减压方式英文作文【推荐20篇】

smile， how warm the word is! it can make anyone happy。 and this happiness is from the bottom of heart。

it’s not like enthusiastic laughter， but just warm， makes your heart warm。

mother’s smile is like a spring wind， so gentle when you are sad， it can make you happy again; when you fail， it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up， it can make you try your best again…

smile， so easy， but also so useful。

| so， let’s learn to smile。 everyone needs others’ smile。 when we give others a smile， we will feel happy， too。 and maybe next time， when you need a smile， the person who received your smile will give it to you。

let’s learn to smile often， i believe it can even make the whole warm。 living with a smile， every day will be sunshine。

[关于学会微笑的英文作文

Nowaday, The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. In 2004, up to 570,000 road accidents occurred in China, which claimed a total of 109,000 lives. The situation got worse in 2008. Statistics show that merely from January to October saw 566,000 tragedies happen with a higher death rate.

The above aching fact reminds us that it s high time we faced and solves this problem! Though our country owns only 2% of the world cars, it contributes amazingly 22% to the total accidents! Doubtlessly, our country ranks first as the most serious traffic accident rate.

China cannot afford millions of life losses, and we can not let the sorrow slow down our development speed. The government must play the most important role in solve the problem. Strict traffic rules should be made, and more importantly, practiced and followed. According to some other countries experience, high fine may also help. Slow down the speed of cars, as well as our country, there are always something worth your attention.

Every student has his goal of study.Some have a great one but some small.To some degree,a goal determines your success in the future.People who have a great goal can probably acquire a big success in his future,while the people who have a small goal may gain a small one.Meanwhile,the time we set our goals is another important factor.The earlier we have our goals,the more easily we can reach them.Therefore,its of great importance to set a great goal when we are very young.Hower,having a goal doesnt mean we can succeed in no time.We still have a long way to go.The next step we should take is to put our goals into action.Maybe we meet with many difficulties,we mustnt stop or give up.We should keep on going,struggling against all kinds of trouble or problems until our goals are hit!

Fellow students,letgo and hit our goals!

Dear customers

Hello!

Welcome to your home. There is a childrens library.

Picture book, namely picture book, is a kind of genre that children like to

see. It is in line with the characteristics of childrens thinking development.

It is very attractive for children to read and welcomed by children. In the

process of picture book reading, childrens imagination and creativity get good

development.

Datong family has book boy, is the pioneer of picture book rental and

delivery service. It is committed to the establishment of childrens reading

habits. Through the regular distribution of picture books to customers homes,

parents can develop the cognitive habit of reading in the childrens habit

development period, so as to help children establish their own way of thinking

and cognition of the world and promote self-help learning The cultivation of

habit. At the same time, there are book children at home. For families that pay

attention to childrens growth, parents and childrens picture books story

meeting is provided free of charge. The teacher is a loving gardener who has

been teaching for many years and is committed to promoting picture books.

Different classes and different harvests are available. Parents and children are

welcome to come home and have a childrens picture book library. Please read and

let your children harvest a scholarly childhood in the wonderful picture book

world.

Reading is a lifelong thing, youd better take 20 minutes out of your busy

schedule every day to accompany children to read books, discuss and enjoy the

fun of books together. After a period of time, you will find that there is a TV

fan, a computer fan, a troublemaker and a bookworm. Reading picture books gives

children not only the visual enjoyment, but also the understanding of details

and spiritual eXperience. In the spiritual dialogue with picture books, children

roam between the lines which are full of human brilliance, harmony of nature and

childlike innocence. It is bound to broaden the horizons, enrich the heart,

sublimate the realm, and improve the personality, so as to give the children a

chance to love reading I fell in love with the opportunity to learn. I read a

library every four weeks, 16 books a month, and 200 books a year. I read a

library in my childhood, making reading a habit and learning a pleasure.

Starting from having a schoolboy at home, we firmly believe that cultivating

reading habits will benefit childrens life.

如果我失足遇上了挫折，我一定会以最佳的姿态失败。

就算家中赤贫如洗，也要用任劳任怨的心态来追逐成功，那些面对困难百折不回的人，也就是经历过挫折，品尝过失败的人。

“卓越的人一大优点是：在不利与困难的遭遇里百折不挠。”这是乐圣贝多所说的。我想，之所以贝多芬成为卓越优秀之人，一定经历过攸关命运的挫折。4岁时被迫学习音乐，17岁成了一家之主，1796年双耳失聪。的确，成功者一定经历过挫折。

不管在失败前的挽救是否杯水车薪，不管努力过后是否有结局。无可奈何的人，我们要选择最佳的姿态失败。

我们要正视挫折，遇到挫折一定有它的原因。如果它是一把锁，就一定有打开它的钥匙，也会有锁住它的人。挫折，是一种没有注定的失败，每个人都会经历；挫折，是颓废者日益上瘾的毒药。

不管我们离失败还有多远，都不能认输，那样，挫折会在暗地里肆无忌惮地大笑，而你却只能在落魄中沉沦。

遭遇挫折，可能引发两种结果：想挫折宣战，一半的机率是成功的；想挫折认输，等于把机会踏在脚下。记住，永远不会是认输者夺魁。

当某人在战胜挫折大笑时，会发现，这是一种快乐的解脱

[选择受到挫折的方式作文500字

Dear Mother,

How are you these days? How is your work going?

Mom, I know that I have done a lot of sorry for you since I was a child, but

you never beat me and scolded me, instead, you reasoned with me.

Once, you and dad took me to the store to buy clothes, the lamplight shine,

there there are many beautiful clothes, all of a sudden I didnt concern about

the small store in a saw a white dress, the dress with a picture of a man

holding a little girl, little girl holding a womans picture, are there beside

the picture of a bunch of pink small butterfly in dance. I wanted the dress so

badly that I ran to you and said, "Mommy, mommy, do you see that white dress? I

want that dress!" You go over and look at the price tag. A: wow! This dress

costs a thousand dollars! You shook your head. I see you dont buy for me, use

"cry", while crying also on the ground roll. I had no choice but to buy the

dress.

Mother I want to say to you: "Sorry!" I have acted in love with you many

times since I was a child, but you always bought me what I wanted with a smile.

I know that you have worked hard for this money. So, here, I say to you:

"Sorry!"

Mom, I know how much you have given to our family over the years. Behind your

success are always a lot of difficulties around you, but you are not afraid of

difficulties, you overcome the difficulties. Mom, I hope you will pay more

attention to your health in the future!

Finally, I wish my mother a long life and a successful job!

Your child:

My dearest father,

Happy Christmas Eve!

Legend in the night of Christmas Eve, can eat an apple, this life will be

safe!

Christmas Eve has finally arrived! Dear father, I send you a sweet apple,

as long as you can take a bite of this delicious sweet apple, can bring you

peace! Bless you for a lifetime of good health! Safe and sound!

I also want to thank dad very much for this wonderful evening! Thank you

every day or get up early for me busy to go to work to make money, earn money to

buy me milk, drink, fruit, bread, delicious food, socks, clothes, breakfast and

so on delicious easy to wear, but also in the rest of the time, accompany me to

study, practice piano, watching cartoons, and sometimes with my mother and I go

out to play!

Remember that is the summer time, you have to cook good vegetables for me,

steamed bread and eggs before going to work, really very hard! In winter, you

often warm the bed for me, just go to bed! In the middle of the night, also

often for me to cover the quilt, also afraid of lax cover, his clothes stuffed

around me, always worried about my catching cold, you really worry about my

heart!

In addition, you often watch TV instead of watching your favorite programs,

but accompany me to watch cartoons or listen to stories. I understand: all this

is because of a word "love"! You love me more than you love yourself, so you

would rather lose your happiness, but also want to make me happy! You are such a

kind and great father! Every night before going to bed, you will also patiently

and carefully for my face, wash my feet, boil water, pour water, wipe skin

lotion, and often for my bath and shampoo, and so on, never bother.

Dad, you are really a rare, know how to love the childs good father! Im

so proud of having a dad like you!

Dad, I love you so much! From the heart of good love you! I will never

forget what you have done for me.

Dad, you love me so much, hurt me, I will double to you in the future! I

can have you such a father, I feel very happy! In the future, when I grow up, I

will also let you do the worlds most "happy" father!! Please believe daughter,

daughter will do it! Finally, I wish you:

Christmas Eve -- Safe and sound! Christmas - Happy

Always love your daughter: Xianger

On this special day I send you New Years greetings and hope that some day soon we shall be together.

在这特殊的日子，向你致以xinchun的祝福，希望不久我们能相聚在一起，

I would like to wish you a joyous new year and express my hope for your happiness and good future.

祝xinchun快乐，并愿你幸福吉祥，前程似锦。

May the New Year bring many good things and rich blessings to you and all those you love!

愿xinchun带给你和你所爱的人许多美好的事物和无尽的祝福！

Rich blessings for health and longevity is my special wish for you in the coming year.

祝你在新的一年里身体健康，多福多寿。

Good luck, good health, hood cheer. I wish you a happy New Year.

祝好运、健康、佳肴伴你度过一个快乐xinchun。

With best wishes for a happy New Year!

祝xinchun快乐，并致以良好的祝福。

I hope you have a most happy and prosperous New Year.

谨祝xinchun快乐幸福，大吉大利。

With the compliments of the season.

祝贺佳节。

May the seasons joy fill you all the year round.

愿节日的愉快伴你一生。

Seasons greetings and best wishes for the New Year.

祝福您，xinchun快乐。

Please accept my seasons greetings.

请接受我节日的祝贺。

To wish you joy at this holy season. Wishing every happiness will always be with you.

恭祝xinchun吉祥，幸福和欢乐与你同在。

My name is ***. ** is my given name. *means sweet and* means person, so my name means a sweet-tempered girl. I actually am! But you can call me June, for your convenience, j-u-n-e, its similar to my Chinese name Jun. I am from Enping, a small city in the southwest of Guangdong Province, near HongKong and Macao. Maybe you have never been there before, its well known for the hot springs there.

In 2003, I got the highest score in the College Entrance Examinations in my city and entered Zhongshan University. My major is Computer Science. My GPA ranks in the top 40% among all students, but I have stronger C programming skills than many others. Also, I was the first one to learn Java in my class.

I was chosen by a teacher of mine to participate in his project. The project was about a LAN chat room, and I developed the instant messaging system in it. I was the only female student in this project team.

Besides study and the project, I worked in the Student Union for two years, first year as a member, next year promoted to be the General Secretary. My colleagues describe me as a reliable and considerate person.

IBM is top on my job hunting list for of the reasons you hear every day. I look forward to joining a famous company as it means good training, good pay, and good people to work with, just like you gentlemen!

[计算机英文自我介绍作文

Do you know Lin Dan? Right! He is the world badminton champion, and also my idol.

The players who trained with me in the little sports school all liked the badminton all-around champion Lin Dan. If there were badminton games, they would either turn on the TV or go to the spot early to look forward to Lin Dans wonderful performance! I dont count outside, either! However, when I went to school, when my classmates opened the box and talked about the game, most of the students didnt even see Lin Dan in the game. Even the names had never been heard of. How can it not be regretted? Lin Dan is my idol, I am actively advancing momentum. Lin Dan in the play, we will be absorbed in watching his every game exciting game in front of the television, his every action makes people admire it; every action make people excited, I always to hand Lin Dan unable to restrain the emotions agile movements, his vigorous pace. Lin Dans superb skills, indomitable fighting spirit, all the people marvel, bring forth the new through the old, the world today wins the. I also love badminton, I look forward to through their own efforts, but also like Lin Dan, let the world sit up and take notice.

Moving old freight car came, those who stop in my home is downstair. A few blue, dirty old freight car is stopping shipshapely, father is directing a worker to move furniture and goods. Our old building is too old, was forced to take away. At that time, I just am controlled 6 years old, at the back of see a few workers put one pile empty cabinet, empty shelf into old freight car, my heart thinks: Really amused, can play hide feline cat ah! I look around all around: Ground of father without a stop is being directed, bead brandish is aspersing the sweat with big beans; Mom has baled the dress that leave terribly defeatedly. Nobody notices me, I am stepping on a piece of small table, climbed the jian hou mian of van, get into an ordinary little cupboard, had closed the door, foolish the ground is laughing. Passed a little while, listen to a worker to say only: Be installed, go.the rear cover door of van was shut, I am foolish still foolish is the jian hou mian that the ground crouchs in van what kind of outside the illusion. Passed a little while again, air is heated up again frowzily again, I opened cupboard door, see only all around inky, outside faint the sound that transmits father motherhello, where is her person? how can I know? Be you look at?... just began, I still feel especially amused, laugh persistently, but do not have with a bit activity sultrily more and more as airy outside, Wow wow!I cried. Later, one moves a thing slow when the worker is opening lid, just mereleasecome out, see sky and father mother, I just arrive cheerfully to take candy at the same time again.

[关于童年趣事的英文作文

随着语文考试制度的改革，作文占据了语文教学的半壁江山，小学作文批改方法。以下是“小学作文批改的多种方式及效果”希望能够帮助的到您！

一、作文批改的现状分析

语文教师要培养学生的写作能力，这是毫无疑问的。但是，需不需要培养学生批改作文的能力，看法就不一致了。传统的作文批改方法是教师全批全改，精批细改。这种方法至少有两大弊害：一是教师疲于奔命，二是学生受益甚微。学生作文教师批改，学生始终处于被动的客体地位。“这表现在作文批改上，批改时只顾到学生作的文，却忘了作文的学生。他们看见错的就改，认为多余的就删，认为不足的就补，甚至整段地重写。可是，很少考虑学生为什么错，为什么要这样写，他想说的究竟是什么，他为什么说不清楚。评语或是称赞或是批评，大多比较空泛，对学生甲说的也可以写到学生乙的作文本上”（叶圣陶《序跋集》第200页）。学生始终处于被动的“受领者”的地位，试想，这样的批改，对学生有什么好处呢？

其次，教师对学生作文的批改，大多数是“背对背”的。教师在办公室批改时发扬愚公移山的精神，默默地“挖山”不止；而学生早已把作文内容忘到“爪哇国”去了。于是乎，作文批改收不到实效，教师的“精批细改”纯属无效劳动，“一江春水”只得付诸东流了。还有一个不争的事实，就是从小学到初中，教师批改的作文不知其数，但真正受益的学生又有几个呢？鉴于此，我们应该从开始写作文就培养学生自己修改作文的能力，尽快地改革作文批改的现状，变“背对背”的“暗中摸索”为“面对面”的“明中探索”，采用多种方式让学生亲自参予到作文批改中来。习作评改应是师生情感交流的桥梁，也是学生通过多种反馈对自己的文章作出较为正确审视的一个过程。

因此，习作评改的方式应是开放的，多元的。师评师改，自评自改，互评互改……都应随机采用。教师要想方设法创设和谐开放的评改氛围，让每一个学生都有参与评改的机会。

二、作文批改的若干方式

（一）、眉批，激活灵感

所谓眉批，主要解决评价文章的局部性问题，对字、词、句、标点或段落

等方面的优缺点进行提示、说明、分析、评定，联系实例给学生提供具体的帮助指导。

学生作文中有错别字或有些句子不通顺，教师就去帮学生一一修改，让学生订正在本子上，然后打上个“良”，写上“本文能抓住重点，突出中心，可错别字、病句多”等之类的评语——这是教师们一般修改作文的方法。遇到很多语句不通顺，错别字又多的作文，教师想帮他批改，就觉得非动全篇不可——每个错字替他改，每句不通顺的话要替他修——这就是老师最头疼的作文。改下来，学生作文面目全非，教师付出太多。

其实，我们又何必如此修改作文，让自己感觉头疼呢？我们何不发挥一下眉批的作用呢？不管是字句通顺的还是字句不通顺的作文，我们都先通篇浏览一下，看看内容符不符合写作要求，如果符合，我们就再重新阅读一遍，发现优美的句子或用得准确生动的词，就用红笔标注出来，再在旁边写上激励性评语：“佳句！”、“好词！”如果有错别字或哪个句子不通顺，我们也用红笔标注，再在旁边注上：“换个词好吗？”、“有错别字！”或“请疏通一下句子！”这类提示性批语。发现有好的过渡句或好的中心句，也用红笔画出，写上“此过渡句用得好！”或“此句子点明中心，效果很好！”之类批语，然后写上评语。发下去后，指导学生根据教师的眉批自行修正，再通过展示台抽一些学生上来汇报他们的修正结果即可。例如：凉爽的夏风吹（1）开了夜的面纱，沉淀了一天的暑气在黑夜里散尽，迎接新一天曙光的是习习凉爽的夏风（2）。大地万物都起得格外早，它们要抓住这美好的夏晨好好地享受一番，那在微风中微微舞动的树叶配上玫瑰红的朝阳，那宛若脸颊般红润柔美的红（3）云，就是一幅绝好的风景画，难道你不为之陶醉吗？改为：（1）将“吹”改为“撩”，“撩开…面纱”，动宾搭配，写出夏天的变幻神奇。（2）这里加上“如果你站到阳台上面对着朝霞沐浴在晨风中再来个深呼吸，那种清凉舒爽的感觉定会叫你心旷神怡”一句，与下文中的“享受”相照应。（3）“红”改为“彩”，避免重复写出多种颜色。

这样批改老师又怎会觉得头疼呢？其实，我们教师根本没有必要每个错字、每个病句都替学生修改，你只要指出文章的优缺点，然后指导学生来修正就可以达到轻松、有效的效果。再说这类学生他们本身就不怎么懂写作文，如果教师再在他的本子上圈一大堆错字、错句，写上批评的语言，那他们就会觉得自己真的很不行，自卑心理日渐加重，对写作就会越来越害怕，这种“批改”不但苦了教师自己，使教师增加烦恼，也不符合“人文”教育的要求。所以，我们教师批改作文，要充分发挥眉批的作用。

（二）、自改互批，汲取精华

1.自改作文，锤炼能力

这是最基本最直接的批改方式，在完成作文后由学生进行自批自评。学生自改的方法能将批改的权力最大限度的下放给学生，使学生变被动为主动，成为批改的主人。叶圣陶十分重视学生的自改，他说：“改与作关系密切，改的优先权应该属于作文的本人，所以我想，作文教学要着重在培养学生自改的能力。”②叶老还曾一再强调：“假如着重培养学生自己改的能力，教师只给些引导和指导，该怎么改让学生自己去考虑去决定，学生不就处于主动地位了吗？养成自己改的能力，这是终身受用的。”“作了文又能自己改，不用请别人改，这就经常处于主动地位，岂不是好？”③ 的确自改能让学生用自己的双手，用自己的头脑，用自己的语言，用自己的方式去体会批改的乐趣，从而在快乐中提高自己的作文水平。在批改前，由教师根据训练的要求规定一定的修改内容，以逐步养成学生良好的自批习惯。在批改前，由教师根据训练的要求规定一定的修改内容，以逐步养成学生良好的自批习惯。如要求学生把自己写作时认为写得最好的句子加上划线，让老师批改时注意。再如对格式的修改，基础分为60分（即能交作文的都有此分数），只要求对格式写得正确与否进行批改，正确的则可得满分；又如错别字的修改，也是在基础分60分的基础上，整篇没有出现错别字的可得满分，2个扣4分，4个扣10分，如此类推，扣20分就不再扣。这样操作简单，学生的写作积极性不易受打击，批改的兴趣也会随批改的次数增加而增加，最后养成良好的自我修改习惯。

这种方式的缺点是由于学生的水平有限，学生的写作能力、赏析能力、批改能力尚浅，有时无论怎样改，都不能改掉文章的一些缺点，甚至是谬误，在差生上更是如此，难以取得良好的效果，这是老师应该注意的。

2．互改作文，集思广益

互批，这是一种同学间交换批改的方式。这种方式简单易行。在批改前是由教师定出批改的范围，然后同学之间进行批改。这样的批改可以使同学之间及时交换批改意见，正如教师的面批作文一样，当遇到不理解、不明白的地方时，可以立刻与作者商量，研究其写作的初衷、意图，达到更有利的批改目的。这种方式可以在一定程度上克服自改的缺陷，它可以通过同学间的互改互相促进，互相提高。具体而言，有以下优点：第一，经过多次批改实践，学生不仅准确地记住了写作文的基本要求，而且对这些要求理解得越来越深刻。他会指导别人应该怎样写，不应该怎样写，自然也增强了自己的写作能力。第二，每个人都有机会看到多名同学的作文，这样容易发现、学习别人的长处。别人的缺点短处，自己引以为戒，也是好事，学生的思想多了一个相互交流，开放的机会。第三，每次批改作文，每人只批一本，负担不重，每次又都抽签换人，批改的人有新鲜感，有兴趣。每位同学的作文，每次又都换一位同学批，看不同的同学对自己的批语，当然也有新鲜感。这种新鲜感，有利于培养学生批改作文的兴趣和看别人批语的兴趣。第四，批改作文时，学生站在批改者的角度，进入教师的角色思考问题，有利于增强学生的心理适应能力、心理平衡能力、角色互换能力，促进学生心理走向成熟。第五，教师只抽查翻阅一部分同学的批改结果，在短时间内看多篇作文，有利于教师比较思考，且保持较浓厚的阅读兴趣，容易激发教师的智力潜能与创造潜能。还可将节省的大量用笔批改的时间，用于研究学生心理，研究学习方法，进一步提高教书育人的效率。

这种方法的缺点同样是由于学生的水平有限，有时无论怎样改，都不能改掉文章的一些缺点，甚至是谬误，在差生身上更是如此，难以取得良好的效果，这是老师应该注意的。如果互改的有一方不认真对待，效果也会打折扣。

组改，这是一种分小组批改作文的方式。作文批改是一种阅读，是一种心灵的沟通、交流，是一种享受，更是一种提高。因此，学生的参与意识不容忽视。把学生推到写作的另一前沿阵地——修改，使其在互相批改中认真切磋，取长补短。孔子云：“三人行，必有我师焉。”④这种方式鼓励学生积极参与，激起学生“为师”的欲望，引发作文批改的兴趣，并出示自己创作中的部分手稿，营造一种积极向上的气氛。这种作文批改方式要注意每组发放一定数量的学生作文，在一定的时间完成批改任务。数量不宜太多，否则学生无法完成任务，又影响批改的质量。起初，可让小组学生在一课时内批改两篇作文，往后可适当增加。这样的小组互批互改活动它还可以为学生提供互相学习的机会，有利于培养学生团队合作的精神，有利于培养学生探索问题的能力，有利于培养学生认真负责的态度，养成良好的书写习惯。 “学习如春起之苗，不见其增，日有所长”，学生在互相批改中渐渐形成了浓厚的作文兴趣，悟出一些作文之道来，会获得出人意料的效果。这种角色互换，还可以使他们切身体会到批改文章的甘苦，进而更加尊重教师的劳动。同时，也把教师从令人头晕的“劳役”中解脱出来。

上述三种作文批改的方式有一点必须注意，就是在让学生批改作文以前要教给学生作文批改的方法，学生应该从哪些方面进行作文批改呢？魏书生认为应要求学生从以下十个方面教给学生作文批改的方法：

（1）、格式是否正确  刚开始，使学生感到写作文，批作文都不难。随随便便地写，老师只要求同学们作文的格式正确，批改作文时只写一条关于格式的批语。批作文的时候要抽签，谁都有可能抽到全班任何一个人的。抽到人家的作文本，打开作文一看，格式没锗，便拿出红笔，写上批语：1．格式正确。批文用减分法，此项倘不减分，此文则为满分，然后签上批改人的尊姓大名。

（2）、卷面是否整洁  显然这一条又是大家都能看得出来的。后进学生批改别人作文，指出卷面不整洁时，下次自己写作文也注意卷面了。

（3）、错别字几个  发现错字，要将错字在原文处打上标记，并且写到批语处，再在后面写上正字。有的粗心的同学错字挑不出来，怎么办？我们就搞流水作业：每人要批四篇文，每篇文要经过甲、乙、丙、丁4个人之手。甲批错别字六个，乙发现本文错别字不是6个，而是7个，那么甲就要对为什么漏掉这个错别字写出一百字的说明书。丙发现本文错字是八个，那么甲、乙同学都要被追究责任，各追加一百字的说明书。学生批改之后，我还要抽查，重点抽查那些粗心的同学。这样使粗心的同学也认真起来，批改的时候，手里抱着大字典，唯恐漏掉了错别字。发现错别字，每两个扣1分，最多扣5分。10个以上也不再多扣，但要一一给予指正。

（4）、有几处病句  挑出一篇作文中的病句，凡病句，都要在下面划上横线，写出病在何处，再在文后批语中，写清病句几处。每处病句减1分，减至5分，不再多减。

（5）、标点符号有几处明显错误  强调句号、引号、叹号、问号的使用。发现明显错误的地方，有一处扣一分，有五处扣五分，超过五处，不再多扣。

以上五条，都是写文章最低的要求，学生经过三、四篇文章的批改实践，就能够掌握。再批改两三篇，掌握得比较熟练了，再一条一条地增加新的要求。

（6）、看文章的中心是否鲜明、集中  这两点在作文指导时，就具体举例，告诉学生什么叫鲜明、集中。学生批改之前，老师先大致看几篇文章，在进行批改指导时，又简介两篇好的文章，再举两篇中心不突出，不集中的例文，学生从老师举的正反两方面的例文，举一反三，就能批得符合实际。

（7）、看文章的选材  这条批语提三点要求：①是否围绕中心。②是否符合生活实际。③是否具有典型性。这三点中最要紧的是第一点，随着作文水平的提高，才提出选材具有典型性的要求。  （8）、看文章的结构

就结构而言，也要写清三点批语：①层次段落是否清晰。②过渡是否自然。③开头和结尾是否照应。

（9）、看表达方式  主要看其是否符合文章体裁的要求，记叙文以记叙为主，说明文以说明为主，议论文当然以议论为主。除此之外，还要看其是否符合作文指导的要求。如写记叙文《他进步了》，要求夹叙夹议，本文是不是做到了。写说明文《芦苇》，要求说明中有描写的成份，文中有没有适量的描写。写散文《家乡赞》，要求记叙、议论、抒情相结合，文中结合得怎么样。

（10）看语言是否简练、通顺、准确  语言不简练，重复、罗嗦者酌情扣分，此项不超过二分。语言不通顺，不是指有病句，而是指句与句之间衔接不连贯者，扣分也不超过二分。

后五条要求，每条5分，不做太具体的减分规定，由批改人酌情处理。每个人都要在作文本上写出5个方面的批语，一般情况一篇作文的批语都在100字以上。我参照实行后，我认为是行之有效的，广大同仁不妨试一试。

（三）、“评”“ 改”有别，学生因材施教

1.优秀生着重“评”

贯彻因材施教原则，在作文评改上，应根据学生作文的差异，有所区别，侧重对待，即个性化批改。优秀生以“评”为主，中差生以“改”为主。这是因为优秀生作文有了一定的基础，需要锦上添花。教师应在文章的立意、结构等写作方法这些有一定难度的方面提高要求，给予指导。选评优秀生作文，把它作为“突破口”，它可以起到牵一发动全身的作用。兴趣是最好的老师，每次讲评都要增换新的学生名单，逐渐扩大优秀面。为了培养这部分学生的作文兴趣和能力，还要积极组织他们开展作文课外活动，如办作文园地，开展作文竞赛，编优秀作文选，读书评报，写观察日记，给报刊投稿等，让成就感长久坚定学生习作的信心。

2.学困生着重“改”

研究差生作文差的原因，不难发现他们主要差在知识能力上的不足。而且这种不足非一日形成，久而久之，产生了“怕作文、作文难”的心理状态。要想提高差生作文水平，克服这种心态是前提，其次是给他们具体帮助，应在最基础的选材、写具体、字词句的训练上多给予帮助，使他们走出作文困境。对待差生作文，主要是面批面改。针对主要缺点，一学期每个学生只需批改2次。最初面稍大，逐渐形成宝塔形。面批面改力求做到：一是严，逐词逐句，从不马虎；二是爱，让学生感受到老师的真诚，不歧视，有耐性，善于发现他们进步的点滴火花，给予鼓励。改后作文不免写上几句“你进步了，难能可贵”“祝贺你进步了，你是有能力写好作文的”等之类热情鼓励的话。寥寥数语，往往起到难以置信的作用；三是评，教师要使自己的评语具有感染力，公式化、千篇一律的句式是不会引起学生兴趣的，要使评语具有感染力，就须形成个性化的评语，在评语中 融入 老师饱满的激情。故而评语应少一些教化，多一些引导，形成有针对性，有亲和力的评价，既抓学生作文中的闪光点进行肯定，又抓存在问题进行引导，使每一次评语如一次亲切的交谈和情感的沟通，让学生感受到老师对他的关注，带动学生关注自己的作文；四是奖，奖项面对学生，指向习作过程，力求让学生经过一定努力都能获奖，因而奖项的设置应类型丰富。如“个性奖”颁给文风别具一格、表达独特的同学，“进步奖”颁给进步明显的同学，“创新奖”颁给构思巧妙的同学……

3.师生评促成长

作文的批改、讲评，如果光是老师的专利，这对培养学生的作文能力不利。 叶圣陶 先生说：“‘改的优先权应该属于作文者本人，所以作文教学要着重培养学生自己改的能力。”批改之后，老师们已注意让学生尝试修改自己的作文，但是力度还不够，还要进一步开放作文评改的途径，让学生真正参与评改。每一次选取一定数量的作文，进行小组评改。

评改时，以学习小组为单位，组长负责组织学生评改作文。先由小作者朗读自己的习作，其他学生听，听后再由组长组织组员对小作者的文章进行修改、评判。评价的方式可以活泼一些，比如：达到本次习作的某点要求可以摘取一颗星星；未达到要求的可以通过再次修改自己的习作以获取星星。利用激励的方式，让学生感到跳一跳就能摘到“苹果”，促使人人争当“五星级”作文的作者。还可以适当地让学生来讲评作文，方式可以是学生上讲台，推荐自己认为优秀的作文（包括推荐自己的），先朗读这篇优秀习作，再谈习作的成功之处，也可谈要改进的地方。

在讲评中，老师尽量起组织作用，少将自己的观点强加于学生，真正的让学生成为讲评的主角，以评促写，以评激发学生写作兴趣，通过讲评使学生获得作文的愉悦感。这样个性化的作文评价能集众之长、补己之短，各得其所，能发现甚至挖掘出学生作文的很多闪光点，能充分调动学生的积极性，进一步激发学生的写作兴趣，有利于培养学生的创新意识和创造性思维。然而个性化作文评价并不是一味的说好话，它还包括有针对性地指出作文中的不足，可以是立意方面的，也可以是一两个词语运用方面的等等，有针对性的个性化评价自然让学生能更清楚地了解自己，从而更快地发展自己。

其实上述作文批改方式在作文教学实践中不是孤立的，作文批改可根据批改的目的不同进行优选，灵活使用，综合运用。总之，怎样做有实效，就怎样批改。作文批改含有“批”和“改”两层意思。“改在要害处，批在筋节上”，改其当所改，批其所当批。要清楚地认识到，提高学生作文水平，关联到多方面知识和技能，决不是单纯依靠作文课，在短期内就可立即奏效的。要加大课外阅读和社会实践，培养高尚健康的情趣，学会正确分析事物的方法。只有这样，才能切实有效地提高学生作文能力。而作文批改的方式远远不止上面所列举的那些，只要广大语文老师在作文教学中不断探索创新，就会发现更多行之有效的方法。

生日是每个人一生中，非常重要的时刻。这样特殊的日子，不仅预兆着你的诞生日，更预示着你年岁的增长。为大家分享了英文的生日贺词，一起来看看吧！

1、Happy birthday to a wonderful person!

——祝一位极帅的人生日快乐！

2、Happy birthday. I hope today treats you well.

——生日快乐，祝你今天过得愉快！

3、Congratulations and warmest wishes for your birthday and every day.

——祝你生日快乐，天天快乐！

4、Here comes today with special pride in all the achievements you have made. May your dearest wishes through all the years in store come true, and make you happier than you have ever been before.

——愿你宿愿得偿，快乐幸福更胜以往。

5、Wishing you a wonderful day and a year filled with happiness！

——祝你生日妙不可言，整年沉浸在幸福里！

6、May you enjoy to the fullest the joy of today. Wishing that your special day be a winner all the way!

——敬贺诞辰！愿这一切充满欢乐、成功！

7、May every special happiness fill this day for you and may the year bring all the best things you are looking forward to.

——愿你享尽今日之欢乐，祝你的生日百事顺心！

8、Congratulations on your birthday. May the coming year be filled with happiness and success.

——愿你的生日特别快乐，愿新的一年中心想事成！

9、May your life brighter as each birthday comes and goes. The nicest kind of birthday that could be wishes for you.

——愿你每个生日都使生命更加亮丽，祝生日无比美好、快乐！

10、Many happy returns of this special day. All our best wishes go to you on your birthday.

——祝你生日快乐，给你我们所有的祝福！

11、May your birthday be a celebration of the life. Wish you all happiness, health and prosperity with many returns of the day.

——愿你的生日是对生命的歌颂，祝健康快乐，事业蒸蒸日上。

12、Hope your birthday is like you——special.A Happy Birthday!

——希望你的生日像你一样——不同寻常。生日快乐！

13、May your birthday bring lots of joy in the year you have begun. Accept my wishes for many happy returns on your birthday.

——愿你的生日带给你无限快乐的一年，请接受我的生日祝福！

14、Warmest wishes that your birthday holds nothing but the best. The finest things in life today and every day!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，愿生日中最美好的一切属于你！

15、In hon our of your moving out of the twenties, we are giving you a marvelous birthday party.

——为庆祝你跨越二十岁，我们准备了一个盛大的生日宴会。

16、The kindest friend there could ever be is the kind of friend you are to me.Happy Birthday!

——世上如有诤友， 那就是像你对我那样关怀的朋友。祝你生日快乐！

17、Its time to celebrate your birthday. Happy birthday to an attractive and intellectual girl.

——是庆祝你生日的时候了，祝福美丽、聪颖的你生日快乐！

18、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

19、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

20、Wishing you a birthday that is among your very best. I hope that all the years ahead will be as happy as you have been in the past.

——祝你度过一个最美好的生日，希望你未来的日子与以往一样快乐！

21、Happy birthday. May gladness fill your every hour on this special day.

——生日快乐！愿这特殊的日子里，你的每时每刻都充满欢乐。

22、We hope that you enjoy this special day and your birthday grows happier by the minute!

——我们祝你欢庆这一天，愿你生日的快乐与分俱增！

23、My heartiest birthday greetings to you, a feeling much warmer than anybody can know. Best wishes for everything your heart desire in the year.

——我诚挚的生日祝福，情深意重，祝你在未来的一年里，心想事成！

24、Wishing you a happy birthday! May the best and loving things be some of the joy your birthday brings.

——祝你生日快乐！愿生日带给你的欢乐中蕴涵着一切美好！

25、It is not everyday you have a birthday, so hope you have a wonderful one. May it be followed by days and weeks and months and years of happiness for you!

——不是每天都能过生日，希望你今天生日快乐，愿你年年岁岁幸福永伴！

26、Have a great day, for today is your birthday and a wonderful event. Wish you happiness unfolding like the petal of a rose.

——生日之际，祝你度过妙不可言的一天，愿你的幸福如绽放的玫瑰般芬芳！

27、Each birthday is a milestone we touch along lifes way. May your birthday be happy in more ways than one.

——每个生日都是我们人生之旅的一个里程碑，愿你的生日百事顺意。

28、Warm wishes on your birthday. I send along my love and affection for you as well as a small gift. Take care!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，捎给你我对你的爱，也寄去一件小礼物，多保重！

29、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

30、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

31、Let me join all your other friends in wishing you a happy birthday. Today specially belongs to you. Take this chance to enjoy yourself in everything you do.

——让我与你的朋友们一道共庆你生日快乐，今天属于你，祝你欢欢喜喜！

32、My birthday wishes to you are the warmest. May all the plans you are making work out just right for you and may life always bring the best things your way.

——热烈祝贺你的生辰！愿你的计划都能实现、愿你的生活永远美丽！

33、May each hour be happy one on this special day. May the day ahead be more than happy, too, as all your dreams and plans work out just right for you.

——祝你在这特殊的日子里，时时刻刻都充满快乐，祝你来日多福，捷报频传！

34、A little birthday wish just to let know how much I care about you. May you seek all the best that the world has to give. May you never stop learning for as long as you live.

——小小的生日祝福。略表我的心愿。愿你的追求孜孜不倦，愿你永远学而不厌。

35、A wish for your wonderful birthday that brings a world of bright and lovely things to remember each day through the year.

——生日来临，带给你无数的快乐日子，一年中天天都会想起，生日的快乐、温馨。

36、Allow me to congratulate you with all my best wishes upon your having reached your sixtieth birthday. May you live a long, healthy and joyful life.

——在您六十大寿之际，请允许我向你表示最衷心的祝福，祝你健康、长寿、生活愉快！

37、I want to tell you on this special day that Im very glad time hasnt changed our friendship any. Hoping your birthday is great.

——在这特殊的日子里，我想说我真高兴，时光没有改变我们的友谊，祝你生日其乐无穷。

38、Birthday comes and birthday goes each year, and this leaves the happy memories for ever. May this special day brightens each hour like sunshine that cheers every flower.

——年年生日来而复去，留下永久的快乐回忆。愿今天的每时每刻都充满明媚，似阳光普照鲜花绽放！

39、Wish you a whole world of happiness now that your birthday is here. May your memories today be warm ones. May your dreams today be dear. May your joy last through the year.

——愿你的生日充满无穷的快乐，愿你今天的回忆温馨，愿你今天的梦想甜美，愿你这一年称心如意！

40、Every day is birthday time when thinking of you, and I shall keep one sublime hoping your many dreams come true.

——每当想到你我好似天天都在过生日，可我特别珍视其中的一天，祝愿你在这天美梦都能实现。

41、Affectionate birthday greetings. Birthday means a new beginning and a new chance to take hold on life.

——在你生日之际，向你致以亲切的祝贺。生日意味着一个新的开端，意味着重新把握生活的机会。

42、My special wish may bring you health, luck and happiness each minute! Hope it really proves to be the nicest birthday you have spent.

——给你我特别的祝福，愿它每分每秒都带给你健康、好运和幸福。希望这是你度过的最美好的生日！

43、I sincerely feel a grateful interest in each return of this happy anniversary. Send you a birthday card and the accompanying gift is a token of my best wishes for your success and happiness.

——每到你的生日，我都十分快乐。送上一张生日卡和一件礼物，略表心意。祝事业成功、生活幸福！

44、Be happy, be cheerful. Its time to celebrate. My friend was born today. Hope your course is charted for lots of luck all the year through.

——祝你幸福，愿你快乐，庆祝今天你来到这个世上。在生命航程新的一年中，愿幸运时时与你相伴！

45、Looking back across the years, we come to realize that it takes many birthdays to make us kind and wise. Growing older only means the spirit grows serene. Happy birthday!

——回首以往，我们渐渐认识到，是这些众多的生日使我们宽厚仁爱，更增智慧，年龄的增长使心境愈趋宁静。祝生日快乐！

46、Wishing you a wonderful birthday. You make this world a nicer place just by being so kindhearted. May this day that is all your own hold happiness for you and the years to come be filled with all the best things, too.

——祝你生日快乐，你的善良使这个世界变得更加美好，愿这完全属于你的一天带给你快乐，愿未来的日子锦上添花！

47、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

48、Among the friends we make in life, there are only one or two who can be called ”a special friend“and thats how I think of you.You show the warmth of your friendship in so many different ways,Thats why I hope your birthday is the happiest of days.

——在我们结交的朋友中，只有一、二人堪称”知已“。我正是这样看你。你事无巨细都表现出温馨的友谊，为此我祝你生日幸福无比。

49、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福。弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

50、Permit me to congratulate you on reaching another of these anniversary landmarks today. May each day be as happy as your birthday. Have a wonderful birthday!

——祝贺你抵达了生命的又一个里程碑，愿你每天都象过生日一样充满喜悦。祝你生日无比快乐。

在祝福别人生日的时候朋友为了赶时髦,显得洋气,很多情况下都会选择用英文来替代中文，下面为大家分享了生日的英文寄语，一起来看看吧！

1、Happy birthday to a wonderful person!

——祝一位极帅的人生日快乐！

2、Happy birthday. I hope today treats you well.

——生日快乐，祝你今天过得愉快！

3、Congratulations and warmest wishes for your birthday and every day.

——祝你生日快乐，天天快乐！

4、Here comes today with special pride in all the achievements you have made. May your dearest wishes through all the years in store come true, and make you happier than you have ever been before.

——愿你宿愿得偿，快乐幸福更胜以往。

5、Wishing you a wonderful day and a year filled with happiness！

——祝你生日妙不可言，整年沉浸在幸福里！

6、May you enjoy to the fullest the joy of today. Wishing that your special day be a winner all the way!

——敬贺诞辰！愿这一切充满欢乐、成功！

7、May every special happiness fill this day for you and may the year bring all the best things you are looking forward to.

——愿你享尽今日之欢乐，祝你的生日百事顺心！

8、Congratulations on your birthday. May the coming year be filled with happiness and success.

——愿你的生日特别快乐，愿新的一年中心想事成！

9、May your life brighter as each birthday comes and goes. The nicest kind of birthday that could be wishes for you.

——愿你每个生日都使生命更加亮丽，祝生日无比美好、快乐！

10、Many happy returns of this special day. All our best wishes go to you on your birthday.

——祝你生日快乐，给你我们所有的祝福！

11、May your birthday be a celebration of the life. Wish you all happiness, health and prosperity with many returns of the day.

——愿你的生日是对生命的歌颂，祝健康快乐，事业蒸蒸日上。

12、Hope your birthday is like you——special.A Happy Birthday!

——希望你的生日像你一样——不同寻常。生日快乐！

13、May your birthday bring lots of joy in the year you have begun. Accept my wishes for many happy returns on your birthday.

——愿你的生日带给你无限快乐的一年，请接受我的生日祝福！

14、Warmest wishes that your birthday holds nothing but the best. The finest things in life today and every day!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，愿生日中最美好的一切属于你！

15、In hon our of your moving out of the twenties, we are giving you a marvelous birthday party.

——为庆祝你跨越二十岁，我们准备了一个盛大的生日宴会。

16、The kindest friend there could ever be is the kind of friend you are to me.Happy Birthday!

——世上如有诤友， 那就是像你对我那样关怀的朋友。祝你生日快乐！

17、Its time to celebrate your birthday. Happy birthday to an attractive and intellectual girl.

——是庆祝你生日的时候了，祝福美丽、聪颖的你生日快乐！

18、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

19、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

20、Wishing you a birthday that is among your very best. I hope that all the years ahead will be as happy as you have been in the past.

——祝你度过一个最美好的生日，希望你未来的日子与以往一样快乐！

21、Happy birthday. May gladness fill your every hour on this special day.

——生日快乐！愿这特殊的日子里，你的每时每刻都充满欢乐。

22、We hope that you enjoy this special day and your birthday grows happier by the minute!

——我们祝你欢庆这一天，愿你生日的快乐与分俱增！

23、My heartiest birthday greetings to you, a feeling much warmer than anybody can know. Best wishes for everything your heart desire in the year.

——我诚挚的生日祝福，情深意重，祝你在未来的一年里，心想事成！

24、Wishing you a happy birthday! May the best and loving things be some of the joy your birthday brings.

——祝你生日快乐！愿生日带给你的欢乐中蕴涵着一切美好！

25、It is not everyday you have a birthday, so hope you have a wonderful one. May it be followed by days and weeks and months and years of happiness for you!

——不是每天都能过生日，希望你今天生日快乐，愿你年年岁岁幸福永伴！

26、Have a great day, for today is your birthday and a wonderful event. Wish you happiness unfolding like the petal of a rose.

——生日之际，祝你度过妙不可言的一天，愿你的幸福如绽放的玫瑰般芬芳！

27、Each birthday is a milestone we touch along lifes way. May your birthday be happy in more ways than one.

——每个生日都是我们人生之旅的一个里程碑，愿你的生日百事顺意。

28、Warm wishes on your birthday. I send along my love and affection for you as well as a small gift. Take care!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，捎给你我对你的爱，也寄去一件小礼物，多保重！

29、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

30、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

31、Let me join all your other friends in wishing you a happy birthday. Today specially belongs to you. Take this chance to enjoy yourself in everything you do.

——让我与你的朋友们一道共庆你生日快乐，今天属于你，祝你欢欢喜喜！

32、My birthday wishes to you are the warmest. May all the plans you are making work out just right for you and may life always bring the best things your way.

——热烈祝贺你的生辰！愿你的计划都能实现、愿你的生活永远美丽！

33、May each hour be happy one on this special day. May the day ahead be more than happy, too, as all your dreams and plans work out just right for you.

——祝你在这特殊的日子里，时时刻刻都充满快乐，祝你来日多福，捷报频传！

34、A little birthday wish just to let know how much I care about you. May you seek all the best that the world has to give. May you never stop learning for as long as you live.

——小小的生日祝福。略表我的心愿。愿你的追求孜孜不倦，愿你永远学而不厌。

35、A wish for your wonderful birthday that brings a world of bright and lovely things to remember each day through the year.

——生日来临，带给你无数的快乐日子，一年中天天都会想起，生日的快乐、温馨。

36、Allow me to congratulate you with all my best wishes upon your having reached your sixtieth birthday. May you live a long, healthy and joyful life.

——在您六十大寿之际，请允许我向你表示最衷心的祝福，祝你健康、长寿、生活愉快！

37、I want to tell you on this special day that Im very glad time hasnt changed our friendship any. Hoping your birthday is great.

——在这特殊的日子里，我想说我真高兴，时光没有改变我们的友谊，祝你生日其乐无穷。

38、Birthday comes and birthday goes each year, and this leaves the happy memories for ever. May this special day brightens each hour like sunshine that cheers every flower.

——年年生日来而复去，留下永久的快乐回忆。愿今天的每时每刻都充满明媚，似阳光普照鲜花绽放！

39、Wish you a whole world of happiness now that your birthday is here. May your memories today be warm ones. May your dreams today be dear. May your joy last through the year.

——愿你的生日充满无穷的快乐，愿你今天的回忆温馨，愿你今天的梦想甜美，愿你这一年称心如意！

40、Every day is birthday time when thinking of you, and I shall keep one sublime hoping your many dreams come true.

——每当想到你我好似天天都在过生日，可我特别珍视其中的一天，祝愿你在这天美梦都能实现。

41、Affectionate birthday greetings. Birthday means a new beginning and a new chance to take hold on life.

——在你生日之际，向你致以亲切的祝贺。生日意味着一个新的开端，意味着重新把握生活的机会。

42、My special wish may bring you health, luck and happiness each minute! Hope it really proves to be the nicest birthday you have spent.

——给你我特别的祝福，愿它每分每秒都带给你健康、好运和幸福。希望这是你度过的最美好的生日！

43、I sincerely feel a grateful interest in each return of this happy anniversary. Send you a birthday card and the accompanying gift is a token of my best wishes for your success and happiness.

——每到你的生日，我都十分快乐。送上一张生日卡和一件礼物，略表心意。祝事业成功、生活幸福！

44、Be happy, be cheerful. Its time to celebrate. My friend was born today. Hope your course is charted for lots of luck all the year through.

——祝你幸福，愿你快乐，庆祝今天你来到这个世上。在生命航程新的一年中，愿幸运时时与你相伴！

45、Looking back across the years, we come to realize that it takes many birthdays to make us kind and wise. Growing older only means the spirit grows serene. Happy birthday!

——回首以往，我们渐渐认识到，是这些众多的生日使我们宽厚仁爱，更增智慧，年龄的增长使心境愈趋宁静。祝生日快乐！

46、Wishing you a wonderful birthday. You make this world a nicer place just by being so kindhearted. May this day that is all your own hold happiness for you and the years to come be filled with all the best things, too.

——祝你生日快乐，你的善良使这个世界变得更加美好，愿这完全属于你的一天带给你快乐，愿未来的日子锦上添花！

47、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

48、Among the friends we make in life, there are only one or two who can be called ”a special friend“and thats how I think of you.You show the warmth of your friendship in so many different ways,Thats why I hope your birthday is the happiest of days.

——在我们结交的朋友中，只有一、二人堪称”知已“。我正是这样看你。你事无巨细都表现出温馨的友谊，为此我祝你生日幸福无比。

49、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福。弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

50、Permit me to congratulate you on reaching another of these anniversary landmarks today. May each day be as happy as your birthday. Have a wonderful birthday!

——祝贺你抵达了生命的又一个里程碑，愿你每天都象过生日一样充满喜悦。祝你生日无比快乐。

1、Practice makes perfect.

熟能生巧。

2、God helps those who help themselves.

天助自助者。

3、Easier said than done.

说起来容易做起来难。

4、Where there is a will,there is a way.

有志者事竟成。

5、One false step will make a great difference.

失之毫厘，谬之千里。

6、Slow and steady wins the race.

稳扎稳打无往而不胜。

7、A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.

吃一堑，长一智。

8、Experience is the mother of wisdom.

实践出真知。

9、All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.

只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

10、Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.

无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。

11、More hasty,less speed.

欲速则不达。

12、Its never too old to learn.

活到老，学到老。

13、All that glitters is not gold.

闪光的未必都是金子。

14、A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.

千里之行始于足下。

15、Look before you leap.

三思而后行。

16、Rome was not built in a day.

伟业非一日之功。

17、Great minds think alike.

英雄所见略同。

18、well begun,half done.

好的开始等于成功的一半。

19、It is hard to please all.

众口难调。

20、Out of sight,out of mind.

眼不见，心不念。

21、Facts speak plainer than words.

事实胜于雄辩。

22、Call back white and white back.

颠倒黑白。

23、First things first.

凡事有轻重缓急。

24、Ill news travels fast.

坏事传千里。

25、A friend in need is a friend indeed.

患难见真情。

26、live not to eat,but eat to live.

活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。

27、Action speaks louder than words.

行动胜过语言。

28、East or west,home is the best.

金窝银窝不如自家草窝。

29、Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.

君子在德不在衣。

30、Beauty will buy no beef

.漂亮不能当饭吃。

31、Like and like make good friends.

趣味相投。

32、The older,the wiser.

姜是老的辣。

33、Do as Romans do in Rome.

入乡随俗。

34、An idle youth,a needy age.

少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

35、As the tree,so the fruit.

种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

36、To live is to learn,to learnistobetterlive.

活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。

[常见英文谚语励志篇

how to save environment? i think we should do the followings: first, it’s best to ride a bike to school, don’t take a bus or a taxi. second, i will remember to turn off the lights when i leave the classroom. third, in my free time, i will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. the fourth idea is turning off the shower when i ‘m not using it. fifth, it is imporment to save water and money. also, i won’t spend too much money on expensive things. last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . i’ll try my best to save the energy, i hope i can do something for our country.

the environmental protection is the most major problem which in the modern life the humanity faces. must solve this problem must start from foundation. first, must massively propagandize, enhances peoples consciousness with understanding, strengthens the environmental protection consciousness. next, must carry on waste recovery use, reduces to forest-trees felling. also must strengthen to white pollution processing, little uses the plastic product. finally, must make improvement to clean aspect. causes the citys appearance to be neater. for earths tomorrow, we must start from the now diligently, will want the well local constable to protect the environment. to this us proposes as follows suggests: implementation trash classification packed in bags. like this not only can reduce the environmental sanitation workers work load, but also can even better basically arrive makes use of waste, to reduce the pollution, saves the resources.

to：假条是递给谁的

from：请假人

date：写假条的日期(注意不是请假的日期)

subject：写上请假字样

假条范例如下：

to：peterstone，manager

from：lynnchen，financialdepartment

date：april2nd，20xx

subject：casualleaveofabsence

其次，在您的请假信第一段，应该开门见山但是有礼貌地提出请假。第一段要中心明确，写清您要请假的日期。

然后，在假条的第二段，您应该简单明了陈述请假的原因事由。注意叙述清楚明白，并尽可能表示对此带来工作不便的歉意。

接着，在假条的最后一段，应写上您希望获得准假的句子，或者具体等候答复的时间。

If we look at the sky on a perfectly fine summer‘s day we shall find that the blue colour is the most pure and intense overhead，and when looking high up in a direction opposite to the sun。

晴空万里的夏日，如果我们观察一下天空，且背向太阳，极目仰望，就会发现头顶上空的蓝色最纯净，最浓郁。

Near the horizon it is always less bright，while in the region immediately around the sun it is more or less yellow. The reason of this is that near the horizon we look through a very great thickness of the lower atmosphere，which is full of the larger dust particles reflecting white light，and this diluter the pure blue of the higher atmosphere seen beyond，and in the vicinity of the sun a good deal of the blue light is reflected back into space by the finer dust，thus giving a yellowish tinge to that which reaches us reflected chiefly from the coarse dust of the lower atmosphere。

靠近天边，色彩往往较暗淡，太阳周围的地方则略呈黄色。这是因为我们向天边望去时，目光要穿过极厚的低空大气层，其中布满颗粒较大的尘埃，反射出白光，这就冲淡了天际高空大气层的纯蓝色。在太阳附近，大 量蓝光则由细微的尘埃反射回太空。这样，主要由低空大气层的粗粒尘埃反射到地面的光线，便带有浅黄色。

At sunset and sunrise，however，this last effect is greatly intensified，owing to the great thickness of the strata of air through which the light reaches us. The enormous amount of this dust is well shown by the fact that then only we can look full at the sun，even when the whole sky is free from clouds and there is no apparent mist。

不过，在日出日落时，由于光线到达地面南非要穿过厚厚的大气层，这种反射效果大大增强了。只有在这种时候，我们才可以直视太阳，即使万里长空没有一点云彩，不见一丝雾霭。这就充分显示了低空尘埃的数量之大。

13.Stronger Than You Know

Getting Ourselves Worked Up

Our capacity to cope successfully with lifes challenges far outstrips our capacity to feel nervousness. Yet in the weeks, days, and hours leading up to an event that we believe will test our limits, we can become nervous. While we may have previously regarded ourselves as equal to the trials that lie ahead, we reach a point at which they near and our anxiety begins to mount. We then become increasingly worked up, until the moment of truth arrives and we discover that our worry was all for nothing. We are almost always stronger and more capable than we believe ourselves to be. But anxiety is not rational in nature, which means that in most cases we cannot work through it using logic as our only tool. Reason can help us recognize the relative futility of unwarranted worry but, more often than not, we will find more comfort in patterns of thought and activity that redirect our attention to practical or engaging matters.

Most of us find it remarkably difficult to focus on two distinct thoughts or emotions at once, and we can use this natural human limitation to our advantage when trying to stay centered in the period leading up to a potentially tricky experience. When we concentrate on something unrelated to our worryuch as deep breathing, visualizations of success, pleasurable pursuits, or exercisenxiety dissipates naturally. Meditation is also a useful coping mechanism as it provides us with a means to ground ourselves in the moment. Our guides can aid us by providing us with a focal point wholly outside of our own sphere.

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听着门外的争论声，我只能一声长叹，突然感觉到生活中那份悠然闲适的情趣似离我越来越远……但是我有我的方式，找到那悠然之意。

爸爸妈妈又一次因意见不合争论起来，家里弥漫着一股浓浓的火药味。60后的爸爸认为，只要事情有意义，时间可以花费，而70后的妈妈则认为高效地完成才是良方，两者如水火般不相容，我走出门外，轻掩房门，无言走入餐厅，拿出茶具，茶叶，烧一壶开水，沏两杯花茶放在桌上。“爸，妈，别吵了，先喝杯茶吧，我自己沏的哦。”果然，爸妈赏脸来到桌前，却一个坐左边，一个坐右边，目光都未触及一下。我拉开椅子，坐在两人中间，轻咳一声：“我说说我的想法吧。我觉得，您们说的方法都有可取之处，那为何不能求同存异呢？”父母眼中闪过一抹精光，我心中暗喜：“如果两个优点均占，就改变自己的条件，使自己拥有更高的专注力和逻辑能力，您们不能忘记，适合自己的方法才是最好的方法啊！”寂静，让我的心悬起，可父母的惊呼，恍然大悟状，让我心里的石头放下来。转眼间，爸妈又在一起开始激烈的讨论，他们的目光中没有气愤而是激动不已，迸发出的火花。

思维的局限，让人们往往忽略了“求同存异”的思维方式，从而会发生争论甚至是争吵，和谐、悠然闲适之意在生活中荡然无存。我有我的方式去处理，使我周围的人，在浮躁、喧闹的生活中，能体验到闲适、悠然之意。

不仅是思维，还有人与人的交往方式。一次出游，三个好友产生分歧。小甲和小乙吵得不可开交，呈剑拔弩张之势。小甲的手紧绷着，朝我嚷道：“你说吧，吃什么？”我不禁苦笑，心想这个烫山芋为什么会扔给我？但我心里了然自己的方式。此时，我的余光瞥见小丙已经嘴巴微张，手放松又握紧。“我无所谓，你俩也别吵了，还有一个人呢！”小丙朝我会心一笑，脸上虽然紧张，但流畅的表达出自己的想法。

小丙的想法全票通过。望着好友的笑脸，我心中也是喜悦的。

放开，连接，综合，也许这就是我的方式。我愿意用自己的力量，让周围的人能生活的更舒服闲适，那股悠然之意，重新回到他们的生活里。我也逐渐懂得，沟通，思维的重要性，放松，恣意地去生活，努力的去达到自己想要的目标，也是找到悠然之意的那扇门的钥匙。

In the Spring and Autumn Period, a farmer in the State of Song was one day working in the fields when he saw a rabbit bump into a tree stump(树桩) accidentally and break its neck.

The farmer took the rabbit home, and cooked himself a delicious meal.

That night he thought, I neednt work so hard. All I have to do is wait for a rabbit each day by the stump.

So from then on he gave up farming, and simply sat by the stump waiting for rabbits to come and run into it.

This idiom satirizes(讽刺，挖苦) those who just wait for a stroke of luck, rather than making efforts to obtain what they need.