初三关于环保的英语作文带翻译（精彩20篇）

这几年全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。绿色低碳，保护环境，从我们身边小事做起。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容包括：

1.重要性：只有一个地球。

2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难。

3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然。

Let’s Do Something to save Our Environment

We all live on the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.

It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution. We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Protecting the nature is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.

If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.

Trees are important resources. They provide us with wood, which is not only an important building material, but also indispensable in making paper, furniture, matches and many other useful things. Without tress, we would perhaps still be living in caves, and our life would be very miserable.

Trees also do good to our environment. They not only make our world greener and more beautiful but also produce oxygen which makes the air we breathe fresher and better for our health. What’s more, trees help maintain ecological balance, which is very important to our survival.

Fortunately, trees, unlike other resources, can be “reproduced”. While coal and oil can be burnt up and exhausted, trees will never be used up because we can always plant new ones. And when we plant trees, we know that we are helping make our world richer, pleasanter, and more beautiful to live in. So let’s plant more trees.

July 9 2009

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但是，我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常渴望。

[小学生英语日记带翻译

Now a lot of people pay attention to a piece of new on the Internet. A teacher calledZhang Lili was hurt by a car, because she wanted to save her students. People call her “Hemost beartiful teacher”. She is only 29 years old , but she can do so great thing. I think it isdifficult for other people to do this. It’s the love for the students , she is one of the bestteachers in China.As a student, I think the most beautiful teacher must be good to students. And she alwayshelps her stduents with all kinds of problems. The teacher must have many ideas to keep thestudents healthy and happy. I think if a teacher do these, she must be a good teacher, and herstudents will be good too. And if all teachers can do these, the world will be more beautifulbecause of them .

What animal do you like best ?Is it elephant ?Or tiger ?But my favorite animal is monkey . Because they have the yellow skin,a big mouth ,a small nose,and two big eyes .They climb trees quickly ,and they can pick bananas or apples .I think they are very lovely and interesting!

So I hope you to like them ,too.

你最喜欢什么动物?大象吗?还是老虎?但我最喜欢的动物是猴子。因为他们有黄色的皮肤，一个大嘴巴，一个小鼻子，两只大眼睛，他们很快地爬上树，他们可以摘香蕉或苹果，我认为他们非常可爱和有趣!

所以我希望你也喜欢他们。

I m a primary school student. I go to school every day from Monday to Friday. Every morning I have some milk and toast for a quick breakfast. I like toast with strawberry jam.

我是一名小学生。我每天星期一到星期五都要去学校。每天早晨我都是快速地喝牛奶、吃面包来作为早餐。我喜欢在面包上蘸草莓酱。

I don t have lunch at the school canteen. I like to have a sandwich, an apple or a bar of chocolate for lunch.

我不在学校饭堂吃午餐。我午餐喜欢吃一片三明治，一个苹果或者一块巧克力。

Dinner is usually nice with my family together. My mother likes to cook some beef or chicken, vegetables, and some fruit salad. After dinner, I have some ice cream. It s delicious.

晚餐通常都是很好的，而且都是和我的家人一起吃。我的妈妈喜欢煮牛肉或者鸡肉，蔬菜，还有一些水果沙拉。晚餐后，我会吃冰淇淋。冰淇淋很好吃的。

[精选初三英语作文:我的三餐

I went to the Peoples Park with my family today. We had picnic in the

park. My mother and grandparents were preparing food, father was playing

badminton with his friend while I was reading under a tree.

今天我跟家人去公园。我们在公园野餐。我妈妈和爷爷奶奶准备吃的。爸爸跟朋友在打羽毛球，我在树下看书。

Every little girl will have her dream aboutprince. I always dream of a half-blood prince coming to me, just like the snowwhite and Cinderella in the fairy tale. I hope there will be a prince wearingwhite clothes to ask me to live happy life with him. And in the following days,I really have a happy life. Why I want a half-blood prince not just prince? Ithink half-blood prince would be more handsome. Hehe.

Dear David,

Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

【翻译】

亲爱的大卫，

我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。

希望能尽快看到你在北京。

此致，

王明

[高考满分英语作文附翻译

The screen of my father’s mobile telephone is broken. When you open the

mobile telephone, the screen is always white with light. You can’t see from the

screen. And my father is a businessman. He needed a new one. So my father and I

went to the electrical appliance shop. There are many new kinds of mobile

telephones. At first, my father chose a Sumsung one. But all the telephones have

sold out. Finally, my father chose a Motorola one.

我父亲的手机屏幕坏了。当你打开手机，屏幕始终是白色光。你不能从屏幕上看到。而我的父亲是个商人。他需要一个新的。所以，我的父亲和我去了电器店。有许多新种移动电话。起初，我的父亲选择了三星。但是，所有的电话都抢购一空。最后，我的父亲选择摩托罗拉公司之一。

如果Parants负起责任，也应受到惩罚，如果他们的孩子表现不好？

事实上，家长在儿童的成长是非常重要的作用。但是，我们不能认为父母应该负起责任，受到惩罚，如果他们的孩子表现不好。否则，这将是不公平的，一些家长，我们应该客观地考虑这个问题。

一些家长教导子女非常小心，告诉他们该怎么做，怎么做，什么是错的，什么是正确的。他们尽量引导他们childrn，为他们提供学习和生活的忠告儿童。随着父母的指令，有些孩子表现得很好。然而，还是孩子谁表现不好。在这种情况下，我们不应该批评孩子的父母，如果他们表现不好。

当然，也有父母，谁是忙着自己的事日夜其他种类，忽略了儿童的教育。虽然他们提供最好的生活，他们的子女，他们忽视教导子女如何正确地思考。在这种情况下，家长应该受到惩罚，如果孩子表现不好。

总之，我们应考虑不同情况，作出客观的决定，对于许多因素可能导致儿童不良行为。也许父母的因素之一。除了上述情况，还有其他。这些父母是谁表现bodly可能导致他们的孩子表现不好。这类父母应该受到惩罚。

因此，不负责任的父母应该受到惩罚。我们应该给予全面考虑这个问题。

[父母教育孩子英语作文翻译

上午，同学们都穿着血红色的班服来到教室，个个都精神抖擞脸上露着神气的笑容，大家都想为班级争光，加紧练习准备在比赛中大显身手，艺术节英语作文。一转眼之间，就到了中午，大家都已迫不及待了，胡乱地吃了几口饭，便回到教室里去了，有的同学在想像着当时的场面，有的在教室里疯玩，还有的在高歌；“我们是共产主义接班人……”突然，李壵坷闯进来喊：“蒋老师来了！”同学们都回到座位上安静地做作业。蒋老师走进教室，说：“把手中的东西放在一边，我们准备化妆了！”“啊！”边柯尖叫起来，兴奋的心情一下子沉重起来，突然边柯像脱缰的野马似的逃离出教室，东躲西藏的。大家都化好了妆，陆续地进入了场地，首先，主持人陈蔚然用流利的英语说了报幕词。301班唱队歌了，他们那嘹亮的歌声传进我们的耳朵里，我们不比你们差呢！我在心里嘀咕着。轮到我们班了！迈着整齐的步伐上了台，合着音乐，指挥员汪婷打起了节拍，响亮的歌声燃起：“我们是共产主义接班人，继承……”结束后，指挥员向评委，观众鞠了一躬，我们便下了台。我和其他七位唱英文歌的同学来到后场换衣服。301班的英文歌结束后，紧接着我们上了台唱英文歌《I’m a Littlesnman》了，跟着音乐，穿着漂亮的公主裙，做着优着的动作，唱着动听的歌曲：“I’m Little teaput，short and stout……”我们大家都感到自豪与骄傲。

这次英语文艺术节圆满结束，但动听的歌声仍在我脑海里飘荡。

Work while you work and play while you play, this is the way to be happy and gay. ”The .Art Festival① held in our school let us have a good time after the hard work of a long term .On Friday afternoon at the end of last term, our class, that is, Class 5 of Senior Two, had a wonderful party to celebrate this happy festival.

First we had music and dance----piano sonata②, exciting songs, brilliant waltz③ dance, then most popular disco④ music, etc, ---- all this made us extremely happy.

Then we had one competition after another. It was soon about five oclock before we knew it. The most exciting program began: Cooking Competition . Each group of our class had to make some special dishes . At once students became cooks, though they coudnt tell the salt from gourmet powder⑤ the day before.

At seven oclock all dishes were ready.“Ah, it tastes wonderfully delicious,”someone shouted. Then here and there applause was heard.

At last we had to finish our party . When we said good-bye to each other, we had the same feeling in our hearts: “We wish to have more and more of such wonderful time in our school life. We young students need to be happy after our lessons . Our life should be filled with joy.”

Our Art Festival

“Work while you work and play while you play, this is the way to be happy and gay. ”The .Art Festival① held in our school let us have a good time after the hard work of a long term .On Friday afternoon at the end of last term, our class, that is, Class 5 of Senior Two, had a wonderful party to celebrate this happy festival.

First we had music and dance----piano sonata②, exciting songs, brilliant waltz③ dance, then most popular disco④ music, etc, ---- all this made us extremely happy.

Then we had one competition after another. It was soon about five oclock before we knew it. The most exciting program began: Cooking Competition . Each group of our class had to make some special dishes . At once students became cooks, though they coudnt tell the salt from gourmet powder⑤ the day before.

At seven oclock all dishes were ready.“Ah, it tastes wonderfully delicious,”someone shouted. Then here and there applause was heard.

At last we had to finish our party . When we said good-bye to each other, we had the same feeling in our hearts: “We wish to have more and more of such wonderful time in our school life. We young students need to be happy after our lessons . Our life should be filled with joy.”

[艺术节英语作文和中文翻译

These years, Internet is becoming more and more important for people. Many students like making friends on the Internet.

However, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, you may meet a good person and he or she can talk and play with you. And he or she may even help you deal with some problems in your life. But on the other hand, our students are really too young, we can not protect ourselves at all!

So I think you’d better make friends in the real world.

[初三英语400字作文

Today I had nothing to do again, so I started to write about my boring

summer days again. I dont have much interest in English since Im Chinese, but

I still have to write these boring summer journals because they are my

assignments from school. Im only doing this assignment because I respect my

English teacher.

参考译文

今天我又无事可干了，所以我又开始写我无聊的夏日了。我不太喜欢英语，因为我是中国人，但我仍然要写这些无聊的暑期刊物，因为它们是我学校的作业。我只是做这个作业，因为我尊敬我的英语老师。

with the development of technology, people can do some operations to make

their faces look prefect, even to look much younger than their real ages. when

we see the commercial ads, we can find the stars look gorgeous, we are so envy

about their young faces. but to me, i think the secret of keeping young is not

by surgery operation, but to keep a healthy lifestyle. today, young people are

living an unhealthy life, they like to stay up and wake up at the noon. young

people form the habit of taking activity at night while sleeping in the day. how

terrible it is, they are damaging their bodies, their bodies will get older than

the normal speed. if people sleep early and wake up in the morning, do some

exercises and keep the balance diet, they will look young. so don’t expect the

surgery to help look young, it is harmful, only the healthy lifestyle does.

随着科技的发展，人们可以通过一些手术来让他们的脸看起来完美，甚至看起来比实际的年龄年轻。当我们看到商业广告时，可以发现明星看起来很漂亮，嫉妒他们年轻的容颜。但是对于我来说，我觉得保持年轻的秘密不是通过外科手术，而是保持健康的生活方式。今天，年轻人的生活方式很不健康，他们喜欢熬夜，中午才起床。年轻人养成了在晚上活动，白天睡觉的习惯。这是多么糟糕啊，他们是在损害自己的身体，他们的身体比正常的速度老化得快。如果人们早睡早起，做运动，保持平衡的饮食，他们会看起来年轻。所以不要期望通过外科手术来变得年轻，那是有害的，唯有健康的生活习惯才能让你年轻。

Today ,my mother and I cleaned the house. I cleaned the windows hard because

it is so dirty. Then I cleaded it again. After that, I cleaned the floor and

swept it. I thought it is dirtier than windows. Then I cleaned the tables and

lots of chairs. We washed all of the clothes and quilts. Until four o`clock, we

tidied all of the rooms up. My room was the cleanest and brightest. I was so

happy and satisfied. Then my mother said: "You`re successful."

今天,我的母亲,我打扫了房间。我擦窗户难的,因为它太脏了。然后我cleaded一遍。之后,我打扫地板和清扫。我认为这是肮脏窗口。然后我打扫桌子和大量的椅子。我们所有的衣服和棉被。4点钟之前,我们整理所有的房间。我的房间是最亮的。我非常高兴并且很满意。然后我母亲说:“你是成功的。”

The caterpillar of the tree outside the window has broken the cocoon into a butterfly, dance, began its life of another starting point, the beginning of the beginning of the beginning of the composition 800 words: school begins. I am also going to high school to start a new journey.

.

Look through the window and watch the sunset. The sun is slowly disappearing from the horizon, less and less. Just like my vacation, its almost over, and the school year begins slowly in the countdown.

Two months of free and unfettered, the new semester is coming. I cant help thinking how quickly the free time passed. Think about it, you can see the students and teachers who have not met for two months, and there is a little excitement in the heart. But, the study that is about to be put into intense study, every day in the question of the ocean flight, seldom have a weekend also cannot relax tone, rest a rest, in the heart add a little bit of anxiety. I was reluctant to say goodbye to my two months of vacation, and how time passed so quickly.

Six years of primary school life is over and will soon be entering secondary school.

High school, a strange and familiar word, it contains a trace of mystery. Once upon a time, I wondered: what would life be like in middle school? Is it nervous? Or something else? Will I be assigned to a class with former primary school students? Will you meet new classmates and be friends? Will your grades be the same as now? Better or less? Everything is uncertain.

There have been numerous fantasies: facing the chaoyang, walking on the road to school; Walking the sunset, walking on the way home. Fresh morning, running on the campus streets; Warm afternoon, walk on the campus path. On the early spring morning, playing with my classmates in the playground. In the summer evening, under the tree of the campus to rehearse programs; On autumn afternoon, read in the school chair; On a winter morning, I have a snowball fight with my classmates and make a snowman... How comfortable these are.

Listen to the adults say, middle school this stage is very important, want to lay a good foundation, later learn to be not tired. There was once a senior (higher grade than me, she is very good, is a very good sister) said to me: "high school is important at this stage, and all are for learning, everything else is secondary." The meaning of senior makes me feel very much. Thank you, senior. Lets cheer together!

The sunset, but tomorrow will rise from the east, I will start my new journey with a new look!

窗外树上的毛毛虫已破茧成蝶，翩翩起舞，开始了它生命的又一个起点。我也即将升入中学，开始人生的新一段路程。

——题记

透过窗户，看着日落。太阳慢慢从地平线消失，越来越少，越来越小。就像我的假期，也快结束了，开学在倒计时中慢慢迎来。

度过了自由自在、无拘无束的两个月，马上要迎来新的学期。不禁感叹道短暂的自由时光过得真快。转念想想，开学后又可以见到两个月未曾谋面的同学和老师，心里就有一丝兴奋。但是，即将投入紧张的学习状态，每天在题海里遨游，难得有个双休日也不能松口气，歇一歇，心里又添了些许焦虑。恋恋不舍的告别了两个月的假期生活，又埋怨时间为什么过得这么快。

六年的小学生活结束了，即将踏入中学。

中学，一个既陌生又熟悉的词，它蕴含着一丝神秘。曾经无数次思考着：中学生活会是什么样的呢？是紧张吗？还是别的什么？会和曾经的小学同学分到一个班吗？会认识新同学并成为朋友吗？上了中学以后学习成绩会和现在一样吗？是更好还是会下降呢？一切都是个未知数。

曾经也无数次幻想：迎着朝阳，走在上学的路上；踏着夕阳，走在回家的路上。清新的早晨，奔跑在校园的街头；温暖的午后，漫步在校园的小路上。初春的早晨，和同学们在操场嬉戏；夏天的傍晚，在校园的大树下排练节目；秋日的午后，在学校的椅子上看书；冬日的上午，和同学们在一起打雪仗、堆雪人……这些是多么惬意。

听大人们说，中学这个阶段很重要，要打好基础，以后学起来才不会累。曾经有一个学姐(她比我高一年级，很优秀，是个非常好的姐姐)对我说：“中学这个阶段很重要，一切要以学习为主，别的都是次要的。”学姐这番意味深长的话，使我有很大的感悟。谢谢你，学姐，那让我们一起加油吧！

夕阳西下，但是明天又将从东方升起，我会以崭新的面貌，开始人生的新一番旅程！

Do you know how my day was spent?

I get up at half past six every morning. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. At this time, my grandma made breakfast for me. After I had finished my meal, I went to school with my bag on my back.

Usually, I go to school by bus. There are a lot of cars to get to our school. However, I like to take the eight bus to go to school. Because the eight way station is close to my home, it is very close to the school.

We have seven classes every day, four in the morning and three in the afternoon. I have lunch at home.

We have Chinese, maths, English, science, sports, art, music and computer. I like every class. So, my study is very good.

We go home at half past five in the afternoon. This is my happiest moment. After I have finished my homework, I can play happily.

Every night, I read a story book and english. Then go to bed.

This is my day. Every day, I am very happy.

你知道我的一天怎样度过的吗？

我每天早上六点半起床。然后，我刷牙洗脸。这时候，奶奶为我做好了早饭。我吃完饭后，就背着书包去上学了。

通常，我上学乘公交车。有很多车可以到达我们学校。但是，我喜欢乘坐八路车上学。因为八路车站离我家很近，离学校也很近。

我们每天有七节课，早上四节，下午三节。我在家吃午饭。

我们有语文课、数学课、英语课、科学课、体育课、艺术课、音乐课、计算机课。我喜欢每一门课。所以，我的学习很好。

下午我们五点半回家。这是我最快乐的时刻。我写完家庭作业后，就可以高兴地玩了。

每天晚上，我还要读故事书和英语。然后，上床睡觉。

这就是我的一天。每天，我都很快乐。

[英语作文翻译我的一天 my day

Today is the first day of the New Year, the morning of fresh air and sunshine, mother took me to feel the New Years day outside the atmosphere. Street vehicle comings and goings, flowing very lively, mother took me to the supermarket to buy things, supermarket bustling, originally people rush to buy New Year gift! My mother said he wanted to buy a toy, I say: "I is the big kid dont car these toys, it would save some money to buy school things," then I will take some learning supplies and a cake billet to do our own cake to celebrate New Years day. On the way back to my grandmas I saw many shops, supermarkets in glass written on New Years day wishes everybody happy, return to my grandmas I took the cake billet and brother in above the text is made. Less than half an hour a nifty bright homemade cake will appear in the present, this is really a happy New Year!

时间如同长了一双翅膀，飞到了年末。可是雪精灵却还未到，没有看到银装素裹的雪景真是可惜。但是一年一度的元旦节却是准时报到，只是年年元旦几乎都一样的度过，今年会有所不同吗?元旦有三天的小长假放，这着实让我开心了一把，要知道初三...

下雪了。在那年元旦，我还在家乡的小城里苦读高三。因为离家较远，元旦的假期时间又短，我只好独自蜷缩在宿舍的一隅。空旷的宿舍，是那样的宁静。透过冷冰冰的窗子，凝望着窗外满世界飞舞的雪花，心中涌动着无限的酸楚和惆怅。

老鼠们准备过一个快乐的元旦，就在这时，一件让人说不出是什么感受的事情发生了。这不，天气越来越冷，老鼠哥哥穿上了小鼠奶奶给做的棉袄，老鼠妹妹也有一件，可是爱美之鼠怎会穿棉袄呢?老鼠哥哥可不爱美，只要能有穿的就行呗，哪里还管...

伴着祥云朵朵，我们送走了XX，送走了旧日烦恼，迎来了新的一年，新的风光。XX年的第一天元旦，已悄然来临。起床了!起床了!妈妈大声的叫喊着，好事就九天之上的雷霆，轰隆隆!真是如雷贯耳!

At the first day of new year, i was so excited that i got up very early in the morning. but mother was earlier than me, and she had gotten the breakfast ready. dumplings, thats my favourite....

The origin of chinese new year chinese new year, pronounced in chinese as xin nian, always falls on the date of marking the beginning of the spring and thus it is also called the spring festival....

我把一束鲜花工工整整地放在自己的胸前，慢慢地走到了演员的身前。献花的我本应该离演员一定距离，走近时要先向演员行队礼，再把花递上去，转身回来前要先退后两步。元旦的晚上，蔡老师带我去电影院听新年音乐会。

今天不知怎么的，乍往街上一看，到处都是红红火火的，张灯结彩，令我实在是纳闷儿，今儿个是什么日子，值得人类这样高兴?不管了，反正是好日子，就出去逛逛吧，反正会有好东西的!

[元旦简短英语作文含翻译

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

what would you do if you failed? many people may choose to give up.

however, the surest way to success is to keep your direction and stick to your

goal.

on your way to success, you must keep your direction. it is just like a

lamp, guiding you in darkness and helping you overcome obstacles on your way.

otherwise, you will easily get lost or hesitate to go ahead.

direction means objectives. you can get nowhere without an objective in

life.

you can try to write your objective on paper and make some plans to achieve

it. in this way, you will know how to arrange your time and to spend your time

properly. and you should also have a belief that you are sure to succeed as long

as you keep your direction all the time.

如果失败了你会怎么做?很多人可能会选择放弃。然而，要想成功，最可靠的方法就是坚持你的方向和目标。

在通往成功的路上，你必须坚持你的方向。它就像一盏灯，在黑暗中为你指路，帮助你度过难关。否则，你很容易就会迷失方向或犹豫不前。

方向意味着目标。人生如果没有目标，将一事无成。

你可以试着把你的目标写在纸上，并制定实现目标的计划。这样，你就会懂得如何合理安排时间，如何正确地支配时间。而且你还要有这样的信念：只要你一直坚持自己的方向，你就一定可以成功。