英语四级考试写作常用句型【汇集20篇】
理想,也叫梦想。我们最喜欢的一个词语莫过于“美梦成真”。在这个竞争激烈的当今社会,要想有所作为,拥有自己的一席之地,我们就必须有一颗敢于追梦的心和一份勇于拼搏的精神。就算没有壮志凌云的大志,也该有一点光宗耀祖的小梦想。理想的英语作文应该怎么写,看看下面的范文吧。这里就是开学吧给同学们分享的一些关于英语四级考试写作常用句型优秀作文,仅供大家参考,希望对您有帮助。
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+ 加入清单记叙文(写人、写事)、状物文(景物、动物、植物、物品)、古诗改写、编写童话、看图写作(所给词语编故事)、应用文(写封信、建议书。)
考试文章和竞赛文章是不同的!它一般可以遵循一定的写作章法。而竞赛作文往往随意性很强,表现手法多样。记住写作思路:
记叙文
第一段:抒情式开头(优美词汇+排比修辞)、开门见山开头(直奔主题),注意词汇的运用要准确,把文章题目带进来,免得跑题。
第二段:写人的作文(抓住人物肖像描写“年龄、身材、穿戴、长相、举止、习惯,也要注意运用优美词汇。过渡。)写事的文章(通过环境描写过渡,注意词汇和修辞运用。) 第三段:不管是写人、写事都要有一个具体的事情(注意一连串的动作描写,配合六大细节描写,使文章内容充实。)
第四段:抒情结尾+卒章显志结尾(把题目扣进去免得跑题)
状物文
第一段:抒情开头。(写小动物和植物,词汇+修辞)
第二段:描写动物、植物的外形特征(整体、局部、典型特征。参照《翠鸟》。) 第三段:动物的生活习性或与你之间的趣事。(一连串动词表现出来。) 第四段:抒情结尾+卒章显志结尾。(把题目扣进去。)
景物作文
第一段:抒情开头。(注意词汇和修辞的运用。)
第二段:静态描写。(观察有次序、一景一物一词一修辞,还可以加入五觉描写。要是遇到具体的物,就要抓住特征来写。)
第三段:动态描写。(一连串的动作描写,写出活动的场面。要有开始、发展、结局。) 第四段:抒情结尾+卒章显志结尾。
古诗改写
忌讳:将古诗的翻译,随意加入几句话就完成!
第一段:开门见山(交代时间、地点、人物、事件。)或环境式开头(抓住诗里相关景物,一景一物一词一修辞进行渲染)。
第二段:根据诗的意境、内容,抓住人物的肖像描写和不同的状第三段:卒章显志结尾。
编写童话(给几个词语编故事)
注意:一定要将童话里的“人物”拟人化,要设置一定的故事情节,能表达一种感情或说明一个道理。
第一段:通常是环境描写(抓住相关事物进行联想,一景一物一词一修辞,渲染气氛,引出下文。)
第二段:编出一个有趣的故事,抓住童话里“人物”肖像描写和动作描写,将过程叙述完整。可分几层,每层都是一个新的自然段。第三段:抒情或蕴含哲理结尾。
看图作文
首先:要弄清图画所给的内容,看清它要表达的是什么中心思想。其次:将图画归类为写人记事的文章还是写景状物的文章。
最后:写作方法可以同上。
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篇1:以考试为话题的高一英语作文
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+ 加入清单There are many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examinations. Some people think that examinations can help them review the lessons regularly, while others maintain that too many examinations have frustrated them.
To me, I think an examination is a good thing for both teachers and students. Teachers can find out how much the students have grasped and then improve their teaching; students, on the other hand, will learn what their weak points are and then study even harder.
All in all, we should not waste time arguing whether examinations are good or not. What we should do is to try to improve the exam system and try to adjust it to our different requirements.
篇2:大一英语口语考试自我介绍
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+ 加入清单Hello, everyone! Im Feng Biyu, a girl of 19 years old. As you can see, I am very glad to get along with all of you and I hope we’ll have a good time in our subsequent study.
My hometown is in SiHong, Northern JiangSu Province, a beautiful place with a lot of clear rivers and lakes. When boating on HongZe Lake, I always feel free and relaxed. It is really a wonderful place to enjoy your life.
I graduated from SiHong Middle School. It was set up in 1949 and now it is more than 60 years old.
I have a lot of friends in my middle school. We love each other. Time goes by, but our friendship will never go away. They cheer me up, make me happy and do some help when I meet with difficulties.
Thats all, thank you!
篇3:大学生该不该追求名牌大学英语等级考试六级作文
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+ 加入清单Recently, the phenomenon of students pursue famous brands has become the focus of the public concern.They always do anything in order to buy what they want. What has caused this problem?It is no easy/simple task to offer the reason for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factor.
There are two aspects reason as follows. On the one hand,with the development of the economy/society/people’s living standard, we can afford the articles of luxury. On the other hand,the mind of rivalry is the most important reason.The topic of the famous brands is the main idea among the students, they think a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.
To change this situation, I suggest that college school students should cultivate positive values and look at things in a proper way.Although brand is the best way to show their status,we shouldn’t pursuit brand blindly.students ought to pay much attention to their studies.
篇4:初中英语写作素材:秋天的唯美英文句子
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+ 加入清单春华秋实,颗粒满仓。下面语文迷收集了秋天的英文句子,欢迎阅读。
1. 我认为秋天是一年中最美的季节。
I think autumn is the most beautiful season in a year.
2. 秋天时叶子变黄。
The leaves turn yellow in autumn.
3. 在秋天的晚上,我感到一丝凉意。
I feel a little cool in the autumnal night.
4. 秋天里树木都是光秃秃的。
The trees were naked during autumn.
5. 今天的天气已露出了一丝秋天的气息。
There is a breath of autumn in the air today.
6. 九月的天气确实像秋天了。
The weather in September was positively autumnal.
7. 我喜欢收集秋天赤褐色的叶子。
I like to collect russet autumn leaves.
8. 我们欣赏着秋天里新英格兰树林的瑰丽色彩。
We are enjoying the resplendent colors of the New England woods in the autumn.
9.夜半酒醒人不觉,满池荷叶动秋风
Wake up to drink ,people feel the middle of the night, moving wind over a lotus leaf pond
10.生命如此简单,如秋,如落叶。
Life is so si-mp-le, such as the autumn, such as fallen leaves.
11.秋中,有些感情便如落叶般凋零了,有些影子却挥之不去,只在网络虚缈中才有熟悉的名字。凋零就凋零吧,倦缩也好,成灰亦好,管它感情如一树红叶般怎样盛开,怎样凋零。我站在川流不息的时间里,谈笑风生,任凭满天的叶子飞舞,最终覆盖苍凉的生命。
In autumn, some emotions, such as fallen leaves as they decline, some have lingering shadow, only in the virtual network is indistinct in the familiar names. It withered on the decline,ashes are also good, regardleof the feelings of like how the leaves like a tree in full bloom and how to decline. I was standing on the flow of time, laughing, even if the sky flying leaves, eventually covering the lives of desolation.
12.那是一幅描绘秋天景色的油画。
That is an oil painting of a landscape in spring.
篇5:七年级下册英语考试
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+ 加入清单Only the delicious food, know the whereabouts of your soul; Only the delicious food, listen with your heart to tell of the stomach. Have to hurry, how much we missed the pure delicious; Tip of the finger food, the food and love in your pocket. You have your personality, I have my pursuit: pot bag meat.
A week off to just into the house, smell a fragrant delicious cuisine. I am sure that mother gave me a delicious pot bag meat. I follow scent into the kitchen, did not beyond my expectations, mother in doing pot bag meat for me. Saw the delicious pot bag meat, stirs my saliva, slowly began to mean. I hurried back, that I may not let mother found. My mother asked me to write my homework first, and then wash your hands, give me to eat a delicious pot bag meat for a while.
I which have idea to write my homework, my mind only pot bag meat. I wash your hands, take the double I dedicated chopsticks quickly do the table. Soon, my mother brought a plate of golden pot bag meat came in, not mother put the pot bag meat on the table, such as I have already put a piece of into the mouth. Enjoy the pot bag meat delicious, mother see I eat with a smile. I asked my mother: "why dont you eat?" "I ate," mom said. I dont believe, just put a bowl to the mother. Then we together eat it with relish.
Pot bag meat, why are you so good? Let me have a special liking to you. Because the pot bag meat is permeated with mother selfless great love to me.
篇6:高一英语期末考试
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+ 加入清单Environment Protection
Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.
Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, agreat number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.
For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.
篇7:2024年6月大学英语六级考试作文范文
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+ 加入清单There is a famous saying goes like that “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” This saying shows the relationship between knowledge and practice vividly.
As far as we know, if we don’t have corresponding knowledge of some fields, we cannot do well in the fields. There are innumerable examples to illustrate this point. For instance, a singer can sing well only if he or she possesses musical knowledge; a dancer can dance well only if he or she knows how to dance; a worker can get the job well-done only if he or she is familiar with the basic principles of the job, and so on. But in turn, if we do not apply what we have known to practice, knowledge cannot play its role. For example, if we have learned different methods of cooking vegetables, but we do not cook, then the different methods of cooking vegetables do not produce value for us.
Therefore, if we do not have knowledge, we have nothing to practice, but if we have knowledge without putting it into practice, knowledge is of no avail. So we should acquire as much knowledge and put it into practice.
篇8:高一英语100字之二:我对考试作弊的看法
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+ 加入清单It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. Whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.
篇9:一场考试过后的英语作文
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+ 加入清单After An Examination
After I got the news that I had passed PETS level 3 ,I were really happy at that moment .But when I knew the exact result,I didn’t have any successful or wonderful feelings,instend of that,I think the result was very strange.I couldn’t believe that.although my mark was high,everyone who joined the examination all got very good marks.Most of the students in my class could reach the average of 60.so I can’t be pleased with my reault,and it is not enough for me.Recently,I have mixed feeling.It even drives me crazy.I have though a lot about how to improve my English .I am so eager for improving.When I am in school ,I am just ok.. But when I out of that small world, I am nothing. There are so mang students in front of me.So that’s the exact reason why I am unhappy when my classmates congratulate me upon my”excellent”job.I indeed want further education,I can’t be satisfied with being an ordinary English teacher.There is long way waiting for me to go on,so I can’t stop my feet just for this little success.After I pass these days,I grow up a lot.It is very valuable for me to have such experience.
篇10:考研英语作文常见的四个写作格式错误
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+ 加入清单【摘要】考研英语作文的评分,首先关注的就是单词、句子、格式的正确性。因此,在作文的复习中,不能只关注高端句型,正确的格式也是不容忽视的。
写作格式错误主要包括题目的写法、文章的格式、大小写以及标点符号等四个方面。
题目的写法
题目是首先映入读者眼帘的,所以要注意题目的书写位置。一定要在试卷作文纸上的上方中间位置书写。同时还应在话题和正文之间留出一定的距离,即比正文行距稍宽一些。
其次,要注意题目的大小写,实词的首字母一定要大写。其它虚词如冠词、连词(但如连词的字母多于5个时则大写)和介词首字母不需要大写。比如:
跳动的心(例子)
误:Attitudes Toward Money
正:Attitudes toward Money
文章的格式
1、四边留空:卷面的四边一定要留出适当的空白。这样的文章才能整齐、美观,给人以清晰、明快的感觉。
2、空格:文章的每段的首行一定要有统一的空格(一般缩进4-6个字节)。
大小写方面的错误
在考研文章的评改过程中,有关大小写方面的错误层出不穷,这是考生的一个弱点。一般来说,大写规则有以下几条:
1、大写每句话的第一个字母和直接引语的第一字母
如:He said,He is going to Shanghai next week.
2、大写专有名词,或用作专有名词的部分普通名词,通常是缩略形式
如:DrG .G . East
3、大写缩写字母
如:MPA ,MBA ,BBC
4、文章标题要大写
5、头衔在专有名词前要大写,在专有名词后就小写
例如:Captain SmithSmith, the captain;Uncle GeorgeGeorge ,my uncle
标点符号
考生在写文章时,一定要注意正确使用标点符号,切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象。一定要熟练掌握常用标点符号的基本用法,尤其要正确使用逗号和分号。
三段式作文注意事项
1、作文卷面要保持整洁,不要连笔,不要涂改,这是获取印象分的重点。很多考生由于在考场过于紧张导致作文的单词老是写错,这是致命伤啊,会直接让你越写越没感觉就越没信心了,所以平常要加强练笔!
2、全文的第一句和各段的第一句必须是文章的中心句,最好能用复杂句表达。这是因为阅卷老师一般没有那么多的时间去看作文,所以只能大概浏览下各段的首句,这是获得高分的关键。
3、全文结构布局:全文分为三段,第一段3句,第二段5句,第三段4句,可根据具体情况调整。段落中,第一句是topic ,第二三句是detail ,第三句是conclusion 。
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篇11:2024英语作文写作指导之邮件
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+ 加入清单If you’re reading this, there’s a good chance that you have an email account. You may well have several – perhaps separate accounts for professional and personal contacts.
如果你正在阅读这篇文章,你肯定有一个或若干个甚至是不同帐号的私人或办公邮箱。
It’s easy to assume that we know how to use email effectively: it’s been around for long enough. But if you find yourself struggling to communicate effectively by email, these six tips should help:
邮件这样的沟通方式早已经渗入到了我们的生活工作中,因此可以说大多数人都能有效地使用邮件与他人交流。但如果你发现自己还没做得足够有效,我想以下这六点可以帮到你:
1. Start With an Appropriate Salutation
邮件开头称呼要恰当:
Some people jump straight into the text of an email without so much as a “hi”. It’s polite to add a salutation, just as you would with a letter. That might look like:
有些人写邮件不喜欢加称呼,甚至连简单的“你好”都忽略,直接开始正文内容。孰不知就像在传统的信件上一样,写上称呼是一种礼貌的象征。称呼可以这样写:
#Dear Sir/Madam 亲爱的先生/女士
#Dear Mr. Johnson 亲爱的约翰逊先生
#Hi Sue 苏,你好
#Hello Fred 你好,福瑞德
Your salutation needs to be appropriate. If you’re writing to a prospective employer, “Dear Mr. Johnson” is probably the best way to go. “Hi Bob” is going to look unprofessional.
称呼必须恰当。若邮件对象是你未来的上司,“亲爱的约翰先生”这样的称呼应该为最得体的。像“你好,鲍勃”更适用于随意的场合。
But don’t assume that formality is always the right answer. If you’re writing to a friend of a friend, using “Dear” plus their surname is going to seem oddly stilted.
那么,是不是正式的用语就万能呢?绝对不是。若你给你朋友的朋友写邮件,那用“亲爱的+姓”就显得异常别扭。
If in doubt, “Dear [first name]” will usually work just fine.
当你判断不出哪种场合该用什么称呼合适,你可以使用“亲爱的+名”来应付所有情况。
2. Get Straight to the Point
直奔主题
Your correspondent won’t want to wade through paragraphs of waffle – so get straight to the point. If you’re writing to someone out of the blue, don’t give them your life story before you make a request.
相信阅读你邮件的人不会愿意仔细浏览你那空洞无聊的长篇大论,所以你需要直奔主题。如果你想写封邮件安慰某个心灵受伤的朋友,开头先把你的建议亮出来,然后再用你的亲身经历来辅助说明。
Getting straight to the point might mean that the first line of your email (after the salutation) looks something like this:
直奔主题意味着邮件内容的第一行应该是这样:
#I’m working on an article about Acme Widgets for XYZ publication, and wondered if you had a few minutes to answer the following three questions.
我现在正在写一篇要交给某某出版社关于极致控件的文章,不知道您有没有时间回答3个问题呢?
#Could you supply me with a quote for the following project?
可否对下面的设计项目进行引证?
#I’d like to discuss the revisions with you. Would Tuesday at 2pm be a good time?
我想和你谈谈修订的事。这周二下午两点您有空吗?
#I’ve attached the documents you requested at our meeting yesterday.
昨天会议上您要求的文件已附上,请查收。
You may well need to include more details, but if you put the important point up front, your email is more likely to get a timely response. If your question comes too far down, the recipient may not even realise that you need a reply.
当然,你需要再增加更多的细节内容。若将邮件重点放到内容的开头,你将收到更加及时的回复信息。如果你的问题在邮件后头,收信人可能都不会意识到你在等他回复。
3. Keep it Short
内容言简意赅
try to keep your email as short as possible. Make the paragraphs short, too – long paragraphs can be difficult to read and take in.
尽可能将你的邮件内容写得简单明了。文章太长不易阅读和吸收。
Do make sure you give enough information for your correspondent to be able to make a decision, if that’s required. You might find that it’s best to offer this as an attachment – you’ll have more flexibility over formatting, and your correspondent can print out the attachment easily.
若对方需要通过你的邮件来做决策,那你一定要在邮件中将相关信息写完整。为了能更灵活地排版,你可以把这些信息作成附件形式,以方便对方将其打印出来。
4. Use Numbered Points
将内容编号
If you’ve got several questions or points to make, it’s very helpful to number them. This makes it easy for the other person to respond to each one, especially if some just require a yes/no response or a single word answer. For instance:
对于那些为了咨询或提供各种问题的邮件,最好将问题一点一点的列举出来,以便于他人对每个问题作答,尤其当某些人更倾向于对问题只回答“是”和“否”的时候。例如:
#Could you let me know:
能否告知:
#1. How much it would cost for the website design
1. 网站设计费用
#2. How much for the website design plus a tri-fold brochure
2. 网页设计加一份三页宣传册的费用
#3. Whether you could complete #2 by the end of April
3. 您能否在四月底完成第二点所述工作?
It’s also useful to list your questions or points as bullets in this way; if you write a single paragraph, some of your questions might get missed.
将你的问题或观点用图标的方式罗列出来是很实用的,倘若你用一段话将几个点全部涵盖,那对方有可能会漏看其中的几点。
5. Re-read and Use Spell-Check
重新阅读一遍,校对拼写错误
A typo or spelling mistake can turn one word into an entirely different one. If you’re using email in a professional capacity, that mistake could be embarrassing – or even offensive. It might alter the whole meaning of your email: a missing “not”, for instance, could potentially cause problems.
排版或拼写错误有时能导致对一个单词的误解。尤其当你用邮件来沟通专业性内容时,这样的错误就很尴尬,甚至有些失礼。它可能改变你整个邮件的意思。比如:少写了个“不”,就可能会引起某些问题。
Spell-check should help you avoid any silly mistakes – but use your eyes and brain too. There are plenty of words that spell-check won’t pick up. If you’re emailing from a device with predictive text and an auto-correct feature, make sure you always re-read what you’ve typed.
因此检查拼写将避免你犯这些低级错误,但这里强调——不仅仅用眼睛检查,还得用大脑思考。有些错误不一定能轻易检查出来。如果你的邮件系统有字句联想功能和自动纠错功能,一定要把写出来的内容再通读检查一遍。
6. Make Your Signature Useful
充分利用邮件签名
Do you have an email signature? (That’s the text that appears automatically at the bottom of your email.) Some people don’t use one at all; others have a funny quote or favorite saying.
你设置过邮件签名吗(它将会在你每次邮件内容的下方自动生成)?有些人从来都没有使用过它,但我们也看过一些非常有意思和哲理的签名。
Whether you’re using email for professional or personal reasons, make your signature useful for both you and your recipient. That might mean:
无论你是为了工作还是私人聊天,加注签名对你和邮件接收者都有好处,因为这意味着可以:
Giving the link to your website
加上你的网页链接
Including your work address and/or phone number
写上你的工作地址或电话号码
Adding links to your social media accounts
注上你的社会媒体工具帐号(例如博客,微博,论坛)
Putting in a line to promote your recent book / blog / product
宣传你最新的书籍,博文或产品
If your email provider allows it, you may even want to create several signatures to use for different purposes (e.g. one for emailing friends, one for new business contacts).
有些邮箱甚至还提供用户根据不同目的设计不同签名的服务(比如:一个对朋友使用,一个对新结识的企业伙伴使用)。
篇12:优秀英语写作素材:教育的英语名言
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+ 加入清单以下是由语文迷网精心为大家整理提供的关于教育的英语名言,欢迎大家参考选择。
Education has for its object the formation of character.
教育的目的在于品德的培育。——斯宾塞
He can ill be master that never was scholar.
没当过学生的人成不了一个好先生。
Teaching others teaches youself.
教学相长。
Better untaught than ill taught.
宁可不受教育也强于受坏的教育。
Instruction knows no cladistinction.
有教无类——《论语》
The best bred have the best portion.
最好的教养是最好的嫁妆。
A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops. (H.B.Adams, American historian)
教师的影响是永恒的;无法估计他的影响会有多深远。(美国历史学家 亚当斯 H B)
Better be unboun than untaught, for ignorance is the root of misfortune. (Plato, Ancient Greek phiosopher)
与其不受教育,不知不生,因为无知是不幸的根源。(古希腊哲学家 柏拉图)
Dancing in all its forms cannot be excluded from the curriculum of all noble education: dancing with the feet, with ideas, with works, and ,need I add that one must also be able to dance with the pen? (Friedrich W.Nietzsche, German philosopher)
所有高尚教育的课程表里都不能没有各种形式的跳舞:用脚跳舞,用思想跳舞,用言语跳舞,不用说,还需用笔跳舞。(德国哲学家 尼采 F W)
Education commences at the mother’s knee, and every word spoken within the hearsay of children tends towards the formation of character. (Hosea Ballou British cducator)
教育始于母亲膝下,孩童耳听一言一语,均影响其性格的形成。(英国教育家 巴卢 H)
Education is a progressive discovery of our ignorance. (Durant, American historian)
教育是一个逐步发现自己无知的过程。(美国历史学家 杜兰特)
Educaton does not mean teaching people to kow what they do not know ; it means teachng them to behave as they do not behave. (John Ruskin, British art critic)
教育不在于使人知其所未知,而在于按其所未行而行。(英国艺术评论家 园斯金 J)
Education is a admirable thing, but it is well to remember from time to time that nothing worth knowing can be taught. (Oscar Wilde, British dramatist)
教育是令人羡慕的东西,但是要不时地记住:凡是值得知道的,没有一个是能够教会的。(英国剧作家 王尔得 O)
Example is always more efficacious than precept. (Samuel Johnson, British writer and critic)
身教胜于言教。(英国作家、批评家 约翰逊 S)
Histories make men wise ; poems witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep ; moral grave ; logic and rhetoric able to contend.(Francis Bacon , British philosopher )
历史使人明智;诗词使人灵秀;数学使人周密;自然哲学使人深刻;伦理使人庄重;逻辑修辞学使人善辨。( 英国哲学家 培根. F.)
If you dont learn to think when you are young , you may never learn .(Thomas Edison , American inventor )
如果你年轻时就没有学会思考,那么就永远学不会思考。(美国发明家 爱迪生 . T.)
Natural abilities are like natural plants that need pruning by study.
(Francis Bacon , British philosopher )
天生的才干如同天生的植物一样,需要靠学习来修剪。(英国哲学家 培根 . F.)
A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops. (H.B.Adams, American historian)
教师的影响是永恒的;无法估计他的影响会有多深远。(美国历史学家 亚当斯 H B)
And gladly would learn, and gladly teach. (Chaucer, British poet)
勤于学习的人才能乐意施教。(英国诗人 乔叟)
Better be unboun than untaught, for ignorance is the root of misfortune. (Plato, Ancient Greek phiosopher)
与其不受教育,不知不生,因为无知是不幸的根源。(古希腊哲学家 柏拉图)
Education commences at the mothers knee, and every word spoken within the hearsay of children tends towards the formation of character. (Hosea Ballou British cducator)
教育始于母亲膝下,孩童耳听一言一语,均影响其性格的形成。(英国教育家 巴卢 H)
Educaton does not mean teaching people to kow what they do not know ; it means teachng them to behave as they do not behave. (John Ruskin, British art critic)
教育不在于使人知其所未知,而在于按其所未行而行。(英国艺术评论家 园斯金 J)
Education is a progressive discovery of our ignorance. (Durant, American historian)
教育是一个逐步发现自己无知的过程。(美国历史学家 杜兰特)
For a cultivated man to be ignorant of foreign languages is a great inconveniece. (Anton P.Chekhrv, Russian dramatist)
一个受过教育的人,不懂外语是极不方便的。(俄国剧作家 契克夫 A P)
篇13:高考英语写作万能模版之环境保护题材句
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+ 加入清单1. To cherish the enviroment is to love ourselves.
爱护环境就是爱护我们自己。
2.Water is the source of ourlives
水是生命之源。
3.I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation
我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状。
4.Our government is doing its best to take measures to fight against pollution.
我们政府正努力制定措施与污染作斗争。
5.We are sure that well win the battle.
我们坚信我们能赢得战斗。
6.Its high time that we should protect our enviroment from being polluted.
是时候我们应该防止环境污染了。
7. Keep our mountains green,the wate clean,and the sky blue.
使我们山更绿,水更清,天更蓝。
8.However,natural resources are not inexhaustible.some reserves are already on the brink of exhaustion.
然而自然资源并不是无穷无尽的,一些储量已经到了穷尽的边缘。
9.If we do something with no thought for the furture . The later generation would be in danger.
如果我们不为将来考虑,后代就会受到威胁。
10.Our earths days are numbered without urgent help.
没有及时的帮助我们的地球就屈指可数了。
11(Sth.)are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blink eye to them.
如果我们继续睁一只眼闭一只眼的话,……一定会有恶劣的后果。
篇14:英语高考作文漂亮句子之万能句型
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+ 加入清单1.It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.
在这个迅速发展的世界里,对每个人来说,学好英语是非常重要的。
2.The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.
你工作越努力,你取得的进步就越大。
3.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献,世界会变得更加美好。
4.The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday.
记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。
5.The atmosphere in my family is fantastic
我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。
6.The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.
人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。
7.I had a great first impression of American people.
我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。
8.We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.
我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。
9.With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.
随着现代科技的迅速发展,互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。
10.You should read as many books as you possibly can.
大家应该尽可能的多读书。
篇15:提高英语写作水平的方法
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+ 加入清单在外语四项技能中,写作对学生的要求是最高的,它要求学生具有以外语思维方式谴词造句,熟练掌握拼写、标点等写作的基本知识的能力。小编收集了提高英语写作水平的方法,欢迎阅读。
英语教学的目的在于发展学生的英语语言技能,培养学生良好的英语交际能力。《英语新课程标准》中语言技能包括听、说、读、写四项基本技能及这四种技能的综合运用能力,四者之间密切联系,相互渗透,互为基础。听、读是领会和理解别人表达的意思;说和写是用言语表达思想。写的能力要在听、说、读的基础上进行培养和提高,而写的训练又能进一步提高听、说、读的能力。
在外语四项技能中,写作对学生的要求是最高的,它要求学生具有以外语思维方式谴词造句,熟练掌握拼写、标点等写作的基本知识的能力。还需要学生有创造性、有合乎逻辑的表达思想的能力。目前的小学英语教学中,极其重视“听、说、读”的能力训练, “写”的教学基本一直停留在“抄写”阶段,没有开始真正意义上的写作教学。
一.写作准备阶段
(一)消除恐惧心理
自英语普及后,根据社会要求,杜绝“哑巴英语”,大多数的学校都从一年级就开设英语课程,到了四年级,学生的口头表达能力都很好,笔头方面就相对弱了。进行英语写作,他们就会觉得不自信,觉得自己水平达不到,能力也够不上。针对这点,就得需要教师在教学中,根据学生的实际能力安排教学。学生是教学的主体,要想教学有效果,就必须发挥学生的主动性。学生怕写作,一方面是觉得自己的所积累的词汇量和句子不够多,教师在教学中注重适量的拓展和培养积累单词,词组的好习惯,对句子进行举一反三的说。另一方面学生怕在写作中犯错,怕会因为一些小错误就受到老师的批评,就这方面,教师在指导时应多给予鼓励,只有让他们认识到了错误,改正了,才会减少错误,在鼓励中增强学生的自信心,从而消除他们对写作的恐惧感。
(二)创设写作环境
环境是非常重要的因素,人的成长需要好的环境,写作当然也要求有个好的环境。况且,写作是个复杂的思维过程,环境在此更显其重要性。在教学中,教师可以精心为学生创设一个积极、合作和富有鼓励性的环境,使他们乐于写作,充分发挥自己的思维能力。比如,在中年级的英语教学中可以安排学生对练习册上的短小语段摘抄下来,读读背背,培养语感;在高年级的英语教学中,可以安排写英语日记,一组的学生的共用一本日记本,每天由一位同学带回家写英语日记,内容及多少都不限制。老师每次都得对日记进行认真批改和给予鼓励性的评价。学生可以传阅,在其中他们能分享成功的喜悦,也扩大阅读量。
(三)传授基本知识
写作就像盖房子一样,有了材料,要把这材料以一定的形式堆放在一起才能形成房屋,这都需要老师的指导。英语写作技能的难度较大,学生也不能很快接受,提高英语写作质量也不容易,教师在进行英语写作教学时,要特别注意教学目标与学生特点,采用适当的教学方法,传授基本的写作知识。
1.科学指导学生对单词的识记,提高单词拼写的正确率,减少不必要的拼写错误。教师可以引导学生在阅读过程中和其他课内外学习中养成记单词的好习惯,同时也要鼓励学生注重词组及常用句型的积累,同时也要给与适合的场合让他们输出。
2.语法是英语学习中非常烦琐,枯燥的一项,小学生很难接受,但在教学中适当得进行句法结构操练还是必要的。让学生自然地接受语言结构,以便他们在写作时能正确地表情达意。
3.汉英表达存在着差异,如Ilikeit,too.中文的正确表达是:我也喜欢它。不会说成:我喜欢他,也。这就是中文和英文在词序上的不同,也是一种习惯表达的不同。没有特定的规律,这就需要学生多阅读,培养好的语感。
4.标点符号虽是小问题但不可忽视,教师应对此进行讲解,把两种语言中的标点符号的用法不同进行比较,阐明正确使用标点符号对正确表达思想十分重要。如,在表示一个人说话,汉语中用冒号和双引号,在英语中是没有冒号的,要表示一个人说话,得用逗号和双引号。
二.写作训练阶段
写作包括能用所学词汇、语法和句型造简单的句子、回答问题、改写课文、看图写话、依照学过的题材写小短文。这些需要循序渐进,要从最简单的语言和言语练习开始,从基本要求做起,由易到难,逐步提高要求,每一步都要有具体要求,切实可行。
(一)句的训练
词连成句,造句是英语写作教学的主要练习形式之一。可以先由教师提供词素,让学生学会连句,熟悉句子结构,为以后造句打下基础。教师也可以在教授一种句型结构时让学生改句子。而后,让学生自己造句,教师常常可以为学生造句提供一个结合实际生活的情景,这样可以避免注重语言形式,忽视内容,脱离一定的情景与主题。
句型转换也是训练形式之一,让学生在不改变语言意义的前提下进行句型转换练习,理解表达同一个意思可以采用不同的句型,这样可以避免写作时句型的单调与重复。
(二)段的训练
句连成段,可以进行看图写作,教师出示一幅图,让学生对其进行描述写成小段。看图写作有其长处,可以在写作过程中可以增加图片与英语思维、表达的直接联系、培养想象力、减少对中文的依赖。为了使学生更多地参与写作教学,激发他们对写作的兴趣,看图写作的图画老师可以让学生自己根据喜好,选择适合他们水平的图画或照片,带到课堂上使用。图画生动多样,大大激发了他们的写作兴趣,可以选一部分优秀的进行展示,评价,相互学习,这样能提高学生的整体水平。
(三)短文的训练
提供学生一些生活化的话题,选择的话题材料要接近学生的现实生活和学习。比如学生可以写自我介绍,写最喜欢的动物,学生会很活跃地思考,用最简单的句子表达他们的意思,表达他们的感情。
同时,也可以是对书本内容进行的扩充,如《牛津小学英语5B》,Unit4中出现了writeane-mail,在这里可以补充教授书信的格式,通过网络让学生学会用电子邮件发信,教师可以让学生结合自己的实际,与自己的朋友写e-mail,但要做到有信必回,这样才是有效的训练。如6B讲到seasons时可以给他们一个topic:Whichseasondoyoulikebest?Why?这样的话题是他们自己切身感受,学生们可以畅所欲言。
(四)阅读的训练
俗话说:读书破万卷,下笔如有神。阅读是写作的基础,大量的,广泛的阅读,能加强学生理解和吸收书面信息的能力,有助于巩固和扩大词汇量,增强语感丰富学生的语言知识。教师可以指导学生读一些相同水平的文章、故事,记忆背诵一些典型的范文也是可以的。让学生在大量的阅读中积累词汇、句子,形成良好的语感,为学生更好的写作打下坚实的基础。
三.如何评价写作内容
学生的作文要及时地批改,对学生在写作中出现的错误,可以用一些柔和的方式指出,并给予他们指导,告诉他们怎么错了,订正在边上(订正在原位会使他们忽略他们的错误),知道正确答案,再加以鼓励。这样,他们会慢慢积累知识。即使有学生的错误很多,也不要说“写得不行,不好”之类的话,打击他们的积极性,可以给予他们一些建议,给予他们多些指导这样会更好。
对于写的好的,可以当场给予表扬和鼓励,把好的文章读给大家听或者展贴出来,其余学生可以一起分享。俗话说“乐此不疲”,要学好一种东西,兴趣是至关重要的。它是获得知识进行创造性创作的一种自觉动机,是鼓舞和推动学生创作的内在动力,也是提高写作水平的重要途径。因此,在写作教学中要鼓励学生创作,培养他们创作的兴趣,好的作品可以将它们推荐到小学生学习报刊、杂志。这样,学生的积极性就调动了,他们也觉得有成就感,也更乐于写作了。
写作在英语教学中是不可忽略的一项,也是学生最难接受的。“宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来。”“滴水穿石非一日之功,冰冻三尺非一日之寒。”教师合理教学,学生长期持之以恒,做生活的有心人,做勤劳的小蜜蜂,多思考,多练笔,一定能对写作产生浓厚兴趣,提高英语写作能力。为今后的英语学习打下结实的基矗
篇16:大学英语写作基础教程
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+ 加入清单以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考可根据自己的情况选择其中的个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this
2)The reasons for this are as follows
3)The reason for this is obvious
4)The reason for this is not far to seek
5)The reason for this is that
6)We have good reason to believe that
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life
.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注:
如考生写第一个句子没有把握,
可将其改写成两个句子。
如:
Great changes have taken place in our life.
There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2.表示好处
1)It has the following advantages
2)It does us a lot of good
3)It benefits us quite a lot
4)It is beneficial to us
5)It is of great benefit to us
例如:
Books are like friends.
They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds
and widen our horizons.Therefore reading extensively is of great benefit to us
3.表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages
2)It does us much harm
3)It is harmful to us
例如:
However,everything divides into two.
Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如:
Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.
Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.
We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例如:
The housing problem that we are confronted with Is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6 .表示变化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2)A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.
3)The computer has brought about many changes in education.
例如:
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to
meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事实、现状
1)We cannot ignore the fact that...
2)No one can deny the fact that...
3)There is no denying the fact that...
4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5)However,that’s not the case.
例如:
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,
we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.
The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比较
1)Compared with A,B...
2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:
Compared with cars ,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.
9.表示数量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...
2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800,000.
3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15%compared with that of January.
例如:
With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s in some spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.
再如:From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
10.表示看法
1)People have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards sth.
2)People have different opinions on this problem.
3)People take different views of(on)the question.
4)Some people believe that...
Others argue that...
例如:
People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However ,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如:
Do“lucky numbers really bring good luck?
Different people have different views on it(注:
一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。)
11.表示结论
1)In short,it can be said that ...
2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that ..
例如:
From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however,its method should be improved.
12.套语
1)It’s well known to us that ...
2)As is known to us...
3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4)From the graph
(table,chart)listed above,it can be seen that ...
5)As a proverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.
例如:
As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.
The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and
the campus is no longer an“ivory tower.As college students,
we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.
Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after
we graduate.
篇17:关于旅游方式的优秀英语四级作文鉴赏
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+ 加入清单Modes of Travelling
1.有人选择随团旅游,有人喜欢独自出游
2.随团旅游和独自出游的利与弊
3.对我而言,最佳的旅游方式是
【精彩范文】
Modes of Travelling
College students, curious and energetic, love traveling; summer and winter vacations provide them with golden opportunities to travel. There are two major modes of travellingtraveling by oneself or traveling in a group organized by travel agencies.
Those two patterns offer different travel experiences, with respective advantages and disadvantages. For the solitary traveler, the greatest advantage is freedom. He is perfectly free to choose his itinerary and plan his schedules, thus he can visit whatever his curiosity leads him to and contemplate over a historical site or a cultural relic for as long as he desires. The trouble is he cannot share his perceptions and excitement with any partners. Moreover, it is time-consuming and difficult to buy train tickets and look for accommodations and in emergency situations an individual traveler is largely helpless. Those problems are non-existent for group travelers because travel agencies take care of everything. Within a group, people who used to be strangers soon become friends. However, the fixed itineraries and tight schedule prevent travelers from satiating their individual curiosities. In addition, tourists are often subjected to forced shopping by tour guides who are more concerned with securing commissions than providing services.
篇18:初三年级英语作文:常用的十种句型
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+ 加入清单一、以形式主语it引导的句型。
句型1. It happened(chanced) that +clause. = sb. happened /chanced sth. = sb. did sth. by chance. 如:
It happened that he was out when I got there. 当我到那儿时,碰巧他不在。
句型2、It seems that sb. do/ be doing/ have done/ had done= Sb. seems to do/ be doing/ have done/ had done 如:(还有动词appear可这样使用)
It seemed that he had been to Beijing before.好象你以去过北京。
二、定语从句:
句型1、由as引导的非限定性的定语从句。如:
As we have known, he is a most good student.众所周知,他是个很好的学生。
句型2、由which引导的非限定性的定语从句。如:
He is a professor, which I have been looking forward to becoming.
他是个教授,那是我一直盼望的职业。(因为先行词professor是表示职业的名词,因此引导词用which,而不用who。(注意:关于which和as之间的比较请看语法的定语从句部分。)
三、让步状语从句
句型1、No matter what / which / who / where / when /
whose+从句,+主句。注意从句中的时态一般情况用一般现在时态。如:
No matter what you do, you must do it well.
四、条件状语从句
句型1、When / So long as / As long as / Once +从句,+主句。(从句也可以放在主句之后。)如:
As long as you give me some money, I will let you go.只要你给我一些钱,我就让你走。
句型2、主句+on condition that+从句。如:
I will go with you on condition that you give me some money.我和你一起去的条件是你给我一些钱。
句型3、主句+unless+从句.(注意:由于unless本身是否定词,所引导的从句的谓语动词用肯定。)如:
I will go there tomorrow unless it rains.我明天去那儿除非下雨。
五、原因状语从句
句型1、主句+in case+从句。(in case表示以免)如:
I will take my raincoat in case it rains.我要把雨衣带上以免下雨。
句型2、主句+due to / because of / owning to / + the fact that +从句。如:
He did not come to school because of the fact that he was
ill.由于他有病了,所以没有来上学。
六、时间状语从句
句型1、When / While / As +从句,+主句。(关于它们之间的区别请看语法。)如:
When I was in the country, I used to carry some water for you.当我在农村时,我常常给你打水。
句型2、主句+after / before +从句. 如:
They hadn’t been married four months before they were
devoiced.他们绘结婚不到四个月就离婚了。
We went home after we had finished the work.我们做完此工作就回家了。
七地点状语从句
句型1、Where +从句,+主句. 如:
Where there is no rain, farming is difficult or impossible.哪里没有雨水,种庄稼是很难的或者是不可能的。
句型2、Anywhere / wherever+从句,+主句. 如:
Anywhere I go, my wife goes too.无论我去哪儿,我的妻子也去哪儿。
八、目的状语从句
句型1、主句+in order that / so that +从句.如:www.yingyuzuowen.cn
I got up early in order that I could catch the first bus.我起得很早,以便能赶上早班车。
九、结果状语从句
句型1、主句+so that+从句. 如:
It was very cold, so that the river froze.天气很冷,因此河水结冰了。
句型2、So+形容词/ 副词+特定动词+主语+…+that+从句.
So interesting is this book that I would like to read it again.这本书那么有趣,我想再读一遍。
十、比较状语从句
句型1、The +形容词比较级……,(主句)the +形容词比较级+……如:
The sooner you do it, the better it will be.越早越好。
句型2、主语+谓语+as +形容词原级+as +被比较的对象. 如:
He is as busy as a bee.他非常忙。
希望以上的初中英语句型可以帮你在写作上解决一个大忙。
篇19:常用的语文考试分析作文
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+ 加入清单我这次考试考得很不好,主要是许多不该错的问题出错,审题不认真,不仔细,马虎。当然不只是考试时不认真,主要是我平时上课不认真听讲作业不认真完成所导致的。
79分这个成绩,的确是十分令人难以理解。这次的考试,有着太多的变故,太多的失败。
分到底扣在哪里了呢从看到分数以后,我就一向在疑惑这个问题。课内古文2分,课外古文3分,课内现代文1分,课外现代文5分,作文10分。先说古文方面。课内2分,课外3分。听起来每个只有一点分而已,但每一点儿合起来就不只“一点儿“了。而且都不该错的题,课内扣分更是不就应。至于课外古文,有的是确实没读懂,当然也有一部分是思考的不够缜密造成的。
在考试的过程中,还有一段小插曲,就是答题纸与试卷的题号对不上了,所以我就先在卷子上写了,这也对我造成了一点影响。至于现代文阅读,课内只扣了一分,是由于有一题答的不够完整。课外阅读扣了5分,相对于其他的多出了不少,虽然是课外,但还是有自己的原因的。而且可能由于考试中的那个“小插曲”,我考试时的注意力有些不集中,这也是造成失分的一个原因。
对于我自己上半个学期的学习,虽然还说得过去,但还是有着很多的“小毛病”,比如上课注意力不集中,作业质量不够高等等。这些,都是我就应改正的。要明白,良好的学生固然有很多,优秀的学生却很少。而优秀与良好的区别就在于有没有这些“小毛病”,这也是提高成绩的关键,所以在接下来的半个学期内,我会好好改正自己的缺点,努力在下次考试中取得更好的成绩。
我保证下次考试必须去的好成绩。不让老师和家长们失望。
这次考不好是因为我学习态度不端正太浮躁,加上平时养成的不认真的习惯都会大大的阻碍我进步甚至是退步。为了扭转这个局面,我决定改掉粗心这个毛病。上课认真听讲课后认真复习,作业认真完成,及时订正不会的问题必须弄懂,不不懂装懂,认真对待每一件事,会做的题争取提提作对。
篇20:考试写作概述与不同类型作文的评分标准
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+ 加入清单雅思考试全程考试时间为2小时55分钟。其中,写作在听力、阅读部分之后出现,是笔试的最后一项。雅思写作考试要求在60分钟内完成两篇作文(Task 1 and Task 2)。写作中,以移民为主的培训类(General Training)和以留学为主的学术类(Academic)试题类型有所不同。
Task 1要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的文章。G类(培训类)要求考生针对题目要求写一封信来询问某方面信息或阐释某种状况。到目前为止,出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。而A类(学术类)则考核图表为主。考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格等。也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。另外,流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。
Task 2 要求考生在40分钟内写作一篇不少于250字的议论文。A类和G类在Task 2方面非常相似。考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见,或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点,或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办。
雅思评分按9分制。基本上,移民或读语言学校起码要5分(Modest User)。留学需要6分(Competent User)以上。如果读的是法律、传媒、管理等名校的研究生的话,写作最好达到7分(Good User)。但考生最后写作成绩并不是Task 1和Task 2的简单平均,而是以Task 2为主。
雅思写作的评分标准不象四六级或托福采用整体式的评分,而是分项式评分(analytical scoring)。也就是说,考官给考生并不只打一个分数,而是根据具体的评分细则分项给分。
书信或图表评分标准:
Task 1(书信或图表)按照以下三方面评分:Task Fulfilment(完成任务);Coherence and Cohesion(连贯与衔接);Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)。
Task Fulfilment指的是考生是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令。具体说来,书信作文应该完成书信的使命,题目里的每一项要求都不可或缺。图表作文应该在对于图表所给出的数据进行分析的基础上指出图表的总体趋势和走向,并点明与总趋势不相吻合的特殊之处,而且还要有数据的支持。
Coherence and Cohesion指的是文章通过一定的衔接手段(Cohesive Devices)来表明上下文的连贯性(Coherence)。衔接手段,或叫语篇纽带,经常用的有(logical)逻辑、(grammatical)语法和(semantic)语义三方面的连接词(connectors)。
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure指的是文章的语言表达。5分或5分以下的作文一般语法错误较多。6分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误,用词和句子基本准确。而7分以上的作文用词丰富(Variety)、句子结构复杂(Complexity)。
议论文评分标准:
Task 2(议论文)的三方面评分标准是:Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据);Communicative Quality(交流质量);Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)。
Arguments, Ideas and evidence涉及对于议论文的内容要求。具体说来,应该是内容切题,论据合理,论证充分。
对于Ideas(内容)而言,应该注意的是不要出现跑题。有的考生由于词汇量有限,导致题目中的单词不认识,从而写作的时候写离题了。比如:Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Do you agree or disagree? 如果考生不懂international tourism是什么意思的话,这道题是没法写的。但是,雅思写作涉及的词汇量并不是大得令人生畏,大概有六七千左右。考生万一碰到个把单词不理解的话,完全可以通过上下文加以推测。比如上面这句话中tension可能是个生词,但是如果考生能想到rather than表示对比关系的话,可以推断tension应该和understanding(理解)形成反义词,那就应该是接近于误解,即紧张关系的意思。所以,对于单词,考生应该平时注意积累,应试时根据上下文推断。
有的考生可能题目里面每个单词都认识依然写跑题,那可能是因为对于所涉及的题材不了解,没话可说。比如:
When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is
pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 如果考生毫不了解所谓的传统技能和生活方式的话,肯定对此束手无策。雅思议论文涉及contemporary social issues of common interest(人们普遍感兴趣的当代社会问题),考生应该平时注意这方面的知识积累和主动思考。
另外,还有的考生不但认识题目中的每个单词,而且也熟悉话题,但依然写跑题,那很有可能是因为没有抓住写作重点。事实上,绝大多数考生写跑题都是因为这个因素。比如:There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the possible causes of this phenomenon, and offer some recommendations. 许多考生都会注意到这道题考的是青少年犯罪话题,而且应该分析原因并提出解决办法。但是,如果原因只写了一段而建议写了数段的话,那么就是犯了忽略重点的错误。因为,如果没有把原因进行详细分析而贸然提出建议的话,这种建议是缺乏依据的。正确的做法应该是原因写二至三段,结果写一段。其次,考生还应注意到这道题考的不是泛泛的青少年犯罪的原因与解决方法,而是为什么现在青少年犯罪人数越来越多的原因和建议。由此看来,考生应该仔细审题,防止产生理解上的偏差。
对于Evidence(论据)来说,关键要合理,并且能够证明论点。比如Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and trying to protect these animals is a waste of resources. Do you agree or disagree? 有同学
这样写道:We can hardly imagine what our life will be like without wild animals. For example, if there is no cat, there will be more mice. The increase in the number of mice will result in the reduction of food resources and the spread of diseases. Thus, it is very important to protect animals. 这里,猫的论据是不合适的,因为猫不属于wild animals(野生动物)。再比如,The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree or disagree? 有同学在论证这道题的时候举了赵括“纸上谈兵”的例子,说赵括就是典型的有很多兵法等理论知识,但是由于缺乏带兵打仗的实际经验,导致秦赵长平之战中赵兵大败,自己也命丧沙场,这充分说明了只有理论知识没有实际经验的恶果,所以应该重视实际经验。但这个论据也是不得体的,因为题目涉及的是大学应该怎么做,而赵括明显没有上过大学。事实上,古代的例子通常不适宜在雅思作文中出现,即便出现了,许多情况下只是作为反面例子与现今状况形成对比。
好的Arguments(论证)应该是充分并且有力的。这就需要运用多种论证手法。常用的论证手法有:explanation(解释说明),emphasis(强调论证),exemplification(举例说明),cause and effect(因果论证),comparison and contrast(比较与对比)facts and statistics(事实和统计数据),concession and refutation(让步与反驳),classification(分类),definition(下定义),analogy(比喻)等。论证手法的运用还应该和关联词结合起来。
Communicative Quality(交流质量)大体上与Task 1的Coherence and Cohesion相同,也涉及文章中代词,关联词,同义反义词等的运用。常用的关联词有:对比however, although, but, nevertheless;结果as a result, as a consequence, therefore, because of this, otherwise;附加in addition, additionally, and, as well as, furthermore, also, moreover;举例for example, for instance, such as, including;强调in fact, indeed;时间after, following, before, until, during, between, while等。
议论文在Vocabulary and Sentence Structure方面与Task 1的要求相同。