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篇1:我的忧虑高中英语作文

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my secret worry

while fear of death is universal, my worry about death is so overwhelming that there is not a moment passing without my thinking of it. i never bring this up with any other, just because no one will ever realize the seriousness of this problem. i know it very clearly that as long as there is life, there will be death. in addition, though i am still so far away from death, i have been plagued by the thought of it for years. fortunately, the root of my fear of death lies in my overzealous love for life. i am too timid to think of the end of life, when every worldly affair should be thrown away. how can i carry on without friendship, affection, and joy of being alive? i really hate to leave all these behind. to ease my worry about death, i should make the fullest use of this life i now possess. concentration on this life can at least temporally make me forget about death. as a matter of fact, i really don't need to worry so much about death, for i already have too much to worry about this life.

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篇2:高中英语日记

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Today is my birthday and Im so excited about it.In the morning I put a

note on the table for my mum and it said,"Today is my birthday,dont forget

it!"At school,I got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of

fun.But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

When it was time to leave school I couldnt wait to go home.When I open the

door,there wasnt anybody in the house.There was only a note that said,"Coming

home late tonight,mum and dad."I try to call them but there was no answer.I was

so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be!I was so sad that I

couldnt eat anything.I just did my homework and waited for them.

And then,things changed completely.It was about time for dinner,my mother

called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house.When I got there I

couldnt believed my eyes.Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives,my friends

and even my classmates.There was so many gifts and a big cake.What a surprising

birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.

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篇3:高中英语作文:坚强的意志

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Since I go to high school, I live in the school and stay away from my parents. I have three roommates, at the beginning, we have trouble in staying in the same room, but now we have got used to it.

One of my roommates impresses me so much, since she comes to our room, she keeps the habit of reading the novel when we go to bed. She told me that when she lived with her parents, she dared not to read it because her mother would blame her for sleeping late. Now she is very happy that she is out of control, it seems that she is free.

But I feel sorry for her, because she is short-sighted now, what’s more, she is lagging behind other students in the study. Staying away from her parents, she is not strong enough to behave herself. We should have the strong will and behave ourselves.

自从我上了高中,我就住在学校,远离父母。我有3个室友,刚开始,我们不习惯同处一室,但是如今,我们已经习惯了。有一个室友让我印象很深刻,自从她住进我们的房间,她就在我们睡觉的时候保持看小说的习惯。她告诉我们在她和父母住在一起的时候,她不敢看小说,因为她妈妈会责怪她那么晚睡觉。如今她很高兴再也不受控制了,似乎她得到了自由。但是我为她感到遗憾,因为她现在已经近视,而且,在学习方面也落后于其他同学。离开了父母,她不够强大,无法自律。我们应该有坚强意志,并且自律。

[高中英语作文:坚强的意志

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篇4:高二年级英语作文:如何选择高中课程

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In China, the period of high school is very important for students, they will go to college after finishing high school. Because there are so many students in our country, the students have to take the college entrance exam, the test will decide which school they should go to. Every student in high school will study many course, when the second year comes, students will choose some courses for the college entrance exam. The first thing they should pay attention to is to measure what subject they are good at. Some students are good at math and geography, these students are always weak in politics, then they should keep on learning science. Some students are good at Chinese and English, they should choose to study art. What if the students are good at both? I will advise them to learn the course they are interested.

在中国,高中时期对于学生来说是很重要的,完成高中的课程以后,他们就要上大学。因为我国有很多学生,因此学生不得不参加高考,高考将会决定他们去哪所学校。每个学生在高中都要学很多课程,当第二年到来的时候,学生将要选择一些针对高考的课程。他们要注意的第一件事就是衡量他们擅长的科目。一些学生擅长数学和物理,他们总是不擅长政治,他们应该继续学习理科。一些学生擅长语文和英语,他们应该选择文科。如果学生两者都擅长呢?我会建议他们选择他们感兴趣的科目。

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篇5:英语写作技巧一、词汇——用高级词汇取代低级词汇

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写作词汇提升是把“阅读词汇”转化为“写作词汇”的过程。举个例子,当我在课堂上问及大家“害怕”这个词英文表达的时候,很多同学不加思维的就告诉我是“afraid”,我再问大家这个词是什么时候学的时候,很多人恍然大悟,原来词汇早在初中甚至是小学的时候就学过了。那么,考研阅卷的老师如何以“afraid”这个词判断你到底是一个合格的大学毕业生还是一个仅仅上过初中的同学呢,现在我们就不难理解为什么考研写作的平均分只有满分的一半了。

当我们翻开大学的英语课本我们会发现,在大学的四年中(甚至只是大一大二的两年中)我们就学过很多表示“害怕”但却比“afraid”要高级的多的词汇,比如:horror,scared,astonished 等等。这当中的任何一个词都会比afraid得的分数要高,这就是所谓的高级词汇取代低级词汇的过程。

现在,我们就要树立一个思想,写作的最小组成单位是词汇,词汇有低级的(baby words)也有高级的(advanced words),想要得到考研写作高分的第一步就是要有意识的在写作中用高级词汇去取代相对低级的词汇,从而反映出自己的词汇表现能力(lexical resource)。

英语写作技巧二、句型 —— 学会自创简单句

考研写作最基本的句式称之为“自创句”。“自创句”是根据所要表达的含义完全自主创作的英文句子,其基础是语法知识。阅读时不理解某些语法现象仍然能理解文章,而写作要求精确,是和语法联系最为紧密的语言功能。其中,简单句是一切句子的基础,简单句的创作可三步走:

1. 根据句义确定唯一的谓语动词。

2. 根据动词种类(无宾、单宾、双宾、宾补或系动词)补全句子成分,如主语、宾语、宾语补足语和表语等。

3. 注意谓语动词和主语在人称和数上的一致。

英语写作技巧三、构思 —— 学习英文独特的思想表达方式

当我们有了高级的词汇和复杂的句型之后,是不是就一定能写出高分的作文了呢?不一定。写作是一个人思维的理性表达,因此,对于写作来说,思维方式的优劣更是一篇文章好与坏的根本性的指向标。

英文有自己独特的思想表达模式,要学会用英文的表达模式写作。所以建议大家在夯实词汇、句型之后多读多背多写,练习地道的英文写作思维方式。阅读和背诵是积累语言素材的关键,《新概念》序言中甚至提到“只写读过的语言”。在此基础之上,“纸上得来终觉浅,绝知此事要躬行”,阅读背诵素材之后,写作提高需要大量的实战演习

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篇6:高中英语作文:烦恼的青春期

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High school students have come into a sensitive stage, their bodies grow so fast and their minds have to keep up with the change.

The boys and girls start to realize the gender difference, there will be some awkward moments between them.

The troubled adolescent annoys many teenagers, because they have problems all the time. For the girls, they want to look as beautiful as the commercial models, so they go on a diet and struggle with hunger.

For the boys, they want to be as cool as the heroes in the TV, so they pretend to care about nothing and go against the school regulations.

The troubles teenagers meet are very typical, they can talk to their teachers or go to see the psychologist. They need to take the right attitudes towards these problems, or they will go the wrong way.

高中生来到了敏感的阶段,他们的身体快速成长,思想不得不跟上这样的变化。男孩和女孩意识到了性别的不同,他们之间会存在尴尬的时刻。烦恼青春期困恼着很多青少年,因为他们总是会有问题。

对于女孩来说,她们想要看起来和商业模特那样美丽,因此她们节食,挣扎于饥饿。对于男孩子来说,他们想要和电视上的英雄们那么酷,因此他们假装对一切不在意,违背校规。青少年遇到的麻烦是很典型的,他们可以和老师聊聊,或者去咨询心里医生。他们需要正确对待这些问题,不然容易走歪道。

[高中英语作文:烦恼的青春期

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篇7:高中英语作文:午后时光

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Today was Saturday, early in the morning, I woke up and stayed at home the whole morning to watch TV. After finishing my lunch, I had nothing to do, so I decided to call my friends out. I headed to the coffee shop which was near a square.

There were a lot of people in the square, some women were dancing and singing, while some men were taking the chess. I walked into the coffee shop, chose a table which was near the window, so that I could see the outside scenery.

When my friends came, we talked happily, we shared the things that happened during these days.

Then all my pressure was relieved, I forgot about the annoyance on my study. At that moment, I was enjoying the time talking with my friends. I had the great time this afternoon.

今天是星期六,一大早,我就起床了,整个上午,我都呆在家里看电视。

在吃完午饭后,我没有什么事情去做,因此我决定叫我的朋友们出去。我前往一家广场附近的咖啡店。广场里有很多人,一些女人在唱歌和跳舞,然而一些男人在下象棋。我走进了咖啡店,选择了一张近窗口的桌子,这样我就能看到外面的风景。

当我的朋友们来了以后,我们聊得很愉快,分享了在这段时间发生的事情。然后我所有的压力都得到了释放,我忘记了学习上的烦恼。在那个时刻,我享受着和朋友们聊天的时光。今天下午我度过了愉快的时光。

[高中英语作文:午后时光

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篇8:高中英语作文范文:学习英语之我见

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As soon as everyone steps into junior middle schools, English plays an important role in our daily life. Whats more, with China entering the WTO, English has become the most popular foreign language in China. As a student, I think everyone should have a good knowledge of English. However, nowadays the majority of students have great difficulty in learning English. How does the problem come about? For me, I am into English. In my opinion, the reason is that a great many students have no interest and confidence in learning English.

So, I think it is important to develop an interest in English and to remember that patience is the key to learning English. Then try your best and take every chance to communicate with others in English. Besides, by listening to English tapes you may make great progress. I suggest buying some English magazines and newspapers, such as English Weekly, the best among them, which will help you a lot.

Do as I have said above, you will be successful sooner or later.

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篇9:高中写人英语作文:怀孕的少女

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The Pregant Teenage Girl

Recently, a girl who was born after the year of 2000 showing a picture of her pregant image in Weibo. This teenage girl wrote down the words that she was busying giving birth to a child for her so called husband, who was also a teenager. Soon this picture became the hot issue. People were so shocked by the girl’s young face, which looked so innocent and she was just no more than 16!Such a young girl surely did not have the ability to raise a kid, what’s more, they even did not figure out the meaning of responsibility. The problem of family education was brought to the public again. The root of young pregancy lies in the parents’ caring. The lack of communication between parents and chidren is easy to have such problem. It is not appropriate to have baby at such early age.

最近,一个出生在2000年后的女孩在微博展示了她怀孕的照片。这少女写下一些话,她忙着为所谓的丈夫生孩子,他丈夫也是一个少年。很快这张照片成为了热点。人们如此震惊于这位女孩稚嫩的脸,她看上去很天真,不超过16 岁!这样一个年轻的女孩肯定没有能力抚养孩子,更重要的是,他们甚至没有弄清楚责任的意义。家庭教育的问题再次被带到公众面前。如此年轻就怀孕的根源在于父母的关怀程度。父母和子女之间缺乏沟通很容易有这样的问题。如此小的年纪就有孩子是不合适的。

[高中写人英语作文

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篇10:高中英语日记

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If you ask someone that do they often go to library, I think they will

answer you with no, the reason I am saying this because of the development of

ebook. Many years ago, without computer, the only way to check the information

that you need is from paper books, it means you need to go to the book shop or

the library, while with the development of the Internet, people have access to

the information very easily, you only need to click on the computer, then what

you look for is in front of you. Ebook is a very popular form for reading,

people can find what they want to read in the computer, like the novel story,

then download. It is so convenient and fast, it can save a lot of time, we don’t

need to go to the library if we are busy. Ebook is a good way for reading.

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如果你问一些人他们是否经常去图书馆,我觉得他们会回答不,我这样说的理由是因为电子书的发展。很多年前没有电脑,你想要核查你所需要的信息,唯一的方法就是去找纸质书,这意味着你需要去书店或者图书馆,然而随着电脑的发展,人们能很轻易得到信息,你只需要点击电脑,然后你所寻找的就会在你眼前。电子书是一种很受欢迎的阅读方式,人们可以在电脑上找到他们想要阅读的,比如小说,然后下载。这很方便快捷,能够省时,我们不需要去图书馆,如果我们很忙的话。电子书是阅读的好方式。

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篇11:高中英语作文:如何高效学习英语

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There is no doubt that learning English is vital for us. On the onehand, English has become an international language that people can communicatewith each other in many countries. On the other hand, if we learn English well,we could get more chance of success.

毫无疑问,学习英语对于我们来说是至关重要的。一方面,英语已成为国际语言人们在很多国家都可以用之来交流。另一方面,如果我们学好英语,我们成功的几率就会更高。

However, it is well-known that there are many methods for us tolearn English well. There are some tips. First, we can study in a group toimprove learning efficiency. Second, we could listen to English songs and watchEnglish movies; this way is very suitable for student to improve theirlistening and speaking abilities. Third, I have believed that a great deal ofpractice can strengthen language knowledge.

然而,众所周知学好英语有很多方法。这有一些小提示。首先,我们可以集体学习来提高学习效率。第二,我们可以听英文歌曲或者看英文电影;这种方式非常适合学生用来提高他们的听力和口语能力。第三,我认为,大量的练习可以加强语言知识。

In a word, it is natural for us to learn English well by making efforts.If we didnt work hard, we would never do well in learning English.

总之,学好英语要付出努力是很自然的。如果我们不努力,我们永远都不会学好英语。

[高中英语作文:如何高效学习英语

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篇12:高中英语作文:对手机的看法

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With the development of science and technology, smart phone becomes more and more popular. Even the students on campus begin to use handphone. Is it a good or bad thing?

随着科学和技术的发展,手机变得越来越流行,就连在校园里的学生也开始使用手机了。这到底是好还是坏?

Smart phone , on one hand, is good for students. For one thing , it enables students to keep in touch with their friends and family more conveniently and quickly. For another, it makes students fashionable and proud.

手机一方面来说对学生是有利的,举例来说,它能使学生与朋友和家人更方面快捷的取得联系。同时,它也使学生感到很时尚和骄傲。

On the other hand, smart phone has a negative effect on the students. First , it will cost them more money than before. Second, it will distract them from their study and life. Third, it will sometimes become a nuisance especially when it rings in classroom or in the library.

但另一方面,智能手机对学生也有负面作用。首先,手机会让学生们比以前花费更多的钱。其次,智能手机也让人更容易从学习和生活中分心。第三,智能手机让人感到麻烦和讨厌,尤其是在图书馆里或者是上课的时候。

so , smart phone is a good thing .However , the students should use it well .

所以,智能手机是个好东西,但是,学生们也要好好使用才行。

[高中英语作文:对手机的看法

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篇13:高中关于国庆节英语

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October 1st is the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the whole country. It’s an important day that marks the beginning of PRC. On that day, there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from the central government to the general people. And public places, including big squares, parks are decorated in festive theme. In recent years, the national holiday means the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people expect to. With the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desire to travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. Besides, for those people who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. Therefore, the national day means a lot to the Chinese.

10月1日是我国的国庆节,这对于整个国家是一个公共假日。这是一个重要的日子,标志着中华人民共和国开始。在那一天,有很多庆祝控股全国,从中央政府到一般人。和公共场所,包括大广场,公园在节日的装饰主题。近年来,国家节日意味着黄金周,这是一个短暂的假期,所有的人都期待。随着生活水平的提高,人们有更多的钱和渴望旅游黄金周是一个很好的机会。除此之外,对于那些人不出去,这是一个很好的时间来好好休息一下。因此,中国的国庆节意味着很多。

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篇14:高中英语作文:奥巴马的最后任职期限

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Barack Obama who is the first black president in America will finish his last term of office soon. He is going to move away the White House and relieve his job as president. I still remember the time when Obama won the election and gave his inspiring speech, he said he wanted to make some changes to America.

Now 8 years have passed, his words have been tested.

Some people think he is a good president even though they don’t think what Obama brought to the country did not make a big difference.

But no one will deny that Obama is very humorous, it is known to all that he likes to watch the TV series. He keeps his eyes on them and sometimes he will play jokes in his personal Facebook. During his last term, he joined the talk show and showed his humor.

美国历史上第一位黑人总统巴拉克奥巴马很快就会完成他的最后任期。

他将离开白宫和卸下他作为总统的工作。我还记得当年奥巴马赢得大选, 发表了鼓舞人心的演讲,他说他想给给美国带来一些改变。

现在8年过去了,他的话会得到检验。有些人认为他是一个好总统,即使他们并不认为奥巴马给国家带来很大的影响。

但没有人会否认,奥巴马很幽默,众所周知,他喜欢看电视连续剧。他一直关注着美剧,有时他会在他的个人脸谱账号上玩笑。在他最后的任期里,他还参加了谈话节目,展示了他的幽默。

[高中英语作文:奥巴马的最后任职期限

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篇15:高中英语作文:终身学习

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Once Chairman Mao said one is never too old to learn, his famous words inspire people to keep learning all their lives. Since we are small, we study at school, then we have to learn until we are at college, after graduate from college, we finish our education in the school.

Then the new stage comes, we start to work, making money, learning knowledge seems unnecessary to us.

This is totally wrong, we learn all the time, even we are out of school, we have lessons from life.

Life is a big topic, we have to learn it all the time. We have to deal with trouble, learning to make friends and accept fail.

All these things we will not learn at school, we have to learn by ourselves, we are students and teachers. If you think you finish learning after school, you are narrow minded.

毛主席曾经说过“一个人要活到老学到老”,他的著名话语激励着人们终身学习

当我们还小的时候,我们在学校学习,然后直到大学前,我们都要学习,大学毕业后,我们完成了在学校的学习。然后新的阶段到来,我们开始工作,挣钱,学习知识似乎不必要了。

这是完全错误的,我们一直学习,即使不在学校,我们学习生活。生活是一个大主题,我们不得不一直学习。我们要处理麻烦,学着交朋友和接受失败。所有的这些东西我们都不会在学校学到,我们必须自己学习,即是学生也是老师。如果你觉得你出了学校后就完成了学习,你的思想就很狭隘了。

[高中英语作文:终身学习

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篇16:高中英语作文动物园一日游

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A Day in the Zoo

There has been a long time for my family not to go out for the activity, because my father is busy all the time. But last week, my father finally finished his project, so that he could take a rest for some time. My father advised us to go to the zoo, I was so excited, because I hadn’t seen many animals in my life. In the zoo, there were so many people, it was so lively. I saw the monkey, the giraffe and so on. I saw these animals in the TV usually, but I saw them in front of me that day. The peacock impressed me so much, it looked homely when it laid down the ground, but when it stood up and opened the wings, it was so gorgeous. People said peacock was proud, indeed, it would not please people. I had a good time in the zoo.

对于我的家人来说,我们已经有很长一段时间没有外出活动了,因为爸爸总是很忙。但是上周,我的爸爸终于完成了他的项目,所以他能休息一段时间。爸爸建议我们去动物园,我很兴奋,因为我目前还没有看到过很多动物。在动物园里,有很多人,非常热闹。我看到了猴子,长颈鹿等等。我平常在电视上看到这些动物,但是那天我亲眼看到了。孔雀给我的印象很深刻,在它躺在地上的时候,看起来很普通,但是当它站起来,打开翅膀,是那么的美丽。人们说孔雀是傲慢的,确实,它不会取悦人们。在动物园里我度过了一段美好的时光。

[高中英语作文动物园一日

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篇17:高中英语作文:我的英语老师

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OnceI studied in middle school, I met a very nice English teacher. Her name wasClara. Although I have left her for a long time, I still remember her verywell. It was her who gave me the enthusiasm to learn English, and it was alsoher who pulled me up when I stumbled.

在我读中学的时候,我遇到了一个非常好的英语老师。她的名字是克拉拉。虽然我离开她已经很长时间了,但我仍然记得她。是她给了我学习英语的热情,也是她在我跌倒时扶我一把。

Thefirst time I saw her, I was very surprised, because she was very young andbeautiful. She was also humorous. She always made her classes lively andinteresting. As she always did the activities with us, she was not only ourteacher, but also our best partner.

我第一次见到她的时候,我感到非常惊讶,因为她很年轻很漂亮。她还很幽默。她总是让她的课生动有趣。因为她总是与我们互动,所以她不仅是我们的老师,也是我们的最好的伙伴。

What’smore, she was very patient and responsible. Every time I was in trouble, shealways offered me a hand. She was willing to communicate with me. I didnt knowhow to appreciate her. Without her, my English cant be so good.

更重要的是她很有耐心和责任心。每次我遇到麻烦的时候,她总是帮助我。她愿意和我交流。我不知道如何感谢她。没有她,我的英语不会这么好的。

[高中英语作文:我的英语老师

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篇18:2024中考英语写作指导:作文为什么被扣分

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中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同,一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。

一:先看一下扣分点:

1.内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

2.字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误:每4个扣0.5.

二:加分点

除了这些扣分点,还有一些得分点:比如说作文的组织结构分,就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

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篇19:初中英语作文写作技巧精选

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要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

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篇20:有关艺术英语作文高中

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Since I was very small, my parents sent me to learn painting. They thought

I could understand art and mastered one skill. This experience brings me the

sense of art. I have my own understanding of it.

On the one hand, art is an important way to express peoples opinion. When

we see the pictures, the difference between classical and ordinary paintings

lies in the thoughts. The famous artists implant their ideas in the pictures,

which are admitted by the public, so the value of arts can be seen. Some famous

artists expressed their unique opinion and gives arts great meaning.

On the other hand, art is not only from works, but also from life. For

example, my mother cooks the delicious food. Everybody speaks highly of her. So

her food brings people great happiness, which makes the food an art for me.

Whats more, my friends is good at communicating. The way she talks can convince

other easily, so I call the way she communicates as an art.

In all, for me, art is around. It brings people a way to see the world or

makes our life wonderful.

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