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182篇1:小学生期末考试英语作文素材
全文共 797 字
+ 加入清单A great poem is a fountain forever overflowing with the waters of wisdom and delight .(P. B. Shelley , British poet )
伟大的诗篇即是永远喷出智慧和欢欣之水的喷泉。(英国诗人 雪莱. P. B)
A novel is a mirror walking along a main road .( Stendhcl , French writer )
一部小说犹如一面在大街上走的镜子。 (法国作家 司汤达)
Art is a lie that tells the truth .( Picasso , Spanish painter )
美术是揭示真理的谎言。 (西班牙画家 毕加索)
Humor has been well defined as thinking in fun while feeling in earnest. (Mark Twain , American novelist )
幽默被人正确地解释为“以诚挚表达感受,寓深思于嬉笑”。(美国小说家 马克·吐温)
The decline of literature indicates the decline of a nation ; the two keep in their downward tendency.( Johan Wolfgang von Goethe , German poet )
文学的衰落表明一个民族的衰落。这两者走下坡路的时间是齐头并进的。(德国诗人 歌德 . J . W .)
When one loves one‘s art no service seems too hard .( O. Henry, American novelist )
一旦热爱艺术,什么奉献也不难。 (美国小说家 欧·亨利)
篇2:英语考试作文400字
全文共 392 字
+ 加入清单前不久,我们英语期中考试了,我得到了一个比较满意的分数·····95.我的眼睛笑的迷成了一条缝,每一次考试同学们都会变成大眼瞪小眼,使人看过之后哭笑不得,这不,同学们的大眼睛变成了小眼睛!
米老师很快的给我们把卷子发了下来,开始考了。就像往常测试一样的考了。隐约可以听到铅笔“沙沙沙”的响声,就像一首动听的曲子,令人陶醉在这个“沙沙沙”的曲子中,过了一两分钟,这首动听的曲子听了,我们不约而同的停住了手中的笔,只有英语课代表没有停止手中的笔。而同学们都在吹着手中的汗,满头的汗不停的在往下流。尤其是英语课代表,嘴里一直在不停的念着英语单词,不愧是英语班长。单词总是在口中喋喋不休得念 ,我看完之后不得不伸出大拇指说一声“佩服”简直是佩服不已。第二天,成绩下来了,我的英语成绩是95分。英语课代表是100分,这时米老师来了。看到同学们很开心就知道我们考好了。这次英语考试。使同学们很开心.
篇3:高一英语期末考试
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+ 加入清单Environment Protection
Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.
Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, agreat number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.
For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.
篇4:大学生该不该追求名牌大学英语等级考试六级作文
全文共 963 字
+ 加入清单Recently, the phenomenon of students pursue famous brands has become the focus of the public concern.They always do anything in order to buy what they want. What has caused this problem?It is no easy/simple task to offer the reason for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factor.
There are two aspects reason as follows. On the one hand,with the development of the economy/society/people’s living standard, we can afford the articles of luxury. On the other hand,the mind of rivalry is the most important reason.The topic of the famous brands is the main idea among the students, they think a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.
To change this situation, I suggest that college school students should cultivate positive values and look at things in a proper way.Although brand is the best way to show their status,we shouldn’t pursuit brand blindly.students ought to pay much attention to their studies.
篇5:英语考试
全文共 649 字
+ 加入清单“我这次英语考得不错!” 英语调研考试结束了,同学们小声议论着,大家看起来都很自信,我也有信心能考一百分。
这不由得让我想起黄老师经常对我们说的一句话:信心来自于实力,实力来自大家的努力。我们也是因为努力过,才有今天的自信啊!可我的心里却像打翻了的五味瓶有一种说不出的滋味。
记得考试前一天,我们上了将近一天的英语课,同学们认真地听老师讲着,认真地做着笔记。老师也很辛苦地为我们一题一题地讲解,为第二天的英语调研考试做准备,可我还会偶尔思想开小差,没有把考试放在眼里,可正是因为这次考试,使我知道了我应该好好地听讲。
考试当天,监考老师拿着一堆试卷走进我们教室。上课铃一响,就把试卷发下来了,同学们拿起笔,“唰唰唰……”地写了起来,我过五关斩六将,在前面听力部分做得很轻松,最后只有一道选择题实在想不起来,我的心像十五个吊桶打水——七上八下。我看了一下表,还有二十分钟呢?难道就白白浪费了吗?这道题两分呢,我可错不起,我一定要做出来!我又看了看题目,使劲回忆老师平时讲的内容,这时一个念头闪过了我的脑海,抄!我向老师看了看,老师正在低头找东西。这可是最好机会,可再想一想老师昨天为我们复习了一天,难道老师的辛苦换来的就只是抄吗?我不能这样,我静下心来,把答案一个一个地带进题目中试读,然后,终于得出了答案!对,选C。考试后,我又与同学对了一下,对了,我高兴得蹦跳了起来。
这次考试,让我明白了抄是我们不应该做的,我们要在平时下功夫,认真学习,好好听讲,因为成功就来自平时的努力。这是一次让我受益匪浅的考试。
篇6:英语考试后的反思
全文共 508 字
+ 加入清单因为审题不仔细,做题没有看清,粗心马虎等原因造成,这次英语考试没有考好,只考了84分,我感到很抱歉,辜负了老师家长的殷切希望,我以后考试一定会仔细做题目,认真对待每一题,我会更加努力地学习,争取在以后的考试中取得优异的成绩!
这次英语月考之所以没有考好,总结原因如下: 1 平时没有养成细致认真的习惯,考试的时候答题粗心大意、马马虎虎,导致很多题目会做却被扣分甚至没有做对。 2 准备不充分。毛主席说,不打无准备之仗。言外之意,无准备之仗很难打赢,我却没有按照这句至理名言行事,导致这次考试吃了亏。 3 没有解决好兴趣与课程学习的矛盾。自己有很多兴趣,作为一个人,一个完整的人,一个明白的人,当然不应该同机器一样,让自己的兴趣被平白无故抹煞,那样不仅悲惨而且无知,但是,如果因为自己的兴趣严重耽搁了学习就不好了,不仅不好,有时候真的是得不偿失。 失败了怎么办?认真反思是首先的: 第一,这次失败的原因是什么?要认真思考,挖掘根本的原因; 第二,你接下来要干什么?确定自己的目标,不要因为失败不甘心接着走,而是要正确地衡量自己。看看想要什么,自己的优势在什么地方,弱势是什么; 第三,确定目标。明确自己想要的,制定计划。
篇7:英语作文:渴望不考试
全文共 910 字
+ 加入清单I have a lot of aspirations. But what I desire most is to have no examinations.
We are always told that examinations aim to check what we have learned. But I don‘t think so. Examination is not the best way‘, especially in the primary school. Examinations, composition examinations in particular, will bring students, teachers and parents a great deal of pressure. To cope with the examination, some students just remember the model essays by rote. It will do no good to the improvement of writing.
The students‘ scores can be measured by their daily in-clASS study and by the completion of their everyday homework. If we do in this way, all the students and teachers will have a pleasant time every day.
我们总是被告知考试的目的是为了检测我们学到了什么,但是我不这么认为。考试不是最好的方式,特别是在小学。考试,特别是作文考试,会给学生、教师、学生家长带来很大的压力。为了应付作文考试,一些学生仅仅是死记硬背范文,这对提高学生的写作没有什么好处。
学生的成绩可以通过课内的日常学习和每天家庭作业的完成情况来衡量。如果我们用这种方法检查学习效果,所有的学生和教师每天都会度过愉快的时光。
篇8:关于我对考试的看法的英语作文
全文共 2630 字
+ 加入清单My Views on Examinations
Since school comes into being, the test standard has been used to appraise performance of students。 So far it is still being used, which may suggest that actually there are some advantages in it。 However, it is also highly possible that the test standard is a not ideal way to find out what students have learned and what they havent。 Most school is still using it just because there is no better method to replace it。
In my opinion, the following three points are the critical flaws in the test standard。
One of the most harmful effects on the test method is that it will force us to study just for passing tests, not for acquiring knowledge especially in China。 Obviously the final object of education is XXX us intellective by learning more knowledge。 While the test is only a way to examine the level of students studies, it has been deteriorated to a sifter deciding the fate of students。 Why can it be called a terrible sifter? Now in the tests, which decide who can enter a higher school, thousands of poor students, who want a splendid future, must prepare for the tests by finishing a great deal of practices。 Those practice tests are heavy-laden to them。 So in this case, how can they be expected to study to obtain knowledge? To them that are enough if they can reach the level which tests need。 In the end what our nation will get, genuine persons with ability or just test robots?
Secondly, tests will bring the examinees great pressure, which can affect their lives。 A typical example of this is that most young students have worn glasses even though some of them are still children。 For preparing for tests, they must spend a lot of time on doing their homework so that their eyesight becomes worse and worse。 And the more time they spend on those, the less time they have for playing and relaxing。 Consequently, there is a bad influence on their health。
Thirdly, in fact, test system itself can not veraciously estimate who is better than others because there are many factors impacting the results of test。 For instance, someone cheated in test so that his score would be higher than others。 Or someone who was too nervous to perform well fell in the test。
Only in spare time and no pressure of tests existent, students can study simply for the fun, for obtaining knowledge and for the things that they are really interested in。 But now the test system is the only way to select which one is better, who can reach better school and who can get good job。 Then what we can do is to improve the test system or hope that something better will be invented and replace the test system。
篇9:2024年6月英语四级考试满分作文
全文共 1919 字
+ 加入清单2015年6月的大学英语四级考试刚刚结束,作为打头阵而出现的作文题目一直是令广大考生备受瞩目且头疼不已的专项。此次考试还是沿续之前的出题风格,以图画的形式来考查,要求考生写一篇不少于180个单词的议论文。
由于是花卷形式出现,所以涉及到多个题目。本次四级考试已知的三道作文题目是:
1. 人与电脑(电脑对人所产生的影响)
2. 人与手机 (人对手机的过分依赖性)
3. 父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用
参考范文:
As is graphically depicted in the cartoon, a young girl is talkingwith her mother. She says ironically, “Good news mom! I was accepted to thecollege of your choice!” Then, her mother smilesand seems content with thisresult. Apparently, the cartoon aims toreveal the fact that a majority ofmodern parents play anincreasingly negative role in their children’s growth.
There are several possible reasonsaccountable for thisphenomenon(中心句). To begin with, family in growing numbers has onlyone child;therefore, parents oftentimes focus all their attentionson that child and exertmuch pressure on him or her(原因一). Moreover,numerous parents intend to realize their unfulfilleddreams byletting their children learn what they failed to learn and applyforthe college by which they failed to be accepted, because theyhave become richerand they believe that they have the power tomake what they wanted and want cometrue now(原因二). For instance, myuncle used to be a poor man and his dream that oneday he wouldbecome a violinist was broken because of lack of money. But hemadea fortune by selling coals, and then forced his son, my youngerbrother topractice playing violin. My brother was a huge fan ofsports, but now he has toplay violin everyday unwillingly andofter quarrels with theirparents(举例:原来-然后-结局).
To sum up, it is unreasonable for parentsto control theirchildren’s life(总结句). In order to help them grow happily andhealthily, parents aresupposed to communicate with their kidsabout what they are really interested in(建议一,目的句型).Meanwhile, itis about time that parents let their kids make their ownchoices(建议二,“是时候”句型).Only in these ways will children grow in apsychologically happy environment andrealize their owndreams.
篇10:英语考试
全文共 945 字
+ 加入清单初中生活转眼间已经过去近两个月的时间,学得不亦乐乎的我们,迎来了第三次英语考试。经历了几次失败的我,仍以满怀信心的态度迎接了这次考试。
“叮铃铃……”,一声清脆的上课铃声响起。等了许久,不见老师走进教室,于是音乐委员孙雅欣起了一首《小情歌》,我们在一片歌声中等待着老师的到来。随着一句“写下,我时间和轻琴声交错的城堡。”,这一首歌就算唱完了,老师也出现在了教室门口。只见$2老师手握一沓卷子,神情庄重地走上了讲台,双手撑在桌子上,宣布:“这节课考英语。”说罢,她粉红的脸上露出一丝微笑,我们知道那是对我们的鼓励,可仅仅是简单的鼓励吗?不,我想不是的,那更是对我们必胜的信心。
时间很紧,仅有一节课,听力又要浪费不少的时间,我和熊瑞林这些急性子自然不会放松。握起笔杆,本来悠闲的心在这时突然紧张起来。环视四周:有的人怕时间不够而奋笔疾书,有的人怕书写不好而轻描慢写;有的人因题目简单而早早做完,有的人因不会做题而乱抓纸团;有的人紧握笔杆从容地答题,有的人东借尺子西借橡皮。$2老师没有为此苦恼,而是欣慰的笑了笑,因为她知道,让有人作弊和人很乱比起来,当然是后者更让人人心舒畅。我从容地握起了笔杆,猛然开始飞速答题,与三分钟前的闲谈形成了鲜明的对比,钟上秒针的抖动还不及我笔尖的一小半儿速度快,填上了几个“A”、“B”、“C”,写上了几个“That”和“This”,一张英语试卷就完成了。匆匆扫视了几眼,无聊至极的我便
翻开数学书,打开作业本,开始悠闲地做起数学作业,猛啃那绝对值·····数学还剩一点儿,听力又开始了。该快不快,该慢不慢的不说,报之前还按门铃。我拜托,磁带大哥,这是让你报听力,可没有让你挨家挨户拜年啊!况且,离新年还远呢!我不耐烦的听着磁带,做着听力,就在最后一道题时,慢吞吞的它一反常态,像吃了火药一样,我们还没反应过来就报完了,第二遍也一样,它以迅雷不及掩耳之势完成了自己的使命,可我们班内呢?一片鬼哭狼嚎,想时光倒转,再听几遍,可现实就是这么残酷,就在这时,该死的下课铃响了起来,顿时一片哀求。
考罢,我问到了自己的分数:118!全班最高!结果老师又加一句:别的班有120的,我想唱的“我得意的笑”,却变成了“只要你考得比我好,我就受不了”,带着一点哀叹,这场考试算是过去了。
篇11:2024年12月英语四级考试作文预测一:求职信
全文共 1598 字
+ 加入清单A Letter of Application
1. 表达自己对该工作的渴求态度
2. 尽量展示自己的技能和经历
3.信中应包括自己的联系方式
【范文】
January , 2013
Dear Sirs,
I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post ofassistant manager which you advertised in yesterdays China Daily for, as isindicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallelyour requirement.
I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry. Itook several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due tomy hard work. I am sure such courses as British and American literature andculture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fiercecompetition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to isthat I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities. Inthe due process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skillsimproved.
I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss thepossibility of working with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days,you can contact me at 64543575 for further information. Thank you for yourfavorable consideration.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jenny Green
【点评】
这篇文章是一篇非常成功的求职信。首段表明了自己对经理助理这一职位的渴望,其中包括了自己如何得知这一职位的,而后说明自己的条件符合要求,引起下段。次段分五句,说明自己在专业上是个尖子生,并指出对于其他课程自己做得同样出色,为将来的工作奠定了坚实的基础;后两句说明自己参加了各种学校活动,培养了多方面的能力。第三段首句说明自己非常希望能早日获得面试的机会;次句说如果对方太忙,可以打电话联系;末句对对方表示感谢,是一句客套话。
首段中的keen表示“热切的”, parallel这里做动词,表示“与……相当,比得上”。第二段首句中的specialized area表示“专业领域”;第二句中的excel是不及物动词,表示“突出,超常,胜过他人”;第三句中的edge表示“优势”;第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多种多样的”;第五句中的teamwork spirit表示“团队精神”,interpersonal skills表示“人际交往的能力”。
篇12:英语考试日记350字
全文共 362 字
+ 加入清单上课前,同学们都准备的很好,上课了,我们急忙跑到教室里静息。英语老师来了,说:“今天我们考试,背你们喜欢的课文,现在开始练习。”一分钟过后,老师念同学的名字,同学们上来背自己喜欢的课文,我的的是优,我觉得其他人的分数也不低。老师说:“考试完的可以写作业,看书,剪纸,画画,不过不能说话。”同学们有的写作业,有的看书,有的剪纸,还有的画画,大家安安静静,没有人说话。下课了,老师说:“你们考试的分数都很高。”老师高兴的走了。我心里想:老师平时就很辛苦,加上要给我们改作业,讲课,我们一定要认真听讲,积极发言。有时候我们说话,老师心里很不开心。
老师还给我们讲过安全,要在电脑上做,有些同学一直不做,老师也很生气。所以我们要让老师开心,不能让老师生气,我们要帮老师抱作业,发作业,让老师天天心情好。
篇13:关于英语考试作文
全文共 1237 字
+ 加入清单ISSUE
1. College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
2. There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.
3. 在冒险之前要考虑后果。
ARGUMENT
1. The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager. "One month ago, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. Clearly, modifying showerheads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in the Sunnyside Towers complex will increase our profits further."
2. 考的是那个new Captain Seadood will be popular and profitable.
3. 公司做调查说现在电器的用能源量比以前少了很多,所以能源的用量会有所减少什么的。
篇14:高一英语期末考试
全文共 452 字
+ 加入清单Water Pollution
With the development of industry, water pollution isbecoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.
We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.
篇15:英语考试
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+ 加入清单去年暑假,我上了一个英语补习班。一开始,一切都很好。可是到总结考试的时候,意外发生了。
因为,我平时考试的成绩很好,所以,我理所当然地想:这次也一定与平时一样。当时试卷发下来的时候,我一看题目立刻就惊呆了—这张试卷竟是如此容易!于是,我“刷刷”地写了起来。写完之后,就不加思索地将试卷交了上去,在众人惊讶的目光中走出了教室。
第二天,试卷下来了。我看到周围的人脸上露着喜悦的光芒。原来,他们懂得了高分。我想:既然他们都得了高分,那么,我也一定能得高分。可是当时卷发到手时,我傻眼了—我实际的分数和我想象中的分数截然不同,我考了一个前所未有的“好”成绩——实际的分数和我想象的分数截然不同,竟然是86分。看着这个鲜红的86分,我仿佛经历了一场“暴风雨”——父亲那张铁青的脸耷拉着、妈妈那喋喋不休的嘴唇不停地蠕动着。我仿佛还看到了试卷上那鲜红的分数在嘲笑我——笑我不认真、笑我急于求成。我哭了,哭得很伤心……
放学后,老师找到我,把错误的地方给我耐心地讲一遍,并语重心长地说:“莎莎,其实你有能力考100分,可惜太骄傲……”
老师的一席话使我茅塞顿开,明白了一个道理:虚心使人进步,骄傲使人落后。
篇16:2024期末考试英语记叙文写作指导
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+ 加入清单记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H ",但动笔之前,围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.
"Dont worry, well send you home."
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
篇17:记一次英语考试作文450字
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+ 加入清单星期一的上午,英语老师捧着一叠试卷走进了教室,说:“今天考试。”“大学霸”们都说:“切!不就是考试嘛!小菜一碟!”而学习不太好的同学丧气地说道:“怎么又是考试。”我心里偷偷乐道:哈哈!真是天助我也!昨晚做完作业,妈妈正好叫我做了一份英语试卷。
开考了。哈!题目竟然和我昨天碗上做的题目几乎一样。考试中我非常顺利。突然,一道题把我“拦”住了,我的心里像揣着小兔子似的,七上八下。我嘴中嘀咕道:“这题好像老师重点讲过的,万一错了就是5分呀!不行,我得快点想起来!”终于,我想到了答案!我笔走如飞,很快完成了这张试卷。可我还是生怕那道题错了,一个字母都不放过地认真检查。
第三节课,考试结果出来了。老师开始报分数了:“奔雨欣99分,张娜98。5分……”怎么还没报到我的名字?我心想:完蛋了,我一定考得很差!这时一句话让我心中的石头落地了:“其余没报的名字的四个人都是100分!”
一放学,我就冲向妈妈的怀抱,大声地说:“妈妈,我考了100分!”妈妈摸了摸我的头说:“今天妈妈带你去看电影!”
篇18:有关英语四级考试的作文
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+ 加入清单To swim the English Channel takes at least nine hours. Its hard work and it makes you short of breath. To fly over the channel takes only twenty minutes as long as youre not held up at the airport, but its an expensive way to travel. You can travel by hovercraft if you dont mind the noise and that takes forty minutes. Otherwise, you can go by boat, if you remember sea-sickness pills. All these means of transport have their problems, and the weary traveler often dreams of being able to drive to France in his own car. Not possible, you say. Well, wait a minute people are once again considering the idea of a Channel tunnel or bridge. This time , the great London Council is looking into the possibility of building a channel link straight to London. A bridge would cost far more a tunnel, but you would be able to go by rail or by car on a bridge, whereas a tunnel would provide a rail link only.
Why is this idea being discussed again? Is Britain realizing the need for links with Europe as a result of joining EEC? Well, perhaps. The main reason , though, is that a tunnel or bridge would reach the twenty square kilometers of Londons discussed stimulate trade and revitalise the port, and would ,make London a main trading center in Europe. With a link over the channel, you could buy your fish and chips in England and be able to eat them in France while they are still warm!
篇19:公共英语考试作文讲解
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+ 加入清单1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因。
陈述这个事实 As is know by all, ……
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there exist three most conspicuous ones:
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
In addition/ furthermore ……
In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that…
篇20:初中英语作文:我的入学考试
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+ 加入清单My Entrance Examination
For going on with my further studies, I took the entrance examination in a Senior Middle School last week。 I still remember there were more than three hundred candidates taking part in this examination。 For the first day, in the morning, Chinese was easy。 We were required to write a composition of 250 words on "My Home Life", and give definitions and illustrations to twenty phrases。 In the afterno on, we took an English examination。 There were dictation, sentence formation, and analysis for oral English。 In the oral examination, I was questioned about my home life, my experience in the junior middle school and my future prospects。
On the second day, we were examined on history and geography in the morning and physics and chemistry in the afternoon。
为了进一步学习,我上周在一所高中参加了入学考试。我还记得参加考试的有300多人,第一天上午,语文很简单,我们要写一篇250字的作文,关于“我的家庭生活”,并解释20个短语。下午,我们考英语,有听力,造句,分析口语。口语考试时,我被问道我的生活,中学经历以及未来的希望。
第二天,我们早上考历史、地理,下午考物理、化学。