介绍英国科学家的英语作文(最新20篇)

Good morning. My name is xxx .It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself，and I hope I can make a good performance today.

早上好。我的名字是某某某。非常荣幸能有这个机会来介绍我自己,我希望今天我能有个好的表现。

Now I will introduce myself briefly ,I am 23 years old，born in wenling, the capital of Zhejiang Province. I graduated from the The Chinese peoples armed police force academy department of Frontier command in July, 2011. 现在我将简单介绍一下我自己,我今年23岁,出生在温岭市,是浙江省的省会。我毕业于中国人民武装警察部队学院前沿指挥部门,2011年6月。

During the four years in university, I spend most of my time on study, I have

passed CET4 and I have acquired basic knowledge of Frontier command. Besides, with my efforts and cheerful personality，I received a scholarship and outstanding student awarded. Generally speaking, I am a hard worker especially do the thing I am interested in. I like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is Basketball, swimming or surf online.Through college life,I learn how to balance between study and entertainment.

在四年的大学,我把大部分时间花在学习上,我已经通过国家基本知识,我已经获得了国境的命令。同时,我的努力和性格开朗,我收到了奖学金和优秀学生奖励。一般来说,我是个很勤奋的工人特别是做我感兴趣的东西。我喜欢跟我的同学,几乎谈一切,我最喜欢的消遣是打篮球、游泳或者网上冲浪。通过大学生活,我学会如何平衡学习和娱乐之间。

And now，I am a inspector. I am well aware that the Inspectors job is to complete the ships exit-entry frontier inspection procedure, so Ill use my efforts to be an excellent border inspectors. In my spare time, I will learn more about inspectors professional knowledge, constantly improve my own. Whatever difficulties I encountered will not give up, this is a four-year university taught me. I love my job and like to work together with like-minded people. I believe that through continuous efforts, I will realize my dream and to be a good, serve the people of border inspectors That is all, thank you！

早上好。我的名字是某某某。非常荣幸能有这个机会来介绍我自己,我希望今天我能有个好的表现。

现在我将简单介绍一下我自己,我今年23岁,出生在温岭市,是浙江省的省会。我毕业于中国人民武装警察部队学院前沿指挥部门,2011年6月。

在四年的大学,我把大部分时间花在学习上,我已经通过国家基本知识,我已经获得了国境的命令。同时,我的努力和性格开朗,我收到了奖学金和优秀学生奖励。一般来说,我是个很勤奋的工人特别是做我感兴趣的东西。我喜欢跟我的同学,几乎谈一切,我最喜欢的消遣是打篮球、游泳或者网上冲浪。通过大学生活,我学会如何平衡学习和娱乐之间。

而现在,我是一个官员。我深知检查员的工作是完整的船的出入境边防检查手续,所以我会用我的努力成为一个优秀的边境的核查。在我的业余时间,我将学习更多关于核查人员的专业知识,不断提高我自己。无论遇到什么困难,我遇到过不会放弃,这是一个四年大学教过我。我爱我的工作,也喜欢和志趣相投的人一起工作。我相信,通过我们的不懈努力,我要实现我的梦想,要成为

一名优秀的、为人民服务的边境的核查 “这就是全部了,谢谢!

The "Chong Yang Festival" is celebrated on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month, and it is as such known as the Double Ninth Festival.

Origins: The festival began as early as the Warring States Period (475 - 221 BC). According to the yin/yang dichotomy that forms a basis to the Chinese world view, yin represents the elements of darkness and yang represents life and brightness. The number nine is regarded as yang. The ninth day of the ninth month is a double yang day, hence the name "Chong Yang Festival". (Chong means "repeat" in Chinese.) The ninth month also heralds the approach of winter. It is a time when the living need warm clothing, and filial Chinese sons and daughters extended this to make the festival a time for providing winter clothes for their ancestors. The Double Ninth Festival, therefore, also became an occasion to visit the graves of dead family members. Clothes made of paper would then be burnt as offerings.

Climbing mountains: On the Double Ninth Festival, people customarily climb mountains, appreciate chrysanthemum flowers, drink chrysanthemum wine, and eat double-ninth cakes. The Double Ninth Festival is also the "Old Men Festival". Old people are especially meant to improve their health by taking part in the activities on the day of the festival.

Family get-togethers: The Double Ninth Festival is also a time for family get-togethers. It is an occasion to remember one‘s ancestors, the sacrifices they made and the hardships they underwent. Often, family outings are organised during which people search to renew their appreciation of nature and to reaffirm their love and concern for family members and close friends.

[重阳节介绍的英语作文

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview. I hope I can make a good performance today. Im confident that I can succeed. Now I will introduce myself briefly. I am 26 years old, born in Shandong province. I graduated from Qingdao University. My major is electronics. And I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2003. I spent most of my time on study, and I have passed CET-6 during my university. And I have acquired basic knowledge of my major. It is my long cherished dream to be an engineer and I am eager to get an opportunity to fully play my ability.

In July 2003, I began working for a small private company as a technical support engineer in Qingdao city. Because there was no more chance for me to give full play to my talent, so I decided to change my job. And in August 2004, I left for Beijing and worked for a foreign enterprise as an automation software test engineer. Because I want to change my working environment, Id like to find a job which is more challenging. Moreover￡Motorola is a global company, so I feel I can gain a lot from working in this kind of company. That is the reason why I come here to compete for this position. I think Im a good team player and a person of great honesty to others. Also I am able to work under great pressure. I am confident that I am qualified for the post of engineer in your company.

That is all. Thank you for giving me the chance.

[英语求职自我介绍模板

Autumn, is a fresh autumn, fruit season, everywhere beautiful.

Look, the field is golden. Wow a lot of gold necklace Yo, but I thought again, how could there be so many gold necklaces on the field, I came forward to see, just beans fills, empty hi a; rice has caught the harvest season, from a distance Like a sunset of the sea, from the near look, like a beach; Hey, lying so many fat dolls, a closer look, the original is some big melon.

Look, there is a crystal clear river around the rice fields. Although the river is not as spectacular as the Yellow River, but this river for the field to add a new scene. Here the river is clear, ah, clear can see the free fish in the river; here the river "singing" gurgling in the fields farming farmers uncle can often hear the river crisp, sweet "song"; here the river More blue ah, blue like the ocean, blue pure, blue deep Zhan. How beautiful the river!

This kind of field in the crystal clear river, with colored butterflies and all day buzzing little bees, all kinds of beautiful flowers fragrant, so you feel like walking into a continuous pastoral painting The

Ah, I love the fields of autumn!

[介绍秋天的田野英语作文

Respected business leaders:

My name is ××× , and I will graduate from Xian FanYi University in the year 2015, My major is secretary in English department.

It’s my great pleasure to have this opportunity to improve our mutual understanding. During the three –year college study, I tried my best to learn all kinds of knowledge, and weigh the hard work of my teachers and myself; I have mastered English listening, speaking, writing and reading skills.

Moreover, I have a good command of business English and the basic theory, public relationship of secretary. Meanwhile, in order to enlarge my knowledge, I always read some newspapers and magazines about business and trade, and I used to do some representative of business in my spare time. At the same time, I learnt computer skills during my summer vacation, and now Im familiar with Office 2007. It is my three –year college life that makes me form my life attitude. Also my three-year college life that makes me rich in knowledge, and its also my three-year college life that makes me form my life attitude. Honesty, Trust, Diligence is principle of how to be a man.

As a college graduate, I believe "where there is a will, there is a way", and I will try my best to do a good job in my business. So I sincerely hope that I can make a position in your company so that I can serve for the company in the future.

Yours faithfully

Everyone has hobbies. Hobbies are the important things in our life. I also have hobbies. Next,let me tell you.

Exercise is my one hobby. I love sport. The more exercise I do,The more healthier I have. After I have dinner,I often go for a walk with my sister on the streets,and when class is over,I usually play badminton with my friends. Sometimes I play ping-pong,too. So I think I live in a wonderful life.

Reading is my the other hobby. In weekends,I often read some novels. Such as《Jane Love》. 《Zhao Hua Xi She》and so on. That can make me improve my Chinese.

This is my hobbies. If you have hobbies,you can exchange with me.

Now I am the most happy day is yesterday. Just dont have to write my homework, but go out to play for a day. That day Ive been sleeping at 10:30, we play it to have a meal, dinner aunt words so much. But she will be leaving today, so we went first to be bought some food for her to eat on the train, then go to the market to buy some fruit to bring her back. Of course, is to take us to my dad to drive a car. Because yesterday the weather was very hot, inside the car and opened the air conditioning, so the temperature of the inside and outside temperature difference is very big, the car I sweat.

This afternoon we send after go to the railway station, the father of the telephone rang, like father classmates call my dad to huaqiang north inspection. Then we drove to che, then take the subway to huaqiang north. After the huaqiang north, mother will go shopping, I will go with dad Ming tong digital city inspection. Shops, and there are number, then press the number found we will go to the shops. I see outside a few cases at the beginning, I thought thats what we are going to check the goods. As a result, the dad after talking with them, they moved out of the 20 cases of rectangular box, I just know thats where we want to check the goods. The man opened, wow, turned out to be a mobile phone, each box has twenty cell phone. Father first open a phone box, look at the instruction, if there is a stamp. Then my father asked me to help him to read the box. When my dad "spot check" dozens of mobile phone, we begin to open the box of each hand, look at the packing are in good condition, have less mobile phone, batteries, chargers. Weve been watching all four radix stemonae mobile phone. Four radix stemonae mobile phone, a few mobile phone package damaged, then we find the boss to change. After check the mobile phone, the boss will pull the 20 cases of mobile phones on the trailer to the Courier company. Actually express company also is very close to there after, people express company with woven bag wrap 20 cases of mobile phone is divided into five. Above good stick bar code, write good to send, then we are there waiting for my dads classmate turn money to the bosss account, the task is finished.

I was going to check the goods, such as call dad took me to play video games, but in more minutes at seven o clock. Dads mobile phone has no electricity, we went to my mother. After dad generous please my mother and I eat meatballs, drink juice. The fruits of labor "delicious!"

目前我最快乐的一天就是昨天了。不仅仅是不用写作业，而是出去玩了一天。那天我一直睡到了10：30，玩了一下我们就吃饭，吃饭时阿姨还是那么多话。可是她今天就要走了，于是我们就先去了人人乐买了一些吃的给她在火车上吃，然后又去菜市场买了一些水果给她带回去。当然，都是我爸爸开车带我们去的。由于昨天天气很热，车里面又开了空调，所以车内的温度和外面的温度差别都很大，一下车我就直冒汗。

下午我们送阿姨去火车站后，爸爸的电话就响了，好像是爸爸的同学叫我爸爸去华强北验货。然后，我们开车去车公庙，再坐地铁去华强北。到了华强北后，妈妈就去逛街，我就跟爸爸去明通数码城验货。那里店铺和普通的店铺一样，都有编号，然后就按编号找到了我们要去的店铺。一开始我看到外面有几箱货，我以为就是我们要验的那些货。结果，爸爸和他们交谈后，他们搬出了二十箱长方形的箱子，我才知道这才是我们要验的货。那人一打开，哇，原来是手机，每箱有二十部手机。爸爸先打开一部手机的盒子，看了一下说明书，有没有盖章。然后爸爸就叫我帮他把看过的盒子装起来。爸爸“抽查”了十几部手机后，我们就开始把每一部手的盒子打开，看一下包装是否完好，有没有少手机，电池，充电器。我们一直把四百部手机都看完。四百部手机中，有几部手机的包装损坏了，然后我们就找老板换。验完手机后，老板就把这二十箱手机放在拖车上拉到快递公司。其实快递公司也非常近，到那里以后，快递公司的人拿编织袋把二十箱手机分成五包装。在上面贴好条码，写好要发到的地方，然后我们就在那里等爸爸的同学把钱转到老板的账上，任务就算完成了。

本来我打算等验完货，叫爸爸带我去打游戏机的，但是到了七点多钟了。爸爸的手机也没电了，我们就去找妈妈了。之后，爸爸大方的请我和妈妈吃肉丸，喝果汁。劳动的“果实”真好吃啊!

lu xun is my favourite writer. he is one of the most famous writers in china. he wrote a lot of literary works.he was thin and not tall. he always wore a long old coat in that time.

at first, he wanted to be a doctor and save people’s lives. so he learned medicine, but later he found the chinese were in sensitive when they faced the oppression of their enemies. so he began to write articles to wake the people up. lu xun wrote some famous novels, he attacked the social mores in that time, and in his works, many persons were known very well, such as “ah q”“kong yi ji”.

i like lu xun because i also want to be a great writer like him. i like reading and writing, and i often write some articles in my free time. though i don’t have good literary talent or a large vocabulary, i spend lots of time reading and writing to improve my writing skills.

lu xun is my hero, i will learn more from him. i believe i can be a great writer like him in the future.

as it is known to us all ,luxun is a famous chinese writer. he is not only a writer, thinker, but also the founder of chinese literature . he wrote many classic novels and his stories, which are translated many languages, were made into film,such as the true story of ah q and the new years sacrifice,which deeply showed peoples suffering in the old days.

because of his achievement to chinese literature, chairman mao spoke highly of him. besides, some of his works were selected into the text books in high school and university. i think youll gain a lot from reading his works.

Hello! My name is Chen Danqing. My English name is Joy. Im 14 years old.

Im a happy girl. I have a happy family. My father and my mother are both office

workers. Theyre busy. But at weekends, they always cook nice food for me. Im

happy in the family. I love my parents and they love me very much.

Im a student at Don Zhou Middle School. It is very big and beautiful.

There are many classroom buildings and office buildings. Besides the buildings,

there is a big playground. After school, there are lots of boys playing

basketball on it. I think they are happy. There are a lot of flowers and trees

in my school. They are beautiful. I like my school. In my school, I have many

friends. All my friends are polite and helpful. My friends are all nice to me.

They can make me happy. So I like playing with them.

My hobbies are listening to music and reading. I like pop music very much.

I dislike sports because Im not strong. Its hard for me.

I have a happy family, a beautiful school and many nice friends. I enjoy

every day.unjs.com

I’m a primary student. I live happily. I have long hair and a lovely face. But I ‘m very short. Being the shortest girl in my class, I feel shamed of it, though my teacher and classmates always say I will grow taller in the future to comfort me. Besides, I feel very happy in school. There are so many students play with me, and I always do well in study. So, when I go home, my parents also happy, too. My father often take me out to different interesting places. And my mother usually cook delicious food for me. How happy I am!

California is west of the United States and is divided into San Francisco and Los Angeles. As soon as we get there, we can see many advanced equipment and spacious roads, so that we can know that the United States is a vast country.

In the mountains of California, huge waterfalls can be seen. Squirrels are running on trees. Apart from the mountains and green mountains, there are also Disneyland and universal studios in the city. Disneyland has a household name, Mickey Mouse, and many childrens favorite cartoon characters, with scary haunted houses, crazy roller coasters... And so on.

Now, though, the California have developed many forests, but also some forests have been preserved, let the squirrel can run in the trees, the fish can swim in the water, swimming birds in the sky fly, let the animals keep beautiful homes.

This trip to America let me know the importance of nature to us, so we should love this beautiful home.

Today were going to visit Stanford university, a very old university, and its recognized as one of the worlds most distinguished universities.

Our bus stopped at Stanford university, and I saw an antique building. All the way forward, the building that was built of stone, though made of stone, was built very fine, with different patterns engraved on it. It was then that I was attracted by a church building, whose metope was a beautiful picture of more than 20,000 pieces of Mosaic, which is the memorial church of Stanford university. At Stanford, there is no lack of sophistication, and even the flowers and plants are so finely manicured that, on a large lawn, the flowers and plants are pruned into a big Stanford university logo.

At Stanford, one hour at a time, we had to be reluctant to say goodbye to her. This famous university has given me so much hope that I can go to this university when I grow up.

Good morning ladies and gentlemen!I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you .First of all , my chinese name is XX and my english name is XX .I am XX years old. I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of English.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngsters.I like reading books, especially those about XX . Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.It is my long cherished dream to be a member of English . I think Im a good team player and Im a person of great honesty to others. Also I am able to work under great pressure.

That’s all. Thank you for giving me this chance.

Good morning, I am glad to have a chance for this interview, and I hope I can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in September. Now let me introduce myself briefly.

My name is xx .I was born in 1985 in Hunan Province. I majored in Software Engineering in School of Computer Science and Technology, Hang Zhou *** University from 2003 to 2007.

In the past 4 years, I spent most of my time on studying. I have passed CET4/6 with a ease. Besides, I have acquired basic knowledge of computer programming both in theory and in practice.

As for my character, I think I am optimistic and confident. My favorite pastime is playing ping-pang , reading books and listening to the music.

Thank you!!!

I am ___________. I was born in _________ . I graduate from senior high school and major in English. I started learning English since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.

In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English and saw a lot of different things.

I think language is very interesting. I could express one substance by using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge.

[大学开学英语自我介绍

考研复试英语口语一般涉及这样几个话题，象自我介绍、家乡和大学的状况、研究生期间的科研设想等等。如何在这些地方让老师满意呢？下面这些话题的模板和范文，供广大考生参考。

自我介绍

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is ***, 24. I come from ******, the capital of *******Province. I graduated from the ******* department of *****University in July, 2001. In the past two years I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I have been teaching *****in NO. ****middle School and I was a head-teacher of a class in junior grade two. Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interviewed by you。

I am open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of history. In my spare time, I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books, especially those about *******. Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line. In addition, during my college years, I was once a Net-bar technician. So, I have a comparative good command of network application. I am able to operate the computer well. I am skillful in searching for information on Internet. I am a football fan for years. Italian team is my favorite. Anyway, I feel great pity for our countrys team。

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. Of course, if I am given a chance to study ****** in this famous University, I will spare no effort to master a good command of advance ******。

Good morning, my dear teachers, my dear professors. I am very glad to be here for your interview. My name is Song Yonghao, I am 22 years old. I come from Luoyang, a very beautiful ancient city. my undergraduate period will be accomplished in Changan university in July, 2004; and now, I am trying my best for obtaining a key to Tongji University。

Generally speaking, I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. When I was sophomore, I found web design very interesting, so I learned it very hard. To weaver a homepage for myself, I stayed with my personal computer for half a month, and I am the first one in my class who own his homepage. Furthermore, I am a person with great perseverance. During the days preparing for the first examination, I insist on running every day, no matter what the weather was like. And just owning to this, I could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end。

Well, in my spare time, I like basketball, tennis and Chinese chess. Also English is my favorite. I often go to English corner to practise my oral English on every Thursday, and write compositions to improve my written ability. But I know my English is not good enough, I will continue studying。

Ok, that is all, thank you for your attention。

[考研复试英语口语自我介绍经典作文

My grandfather is in his seventies now. He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.

He used to live with my family. At that time he always spent more than one hour examining my homework every day. When I was ill, he took good care of me. He showed great concern.

Grandfather is very warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took her to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.

Now my grandfather is living in another city with my aunt. My parents and I all miss him very much. And I hope that I can go to visit him soon.

Good afternoon,

It’s my great pleasure to stand here for this interview.

First, let me introduce myself. My name is ** and you also can call my English nickname **.

I like a word said by Napoleon: I succeeded because I will it; I never hesitated. I believe in all time: If you think you can, you can.

I come from **, the capital of ** province and will graduate from the management of department of ** university, in July this year. In undergraduate period, I achieved scholarship when I was sophomore and junior, meantime I became the chairman of pingpong club.

In term of which, you could feel I am an optimistic and active man. Moreover, I am a thoughtful student. Specially, I am pretty good at learning form daily life and study. It is energetic of me to think some meaningful issues. When I face to problems, I am capable of analyzing and settling them by myself. If the matter is special intricate, I also can corporate well with others as a team.

In spare time, I have broad interests like many other young people. Sport and reading are my favorites. I am also a pure sport fan. In all of these, I do well in playing Pingpong, there are several medals I won as the captain of school or department team include individual game and team games. Taking part in some sport game can help me study energetically.

In this fast-change time, I am also skillful in operating computer and network. Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line. In additional, I am familiar with searching for information in internet.

I have past cet6 test, however, I am aware that there’s lots of room to develop my English speaking.

In the past one year, I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination. In this course of studying, on one hand, I gain knowledge in some fields, more importantly accumulated enough study ability and willpower for further developing in this famous school. Now all my industrious work has gain return for this opportunity to present myself here.

I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the chance to further my study toward management.

Hello, I am Cao Wanqian. I am a smart girl.I am 12 years old.

I have short and black hair and small eyes.

Purple is my favourite colour. Kangaroo is my favourite animal.

I have a good friend. It’s name’s Zhao Xhuanru, It’s funny. I like she.

导语：八一建军节诞生于1933年，她的第一个节日庆祝活动，是在中央苏区首府——江西瑞金举行的。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

It is the Army Day of the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army on August 1. It stems from the August 1 Nanchang Uprising which the Chinese Party members lead of revolutionary period of the peoples mainly main justice in China. The August 1 Nanchang Uprising for will it be August 1 1927 fire Communist Party of China arms resist the Kuomintang first rifle of reactionaries indicate China enters the Communist Party of China and leads the new period for revolution of arms independently mark the birth of the new peoples army of China.

Will it be July 1933 the republic temporary central government Soviet of Chinese determine to be tenable on commemoration day for the Chinese Workers and Peasants Red Army (the predecessor of the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army ) on August 1. From then on August 1 became the Army Day of the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army. During Army Day will concentrate on launching the activity of " support the army and give preferential treatment to the families of the armymen and martyrs support the government and cherish the people " all over China commemorate the birth of the peoples army.

Since the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army built up the Army goes through the innumerable hazards and hardships from small to large change from weak to strong develop into an army with synthetic multi-arm is advancing on the roads of the picked troops with Chinese characteristics courageously become the great wall of steel that China defends the peace and development.

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它是八月一日中国人民解放军的一天。它源于八月一日南昌起义，中国共产党领导的革命时期，人民的主要正义在中国。的八一南昌起义为将它是8月1 1927年，火共产党中国武器抵抗国民党反动派的第一枪，表明中国进入的中国共产党，领导新时期革命武装独立，标记的中国新型人民军队的诞生。

1933年7月，该共和国临时中央政府，中国苏维埃，确定以成立纪念日为中国工人和农民红军(前身中国人民解放军)8月1日。从那时起，八月一日成了中国人民解放军的一天。建军节期间，将集中开展“活动支持军队和优待军人、烈士家属，政府支持和珍惜的人”都在中国，纪念人民军队的诞生。

自从中国人民解放军建造的军队，去通过无数的危险和困难，从小型到大型，改变从弱到强，发展成军合成多臂，是推进中国特色勇敢精兵道路，成成为的钢铁长城，中国维护和平与发展。

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想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。