初二期末英语作文：温暖的家1000字（推荐20篇）

The Longhu villa in my hometown Pengshui County, where the fog is floating, (.) is a magical and beautiful place.

The flag up to an altitude of about 1000 meters high, halfway up the mountain air is very sweet, very refreshing. The mountain long rows of trees under the tree is a wild profusion of vegetation, and insects and other small animal snake, so you walk can hear small animal sounds.

The most interesting, is that the top of the thick fog, one or two months a year, on the top of the mountain will have a thick layers of fog, you can put the fog blowing a "hole" in one breath, but it closed in neither fast nor slow, steep peak, have a piece of egg shaped stone. Its a good place to watch the fog, but prone to hallucinations sitting on the stone, you will feel as if you are sitting in the clouds is Sun Wukong, somersault cloud, all of a sudden to jump down! And its easy to sit on the stone and jump down! You know, this stone is surrounded by a cliff! So, its better not to sit on the stone, because its a safe one!

可爱的你，带给我温暖。

——题记

刚来这个班时，我第一个遇见的是你，我因为不会叠被子，而你却在寝室里像妈妈一样的帮助我，那时，我就有点喜欢你了。

当你让我当你的英语课代表时，我就毫不犹豫的答应了。因为你不仅年轻，长得也很清纯，并且还有一颗少女心。

可惜，时间长后，我发现我厌恶你了。

教学方式不好，单词好写错，知识点没讲全，我感觉我的英语快要死了，每天都和一些成绩好的同学们在背后说你的不好，真是越想越烦，可惜没人敢对你说你的不好，我们大家都很纠结。看着你脸上的微笑，我不禁有点觉得虚伪，心里也在郁闷的滴血。

直到有一天，你喊我出去谈话，心平气和的跟我说：我是不是讲的不好啊，同学们好像不喜欢我，我们俩好像也不像以前那莫默契了。我才终于把我想说的话终于说了个遍，老师和我聊了许久，我感觉心暖暖的，原来老师也在纠结这个问题，可是每天还装着心情很好来上课，不想打扰大家的情绪。老师原来也会换位思考，身为权威的老师，却向我请教，这要有多大的勇气啊。我的脑海突然想到老师认真起来得模样，想起她的书上全是密密麻麻的笔记。

直到现在，我已经爱上你了。喜欢你上课时轻松的气氛，不像语文老师的迅速激昂；数学老师的严肃安静；物理老师的紧张费神。而是轻松愉快。喜欢你甜美的声音，让人专注；喜欢你可爱的模样，让人发笑；喜欢你认真的态度，让人钦佩。

我有时都搞不懂你，每天下三你都会准时来到，一坐坐一节课，即使整节课没一人写英语作业，你也会想办法挤点时间让大家学英语，教育差生，或者说默默坐在椅子上改听写。你很乐观，即使我们班英语不是很好，你也总是失落会就会满血复活。你很年轻，所以你课后总会和我们打成一片，很懂我们的心思，同学们也会把心里真实的想法告诉你，而不告诉别的老师。你很努力，即使独自一人站三节课，嘴里也在抱怨很累，但精神总是那么饱满，仍拼命地站着，讲着。你有点傻，当班主任把体育老师的课给你时，你总会把可爱的笑容露出来，说什么班主任很贴心，难道多给你奖钱吗？你上了那么多节不累吗？你不想休息吗？你不怕同学们埋怨你吗？你就是这么傻，愿意奉献自己。

可爱的你，给了我很多机会，让我能够好好学习英语；每天都不厌其烦的指点我，开导我，在我危难时，也会伸出援助之手，你很信任我，所以我不会让你失望。

可爱的你，请一直微笑，因为我会和你在一起。谢谢你，谢谢你带给我可爱的温暖。

[我的英语老师初二作文

When I see the cartoon, I like to watch the cat machine very much, he has a time machine, he always helps his friend to fine something with time machine. The cartoon makes me think of what would I do if I have a time machine. If I have a time machine, the first thing I want to do is go back to the time when I play with my friend, he now moves to another place, I never say goodbye to him, I want to make it up and say goodbye to him. The second thing is I want to go back to the time when I shout at my mother, I regret about this all the time, I wish I had a chance to say sorry at that time. Now I have to face the truth that I will never have time machine, I should cherish the time and thing I own now, be nice to my mother.

当我看卡通片的时候，我很喜欢看机器猫，他有一台时光机，他总是用时光机来帮助他的朋友找到一些东西。这个卡通片让我想到了如果我也有一台时光机，我会做什么。如果我有一台时光机，第一件事做的就是回到我和朋友玩耍的时光，他现在已经搬到另外一个地方了，我没有和他道别，我想要补偿并道别。第二件事就是我想回到我反驳母亲的时光，我总是为此感到悔恨，我希望我那个时候有机会道别。现在我必须得面对现实，我不会拥有时光机，我应该珍惜现在是时间和所拥有的东西，对母亲友好。

冬天到了，估计这时故乡已经开始下雪了吧。彝族年假放了，我却一直在西昌逗留，也许是因为那得天独厚的天气，也许又记起那公交桥下的惨案：

在一个温暖的暖炉旁，我换上轻巧舒适的羽绒衣，妈妈在厨房里和亲戚们一起灌香肠，几个小妹妹在旁边争着打下手；那几个爱惹是生非的哥哥弟弟也在外面放火炮吓邻居家的狗；爸爸和那些大伯，二伯他们边嗑瓜子边打麻将，几个稍微有点贪财的兄弟姐妹也在旁下注赌输赢······冬天是那么的美好，以至于乞丐也欢喜起来，因为有那么多的好吃的，而且此刻家家户户也大方慷慨了。猪啊，羊啊，鸡啊一道道宰来敬祖宗，敬完祖宗便被小孩子抢去和小伙伴分享成果了，就连狗也吃得着荤腥了，突然下起了小雪，那么轻盈，洁白，美丽，就像神仙派来下界的精灵，大家祈祷着下一年的丰收······冬天，在我的记忆中是那么的温暖，那么令人沉醉。

“啊！不要，不要，放过我，求求你放过我！”一个衣着破烂的人摇摇晃晃的在路上竭尽全力地奔跑，“站住，欠债不还，还屡教不改，别怪我下手狠毒！哼哼，看你还敢跑。”几个穿着严谨的壮汉不停的追逐，手中的黑色铁棍泛着森冷的光，似在嘲笑那人的不自量力，又似死神挥舞他那无情的镰刀。那人本就无多少力气哪有和这几个壮汉赛跑的能力，可是就要再追上那个人的时候，偏偏又放慢脚步，耐心的玩着“猫捉老鼠”的游戏。突然，那人腿一软踩到了一块石头，摔了个四脚朝天，头被新上过沥青的道路磕出血液，头发被血液凝成一大块，那个人感到头在不停地嗡嗡作响，他看到了“死神”在狰狞的笑着。一阵嗡鸣，他失去了知觉，只有一片血红凝聚在眼中。

第二天，尸体被人发现，警察十分不情愿的来的这里收拾现场，过路人眼中没有同情，怜悯，脸上写着两个大字“讨厌”，我经过时听到某人再骂着晦气，法医也一副见多不怪的样子，但那眼神望到尸体时仍露出一丝恼怒，不是对犯法人的，是对受害者的尸体。是啊，谁在大清早遇到一具尸体谁会开心啊！被人报案过来查案，还没和亲人温存够就要触摸恶心的尸体，谁会高心啊！尸体死相惨烈，还有未凝固的血液，谁会看到不恶心啊！

也许，这个冬天很温暖，让人沉迷其中，不愿去发现这隐藏的邪恶血腥，发现了只当是个别的现象。这个事件只当是“欠债不还，导致暴力手段”草草结案，尸骨无人认领，大概是亲属怕惹祸上身吧。

这个冬天好美，好温暖，好冷，好残酷。

这是一个社会。

Nowadays, motorcycles are popular around us. They have become an important

means of transport in Chinese cities. Compared with the bike and the car, the

motorcycle has its own advantages. First, it is quite flexible. When there is a

traffic jam, it can go through the cars that are held up in the street. Besides,

it doesnt consume much petrol. Most important of all, it can carry another

person at the back. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also

apparent. To begin with, its very complicated to get qualified fur riding a

motorcycle. Youll have to go through a series of procedures to get a riding

license. Furthermore, the maintenance is expensive. Worst of all, it costs a big

sum of money to pay fur the license plate, especially in big cities.

In conclusion, it has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. However, if

the authorities concerned simplify the procedures and reduce the cost of the

license plate, the motorcycle will be accepted by more people.

I’m an outgoing girl and my name is Shi Yun. I love singing songs,

especially pop songs. My favorite singer is Jay Chou.

As we all know, Jay is a superstar of Asia. He has excellent music skills.

He started to play the piano at 5 years old and studied hard. When he was 15

years old, he was able to write songs. But the environment in which he lived is

not very good. When he was a child, his parents were divorced and as a result

his childhood was full of depression. He lived with his grandparents. He was

always silent and didn’t like talking to others. At the age of 16, he was

attracted by the bass’s low voice. So his mother bought one for him and he

started to play the bass. His success is filled with tears and sweat.

From his story, I know if I want to be successful, I should work harder. I

want to go in for music, although I know the way to success is very difficult

for me. Now that I choose this way, I’ll do my best to realize my dream. Of

course I will tell myself I will be a superstar someday.

The Lunar New Year is a great occasion to the Chinese people。 It lasts about  the first four days of the year， during which people do not work except for the  workers on duty。 Students do not go to school， and shops are dosed。

Several days before the new year， people begin to prepare。 Farmers kitt pigs，  sheep， cocks and hens。 City dwellers buy meat fish and vegetables。 Houses are  cleaned couplets are posted on the doors。 Colourful lanterns are hung at the  gate。

On the eve of the new year， each family has its members gatherd together and  eats a family reunion dinner。 After the meal they watch TV until the clock  strickes twelve。 Then every family sets off long strings of small firecrackers  and other fire works to welcome the new year。 On the first day of the new year，  almost everyone is dressed in his or her best。 When people meet on the way， they  say to each other "Happy New Year"。 Friends and relatives pay new year calls and  gives presents to each other。 Children indulge themselves in games。

在校尊敬老师,团结同学,热爱班级是你的特点、优点。看到你用心听课时发言是那么积极,老师是多么高兴。可你有时也很让老师生气,作业不及时完成,字迹潦草,上课不专心,让老师伤心。你知道吗?如果你改掉这些小毛病,你肯定会成为一名好学生,老师期待着这一天。

平时,虽然你沉默寡言,但老师喜欢你那文质彬彬的模样。孩子,你辛苦了,学校离你家路途遥远,可你总是风雨无阻,按时到校。今后假如你能改变一下学习方法,发扬勤学苦练,不耻下问的精神,那么优秀的成绩就离你更近。

你是一个诚实质朴,善良懂事,值得信任的小女孩,为何总不见你和别人一样有灿烂的笑容,是不是认为自己不如别人,认为自己差,失去信心,

其实你也很优秀,知道吗?你善解人意,热心帮助有困难得人,你也很勤奋,学习总是一丝不苟,认真对待,只是你的学习成绩暂时不理想,俗话说天下无难事,只怕有心人,我相信,只要坚持你的学习态度,改变一下学习方法,学习成绩肯定会进步的!相信吗?

见到你的第一眼,就被你那双小而有神的眼睛给吸引住了。因为你那里盛满了顽皮、热情……课堂上,你比较好动,不时的做一些可爱的小动作,引起同学的哄笑;课间,从没见你好好休息,不管做什么游戏,你总是特别活泼、突出。可是你的成绩却不够理想,希望在以后,要以学习为重,专心努力读书。一定会成为一名全面发展的好学生。

你是个顽皮好动的小男孩。上课时,很难做到安静的做在那里听讲;课间,你“生龙活虎”,喜动“干戈”。其实,你挺能干,也挺可爱的。如果你能把你的聪明用在学习上,定会一鸣惊人。

我们相处两年,老师发现你也是一个有上进心的孩子,从你有较强的集体荣誉感可以看出,不过,我对你有一种特别的期盼,少去游戏机室光顾,把时间多花一些学习上,只有这样,你的成绩才会提高。

老师很理解你,同情你,你想学,肯学只是力不从心。如果你比别人多花时间学习,做到笨鸟先飞,是不会比别人差多少的。记得你有一次听写比赛前比别人多准备了一节课时间,结果得了95分,多令人高兴啊!

每当看到你那着扫帚在教室里忙碌的身影我总是看在眼里,喜在心里,多好的学生!xx,你的学习基础是差了一些,但你不要有太多压力,不必提心吊胆,也不要灰心,“世上无难事,只

怕有心人”,只要你学习专心些、勤奋些、细心些,不懂就问。你的成绩会赶上来的。自信些,老师、家长、同学都在关心你、支持你!等你的好消息噢!

想起你时，很温暖

你个子不高，其貌不扬，听人说话的时候喜欢微微地侧着头。每次想起你，就像有一缕暖暖的阳光照进心房。

学校门口有很多小卖部，还有好几个小吃摊：卖玉米的、卖煮花生的、卖烤红薯的……一放学，同学们就像一群小麻雀一样叽叽喳喳地围住了那些小吃店和小吃摊。我不买，但很多时候我会站在一边，远远地看着那个卖南瓜饼的大叔。也许你不知道，只要看见他，我就想起了你。

你有一双多灵巧的手啊！父亲长年在外奔波，养家糊口的重担一直煎熬着他，家里没有的闲钱给孩子们买零食吃。可是，你总有本事让原本粗陋的食物“变成”另外一种精致的模样。总也忘不了你做的南瓜饼。你会精心挑一个自家种的南瓜，和上一点面粉，加一个鸡蛋，再添上几勺白糖，拌匀，团成一团，在案上压一压，再放进油锅里煎一煎，黄灿灿热腾腾的南瓜饼成了我的弟弟们的最爱——那可是世界上最香最甜的南瓜饼啊！

放学了，我快步来到公交站。

还好，车上还有座，我舒了一口气：今天运气真好哟，上了一天课，还真有些累了。可是这口气还没来得及完全吐出来，车上的人就多起来了，后来大家都推推搡搡，你呼我叫，车厢里一下子“热闹”非凡。当车开到体育中心的时候，我发现我身边站着一个中年妇女，她脸色有些苍白，不停地往额头上擦驱风油。“阿姨，你是不是不舒服啊？你坐这儿吧。”我站起来，把阿姨往座位上让，阿姨连声道谢。周围好些人也向我投来了异样的目光——那是惊讶和赞许。我有些不好意思，把头扭了过去。其实，我只是在这时候想起了你。每次跟你出门坐车，你总是把座位让给那些更需要它的人。

购书中心大概是我双休日最喜欢呆的地方了。

那一排排整齐的书架，书架上方方正正的书本，总会让我想起一位位巨人，他们沉静地立在那儿，等着和造访的人做一次深刻的交谈——我喜欢这种默默的交谈。看书看累了合上书本的时候，我又会想起你，从小到大，不管家里多么困难，你总是那样“慷慨”地为我买下一本又一本的书，从来没有过丝毫的犹豫。我成了班上藏书最多的学生呢！可是有一次开家长会，我发现你穿的衣服是所有家长中最旧最“土”的。也许就是从那时候起吧，我习惯了带着笔记本来购书中心看书——只看，不买。

嘿嘿，忘了告诉你，我被选上参加市里的“明日之星”现场作文大赛了！全校唯一的一个哦！

也不知为什么，无论什么时候，只要想起你，一股温热的暖流，就会从心的最深处，涌起。

[想起你时很温暖初二作文

在四年级时，疼爱我的父母为我买了电脑。从此，我的生活因它而发生了许多变化。

在以前，我们小区里只要一到七点，总是有有许多许多学生在楼下玩耍。躲起来，让别人绕小区几圈都找不到，玩“三个字”的游戏。那时是可快乐了。但渐渐的，楼下玩的人愈来愈少，我才知道，他们都与“网络”这个我没听过的名词一起玩，许多朋友都笑话我。于是，我也哭着闹着，让父母买了电脑。

果然啊!“网络”上游戏多，你怎么玩都玩不腻，那时候“赛尔号”、“摩尔庄园”，这些我们小学时候为之疯狂的小游戏，服务器总是爆满，谁还会去玩那些无聊之至的游戏，玩无聊了，看电影、动漫、电视剧，只要是电视上能做的，电脑都可以做，就连以前最简单的游戏手柄上的游戏，电脑上都有，谁能抵挡网络世界的诱惑?

随着我们的成长，只要没事做，就开电脑玩游戏，穿越火线、地下城与勇士，QQ飞车，直至现在的英雄联盟。我们的成长随游戏崛起，玩家突破百万，随它没落，关闭服务器。这些都离不开我们这些青少年。而且，曾今带给我们快乐的游戏变得越来越贪婪，游戏总是更新，许多道具要花费人民币来购买，你总有新目标，为了新道具学生们想了许多办法来向父母骗钱，然后充值，网络的弊端开始出现。

什么东西有利就有弊，它能丰富我们的生活，就能危害我们的生活。现在，许多孩子宁愿呆在家玩电脑，与那些可能一辈子都不会遇见的网友聊天，玩游戏，都不会与楼下等待自己的伙伴外出，与我们一样，沉溺在虚拟世界中，不能自拔，完全忽略了现实中永远爱我们关心我们的人。父母看不惯我们一直坐在电脑前，敲击着电脑键盘，提醒我们休息，我们却因沉迷认为父母烦，去和父母顶嘴，甚至离家出走。真正等待的朋友置之不理，仍认为好朋友在网络上，盯着聊天工具，等他上线。

现在，与我们年龄相仿的少年，为了一个游戏道具，不惜“偷”家里的钱，或者直接偷盗，要么就是呆在网吧，几天几夜，家人到处寻找，自己却在娱乐。而且对于我们的学习、视力、家庭和睦影响也很大，如果克制力不强，大部分人都会臣服在网络面前，事业的衰落，学业荒废，生命将会荒芜。

网络，对于人们娱乐、信息、工作、学习、交友、购物等带来了巨大的影响，我们的生活因它而改变，推动了我们这个时代的发展。但是现在，表现出的确实弊大于利。网络就似毒品一样，给人一时之快，却容易让人上瘾，带来让人无法承受的后果。

所以要正视网络，认清网络。用其利，避其害，让它给我们带来便利的同时，不要沉迷于其中。

你亦是荒夏的一番耕耘。

仅存于花间慰以我明诲。

抖落惆怅，你仅用一袂衣袖

便已凌乱我泛红的双眸。

蓦然回首，眼眸依旧是你。

啼哭于那宁静的黎明，心在一瞬间拥有栖息的荒地。你给我的生命，曾教会我生存。我仅用你给的眼睛一睹人世洪荒。也未可知我伊始的灵魂是否会坠地的忧伤。

7岁的我抬头仰望45度明媚天空，阳光的锐角刺痛我泛红的双眼。无奈地行走于漫无目的的小径。此时的夏日以至洪荒。泛滥滔天。流乱的罪恶袭击我弱小的内心。而我偏在此可真正理解你。阳光的锐角消磨掉你优美的容颜。一头黑发映照夕阳舞动的余晖。我第一次懂得原来泛滥的夏日，依旧会在您给我的呵护下沉淀。您第一次让我懂得，爱在我出生一刹那注定拥有你的坚守，尽管那只是夕阳下一幕。

记忆断层与昔日那个黄昏光线昏暗且无边，凌乱我的双眸。仅存余光下，您牵着我的手前行，小手叠加起大手，蹒跚地步于那昏暗的童年，青春在此刻维记此幕。

15岁，青春在此刻遁入洪晃。盘古开天辟地是的慌乱。在我那时的灵魂披上歧乱的死路。可我却叛逆的依旧前行。那条叫做歧的路。可您依旧不为我的叛逆而放弃我的无理。尽管我一次又一次撞伤您污浊的双眸，尽管我一次又一次无视您新生的白首。您在一次又一次的无奈中愁段白鬓。我只望见您在余晖中望着残阳。嘴里唏叹缠绵入我的耳畔，却足以在苍茫大地之上久久回响。我望见您凌乱的白发于风中飞舞，银白的发丝泛红了故作镇定的双眼。您的泪在一次又一次中坠地，眼里透露出一丝无奈，迷茫的眼光划破苍穹，划破天际，再次抚平了我荒芜的内心。泪却早已模糊我视线。很少见您哭。可在那个夜晚，黄昏已将您的身影拉长。而我只是那个永远不让您放心的小孩。

远方飘来的菊花香，渗入每个人无奈的内心，抚平了那一丝波澜。记忆再次为曾经那个画面停留。那个背影在残冬没入骄阳之中隐没了最初。泪终在那时弥漫满心的柔肠。我得以回归人生，于那个北国雪飘之后，我独待春日，待之山花灿漫，我独语醉在花间。

您总想给我一个空间，却终叹此中甚小，无法消磨我内心，你总认为我的心很强大，其实只有我知道我的心很小，只装入那个画面，以至于无法磨灭的回忆，那个夏日时间偷走了一切。泛滥了我的内心。

不知如何掩埋你走过的痕迹，如阳春三月的嫩草伏地于夏，却暗黄满秋，于两季的流离，我重拾苍荣的翠绿。我的足迹，是两双深浅的脚步。

我该用什么回忆那个画面。

是留守，还是驻然。今夕何年，帘湘中的你。

已白鬓斑斑。

I have a happy family. My family have five poeple:grandpa, grandma, father, mother, and me.

My grandparents live in countryside. They have six rooms. The room is big. There are two apple in the ground. They have sixteen goats and three cows. The goat is white. The cow is yellow. They are healthy.

My parents and me live in city. My father is a worker. His work is hard. My mother is a high schools Chinese teacher, She take bicycle go to work at sevenclock. In the afternoon, she doesnt go home. In the evening, she make supper. The food is delicious. I am a student. I have Chinese, math and English everyday. That is boring. I have many friends. After class, I play with my friends.

We are tried, but we are very happy. I love my family

我有一个幸福的家庭。我的家庭有五人:爷爷,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈,和我。

我的祖父母住在乡下。他们有六个房间。房间是大的。有两个苹果在地上。他们有十六个山羊和三头牛。山羊是白色的。牛是黄色的。他们是健康的。

我的父母和我住在城市。我的父亲是一个工人。他的工作是很难的。我妈妈是一个中学的语文老师,她在7点带自行车去上班。下午,她不回家。在晚上,她做晚饭。食物是美味的。我是一个学生。每天我有语文、数学和英语。这是无聊的。我有很多朋友。下课后,我和我的朋友玩。

我们试过了,但是我们很开心。我爱我的家庭

I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It

took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We

stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day， I just stayed in

the hotel and rested. On the second day， my brother and I went to Nanjing Road.

It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there， there were lots of

people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs

of trousers for the ing summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white

because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On

the third day， my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full

of people. I played many kinds of gamesthere. I had a good time. The other days，

I went to some other interesting places， such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV

Tower， the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t

forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

黑暗而寂灭的梦境里，置身半田半亩见，古树上朵朵摇曳着圣洁之光的花，漫天的落下，

株株圣洁的灵魂展开轻盈的双翅脱灵而去······

——题记

昨天和父亲吵架了，脸上挨了个巴掌。

清晨的阳光在窗外徘徊，悄悄地钻进屋里又慢慢地无声游走。微风轻轻吹起淡蓝色的窗帘，使它在窗外悠悠的飘荡，就像一朵在窗外流浪的云，却拂不去我内心的躁动。脸颊还在疼”为什么全是我的错为什么不相信我？”一滴晶莹的液体不经意间划过脸颊，丝丝的痛漫上心头。我，打开家门，摔门离开······

盛夏的流火，肆意地攀爬。阳光透过树隙洒下，煞是耀眼。我漠然的走在马路上，没有丝毫的暖意，驻步在一个路边的小亭子，我走进去，坐下，椅子被晒得炽热。将耳机塞入耳朵悠扬的音乐在耳畔响起，微微抚平着我皱褶的心灵。抬眸，远处的石榴花开得正盛，火红的花朵星星点点地缀满了枝头，恰是红色的宝石镶嵌在绿色的屏，又像是星星藏在浓荫之中。倏然看见一个穿着白色小洋装的小女孩，圆圆的脸上可爱的眼眸似乎会说话。“姐姐，你热吗？”我回过神，拿下了耳机，只是浅浅一笑。一双白嫩嫩的小手已经伸到了我的眼前，甜甜的奶香氤氲在空气中。“姐姐，送给你了。”我看那双美丽的大眼睛，那样的澄澈，不由自主的伸出手揉了揉她乌黑的秀发。她笑的更甜，露出浅浅的梨涡，在我身旁坐下，将冰淇淋塞入我的手中“姐姐，你不开心吗？你为什么不多笑一笑。”我看着身旁的她，她就像一个快乐的天使，微微勾起了嘴角······

一位美丽的中年少妇微笑着向这里招手，她一跃而起“姐姐，我妈妈来了，再见喽”我不由的抬起手向她挥动，她奔跑着扑向妈妈的怀抱，白色的背影一蹦一跳的消失在转角处。冰淇淋已经融化了顺着指隙缓缓流下，绽开了甜甜的气息，我轻轻的舔去，牛奶的气息在唇齿间溢开，我起身向着家的方向走去。

打开家门，淡淡的香甜扑面而来。我倚在半掩的厨房门口，透过门缝，方才模糊的身影在眸中渐渐清晰：父亲穿着母亲的棉质碎花围裙，原先在母亲身上那么温婉的一件衣服此刻却绷在父亲身上，系在身后绾了个结，显得那样笨拙，好久没有仔细看过父亲了，才发现那些不经意的细枝末节恣肆地噬去他的年华。原来父亲为了我付出了很多，原来父亲是爱我的。我轻轻关上门，眼角闪过一抹璀璨。睁眼,抬头,回眸看见了窗外的太阳，指尖依稀涌动着淡淡的香甜。阳光洒满一身，丝丝温暖流入心房，雪也在不觉中融化成了暖暖的水。原来爱从未走远。

[初二作文被温暖照亮

With the development of economy, there are more and more vehicles on the

streets. Governments at all levels have to do something to solve the problem of

heavy traffic in the city.

I would like to share with you some ideas about this problem: firstly, the

government should build more roads. This action can decrease the degree of

street congestion and make it possible for cars to run faster than ever before.

But each coin has two sides. If a city builds too many roads, the streets will

occupy much land. We will have little space used for other purposes. So

secondly, more special bus lines for public transportation should be added. Thus

people can go conveniently everywhere they like; they will not ride bikes or

drive cars. In this way, the number of cars and bikes on the road will be

greatly cut down.

As far as I am concerned, if we want to solve this problem, we should set

up an idea of public transportation first and give a priority to this idea in

our traffic work.

Ladies and gentlemen,From Chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds.

Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. Another 1 percent are foreigner students.

As is shown in chart 2, sixty percent of them intend to go to university, which is double the

number of those who will attend vocational schools. Besides, the other ten percent choose to go abroad for further study.

In conclusion, it seems clear that our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers, whose children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city

students. Also with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture. In addition, we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago.

Times are changing day by day. Doing the shopping is easier. Most people

are better-dressed and they enjoy modern life.

Girls are changing, too. There are many differences between the older and

younger generations.

I know a twelve-year-old girl, who, to my surprise, has little time to

play. She told me that she dreamt of being a dancer, so she must learn to dance,

play music and so on. Sometimes, she is out of breath under such pressure, but

she can’t stop because modern life is busy.

In addition, I find those girls know more and more. Although they are

little girls, they know how to dress fashionably. Sometimes they look older than

their age, though.

As an older female, I realize that compared with the modern girls, my

generation is less well-educated and takes part in fewer leisure activities. I

realize that we don’t make full use of our time the way they do. Therefore, we

should try our best to value our time and pursue our dreams.

Confident, proud and energetic, modern girls represent new times.

Teenagers like to computer games so much, some even drop out of the class and they hang around the street， going to the Internet bar, and are immerged themselves in the computer games. As we all known, Internet bar is not a good place for teenagers to come. First, there are all kinds of people in that places.It has been reported that many accidents have happened in the Internet bar, some people have fought each other and then cut people, even people died there. It is so dangerous. Second, as the teenagers are so innocent, they may be seduced by some bad people in the Internet bar, the teenagers may be adducted to other places and never come home again. Internet bar is not a safe place for teenagers, so they should learn protect themselves and stay away from it.

青少年很喜欢玩电脑游戏，一些人甚至旷课，他们在街上到处晃荡，去到网吧里面，沉浸在电脑游戏里面。我们都知道，网吧对于青少年来说不是一个该去的好地方。第一，网吧里面有形形色色的人。据报道，很多事故发生在网吧里面，一些人彼此间打架，然后砍人，甚至有人死掉。这是多么危险啊。第二，青少年相对比较天真，他们可能会在网吧里面收到坏人的诱导，也有可能被坏人绑架到别的地方，永远不能再回家。网吧对于青少年来说不是一个安全的地方，所以他们应该学着保护自己，远离网吧。

Everybody has a best friend that they can share everything with.I also have a best friend.We met in school,and were in the same grade.

My best friend is a good student because he is very hardworking.I learn a lot from him.He helps me with math;I help him with English.We always help each other.besides that,hes honest and reliable.I trust him completely and we share secrets all the time.

My best friend is also loyal and brave.Once when a bully teased me,he came to my rescue right away.He always remembers my birthday and he is fun to be with.He tells funny jokes and stories.He always makes me laugh.Finally,he is a very good listener and he knows how to cheer me up when Im down.

My best friend is really one of a kind.I hope well stay friends forever.

每个人都有一个最好的朋友,他们可以分享一切。我也有一个最好的朋友。在学校时我们见过面,我们在同一个年级。

我最好的朋友是一个好学生,因为他非常勤奋。我从他学到很多东西。他帮我复习数学,我帮他复习英语。我们总是互相帮助。除此之外,他的诚实和可靠的。我完全信任他,我们互相分享秘密。

我最好的朋友也是忠诚和勇敢。一旦当欺负嘲笑我,他马上来到我的救援。他总是记得我的生日,他很有趣。他经常讲有趣的笑话和故事。他总是让我发笑。最后,他是一个很好的倾听者,他知道如何鼓励我当我下来。

我最好的朋友是真正独一无二的。我希望我们能成为永远的朋友。