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生活在大城市是怎样一种体验?以下是小编带来的英语日记100篇带翻译,希望对你有帮助。

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篇1:高一暑假英语日记_1900字

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July 14th Wednesday rainy

Yesterday I came to the center of Chongqing with my mother. We came to a place named “toward the air door”. I think many people know it. The night view is so beautiful that we all don’t want to back to home. I have a photo here. In the nine, we had to go back home. I didn’t wash my face before I went to bed, I’m too tired.

July 12th Monday sunny

How tired am I! I went back from chongqing three hours ago. In the city I nearly lost the way. Thanks for the hot heart man and woman. They help us to find the way. Oh, don’t think so badly, I’m fine. Because of my hard, my homepage is more beautiful than before, I’m very happy to see it. I love make homepage, if you love it, please let me know, we can take hours talking about homepage. Thank you.

July 9th Friday sunny,

How happy I am. Yesterday I finished all the work very quick, so I have a lot of time to do myself. Sometimes finish work early is a good thing, we can have more interests to do the next work. Because of this, I write English dairy eight in the morning. But I wrote it in the evening in the pass day. Everyone, if you can finish the work quickly, not lazy, just try your best.

July 6th Tuesday cloudy;

Ah ha, when I get up, it was time for lunch. But I really have a lot of work to

do, I must write words and English dairy, then learned “Li yang” English, and then …… .

Oh, my god, if I do it in the afternoon, I will ready to dead. So I wrote words, and now

I’m writing my English dairy. Wish I could finish these works today. Bye!

July 5th Monday cloudy

Today I came back from a place named “he chuan”, it’s a good place. There has some nice view like chang jiang river. I came there in two days ago. Our aunt is here. We had a good time in there. But I also write English dairy too. Because of the wrong computer, the message didn’t here. I wish myself to live more better tomorrow.

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篇2:短篇英语日记带翻译

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The screen of my father’s mobile telephone is broken. When you open the

mobile telephone, the screen is always white with light. You can’t see from the

screen. And my father is a businessman. He needed a new one. So my father and I

went to the electrical appliance shop. There are many new kinds of mobile

telephones. At first, my father chose a Sumsung one. But all the telephones have

sold out. Finally, my father chose a Motorola one.

我父亲的手机屏幕坏了。当你打开手机,屏幕始终是白色光。你不能从屏幕上看到。而我的父亲是个商人。他需要一个新的。所以,我的父亲和我去了电器店。有许多新种移动电话。起初,我的父亲选择了三星。但是,所有的电话都抢购一空。最后,我的父亲选择摩托罗拉公司之一。

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篇3:英语日记

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I went to Beijing Zoo on Saturday morning. 星期六早上我去了北京动物园。

I went there with my teachers by bus. It took us half an hour to get there.

There were many kinds of animals. First, we went to see pandas. They were my

favorite animals. How lovely they were! Then we watched the elephant show. The

elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. At

last, I took some photos of them. I had a great time. I stayed in Beijing Zoo

for 2 hours.

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篇4:短篇英语日记带翻译

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Today was realiy boring.I went nowhere,I just stayed at home because the

weather was rainy.The rain was raining heavily in the sky.And there was much

dirty water on the ground.

今天可真无聊。我哪儿也没去,就呆在家里,因为今天是雨天。天空中下着倾盆大雨,而且地上汇集着许多污水。

I watched TV,but all the shows were long and long soap operas.I didnt like

them!Then I read a book,but they were too difficult for me.So I couldnt get

it!Computer games were also difficult and boring...

我看了电视,但是所有的节目都是长长的电视连续剧,我不喜欢它们!然后我读了一本书,但是它对我来说太深奥了,我无法理解!电脑游戏也很困难而且无聊……

In short,the day was boring.I flet so bad!

总而言之,今天真无聊。我感觉太差了!

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篇5:英语达人小学生日记250字

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英语日记带翻译

英语日记:English Host I did it

Yesterday, it was really a nice day. I got the English Host in the end.

Now, allow me to tell you the gain of writing English articles.

The first, I learned a great many new words. They are very useful for me. While writing, meeting some new words are ineluctability. And when I met the new words, I would look up the dictionary immediately, and I would remember them soon. Bit by bit, the new words will be in my mind.

The second, I grasped a lot of practical verb tense and sentential form. Such as Past Tense, Future Tense, Future Continuous Tense, etc.

They are very useful for my writing.

The third, I got many praises and encourages. They made me very happy, and I made progress more and more.

Last, I got so much fun. English writing makes me happy. I study in it, and harvest in it.

Dear my friends, what you got? Show us, and let us work hard together, grow up together!

英语达人我做到了

昨天真是美好的一天,我终于得到了“英语达人”称号。

现在,请允许我来与大家分享我在写英语文章时收获了什么。

首先,我学到了很多新单词。每当我在写文章的时候,遇到生词是不可避免的。当我遇到生词时,我就会马上查词典,我还会记住这些单词。渐渐地,生词就会不再陌生。

其次,我掌握了许多常见的时态和实用的句型。例如:一般过去时、一般将来时、将来进行时,等等。它们对我的英语写作很有帮助。

第三,我收到了许多表扬和鼓励。它们让我非常开心,我在这里不断地成长。

我还收获了很多的乐趣,英语写作使我愉悦,我在写作的同时也学习着,收获着。

亲爱的朋友们,你收获了什么?和我们分享吧。让我们共同努力,共同成长!

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篇6:英语日记

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The summer holidayis end and the new term begins. In the new term, I am a

student of grade six. Itsthe last year in primary school. In order to have a

good ending, I must workharder. So my scores can be better. Besides, I want to

spend more time with myclassmates and friends. We have been very good these

years. Maybe we cant beclassmates in the future. But, I am still happy that

its the last year inprimary school and I am going to junior school.

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篇7:年夜饭英语作文带翻译

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欢乐的笑声充斥着,几乎所有人都回到了这个温暖的家,只差大姑姑他们而已。我等着等着,等到饭也煮好了,椅子也排好了,一切都准备就绪时,我问妈妈:“大姑姑呢?他们没有要回来吗?”

The joy of laughter flooded, almost everyone returned to the warm home, only the big aunt. I waited and waited until the meal was cooked, and the chairs were arranged. When everything was ready, I asked my mother, &ldquo, the big aunt. Havent they got to come back? ”

妈妈摇摇头,失望的跟我说:“没有耶!”我垂头丧气的回到客厅,看到摆好的碗筷,叹了一口气,喃喃的说:“好可惜喔!我今年也想和大姑姑他们一起吃年夜饭。”

Mother shook her head, disappointed to say to me: “ no yes! ” I become dejected and despondent back to the living room to see good dishes, sighed and murmured: “ well! I would like to have a new years dinner with the big aunt this year. ”

大姑姑很少回家,所以她每一次回来都会带一大堆东西给我们这些顽皮鬼吃,偶尔也会买衣服给我们穿,她并不知道我们的尺寸,可是总能带回一件又一件属于我们的衣服,可是今年的年夜饭她还是没回来,这让我的心情又一下子荡到谷底。

Aunt seldom go home, so she come back every time will bring a lot of things for us to eat these devils, occasionally buy clothes to wear, she does not know our size, but always to a belongs to our clothes, but this years Eve she still did not come back, this let my mood and suddenly swung to the bottom.

还好我们依旧拥有堂妹的笑声,她不管几年级都还是很爱笑,有时候连冷笑话她都可以笑到抱着肚子倒地,只要有她在,就不会有冷场的机会。当我们在吃饭时,堂妹就自顾自的开始笑起来,我们不知道她在笑什么,可是我们大家就像被传染似的,也开始咯咯咯的笑起来,我还差点将火锅的汤喷了出来呢!

Fortunately, we still have the laughter of her cousin, no matter what grade are still love to laugh, sometimes even joke she can smile to hold the stomach down, as long as she was, would not have the chance to silence. When we were having dinner, my cousin just began to laugh, we do not know what she was laughing, but we all like to be contagious, also began to giggle, I still will spray out Hot pot soup!

暖暖的火锅,冷冷的天,形成了对比,大人们聊着天,小孩就看着电视,抢着3C产品玩,虽然距离很近,心却不像从前那般紧密的在一起了。

The warm chafing dish is a contrast with the coldly cold day. When adults talk about their children, they watch TV and rush to play 3C products. Though the distance is very close, their hearts are not as close as they used to be.

“小朋友,领红包了!”大人们叫着,我们一窝蜂的排队,我却不知所措,因为我突然发现,我今年忘了想好要说哪里一句吉祥话了,轮到我领红包时,我吞吞吐吐的挤出:“大…吉大…利!”我傻傻的笑着,虽然今年的红包没有很大也没有很小,可是我却领的很开心。

&ldquo, little friend, get a red bag! ” adults cried, we like a swarm of bees queuing, I was at a loss, because I suddenly found that I forget this year wants to say where an auspicious words, its my turn to red collar, I squeeze haltingly: “ … &hellip and Kyrgyzstan! ” I was silly to laugh. Although this years red packet is not very big and not very small, but I was very happy to lead.

今年的年夜饭,我们吃着暖暖的火锅,看着除夕夜的特别节目,手里拿着一年一次的大红包,过了一个平凡,却也不平凡的夜晚。

This years new years Eve dinner, we eat warm chafing dish, watching New Years Eve special program, holding a big red envelope once a year, passed an ordinary but also extraordinary night.

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篇8:我爱英语心情日记

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高一那年,我们终于有英语课了。学英语,是我由来已久的心愿,因为姐姐老在我面前显摆,有时,她朝我咕噜一句就咯咯地笑,坏笑。那时我就想学英语。

我喜欢上英语课。但我越来越不喜欢英语老师。有一次,我问她,good和nice有什么不同,她想了一会儿,什么也没说就走了。类似的情况时有发生。高三下学期,我们班来了新英语老师,男老师,很帅,而且名字很好听,向往。向老师讲课很生动,他能用一个单词说出很多句子,甚至小故事,很幽默搞笑的那种。课下我想起来就想笑,笑着笑着就把英语单词记牢了。向老师经常在课堂上提问我,每次我都对答如流。那天,向老师讲love的用法,不知道为什么,我的心突然跳了一下,脸也有点热。我开始偷偷打量向老师:浓黑的眉毛,笔挺的鼻子,微尖的下巴上趴着两撇小胡须,真好看,尤其他的眼神,仿佛永远带电作业,我都不敢直视呢。正胡思乱想着,向老师突然叫我,让我用1ove说一句话。我站起来就说,“Iloveyou.”这时,向老师的脸红了,教室里充斥着同学们想笑又不敢笑的噗噗嗤嗤的声音。课后听同学说,向老师一连叫了我好几遍我才听见。那天放学后,向老师把我叫到办公室,他说,“你今天造的句子不错,可是……”我躲开向老师的眼神,“老师,我……”我终于鼓起勇气,呜噜出嘴边的“Iloveyou.”这时,向老师背过脸,对着窗外望了一会儿,又回过头来望着我说,“谢谢你的love,让我们把它放到心底,并一起为它努力,好吗?”我点点头,高兴的眼泪都出来了。从那以后,为了我和向老师心底里的“love”,我更加努力学习英语。有一次,向老师带我去市里参加英语比赛,因为晕场,不到半场我就出来了。一直等在门外的向老师走过来,望着我,轻轻拍着胸口说,“Iloveyou”。像一抹清凉剂涂抹额头,又像一缕春风吹拂心湖,我即时神清目爽,信心百倍地返回赛场。

那年高考,我的英语成绩全班第一。班主任说,我们班的英语成绩全年级第一。

毕业茶话会上,我无心和同学说笑,心湖里浮泛着一个声音。我目不转睛地盯着门口,我从来没那么急切地想见到向老师,我想对他大声喊:I1oveyou!哪怕向老师脸红,哪怕同学们哂笑。可直到曲终人散,灯火阑珊里也没有向老师的影子。有同学告诉我,向老师结婚去了。同学还说,为了高考,向老师推迟了婚期,为此,他未婚妻很不高兴呢。

后来我有时想,向老师所以推迟婚期,除了怕耽搁同学们的高考,他还担心别的什么吗?比如,一个女孩心灵的纯洁和脆弱,还有她的前程。每当想起这些,心底里的声音便一遍遍在耳边回响:Iloveyou……

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篇9:高中英语日记

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In the past two years, my parents took me to travel to many places,

including big cities, small towns, famous mountians and so on. Therefore, I like

traveling and I hope I can visit to many more places. Since then, I hope I can

be a tour guide in the future, so I can travel to many tourist attractions.

Besides, I can meet various people and I think communicating with different

people is interesting, wchich can broaden my field of vision. I hope they can

share their life stories with me so that I can know the general life of a place.

I know it would be a challenging job, but I believe I can do well in my job.

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篇10:英语日记

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Monday, August 2nd, Sunny

It was sunny and hot today。 I got up early at half past six。 I read English and then had breakfast。 I helped my mother washed the dishes。 Then I did my homework and cleaned my room。 I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon。 Then I played table tennis with my friends。 In the evening I watched TV and read a book。 I really had a busy and interesting day。

今天天气晴朗,热。 我在6:30很早就起了床。我读英语然后吃早饭。我帮助母亲洗碗。然后做作业打扫房间。下午我和母亲去买东西。然后和朋友们打乒乓球。晚上我看电视、看书。我今天的确很忙、过得很有趣。

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篇11:英语日记带翻译

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Today I had nothing to do again, so I started to write about my boring

summer days again. I dont have much interest in English since Im Chinese, but

I still have to write these boring summer journals because they are my

assignments from school. Im only doing this assignment because I respect my

English teacher.

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今天我又无事可干了,所以我又开始写我无聊的夏日了。我不太喜欢英语,因为我是中国人,但我仍然要写这些无聊的暑期刊物,因为它们是我学校的作业。我只是做这个作业,因为我尊敬我的英语老师。

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篇12:英语日记带翻译

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This holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning English, computer

word I fall in the weekend exam. Many times I want to take today off, my mother

said to me:“go on, you must belive that you can do it.” So I have to try. Now my

English is better than 2months ago. I must thanks my mother, she is good for me.

Practices makes perfect.

这个假期是我最好的繁忙的节日,因为我在周末考试没考好,所以我学习英语和计算机单词。许多次,我想放弃今天的学习,妈妈对我说:“继续,你相信你能做到。"所以我不能不试一试。现在我的英语比2个月前好得多。我要感谢我的妈妈,她对我很好。实践才能达到完美。

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篇13:英语日记

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The winter morning is very cold. I dont want to get up at all. The bed is so

warm and comfortable, but the outside is too cold. Every morning, my mother

pulls me up from my bed. It takes much longer to get up. But I like the

breakfast in winter morning, because mother often cooks hot food for me. It

makes me much warmer. Because of the cold weather, father often takes me to

school, so I dont have to ride my bike or take a bus. In one word, the winter

morning is cold and I just want to stay indoors.

冬天的早晨很冷,我根本就不想起床,床很暖和、很舒服,但外边确实如此寒冷。每天早上我的妈妈都把我从床上拉起来,起床要花很多的时间,但我喜欢冬日早晨的早餐,因为妈妈经常给我做热的东西吃,这使我暖和了很多。因为天气问题,爸爸经常送我去上学,因此我用不着自己骑自行车或是坐公交车,总之,冬天的早晨很冷,我只想待在室内。

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篇14:小学关于清明节英语日记带翻译

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清明节那天,下着毛毛细雨,天空灰暗暗的,人也觉得很没有精神。我们全家睡了一个“自然醒的觉”。我们没有出远门,因为我们在深圳没有长辈亲戚,因此也就没有扫墓的活动。

The day of the festival, the drizzle, the sky dark gray, people feel very spirit. My family had a "natural wake up sleep". We do not have to go out, because we have no elder relatives in Shenzhen, so there is no grave activities.

这一天,我在家接待了我的一个朋友,他叫浩浩,他的爷爷前不久突然心肌梗塞,住进了医院,他的爸爸妈妈很忙,没有时间照顾他,所以把他托付到我们家生活一天。早上十点多,浩浩来了,我们欢迎他,我和他同岁,但是他上学迟一年,所以还在上幼儿园大班。

That day, I received a friend of mine at home, he asked his grandpa is vast, shortly before the sudden myocardial infarction, admitted to the hospital, his father and mother is busy, no time to take care of him, so he entrusted to our home life one day. More than ten oclock in the morning, to the vast, we welcome him, he and I are the same age, but he went to school a year later, it was still in kindergarten.

我们在一起聊天、唱歌、玩游戏、看电视,很开心。中午爸爸妈妈带着我和浩浩去宝能太古城吃必胜客的披萨,我们一人点了一个套餐,浩浩吃得干干净净,我要向他学习。下午我们一起玩侦探游戏,也很开心。

We chat together, sing, play games, watch TV, very happy. At noon, mom and Dad took me and vast to Baoneng Taikoo city to eat Pizza Hut pizza, we point a package, the eat clean, I should learn from him. We play games in the afternoon the detective, was also very happy.

天黑了,浩浩的妈妈张阿姨来接他了,我很舍不得他回去。这就是我清明节的活动,很平凡,但这是我第一次在家里接待小朋友,所以很有体验和收获,我懂得了礼让和待客。

It was dark, the mother Zhang aunt came to pick him up, I could not bear him back. This is the I Ching Ming Festival activities, very ordinary, but this is the first time I received the kids at home, so it is the experience and the harvest, I know the courtesy and hospitality.

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篇15:英语作文带翻译Myclassroom我的教室

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My classroom is very nice . There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What colour are the fans ? They are blue. At the coner, there is a shelf , many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much. This is my classroom , it is very nice. I like my classroom very much . Do you have a nice classroom, too ?

我的教室很好。教室里有四十张桌子和椅子。墙壁上有两只黑木板。还有照片,太。我的教室有十一盏灯和十二个风扇。粉丝是什么颜色的?他们是蓝色的。在角落,有一个书架,书架上有很多书。我非常喜欢这本书。这是我的教室,很好。我非常喜欢我的教室。你有一个漂亮的教室吗?

[英语作文带翻译Myclassroom我的教室

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篇16:初一学生英语日记

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What Am I Going to Do in the Summer Holiday

The new summer holiday is coming. As we know, summer is a beautiful season. During the coming summer holiday, I am going to study English. Then I am going to borrow some science books from

the library and discuss problems with my classmates, I’ll help my parents do some housework in my house, and I’ll water the flowers and trees our garden. I am going to play basketball, volleyball and

badminton with my neighbours in the afternoon. At the same time, if my father has time, he’ll teach me to swim. I’ll have fun.

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篇17:英语日记50词

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I went shopping with Li Mei. We left at 10 oclock in the morning. When we

got to the downtown, there were so many people. It was so crowded as it was a

beautiful day and it was Sunday. I didnt buy anything because everything was

very expensive.

我跟李梅去逛街。我们早上10点出发。当我们到闹市区时,好多人啊。因为今天是星期天,天气又很好。我没有买什么东西,因为太贵了。

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篇18:英语日记带翻译

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One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to

the a trip to the country。 She bade me take good care of him。

While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the

breeze was blowing gently。 We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us

and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees。 The scenery

was indeed very pretty (beautiful)。

When we felt tired, we returned home。 We saw Mother (our mother) wait

(waiting) for us at the door。

有一个星期日,我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他。

当我们沿着道路行走的时候,太阳灿烂地照耀着,微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着,并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲,风景实十分美丽。

当我们感觉到疲倦的时候,我们就回家了。我们看见母样正在门口等候我们。

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篇19:英语日记格式

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MondaySeptember1,20__weather:__

It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free.

I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live

alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at

home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my

homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was

time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

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篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

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My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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