵守《中华人民共和国食品安全法》、《中华人民共和国食品安全法实施条例》等法律法规的规定，承担餐饮食品安全“第一责任人”职责，落实餐饮服务安全各项管理制度。

2、保证依法取得《餐饮服务许可证》和从业人员健康合格证明等相关证照后从事餐饮服务活动，并按规定进行食品安全知识培训。

3、依法建立并落实食品(原料)进货查验记录制度，建立食品、食品原料、食品添加剂和食品相关产品的采购记录制度，认真查验供货者的许可证、食品合格证明文件、产品标识和食品及原料质量，如实记录食品的名称、规格、数量、生产批号、保质期、供货者名称及联系方式、进货日期等内容。严把进货关，保证本单位食品(原料)购进的可追溯性、真实性，以防范和控制食品安全风险。查验记录保存期限不少于二年。

本单位保证不采购使用未经动物卫生监督机构检疫或者检疫不合格的肉类及其制品;不采购使用病死、毒死或者死因不明的禽、畜、兽、水产动物肉类及其制品;保证向食品药品监督管理部门提供的肉类及其制品索证资料的真实性。

本单位保证不采购使用“地沟油”、“不合格一次性筷子”及其他不符合食品安全标准或者要求的食品、食品原料、添加剂及食品相关产品。

4、保证提供餐饮服务的场所环境、设备设施、布局流程及操作过程符合餐饮服务食品安全的标准和要求。不使用食品安全管理法律法规禁止使用的食品及原料。

5、保证规范食用油脂和添加剂管理使用，杜绝添加非食用物质，不超范围、不超剂量滥用食品添加剂。不使用非食品用具及容器、包装材料，不使用未经消毒合格的餐饮具、工具、容器。

6、建立本单位食品安全督查制度，规范经营行为，提高餐饮服务质量和自律意识，同时自觉接受食品安全监管部门和社会各界的监督，承担社会和法律责任。

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With the growing awareness of healthy eating， more and more people now are

paying more attention to the importance of healthy diet and an active life。 But

at the same time， a growing unrest over food safety in the China has caught

everyone’s concern。

When it es to the food safety incidents， especially 2008 Chinese milk

scandal， every consumer has much anger to pour upon them。 In September 2008， a

fresh outbreak of kidney disease occurred， due to baby formula contaminated by

melamine.Three babies died and over 6，000 were made sick by the tainted formula。

The supplier of the milk， Sanlu Group， is a name brand and is a major player in

the industry in China。 The pany is said to have known of the problem for months，

but claims the contaminant came from milk suppliers.

Who should be main responsible for these serious incidents like milk

scandal? On one hand， plex China’s food regulations should shoulder part

duties.We should realized its monitoring system can be unresponsive， and the

government departments that oversee and enforce policies have overlapping and

often ambiguous duties。 On the other， food producers and suppliers lack deserved

responsibility for consumers! What they cares is only their own interest and

profit maximization.

In my opinion ，everyone involved in it should set up a high responsibility

for others， law related should be passed and carried out.Only in this way can we

e by a healthy eating and a harmonious world.

下面是由语文迷网小编精心为大家整理的高考英语写作基本原则，希望对你有帮助。

一、 长 短 句原则

工作还得一张一弛呢，老让读者读长句，累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、 主 题 句原则

国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事!

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

三、 一 二 三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐，原因：俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐，原因：俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐，原因：俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐，原因：俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、 短语优先原则

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如：

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.

I want it.

可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.

这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、 多实少虚原则

原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比

我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：

走出房间，general的词是：Walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说：Slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说：Sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说：Dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说：Stagger out of the room

所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩!

六、 多变句式原则

1)加法(串联)

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：

I encore music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.

其它的短语可以用：

Besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)

批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.

The coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短语：

Despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短语：

Then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重)

有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：This is what I can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：

When to go, why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一举)

如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他;或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.

Mir liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.

其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.

We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、 挑战极限原则

既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀!

原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪!

曾经读过一本书，是关于美国人的消费，书上说：美国人都是在花未来的钱，而享受现在。我就有些迷惑不解了，既然美国人都是举债度日的，一旦出现了无赖的山姆小子不肯还钱怎么办？后来我又看了另外的一些书，这个谜团才解开。原来美国有个信用局，若是某君出现信用违规，即通知各大银行，封杀他所有的借款，此招是以使其无立身之地。据说，某些罪犯不怕违反法律，却独独不敢得罪信用局。

这让我想起了中国的诚信问题。本来，中国是个五千年的文明古国，诚信一向是中国人引以为傲的美德，人无信而不立、童叟无欺的故事熏陶了我们几千年。然而，近年来，信用违规的事情却不绝于耳。中国有个报社曾做过调查，信用危机位居fu败之后成为阻碍中国经济发展的第二大因素，信用危机导致企业生产经营成本增加15%。这不能不让人感到恐惧。试想，生活在一个无信用的社会中，你的眼睛还可以相信谁？衣食住行，你在消费之前必须确认：这些是否假货？商家是否在宰你？

无信用行为的蔓延，使企业之间心存猜疑，使电子商务难于全面运行，徒然增加本可避免的生产成本，从而导致竞争力下降。

要想解决这一问题，美国的信用局不失为一个好参考。其关键在于，建立一个信用惩罚机制，用信用机制和国家强制力双管齐下，对信用违规事件，用经济手段加以惩罚，用国家手段加以监督，来促使信用良性运行。信用问题，不能仅靠古代传统的德和礼来解决，必须用一个健全的机制加以完善，一旦某人出现信用违规，信用机制让他在社会上寸步难行，试想，这时谁还敢当不法奸商呢？

其实，信用，不仅牵涉到经济领域，实际上，它最终影响的，还是人心。试问：有谁愿意生活在一个毫无安全感、终日人心惶惶的国度。一个人的信用，反映的是他自身，而一个社会的信用，反映的却是民族的精神素质。一个守信用的民族，才能跻身于世界民族之林，一个守信用的国家，才能为国际所信赖。最后，我想起了一位哲人的话：要使一个民族所有人都有信用，那未免过于天真；而若连守信用的人都找不出，那又未免过于堕落。

[诚信的思考_高考优秀作文

Safety is very important. We often hear people say “safety first”. As a middle school student, we should learn to protect ourselves from every possible danger. Here are some things I do. I hope you can follow them.

On your way to school and home. You should obey the traffic rules. You should walk on the right side of the road. Don’t ride your bike too fast.

During school, you can’t fight with each other. Don’t play with fire. Don’t bring knife to school. Don’t go out of school without your teacher’s permission.

When you are at home, remember not to ask the door for strangers. Don’t give your home address, phone number or personal information to anybody else too casually.

食品安全征文俗话说得好“民以食为天”、“一顿不吃饿得慌”。吃饭，是我们生活中必不可少的一件事。而食品的安全、卫生，也直接影响到了我们的身体健康。在我们的生活中，也处处存在着食物中毒的现象，一些不法商贩，为了谋取暴利，在食物的生产过程中添加各种不利于身体健康的物质，比如说在烤鸡烤鸭当中添加“苏丹红”;在烧酒中添加工业酒精;使用“地沟油”烧制食品;给猪肉里面注水……不幸的是我也经历过一次食物中毒的现象。下面我就把这个故事说给大家听听吧!那是一个双休日的下午，在我学习回家的路上，因为肚子有点饿了，便在路边的小摊上买了一点油炸食品吃，在我吃的时候，我并没有注意到路边小摊上的食品有什么问题，还津津有味地吃着,觉得味道好极了。可是当我回到家中后，肚子便不争气地疼了起来，额头上还直冒汗，蹲在厕所里起不来，最后不得以去了医院挂盐水后才解决问题。后来据妈妈分析，肯定是那油炸食品的油不卫生。开始我还不相信，认为这么好吃的东西肯定不会有问题。可是妈妈是医生，使我又不得不相信妈妈的话，那就用事实来说话吧!过了几天，我带着丝丝的疑问又去了那家路边小摊一趟，这次可不是去买那些油炸食品吃了，因为我必须“吃一堑，长一智”，可不能再犯同样的错误了。果然不出妈妈所料，我发现他们在油炸食品的过程中，油竟然还十分浑浊，又有点黑，随着油温的不断升高，还一个劲地冒着小泡泡。为了反复使用油，小商贩们不时地用小勺子把浮在油面上的杂质和小泡泡给捞出来。看到这些使我坚信了油有问题，因为妈妈平常烧菜用的油都是金黄色的、透明的。于是，我从妈妈口中得知，他们的油都是反复使用的，因为这样做都是为了节省成本，从中赚取更多的钱，谋取暴利。食用油在反复煎炸过程中会发生氧化、水解、热聚合等化学反应，不但油脂中原有的成分遭到破坏，热变产物还对人体具有致癌作用。如果油炸的是熟肉制品，危害更大。因为熟肉制品在加工过程中添加亚硝酸盐作为护色剂，这种熟肉制品经过热油的煎炸后，残留的亚硝酸盐也会转变为一种强致癌物质。我不知道他们在叫卖的时候，有没有想过这些食品会危害我们的健康呢。所以我呼吁那些小商贩们，为了顾客的健康，要用好的油、别用那些反复使用的“垃圾”油，要知道诚实守信是每位商家必备的素质，不要为了一时的贪财，而不顾消费者的健康。同时，我要提醒大家一下，特别是小朋友们，在买食品的时候，不要去那些没有营业执照、许可证的店里或小摊上去买那些三无食品吃, 三无产品是指无产品名称、厂名、厂址,无生产日期和保质期的食品。大家知道吃三无食品对身体是很有害的。我们在买东西时，一定要注意食品的生产日期、保质期，连产品说明书都要仔细地看清楚，不然后果不堪设想。在此，我也要呼吁一下我们的人类：“注意食品的安全!食品安全，从我们的身边开始做起吧!”

每年高考，总是有另类的作文见诸报端，引发网友们的如“滔滔江水，绵绵不绝”的热议。今年最热门的另类高考作文，则莫过于两篇与为当代中国的爱国者与民族主义者提倡的显学，即“国学”有关的文章：一篇为湖北一考生的一篇名为《站在黄花岗陵园的门口》的古体长诗，被教师们评为今年高考语文“最牛满分作文”；另一篇为四川一考生的“甲骨文高考作文”，害得阅卷老师劳师动众地请古文字学的专家进行了翻译，最后经专家和阅卷组反复协商，认为该作文离题严重，最终被评仅得6分。

两篇文章我都认真地读了一遍，所谓“认真”，就是虽然读不下去，可为了满足人类与生俱来的好奇心，强迫自己去从头至尾给读完。从内容来看，我实在看不出为什么前者就应该得满分，而后者却只能得6分。其实，二人的文章都是高考作文中常见的那种假大空的“考八股”，都符合政治正确，积极向上这种“主旋律”所要求的标准，同样地矫揉造作，满纸谎言，缺乏真情实感，只不是一为用古文翻译的白话文，一为古文字写就的白话文，为何得分竟如此悬殊呢？

俗云，“山中无老虎，猴子称大王”，这两篇文章在当代中国之所以产生如此这般的轰动效应，只是因为当代中国人于他们所推崇的所谓“国学”其实已是非常陌生了。换言之，正因为“国学”正在迅速地走向死亡，才引发了国人对于“国学”的非理性的狂热，并将任何能与“国学”能扯上一点点关系的事物都推向了一种神圣的位置——正如美国社会学家大卫·里斯曼在《孤独的人群》一书的序言里所言，“一旦某一群体或民族开始利用民族主义或旧信仰、旧习惯复兴运动来保护其独特的历史遗产，这就标志着旧有的习惯势力已开始自发地、无可挽回地走向灭亡。”如果国人对于自己的传统文化比较熟悉，而且古文的写作能力或阅读能力普遍较强，至少《站在黄花岗陵园的门口》的古体长诗是不会引起任何关注的，更不可能打满分。

就《站在黄花岗陵园的门口》的古体长诗来说，充其量就是一首拼凑而成的“打油诗”罢了，而阅卷老师竟然称这首诗“形式和内容表现上都堪称一流”，无异于“见骆驼而谓马背肿”，实在是少见多怪，坐井观天——说得粗俗一点，就像太监看见一个牙签大的小鸡鸡，也觉得惊才绝艳一样。这实在是一首又长又臭，俗不可耐的“诗”，有古诗之形而无其神——甚至根本不能算是诗。有网友分析了此诗的用韵，发现全诗共有韵脚51处，其中不合韵的有16处，重复用韵的有16处，超过60％的韵脚都有问题。这且不说，从诗的遣词造句方面来说，大多数句子，你都能读得懂，可就是觉得别扭，因为与古汉语的习惯用法相违背，就像时下一些街头讨饭的乞丐写在地上的“顺口溜”。而且，你可以发现大量改造前人成句而成的句子，如第一句“赤焰难明赤县天，百年群魔舞翩跹”就是由毛泽*《浣溪沙·和柳亚子先生》中的“长夜难明赤县天，百年魔怪舞翩跹”改写而成的——在其他的地方，我们还能见到杜甫、秋瑾、丘逢甲等人的影子。就整体而言，该诗无非就是将中国历史教科书上所灌输给学生的那点可怜的“史实”和附着于其上的正确的意识形态用“诗”的形式给拼凑出来罢了。至于古诗之意境、之神韵，哪里能见到一点点影子。如果将这种狗屁不通的破玩意评为满分作文，除了说明阅卷老师的不学无术却又自以为是之外，就象那些尸位素餐的大人老爷们竟然将余秋雨捧为“大师”，并将他臭不可闻，比这篇满分作文强不了多少的文章放入中学的教科书一样，无异于误导了学生，让他们更加分不清黄钟与瓦缶。屈原《九章·怀沙》云，“凤凰在笯兮，鸡鹜翔舞”，此之谓也！

该“诗”能获得满分，其实并没有出乎我的意料，却恰恰是我意料之中的事儿。在当代中国这种如此贫瘠、如此寂寞、如此腐臭不堪、如此令人窒息的文化沙漠里，我实在不能期望真正的好东西能获得人们的青睐。当人们都将鱼目当成珍珠的时候，我一个人在这里说人们眼中的珍珠其实只是鱼目，实在是一件相当危险的事儿——犯了为人处世之大忌讳呀！那么，同样是很臭的文章，为什么用古文写的能得满分，而用古文字写的却只能得6分呢？只是因为后者严重挑战了阅卷老师的智慧，使他们无法表现出自己的聪明、睿智和明断罢了，若是这位朋友也将他不知所云的“八股文”用古文或古诗的形式给“翻译”出来，可能他的文章将同样也会成为四川版的古诗文体“满分作文”。

[对高考文言文满分作文的几点思考

我看了食品安全进校园这篇文章，我知道了我们爱吃的叫辣子的东西真不应该叫辣子，应该叫垃圾，不应该叫辣子还侮辱辣椒呢。

我们喜欢的烧烤类食品，含有烧烤类食品含有强致癌物质苯并芘。仅此一条，就足以警示人们对烧烤类食品“退避三舍”。

世界卫生组织公布的十大垃圾食品包括：我们爱吃又爱喝的一些东西列如：油炸类食品、腌制类食品、加工类肉食品(肉干、肉松、香肠、火腿等)、饼干类食品(不包括低温烘烤和全麦饼干)、汽水可乐类饮料、方便类食品(主要指方便面和膨化食品)、罐头类食品(包括鱼肉类和水果类)、话梅蜜饯果脯类食品、冷冻甜品类食品(冰淇淋、冰棒、雪糕等)、烧烤类食品，这些我们又爱吃而它有简称“垃圾”的东西，我们可以不吃加工类肉食品、油炸类食品、话梅蜜饯果脯类、食品饼干类食品和垃圾食品，我们可以自己做，把水冻一个小时水就变成了和雪糕一样软的冰了(还可以用牛奶加三勺白砂糖做)。垃圾食品有称(JunkFood)是指仅仅提供一些热量，别无其它营养素的食物，或是提供超过人体需要，变成多余成分的食品，所以我希望大家少吃学校门口便宜的小食品可以让父母给自己做安全的食品给自己吃这样才是安全的。

写人：

1．Our English Teacher

Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.

She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says, "Practice makes perfect."

She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English plays.

She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her.

Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.

2．My English Teacher

Our English teacher, Mr. Wang, is a strongly built thirty-year-old man, who is often simply dressed. He has been teaching us English ever since he graduated from the English Department, Beijing Normal University in 1993. He devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often working late into the night preparing his lessons. He is capable of making his lessons lively and interesting, and all of us like his lessons. He is very strict with us but he shows us great concern. He offers us help whenever we need it. We all consider him not only as our good teacher but also as our close friend. We all respect and love him.

B．写物：

3． Our school

Our school is located at the centre of Beijing, It is one of the largest schools in the city with over 2,000 students and about 200 teachers. Our school subjects include politics, Chinese, English, maths, history, geography, physics, chemistry and biology and so on. Most of us pay great attention to the study of English, Chinese and maths because they are very important subjects in the university entrance exam. We take special interest in English. We have spent much time on it, but we still find it difficult to learn the language well. In the afternoon when class is over, we enjoy staying at school for about one hour for some physical exercises before leaving for home.

4． My Home Village

My home village is a small one. Its in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province. Small as it is, its very beautiful.

There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains. In spring, we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very high. In summer, the trees are green and the grass is green, too. It is green everywhere on the hills. There are so many wild apple trees on the hills. The wild applesare nice to eat. In autumn, the corns under and around the hills are ripe. So we eat them almost every day. In winter, when it snows, all the ground is covered with snow. We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar. In my hometown the sky is blue, the air is clean, the water is sweet and the people are very friendly. I love my hometown!

5．Changes in Our Life

Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past. But now we call long distance at home. And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information. But now we get the news by watching TV. Another big change is in my living conditions. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture. But now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. In short, our life has become comfortable and convenient.

C．日记：

6．A Good Deed

Oct. 19th TuesdayFine

One afternoon, on my way home, I saw an accident: a car hit an old man!

I shouted to the pedestrians for help, but no one stopped. When the car driver saw this, he quickly closed the window Of the car and drove away. "What shall I do? The old man needs help." I thought.

At that time, a truck stopped and out came the driver. "Whats wrong with the old man, boy? What could I do?" the driver asked me. "Uncle, please help the old man. A car hit him and he is badly injured! "I said. "Well, dont worry. Let me take him to the hospital. the driver said.

A few minutes later, the driver took the old man to the hospital and I telephoned the police station. I told the whole story to the police and I also told them the number of the car. The police said to me, "Well done, boy! Leave it to us. He must be punished!" Then I went to the hospital to see the old man.

When I got home, it was 7:30. I think what I did was fight.

D．书信：

(1) 你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。

1．建议他回国。

2．你的理由是：学有所用，就业容易；照顾父母。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．行文应连贯，内容应完整；

3．开头语已为你写好。

Dear Jian Hua,

I m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

To Jian Hua

Dear Jian Hua,

Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to employ people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look afteryour parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think its a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?

Best wishes;

Ming Hua

(2) 2005年春季

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生征寻为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由。(包括所具备的条件)。

2005春季范文

Dear sir,

I hear that our school will welcome some Canadian students to stay with us for or two weeks. Students who want to invite them to stay can take part in it. I want to try.

First , my parents and I can speak English well. That benefits us to communicate with each other. Second, our house is big enough for he or she to stay. Furthermore , I live near the Huangpu River. It has a good view of Shanghai.

Last but not least , in my home, he or she will enjoy much China culture. My grandpa and grandma are good athandwriting. My grandma also has a good skill in Chinese painting.

I think our friendly will give him a both interesting and comfortable experience.

Thank you for your reading during your busy work.. I hope that you will agree with me .

Yours sincerely,

Li Hong

(3) 假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下：

Dear Mum and Dad,

How are you doing ?

范文

Dear Mum and Dad,

How are you doing ?

I?m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.

Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. Whenever I am thinking of this, I can?t help feeling grateful to you . It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies. Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope,courage and confidence. And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.

Dear Mum and Dad, I an now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams. I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student. Then, I will strive to be an independent youth. The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference.

Best regards to you .

Yours sincerely, Wang Hua

(4)求职信

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a secretary. I would like you to consider me for the position.

My name is Li Min. I am twenty-three years old. I am studying business management in Xiamen University. I will graduate this summer. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me do the office work very well. And I have learned English for ten years.In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department. My grades come out top in my department. Whats more, I like office work very much and I also think that I can be competent for the job.If I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.

Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Li Min

E．说明文：

How People Spent Their Holidays

As can be seen from the table, great changes took place in the ways that people spent their holidays over the period from the year 1990 to 1999. The proportion of traveling abroad and camping was increasing steadily, from 12% to 24% and from 10% to 36% separately, while that of staying at home and going to the seaside was decreasing year by year, from 38% to 31% and from 40% to 9% separately. Why were there changes? I think people can nowadays afford traveling.Also, people prefer to pursue a high-quality and colorful life. So we can see that people＇s living standard has been rising greatly.

F．议论文

(1) 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为:

1．不应该收门票

2 公园是公众休闲的地方

3. 如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

40％的同学认为: 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2．支付园林工人工资 3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100左右。 3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee

Dear editor,

I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people?s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should

导语：我的家里每天都有欢笑声，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

In my big family, there are six members. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my little brother and I. We live together happily.

My grandfather and grandmother are in their seventies. My grandfather has something wrong with his heart, while my grandmother is in good health. Last summer, I taught her to play chess. She was so intrested in it that I had to play with her all day on weekends!

My father is a doctor and my mother is a middle school teacher. They are all very busy and hard-working. Although sometimes they disagree with each other, they respect each other.

My little brother is only two years old. He is very lovely. He has a round face and two big black eyes. There are two dimples on his cheeks when he smiles just like me. I often can’t help kissing him. Sometimes he is very naughty. When I don’t want to get up in the morning, he comes to pinch my ear to wake me, and runs away quickly when I open my eyes angrily.

What a harmonious family we have! I love my family forever!

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在我的大家庭里，有六个成员。他们是我的爷爷，奶奶，爸爸，妈妈，弟弟和我。

我爷爷和奶奶七十多岁了。我爷爷的心脏有点问题，而我的祖母身体很好。去年夏天，我教她下棋。她很感兴趣，我只好跟她玩一整天在周末!

我父亲是医生，我母亲是中学教师。他们都很忙，工作很努力。虽然有时他们意见不一致，但他们彼此尊重。

我的弟弟只有2岁。他非常可爱。他有一张圆圆的脸和两只大大的黑眼睛。他的脸上有两个酒窝，他笑得跟我一样。我常常忍不住吻他。有时他很调皮。当我早上不想起床时，他会来抓我的耳朵叫醒我，当我愤怒地睁开眼睛时，我很快就跑开了。

我们的家庭和睦和睦!我永远爱我的家人!