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导语:时间真如江河之水,一去不复返。这个学期结束了,我也该对自己做个期末总结了吧!下面是小编自己编写的期末考试后的打算,希望同学们认真阅读。

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篇1:中学生反思考试的作文

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时光飞逝,岁月流梭。怀揣着紧张的心情,进入了5好考场。一张答题卡,承载了我的希望,我这半学期的努力全靠这一张纸,传递出去。当我拿到我的成绩,我为我感到开心。虽然只拿到了250名的成绩,但对于我三月份月考320名的成绩,我已经进步了70名,但是我并不会满足,我会继续努力冲进前200.我并不认为我的能力只局限于250名,现在反思自己为什么不能拿到高分。

语文,分数101分。其实这个分数我并不满意,我的阅读题其实可以拿更高分,并不只有0,3这些分数。我觉得是因为我不够认真看阅读,因为我感到时间紧迫,所以便放松了,这是不对的,就算只有几分钟,也要认真将题做好,做到位。我的作文只拿了38分,但是我不会轻易放弃。我会这此为警告,是自己多练习作文,争取拿到42、43的高分。我的作文,一想到是39,一直没突破,这说明了我的水平还不够,需要多看些作文书,来吸取精华,创造新成绩。我的古文,一项很烂,这次也不例外。但是,我还是会将家中的古文书《世说新语》、《古文观止》等看完,使自己对古文的理解更透彻、清晰。我平时上课会偷懒,老师的笔记有时也不抄,这些都是导致成绩下降的元凶。所以,以后上课我不能分心,要全心投入到课堂中去。将老师笔记熟背,将老师布置的作业、背诵按时完成。考完试仔细检查,不能马虎大意。我期待着下一次月考我发挥的水平,加油!

数学,分数60分。数学是我最薄弱的一刻。也正是因为这样,我对数学渐渐失去了信心失去了动力。每次教师,我对数学都抱着爱怎样怎样的心理,所以总不能拿高分。我对数学一直都不认证。对平方更、算数平方公里都会弄混。刚开始一直都在30、20几风之间徘徊。后来经过自己的努力提高了许多,现在慢慢地宋雪莲,上了初一下学期,开始不认真,直接导致了我只考60分。我有时许多地方都搞不懂也不回去问老师、同学。出在“三人行”白板上不懂的数学题别人帮我解答了,我也不会撕下来,就贴在那儿不管不顾。每次下定决心好好学习时,便开始认真,课时三分钟热度,一会儿便将决心跑到九霄云外去了。不是我没有毅力,是自己的潜意识就懒。我上课不应该低着头不看黑板,不应该上课就走神分心。我想如果我懂得吸取教训,那么,我应该会更好。以后,我会将老师的作业完成好,上课听讲,认真做笔记。不会再与旁人上课时说话、玩耍。我会配合好张老师的工作,不会让她失望了。她给予了我希望,我不饿能辜负他的期盼。

英语,分数89分。我承认这次考得不好,以前一直都是90多分的,这次这个分数,让自己、家长都很担心,担心成绩退步地这么快,以后该怎么办?成绩下滑,唉,还不是不认真惹的祸。我现在学习英语越来越放松,写周报不认真改预学案不认真。我不能因为会了而骄傲和放松,这样会使后面的同学追上来。我们在同样的起跑线上,同样是在年级排名与成绩中追逐的运动员,当你有一个障碍时,便要勇敢地跨越过去,因为后面也有人在试图冲刺,当他们与你擦肩而过时,一切都已成定局。所以每当看到英语成绩变回害怕,怕万一有一天成绩下滑,便有人要超过自己了,到那个时候,便有二倍的努力去超越。改预学案时,要认真。不要认为只打勾勾错错就行了,书上自己写错的知识点,不要走马观花,看完就行,要取其精华,缩在脑海中。周报上的题,我总是做完就不理了,其实,这上面的题都是精华,我应该认真听老师讲解,不应该马虎对待。每次知识对下答案而已,从不听老师讲解题目。

历史,分数83分。历史是我自认为的强项,课时身为历史课代表的我却考得这样差。虽然班中只有11人上了80分,但是这不重要,重要的是这证明,已经有11人多在努力了,我这次都没超过一些以前成绩平平的人。题纲我都没有好好背诵,知识胡乱看了几遍,没有真正用心去背。书上的笔记,有一些也没有记住。老师上课讲的话,我也没有去认真的记。有时,连作业也是等快收时才开始做。有时,只是将笔记及在树上,然后再也不去看。这都是需要注意的。

地理,分数80分。地理在近一个学籍一直都不错,至少没掉下80分。但是书上笔记却做得很少。比如说欧洲西部,日本这两章都没有去认真学、背、做。老师说的重点,也没有认真国,背过,知识光靠画线去记,只是有个形而已,其实根本心不在焉。欧洲西部,书上也没一点笔记,只是将老师黑板的笔记记下而已,没有自己的理解,只是自己将老师的当成自己的,所以学习效率非常低。有时还分不清W、S,这些东西南北代号。如果自己能积极起来,那么便太棒了。

生物,分数……60分以下,不及格。以前生物也是70多,现在降到这么低,实在出乎我意料。我一直没在生物这一学科下功夫,都是在别的科上功夫,总是遗忘了这一科的重要性,血管、体循环、呼吸这些都没有好好背过知识一扫而过,所以才得了不及格。不只是出乎意料,还是意料之中了。我现在很苦恼,怕以后还会犯同样的错误。我要多请教办理生物学霸的学习方法,多请教老师,以后啊还要将这次的生物分数到红灯,告诫自己要认真学习这一薄弱之项。

政治分数81分。感觉较于上一学期,进步了许多,从70——80,十分的飞跃。但是这不是最还得成绩。我的题纲都没怎么背,书也没怎么看。我感觉自己没有认真。我不知是我什么,是因为运气让我这次考81分。我没有真正用心。回家也没有好好复习,只是草草地看了一下,我这次终于争了一口气,突破了八十大关,相信以后如果我更努力,可以拿到90分得好成绩。以后我要努力背题纲,老师上课时要认真听讲。老师布置的作业要认真做完。

我相信,下次一定会更好。

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篇2:雅思考试小作文写作技巧

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1, 小作文的字数不够乃低级错误之最!

2 , 尽量把字迹写工整,虽然字迹工整与否并不是评分标准范畴里的,但若你的英文写成了狂草书,考官也是会抓狂的!

3 , 小作文不需要用太过于复杂的句式,能避免使用定语从句就不用,记住一句话:用最精辟的语言表达出最完整的信息!

4 , 在小作文中放入插入语,伴随状语等形式能让你的文章更显精辟!

5 , 小作文是客观性作文,所以你的文章中只能使用客观用词,不能出现 because 等主观性解释性的语句。

6 ,不要用一般现在时贯穿首尾,一般情况下小作文主要时态为过去时。此外,将来时不会出现在小作文中!

7 ,单词重复属于小作文写作中的大忌!在精辟的同时请选用多样化的词汇彰显你的学术范儿。

8 , 大作文所占分值更多,所以若遇大作文比较难写,先干掉大作文!

9 , 老外非常注重英文写作时候的逻辑,所以在你的小作文里请分段清楚,那最能体现你清晰的逻辑思路。

10 , 熟练掌握小作文三大段框架,即开头介绍段,中间描述段和结尾总结段,这会让你的文章看起来更具有条理和整洁。

11 ,中间描述段要以便于对比为目的,从对比和类比,从不同属性的比较,从最具有代表性的数据入手等都是行之有效的分段方法。

12 , 小作文写作最好有明确是时间分配,即准备阶段 3 分钟,写作阶段 15 分钟。严格遵循 18 分钟完成小作文的要求。绝对不能抢大作文的风头!

13 , 绝对不能忽略对比,当你用完比较级,最高级后开始绞尽脑汁时,何不尝试一下从数据入手,从曲线本身入手,从总量对比入手使用分数,倍数,百分比等语法手段多方位多角度立体式轰炸呢?

14 , 字数不能过多,字数过多只说明一个问题:你在描述 all features 而不是 main features !

15 ,在确定好首段改写 introduction 以及末段总结后,从宏观出发,找到分段点。再确定 main features. 最后选定合适的词和句。层层递进,逐个击破!

16, 不要为了凑字数而写,在准备阶段最好在心中有数,设定好整篇文章可以用几个句子完成,以期达到精辟和有效,没用的信息只会让考官反感。

17 ,结尾段不要遗漏,相反,重申总结或通过中间段分析得出结论能提高你文章的整体层次感!

18 ,单词拼写错误是写作中最不划算的扣分项,请写完后迅速浏览自己文中的单词拼写问题。

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篇3:雅思考试

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Many successful persons seem alike to have a very strong will called desire. It seems anuncommon common sense to make success happen. Probably no other human characteristicis more outstanding than the will to plan carefully and to work patiently.

As a saying goes: "Success favors the prepared mind." For this reason, preparing ones careerwith details is like seriously mapping lifes routes toward achievements. Only by so doing with aconsistent mind can one prevent desire from becoming blind ambition seeking accidently tostrike it rich or downright to be particularly lucky in life. In other words, a successful person iscapable of setting goals and paving the way against all odds. Of course, important to successare also such human qualities as honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor, among othervirtues. However, these characteristics must be considered as only advantages which do notalone guarantee success in life.

Few would doubt that working with patience is an expression of desire. Nothing worthwhilecomes easily and good work takes pains. This means that a successful person is one who canmake the best of education and talents, if any. Unfortunately, an educated person would remainonly an educated person unless possessing passion to do more. Likewise, it would be a wasteof talents if gifts from heaven are abandoned in idleness. So it is work, continuous work thatcan accomplish results that last.

As a conclusion, it is easier said than done to be able to plan and to work in such a way thatthe way to success can be ensured. A motto may apply: "Where there is a will; there is a way."When people do not succeed, it might be either that the desire is not strong enough, or that itmight be the absence of desire in the first place.

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篇4:2024年雅思考试写作基础

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1.先进的科学技术advanced science and technology.

2.经济的快速发展the rapid development of economy

3.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard .

4.面临新的机遇和挑战be faced with new opportunities and challenges.

5.人们普遍认为It is commonly believed/ recognized that…

6.社会发展的必然结果the inevitable result of social development

7.引起了广泛的公众关注arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention.

8.不可否认It is undeniable that…/There is no denying that …

9.热烈的讨论/争论a heated discussion/ debate

10.有争议性的问题a controversial issue

11.完全不同的观点a totally different argument

12.一些人…而另外一些人… Some people… while others…

13.就我而言/就个人而言As far as I am concerned, / Personally,

14.就…达到绝对的一致reach an absolute consensus on…

15.有充分的理由支持be supported by sound reasons

16.双方的论点argument on both sides

17.发挥着日益重要的作用play an increasingly important role in …

18.对…必不可少be indispensable to …

19.正如谚语所说As the proverb goes:

20.…也不例外…be no exception

21.对…产生有利/不利的影响exert positive/ negative effects on …

22.利远远大于弊the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.

23.导致,引起lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in

24.复杂的社会现象a complicated social phenomenon

25.责任感/成就感sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement

26.竞争与合作精神sense of competition and cooperation

27.开阔眼界widen ones horizon/ broaden ones vision

28.学习知识和技能acquire knowledge and skills

29.经济/心理负担financial burden / psychological burden

30.考虑到诸多因素take many factors into account/ consideration

31.从另一个角度from another perspective

32.做出共同努力make joint efforts

33.对…有益be beneficial / conducive to…

34.为社会做贡献make contributions to the society

35.打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for…

36.综合素质comprehensive quality

37.无可非议blameless / beyond reproach /above (或beyond) reproach

39.致力于/投身于be committed / devoted to…

40.应当承认Admittedly

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篇5:雅思考试小作文的五个技巧

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柱状图:“比较”(找出similarity)和“对比”(找出difference),是写作的关键,既要横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征,也要分别描写各个柱子的个性特征。

饼图:是所有图表题中最好写的一种,值得注意的是要处理好如何丰富百分比的表达和“占”的表达。不要一直用数字加百分比的格式,如25%。特定的数字可以采取多样性的表达,如25%=a quarter of, 50%=half of, 50%=a,or the majority of。

曲线图:关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势,学会general classification,即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰。接下来在分类描述每个阶段的specific trend,同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据!可以使用一些比较native的单词和短语来描述trend。

表格题:考察例举数字的能力和方法。注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。

流程图:注意流程图里的“因果关系”或每一流程的“承前启后”关系;表达每一流程的主体内容,阐明这种关系;揭示其内在联系或规律;最后,给予简要归纳和总结。

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篇6:英语雅思考试作文经典句子

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雅思写作有规律可循,掌握一些有用的句型,对你的写作必然是有百益而无害的,下面是小编整理的相关内容,希望对你有帮助。

1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking。

依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework。

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet。

没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation。

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation。

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study。

说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness。

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism。

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution。

越来越多的专家相信移民(微博)对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,像犯罪和卖淫。

10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers。

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。

11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it。

无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement。

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy。

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。

14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price。

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus。

当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

16. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse。

考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。

17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets。

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure。

无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。

19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place。

尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

20. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life。

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篇7:留学澳洲:雅思考试作文写作技巧

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一、外显连接

所谓外显连接是指用特定的连接词将相关信息进行连接。通常情况下,例子作为论据由for example, for instance, like, such as, take… as 等引出。

如:it is undeniable that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways. For example, when an emergency occurs, such as a traffic accident or a violent crime, mobile phones can help the victims to call the police or an ambulance immediately for help.

本例中,for example 引出例子论证“mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways.” 而后面的 such as 则引出emergency 的具体形式。For instance 与它的用法完全相同,即后面要接句子例证。 Like, such as, take…as 等直接名词(或相当于名词的词)。由于这些都是基本常识,这里不再赘述。

为了使连接词多样化,建议考生运用下面的一些短语(或句式)连接论点和论据:

…is a case in point;

…serve as a typical example

…can be taken as an example;

one example is that…

another one is that等

如:Working part time when you are studying in university is beneficial to your life. I myself is a case in point(or‘my experiences serve as a typical example’). Through those experiences, I have learned to be independent and responsible.

二、内化连接

实际上,大家看原汁原味的文英文文章会发现有些信息的连接不用外显式,而是通过某些特定的词或者特定的方式给读者以清晰的层次感,从而使文章信息传递更通畅。

下面我们来看一下哪些例证可以省去连接词,实现内化连接。

1、人物经历作例子

其中的人物可以是名人,Thomas Edison gave us an example that success only comes after persistence and hard work. 也可以是作者自己的亲身经历 I remember that ten years ago cell phones were unusual and seldom seen. 人物经历作例子因为其较强的故事性而引人关注。但是切记,如果运用名人做例证,要注意信息的准确性; 如果运用自己的亲身经历做例子则要注意例子选择是否典型、有说服力。但是无论怎样,有人物经历时,一定会给人以非常明确的细节信息的感觉,所以完全可以省去连接词。

2、数字信息作例子:

引入带有数字信息的例证,除可以更具体、更详实的说明观点外,也可以内化连接词,因为数字信息所要传递的一定是一个量化的概念,而这一概念就是它所要论证的中心。看个例子:

The work was immense: filling about eighty large notebooks (and without a library to hand), Johnson wrote the definitions of over 40,000 words, and illustrated their many meanings with some 114,000 quotations drawn from English writing on every subject, from the Elizabethans to his own time.

例子中immense是观点中心词,后面的具体数字都是对这一中心词的佐证。(当然我们不要忘记这里“:”也是在帮助这段文字内化连接,相当于“for example”)

3、专有名词信息作例子

人名、地名属于细节信息的范畴,也经常出现在例证中,以一种’fact’的形式出现。如:

Air pollution is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen concern around the globe. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and Tokyo, new solutions to this old problem are being proposed and implemented with ever increasing speed.当你看到这些地名时,一定会想到它们是某一类具有相同性质的地域的代表,那么自然也就是’点’信息,而非‘面’信息,从而可以省去连接词的使用,却依然保持主次分明。

其它诸如期刊杂志名、书名等专有名词也可以有类似的用法。

4、一些小的介词(短语)引导例子

如果大家注意总结,会发现雅思阅读文章中有一些介词(短语)也可以引出例子。

如:from…to: Toughened glass is found everywhere, from cars and bus shelters to the windows, walls and roofs of thousands of buildings around the world.

再如:including: …..

Other substances were then introduced: including fillers, catalysts and hexa.

这里including 相当于such,like等。

综上,举例论证除了需要牢牢掌握大家熟知的表举例的连接词外,还要注意积累一些隐去连接词却嵌入一些表细节信息的词汇的情况,或者注意学习老外用标点符号以及被我们轻视的一些小词来标示文章层次的巧妙的做法。同时,同学们也要关注一下,人物经历和事实信息(尤其是带有数字、专有名词的事实)作例证更有说服力也非常容易掌握。所以同学们要从举例论证的连接词、常用例子类型等角度全面掌握举例论证,从而让举例论证更好地论证观点,更好的为雅思大作文服务。

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篇8:雅思考试大作文

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Task:Many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries are suitable for life at that time, and cause many problems today. Describe the problems it may cause and give the possible solution.

解析:

这是一道report类作文题,不需要考生就某个观点展开讨论,但要求考生描写一种现象及其产生的问题,然后提出解决方案,与通常意义上的报告有些类似,因此我们将这种题型定义为report题型。

如何描写某一现象/事物可能引起的问题?或者说,我们应该从哪些方面去寻找这些问题?现在即将给大家一个示范,看看三层次理论究竟如何具体使用。本题涉及的问题是:以前的城市都是按照当时的历史条件和生活需求来建造的,现在产生了很多问题,如何解决这些问题?

物质层次:衣食住行。过去不需要大型超市,现在需要;过去不需要宽阔的街道,现在需要;过去不需要地铁和机场,现在需要。这些属于物质层次的范畴。

心理层次:休闲娱乐。过去不需要高级电影院,现在需要;过去不需要公共图书馆/博物馆,现在需要;过去不需要大型广场,现在需要。这些属于心理层次的范畴。

社会层次:环境与社会。过去不需要区分居住区、工业区和商业区,现在需要;过去(也许)不需要城市中心花园,现在需要;过去不需要废品回收站,现在需要。这些属于社会层次的范畴。

大家看看,如果我们有一条明确的思维线索,我们就不会再感觉头脑空空,或者感觉头脑混乱,按照这个思路写下去,既有很多内容,又能确保逻辑性,同时解决无话可说和思绪混乱两大写作难题。

Sample answer:

Many cities and towns built a few hundred years ago have become obsolete now, no matter how brilliant they used to be, for they are no longer suitable for life today.

In my view, these cities and towns may cause three kinds of problems. At the basic level, they can no longer provide satisfactory conditions for our modern existence. A bit more than 100 years ago, people did not use buses or cars, so the city did not have broad streets; people did not travel by train or airplane, so the city was not equipped with any railway station or airport; most people shopped in the stores near their homes, so the city did not have to have shopping malls or supermarkets. As more and more people rush into urban areas, the city has expanded with the population, and modern urban people would find themselves unable to survive without the broad streets, the train, the airplane and the supermarket. Meanwhile, cities and towns built centuries ago do not have enough entertainment and sports facilities available to contemporary city dwellers who, relieved of the manual labor by the technological advances, suddenly find they have a great amount of free time. For example, these cities and towns are not likely to have 3-D or IMAX movie theaters for movie fans, or huge stadiums for sports fans. Consequently, people may find their life in such cities and towns are most boring and tedious. Finally, the cities and towns constructed long time ago cannot possibly have anticipated the negative effects of environmental issues brought over by our modern life, so they usually have residence area, industrial area and business area all mixed up without separating them. This is, of course, unbearable to our urban life style today.

While the century-aged cities and towns may carry much cultural and historical value, they must be re-constructed in the interest of people living in them today. The city infrastructure must be reshaped and include such facilities as shopping centers, sports stadiums, wide streets and pavements and provide services like metro, train, and airplane. And to minimize the unfavorable effects of modern life on urban populace, the cities and towns should be set the areas apart by their respective functions.

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篇9:考试后的思考

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5号的期末考试结束了,可是我很担心,不知道考的怎么样,因为考试前我和奶奶有个约定,如果我三门功课考不到90分以上,奶奶就要回家,不管我了,所以我的压力很大,只能等结果。

我担心的事今天有消息了——考分下来了,我考得不理想,和奶奶的要求只差一步,语文考了87。5,没上90分,和同学比,我还差一些,没有达到平均分,我就不由自主地哭了,心里特别的难受。在复习的时候,我也没少用功,为什么我就考不了高分呢?我把自己关在房间里,越哭越伤心,恨不得打自己几下,奶奶和妈妈把门推开,劝我不要哭了,现在哭又有什么用呢?只能在下学期好好努力,把功课赶上去,但是我还是很上心,我怕奶奶回老家,以后家里空荡荡的,因为爸爸妈妈要上班,事情比较多,经常家里只剩我一个人,我真害怕,所以越来越伤心,奶奶可能看出了我的心思,就把我抱在怀里,认真又严肃的说:“这次原谅你,也取消约定,在下学期一定要好好学习,在这个假期里,除了完成作业,还要找找差距,主要改变学习的浮躁,满足于一知半解,没有真正地理解,所以题稍微有变化就不会了,马虎大意,不看清题就下笔,所以就造成不该错的题了,而且学习的自觉性不够。”听了奶奶的话,我决心在新的一年里,发扬成绩,克服缺点,百尺竿头更进一步!

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篇10:雅思考试分有哪些小技巧呢

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simple and easy tips for at least securing a 7 band score in writing.

1. spend 5 minutes on jotting down points on your question paper.

2. First impression is the last impression. Heard of this expression?

( It means that your intro should be rock soild, that further means it should be devoid of silly spelling and grammar mistakes. It should be delicious in taste that keeps a checker/reader at their sit edge for wanting more and more).

3. Your body paras should be stick to 2-3 good points on either side you choose. They can be based on your personal experiences or from history or from current events. Develop your essay around those points.

4. Your concluding para should be short and it is no more introducting points but rather reinforcing your firm stand on the topic. A three-four line conclusion is good enough.

5. When you write an essay. Write it straight from your heart. There must be a soul behind the writing. There should be some emotions in the essay.

6. Keep your writing sentences short. If you want to write a long sentence, its length should not be exceeded over two short sentences.

7. Use some $5 vocabulary words (lets say 6-7 in the whole essay). So that they can stand out and the checker can notice them easily. Those $5 vocabuary words are common words that you see in newspaper articles over and over again.

8. Dont worry about essay length. A 260 word essay can secure a good band than a 350 word essay.

9. Dont ever give a single chance to your checker to pick up speeling mistakes. If you write the essay with that mentality, youll do weill in the real test.

10. Learn to relax so that you can come up with good points for your essay. Writing essays should be a past time activity for you rather than a cumbersome chore which is forced upon you by a third party.

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篇11:雅思考试作文训练题

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100109 社会 Some people believe that the charity organizations should give aid to those in greatest need,wherever they live. Some people believe that the charity organizations would better concentrate on helping people who live in own country instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

100109 科技 Some people argue that the technology such as mobile phone destroys social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

100114 政府 In todays world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and carry out most on scientific research. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

100123 社会 The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming much wider, the rich richer, the poor even poorer. What problems can the situation cause and give the solutions.

100123 社会 Many people are moving to big cities. Why is that? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?

100130 社会 Today there is a great increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce this problem?

100206 社会 Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

100211 社会Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of views and give your own opinion.

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篇12:雅思考试

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Dont confuse a university degree with a successful life, even though higher education canopen doors to a range of economic options. It is one thing to make a good living, and yet it isquite another to make a good fortune. In various aspects of life, success is to be measurednot so much by the education that one has as by the effort that one makes, plus of course lotsof luck.

Undoubtedly, there are some types of success in professional life that are dependent on auniversity education. You need a college degree to have a career in a profession such as law,medicine, engineering, or teaching. In todays workplace, job opportunities and academicdegrees are linked in such a way that it seems difficult, if not impossible, for an individualwithout good qualifications to make any career success happen. According to national statisticsshown by economists, bachelors degree holders earn upward of 40 percent more than high-school graduates. Based on this pattern, income levels rise as educational levels rise. Manystudies also reveal that university education introduces you not only choices of career but alsolife goals and the power to reach these goals. In short, being able to go through highereducation increases ones employability and earning potential as well as ones self-esteem.

Having a degree, however, does not mean that one will be successful in life. In some work fields,what is crucial are hard work and being lucky. To begin with, you do not have to have a highereducation to become successful people like business-persons, sports players, political leaders,movie and music stars. While hard work is motivated by the desire to triumph, success bydestiny is associated with that old ABC--ability, breaks and courage. Not all success stories aretold about university graduates, nor are academic degrees particularly essential when it comesto becoming wealthy. Ironic but true, successful entrepreneurs even benefit from not havingacademic qualifications, because going to college and taking examinations forces people tolearn and think like other millions of graduates. This actually makes it less likely that they willcome up with creative ideas and truly mould-breaking insights on which amazing successes arebuilt.

There is no arguing the importance of a university education as long as employability andincome are concerned, but success also comes from effort to do the right work at the righttime. If you think a successful life means having a lot of money, you are far from wrong.Nevertheless, it does not follow that the door to success is closed for people who do not haveacademic results.

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篇13:雅思考试中克服写作障碍的方法

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在多年的雅思教学中,我发现学生在实际考试中面临着不同的写作障碍,影响了考试成绩,雅思考试中应该如何克服写作障碍。归纳起来大致有以下几个方面:

一、真情流露,无从下笔;

有的考生在考试时见到作文题,顿感思路塞车,好像有许多话要说,但又不知究竟应从那里写起。明智的做法是“投其所好、尽情发挥。”考生不妨把作文的要求量化到每一个段落,一篇250词左右的作文一般不会超过15句话,把这15句话根据题目要求分配到各段中去,每一段大概只说那么几句话,事实上往往是说得越多错误越多。因此,每句话紧扣提纲,见好就收,这才是最稳妥的对策。

二、心里明白,难以表达;

在考场上有的考生题目看得懂,提纲也明白,就是不知道该说什么,头脑里一片空白。这是在雅思写作考试中的一种常见的现象,针对这一现象,最有效的办法就是要善于联想到一些具体的事实,具体的例证和具体的现象。事实上,雅思的作文题目一定是一个具有社会普遍型话题,其目的是让不同教育背景的考生都有话可说。因此,考生一定能就题目联想起具体细小的事情再形成观点。把看得见摸得着的事物带来的思考变成作文里的实质内容,这不失为一种很好的策略。

因此,当头脑出现空白时,应该由具体细小的、琐碎的、微不足道的事物所引发的思考形成观点,再进行论述。这种定式思维的形成需要多下功夫多练习。

三、一味追求标新立异,导致无从下笔;

考试时通常发现有的考生聚精会神的坐在那里冥思苦想,非要想出一个与众不同的观点。陷入这种境地的考生,显然犯了一个根本性的错误,参考时间为40分钟的作文,一般应在35分钟之内完成,再用几分钟的时间检查语言错误。可有的考生十几分钟一句话都写不了,就是因为他太进入角色了,这是考试中一个很大的误区。

考作文的目的纯粹是通过这一命题形式,考查考生的英语水平如何,其它英语写作《雅思考试中应该如何克服写作障碍》。命题人关注的是书面表达能力,而不是看一个人有没有内容,思想有没有深度,所以“一味追求标新立异”是没有必要的。

四、构思、写作不统一,落实有困难;

实事求是的讲,要求考生完全运用英语思维来写作文是不现实的。很多考生在实际写作过程中,脑子里想的是中文句子,然后再把中文句子译成英文。因此采用“得其意,忘其形”的方法,忘掉中文的语法结构,句法形式则可能要整个地打乱.,“钻进去,跳出来”。所谓“钻进去”就是要看意思是否到位了,“跳出来”就是要忘记中文的语言形式。实际上把英文译成中文,关键是要在转换中把意思表达出来。

针对构思、写作不统一,落实有困难情况。必须摒弃翻译中追求一一对应的关系,并机械地把中文译成英文的方法,应该把中文句子结构彻底地忘记,然后用比较简单的“万能”英语表达。平时不妨做一做这样的练习,通过阅读不认识词条的英文注解,然后试着把单词译成中文词,再去对照英汉词典的汉语释义,慢慢地就会开始领会用英语表达的门道了。

五、被动心态压抑新构思。

尽管雅思考试作文为规定式命题,但考生仍可积极主动地发挥。其主动性在于采取回避的策略,表达上采取迂回的方式,即运用不很复杂的语言。内容的取舍上避重就轻地写比较易于表达的内容。很多人在写作过程中从头至尾都处于被动状态,当有内容想要表达清楚的时候,却又发现种种途径都不可能表达好,只好硬着头皮把自己意识到没把握的东西勉强写上去。连自己都意识到可能是错误的东西,只会产生于己不利的负面影响。所以,当有的内容感觉一点找不着,英语实在表达不清楚的时候,就应该彻底地放弃。单词拼写错误也是雅思考试作文写作的一大问题。常用单词是不能拼错的,有的单词平时会拼写,考试时突然没把握了,不妨换一下或许还能想起另外一个难度大一点、拼写有把握的来代替。应该回避明确知道自己不会拼写的词。如果没法换一个词,将句子改换一种说法亦未尝不可。有的考生在考卷上没把握的地方标上问号,或者把两种可能都写上,让判卷老师选择,这个方法是不可取的。

总之,不能让自己陷人被动,想说什么,用什么方式说。说多少,说到什么程度。一切都应由考生主动把握,这样才会减少心理上的压力,更好地发挥出自己应有的写作水平。

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篇14:雅思写作雅思考试秘笈作文

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[雅思写作]雅思考试作文抢分秘笈

作文中常用句套:

下文中出现的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),

要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换.

开头:

When it comes to ..., some think ...

There is a public debate today that ...

A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?

Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.

提出观点:

Now there is a growing awareness that...

It is time we explore the truth of ...

Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.

进一步提出观点:

... but that is only part of the history.

Another equally important aspect is ...

A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...

Besides, other reasons are...

提出假想例子的方式:

Suppose that...

Just imagine what would be like if...

It is reasonable to expect...

It is not surprising that...

举普通例子:

For example(instance),...

... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)

A good case in point is...

A particular example for this is...

引用:

One of the greatest early writers said ...

"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...

"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).

"......". How often we hear such words like there.

讲故事

(先说故事主体),this story is not rare.

..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.

..., the story still has a realistic significance.

提出原因:

There are many reasons for ...

Why .... , for one thing,...

The answer to this problem involves many factors.

Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...

The first reason can be obiviously seen.

Most people would agree that...

Some people may neglect that in fact ...

Others suggest that...

Part of the explanation is ...

进行对比:

The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...

Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...

Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.

A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...

承上启下:

To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...

A study of ... will make this point clear

让步:

Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...

I do not deny that A has its own merits.

结尾:

>From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw

the conclusion that ...

In summary, it is wiser ...

In short...

在作文中引用合适的名言警句,会给你的文章增色许多。这里收集了我本人喜爱的一些名言,可能会对你有用。我们使用引用的位置可以在开头结尾或正文段落中,

常见的使用形式如下:

One of the greatest early writers said ...

"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...

"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).

"......". How often we hear such words like there.

Useful quotations

逆境

by Robert Collier

In every adversity there lies the seed of an equivalent advantage. In every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory next time.

努力与成功

by Ann Landers

Opportunities are usually disguised as hard work, so most people dont recognize them.

坚持

by Ralph Waldo Emerson

No one can cheat you out of ultimate success but yourselves.

Confucius 孔子

Our greatest glory is not in never falling...

but in rising every time we fall.

坚持

Mother Teresa

To keep a lamp burning we have to keep putting oil in it.

Henry Ford

Nothing is particularly hard if you divide it inuo small jobs.

Winston Churchill

Never, never, never, never give up.

Albert Einstein

In uhe middle of difficulty lies opportunity.

努力与成功

by Crassus

Those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly.

Thomas Edison

There is no substitute for hard work.

Leo Tolstoi

The strongest of all warriors are these two- Time and Patience.

Thomas Jefferson

Im a great believer in luck,

and I find the harder I work...

the more I have of it.

Robert Collier

Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.

Ray A. Croc

Luck is a dividend of sweat. The more you sweat, the luckier you get.

实际经验与间接经验

Youll learn more about a road by traveling it...

than by consulting all the maps in the world.

动机与结果

Vince Lombardi

Winning isnt everything...

but wanting to win is.

John F. Kennedy

We choose to go!to the moon and other things , oot because they are easy, but because they are hard.

Thucydides

The strong do what they will.

The weak do what they must.

为人态度:

John Wooden

Talent is God given--Be Humble.

Fame is man given-- Be Thankful.

Conceit is self given --Be Careful.

行动:

Theodore Roosevelt

Do what you can , with what you have , with where you are.

Publilius Syrus Maxim

No one knows what he can do till he tries.

Terence

There is nothing so easy but that i

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t becomes difficult when you do it reluctantly.

Thomas Fuller

A wise man turns chance into good fortune.

William Hazlitt

Prosperity is a great teacher;

adversity is a greater.

William Penn

No pains, no palm;

no thorns, no throne;

no gall , no glory;

no cross, no crown.

Will Rogers

Even if youre on the right track, youll get run over... if you just sit there.

Opportunity rarely knocks on your door.

Knock rather on opportunitys door if you ardently wish to enter.

成功与失败

Vince Lombardi

Its not whether you get knocked down.

...Its whether you get up again.

Winston Churchill

An optimist sees an opportunity in every calamity;

a pessimist sees a calamity in every opportunity.

热情(年轻/年老)

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.

信心

James Allen

The will to do springs from the knowledge that we can do.

Samuel Johnson

Few things are impossible to diligence and skill.

Aughey

Lost time is never found again.

Voltaire

No problem can stand the assault of sustained thinking.

Napoleon

Victory belongs to the most persevering.

细心

Euipides

Leave no stone unturned.

计划与工作

Norman Vincent Peale

Plan your work for today and every day;

then work your plan.

Henry Ford

Failure is only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.

Thomas Edison

I start where the last man left off.

理想与现实

What the mind of man can conceive and believe,

the mind of a man can achieve.

勤奋

Benjamin Franklin

Plough deep while sluggards sleep.

目标

Henry David Thoreau

In the lone run men hit only what they aim at.

幸运

Emily Dickinson

Luck is not chance...

Its toil...

Fortunes expensive smile is earned.

勤奋

Thomas Edison

Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.

Useful Quotations

想象力

Albert Einstein

Imagination is more important than knowledge.

挑战:

Walter Begehot

The great pleasure in life is doing what people say you cannot do.

机会与准备

Abraham Lincoln

I will prepare and some day my chance will come.

信心与事实

Henry Ford

Whether you think you can or think you cant -- you are right.

English Proverb

Where theres a will theres a way.

There is no failure excepting no longer trying.

Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.

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篇15:雅思考试作文检查重点

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作文检查重点

1.是否使用了正确的语法结构,比方说,动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确、词性(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、名词单复数、冠词错误和介词错误。

2.句式是否有变化 (如各种从句的使用、分词结构等 )

3.使用了一定的词汇量 ( 如用同义词或词组来避免过多的重复)

4.标点、拼写没有错误。

5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想,所有扩展句都紧扣主题。

6.使用了过渡性词语,因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。

7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。

8.提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。

9.明确的观点。

10.每一段话都紧扣文章的主题。

1、3、4、6为考试时检查的重点,最先检查首段,和每段的首末句。

除了最为基本的单词,语法,句型变化外,我们还需要注意文章本身的逻辑性以及完整性,最后小编祝大家都能考出好成绩。

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Contrary to the common belief that good communication skill is vital to becoming a leader,actually leadership is practiced not so much in words as in actions that inspire confidence. Itmay be said that leaders are usually good talkers but the reverse is not necessarily true. Aleader had better be recognized as a dealer in confidence, one who knows the way, goes theway and shows the way and, in addition, is good at the art of communication as the languageof leadership.

A leaders right actions plus perhaps effective words can do magic to get the message carryingconfidence across to others and guide them to hope more, dream more, become more, andeven fly higher. This refers particularly to an extraordinary leader as a politician whose betterideas lead to popular trust, as often happens in more difficult times. Remember a Chineseproverb to that effect? "Not the cry, but the flight of a wild duck, leads the flock to fly andfollow." Ones good communication skill, like talking more and speaking louder, mightotherwise be just hollow words, should ones deeds not match that kind of virtue which winstrust from followers. Accordingly, it stands to reason that the greater one is in power aboveothers, the more one ought to excel them in virtue since none ought to lead who is not betterthan others.

To do justice to good communication skill, it is better to look at it as a big advantage ratherthan a great virtue in the moral sense of the word. As can be seen ever so often, what mattersto the audience is the singer and not the song, meaning a crafted talker can move the mob,even though the message may be far from correct politically. And that is probably why so manyordinary leaders are seen, who represent the power of persuasion and not the real aspirationsof their followers. From this viewpoint, good communication skill alone may actually make anordinary leader, but may still be short of making a good leader, let alone a great leader. Thedifference lies in that a good leader can inspire people to have confidence in the leader. And agreat leader can further inspire people to have confidence in themselves as well.

The confidence factor aside, good talkers have always ruled and will continue to rule, with theresults of some cases ending well and some ending badly. Therefore it is desirable having thecombination of the virtue of leadership and the art of eloquence. Nevertheless, the ultimatetruth must be acknowledged that true leadership is always associated with virtuous actionsrather than simply with skillful communication in words.

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篇17:考试过后的思考作文

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今天数学考试,我很期待,但也很害怕,因为我与班上一位学霸男生的赌约就此实现,我一直以为,至始至终,勤能补拙,但到最后,考试发下来的那一刻,面对那一个个大叉叉,我还是懦弱的哭了,不知自己究竟在哭什么,是为第一次赌约就输了,还是自己没能满足老师的期望而难过,微风缓缓飞,我思考着,思考思考,曾几何时,我也曾像这样,站在阳台,望着远处的景物发呆,那时在想好美啊!,这时,我却在想考试的失误事情。

我面对他的成绩与他的人,我顿时感觉无地自容,他是那么优秀,但也是那么懒,可为什么我就是无法赢他呢!我渴望,勤能补拙,记得是一位启蒙老师跟我说的。

我也一直坚信,究竟是自己不够努力,还是心思没有放在考试、学习上,他脑子很好使,我也因为有他这个对手而自豪,因为有人曾说:要看你这人是怎样的一个人,一是看你交的朋友,二是看你的对手?我有他这个对手,应该感到骄傲吧!

但我为什么就是高兴不起来,是因为自己一直无法赢过他而感到难过吧!我并不认为他有多努力,包括平时他的作业都是用抄的,但为什么会考得那么好,我想,我应该好好深思,面壁思过。

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篇18:期中考试引发的思考学生作文

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中考试已经过去了,成绩已经发下来了,眼睛也就直了。

我的期中考试成绩令我很不满意,语文93.5分,数学103分(105分满),英语92分。在班级排第13名。和我上一次考试下降了8名。

我的语文,在考试前胸有成竹,以为自己能考满分的语文。却考了93.5分,有的错了一些不该出错的题。就说第一课《山中访友》中的填空吧!“重新梳妆”我只写了“梳妆”但“重新”不知道丢到那里去了。

数学错的就更不应该了,那两分丢在了一个最基础的判断题上,而且,那题我还做过。

英语,我也错了一些马虎题,但这不是借口,是我做题时没往心里去,才造成所谓的“马虎”许多单词都错了,许多不应该错的都错了。

期中考试虽然已成为过去,但深深地记在我心里。也同时给我敲了一记警钟,叫我不再自高自大,不再叫我轻“敌”更叫我不再马马虎虎。我会努里,希望在期末考试中取得好成绩。加油!

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篇19:雅思考试写作作文论点:文化和道德

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文化道德本来就是雅思大作文中较难的两个话题,而近来这两个话题考的频率又很高。考生不防也从这两个角度来准备一下主体段落的观点。

反对强势文化入侵:

Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.

该不该撒谎:

The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on ones personality.

总之,在大作文的主体段落写作过程中,考生可以将以上的思路结合题目的特点综合应用,切忌生搬硬套。平时在读文章时也要多总结别人的观点角度,而后为我所用。这样定能让你逐渐形成西方的思维习惯,在考试中能才思泉涌,下笔有神。

以上就是雅思为大家整理的雅思写作论点分析:文化和道德,非常实用。更多资讯、资料尽在雅思。最后,雅思预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!

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篇20:雅思考试作文技巧及应试步骤

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各位同学:

何钢将于2月24日至3月3日离京,在此期间可能无法及时回复各位的帖子。为帮助大家提高作文水平,了解雅思写作要求,在此公布本人用心批改的一篇学生作文,供大家参考。版权所有,请勿随意转贴。如欲转贴,请注明(北京新东方何钢)。

题目:

Now many people think that we are spending too much time and money on protecting animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree?

学生作文:

In reality, a large number of money have been funded on the development of human population in order to enhance the living standand. Although government and animal lovers have started to assist in conservation of animals, lacking of money and social awareness is still a key problem of animal conservation progam. now people should care and pay more for animals rather than living in luxury.

Government have put certain fund on wild animals, while a few part of them was spent on protecting animals legally. Instead, large account of money has been cost to murder them. eg. in scientific research, animals are more like victims whose body might suffer a lot even damaged through experiment in aimning of coming out a result from experiment, rather than lucky ones who can benefit lots care and love from hunman being. From long term view, government should not only spend money for current profits but aslo pay more for our generations.

Admittedly, although money has been gathered to set covervation program for animals, it is so limited that animals could not get a better care in zoos. Lacking of money is the mainly problem to maintain the running of zoos, which cause the animals have to transform to another area, and some of them could die for the frequently traving and uncomfortable weather. Animals are facing awful fate unless government could settle the financial issue by all means.

To sum up, animals lovers should do more effort to save the endanged animals especially rare species, by wakening up the social awareness and donating money. where people could save money for animals ,when we will get benefit from wildlife.

何钢的评点:

文章共275字,基本符合要求。

1) Arguments, ideas, and evidence.

审题:现在许多人认为我们在保护动物方面花了太多的时间和金钱。这些时间和金钱与其用来保护动物,不如用来花在人身上。你同意不同意这个观点?

此题结构与《高分作文》第8页范文类似。在写作这篇文章的时候,首先应该分析我们目前在动物保护方面的现状:是否花费过多,并提出自己的观点。如果认为的确花费过多,要说说为什么。并且应该进行比较分析,为什么更应该花钱在人身上。如果认为花得值,那么要说说原因,然后谈谈保护动物对于人类的作用和意义。

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