用英语写我的母亲(实用20篇)

My mother gave birth to me with exceptionally difficult labor. Father received an emergency notice and was faced with a choice between the adult and the infant. Of course,the adult. So my coming into this world was an unexpected fortune at the price of Mothers painful insistence. Thus my 20 years began like this my mother exerted every effort to give me love, but I returned her with a deep scar that was to stay with her all through my growth.

My mother is a senior high school English teacher. Under standably, she wanted her daughter to pick up English early to give her an edge to later study, which I did not understand at the age of eight. I was so obsessed with fun and games that I hated to stay peacefully with all those strange phonetic symbols and odd words. I wondered what pleasure Mother seemed to have found in teaching me A,B, C. Wasnt teaching at school tire some enough for her? I went on strike, refusing to spell a single word no matter how tender or severe Mother tried to be with me. For the first time in my life, Mother beat me, imprinting on my mind. The physical pain was gone long, long ago. But I have finally come to understand how it pained my mother to beat me for my obstinacy and disobedience, and I ache at her pain.

y mother is 35 years old. But I still can see how beautiful she is when she is young. She is not too tall but very thin. Her eyes are black. Her hair is blackand there is several white hair.

She takes me to school every day. In the evening she help me with my homework. If I’m hungry she will cook my favourite meals. She’s always trying to encourage me to try something new. I think my mother is the best person in this world. She is always be there for me when I need her. I love her so much. She is my hero.

My mother is 35 years old. She has long black hair and big eyes. She takes me to school every day. In the evening, she help me with my homework. If I’m hungry, she will cook my favourite meals. She’s always trying to encourage me to try something new. I think my mother is the best person in this world. She is always be there for me when I need her. I love her so much. She is my hero.

我的妈妈今年35岁了。她有着长长的黑发和大大的眼睛。每天，她都送我上学。到了晚上，她辅导我写作业。如果我饿了，她就做我最喜欢的菜给我吃。她总是鼓励我去尝试新的东西。我认为我的妈妈是世界上最好的人。当我需要她的时候她总会在我的身边。我非常爱她。她是我的英雄。

Mother, it is we are thankful people was born. Who is how many years, every day in the laundry to cook for us, who are both in sorching summer, or in the snow after send us to school, and hurried off to work, who is lets us grow from day to day in her arms, and she is getting old, who has raised us, but I do not wish for any return. Is mother! Life, some people are looking for a mothers love, but dont ignore the ubiquity of maternal love!

Remember the night I was only five years old, it was raining, I have a fever, my father on a business trip is not at home, mother picked up I will go to the hospital, my mother in the hospital a night didnt sleep a wink, eyes staring at the bottle of intravenous drip, until my fever is gone, she finally breathed a sigh of relief. Then my mother again give me water, and to buy me a delicious. Looked at his mother busy figure, I secretly in my heart swear: must study hard repay mother.

Another time, just learning English month, I had to 81 points, the bottom of the class. In the face of such scores, I would be ready to get training, returned home after mother knew, not only not scold me, comfort me, dont lose heart, and now the English course at the beginning, as long as you listen more from now on, read more, write more, practice more. Performance will improve soon. Mother said. This time is I overlooked your English study, later I accompany you a piece of learning. This situation really than scold me, hit me also makes me uncomfortable. From then on, no matter how busy mom, always "nutrition" for me, everything comes to him who waits, the mid-term exam, I achieved good scores of 95 points.

Mother, you have to use solid arms hold up a piece of blue sky for me, when I am frustrated fall, is the care you with infinite comfort me, encouraged me, so I can stand up again. Today, I will use my growing plump wings for you -- -- my mother from the rain.

母亲，是我们一出生都值得感恩的人。多少个岁月，是谁每天起早贪黑的为我们洗衣做饭，是谁无论在炎炎夏日，还是在冰天雪地送我们上学之后，又匆匆赶去上班，是谁让我们在她的臂弯一天天成长，而她却一天天变老，是谁养育了我们，却不求任何的回报。是母亲!生活中，有些人在寻找着母爱，却不忽略了无处不在的母爱!

记得5岁那年的一天晚上，天下着雨，我发烧了，父亲出差不在家，母亲抱起我就去医院，在医院里妈妈一宿没合眼，两眼一直盯着瓶子里的点滴，直到我的发烧退了，妈妈才长舒了一口气。接着妈妈又是给我喂水，又是给我买好吃的。看着妈妈忙碌的身影，我暗暗在心里发誓：一定要努力学习报答妈妈。

还有一次，刚学英语月考时，我只得了81分，全班倒数几名。面对这样的分数，我做好了挨训的准备，回到家妈妈知道后，不但没有训我，反而安慰我，不要灰心，现在英语这门课刚开始，只要你从现在开始多听，多读，多写，多练习。成绩会提高很快。妈妈还说。这段时间是我忽略了你的英语学习，以后我陪你一块学。这情景真比骂我，打我还令我难受。从那以后，妈妈不管多忙，总是为我“补充营养”，功夫不负有心人，期中考试时，我取得了95分的好成绩。

母亲，您曾用坚实的臂弯为我撑起一片蓝天，当我受到挫折跌倒时，是您用无限的关怀安慰我，鼓励我，使我能重新站起来。而今，我也要用我日益丰满的羽翼为您————我的妈妈遮风挡雨。

一、假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天 你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记。

上午 你用零花钱给母亲买了些鲜花，放在花瓶内

下午 你去市场买菜，为全家人做了一顿简单可口的饭菜

完饭后 你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡，并祝她节日快乐；告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康，不要过度劳累；你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动；母亲感动得留下了眼泪

注意：

1. 词数80—100 个左右

2. 日记的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

3. 日记必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可以假如适当细节和适当发挥，使其通顺、连贯。

参考词汇：pocket money 零花钱vase 花瓶overwork 过度劳累be moved to tears 感动得流泪

11th May Sunday

Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.

In the morning, I bought …

….

Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.

作文一：

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong. Therefore, I could face difficulties.

When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise. Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties. But whenever I was frustrated, my mothers eyes always

gave me hope and encouragement. Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons. Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better. At last I overcame the difficulty. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。那双眼睛能洞察我的心情，给我鼓励，促我坚强，因此我能面对一切困难。

孩提学步时，妈妈总是帮助我，鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠地扑进她怀抱时，她的双眼充满了赞扬之情。成长过程中，我遇到了很多困难，但灰心失望时，妈妈的双眼总给我以希望和鼓励。一次我考试不及格，妈妈没有责备我，而是鼓励我找出原因，提高我的成绩。最后我终于度过了难关。现在，我长大了，不用再让她操心了。但每当遇到挫折时，妈妈的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

作文二：

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her eyes will encourage me and help me cheer up.

When I began learning to walk, mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to stand up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes Smiled with praise. Aftei I entered the school, mothers eyes still encouraged me. Once I failed my Chinese exam, my mother helped me find out the reasons instead of blaming me. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我的母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。每当我遇到困难时，这双眼睛总是鼓励我，帮我振作起来。

在我开始学走路时，母亲总是帮助我，鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠扑进她怀抱时，她的双眼充满赞扬之情。我长大上学后，母亲的眼睛仍旧鼓励我。一次，我语文考试不及格，母亲没有责备我，而是帮助我找出原因。现在，我长大了，不再让她操心了。但每当我遇到挫折时，母亲的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

My mother is a kind and gentle woman。 She is always very gentle。 She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school。 I have two brothers and two sisters。 So she gets five children in all。 She gives us every comfort we need。 We all love her very much。

My mother has too much to do in bring us up。 As our family is not rich enough， my mother always hits to do a lot of work。 She gets up very early and sleeps very late every day。 She works very hard， yet without complaining。

My mother is also a thrifty and industrious woman。 She saves every penny that she can to keep everything in order。 As she has been busy ever since she was young， she looks older than she really is。 Her face is wrinkled， her hair becomes silver white， some of her teeth become movable。 But she works as hard as ever。

My mother often says to us，" work while you work， play while you play。 If you did not work， you will become lazy and of no use to the society。" What a good piece of advice it is！ We must worth it well and always keep it in our minds。

[描写自己母亲的英语作文

I came back to school after the summer vacation. As soon as I settled down, I made a phone call to my mother. When I talked to her, I could not hold back my tears. “After all,” I said, “You’re my mother.”

During the vacation, mother and I had a quarrel. After that we were unwilling to talk with each other. She thought I was her sweet daughter and I believed that she did not respect me. Then after few days, I left home. My mother gave me a full package of home-make food and she said to me, “I cook this morning, take this then you can have it on the train.” However, I refuse to take it. I just turned away and slam the door without saying goodbye to my mother. I was still angry about her. “You’re still my good girl.” My mother said in a low voice chocked with sob.

On the train I could not eat anything, I felt terrible. How I wish I had said sorry to my mother before I left. Now all I want to say is, will you forgive me, my dear mother?

暑假结束后，我回到了学校。我一稳定下来，我就立刻打电话给我的母亲。当我和她说话时，眼睛止不住流了下来。我对她说，“毕竟，你是我的母亲。”

在假期的时候，我和妈妈吵了一架。从那以后我们都不愿意和对方说话了。她认为我不再是那个甜美可爱的女孩了。几天后，我就离开了家。走之前，妈妈给了我一大包自己做的食品，她对我说：“我今早煮的，你拿着在火车上吃吧。”然后，我拒绝了妈妈的一片好心。然后我转过身狠狠的摔上门走了。也没有对她说再见。我还在生她的气。“你依旧是我的好女儿。”她用低沉的声音抽泣着说。

在火车上我吃不下任何东西，我感觉很内疚。我真希望在离家之前对我妈妈说声抱歉啊。现在我只想说：我最亲爱的母亲，你愿意原谅我么？

[我的母亲英语作文以及翻译

My mother is a woman of the old school. She is too conservative to keep up

with the times. However, she is goodnatured and treats others sincerely. For

this reason, all her neighbors are only too glad (pleased) to make friends with

her.

They consider her a model woman.She is a typical housewife. She keeps the

(her) house neat and clean and looks after us with extreme care . She often says

to us, “You cannot study too hard.”

The mother‘s day is coming and I would like to say "Happy mother‘s day" in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day, I will stay away and can‘t give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself, so don‘t worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can‘t be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother‘s day.

Love,

Your son

母亲节快到了,我想说“母亲节快乐”这封信。我爱你,谢谢你为我做的一切。这一天,我将离开,在家不能给你我的谢意。我知道我将关注自己,所以不要担心我。我在我的研究做得很好。我的同学和老师都很好。虽然我不能在家里,我希望你有一个美好的母亲节。

爱,

你的儿子

初中英语作文：写给母亲的感谢信

My dearest Mother，

The mothers day is coming and I would like to say "Happy mothers day" in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day，I will stay away and cant give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself，so dont worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I cant be at home， I hope you have a wonderful mothers day.  Love，

Your son

Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mothers Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our . you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that the mother is only lover .please accept our appreciate again

I hope that you have happiness everyday.

Mum：

Such is sons nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a days hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade andI love you mum！

It was Mother’s Day.Sun Zheng thought he should do something for

hismother.He decided to help his mother do some housework.After school he went

toa shop to buy some food on his way home.

When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he

couldn’tdo the cooking well.Thenhe cleaned the room.He felt very tired, but he

wasvery happy.

When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and

disheswhich weren’t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper

together.Hismother said, "Thank you,my child!"

Night after night, she came to tuck me in, even long after my childhood years. Following her longstanding custom, shed lean down and push my long hair out of the way, then kiss my forehead.

I dont remember when it first started annoying me —— her hands pushing my hair that way. But it did annoy me, for they felt work-worn and rough against my young skin. Finally, one night, I lashed out at her: "Dont do that anymore —— your hands are too rough!" She didnt say anything in reply. But never again did my mother close out my day with that familiar expression of her love. Lying awake long afterward, my words haunted me. But pride stifled my conscience, and I didnt tell her I was sorry.

Time after time, with the passing years, my thoughts returned to that night. By then I missed my mothers hands, missed her goodnight kiss upon my forehead. Sometimes the incident seemed very close, sometimes far away. But always it lurked, hauntingly, in the back of my mind.

Well, the years have passed, and Im not a little girl anymore. Mom is in her mid-seventies, and those hands I once thought to be so rough are still doing things for me and my family. Shes been our doctor, reaching into a medicine cabinet for the remedy to calm a young girls stomach or soothe a boys scraped knee. She cooks the best fried chicken in the world…… gets stains out of blue jeans like I never could……and still insists on dishing out ice cream at any hour of the day or night.

Through the years, my mothers hands have put in countless hours of toil, and most of hers were before automatic washers!

Now, my own children are grown and gone. Mom no longer has Dad, and on special occasions, I find myself drawn next door to spend the night with her. So it was that late on Thanksgiving Eve, as I drifted into sleep in the bedroom of my youth, a familiar hand hesitantly stole across my face to brush the hair from my forehead. Then a kiss, ever so gently, touched my brow.

In my memory, for the thousandth time, I recalled the night my surly young voice complained: "Dont do that anymore —— your hands are too rough!" Catching Moms hand in hand, I blurted out how sorry I was for that night. I thought shed remember, as I did. But Mom didnt know what I was talking about. She had forgotten —— and forgiven —— long ago.

That night, I fell asleep with a new appreciation for my gentle mother and her caring hands. And the guilt I had carried around for so long was nowhere to be found.

In this world, there is a broad selfless love, everywhere, do you feel? When we babble, when we learn to walk, when we grow up. Who is it? Has been protecting us, teach us to be? - the parents! We should not Thanksgiving our parents?

So, how should we treat our parents? It should return with the heart of Thanksgiving our parents. Actually, this kind of ubiquitous love is life in the small truths, mother, got up very early every day, for we do breakfast, I together to eat hot food, not only that, we go to school, but also of housekeeping at home, we have to point to shuttle from school. Dont we should return our mother? Father works in the outside work, earn money to maintain life, dont go home, dad came home after only a few days, his friend for his drink, he refused. Because he wants to accompany me at home, we should not repay our father?

Actually, we want to return our parents, does not have to do something, as long as small truths in life to help parents do something, obey them. This is the greatest return to their parents, they know: my children to grow up.

All the parents poor heart! In these 11 years, my parents dont know how much sweat for us. But, we know that these? As long as you are with a grateful heart, you will find this invisible love.

Hundred good filial first, lets return for our parents.

在这个世界上，有一种宽广无私的爱，无处不在的情，你感受到了吗?当我们呀呀学语的时候，当我们学走路的时候，当我们长大之后。是谁?一直在呵护我们，教我们做人?——是父母!我们不应该感恩我们的父母吗?

那么，我们应该怎样对待我们的父母呢?那就应该以感恩的心回报我们的父母。其实，这种无处不在的情就是生活中一件件小事，母亲，每天起得很早很早，为我们做好早饭，我一起来就可以吃到热乎乎的饭菜，不但如此，我们上学之后，还要在家操劳家务，到点还要接送我们放学。难道我们不应该回报我们的母亲吗?父亲在外边打工干活，挣钱维持生活，长年不回家，父亲回家之后也只能住几天，他的朋友找他喝酒，他拒绝了。因为他要在家陪我，我们不应该报答我们的父亲吗?

其实，我们想要回报我们的父母，并不一定要做出什么大事，只要在生活中一件件小事中帮父母干点什么，顺从一点他们。这就是对父母最大的回报了，他们知道了：自己的孩子长大了。

可怜天下父母心呀!这11年来，父母不知道为我们付出了多少血汗。可是，我们知道这些吗?只要你怀着一颗感恩的心，你就会发现这种无形的爱。

百善孝为先，让我们回报我们的父母吧。

Once upon a time there was a child ready to be born. So one day he asked God, "They tell me you are sending me to earth tomorrow, but how am I going to live there being so small and helpless?"

从前，有个孩子马上就要降生了。于是有一天他问上帝：“听说明天您就送我去人间了，但是，我这么弱小和无助，我在那儿怎么生活呢?”

God replied, "Among the many angels, I chose one for you. She will be waiting for you and will take care of you."

上帝答道：“在众多的天使中，我特别为你挑了一位。她会在那里守候你，无微不至地照顾你。”

But the child wasnt sure he really wanted to go. "But tell me, here in Heaven, I dont do anything else but sing and smile, thats enough for me to be happy."

小孩还是不确定自己是否真的想去：“但是在天堂，我除了唱唱笑笑外，什么也不做，这就足以让我感到幸福了。”

"Your angel will sing for you and will also smile for you every day. And you will feel your angels love and be happy."

“你的天使每天会为你唱歌，每天对你微笑。你会感受到她的爱，并且因此而幸福。”

"And how am I going to be able to understand when people talk to me," the child continued, "If I dont know the language that men talk?"

“如果我不懂人类的语言，他们跟我说话时，我怎么听得懂呢?”孩子继续问道。

God patted him on the head and said, "Your angel will tell you the most beautiful and sweet words you will ever hear, and with much patience and care, your angel will teach you how to speak."

上帝轻轻地拍了一下孩子的头说：“你的天使会对你说最最美丽、最最动听的话语，而这些都是你从未听过的。她会不厌其烦地教你说话。”

"And what am I going to do when I want to talk to you?"

“如果我想与你说话怎么办?”

But God had an answer for that question too. "Your angel will place your hands together and will teach you how to pray."

上帝胸有成竹地回答：“你的天使会将你的双手合拢，教你如何祈祷。”

"Ive heard that on earth there are bad men, who will protect me?"

“听说下界有很多坏人，谁来保护我呢?”

"Your angel will defend you even if it means risking her life!"

“即使冒着生命危险，你的天使也会保护你的。”

"But I will always be sad because I will not see you anymore," the child continued warily.

“但是见不到你，我会难过的。”小孩小心翼翼说道。

God smiled on the young one. "Your angel will always talk to you about me and will teach you the way for you to come back to me, even though I will always be next to you."

听到这儿，上帝微笑着看着孩子。“尽管我会一直陪伴你左右，你的天使仍会向你提起我，教你重返天堂之路。”

At that moment there was much peace in Heaven, but voices from earth could already be heard. The child knew he had to start on his journey very soon. He asked God one more question, softly, "Oh God, if I am about to leave now, please tell me my angels name."

此时，天堂一片宁静，凡间的声音已可听到，小孩明白自己得赶紧上路了。他又轻声问了最后一个问题：“哦，上帝，假如我现在就出发，请你告诉我，我的天使叫什么名字?”

God touched the child on the shoulder and answered, "Your angels name is not hard to remember. You will simply call her Mommy."

上帝把手放在小孩的肩上，答道：“你的天使的名字很容易记住，你就叫她--妈妈。”

My mother is the greatest person in the world. She takes care of the family and does all the housework. I never want to make her angry.

But sometimes I will do something let her down and when I see her upset face, I feel painful.

So I am very strict to myself, I want to be an excellent girl and let her be proud of me. So, I can see her smile often.

[我的母亲英语作文优秀

Todays weather very good, God deliberately arranged. This particular day, blue skies, the number of words "Happy Mothers Day" reverberated in the ears.

From early in the morning, I mope, because it can not think of what gift to give mother. Later, I came up with in my opinion the best gift for mother. First to see Mother, I sang loudly: "Mother, Mothers Day Happiness! The world is only a good mother, there is the mother of the child as-bao block." Singing, leaves itself a son and mothers arms, "dropped into the embrace of mother, and ultimately, happy ... ... "Mother died in Iraq last year, with deep feeling with me, Staring at me, eyes full of love and caress. Looked thoughtful, I grew up my mother smile ... ...

Mother, in fact, you know, daughter wanted to tell you there is worth a thousand words, but there are also all into this beautiful melody, which Beat notes the go. Here not only has his daughters aspirations, more daughters are infinite gratitude to you, sincere love.

People will have a total support of our total love for us there is a touching, heartbreaking. Ah! Mother, you like an umbrella, an umbrella unusual. Summer, for me keep off the sun, winter, let me escape the harsh wind and snow.

If you love the sun, let you love your mother, because there is no ray of sunshine than the warmth of maternal love; If you love wind, let you love your mother, because there is no more than a gentle breeze gentle motherly love ... ... ... If you love, please you love your mother, because all the world than maternal love everything tenacity, great, honest ...

【翻译】

今天的天气真好，是上帝刻意安排.这个特殊的日子里，晴空万里，多少句"母亲节快乐"回荡在耳边.

从早晨开始，我就闷闷不乐，因为实在想不到要给妈妈什么礼物.后来，我想出了我认为最好的礼物送给妈妈.一见到妈妈，我就大声唱道："妈妈，母亲节快乐!世上只有妈妈好，有妈的孩子像块宝."唱着，一子扑到妈妈的怀里，"投进妈妈的怀抱，幸福少不了……"妈妈泪如泉涌,深情地抱着我，凝望着我,眼里充满慈爱和爱抚.看着懂事的我，长大的我，妈妈会心一笑……

妈妈，其实您知道的，女儿有千言万语想要对您说，然而，也全部溶入到这美妙的旋律，跳动 的音符当中去了.这里不仅有女儿的心声，更多的是女儿对您无限的感激，真挚的爱.

总有一个人将我们支撑，总有一种爱让我们感动，心痛.啊!母亲，您就像一顶伞，一顶不平凡的伞.夏天，为我遮挡猛烈的阳光，冬天，让我躲避严厉的风雪.

如果你爱阳光，就请你爱你的母亲，因为世上没有一缕阳光比母爱温暖;如果你爱和风，就请你爱你的母亲，因为没有一阵微风比母爱温柔……如果你爱…，就请你爱你的母亲，因为世上一切的一切都比不上母爱坚韧，伟大，淳朴……

A Letter to My Mom

Dear Mom，

I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.

Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?

However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.

Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.

Love,

Daughter

专家点评：

通过这封写给母亲的信，作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比，阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了，正文欲扬先抑，强调对“tiger training”的赞同，依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰，观点明了，逻辑性强，行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富，长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式，保证长短错落有致。

[有关写给母亲的一封信英语作文

My mother was once a beautiful woman, but all her teeth are gone now. Toothless. No woman can be considered beautiful. Whenever I visit her in the nursing home, she is sitting at the table in the common dining room, her head in her hands, rocking. Medication has eased her anxiety, but nothing moves her from her stupor except occasional moments of fear, too deep for medication. This is a room that has no windows, that lets in no light, in which an overlarge TV is constantly blaring, sending images that no one looks at where the floors are beige tiles, the walls cream colored at the bottom, papered halfway up with a pattern of nearly invisible grayish leaves. Many of the residents sit staring, slack-jawed, open mouthed. I find it impossible to imagine what they might be looking at.

When I walk into the dining room on the day of my mothers birthday, I see that she has already been served lunch. The staff has forgotten to hold it back. Though I told them a week ago that I would be providing lunch. She hasn’t touched anything on her tray except a piece of carrot cake, which she holds in her hands. The icing is smeared on her hands and face. I dont want my friends to see her smeared with icing, so I wet a paper towel and wipe her. This fills me with a terrible tenderness, recalling, as it does. a gesture I have performed for my children. As I wipe my mothers face, I see that her skin is still beautiful I hold her chin in my hand and kiss her forehead. I tell her its her birthday, that shes ninety years old. "How did that happen?" she asks. "I cant understand how that could happen."

l have brought her a bouquet of crimson, yellow, and salmon-pink snapdragons. She likes the flowers very much. She likes the name. "Snapdragons. It seems like an animal thats going to bite inc. But its not an animal, its a plant. Thats a funny thing,"

I have bought food that I hope will please my mother, and that will be easy for her to eat: orzo salad with little pieces of crayfish cut into it, potato salad, small chunks of marinated tomatoes. I have bought paper plates with a rust-colored background, upon which are painted yellow and gold flowers and blue leaves.

My friends Nola and Gary come for my mothers birthday. When we are about to leave, I tell my mother that Im going on vacation, mat I wont see her for three weeks, that 1 am going to the sea. "How will I stand that, how will I stand thats she says, but I know that a minute after I’m gone shell forget I was there.

Today is Monday. My father and my sisters are getting ready for a birthday party because Tuesday is my mother’s birthday. First we go to the shop and buy some new clothes. Then we go to book a very big cake. After that we go to the supermarket and buy some food and snacks. Next we go to the gift shop and buy some presents. Finally we go back home to decorate our house.

On Tuesday evening, we invite our grandma and grandpa to join the party. Then our father takes our mother to the party. ‘Happy birthday!’ We say together. `Oh! Thanks!’ Mum says very happily. Dad says:’ we bought some new clothes for you.’ After that we give our presents to her.

The big meal and cake are ready. We have a big meal and drink some cola. Mum starts to cut the birthday cake. The cake is very big and very delicious. It is a strawberry cake.

We all enjoy our meal and cake. My mother says: ‘What a nice day!’

[英语作文：母亲的生日