中考英语作文保护动物【汇编20篇】

世界上有很多昆虫都对人类有益，所以小动物是我们的朋友，我们应该爱护它们。而且有很多小动物是我们平常经常见到的，和我们的生活密切相关呢!

比如说：蜜蜂，它很勤劳，每天很早就出去采蜜，一次又一次。到了天黑，还马不停蹄地对采来的蜜进行加工。蜜蜂的外形并不起眼，生命也很短暂，只有3个月左右;可它一生都不休息，勤勤恳恳地工作，它们对人类毫无所求，却为人们酿造了甘甜可口、营养丰富、可医治病痛的蜂蜜。

还有青蛙，青蛙披着碧绿的衣裳，两只大眼睛，像两颗晶莹透明的玻璃球，它藏在田里，专吃害虫，保护庄稼。它捉害虫的时候两条后腿一蹬，一纵身，能跳起老高，长长的舌头一伸，就像吸尘器一样转眼就把害虫吃到肚子里去了。可是，我们人类却把它们当成美味佳肴摆在餐桌上。

还有许多可爱的动物，我最喜欢的是大熊猫。大熊猫是我国珍贵的动物，妈妈告诉我大熊猫还是我们国家的国宝呢!大熊猫长的很可爱，胖乎乎、圆滚滚的，走起路来一摇一晃的，特别逗人。它的头部和身体都是白色的，只有眼圈、耳朵和肩部是黑色的。特别是那一对黑黑的眼圈，长在白白的脸上，像是戴着一副墨镜，加上那笨拙的动作和走起路来东张西望的神情，显得像个小绅士。

你瞧!它们多么可爱，它们是我们人类的好朋友，我们怎么忍心伤害它们呢!

最近我发现有很多人捕捉青蛙或卖青蛙，使好多青蛙死于非命，这件事令我非常痛心。

青蛙是动物世界中最出色的“农田卫士”。青蛙主要以农业害虫为食物。通过观察知道，无论是能飞的螟蛾，善跳的蝗虫，躲在叶卷里的稻苞虫，钻进棉桃里的棉铃虫，隐藏在地下洞穴里的蝼蛄，只要它们一出来活动，青蛙就会立即捉住它们。青蛙是捉害虫能手，它捉害虫全靠他又长又宽的舌头，舌根长在口腔的前面，舌尖向后，还分叉，上有许多黏液，只要小飞虫从身边飞过，就猛地往上一跳，张开大嘴，快速地伸出长长的舌头，一下子把害虫吃掉。青蛙是保护农田的功臣，我们都要爱护它。青蛙的机体中亦含有多肽类、多种维生素、诸类生物激素、酶和保湿因子。据统计，一只大约青蛙每天吃60多只害虫，从春季到秋季的6、7个月中，一只青蛙就可以消灭一万多只害虫，这是多么大的功劳哇！

假如世界上没有了蝗虫的天敌---青蛙，那么蝗虫会肆无忌惮地繁殖，那时候，上亿的蝗虫就会像雨一样落进稻田里，大吃大啃，使稻谷产量日益减少。一只蛙在一昼夜，如果仅以早晚饱餐两顿计算，它所捕食的虫约有70只，1个月为20xx只。就连古人都赞美青蛙。

春天，青蛙在水草上产卵，卵慢慢地变成蝌蚪。蝌蚪是黑色的，圆圆的身体，有一条长尾巴，蝌蚪一天天长大，先长出后腿，再长出前腿，尾巴渐渐地缩短退化，最后变成青蛙。

保护我们的“农田卫士”——青蛙吧！

中考英语作文1：my friend

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

中考英语作文2：my friend

My good friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate.

Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.

We will be good friends forever.

中考英语作文3：my friend

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .

shark-skin like swimsuit

A new high-performance swimsuit,developed by mimicking the skin of sharks,will be worn by top athletes in Athens from this week.

The revolutionary new fabric,developed by Speedo,is the result of four years of research and development that began with the study of shark skin at the Natural History Museum .

The new swimsuit,called Fastskin FSII,increases a swimmers speed by reducing passive drag through water by up to 4% more than the next best swimsuit.

Research into shark skin texture and movement through water was carried out under the guidance of Natural History Museum fish expert Ollie Crimmen.

Tiny teeth cover the surface of a sharks skin and the shape and positioning of these teeth vary across the body to manage the flow of water.

With these findings Speedo created a full bodyskin with different fabrics on different parts of the body and for the first time,male- and female-specific and stroke-specific swimsuits.

导语：越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

(1)遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

(3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道、zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

关于交通问题的中考英语作文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Dont play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【参考译文】

随着越来越多的汽车走进我们的家庭，我们很高兴它大大改善了我们的生活。但不幸的是，它也带来了许多问题，如交通拥挤和交通事故。

交通安全人人有责。我们必须遵守规定!例如，我们必须走在一边，当我们过斑马线，停下来，看左，右，然后跨越快速。不要在马路上踢足球，我们可以告诉父母开车前不要喝酒，不要闯红灯，开车时不要说话和笑。

我们可以说汽车正在进入我们的生活，但只有当每个人都认为交通安全是每个人的业务，我们可以安全驾驶道路和人行道上行走。

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted, we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals are getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky. The population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution. It’s our duty to protect our environment. We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. Trees are very helpful and important for us. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.

If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. “There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

[英语作文保护环境200字

Mamma you gave life to me，Turned a babysintosa man，And mamma all you had to of fer Was a prom is e of a lifetime of love,Now I know there is no other

love like a Mothers.Love for her child,I know that love so complete someday must leave.Must say goodbye,Goodbyes the saddest word,I＇ll ever hear.Goodbyes the last time I will hold you near,Someday you＇ll say that word and I will cry,It＇ll break my heart to hear you say Goodbye.

Mamma you gave love to me,And Mamma all I ever needed Was guarantee of you loving me,Cause I know there is no other love like a mother,the love you give will always live,You＇ll always be there every time I fall,You take my weakness and you make me strong,And I will always love you till forever comes.And when you need me,I＇ll be there for you always,I＇ll be there thru the lonely days.You are the wings that guide my

broken flight,and my shelter thru the raging storm,And I will love you till forever comes.

妈妈你给了我生命，从婴儿到老人，妈妈，你不得不更是舞会是E的一辈子的爱，现在我知道有没有其他的

爱情就像一个母亲。爱她的孩子，我知道，爱是如此完整的总有一天要离开。必须说再见，再见伤心的话，我＇将永远听到。再见最后一次我会抱着你靠近，总有一天你＇会说那句话，而我将会哭泣，它＇将打破我的心听到你说再见。

妈妈你给我爱，妈妈，所有我所需要的是保证你爱我，因为我知道有没有其他的爱，像一个母亲，你给的爱会永远活，你＇将总是有每次我跌倒，你拿我的弱点，你让我坚强，和我将永远爱你直到永远是。，当你需要我，我＇会永远在那里等你，我＇会有穿过寂寞的日子。你的翅膀，我的向导

破碎的飞行，和我的庇护通过肆虐的风暴，我会爱你直到永远。

[中考英语作文MY MOTHER’S LOVE

These days, different ways are being taken to protect cultural identity. Obviously, not only is much contribution made to maintain old houses but also rules of laws associated with cultural protection are changed for the better. Some people even say that new buildings are right to be set up in the conventionalway. I seem to be one of opponents who believe that the action can be unsuitable in our world.

One of the main reasons is that most of traditional buildings, in my nation, that offer provide few rooms can hardly hard to meet the demands for housing as increasing numbers of people pour into the city. Compared to before, todays population has doubled and even trebled, which puts seriouspressure on housing supply. As a result, new buildings must be substituted for old ones that have more efficient utility, even for some old buildings that have been damaged seriously.

No doubts that building or maintaining traditional buildings is very essential to raise art sense and increase choices of peoples housing. Plus, these old houses are believed as very important resources to attract international visitors. However, the proportionof traditional houses has to be under control, and otherwise the housing of citizens is badly affected.

Overall, my view is that cultural identity is so preciousthat more efforts and measures should be taken but carefully. The excellent tradition helps with deep understanding of history, and educates youths. Nevertheless a simple and recklessbehavior. that new buildings are built in a typical way does more harm than good in the improvement of peoples being.

[传统建筑保护英语作文

保护动物，人人有责!相信大家都深知这句话的意思。

从前，有一个一年级的小学生小明，他的父亲天天到外面去打猎，没时间管他的学习。因此，他的成绩一直都不好。每天晚上，他的父亲都会捕来几只动物。他的父亲这样残杀动物，小明很伤心。“爸爸，不要再杀动物了，您知道杀动物是一件多么严重的事吗?这样会破坏生物链的，到头来，受损的还是我们呀!”小明说。他的爸爸严厉的回答说“你这么小懂什么?有时间就好好弄弄你的学习成绩吧!如果不打猎，靠什么吃饭?怎么供你上学?”小明说“那我好好学习，每次都得奖学金，你是不是就不打猎了?”“对，只要你的奖学金，我就不打猎”从此，小明就天天都努力学习。果然，在初中的时候学校答应只要他考试得第一名的时候就会给他奖学金。他的父亲也信守诺言，再也不打猎了。

就连一个一年级的小学生都懂的道理，难道那么多的猎人就想不清吗?你们有没有想过，假如你是一只动物，人类无缘无故的就把你杀了，你会愿意吗?肯定是千万个不愿意。俗话说得好“己所不欲，勿施于人。”你自己都不愿意，那动物们会愿意吗?就因为捕猎，现在都有多少种动物灭绝了，你们知道吗?已经800种了，这个数字看起来是不大，但是把每种动物的数量加起来，你们知道是多少吗?你们算过吗?破坏生物链，对人类一点好处都没有。

让我们行动起来，一起保护动物，从我做起。

Nowadays, there are more and more students becoming short-sighted. Some students get short-sightedness when they are little. There are fifteen students wearing glasses in my class. Being short-sighted is common among students, even in primary school. That is too serious. Therefore, we should protect our eyes carefully. When we are reading and writing, we should keep a standard posture. Besides, we should not watch TV or play computer for too long. They are bad for our eyes. And, we should do eyes exercises regularly. A good rest is also important to our eyes. In all, eyes are the windows of our mind. We should keep it healthy.

The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better

Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it. Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.

译文：地球是我们的家，我们有责任照顾它为我们自己和后代。幸运的是，越来越多的人已经意识到这些问题。已采取措施来对付这些问题的政府。法律已经通过了停止污染。我希望这个问题将得到解决在不久的将来，我们的家园会越来越好

与环境和谐的是，我们生活在地球上，谁是自然的儿子，不仅自然人作为征服者，我们都知道，只有一个地球和地球上山脉的动物。人类细胞植物，如果它损坏，销毁性质组织，以消灭人类。因此，必须在环境与社会伦理，品德教育和实践行为的重要组成部分它。每个人都必须履行其责任和义务来保护环境。

Every man know elephants. But do you know now the elephants are becoming fewer and fewer. Its a serious problem. Let me tell you about the elephants.

Elephant are the biggest mammal on land. They can live up to 80 years.They are so cute.Their ivory is so pretty and expensive that many people kill them to get their ivory. So they can make much money by selling the ivory. Also,elephants are also losing their homes bacause people cut down lots of trees. There cause that there are only a few elephants in the world now.

What should we do to save and protect the elephants? In my opinion,we can often seveal and try to stop others cutting down trees around us.

And we mustnt buy the ivory,because no buying, no killing.

文章文体：议论文。

文章要点：1.保护环境的重要性；2.学生在家庭中节约能源的具体做法和感想；3.今后的打算。

文章框架：文章应该是三部分两段式。第一段（包括要点前两部分）1.环保的重要性；2  接着是站在学生的角度谈谈家庭节约能源的具体方法，第二段写第三要点，即谈谈今后打算。  重要句型短语：It is important to protect our environment, the energy in the world is limited. turn off the light and other appliance when you ,re not using them, wed better not waste the energy, use public transportation, recycle the waste，I can learn more to develop new and clear energy, like the energy from the wind and solar 等。

参考例文：

With the development of our society, energy in the world becomes more and more limited, so it is quite important for us to save energy and to protect our environment. As a student, there are a lot of methods we can do to save energy at home. For example, first, we can turn off the light as well as other appliances when we are not using them. Second, recycle the waste water, paper and other waste so that we can reuse them. Whats more, it is suggested to use public transportation more instead of private cars.

Above all, everyone can make a great contribution to our environment. I hope I can learn more to develop new and clear energy, like energy from the wind and solar.

My favourite animal is the panda,is our"national treasure",bacause pandas nive,lovable and lively,it was very likr it.panda is an ancient animal,is a zoologist called "living fossile " long ago there were many pandas in china,panda bamoo living area has large flowers,dead,threatening the survival of giant pandas.The whole world is extremely concerned about the rare giant panda rescue and transfer work.due to the destruction of the natural balance,climate warming,fewer and fewer panda.Panda is one of endangered animals,now only found in China,Sichuan,Shaanxi,Gansu,people began to conserve this endangered species.Today,the number of pandas has increased,but there is still a long way to go.Care for animals,is to protect human,we should be animals as mans best friend,to care,to protect them.Protection of animals is a duty of each person,let us work together to protect the giant pandas,giving them a good home.

i have two great-grandfathers, one from my mother’s side. my father’s grandfather is now97 years old and lives. in toufen although his eyesight and hearing is poor, his mind is still sharp and clear.

he always asks each visitor many pertinent questions and shares his ideas and opinions. he often talks with a loud voice and with much enthusiasm and energy. he can remember all he can remember all the names of his relatives and friends.

in his youth he was trained to be a medical doctor; through his life he was an avid reader.

[中考英语作文:我的曾祖父

Every year on October 4th is the World Animal Day. It is proposed by the Italian monk St Francis in 12th century. He lives in the forests of Assisi Island for the long time, building a good relationship with the animals. So he asks people to express thanks to the animals on October 4th. He sets a good example for our human beings about how to deal with the relationship with animals. In order to memorize him and what he does, we make October, 4th to be World Animal Day. Nowadays, people from all over the world will hold various activities to celebrate on that day. The aim of this festival is to remind people to care for all animals and build a harmonious relationship with them.

每年的十月四日是世界动物日。它是由意大利修道士圣弗兰西斯在十二世纪提出的。他长期生活在阿西西岛上的森林中，与动物建立了良好的关系。所以他要求村民们在10月4日这天向动物表示感谢。他为如何正确处理与动物的关系树立了一个很好的榜样。后人为了纪念他和他所做的，我们把十月四号定为世界动物日。现在，在那一天来自世界各地的人会用各种活动来庆祝这一节日。这一节日的目的在于提醒人们关爱所有的动物，与他们建立和谐的关系。

There’s no doubt that my mother gives all her love to me. I do believe she is a great person who makes my life beautiful and meaningful.

She is an easygoing and kind woman with bright eyes and a lovely smile. Although she is often busy, I still feel that I am taken good care of by her. It’s a great pleasure to chat with her when I get into troubles. She always encourages me not to give up and tries to cheer me up by coming up with good solutions. In addition, I am fascinated by her cooking and writing.

With her love, I feel like a fish swimming happily in a beautiful sea. I’ll cherish her love forever.

[我的母亲英语中考作文

Since the childhood like monkeys, because it looks very interesting.

Its head is always kept, eyes are east Chou west look, seems to be especially alert. Its ears pointed out, as long as there is any voice, it will. You scratch it little fluffy, a moment that, clenched it after a while, always do. A yellowish-brown fur also as it is not honest body shaking, as if she was full of lice, this is fun. Monkeys limbs is very flexible, blink of an eye kung fu can move from one tree to another tree, sometimes used it long tail roll the branches on the swings, let me see the very is envy.

Monkeys have a lot of skills. On one occasion, our family went to the circus performance, turn the monkey play, see it quickly on the bike, bottom a twist twist to turned around and turn around the site. Saw it on the spinning bike for a while to a handstand, for a while over, and the superb skills that I may see it is stunned, think about your bicycle also fell a couple of times, in the sight of the little monkey cant help but let me sit up and take notice. Just thinking, little monkey came to the next to the steel wire rope, swaggering go up, it surprised me. All the audience hold their breath, staring at the thin wire. Little monkey is easily walked forward firmly. Suddenly, it to a big upside down, the audience and a brawn, it upside down. This bottom can be shocked the whole audience, thunderous applause to the special animal actors, I am more excited to quickly put the red film.

Oh, little monkey is so the stars of the animal kingdom!

导语：很多东西都面临灭绝的危险，我们应该保护动物，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly. For example, with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrowcr and narrower. Many of the wild animals, now are confronted with food crisis. At the same time, man is killing off species just for getting their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat.

In order to protect our resources of ecology, people should realize that the loss of any species is at least the loss of source of knowledge and a source of natural beauty. There fore, measures of the following should be taken: pollution standards are made to keepdown poisons; killing off certain rare species is prohibited; national parks should be set up as wild life, reserves.

Only if we human beings take some drastic measures can wild animals be preserved.

【参考译文】

许多野生动物正面临灭绝的危险，因为它们生活的环境已经发生了巨大的变化。例如，随着城市的发展，杀虫剂的使用和严重的污染，他们的生活区域变得越来越狭小。许多野生动物现在面临食物危机。同时，人类为了获取皮毛、皮肤、角、牙和肉而捕杀物种。

为了保护我们的生态资源，人们应该意识到任何物种的损失至少是知识的源泉和自然美的源泉。因此，本应采取以下措施：制订污染标准以降低有毒物质;严禁杀害某些稀有物种;应建立国家公园作为野生动物，保护区。

只有人类采取一些激烈的措施，野生动物才能被保存下来。

一日三餐，都要吃东西，而肉则是必不可少的，我们吃的大多数都是鸡鸭鱼肉，这些没啥大不了。可是一些珍稀动物也被摆上了餐桌，如鳄鱼，江豚，鲸等。

我们都是地球妈妈的孩子，又何必要向兄弟姐妹下此毒手呢？

其实大自然是一个相当复杂的食物链，里面的生物可谓缺一不可。缺了其中的任何一种都会早产极大的后果，就会乱了套。在此就举几个例子吧：

蛇，众所周知蛇是无足的爬行动物的总称目前全球共有3000多种蛇类。身体细长，四肢退化，无可活动的眼睑，无耳孔，无四肢，无前肢带，身体表面覆盖有鳞。部分有毒，但大多数无毒。蛇类中最毒的要数大洋洲的太攀蛇和内陆太攀蛇。它每咬一口释出的毒液已足够杀死100个成年人，最长的蛇要属网斑蟒它。

是人们知道的唯一体长达10米的蟒蛇。网斑蟒通常生活在热带的亚洲地区，依靠身体的重量缠死猎物，眼镜王蛇也应是大家较为熟悉的一种，是最长的毒蛇，喜欢捕食蛇。你们知道吗，在一些地方蛇已经成为了保护动物。你们知道吗蛇的毒液已被用来治疗一些不治之症。而且可以成为史上最强的麻醉剂。

再说鳄鱼。鳄鱼是迄今发现活着的最早和最原始的动物之一，它是在三叠纪至白垩纪的中生代（ 约两亿年以前）由两栖类进化而来，延续至今仍是半水生且性情凶猛的爬行动物，它和恐龙是同时代的动物，恐龙的灭绝不管是环境的影响，还是自身的原因，都已是化石；鳄鱼的存在证明它更加强盛的生命力。

被誉为活化石的他们已经越来越无法适应当前的环境了，仅存的23种中，有17大概种处在濒危状态鳄鱼全身都是宝，他们的皮可以做为鳄皮大衣，肉可以做成汤， 血清提取出来的胎蛋白将成为史上最强大的抗生素，甚至可以抗击艾滋病。这可谓是一项重大成功的发现。

啊！

朋友们，动物的大量毁灭对人类将产生严重的不良后果，造成生态环境严重不平衡，从而使人类的生存环境遭到破坏。消灭动物，就是在消灭人类自己，如果有一天世界上的动物全都消失了，那人类还能生存吗？要保护动物，珍惜这自然界里的每一个生灵吧！

让我们从现在做起，从我做起，保护动物，使世界变得更美好吧！保护动物，就是保护人类自己。

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下面是语文迷网为大家整理提供的中考英语作文高分指导，希望对你有帮助。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于assoonas、stopsomebodyfromdoingsomething、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、givesomebodyahand、giveahandtosomebody、beinneedof等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：MynameisJim.I’mJim.I’mcalled/namedJim.I’maboycalled/named/withthenameofJim.等等。

表达年龄的方式有：Sheis12.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaged12.Sheisagirlof12(yearsold)。Sheisagirlaged12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

四、耐心修改，提炼句子

很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕，高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实，这时候，不妨从以下方面去修改，相信会让你受益匪浅的。

1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等

当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后，在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力，你务必要选择高级的。例如，就以今年中考的英语作文为例，它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达法，有oldpeople和theold。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理，作文中的“病人”的表达法有sickpeople，patients，thesick，你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢?当然是thesick了。

2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点

我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢?换为最简单的表达法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文题，就要求学生表达一个意思：帮助同学，可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”，面对这样的问题怎么办呢?怎么不换个说法呢?你看，Ifwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings，wecanmakeourfriendshiplonger。不就达到目的了吗?

3、大胆改变句型，使之生辉

例如，我们将一些句子改为感叹句，复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何乐而不为呢?

4、高度关注句与句、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然，衔接紧凑。

5、适当引用个别谚语或警句，来提高作文档次。

五、一丝不苟抄誊作文

一篇好的作文，经过审题、修改之后，务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上，再认真地仔细检查一遍，那才是大公告成了。