志愿者英语作文高三（实用20篇）

When Im free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, Ive put my heart into it so that Ill forget all the troubles. Its in this way that Ive formed the habit of reading in any time.

当我空闲的时候或在麻烦，我总是拿出一本书静静地看书。在任何时候，我把我的心让我忘记所有的烦恼。就这样我已经形成在任何时间阅读的习惯。

Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, and essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.

当我还是小孩子时，我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我很惊讶他们。我刚进入了中学，我开始读小说，戏剧，散文等。我发现我可以从他们身上得到很多。渐渐的我开始对文学感兴趣的最后一学期我在浙江省中学生作文竞赛中获得一等奖。

Reading “The Emperors New Clothes”, I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. “The Little Match Girl” couldnt keep me from crying for her misery. “Robinson Crusoe” took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Kellers patience and perseverance… Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didnt before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.

阅读“皇帝的新衣”，我不得不把一阵笑声在他的傻瓜。《卖火柴的小女孩》不能不让我为她哭的痛苦。《鲁滨孙漂流记》把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生的世界。我也深深打动了海伦凯勒的耐心和毅力……除此之外，本书还告诉我其它的东西——如何成为一个男人，如何分辨对与错。总之，好的书籍可以让我知道什么我不在。所以我认为一个好的书是我最好的朋友。

Ill never forget this famous saying,“Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.”

我永远不会忘记这句名言，“好书是最好的朋友，谁不背对我们。”

I am four (2) class * * *. I envy those who volunteer. They no matter how early to school every day, how early finish school work, how early eat delicious lunch, but they were early to his post. Finally, I also am a volunteer of the week, duty is to school early every morning, check each student have to wear red scarf and crest.

I school minutes to school early every day. I finished bag, hand in the homework, take a good book, and hurriedly went to the door of the school, afraid to lose work. I didnt know when a week of volunteer volunteers how hard ah! But I service for all students, a week, until today, my heart is fruity.

我是四(2)班的***。我很羡慕那些志愿者。他们每天不管多早到学校，多早做完学校作业，多早吃完香喷喷的午饭，但他们都早早到了自己的岗位。终于，我也当了一周的志愿者了，职责是每天早上早早地到学校，检查每位同学有没有佩戴红领巾和校徽。

我每天都6:55分就早早地到学校了。我理完书包，交完作业，拿好记录本，急急忙忙地走到学校门口，生怕耽误工作。我当了一周的志愿者才知道志愿者有多么的辛苦啊!不过，我为全校同学服务了一周啊，一直到今天，我的心里都甜滋滋的。

The Importance of Breakfast

As people are so busy with their work, they go to work directly in the morning without eating breakfast. Some people think not having breakfast does no influence on their body health. Some believe breakfast is important to peoples body health. In my opinion, Im convinced that we should have breakfast because it is good for our body health.

First of all, breakfast offer us the energy we need for the day. Before breakfast, our body has consumed all the energy we get from previous meal. Consequently, we need to eat some food in the morning to get enough energy and nutrient to support our body. If we dont have breakfast, then we have no enough energy to do our work efficiently.

Secondly, people who skip breakfast will get weight easily. If you dont have breakfast, then you will eat more food at noon and in the evening. Generally speaking, we dont have much excise in the evening while we eat too much food. As a result, the surplus calorie will be stored in our body and make us fat.

All in all, people should eat breakfast for the good of our health and for the good of keeping a good body shape.

人们都忙于自己的工作，所以在早上都会选择直接上班，而不吃早餐。一些人认为不吃早餐不会影响自己的身体健康。一些人认为早餐对健康很重要。就我来说，我觉得为了身体健康着想，我们应该吃早餐。

首先，早餐能够给我们提供自己一天所需的能量。在吃早餐前，我们的身体一斤高消耗完了前一餐的食物提供给我们的能量。说以，我们需要在早上吃点儿东西来给我们的身体提供一些能量和营养。如果我们不吃早餐，那么我们没有足够的能量，这样会导致我们工作效率低。

其次，不吃早餐的人更容易肥胖。如果不吃早餐，你将会在中午和晚上吃大量的食物。通常来说，一般人们在晚上的活动量会很少，但是，我们由于吃了太多的食物，那些多余的热量会储存在我们的身体里，让我们变胖。

总之，人们应该吃早餐，不仅为了身体健康着想，也为我们能够保持一个好的身材着想。

今天是夏令营的第四天，是我认为最开心、最激动的一天。因为今天我们要过复活节，要猎蛋，也要画蛋。

Today is the fourth day of the summer camp, I think is the happiest, the most exciting day. Because today we are going to the Easter egg hunt, to, to draw the egg.

第一节中教课，老师教了我们折纸篮子以及一只可爱的小兔子，需要吹气，小兔子才能鼓起来。

The first day of class, the teacher taught us origami baskets and a cute little rabbit, need to blow, small rabbit to drum up.

下午的外教课分外有趣，老师告诉了我们复活节的习俗与什么是复活节的象征，因为只有春天，万物才能复苏，才能再次充满活力。我终于明白了为什么老师让我们折兔子了。

Afternoon teacher lesson more interesting, the teacher told us the Easter customs and what are the symbols of Easter, because only in spring, all things to recover, to feel alive again. I finally understand why the teacher let us break the rabbit.

接下来要猎蛋，共有20来个假蛋，真蛋只有1个。假的蛋白白胖胖，一个个窝在茂密的草丛或灌木丛里。老师一声令下后，我们就疯了似的去找，我找到了3个蛋，可不就就陷入了僵局，谁也没找到真蛋。过了好长时间，Alex在消防栓中找到真蛋。

Next to the egg hunt, a total of 20 to a fake eggs, so eggs only 1. The false protein white fat, a nest in the thick grass or bushes. The teacher gave the order, we will go crazy, I found 3 eggs, but not on the impasse, who also didnt find it. After a long time, Alex found it in a fire hydrant in eggs.

晚上，我们花彩蛋，一个个各式各样的蛋。十分漂亮。

At night, we take the eggs, one egg every kind of. Very beautiful.

今天，我们没出校门，没出国门，却体验到了复活节的快乐

Today, we have no school, no door to go abroad, but to experience the joy of Easter

I am a senior three student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother... An Agreement I am a senior three student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in senior three, shouldering heavy loads, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that＇ once I am allowed to do that I＇ll not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can＇t accept her ideas. I think it a relaxation to watch TV after a day＇s hard work. Watching TV can not only relax me, but broaden my horizons. Now we＇ve at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news,programs of entertainment, sports or science.

In the cartoon, we can see that a teather feels rather puzzled about what his pupil writes in the assignment, because he hasnt got any idea of some phrases his pupil used in it. Seeing the teacher’s bewilderment, the pupil seems rather proud. He says to himself: “How does it come about that his teacher doesn’t understand prevailing network slangs.”

The cartoon presents a disturbing phenomenon in our society: the prevalence of coined network phrases among teenagers. According to a survey, eighty-five percent of teenagers use coined network phrases in their text messages and e-mails on a daily basis. What’s worse, seventy percent of teenagers have been using network abbreviation in their school work. Though some network languages have come into our vocabulary, the majority of network languages are coined and not commonly used, and some even shallow andd vulgar in content. Educators are much worried that these coined languages will exert a negative effect on the teenagers both in their growth and in their study of the Chinese language.

In my opinion, we should adopt an objective attitude towards the emergence of network language. On the one hand, network language has enriched our language, especially our oral language, making it more colorful. On the other hand, network language has a negative impact on our traditional language. Many network words and phrases are ridiculous in meaning and not standardized in formation, which will severely affect teenagers in their language study. Therefore, some necessary  measures should be taken to ensure a healthy development of network language.

在这幅漫画中,我们可以看到,一个老师感觉而困惑关于他的学生写作业,因为他没有任何想法的一些短语中使用他的学生。看到老师的困惑,瞳孔似乎相当自豪。他对自己说:“它是怎样发生的,他的老师不懂流行的网络语言。”

这幅漫画展示了一个令人不安的现象在我们的社会:青少年创造了网络用语的流行。一项调查显示,百分之八十五青少年的使用创造了网络短语在手机短信和电子邮件日常生活中。更糟糕的是,百分之七十的青少年使用网络缩写在他们的学校工作。尽管有些网络语言已经进入我们的词汇,大多数的网络语言是创造,而不是常用的,还有一些甚至在内容肤浅和庸俗。教育者要担心这些创造的语言会对青少年造成的负面影响在他们的成长和学习中国的语言。

在我看来,我们应该采取客观的态度对待网络语言的出现。一方面,网络语言丰富了我们的语言,特别是我们的口头语言,使其更丰富多彩。另一方面,网络语言对传统语言有一个负面影响。许多网络词汇和短语是荒谬的意义而不是标准化的形成,这将严重影响青少年在他们的语言学习。因此,一些必要的应采取措施确保网络语言的健康发展。

Finally, we have arrived at the expected May Day holiday. You must have

done a lot of things in this holiday. Look at what Ive done!

The first thing: tidy up a room (also called a cleaning). I want to put the

books in my house! Toys! Everything was done, so I started with my dad. Im

going to take all the books out first and classify them. My classification is

this: first put the extracurricular books, second textbooks put half half

lattice magazine, third all magazines, fourth put notebook, put the fifth cram

things, sixth to my dad put things, seventh squares to put papers and file

pouches, eighth all comics. In addition to this, I also put the toy for a while,

and my dad swept the room.

The second thing: buy a bag. Because my dad saw my bag rotten, I went to

buy a new one with me. After seeing the supermarket for a long time, we saw a

nice schoolbag at last. I didnt know it. I didnt know it. When I saw it, I

needed 208 yuan for it. Finally, my dad and I were going to buy a bag on the

Taobao net. It was cheap, plus 10 yuan for freight, only 79 yuan. So its

cheaper to buy online.

Third things: flowers. Dad and I are going to buy some flowers on the

shelf, then go to the flower shop flowers. I look left, right look, finally to

buy a pot Name: "drop water Guanyin" flowers.

Although the cleaning is very tired, it embodies the happiness of labor

day.

Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus. It is about thirty miles from the city. We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.

As soon as we got there, we began to climb up the mountains. How great the sight is! We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty, peaeefulness and loveliness. There are hundreds of mountains, one after another. there are magnificent cliffs, one above another. We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily. As the sun was going down, we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill, where we had a big dinner, and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.

Before daybreak, we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark. Unaware of the cold wind, we stood motionlessly, with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east. Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky. As the redness deepened, some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky, dividing heaven from the earth. Just at this moment, up from the brightening far east rose the sun. It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes. and a slight applause from us. the amazed spectators, rang through the peak. Up, up it rose, adding to itself strength and glory at every step. It dazzled with vigour, driving away darkness, cold, and misery from the earth, and bring light, warmth, and happiness to men.

We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature. We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.

Directions：

You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write to the manager of the hotel:

1) giving any relevant information about the bag and its contents

2) asking the manager to contact you immediately if the bag is found and

3) telling him/her how the bag can be sent to you.

You should write with no less than 100 words on Answer Sheet 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

Dear Mr. Simpson,

I stayed in your hotel on 23rd and 24th of October, in Room 603. When I arrived home, I discovered that I had left one of my bags at the hotel. Could you please check to see if my bag has been found?

The bag is a small black leather case. Inside the bag, you will find several business cards, a small address book, and three copies of a business proposal. These things are not very valuable in monetary terms, but they have a lot of personal value.

I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible, particularly since I need the proposal for a presentation. If you could send the bag to me by courier service, I would be most grateful. I will arrange to pay for the service.

Thank you for your help.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

The Pressure From College Students

In China, the number of college students increases every year, as more and more students get the college education, college students are under great pressure. We hear from the news that a lot of students can’t find jobs after graduation, then the next year, the other students gets graduating, the two years’ students compete for the jobs! I just can’t imagine such situation. The pressure from college students is getting greater, they should relieve it now and then, because too much pressure will bring bad effect, some may distort their minds, once their emotion can’t relieve in time, some tragical things may happen. It is said that some students suicide themselves because they have much pressure. Everybody will have pressure, but we must know that pressure brings motivation, at the same time, it also brings burden, we have to balance it. When we deal with it well, we can live a better life.

在中国，大学生的数量每年都在增加，随着越来越多的学生接受大学教育，大学生承受很大的压力。我们从新闻上看到很多学生在毕业后找不到工作，第二年的时 候，另外一些学生毕业，两年的学生竞争工作!我无法想象这样的情形。大学生的压力越来越大，他们应该时而不时地释放压力，因为太多的压力会带来不好的影 响，一些学生思想扭曲了，一旦他们的情绪得不到及时释放，悲剧的事情就会发生。据说一些学生自杀因为过多的压力。每个人都会有压力，但是我们必须知道有压 力才有动力，同时，压力也是一种负担，我们要平衡压力。当我们处理好压力时，才能过得更好。

From the chart， it is obvious that renting a room near the university is more comfortable to live in. However， If let choose， I will choose the former without hesitation.

For one thing， I’m a person who is afraid of loudiness. So I would like to live with other 3 persons rather than myself alone. Moreover， I can learn how to communicate with others and help each other if I live with other people. I also can make more friends in the university.

Secondly， even though there is no single cleaning facility in the dormitory， it can help me adapt myself to the surrounding and learn how to live in harmony with others. What’s more， although I’m a person who loves freedom， I hope the dormitory life could make my life more regular and meaningful.

Last but not least， the fees of the dormitory is far cheaper than the renting room. Choosing the former one will make easier to me to afford it by myself.

In a word， it is absolute for me to choose the university dormitory. As the facts I mentioned， I believe it is a wise choice.

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[高三英语作文模板

In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese

people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 20__, there were

about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an

increasing number of people become volunteers in China every year.

Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and

the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers

played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a

tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that

it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games.

As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering

activities. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to

improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of

these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to

learn and to grow.

The volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people in recent

years,especially among young people。

Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and

society.Take the Wenchuan Earthquake as an example.Hundreds of thousands of

volunteers play an active role in Wenchuan quake-hit areas.And they contribute

daily necessaries,offer medical help and psychological help to the disaster

relief work.

Besides,volunteering would be beneficial to the volunteers

themselves~Getting involved in volunteering,volunteers will be exposed to a new

environment,and they can learn how to work well in a team,how to improve their

interpersonal skills and organizational skills，all of which are critical for

their professional growth。As a college student,I sincerely hope that everyone

would join the volunteering work.It is not only good to our society,but also a

chance for us to grow and to learn.

Today is December 5, is the annual world volunteer day. In order to meet this special day, we love chrysanthemum in primary school, under the guidance of leadership in xujiahui huijin square organised "energy conservation and carbon reduction, green expo" citizen environmental protection campaign.

Today, I to the identity of a world expo volunteers to join the ranks. At 8 am, the official start of the activity. Although todays wind is very big, but blocks the sun bone-chilling winds stop volunteers activities enthusiasm in our school, everyone reel "low-carbon life" among the people, send them flyer, and sign your name, appealed for energy conservation and emissions reduction, by the practical action to protect the environment, with green citizens. Lets delight the citizens are very warm and fit.

I am very proud and honored as a volunteer, although we have to do this activity is the most simple work, but I feel very meaningful. If theres a chance next time, I must also participate in the volunteer activities.

For the sake of our green world expo, for the sake of our common homeland, to human survival environment, I think the first thing we want to change some habits in life, such as: shopping bring their own shopping bags, use less disposable products, using energy-saving appliances, riding a bicycle and bus, how to use electronic transmission, and so on. All of these can make contribution to environmental protection, healthy and simple, too!

今天是12月5日，是一年一度的世界志愿者日。为了迎接这个特别的日子，我们在爱菊小学校领导的带领下，在徐家汇汇金广场组织举办“节能减碳，绿色世博”市民环保宣传活动。

今天，我以一名世博志愿者的身份加入到这个行列中。上午8点40分，活动正式开始了。虽然今天的风很大，但是刺骨的寒风阻挡了阳光却阻挡不住我校志愿者们的活动热情，大家滔滔不绝地向市民宣传“低碳生活”，向他们发送宣传单，并签上名，呼吁大家以实际行动节能减排，保护环境，同做绿色公民。让我们感到高兴的是市民们都非常热情和配合。

我作为一名志愿者感到十分荣幸和自豪，虽然这次活动我们所要做的都是最简单的工作，但是我觉得非常有意义。如果下次有机会，我一定还要参与这类志愿者活动。

为了我们的绿色世博，为了我们共同的美好家园，为了人类的生存环境，我觉得我们首先要改变生活中的一些小习惯，比如：购物自带购物袋，少用一次性制品，使用节能电器，多骑自行车和乘公交车，多使用电子传输等等。这些都能为环境保护作出贡献，健康又简单，何乐而不为!

Thanksgiving Day is the USA and Canadas holiday. Later, people often thank the others on this day.

It’s in November of last Thursday is Thanksgiving Day.

Thanksgiving Food

Cornbread, English Cheese Pie, Venison, Ducks and Geese, Wild Turkey, Garlic and Onions, Pumpkin Pudding are Thanksgiving Day’s food.

Thanksgiving Day a very traditional color of the food. Every Thanksgiving Day, Americans must eat a fat chicken. Because turkey is the traditional course.

Thanksgiving Day Blessings

Thank the parents. They give me the life, let me to study.

Thank the sisters and brothers. They let me healthy growth. In my difficult times, they stretched out their hands warm.

Thank the teachers. You let me to study, let me have the ability to pay for someone else.

Thank the friends. You bring me a lot of funny, bring me a lot of self-confidence. You bring me a lot of help, let me better to face all, too.

Oh, THANK YOU EVERYONE!

你所在的城市即将举办国际贸易博览会。有关部门现向全社会招聘志愿者。要求：

(1)具有为国际友人服务的热情;

(2)掌握丰富的文化知识，既是服务人员，也是文化的使者;

(3)具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。

假如你叫李华，请根据以上要求，写一封想作博览会志愿者的申请信。

要求：字迹工整，100词左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

生词：国际贸易博览会 the International Trade Exposition

Dear Sir or Madam：

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I’d like very much to be a volunteer。

All our citizens are hosts for this special event. Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture. What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English。

To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one。

Because I saw in the library before recruiting poster "volunteers". So today, I went to the childrens library in zhejiang do volunteer.

I go to fill in the form, my number is "894", fill in after I went to the teacher to report for duty. Find a teacher, because the teacher is too busy, no time to teach me how to do volunteer. Then, I have to self-study, behind the teacher see her how to do it. Fortunately, there are two also to do volunteers big brother is willing to teach me how to do it.

I made the first "work" is arranging the others also - book. The books in the library are all labeled, the color of the book are posted it on the top of the label. Big brother tell me: put the label of orange and clear at the beginning of the letter is I into a class; The blue into category; Put the red into category; Divides the orange and colorless beginning of letter is not I kind of...... is not very good at the beginning, I also very slow. Gradually, I faster and faster, practice makes perfect right away.

In the afternoon, I went to the "work" on the second floor, my main task is to arrange the books on the shelf. Ill arrange the books on the bookshelf neatly by hand, after a while, the books on the shelf immediately turned and tidy. But often people to borrow and return books, and we will keep finishing.

Today, I took part in volunteer activities. Volunteer activities let us "send person rose, the hand have lingering fragrance", free service for others. Lets action, and contribute a little bit!

因为我之前看到了图书馆中招募“志愿者”的海报。于是今天,我就去了浙江少年儿童图书馆做了志愿者。

我先去填了表格，我的编号是“894”，填好之后我就去找老师报到了。找到老师后，因为老师太忙，没有时间教我怎么做志愿者。于是，我就只好自学了——跟在老师后面看她怎么做。幸好，有两个也来做志愿者的大哥哥愿意教我怎么做。

我做的第一个“工作”是——整理别人还的书。图书馆里的书是全部贴有标签的，这本书的颜色都贴在了标签的上方。大哥哥告诉我：要把标号橙色和无色的开头字母是I的分成一类;把蓝色的分成一类;把红色的分成一类;把橙色和无色开头字母不是I的分成一类······我一开始还不是很熟练，速度还很慢。渐渐的，我的速度越来越快，马上就熟能生巧了。

下午，我就去二楼“工作”了，我的主要任务就是整理书架上的书。我先用手把书架上的书整齐地摆好，过了一会儿，书架上的书就马上变整齐了。但是经常有人来借和还书，于是我们就要不停地整理。

今天，我参加了志愿者的活动。志愿者的活动就让我们“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”，无偿为别人服务。让我们行动起来，贡献出自己小小的一份力量吧!

Nowadays, there is a increasing number for people to join in the activities ofVolunteering. It’s well-known that volunteering job is making contribution to the society with nothing in return. It’s like the Leifeng spirit. However, knowing this, there are still many people would like to devote themseves in this trend. For instance, the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games has so many volunteers. They made lots of contribution to the success of opening the Olympics. Moreover, we can often see that there many students go to gerocomium to visit the old to bring warm to the lonely people. Even there are some people’s career is volunteer. They are ready to help others. Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thanks them to admire them devoting themseves to the society.

如今，有越来越多的人加入到志愿服务行业。众所周知，志愿者工作是对社会的无私贡献。就像雷锋精神一样。然而，虽然意识到这一点但还是有很多人愿意奉献于这个行业。例如，2008年北京奥运会有这么多的志愿者。他们为奥运会的成功举行做了很多的贡献。此外，我们经常可以看到，有很多学生去敬老院看望老人给他们带去温暖。甚至有些人的职业就是志愿者。他们时刻准备好去帮助别人。虽然志愿者是越来越常见了，但我们仍然要感谢他们钦佩他们为社会奉献自己。

The first fall of snow is not only an event but it is a magical event. You go to bed in one kind of world and wake up to find yourself in another quite different, and if this is not enchantment, then where is it to be found?

The very stealth, the eerie quietness, of the thing makes it more magical. Ifall the snow fell at once in one shattering crash, awakening us in the middle of the night the event would be robbed of its wonder. But it flutters down, soundless, hour after hour while we are asleep. Outside the closed curtains of the bedroom a vast transfbrmation scene is takiag place, just as if a myriad elves and brownies were at work, and we turn and yawn and stretch and know nothing about it. And then, what an extraordinary change it is! It is as if the house continent. Even the inside, which has not been touched, seems different, every room appearing smaller and cosier, just as if some power were trying to turn it into a woodcutter’s hut or a snug logcabin. Outside, where the garden was yesterday, there is now a white and glistening level, and the village beyond is no longer your own familiar cluster of roofs but a village in an old German fairy-tale.

You would not be surprised to learn that all the people there, the speetacled postmistress, the cobbler, the retired school master, and the rest, had suffered a change too and had become queer elvish beings, purveyors of invisible caps and magic shoes. You yourselves do not feel quite the same people you were yesterday. How could you not when so much has been changed? There is a curious stir, a little shiver of excite-ment, troubling the house, not unlike the feeling there is abroad when a journey has to be made. The children, of course, are all excitement but even the adults hang about and talk to one another longer than usual before setting down to the day’s work. Nobody can resist the windows. It is like being on board a ship.

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li，my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard day’s work，gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class. Miss Li’s case is not unique，and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.

There are a number of reasons for people to go back for their education. Some people，like Miss Li，are doing it to acquire another degree or diploma to impress the society. To them more knowledge，or rather，more credentials means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.

Other people，especially those who are laid off or out of employment go to vocational school to prepare to return to the job market. They are eager for new skills so that they can be qualified for the jobs in retail trade，administration，education and other service categories to which they are strange because most of them were blue-collar workers in the factory.

There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine，painting，calligraphy and photography. As their working weeks decline people begin to have time to fulfill their old dream of their heart’s desire.

Out of necessity or out of interest，people go back to school for the common goal——to improve themselves，and this boom in adult education，in turn，helps to raise the intellectual standard of the whole country.