学生英语作文中经常出现的错误【20篇】
在雪花飘起的时候,火红的春联,纷纷挂出;在冬意渐深的时候,震耳的鞭炮,纷纷响起;在花朵凋零的时候,回乡的梦想,纷纷绽放。在我眼中的春节越走越近的时候,就这样,一年年地重复着这首关于春节的古老的歌谣,一切都不变……接下来开学吧为大家整理了学生英语作文中经常出现的错误优秀作文,供大家学习,希望你认真看完,会对你有帮助的!
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140篇1:未来的生活学生英语
全文共 800 字
+ 加入清单I imagine a lot about lives in the future。I think two words can summarize my imagination。The first word is fast。In the future,we will have more quickly transportation means。
Now matter how far we go,it takes only a short time。With the development of science and technology,we can travel to the moon,Mars or somewhere outer space。People may can live in other planets。The second word is convenient。
Because of the fast development of our society,many work can be done by computers or even robots。
Lots of things are fully automated。Humans just need to give some simple instructions to complete complecated tasks。
我对未来生活充满了想象。我认为可以用两个词来概括我的想象。第一个词是快速。将来,我们会拥有更快的交通方式。不管我们去得多远,它总能在短时间内把我们带到目的地。
随着科学技术的发展,我们可以到月球,火星或者其他外太空旅游。人们也许可以在其他星球居住。第二个词是便利。
由于社会的快速发展,很多工作可以用电脑或者机器人来完成。很多东西都是全自动的。人们只需要提供一些简单的指令来完成复杂的任务。
篇2:关于动物的学生英语
全文共 521 字
+ 加入清单Dear Lily:
I think you had better feed a hamster,the trediest kind of pet these days is the small hamster. People like them because they are quiet and clean. I have a hamster named Tom,it’s very cute and easy to take care of,and it’s cheaper than rabbits or cats,so I bought it. She’s my best company,because she reads books and litens to music with me every night.However,life with a hamster isn’t always perfect,she sometimes noisy at night ,she love sleep all day,too. So,sometimes she is very boring! How do you think?
篇3:学生英语版的自我介绍
全文共 674 字
+ 加入清单Hi,boys and girls, good morning, it is my pleasure to take this change to introduce myself,
my name is Leo, I am 10 years old. About my family, there are 4 people in my family, father, mother, brother and me,
my father and mother are all very kind, welcome you to visit my family if you have time!
嗨,男孩女孩们,大家上午好,很荣幸能有这个机会来介绍我自己,我叫力欧,今年10岁。关于我的家庭,我家有四口人,爸爸妈妈,哥哥,还有我,我的爸爸妈妈都是很友善的人,如果你有时间欢迎来我家玩。
I ’m a very outgoing boy(girl), I like reading、playing games and listening to music, of course, I also like to make friends with all the people in the school, I hope I will be your best friends in the school life.
我是一个很外向的男孩(女孩),我喜欢阅读,玩游戏,听音乐,当然,我也喜欢与学校里所有的人交朋友,希望在以后的学校生活中,我能成为你们最好的朋友。
篇4:从错误中学习英语作文
全文共 1534 字
+ 加入清单As Goethe says, “man errs so long as he strives”, no one can avoid making mistakes. Therefore, what we need to do is to recognize and revise our mistakes and learn from them.
For one thing, from mistakes, we learn to be more careful and observant. Small though a mistake is, it can destroy the whole plan that we are engaged in. Therefore, in the process of finding mistakes, we are also shaping our characteristics of carefulness and cautiousness and strengthen our capacity of observation. We understand that success consists of details and we could not ignore the smallest mistakes.
For another, the process of finding and revising mistakes is also a process of changing our way of thinking. In many cases, we find that our mistakes are not in what we have done, but in the methods we have used. Thus, when we find that we are wrong, we would try another way to carry out our plan. In this process, we are trying to think in other ways and our capacity of thinking is also improved.
In a word, mistakes are inevitable but we have to take a proper attitude towards them. And making mistakes is not totally a bad thing because we can learn some enlightenment from it.
正如歌德所说:“人只要奋斗就会犯错误”,任何人都会犯错。因此,我们需要做的是承认错误,改正错误,并从中学习。
一方面,从错误中,我们要学会更加细心,学会观察入微。一个错误再小,但也能破坏我们从事的整个计划。因此,在发现错误的过程中,我们同时也在形成细心谨慎的性格,加强我们的观察能力。我们会明白成功是由细节组成的,我们不能忽视哪怕是最小的错误。
另一方面,发现错误、改正错误的过程也是改变我们的思考方式的过程。在很多情况下,我们发现我们的错误并不在于我们所做的事情,而在于我们所使用的方式。因此,当我们发现我们犯了错,我们就会尝试另外的方法来实施我们的计划。在这个过程中,我们试着用另外的方式思考,我们的思考能力同时也得到了提高。
总之,错误是不可避免的,但是我们要采取正确的态度去对待。同时犯错也不完全就是坏事,因为我们可以从中学到一些启示。
篇5:写学生在校生活的英语
全文共 1055 字
+ 加入清单My name is _______. Im ____ years old, and I study in ________ Middle School of Harbin. My school is very big and beautiful. Im very happy in the school.
I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dining room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.
We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes for my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. Its very interesting and exciting. I think its helpful for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play soccer ball, basketball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.
I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life more and more meaningful and colorful. My school life is wonderful, isnt it
篇6:英语作文常见十大类错误
全文共 1850 字
+ 加入清单1. 审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”,偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher。
正 my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成,如:“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:im tired。
误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
误 the apples cheap. ill take some。
正 the apples are cheap. ill take some。
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。
误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting。
正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting。
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不可省略的,代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊,所以出现只写半句的现象,这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school。
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词,他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致,包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。
例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知识,他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化,而对英语来说,这些都至关重要。例:
误 when i get to the station the train leave。
正 when i got to the station the train had left。
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等,以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累,所以考生应该从平时练习出发,每天坚持写英语日记,多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作,提高自己的英语素养。
篇7:议论文写作容易出现的错误
全文共 258 字
+ 加入清单1审错题,立意错误
我告诉你,你完了....
多读几遍题目,找找关键词,争取不要审错题
2中心论点千呼万唤始出来
简单点,提论点的方式简单直白点。老师看那么多卷子很累的。
3过于追求标新立异
年轻人,你这种做法很危险啊
4文体似是而非
不要考验老师对于文体的认识。千万别写“四不像”的文体。
5论据太多却缺乏论述
不要过多描述论据,论据要简洁有力,更多的是要对论据进行论述。要一直提醒自己啊,平时看到论据,要自己概述一下。
6论据不贴切
其实提问者的第二个例子我觉得有点不贴切。平时多注意积累论据。千万别觉得某一个论据特别好,到哪都想用它。
篇8:未来的生活学生英语
全文共 925 字
+ 加入清单I want a villa ,with a big pool , a basketball playground and a garden 。 because i love my family ,and my parents like flowers and green trees , my boy friend likes playing basketball , and i like swimmming and beautiful plants 。 So i want a big and pretty house , which full of loving and colourful life 。
I hope this villa has three floors 。 The first floor has a living room , a washing room and a kitchen 。The second floor has four rooms, one is our bedroom , one is my parents room , one is my husband parents room and one is my schoolroom 。 The third floor has two roomsfor the guests, a room for playing billiards, and a room for entertainment, such as playing majiang 。
We will feed two dogs 。 one name is AoAo and the others is XiuXiu 。Their names together means it never give up till biting the bad man death 。 That menas well get over every difficulty ,try our best , making us together and love each other forever !
篇9:关于学生使用手机的英语作文
全文共 1358 字
+ 加入清单在社会发展的今天,越来越多的学生拥有手机,你赞成中学生使用手机吗?
赞成意见:1.现在是信息社会,手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故,可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机,紧跟时间并无过错,追求时尚可以理解,但学习是首要任务。
反对意见:1.学校已提供了公共电话,因此手机并不能带来更多的方便,而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信,将无法集中精力学习。
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone. Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study. And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed.
In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.
篇10:时间初三学生英语日记
全文共 455 字
+ 加入清单Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on.It won‘t stay to wait for somebody. You can‘t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won‘t leave them more. Today I found I hadn‘t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do.
I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.
篇11:初三学生英语作文
全文共 1502 字
+ 加入清单I’m a student of a university. I’m short and thin with thick glasses. I usually go to the library on weekday afternoons. I always read in the library from morning till night on Saturdays and Sundays.
There are fifteen reading rooms in the library. I like reading in the No.15 Reading Room. It is on the fifth floor. The reading room is clean and tidy. It is small but quiet. The librarian is an old woman. She is very kind to me.
One Sunday morning I saw a girl standing there when I came into the No.15 Reading Room.
She gave me a book. I was very surprised. The book which I wanted to read was in my hand! “The old librarian and I live in the same building,” said the girl. “And your teacher, Professor Li, lives next to me. You come from a small village far away. You have studied in the university for about six years. They told me all about you.”
An hour later she came back into the reading room and put a bookmark in my book. She closed the book and asked me to have a rest.
More and more young people like reading in the No. 15 Reading Room. One Friday afternoon, when I came into the reading room, I saw many people reading there. I thought I had to go to another reading room. The girl came up and told me there was a seat for me.
The book was open. There was a cup of tea beside it. The tea was hot. I asked the boy next to me, “Why don’t you drink the tea for free?”
The boy smiled. “The beautiful librarian has only two cups. One is for you, and the other is for herself. Are you clear?”
篇12:关于老师的学生英语
全文共 645 字
+ 加入清单Today is September 10th. Teachers’ Day. A teacher was invited to our school to give us a talk. He had taught for fifty years, and had won the gold medals by the Department of Education. He worked hard all his life, and gave all his love to the students. We were deeply moved by his talk. Today many students he had taught before come back to him, and some others from all over the country visit wrote him letters to express their love and thanks.
The old man said that it was the happiest moment in his life.
今天是9月10日教师节。老师被邀请到我们学校给我们做报告。他已经教了五十年,赢得了教育金牌。他一生努力工作,给学生满满的爱。我们被深深地被他的演讲感动了。今天又很多他以前教过的学生都回来了,还有一些来自全国各地的访问写信以表达他们的爱和感谢。老人说,这是他一生中最幸福的时刻。
篇13:英语作文:做文明学生
全文共 1058 字
+ 加入清单On September 12th, 2010, our school held a flag-raising ceremony on the playground with the theme “For your safety, for your life!”
Tang Shaofeng, on behalf of the students, made a speech. He said that safety concerns every one of us and hidden threat against safety was everywhere. We may easily get injured in sports or traffic accidents , or get sick from food poisoning. Therefore,we should pay more attention to safety and try to learn more about first aid. To sum up, we should take good care of ourselves for the sake of our familys happiness.
Later, our headmaster gave us some specific requirements. He said both teachers and students should attach special importance to school safety. Firstly, riding bicycles on campus is strongly prohibited. No ball games are allowed in the academic areas. We should keep to the right when going upstairs or downstairs. Besides, the windows must be closed and the doors must be locked when the last one leaves the classroom. Finally, we should always obey the traffic rules on our way home or to school.
篇14:关于宽容的作文:善待学生的错误
全文共 1683 字
+ 加入清单一直在面对学生的错误,一直在心里提醒自己宽容学生的错误,却从来没有想过,假如有一天,自己犯下了难以逆转的错误,我该祈求谁的宽恕?
学生吗?不!他们太小,不可能真正理解我的伤痛;领导吗?不!他们的眼里只有制度、规章和上级;同事吗?不!在这个物欲横流,利欲熏心的社会,我看不到真正的合作;家人吗?不!自己起早贪黑,透支生命已经够让他们担心了;家长吗?不!他们有时候太敏感于法律的武器,我实在不敢恭维他们上帝的派头……
我从来没有想过的问题,但现在我必须想了,因为我犯了一个严重的错误——我把应该发给学生的成绩报告册(也称素质报告书)发给了学生。
散学典礼结束,学生陆续离开了学校,喧嚣的校园安静下来。回到办公室,发现其他毕业班老师的办公桌上还整整齐齐地摆放着“学生成绩报告册”,我很纳闷。
有人告诉我:“成绩报告书必须和学生学籍管理卡、健康卡以及毕业生登记卡一并装入档案袋,送交对口中学。这是教育局的新规定!”
我马上意识到自己犯了错,但还是本能地想给自己的错误寻找一个借口,我问:“那学生家长怎么知道学生一学期的学习情况?”
答曰:“按上级要求办!”
是的,按上级要求办!问那么多干什么?一个犯了错误的人应该想的不是上级为什么要这样做,而是自己为什么会犯错?甚至也不是该想自己为什么会犯错,而是应该想如何尽快地纠正犯下的错——追回那些可能已经到了家长手里的成绩册。
于是,先到教导处报告,承认错误是由于自己的疏忽造成的,然后紧急投入“追缴”。好在现在通讯发达,手机帮了我的大忙。能打通的电话,都打到了,加上学生之间的相互转告,一个中午的时间就追回来19本。下午又和几个学生一起顶着炎炎烈日家访,追回14本,晚上交代门房的张师傅帮助代收剩下的“成绩报告册”。第二天一到校,张师傅就把他收到的“成绩报告册”交给我。一统计,还差8本。
再次向学校报告,本意是想得到学校领导的支持和谅解,但领导的无动于衷令我失望,一种莫名的孤独与恐慌让已经心力交碎的情绪雪上加霜。人常说:“哀莫大于心死”,而心死有的时候会让人变得清醒。我累了,不想再忍辱负重地揣着一份美丽的渴望,渴望得到别人的人文关怀,我决定行使自己的权利——接受处罚。
不可思议的是,当我说出“甘愿接受处罚”的时候,周围人的态度突然来了个180度的转弯,让我惊诧的同时不得不怀疑这突如其来的热情全是因为那还没有追回来的8个学生的成绩册。人啊,就是难以逃脱庸俗!
经历了这样的事情,我不知道自己是不是也会庸俗到睁大了眼睛去寻找别人身上的错误来转嫁某种伤害。可怕的是,这个问题很快就有了准确的答案——我确实是一个庸俗得不能再庸俗的人!
事情要从“毕业生登记表”说起。辛辛苦苦填写了半天的“毕业生登记表”拿到教育局去检查,结果必须全部返工。原因是卡上学生的成绩不能用分数,必须用等级表示。我的第一反应是“这是谁的错呢?”在填表之前没有任何人告知我应该填等级而不是填分数,而且这次不是我一个人填的分数,其他老师也是。我心里掠过那么一丝庆幸,可以把这种庆幸理解为一种幸灾乐祸的阴暗,因为我很快地为自己的错误找到了理由,尽管到现在,我也不能确认,到底是谁的错误,导致了这次大规模的返工,但这不重要,我的目的只是要证明“会犯错误的不是只有我一个人”。
目的达到了,但我不知道自己为什么开心不起来。也许是因为我还不知道那150份的表格复印费由谁买单,我还不知道这次返工的加班费该谁支付,我唯一知道的是:昨天我的电话费不会有人给我报销。于是,我决定继续行使我的权利——拒绝为别人的错误返工!
有时候,人的庸俗就是这样的欲盖弥彰。如果没有昨天发生的事情,我会有今天的“凛然正义”吗?
回家的路上,领导发来短信——“这次返工是因为教育局更改了通知而没有通知到我们学校,如果学校有错,那就是没有主动询问。请你不要生气,剩下的工作我们来做。”
既然是教育局的错,那么这个错误的级别比我的高多了,我生什么气呢?
“宽容别人,就是善待自己。”公交车上的这条广告,格外的醒目。
晚上和一个朋友聊天,他对我说:“得饶人处且饶人,别把自己搞的小肚鸡肠。”
我惭愧!
[关于宽容的作文:善待学生的错误
篇15:为什么学生追求名牌英语议论文
全文共 948 字
+ 加入清单As we all know, students must wear uniform in school. It prevents students from wearing strange clothes or comparing clothes. However, students still show special preference for famous brands. They can buy brand shoes or bags if they cant wear their own clothes in school.
Why students cant help wearing expensive things which are famous brands?
The reason why they prefer to wear expensive clothes is just for face. Some students thought the more expensive they wear, the more confident they are. Only wearing brand clothes can they become proud. Some students are afraid to looked down if they dont wear brands things. It is easy for students to compare what they wear.
As far as I am concerned, I dont agree that students pursue famous brand. Most students cant earn money by themselves. We cant waste the money to buy expensive things which are not useful. It is hard for parents to make money. Remember, the main task of the students is to study.
篇16:学生作文:美丽的错误
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+ 加入清单当玖龙纸业总裁张茵被提名经济人物灿烂地笑时,我知道了为事业而奋斗是美丽的;
当关颖珊在外交舞台上展露风采时,我知道没有奥运金牌的遗憾也可以美丽;
当弗莱明因为操作失误而意外发现青霉素时,我知道了原来“错误”也是一种美。
——题记
当人们看到残疾儿童时总会哀其不幸,更有人会说他们的出生是个错误,你如何想?她本有幸福的童年,却因医生用药错误而聋哑,但凡是知道她的人无不称赞她的勤奋、坚强与美丽。她——邰丽华在舞台上展示着她那份与众不同的美,谁能说她的一生会是错误?谁能否定她的美丽?残疾,或许是命运错误的安排,但她却将其变为了一个美丽的“错误”!
王皓,身为中国乒乓球男队的领军人物之一,他的运动生涯并不平顺。他有过失败,他有过苦闷,他甚至曾有“千年老二”的封号。2004年雅典一役,他在决赛场上负于柳承敏,由于轻敌,由于经验不足,由于心态不稳,在年少轻狂时犯下的“错误”曾一度压制着他,但历经磨难后王皓拼回了亚运金牌,拼回了世界巡回赛金牌,更在为奥运而拼搏。我们肯定他的成绩,也感叹
他的失败,但从失败中走出,从错误中崛起的他并未推动什么,反而拥有了另一份美丽,他曾经的错误已转化为经验,在前途中闪耀。
从1921年到现在,中国共产党走过了八十余年的风风雨雨。曾经,我们有过大跃进,人民公社化运动的错误;曾经,中央甚至错误发动过文化大革命。但历经沧桑,我们收获的是探索中的经验教训;曲折的路我们迎来的是光明的前途。活着是美丽的,工作是美丽的,错误同样是一种美。正因为有了曾经的错,我们才有了今天的安定和谐,历史的“错误”已成为前进中的美丽。
麦克劳德幼年的错误成就了一位著名的解剖学家;丁俊晖英国大奖赛上一次错误的击球激励他捧得了大师赛亚军奖杯;孙振耀曾经的错误投资勉励他成为了惠普中国区总裁。。。
犯错误不可避免,但它未必是坏事,与其强求完美,何不把错误变得美丽?成功的人生,我们需要那些有助益的美丽的“错误”!
[学生作文:美丽的错误
篇17:学生作文:错误的自述
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+ 加入清单Hello,大家好!提起我,大家并不陌生吧!哈哈,我叫“错误”,这个名字很抽象吧,我也有这种感觉。你问我的岁数?嗯,至于我的岁数嘛,我也记不清楚了,只记得上帝在创造人类的时候,就共同创造了我。我同大家一样,都生活在这个宇宙空间里。
好了,废话我也不多说了,现在就让我来介绍我的辉煌历史吧!过而不改,是谓过矣提起这两件事,我的脸就会不由得绯红,自觉惭愧了。就是因为上帝创造了我,并让我一味地坚持,这不仅损坏了我的名声,还使我成为一个亡国之身。
事一:商纣王,他文过饰非,自以为有权有势,有上天保佑,把向他提出忠告的两个大臣,一个挖心,一个剁成肉酱。他把我从家中“请”出来,并从容地坚持,给予我特殊的权力。我呢,只好一直跟随着他,享受一切。结果,臣下都不信任他了,最后,他和他的王朝还被周武王大军灭掉。我的日子也不好过,遗臭万年,被世人唾弃。
事二:隋炀帝,唉,他也是听不进别人的意见,当有臣下指责他不顾百姓劳苦大修运河时,他把这个臣子赐死了。这时的我,又光荣地被“请”了出来,也给予了我一切权力。不用问呢,这个昏君最后也落得个众叛亲离、国灭家亡的下场,人们“赏赐”给我的骂语就不用再说了。唉。
过而能改,善莫大焉对于这两件事,嗯,我先留一个悬念,不说明其实质,先听我向你们介绍。
事一:楚庄王初登基时,日夜在宫中饮酒取乐,不理朝政。我由于前两次的教训,满脸苦愁,但还是再次厚脸地出场了。后来臣下用“三年不鸣,一鸣惊人”的神鸟故事启发他,并以死劝谏。他没有像上面两个帝王那样“厚待”我、“奉承”我,我还有点纳闷呢。终于,他重新并正确地认识了我,还下定决心要修正我,他认真处理朝政,立志图强。我光荣但又一头雾水地退场了。后来,楚国在楚庄王的治理下,逐渐强大了起来,他本人也位列“春秋五霸”之一。
事二:战国时赵国名将廉颇,他原来居功自傲,瞧不起出身低微、因外交才能而受重用的蔺相如,总想当面羞辱他。不用问,我又出场了。当然在这时呢,说实话,我真的很不情愿被光荣地“请”出来。后来,廉颇知道蔺相如顾全大局,始终避免与他发生正面冲突,以国家为重,在一国内不应“两虎相斗”而应合力对付秦国的大度时,他毅然负荆请罪,两人和好,还成为莫逆之交。对于我嘛,当然又再次没收获地退场了。
哈哈哈!我终于想通了,我兴奋地快步奔跑着,欢呼着,我还是有一点用处吧。看吧,我从反面给他们树立了坚定信心,建立了正确观念,而我在世人的眼中也慢慢地被理解。总之,我们错误家族有功勋,也有失误。“人非圣贤,孰能无过”,而关键在于知错能改。好,我的介绍完毕,谢谢大家!
篇18:考研英语作文常见的四个写作格式错误
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+ 加入清单【摘要】考研英语作文的评分,首先关注的就是单词、句子、格式的正确性。因此,在作文的复习中,不能只关注高端句型,正确的格式也是不容忽视的。
写作格式错误主要包括题目的写法、文章的格式、大小写以及标点符号等四个方面。
题目的写法
题目是首先映入读者眼帘的,所以要注意题目的书写位置。一定要在试卷作文纸上的上方中间位置书写。同时还应在话题和正文之间留出一定的距离,即比正文行距稍宽一些。
其次,要注意题目的大小写,实词的首字母一定要大写。其它虚词如冠词、连词(但如连词的字母多于5个时则大写)和介词首字母不需要大写。比如:
跳动的心(例子)
误:Attitudes Toward Money
正:Attitudes toward Money
文章的格式
1、四边留空:卷面的四边一定要留出适当的空白。这样的文章才能整齐、美观,给人以清晰、明快的感觉。
2、空格:文章的每段的首行一定要有统一的空格(一般缩进4-6个字节)。
大小写方面的错误
在考研文章的评改过程中,有关大小写方面的错误层出不穷,这是考生的一个弱点。一般来说,大写规则有以下几条:
1、大写每句话的第一个字母和直接引语的第一字母
如:He said,He is going to Shanghai next week.
2、大写专有名词,或用作专有名词的部分普通名词,通常是缩略形式
如:DrG .G . East
3、大写缩写字母
如:MPA ,MBA ,BBC
4、文章标题要大写
5、头衔在专有名词前要大写,在专有名词后就小写
例如:Captain SmithSmith, the captain;Uncle GeorgeGeorge ,my uncle
标点符号
考生在写文章时,一定要注意正确使用标点符号,切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象。一定要熟练掌握常用标点符号的基本用法,尤其要正确使用逗号和分号。
三段式作文注意事项
1、作文卷面要保持整洁,不要连笔,不要涂改,这是获取印象分的重点。很多考生由于在考场过于紧张导致作文的单词老是写错,这是致命伤啊,会直接让你越写越没感觉就越没信心了,所以平常要加强练笔!
2、全文的第一句和各段的第一句必须是文章的中心句,最好能用复杂句表达。这是因为阅卷老师一般没有那么多的时间去看作文,所以只能大概浏览下各段的首句,这是获得高分的关键。
3、全文结构布局:全文分为三段,第一段3句,第二段5句,第三段4句,可根据具体情况调整。段落中,第一句是topic ,第二三句是detail ,第三句是conclusion 。
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[考研英语作文常见的四个写作格式错误
篇19:2024年初二学生暑假生活英语作文
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+ 加入清单dear henry,
i’m glad to receive your letter. it’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination.
first of all, a good rest is needed because i do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. of course, i’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. i’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. they’ve done so much for me, you know. if possible, i’ll take part in some social activities so that i can know more about the society.
best wishes!
li hua
篇20:给母亲的贺卡初中学生英语作文
全文共 455 字
+ 加入清单Wang Ping: What day is it tomorrow, do you know?
Zhang Hua: Oh, it’s Mother’s Day. It’s on the second Sunday in May.
Wang Ping: What are you going to do on Mother’s Day?
Zhang Hua: I’ll help my mother do some cleaning. What about you?
Wang Ping: I’ll give her a card.
1. 假如你是Wang Ping, 请添写卡片问候你的母亲。
2. 格式正确、语句通顺、书写工整、规范。
To: my best mother in the world,
Best wishes for Mother’s Day!
Happy Mother’s Day!
Thank you for everything, Mum.