我的老师英语作文60词六年级(汇编20篇)

亲爱的六年级二班的同学们：

下午好！

今天我们相聚在这里，是因为你们即将与这里告别，带着人生中最灿烂纯真的记忆，走入又一个崭新的起点。

作为你们的班主任老师，我非常幸运，也无比幸福。因为在与你们朝夕相处的日子里，我体验着你们的快乐与忧伤，感动着你们的拼搏与执着，见证着你们的努力与收获。我相信，这所有的一切就构成了童年的味道，这酸甜苦辣、五味杂陈的滋味就像成长道路上那一块块凹凸不平却又五彩斑斓的石块，平凡而又奇幻。

亲爱的同学，看着你们年轻稚嫩的脸庞，老师就好像看到了希望，看到了一种足以点燃梦想的曙光。所以，我确信陪伴过你的每一位老师都爱着你们当中的每一张脸庞，为了保护它不遭受恶俗的侵袭，保护它永远向着阳光，他们不惜想要奉献出自己全部的心血、智慧和能量。有时候，或许因为我们心太急，没能顾及到你的敏感和脆弱，老师深感遗憾。不过，请记住那份热忱只是为了让今天的你比昨天的你更好一点。等到你羽翼丰盈，展翅高飞的那天，但愿你能将感恩之心、将真善之美，化作那一对天使的翅膀。只有这样，你才能飞得更远，飞得更高。 孩子们，今天老师站在这里，似乎有千言万语，却又似乎无从说起，只能衷心地道一句：六二班的孩子们，老师一如既往地爱你们，愿你们更快乐，更勤奋，更充实，更阳光！

I read grade four, taught my teacher has several. But left me the deepest impression is my now the teacher in charge - stone teacher.

This teacher, more than 30 years old, of medium height, heavy, he treated us with motherly love.

Remember once, a lesson thats homework. The classroom was silent, only hear the students write "rustling" sound. Suddenly, I dont know who is Shouting "report", the students to raise head, look in arms, hand students guo-bin Chen saw four group over his nose, blood coming down along the fingers, the teacher asked me, and lifted him out of the classroom.

The teacher, like a pot of oil in the classroom, boiling up, talking, playing... This voice intersection together, as a symphony. At this time, my homework has been finished, also do not want to join them, then from the bag out of the hereafter, he green, put aside on the legs, with relish to see.

Dont know how long, suddenly someone patted me, I looked up, four eyes relative, ah, the teacher. I consciously put the books into the bag. Thought: "out, a storm is coming". Unexpectedly, for a long time, but the teacher said gently: "bring me the book. I reluctantly gave the book to the teacher. The teacher read a few times, and give me the book, said gently "this book look good, but I dont want you to see during class," I cant help to lower the head.

This is my teacher in charge teacher - stone, with meticulous care to the classmates, his love is unknown dedication...

我读四年级了，教过我的老师有好几位。但留给我印象最深的是我现在的班主任——石老师。

石老师，30多岁了，中等身材，浓眉大眼，他对待我们有着慈母般的爱。

记得有一次，那是一堂作业课。教室里鸦雀无声，只听到同学们写字的“沙沙”声。突然，不知是谁喊了声“报告”，同学们不约而同的抬起头，闻声而望，只见四组陈国斌同学用手捂着鼻子，鲜血顺着手指缝流了出来，老师一边询问，一边扶他走出教室。

老师一走，教室里像锅里的油，沸腾起来，说话的、打闹的……这声音交汇在一起，不亚于一曲交响乐。这时，我的作业已经写完了，也不想加入他们的行列，便从书包里拿出《格林童话集》，搁在腿上，津津有味看了起来。

也不知过了多久，突然有人拍了我一下，我一抬头，四目相对，啊，老师。我下意识地把书塞进书包。心想：“完了，一场暴风骤雨来临了”。没想到，好久，老师却温和地说：“把书拿来”。我极不情愿地把书给了老师。老师翻阅几下，又把书给我，温和地说“这书多看有益，但我不希望你在上课时看，”我不由地低了下头。

这就是我的班主任——石老师，对同学们有着无微不至的关怀，他的爱正在默默无闻奉献着……

Dear staff and their families

hello everyone!

"Spring comes early again", the Spring Festival of the year of the sheep is

quietly coming to us. On the occasion of the Spring Festival, principal Chen of

Taishan junior high school, together with the school leadership, extended new

years blessing and festival greetings to the hard-working staff and their

families, and extended high respect and sincere thanks to the family members who

have been caring and supporting the work of the school for a long time!

The past 2014 has been an extraordinary year. It has been a year when we

have worked hand in hand, overcome difficulties and forge ahead in unity. It has

also been a year of fruitful achievements and good news. Under the correct

leadership of the superior competent department, all the staff of our school are

in the same boat through ups and downs, unite as one, work hard and forge ahead

with determination, overcome many difficulties and strive for first-class

achievements. The school was rated as a modern school in Jiangsu Province; in

the assessment of the school by the Education Bureau, the school won the second

prize; more than 20 students entered Baoying county middle school, and a large

number of students were admitted to other senior high schools free of charge; in

the provincial supervision, the school scored high and passed the supervision of

experts, leading experts listened to 24 classes, and 23 courses were awarded

excellent grades; In the national middle school students composition contest,

Yang Yichen, a student from class 6 of junior high school, participated in the

provincial final and won the first prize. In the final examination just

finished, each grade reached or exceeded the assessment index issued by the

school at the beginning of the school year. When we are immersed in these

achievements bring us joy and joy, we will think that these gains come from the

hard work of teachers. It is you who guide students to constantly improve their

moral quality; it is you who work hard to let students broaden their horizons

and appreciate the brilliant scenery of scientific and cultural knowledge. Of

course, the achievement of these achievements is inseparable from the support of

the family members of the staff. There are also sweat and effort of the family

members in these achievements. Here we would like to sincerely say "thank you

for your hard work". Winter vacation is a holiday full of festivities, and the

Spring Festival is an auspicious and happy festival. In order to have a full and

civilized Festival, the school puts forward the following suggestions.

Give yourself more reminders. We should always pay attention to the safety

of fire, electricity and gas during the holidays. When visiting relatives and

friends, we must pay attention to guard against theft, close the doors and

windows, lock the door, and do not drive after drinking to ensure the safety of

yourself and your family. We should consciously avoid gambling, drinking, feudal

superstitious activities and indulging in the Internet. We should do more

physical exercise every day and take part in healthy and beneficial cultural and

recreational activities. Pay attention to scientific diet, dont overeat and

take good care of your body.

Give more time to study. Winter vacation has a relatively concentrated time

to be at your disposal. It is suggested that you should arrange a little time

for self "charging". On the one hand, we should sum up the experience and

lessons in the work of this semester and formulate the work plan and objectives

for the next semester; on the other hand, we can calm down to get familiar with

the curriculum standards of teaching subjects and read the textbooks for the

next semester in advance. Read one or two good books, study some education and

teaching theory, constantly enrich, enrich, improve themselves. Let thinking and

practice walk together, let oneself better adapt to the needs of classroom

teaching reform.

Give your family more care. Enjoy the family, our life journey is not

lonely, spread the family, can win the respect of others. During the Spring

Festival, lets be filial to our elders, take care of our younger ones, and keep

in touch with our friends. In particular, we should take care of our bodies,

experience the beauty of human nature and feel a better life in dedication and

care.

Finally, once again, I wish you all a safe, happy, peaceful and meaningful

festival. I wish all staff and their families a happy Spring Festival, all the

best of luck, good health and a happy family!

“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。”这句名言不正是赞扬老师那种无私奉献的精神吗？如果说“妈妈”是我们来到世界上的第一声呼唤，那么“老师“就是我们步入文化知识的第一声称呼。在这六年的小学生活里，有许多老师曾教过我，在他们的辛勤培育下，让我懂得了做人的道理和中国深渊的文化知识，在这么多位教过我的老师中，我最喜爱的老师就是现在的班主任欧阳老师。

欧阳老师是一位可亲可敬、关爱学生的优秀老师。我们班在学校算是很出名，每个老师来上课都会以笑脸而来，伤心而回。从此我们班在学校就出名了，每个老师都不愿意来我们班上课，只有欧阳老师依然不放弃我们。这也因为我们班的同学很调皮，经常为一两句不中听的话发生争执，为一两件微不足道的事情而打架，使到整个班变得很乱。

虽然欧阳老师也曾对我们失望过，但她并没有因此放弃我们，而是更加耐心地教育我们，让我们懂得做人的道理，让我们知道父母最大的希望就是自己的孩子能够出人头地，不在受没有文化的苦，欧阳老师总是以一些特别的方式让我们记住以往的教训，做到知错能改、诚实守信，不仅是在课堂上还是在课外，欧阳老师总是能给我们一种和蔼可亲，平易近人的感觉。经过几年的奋斗，终于，欧阳老师的付出得到了回报，在去年的期末考试中我们班的成绩在十几个学校中，拿到了第二名，给学校争了很大的光，不管怎么说这也是欧阳老师的功劳呀！

欧阳老师非常关爱学生。记得有一段时间，快临近期末考试，水痘传染很厉害，尤其像学校人多密集的地方，传染的更快。学校各班都有人感染水痘，我们班也有个别同学感染，一请假就是一两个星期，对学习影响很大。欧阳老师为了防止传染水痘的同学成绩下降，就叫一些基础好的同学帮他们补习，一有不明白的问题欧阳老师就耐心的讲解，直到同学弄懂题意，有时还印一些练习卷来做，然后根据同学容易做错的题目，在仔细地讲解，直到同学做对为止，她才慢慢地离去，做自己的工作，老师的付出让同学们对考试也更有信心了，果然在期末考试中，我们拿到了好成绩，算是给欧阳老师的惊喜吧！

我即将毕业了，但欧阳老师为我们班做的一切一切，令我肃然起敬，在这的六年的小学生活里，是您给了我世界上最宝贵的东西—知识；是您让我的成绩和写作水平渐渐的提高；是您让我懂得了做人的道理和做事的原则；是您让我从一个丑小鸭变成里一只美丽的天鹅；是您用知识的源泉改变了我的人生；是您创造了一个全新的我。我会永远记住这为可亲可敬、关爱学生的优秀老师—欧阳老师。

老师就像辛勤的园丁，培育着我们这些祖国的花朵;老师就像灯塔，指引着我们这些远航的轮船;老师就像太阳，照耀着我们这些正要盛开的鲜花。这位老师就是我们的班主任—梁老师。

梁老师给人第一印象就是“严”。以前，同学们上课总是“叽里呱啦”讲个不停，现在可没有人上课讲话了，因为我们班来了一位“严”老师;以前，同学们的作业马马虎虎，字迹潦草，有时还不完成，现在，可没有人敢不认真写作业了，因为我们班来了一位“严”老师;以前，同学们打扫教室总是偷工减料，不是地没扫干净，就是垃圾没倒，现在可没有人敢偷工减料了，因为我们班来了一位“严”老师。

梁老师虽然很严，但也很爱笑，她不像别的老师不苟言笑，她从早笑到晚，听到哪个同学说了个笑话，她笑;听到我们提出天真幼稚的问题，她笑;看到我们滑稽的表情和动作，她笑‘看到学生的进步，她笑……她的笑如同金灿灿的阳光温暖着我们的心。

有一次，班里评“三好学生”，我落榜了。下课后，我噘着嘴，脸阴沉沉的。梁老师似乎看出了我的不快，边微笑着，边温和地对我说：“是不是没评上‘三好学生’，不高兴了?不要灰心，只要你克服缺点，继续努力，下次一定能当上‘三好学生’的。”听了梁老师语重心长的话，我端正了学习态度，学习更加认真了，成绩也跃上了全班第三名。学期结束，我被评为学校的“三好学生”。老师把奖状递给我，并在全班面前表扬了我。要是没有老师的那番话，我恐怕还没有这样的好成绩呢!

梁老师对学生非常负责。例如，有哪些同学生字、造句、测验不过关的，老师放学后便留下来给他们补课，经常补到六七点钟才回家。严师出高徒，一份耕耘必有一份收获。我班在期末考试成绩在年级名列前茅。经过老师的辛勤培育，我们班的65朵小花，变得更清香、更美丽。

梁老师啊，您为了我们真是费尽了心思，在这里我要献上一句：“老师，您辛苦了!”

“咻——”命中目标！

“哎哟，我的脑袋！”洪凯青大声喊道。

这不，咱班的瞌睡大王洪凯青瞌睡虫又犯了，上课没两分钟就趴在桌子上睡着了。你以为他能进入美美的梦乡吗？这一点儿小举动可逃不过MssLin那双法眼。只见MssLin眼睛直冒火花，纤纤细手从粉笔盒迅速拿出一根粉笔，用扔垒球的姿势直接向洪凯青投去。那速度简直惊人，“子弹”从我耳边一掠而过，不偏不倚地命中目标——洪凯青的脑袋，接着便是一阵惨叫。你们说，MssLin投粉笔的技术是不是“快准狠”？

洪凯青从桌上缓缓爬起，深深打了一口哈欠，他抹一抹眼睛，一看见MssLin正目不转睛地狠狠地盯着他，洪凯青吓得浑身发抖，赶紧坐正。全班同学也都不敢动，只能听见“扑通扑通”的心跳声，没错，MssLin的眼睛把全班都给kill了。

如果看到这你觉得MssLin很凶，那你就错了，她可是veryinteresting的哦！

MissLin上课很有趣！告诉你们呀，MssLin从来都没给我们上过课，她都是在与我们玩游戏，玩什么呢？玩英语！

“Drdrinkdrink！动起手！”她教我们一边做手部动作，一边和她学发音技巧拼单词。我们左手做一个杯子的形状，右手也做一个杯子的形状，再做一个要喝水的样子，有趣极了！同学们的学习兴趣都被调动起来了，在这样轻松有趣的学习氛围下，我们班大部分同学们考试都能得到优秀。

看，我们的MssLin是不是很interesting呢？羡慕我们拥有一个幽默风趣的老师吗？不过要是你也想来我们班级体验一下，可千万别像洪凯青那样爱睡觉，不然MssLin可不会饶了你的！

The teacher who taught me when I was in the primary school is the teacher that I admire most . He was very friendly and kind-hearted person. No matter what trouble you were in he would always give you his hand. He was very patient with his students. I remember one thing very clearly. Once I made a big mistake. I thought he would be very angry with me. But to my surprise, he gave me a gentle persuasion and encouraged me with his smile. He was very famous for his teaching in the education scope and awarded many times because of his excellent performance. You know childhood is quite important for the growth of a child. The influence he imposed on me will keep me company through my whole life.

So I will admire him forever.

我们的英语老师姓羌，是个挺受大家欢迎的副班主任。

羌老师可年轻了，今年才三十多岁。矮矮的个儿，弯弯的眉毛下长着一双引人注目的眼睛。让她看起来有点可爱。长长的卷发扎成一束，有些像马的鬃毛。她很会打扮，从她身边走过总能闻到一股淡淡的幽香。她的衣服很时髦，和她真是般配。

羌老师她上课挺幽默，喜欢做一些搞笑的事来逗同学们开心。在课堂上总能把我们逗得哈哈大笑。就连让同学们打起精神来上课的方法也很搞笑呢！

记得有一次，林老师上课时讲作业，陈可可改得慢了些，羌老师笑着说：“陈可可同学，你应该改名叫‘陈慢慢’啦！”这下，同学们听了都笑得合不上嘴了，这时我也不由自主地笑啦。

而她发起怒来也不是好惹的。一次，班主任陆老师不在，她坐讲台前批作业，一些微弱的言谈声出现在了教师里，被敏锐的她捕捉到了。她轻轻拍拍桌子，警告我们道：“是谁呀，叽叽喳喳的？再说话，全班罚抄两篇课文。”可后来，讲话的人越来越多了，教室里变得越来越热闹，最终触碰了羌老师的底线。她怒目圆睁，目光好像千万把利刃直刺我们的眼睛。不用说，等着我们的是一顿作业大餐，而我们却哑巴吃黄连有苦说不出。

不过羌老师虽然很严厉，但还是深受我们的喜欢。她会奖励给我们礼物。与其说是奖励，倒不如说是我们用汗水换来的。每一次表现好，她都会给我们发带着她签名的她“假钱”，同学们再用积攒的“假钱”去她那儿换自己喜欢的物品，那时的羌老师笑嘻嘻的，我们感觉到她是天底下最温柔最可爱的老师。每次我们都会满载而归，而她却“破产”了。

羌老师时而幽默，时而严厉；时而温柔，时而变幻无常，深得大家的喜欢，我也越来越喜欢英语这门课程。

[我的英语老师为题目的作文

以 My Chinese Teacher 为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下: 1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。 2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。 3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。 My Chinese Teacher Of all the s

以My Chinese Teacher为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:

1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。

2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。

3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。

My Chinese Teacher

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.

Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And were getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

[我的语文老师初中英语作文

Hello,my name is Jie. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher.

She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.

She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.

This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?

我最喜欢的老师

嗨，我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师，但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。

她很年轻，但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语。她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌，和我们一起玩游戏。我们非常快乐幸福。我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。所以我非常喜欢她。

她喜欢读书和运动。下课后，李老师经常和我们一起运动，我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。

这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师。我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢?你也有一个好老师吗?

上小学时，有一位老师教了我四年半。在更换老师频繁的小学时光里，我们班的同学能够和她有这样的缘分，真是弥足珍贵的。

她就是我的英语老师黄老师。黄老师给我的印象就是一个大孩子，休闲的着装，披肩的长发，显着随和、自然。她会挽着女生的手和她们聊得一片火热，会用牙齿咬男生的臂膊，会高兴得手舞足蹈……从来没有老师的刻板和尊严。

黄老师的上课方式和别的老师迥然不同。课堂上，她总是能高效地讲完课本知识，然后拓展更深的知识。闲暇时，她会利用原声外国电影教我们学英语。每放几分钟就停下来，在黑板上给我们讲电影里的知识点，黄老师跟我们说：“这是一种非常有效的学习英语的方法，每天抽时间看美剧，播完一句话就暂停，先查清它的意思，然后再多读几遍，再继续看，英语轻松搞定……英语的学习不仅仅是在课本上，更与我们的生活息息相关。”

黄老师非常注重英语文化习俗的学习。她会兴致盎然地给我们介绍搜集到的英文歌，会带我们领略各地的文化、风景、美食，每每讲起这些知识，她就会眉飞色舞，全然不像一位老师，更像一位知心大姐姐。她对我们说：“英语是一种语言，更是文化交流的工具。要真正掌握它，就应该去了解发源地的文化，真正感受它的魅力。如果我们和外国朋友交谈，即使我们的英语说得再好，但当别人谈及自己国家的文化、习俗时，你却完全不懂，那学英语有什么用呢？”

黄老师也有严肃的时候。

在准备“珠海金口碑”口语比赛训练期间，她一改往日和善的面容，变得严肃起来。每有听到不满意的地方，她会毫无情面地打断我的话：“不行，重来……”不能容忍一点瑕疵。有一次，反复的训练、校正，让我心烦意乱，感觉黄老师似乎有意跟过不去。“老师，这个发音就差一点点，我下次一定改过来……”我怯怯地对她说。

“不行，重来！”黄老师似乎看出了我的心思，“没有高的标准，怎么代表我们学校！”她的话没有丝毫商量的余地。自那以后，我再不敢再说什么了。每次训练，背范文时，我都胆颤心惊，小心翼翼，不敢有丝毫差池。

有一次我去找她，她正趴在桌子上，口中念念有词，细细一听，原来她也在背文章。电脑屏幕上是一个没做完的幻灯片。我轻声对黄老师说：”黄老师，我来背文章……"她这老才注意到我，歉意地笑了笑，强打起精神坐起来：“背吧……"话没说完，还是忍不住打了个哈欠。她一脸的倦容，毫无课堂上神采奕奕的样子。那时，我才意识到老师平常所唠叨的“你们不知道我有多累”，到底是怎样的……

小学毕业后，我再没有见到过黄老师。一次偶然，我碰见一个学弟，才知道黄老师正好教他们班。当他听到我口中的黄老师时，大为震惊：“怎么会呢？黄老师的课没有你说的那么精彩吧？就是作业布置的可多了，写得手酸；犯个小错误就要抄十八遍课文……”

听学弟不满地数落着，我脑子“嗡”地一下傻了。难道现在，不到半年，黄老师也变了？“如果A班黄老师教我们就好了……”学弟一声叹息，不免羡慕之情。“A班？”我诧异地问。果然是阴差阳错，我们搞错了。原来，彼黄老师非此黄老师。

失落的心，终于又如花一般灿烂！

我才意识到，我是多么幸运，碰见过“真正”的黄老师。

吾师，黄老师。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

In recent years, the news about saving others lives at the cost of ones own are frequently reported. Some people praise the people who save others, becuase its traditional virtue in China to help those who are in need. However, some other people argue that its not worth to save others lives at the cost of ones own and it should not be encouraged. As far as I am concerned, the spirit of self-sacrifice is worthy for us to learn, but we should find amore appropriate way to avoid accident as well.

近年来，关于用自己的生命为代价来拯救别人的生命的新闻频繁被报道。有的人赞扬拯救别人的人，因为帮助需要的人是中国的传统美德。然而，其他人争论到，以自己的生命为代价去拯救别人的生命是不值得的，这种行为不应该太被鼓励。在我看来，自我牺牲精神是值得我们学习的，但是我们也应该找一个更合适的方法来避免事故。

First, every life is precious and respected. Whenever somebody is in danger, we will certainly give them a hand to rescue the lifeif we could. Its our nature. However, its unwise to take action without any considerations. For instance,somebody is drowning, if you are good at swimming, you could jump into the water to save the life; but if you cant swim, the best way for you is not jump into the water but shout loudly and ask others for help. Secondly, some extra accidents can be avoided if we think carefully. There are too many stories about young and promising people sacrifice their own lives to save other but lost their own lives. Its quite debated about these cases. They all have their persuasive reasons and its difficult for us to tell right or wrong between them.

首先，每个生命都是珍贵和值得尊重的。无论什么时候，只要有人有危险，如果可以的话，我们一定会伸出援助之手。但是，缺乏考虑而采取行动的行为是不明智的。比如，有人溺水的时候，如果你擅长游泳，你可以跳到水里拯救生命;但是如果你不会游泳，你最好不要跳进水里，而是大声喊叫寻求他人的帮助。其次，如果我们仔细考虑，一些额外的事故就可以避免。有太多故事是关于年轻有前途的人牺牲他们自己的生命去拯救别人，但是失去了自己的生命的。这样的案件争议相当大。他们都有有说服力的理由，我们很难判断他们谁对谁错。

In conclusion, we should study the noble spirit and action of those who sacrifice themselves to save lives. However, we should also try our best to find the best way to rescue others at the lowest cost. Anyway, all lives are precious, unique and respected and we dont want to see anybody lose their lives.

总之，我们应该学习那些牺牲自己拯救他人的人的高尚精神和行为。但是，我们也应该尽我们最大的努力以最小的代价去营救他人。不管怎么样，所有的生命都是宝贵，独一无二并且值得尊重的，我们不想看到任何人失去他们的生命。

My father made me a little cabin on the tree when I was five years old. I like this cabin so much, it is my little world. I put many toys in it, I decorate this cabin so well. I can do what I want in this little world, sometimes I will ask my friends to come. I have a good time in my little world.

我的爸爸在我五岁的时候给我在树上弄了个小屋。我很喜欢这个小屋，它是我的小小世界。我方了很多玩具在那里，我把这个小屋装扮得很好。在这个小小的世界里，我能为所欲为，有时候我会叫我的朋友来玩。我度过了美好的时光。

新学期开始了，学校里发生了很大的变化。我们的教学楼换了，我们的英语老师也换成了现在的何老师。何老师今年二十四岁，她有一双明亮的大眼睛，高高的鼻梁，一头乌黑的秀发，显得格外的美丽。

老师在课上，非常地认真，每一次都是先抓住重点，再详细的解释给大家听，解释完了之后，她会出一些同学们经常出错的题目教我们做，她还会让我们现场进行口语对话的环节，一个人问，另一个人回答。

有一次，老师叫我起来和她进行一次表示请求的对话，就是问一下可不可以做什么事情，另一方直接回答就可以了。很简单，只要听清楚老师说的是什么意思，根据意思来提问或回答就可以了。我就是这样做的，老师还说我做得非常好，这是我感觉到了学习英语也不是很困难，除了这些之外，她还教我们许多背单词的技巧和背诵课文的方法，我非常喜欢她，我很高兴有何老师这样好的人被我一起度过这一年，我相信在他的细心指导下，我的英语成绩一定会有更大的进步！

[以我的新英语老师为题的作文

他，五十多岁了，戴着一副高度近视眼镜。

今天上午第二节，是科学课。上课铃响起来了，一位白发苍苍，戴着眼镜，穿着礼服的男老师，不慌不忙地走向讲台。只见他上讲台的当儿被台阶绊了一跤，样子有点可笑。老师很自然，敏捷，快速地站了起来。拍拍身上的灰尘，拉了拉礼服，很轻巧地抬起腿来，脚一用力，他便顺势而起，跨过前面的台阶，直接跨到电脑桌前。像只不服老的老猴子，动作相当熟练。

开始上课了，老师把实验器材从一个洁白的袋子里取出，还从袋子里掏出一条漂亮的手帕，拿着实验器材在那里认真的摩摩擦擦，十分爱干净。刚擦完许许多多的实验器材，又拿出了打火机，放在了讲台桌上。老师把这些瓶瓶罐罐的用品都准备好后，宣布开始做实验。可是，一下子，老师又犯糊涂了，摸了摸脑袋：“咦，我的打火机去哪儿了?去哪儿了?放哪儿了?”老师摸摸身上，又在桌子上摸索着，东看看，西瞧瞧，找来找去，连地上也找了，却始终找不到。嘴里自言自语：“去哪儿了，我真糊涂!”看他一副焦急地样子。这时，有位同学颤颤巍巍地站起来，结巴的说：“老师，您把打火机放在粉笔盒里呢!”话音刚落，全班同学忍不住爆发出来，捧腹大笑，有些甚至还轻轻地拍打着桌子。老师为了掩饰自己的尴尬，笑眯眯的，推了推眼镜，平静的说道：“很好，同学们，我这是在考验你们的眼力和胆量，好了，现在开始上课。”老师变得严肃起来，同学们马上停止大笑，认真地进入了学习状态。

印象最深的就是每次老师上课都会用响亮的声音呐喊：“现在看老师做实验!”

[六年级我的实验老师作文

尊敬的老师:

您好!

听说您说要给您写一封信,一开始我还真的有些为难,真不知道该怎么写才好。不过这样也挺好的,我准备说说我的看法,如果语言有什么不恰当的地方,还请您见谅!

其实我真的觉得您是我从懂事,到上学以来,您是我遇到的最好的一个老师。您认真负责,我的.父母都说,您是一个十分热爱自己工作的人。

现在也已经考完试了。考试前,咱们班其实听混乱的,也不知道,等着新学期开学时,也不知道会不会很乱。我觉得咱们班的班干部体制有些问题。以前您应该也发现过咱们班有段时间有些乱。希望到初三时咱们班的秩序只需能更上一层楼。本来有很多话要说的,但是,坐在电脑前,又觉得没有什么可说的。真不知道是为什么,您虽然曾经打过我,虽然当时十分的不理解,也赌气,但是到后来,仔细想想,您的做法还是对的。

还有个事情我曾经想说,但是一直没有机会。您还记得吗?新生刚入学的时候的考试,我的考试成绩那是差的不得了,特别是英语成绩,听说你们都很担心。我要说的是,要不是您没有按照那次成绩当作评判学生的标准,还是没有把我放弃,让我走到现在,说实话,我真的很感激您,要不是您,我还真的不知道我会变成一个怎样的学生。这次考试成绩我并不敢说会进步,我觉得这次考试退步的可能性很大。人生就是这样,有起有伏啊!并不是总是会进步的,如果这次真的退步了,也希望您能原谅我……如果进步了,

我们皆大欢喜!

小学六年级秋游英语作文1

Perhaps autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on a trip.

Last Sunday we went to the countryside. There was golden wheat all over the fields/The fields were covered with golden wheat. Large and colourful apples and pears were hanging on the trees. We could see some peasants were busy getting in the crops in the fields， and others were picking fruits under the trees. All the baskets were full of lovely fruits. It was also the fruit of the peasants labour. No pains， no gains. What a magnificent/beautiful picture! It seemed as if we were wandering in a splendid/wonderful world.

I love autumn. I love the harvest time.

小学六年级秋游英语作文2

I always dream about returning to the past. As many people say, childhood is the happiest and easiest time in one’s life.

Children show you their true emotions. They know what is compassion and what is tolerance better than adults. In their world, all real thoughts are presented. They may easily have different opinions with others, but they never understand what is animosity. They enjoy making friends but they never think about making social communication net. Every child talks from the bottom of his heart without evil plans hidden and never intrigues against each other. Only in children’s way can adults make our life simple, more real and more enjoyable.

I wish everyone’s heart would keep as innocent and lovely as they ever did in their childhood. Then, the walls between our hearts can be broken down and the world would be a better place to live in.

小学六年级秋游英语作文3

Today, the teacher took us to zhongshan park. Here, everyone was so happy! In the autumn of talking and laughing on the road, like a happy little sparrow.

We went to the zhongshan park, there are two stone lions see stone road on both sides, terrible squatting at the door.

Upward along the stone path, see stone road on both sides of the yellow and green leaves, the autumn wind blows, the falling pieces of leaves, like a butterfly dancing in. We quickly climb halfway up. See below flickering skyscrapers, the car on the road is the size of a pencil case. Walk to the top of the hill, Chen teacher gave us a good team, we all sat on the bench, bathed in the warm autumn sunshine, laughing, and eating their food, and you gave me to eat, I eat for you. Really is happy!

The teacher took a photograph, we took our laughing faces, leaving the autumn the best memories.

导语：你有写日记的习惯吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的关于日记的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

小学六年级英语作文：My Day(4篇)

My Day 1

May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.

In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.

May Day is my favorite day!

My Day 2

I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival . I went to the park with my friends . We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate . We went to the park by bike .It was a beautiful day . We sat under a big tree and chated with each other . We took about some movies and some fun things . We had lunch there . We ate hamburgers and some drinks , but I know they are not healthy and not good for us . Then we played some games .

We were all fell tired ,but we were very happy ! It was great fun !

My Day 3

Today is Monday. I get up at 6:00. I have my breakfast at about 6:30.Then I clean my room, wash my face and brush my teeth. I have noodles for breakfast. I go to school at 7:00. I do morning exercises at 7:50.We have four classes in morning. At 11:30, I’m very hungry. I have lunch at school. I go to bed at 12:00 in the noon. We have three classes in the afternoon. I have computer class and art classes. I like them very much. I go home at 5:30. I do homework after school. My sister、brother and I watch TV at 8:00 in the evening. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I go to bed at 10:00.

My Day 4

Today is Sunday. It is sunny. I don‘t go to school. I want go shopping. I get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have some cereal and an egg for breakfast. I go out at 8:00. The shop is near . I go there on foot. Many people are in the shop. I buy a pencil . At 12:00 I go home for lunch. I have some vegetable and meat for lunch. I read a book in the afternoon. I eat some noodles and fruit for supper. After supper, I do my homework. then I watch TV. Later, I play on the computer. I lie on my bed. I listen to the radio. I have a happy day.

翻译

我的1天

5月1日是星期日。今天是劳动节。妈妈对我说：“睁开你的眼睛!望向窗外。多好的天气啊!让我们去公园吧，“所以我的妈妈，我和我的同学去了公园。我们在书包里拿了一些食物。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝天白云。我看见梨树和一些苹果树等等。树下有几种花。它是五颜六色的，蓝色，红色，黄色，粉色，紫色，橙色和白色。我看见一些气球和蝴蝶在天空中。我吃了爆米花，玉米片，香蕉和棒棒糖。他们是美妙的。

下午，我们去了动物园。我参观了鸟类，老鼠，猫，狗，鹦鹉，仓鼠，兔子等。

五一节是我最喜欢的一天!

我的2天

在春节我度过了一个美妙的假期。我和我的朋友去公园。我们八点在学校门口见面。我们骑自行车去公园，那是一个美丽的日子。我们坐在一棵大树下互相聊天。我们拍了一些电影和一些有趣的事情。我们在那里吃午饭。我们吃汉堡包和一些饮料，但我知道他们不健康，对我们不好。然后我们玩了一些游戏。

我们都累了，但我们很高兴!这很有趣!

我的3天

今天是星期一。我6点起床。我大约在：6分58秒30.then我打扫我的房间吃早饭，洗脸刷牙。我早餐吃面条。我七点钟去上学。我做早操在7 50.we在早上有四节课。11:30，我很饿。我在学校吃午饭。我中午12点上床睡觉。我们下午有三节课。我上电脑课和美术课。我非常喜欢他们。我5:30回家。放学后我做作业。我姐姐、弟弟和我晚上8点看电视。然后我洗脸刷牙。我10点上床睡觉。

我的4天

今天是星期日。是晴天。我不上学。我想去购物。我早上6点半起床，早餐吃麦片粥和鸡蛋。我8点出去。商店在附近。我步行去那里。许多人在商店里。我买了一支铅笔。中午12点我回家吃午饭。我午饭吃了一些蔬菜和肉。我下午读了一本书。晚饭我吃面条和水果。晚饭后，我做作业。然后我看电视。后来，我在电脑上玩。我躺在床上。我听收音机。我有一个快乐的日子。

不会遗忘是谁教会了我思想;不会遗忘是谁在迷茫里指引方向;不会遗忘是谁让世界有爱和书声琅琅;不会遗忘是谁用辛勤构建知识的殿堂。

有人说：你是春蚕，吐不尽那绵绵的情丝至死方休!有人说：你是蜡烛，洒尽最后一滴泪雨去照亮漆黑的夜空;也有人说：你是朝露，常在黎明到来之前，默默滋润着大地万物;还有人说：你是晚霞，当太阳回归之后，用最后一丝光亮燃烧苍穹。老师啊!你自己却说：我最渴望的就是铺路，最幸福的还是燃烧;我只是湛蓝天上的一缕飞烟，不慕华贵，美在天然;我只是征途上那块苍老的阶石，是黑暗中那颗遥远的寒星;我只是，我只是滔滔江河中的一滴水珠，来也悄悄，去也从容。亲爱的老师!黑板上你画出了彩虹，却擦去了功利;讲台上你举起了别人，却奉献了自己;是岁月苍老了你的容颜，是粉笔染白了你的两鬓;你放飞了许多的希望，而守巢的却依旧是你!亲爱的老师，我想对你说：你是启明星的迎接者，北斗星的陪伴者;你是三尺土地的耕耘者，三寸工具的驾驶者;你是人类文化的传播者，世界前进的推动者;你是人类灵魂的设计者，社会乾坤的扭转者。你是春风，吹绿了一座座山头，你是阳光，照亮了每个角落;你是灯塔，引导迷茫之舟驰骋知识海洋，你是红烛，把光热毫不吝啬地洒向人世间;你用火炭的心情，染红了腊梅的枝头，燃烧了自已，给了我春的向往，一片希望的绿叶;你将书砌的冰山，飘做了雪花，花白了头发，给了我纯洁的梦想，一双寒风中坚强的翅膀;你从知识的海洋走来，手捧一掬甘泉，洒下一路汗水，滋润了我干渴的心田，一种孜孜以求的愿望。当蜡炬成灰时，你就是不朽;当蚕丝吐尽时，你将会永恒!

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