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+ 加入清单我的英语老师名叫朱祥慧。听这名字,以为是女的,其实是男的。朱老师长得丑,而且不是一般的丑。俗话说得好:人不可貌相,海水不可斗量。我们以貌取人就大错特错了。他虽然丑,但是英语过了八级呢!厉害吧!
更厉害的还是上他的课呢。他的课,每一节都不同寻常。特别是班上那些调皮捣蛋的学生,简直就是小心翼翼、提心吊胆了。对他们来说,上英语课,应该如同下地狱一般痛苦吧。为什么呢?因为一不小心就有“坠入深谷的危险”——接受“严刑拷打”的考验。“拷打”的过程中,班里有些女生就拍手叫好。用英语老师的话来说,那就是:“上英语课有仇的报仇,有冤的申冤。如果这些男生一而再、再而三地欺负女生,找我就可以了!”这一番话可是说到女生的心窝子里了。
我最佩服英语老师的“双棍打”。左右手都得打,经过老师的一阵“狂打”,你的手非得疼上半节课。其次就是“蹲板凳”——把凳子抽出来,然后你坐在空气中,姿势还必须就像坐在板凳上的一样。20分钟下来,你就挥汗如雨了!这两招还都不算狠,最狠的一招是“笑脸”。英语老师会拍着你的肩膀,笑着对你说一番话,这时,他就会露出那一口不齐整的大牙,令你“毛骨悚然”。
当然也有女生挨揍的时候。前两招我就都领教过,第三招还没“享受”过,我现在是没有那个“荣幸”了。所以,我觉得一句话非常适合形容英语课,那就是:不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹。
“严师出高徒”,我们班的英语成绩就不用说了,每次考试都稳拿第一。英语老师常常用武力,我们班同学居然都喜欢他,在学校组织的“最受欢迎的老师”的评选中,英语老师竟然位居榜首。
我喜欢我的英语老师,你们呢?
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篇1:我的英语老师六年级
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+ 加入清单在我的身边,有许许多多令我感动的人,其中最让我感动的莫不过是我的英语老师Miss Liang。
Miss Liang 是我的英语老师,为什么说她感动人呢,是因为她对我们的教学工作进行得无微不至。每天早上一来到学校,她都微笑着对我打招呼。有的同学请假缺课了,她总是待他回来后帮他认真地补 上落下的课。还有的同学做了些错事,她都会叫他到跟前,耐心地批评指正。在同学的面前,她显得格外亲切,好似她是我们母亲一样,我们都非常喜欢她,喜欢她讲课时流利的语言,喜欢她和同学们 交流时亲切的眼神,更喜欢她对教学无微不至的优良品质。
记得一节英语课上,和往常一样,Miss Liang 提着录音机走进教室,所不同的是,她好像有点疲惫的样子,而且没有立即叫大家上课,而是在黑板上写道:非常抱歉!顿时,全班立即”热闹“起来了, 所有同学都窃窃私语,不知道发生了什么事:Miss Liang 究竟怎么了?为什么写下这些字?是不是生病了?老师没管我们,咳了几声,在黑板上写下了一些这节课要学的英语单词,然后又咳了几声,吃 力地说:”上课!“我听见她沙哑的嗓音,才知道,原来Miss Liang 嗓子哑了!同学们都大为吃惊,Miss Liang平时嗓音动听,今天怎么突然哑了,应该是天天上课累的吧。
老师叫了一个帮手,让他读她书上写的句子,自己也在旁边指导着,每次说话都很辛苦,有时非常沙哑,有时甚至发不出声音,要咳几下才能继续。我听见Miss Liang 那沙哑的声音,恨不得举起手来, 大声说道:”Miss Liang,我来帮您讲!“
直到下课,Miss Liang那沙哑的嗓音才慢慢离开了我们耳际……
从这件事中,我体会到了Miss Liang 教学的一丝不苟,舍己为人,如果没有这些品德,她可能会在课上随便乱讲应付了事,也可能一点小咳嗽就不上课。可Miss Liang 不是这样,她为了教学呕心沥 血的精神彻底感动了我们!
篇2:六年级英语作文:Being An Honest Girl
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+ 加入清单today im very happy,after i have breakfast,i go to park.
its a sunny day ,the bird is singing,im singing too.when i get to park,i see some girls are playing games ,so i join them.we play very happy.then i have lunch with my friends.we both have a good time.what a happy day!
篇3:六年级关于低碳生活的英语作文
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+ 加入清单最近一个时期,我听到了“低碳生活”一词。通过看书了解,低碳生活是一种低消耗,低能量,低开支,从而减少二氧化碳的排放的生活方式。在查阅资料的过程中,我知道了保定是全国中小城市的试点城市,作为一名小学生,我能为低碳生活做点什么呢?
Recently, I heard a "low carbon life" is a word. By reading books about low carbon life is a kind of low consumption, low energy, low cost, thereby reducing carbon dioxide emissions by way of life. In the data access process, I know Baoding is a pilot city of national small and medium-sized city, as a student, what can I do for the low-carbon life?
以前,我就每天把水拧到最大,洗手、洗脸每月都要耗水十几吨,现在,老师告诉我们要准备两个水桶,用来储存废水。废水可以用来冲厕所,拖地、浇花。用电也要节约,看完电脑或电视后,要把插座上的小红灯关掉,以便节约电源,尽量放假时白天写作业,晚上早关灯一小时,用那一小时的时间和家人散步。既节约了电源,又起到了减肥的作用,还增进了感情,真是一举多得呀!少用一次性物品(筷子、饭盒等)少用塑料袋,多用环保袋。出行最好步行,少开私家车,少做出租,多做公交车。这样就做到了“低消耗、低能量、低开支”的作用。
Previously, so every day I screwed water to wash hands, every month, water consumption of ten tons, now, the teacher told us to prepare two bucket, used to store the waste water. The waste water can be used to flush the toilet, mopping the floor, water the flowers. Use of electricity is to save, read a computer or TV, to the socket on the small red light off, in order to save power, as far as possible when the homework, early in the evening lights for one hour, walking in the one hour time with family. Save power, but also played a role in weight loss, but also to enhance the feelings, really serve multiple purposes! Use less disposable items (such as chopsticks, lunch boxes) to use less plastic bags, use environmental protection bags. The best travel on foot, opened a small car rental, do less, do more buses. So do the "low consumption, low energy, low cost" role.
低碳生活,人人有责,让我先行,保护环境。
Low carbon life, everybody, let me first, Protect environment.
篇4:六年级英语作文给老师的一封信
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+ 加入清单Dear MrYang,
How is everything going! Tomorrw is Teachers’ Day.I would like to express my sincerely wishes to you. You taught me English inthe primary school. That is the time to lay our foundation. And you help me laymy interest on English, which make me feel learn English easily in middleschool. I’m very appreciated that. Thank you very much. If it is convenient foryou, I would like to visit you this National Day. Happy Teachers’ Day again.
Best wishes,
Lucy
篇5:六年级英语作文:凯特与苏珊
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+ 加入清单Kate:Hello,Polly.What day is Today?
Polly:Sunday.
Kate:How old are you,Polly?
Susan:Are you three?
Polly:No.Er,um...Im One.
Kate:No.You are two now!Today is your birthday!
Susan and Kate:Happy Brithday to you!
Polly:Thanks.
中文意思:(注:Polly[波利]为一只鸟,会说话的鸟)
凯特:你好,波利,今天星期几?
波利:星期天。
凯特:你几岁了,波利?
苏珊:你三岁吗?
波利:不,恩,…恩,我一岁。
凯特:不,你现在两岁了!今天是你的生日!
苏珊、凯特:生日快乐!
波利:谢谢!
篇6:小学六年级关于教育的英语作文
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+ 加入清单School eduction has played an important role in people’s life. When reaching three tears old, the little children will go to kindergarten for a preschool education. And then they will take part in the primary school, middle school, high school, college and so on. School eduction almost run through people’s whole life. So it is very important. We all know that thereare many knowledgeable teachers in school will teach the students. But it’s not enough. School eduction needs the coordination of family education. The British educator, Hosea Ballou once said,”Education commences at the mother’s knee, and every word spoken within the hearsay of children tends towards the formation of character. Therefore, we can see that the successful of school education needs the help of family education so that the children can have a perfect education. The promissing future is waiting for them.
学校教育在人们的生活中扮演着很重要的角色。在小孩三岁的时候,他们就会去幼儿园进行学前教育。之后他们会去上小学,初中,高中,大学等。学校教育几乎贯穿人的一生。所以它是非常重要的。我们都知道,学校有很多知识渊博的老师来教学生知识。但这是不够的。学校教育需要家庭教育的协调。英国教育家巴卢曾经说过,“教育始于母亲膝下,孩童耳听一言一语,均影响其性格的形成”。因此,我们可以看到,学校教育的成功需要家庭教育的协助,使孩子们拥有一个完善的教育。光明的未来在等着他们。
篇7:六年级期末考试
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+ 加入清单今天,我要去学校拿期末考试成绩单。到了学校,我的心里非常紧张,因为我想知道语文和数学能考多少分。成绩单发下来了,我看到语文作文是满分,考试成绩是96.5分,数学是100分。太好啦,我的玩具有希望啦!因为妈妈答应我只要有一科考了满分,就给我买“面包工坊”的玩具。
我对这次考试不是太满意,但是妈妈夸奖了我,认为我考的很好,因为我没有犯马虎的坏习惯,错的都是我不会的题,所以妈妈下午要带我去买我想要的玩具和我喜欢的好吃的,我真开心。
我下学期一定要好好学习,争取考双百。
篇8:六年级期末考试我的妈妈作文600字
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+ 加入清单孟郊有一句名言“谁言寸草心,报的三春晖。”这句名言赞扬了母亲的伟大。而我的母亲也是我心目中最伟大的人。曾经有多少诗词和歌曲赞扬我们伟大的母亲呀!
妈妈,是慈祥的,和蔼的。为了能够使我们懂得更多的事情,妈妈常常在我出去玩或者是去学校时,反复地叮嘱我们,不是让我们不要把刚换的衣服弄脏了,就是让我们好好听课,听学校老师的话,我想,大家都一定“逃”不过这一关吧!用我们小孩子的话说吧,也就是“妈妈的唠叨”。
在我上二、三年级的时候,每次出门时,妈妈总要边帮我整理好衣着,一边又开始了,在学校要听老师的话,下课不要在地上玩,不要把衣服弄脏了,看着妈妈这副一点儿刀不耐用烦的脸,我在心里头笑了。“难道妈妈不累逃避“妈妈的唠叨,而骗妈妈。我快要上学去了,一想到妈妈又要为我而又开始了她从不厌烦唠叨,想到这,看见妈妈去我房间整理东西我就趁着妈妈不在,忙着把早餐往嘴里塞,尽管我的嘴小,塞不进去几个,但是我还是”拼命“地塞呀塞,看见妈妈准备出来了,我就马上背起书包,道了一声”“妈妈,我走了。”就往外跑,妈妈也跟着出来,看见我离她很远,就在门口大声说:“不要把衣服弄脏了,原老师的话,”虽然我离妈妈很远,但我还是能模模糊地听到。不要把衣服……像这样事,还发生过很多次。
我渐进地长大了,也慢慢地懂得一些照顾自己等一些事了。随我渐进长大,妈妈也随着我长大,而慢慢地把她“厌烦”的唠叨减少了,慢慢地,甚至到没有!
如今我长大了,懂事了,才明白以前母亲对我的关怀,是那样的深,那样的深。每一句都是对儿女的期待。都说世界上有一位最善良,最伟大的女性,她就是我们的母亲,都说人世间有一种最美丽,最温和的声音,那就是母亲对儿女的呼唤,都说这个世界上有一个最伟大、最无私、最勤劳的人,希望我们能够早点长大成人,懂得更多的是非。母亲没有了唠叨,但我还能够听到自己的母亲在远方为自己的儿远在他方的女祈祷着。“一定要好好学习,保重好自己的身体,要为妈妈争气。
篇9:六年级英语作文带翻译mydream
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+ 加入清单What is a dream? Dream is the first step of your success. Have a dream, will be the direction of the struggle, struggle of power; Have a dream, to live wonderful flavor; Have a dream, life will be full and happy, smile.
Do you have a dream? I have! My dream is admitted to 29 in the ideal junior high school, I think. Three or four grade I dont have this dream, in the fifth grade I started to have the dream, I know that is among the first turning point.
I set this dream after, began to efforts towards my dreams. I feel really is a stumbling block, decided to specialized mathematical olympiad. Very happy, listening to his mother immediately helped me to a Olympic math class. I also think its not too difficult at the beginning, came back he cant keep up with the. Every night doing the teacher give us really sometimes more than 11 points also wont fall asleep, has said: "the last question!" Because I refuse to obey, the topic is dead, Im alive, I can fight but the title. At that time I also want to a head planted on the bed, a meimeis sleep. But for the sake of my dream, I spell it! Once I was having dinner, suddenly thought of a mathematical olympiad, hurriedly left bowl, ran to the desk to write down, and think of! Is wrong! It might be, and I want to...... 5, 10 and 20 minutes have passed, I havent do it, I still didnt give up, holding the bowl to eat while think, think of the writing. Just half an hour passed and I finally made. I feel very happy, want to are a step closer to my goal.
I still remember a famous saying of Truman capote: dream as long as persistent, can become a reality. So I every day break aoshu, hope my wish can be achieved.
什么是梦想?梦想就是你成功的第一步。有了梦想,才会有奋斗的方向,拼搏的动力;有了梦想,才能活得精彩,有滋有味;有了梦想,生活才会变得充实而快乐,笑口常开。
你有梦想吗?我有哦!我的梦想是考上29中这所我认为很理想的初中。三、四年级时我还没有这个梦想,到了五年级我才开始有了这个梦想,我知道小升初是第一个转折点。
我定下这个梦想后,就开始努力朝我的梦想靠近。我觉得奥数是一个绊脚石,决定专门攻破奥数。妈妈听了非常高兴,立马帮我报了一个奥数班。一开始我还觉得不是太难,到了后面就跟不上了。每天晚上都在做老师给我们的奥数题有时候11点多了还不肯睡觉,一直说:“最后一题!”因为我不服,题目是死的,我是活的,我连题目都斗不过。那时我也很想一头栽在床上,美美的睡上一觉。但为了我的梦想,我拼了!有一次我正在吃饭,突然想到了一道奥数,赶紧丢下碗,跑到书桌旁把想到的都写了下来,呀!是错的!我又想可能是这样······5、10、20分钟都过去了,我还没做出来,我仍没有放弃,端着碗一边吃一边想,想到了就写。就这样半个小时过去了,我终于做出来了。我非常高兴,感觉想我的目标又近了一步。
我始终记得杜鲁门·卡波特的一句名言:梦想只要能持久,就能成为现实。所以我坚持每天攻破奥数,希望我的愿望能够实现。
篇10:六年级关于母亲节的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Mother’s Day is a holiday when children honor their mothers with cards, gifts and flowers. In many countries, such as Denmark, Finland, Italy, Turkey, Australia and the US, people cel lebrate Mother’s Day on the second Sunday in May while many other countries of the world celebrate their own Mother’s day at different times through out the year.
One of the best ways to celebrate Mother’s Day is to give your mom the day off. Let her relax with the rest of the family doing all the housework. Usually, dad and the kids will let mom sleep late that morning as they go into the kitchen to prepare her favourite breakfast. Never forget to place a vase with a single flower on the table beside the food. The kids can pick up the flower from the garden or buy one from the shop. Arrange everything nicely before mom wakes up. Some families will carry the food and mom’s favourite sections from the newspaper to her bedroom so that mom can have breakfast in bed. Presents and cards from the kids can be handed to mom by themselves or just placed on the dining table.
After breakfast, go anywhere mom likes to go. Shopping, swimming or going on a picnic in the garden. Make a special Mother’s Day dinner or take mom out for a great meal in a famous restaurant she loves most.
Anyway ,let mom enjoy the whole day and feel your love, and then the Mother’s Day can be a good one. As Mother’s Day is around the corner, it’s time to take actions!
母亲节是一个节日当孩子纪念他们的母亲,卡片,礼物和鲜花。在许多国家,如丹麦、芬兰、意大利、土耳其、澳大利亚和美国,人们庆祝母亲节在5月的第二个星期天,而世界上许多其他国家在不同的时间庆祝他们自己的母亲节在。
庆祝母亲节的最好方法之一就是给你妈妈一天假。让她放松和其余的家人做所有的家务。通常,父亲和孩子们会让妈妈睡晚了,早上当他们进入厨房准备她最喜欢的早餐。永远不会忘记一个花瓶和一个花旁边桌子上的食物。孩子们可以拿起花的花园或从商店买一个。妈妈醒来之前很好地安排一切。一些家庭将携带食品和妈妈最喜欢的部分从报纸上她的卧室,这样妈妈可以在床上吃早餐。礼物和卡片的孩子可以自己交给妈妈还是放在餐桌上。
早餐后,去任何地方妈妈喜欢去。购物、游泳或者去野餐在花园里。做一个特别的母亲节晚餐或带妈妈出去吃一顿大餐著名的她最喜欢的餐厅。
无论如何,让妈妈享受一整天,感觉你的爱,然后母亲节可以很好。母亲节即将到来,是时候采取行动了!
篇11:小学六年级作文:期末考试
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+ 加入清单经过一学期漫长的学习,期末考试终于到了。虽然大家都对期末考试有些畏惧,都是期末考试之后就是美好的暑假,所以大家还是自信满满地去期末考试了。
我也是这期末考试的一员,就在这个星期一,我们学校带我们到中学去考试了,对于那天的考试,我感慨万千。
当我踏进考场时,深深地感到一种神圣的感觉。我找到自己的位置坐下,看着这干净整洁的桌椅,我仿佛看到了这六年自己走过的艰辛,听到了老师的谆谆教诲,这,就是我六年需要交的答卷;这,就是证明我六年的成绩的机会。这一战成功,走上阳关大道;这一战失败,就坠入万丈深渊。
随着机械女声响起,考试开始了,我细心地看着没一道题,丝毫没有怠慢。试卷的第一面的题还挺简单,但是阅读就不单单是靠基本功,而是要智慧与课文内容结合,算是所有题中比较难的了。而国学园地和综合性学习则是考察同学们平时的积累,以及综合社会能力,这点我还没问题。
最难的就是阅读了,因为阅读不能靠背,也没有什么特定的技巧,就只能平时多读多练。而且出题范围也有无限大,想要在这么短的时间内写出一个引人注目的开头结尾也并非易事,但是我还是应付过来了。
一天的考试结束,我已经感觉身体被掏空,期末考试,是祸也是福。
篇12:2024年高二期末英语满分
全文共 999 字
+ 加入清单I’m an outgoing girl and my name is Shi Yun. I love singing songs,
especially pop songs. My favorite singer is Jay Chou.
As we all know, Jay is a superstar of Asia. He has excellent music skills.
He started to play the piano at 5 years old and studied hard. When he was 15
years old, he was able to write songs. But the environment in which he lived is
not very good. When he was a child, his parents were divorced and as a result
his childhood was full of depression. He lived with his grandparents. He was
always silent and didn’t like talking to others. At the age of 16, he was
attracted by the bass’s low voice. So his mother bought one for him and he
started to play the bass. His success is filled with tears and sweat.
From his story, I know if I want to be successful, I should work harder. I
want to go in for music, although I know the way to success is very difficult
for me. Now that I choose this way, I’ll do my best to realize my dream. Of
course I will tell myself I will be a superstar someday.
篇13:六年级英语作文:MyHero
全文共 2636 字
+ 加入清单英雄就是凡人,在某时不顾个人安危,不计得失,敢于迎难而上的人,就堪称英雄。下面是语文迷为大家整理提供的英语作文:My Hero,希望对你有帮助。
My Hero篇一
As for the meaning of hero, Different people have different explanations. My hero is common people, but they do extraordinary things in their lives.
During the war years, fighting heroes of the liberation of the motherland sacrificed their lives to blow up people`s enemy in the air in order to open up the road of victory. From Dong Cunrui to Huang Jihuang ...... countless heroes with their lives, write On-e after another heroic patriotic movement which had inspired the patriotic spirit of generations of youth.
At the beginning of PRC, no one could not forget a person who helped a large numbers of people selflessly.His name was Lei Feng. To be specific, Comrade Lei Feng dedicated all his life to the people, which had a profound effect on the healthy growth of teenager-s .
Nowadays we youngsters pride ourselves on treating the Peoples Liberation Army as our hero. After Wenchuan earthquake happened, Chinese Peoples Liberation Army responded quickly in several hours . In the face of this severe trial, they developed the spirit of never afraid of sacrifice,no fear of fatigue and continuous fighting, and overcame all obstacles.Ultimately, Chinese people gained the great victory of earthquake relief .
All in all, our hero are often ordinary to the public. However, in order to safe-guard the people`s interest and defend state sovereignty, they can give up their family, their wealth and even their lives. Consequently, our hero will live in my heart till the end.
My Hero篇二
There are lots of heros in the world,but for me,Severus Snape is the biggest hero in my heart.
Severus Snape is a character in Harry Potter and he was born on January 9,1960.He was a professor in Hogwarts who taught students Potions and Defence Against The Dark Arts. Everybody thought Severus is an Eeath eater and belongs to Vlodemort because he killed Dumbledore.But in Harry Potter And The Deathy Hollows, when Severus died,he gave Harry his memory and said deeply:“Look at me.” Harry looked inside his memory and found out Severus loved Harry’s mother Lily very much and just because Vodemort killed her so he would rather let everyone hate him and spyed on Vodemort.
Severus Snape’s love is very moving. He lived for Lily and died for Lily. He loved her so much that he has to protect her son Harry even thought he is not his son. When Dumbledore asked him:“ You still love her, after all these time?” Severus answered firmly:“Always.” These words moved every reader’s heart.
Severus is not a real person,but I still think he is a great hero.He is,very brave and strong.
篇14:2024期末考试英语记叙文写作指导
全文共 5333 字
+ 加入清单记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H ",但动笔之前,围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.
"Dont worry, well send you home."
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
篇15:六年级英语作文:My favorite animals
全文共 613 字
+ 加入清单My favorite animals are swans.they are white.they can swim very well.I think they look like a beautiful girl in a white dress.they have a pair of wings and they can also fly well.I believe they are angles from the sky.they bring us love and make us happy.they are always friendly to us.We cant hurt them,because they are our friend.I love them!I like dogs,too.they are not beautiful,but they are the best friends.they keep the thieves away.Dogs have the best listening and eyes.they can hear in the nosiy,see in the dark.If we are in danger,they will help us at once.And they dont mind their lives.So,I love them.
篇16:小学六年级英语作文
全文共 1170 字
+ 加入清单With the development of economy, peoples living standard has been enormously improved, and with the of peoples living standard, supermarkets are springing up like mushrooms. Every day, especially at weekends, crowds of shoppers flock towards supermarkets and smilingly come out with rich harvests. The enthusiasm of the shoppers is induced by the superiorities of the supermarket.
Firstly, it is very convenient to do shopping in the supermarket. What you need do is walk your handcart along the aisles and take anything you need from the shelve8 to fill your cart.
Secondly, the market provides a bumper variety of goods.Food, clothes, daily articles, drinks, books, home electric appliances all are within your arms reach.
Thirdly, the environment is clean and comfortable with all-year-round ventilation and air-condition.
Fourthly, payment is made easily, either in cash or with a card. And you dont have to wait long.
Fifthly, often, small gifts like soft toys, beauty-parlour coupons and instant lucky draws are offered to customers.
Naturally,people like shopping in supermarkets althoug unnecessary things. But the next time they do shopping,they completely forget it.
篇17:小学六年级英语写一封信
全文共 519 字
+ 加入清单Dear Ms. Smith,
Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". It’s my honor if you can accept our invitation. Please call me at 123456 if you have any question.
I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
篇18:小学六年级英语作文带翻译myfamily
全文共 1756 字
+ 加入清单I have a happy family, in this family, the love of the parents and the objects of love, make my life be filled with joy and warmth, all day long I have lived in this atmosphere of love.
In this home I like to eat meat, vegetables is not how to love to eat. For that mom and dad said I many times, but I think meat is delicious, have a dad to let me eat food deliberately and I rob food to eat, mum was fired one of my favorite celery fry meat, mother put the food in front of me, I kept carrying meat to eat, very delicious! Dad came to the table, put the dishes in the middle of the table, I quickly pull the food bowl, dad to pull the food bowl and the past, and so the two of us pull to go, I was angry, put down the chopsticks to walk, see dad is eaten all the food, I am helping in anger, picked up the chopsticks quickly grab, whether its meat or food into my mouth, I dont know why the celery is delicious, from then on I began to eat green vegetables, I know dad with rob method put off the bad habit of I dont eat green vegetables, dad do everything is good for me.
Family just like our trees, I live in a happy home, mom and dad like branches lived happily let me, Im like a leaf. I want to study well, better to put the family construction, also is I want to be a beautiful leaf, to put the tree dressed up beautifully and.
我有一个幸福的家,在这个家里,父母之爱,一草一木之爱,使我的生活时时充满着欢快与温馨,我整天就生活在这爱的气氛里。
在这个家里我很喜欢吃肉,青菜就不怎么爱吃。就因为这个爸爸妈妈不知说过我多少次,可是我就是觉得肉好吃,有一次爸爸为了让我吃菜故意和我抢菜吃,那天妈妈炒了一个我最爱吃的芹菜炒肉,妈妈把菜放在我面前,我不停地挑着肉片吃,真香啊!爸爸来到桌子旁,将菜放在桌子中间,我急忙把菜碗拉过来,爸爸把菜碗又拉了过去,我们俩就这样拉来拉去,我生气了,放下筷子走了,眼看爸爸快要把菜全都吃完了,我就顾不上赌气了,拿起筷子快抢,不管是肉还是菜都进了我的嘴了,不知为什么芹菜也蛮好吃的,从那以后我就开始吃青菜了,我知道爸爸用抢的方法治掉了我不吃青菜的坏毛病,爸爸做的一切都是为我好。
家庭就像我们的大树,我生活在幸福的家里,爸爸妈妈就像树枝让我快乐地生活着,我就像一片叶子。我要好好学习,要把这个家庭建设的更好,也就是我要做一片美的叶子,要把大树装扮得漂漂亮亮。
篇19:六年级英语作文:让世界变得更美丽
全文共 706 字
+ 加入清单导语:保护环境,人人有责。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Today following with economy , Science and technology‘s devolop , we human are destorying the environment.
But we must know we have only a world ,if its broken we havent any places to live. So we cant leave it along,we should do something to stop it.
To make it ,we should do anything from ourselves ,such as not waste water or electic power etc.
Besides it we should persuade people joining us as more as posible.
If every one can do this our world will be more beatiful and tomorrow is another day.
【参考译文】
今天,随着经济、科技的发展,人类破坏环境。
但我们必须知道我们只有一个世界,如果它破碎了,我们就没有生存的地方。所以我们不能离开它,我们应该做些什么来阻止它。
要做到这一点,我们应该从自己做的任何事情,如不浪费水、电等。
此外,我们应该说服人们加入我们尽可能。
如果每个人都这样做我们的世界会更美丽,明天又是新的一天。
篇20:小学六年级英语作文:MyDay
全文共 3214 字
+ 加入清单导语:你有写日记的习惯吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的关于日记的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
My Day 1
May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
May Day is my favorite day!
My Day 2
I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival . I went to the park with my friends . We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate . We went to the park by bike .It was a beautiful day . We sat under a big tree and chated with each other . We took about some movies and some fun things . We had lunch there . We ate hamburgers and some drinks , but I know they are not healthy and not good for us . Then we played some games .
We were all fell tired ,but we were very happy ! It was great fun !
My Day 3
Today is Monday. I get up at 6:00. I have my breakfast at about 6:30.Then I clean my room, wash my face and brush my teeth. I have noodles for breakfast. I go to school at 7:00. I do morning exercises at 7:50.We have four classes in morning. At 11:30, I’m very hungry. I have lunch at school. I go to bed at 12:00 in the noon. We have three classes in the afternoon. I have computer class and art classes. I like them very much. I go home at 5:30. I do homework after school. My sister、brother and I watch TV at 8:00 in the evening. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I go to bed at 10:00.
My Day 4
Today is Sunday. It is sunny. I don‘t go to school. I want go shopping. I get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have some cereal and an egg for breakfast. I go out at 8:00. The shop is near . I go there on foot. Many people are in the shop. I buy a pencil . At 12:00 I go home for lunch. I have some vegetable and meat for lunch. I read a book in the afternoon. I eat some noodles and fruit for supper. After supper, I do my homework. then I watch TV. Later, I play on the computer. I lie on my bed. I listen to the radio. I have a happy day.
翻译
我的1天
5月1日是星期日。今天是劳动节。妈妈对我说:“睁开你的眼睛!望向窗外。多好的天气啊!让我们去公园吧,“所以我的妈妈,我和我的同学去了公园。我们在书包里拿了一些食物。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝天白云。我看见梨树和一些苹果树等等。树下有几种花。它是五颜六色的,蓝色,红色,黄色,粉色,紫色,橙色和白色。我看见一些气球和蝴蝶在天空中。我吃了爆米花,玉米片,香蕉和棒棒糖。他们是美妙的。
下午,我们去了动物园。我参观了鸟类,老鼠,猫,狗,鹦鹉,仓鼠,兔子等。
五一节是我最喜欢的一天!
我的2天
在春节我度过了一个美妙的假期。我和我的朋友去公园。我们八点在学校门口见面。我们骑自行车去公园,那是一个美丽的日子。我们坐在一棵大树下互相聊天。我们拍了一些电影和一些有趣的事情。我们在那里吃午饭。我们吃汉堡包和一些饮料,但我知道他们不健康,对我们不好。然后我们玩了一些游戏。
我们都累了,但我们很高兴!这很有趣!
我的3天
今天是星期一。我6点起床。我大约在:6分58秒30.then我打扫我的房间吃早饭,洗脸刷牙。我早餐吃面条。我七点钟去上学。我做早操在7 50.we在早上有四节课。11:30,我很饿。我在学校吃午饭。我中午12点上床睡觉。我们下午有三节课。我上电脑课和美术课。我非常喜欢他们。我5:30回家。放学后我做作业。我姐姐、弟弟和我晚上8点看电视。然后我洗脸刷牙。我10点上床睡觉。
我的4天
今天是星期日。是晴天。我不上学。我想去购物。我早上6点半起床,早餐吃麦片粥和鸡蛋。我8点出去。商店在附近。我步行去那里。许多人在商店里。我买了一支铅笔。中午12点我回家吃午饭。我午饭吃了一些蔬菜和肉。我下午读了一本书。晚饭我吃面条和水果。晚饭后,我做作业。然后我看电视。后来,我在电脑上玩。我躺在床上。我听收音机。我有一个快乐的日子。