议论文英语作文模板高中【优秀20篇】

Since we go to school, the teachers educate us to be a better person, they

tell us that we must study hard, so that we can be the useful person. Many

students confuse about what is the useful person. In my opinion, the useful

person must have the good merit.

A person with the kind heart is favored by everyone and he has the sense to

serve others. The bad person will bring danger to others, even to the society.

The most important thing of the useful person is to make a contribution to the

society.

They will make full use of their knowledge and be proud of serving for the

society. Our premier Zhou stated his purpose of learning knowledge was to make

our country rise. He did it and he became the great person. Becoming the useful

person is not easy, we should fight for it.

Nowadays, as the development of high technology, people like to use

computer, they use computer to read the news, to play the game and so on. Now

more and more computer functions have been developed, people like to do business

on the computer, it saves people a lot of time and it is very convenient.

Shopping online is most people’s choice today, but it has disadvantages. First,

the products will be not in good quality, people can’t touch the products, they

only can see the pictures, so they can’t figure out the real products’ quality.

Second, when people pay the money online, they will have the chance to leak out

their message, their online account will be attacked by the hackers and thus to

lose the money. Of course, shopping online is more and more popular, we must

take care of personal message when shopping online.

当你被别人撞倒后，一句“对不起”是否能解除你心中的气愤?当你默然无助的时候，一个简单的动作，能否融化你心中的坚冰?当你左右为难的时刻，一个不经意的抉择，是否可以帮你排忧解难?

记得那天是元旦，班里举行文艺节目表演，“老班”让我当主持人。主持人嘛，一身得体的衣服是必不可少的，我在家挑来挑去，还是穿着那条白色的水洗裤子上了战场。

文艺节目表演完，我班是要和二班进行一场足球比赛的。当我班和二班队员进入球场时，天上飘起了蒙蒙细雨，但我们丝毫没有退缩，迎着风雨向对方发起攻击。今天是怎么啦?一项攻击力很强的我们班怎么被二班的集密攻击打败啦，我早已按捺不住，要求换到前锋，眼看球要进门啦，我一个箭步冲上去，哈球落点极佳，真是个好时机，我一个“大力飞脚“踢过去，随即，“哎呦“一声刺入我耳膜，我定睛一看，我哪踢到什么球呢?原来一脚踹到了二班一个死对头身上，再看她的衣服，黄色的运动裤上一个鲜亮的脚印。还没等我反应过来，那女孩便向我腿上踹两脚，对我大吼：“干什么?你没长眼睛?“要是平时，我一定找她讨回公道，可这时，我却意外的冷静下来了。

比赛继续进行……

比赛结束了，我班以3：1大胜二班，当我回家的时候，看到墙角有人在修自行车，那背影好熟悉，好像刚刚才见过的，我走近说：“我帮你吧!“那人转过脸来，是刚才那女孩，“要知道是她我就不帮了。“我小声咕哝着。但我还是走过去，帮她修好了自行车，转身离开了。

在回家的路上，我仔细回想着刚才所发生的一切，终于想明白刚才为什么会冷静下来因为我已经读懂了宽容。

海阔凭鱼跃，天高任鸟飞。当被别人误解时，一个多情的解释，可以减少彼此间的矛盾。

我读懂了宽容。

[以包容为题的议论文作文

日记是用来叙述一天中发生的有意义事件的文体。

第一，注意日记的格式：一般是左上角写当天的日期，右上角写当天的天气情况(cloudy/clear/windy/rainy/fine/snowy…)。日期通常采用两种写法：一种是按“月、日、年”顺序；另一种是按“日、月、年”的顺序。注意要在年份之前有一个逗号，而且月份通常可用缩写词（如：Jan.,Feb.,Mar.等）。如果需要写星期，可将其写在日期的前面或后面。如：Monday,May15th,2008或May15th,2008,Monday

第二，抓准日记的时态：日记记叙的时间通常是在当天的下午或晚上，因此所用的时态多为过去时态。但应灵活掌握，如果日记叙述天气、描写景色或为了描写生动，也可用现在时。

第三，日记一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所以常需借助一些表示先后顺序的词语，如atfirst,then,lateron,afterwards,finally,atlast等。一定要注意句与句、段与段之间的连接和过渡，适当使用一些过渡词语使其连接紧凑、过渡自然。

第四，确立日记的中心要点，尽量突出主题，可以通过对某个细节、某个侧面的描写来突出主题，千万不要写成一个流水帐。

莫让浮云遮望眼

"不识庐山真面目，只缘身在此山中。"数百年前，文人们就通过朗朗上口的诗歌告诫后人，对待事物要站在正确的角度，切不可让其他因素干扰了你对真相的审视。

宋人的墙为雨淋坏，儿子与邻翁对他做出了相同的提醒:"修好墙，以防盗。"盗贼果真光顾后，宋人称赞起儿子的先知先觉，却怀疑邻翁的手脚是否干净。同样的提醒，为何招来截然不同的态度，恐怕宋人正是被感情上的亲疏蒙蔽了双眼吧!自古以来，人们就颇为重视感情因素对事件成功与否的影响。"打虎亲兄弟，上阵父子兵。"诚然，感情上的亲密对事业的成功也许会起到一定作用，然而，在认知事物本质上，感情上的亲疏有时也会给人带来错觉以及误导。国外科学家曾做过试验，让试验者在一组照片中选出长像最符合审美标准的一张，结果受测者选出的容貌多与自己亲友相近。排除个人审美观念不谈，生活的耳儒目染对人的影响可见一斑。

视觉的评判尚且如此，事物本质的洞察更何以堪?自古以来多少人在感情因素上受到了蒙蔽。西晋王室广封王，欲使天下尽归司马氏之手，殊不知诸公之中良萎不齐，终于导致八王之乱、五胡乱中原的下场。三国中孔明因对马谩偏爱有加，忘却先主对马谩"华而不实"的评价，委以重任，终使《出师表》空有"真名世"，也不免"长使英雄泪满襟"。

如今，不也有领导干部任人唯亲、从而祸起萧墙的事例吗?可见，认知事物，为人处世，若戴上感情的有色眼镜，危害大矣!

"不畏浮云遮望眼，只缘身在层。"若要不被感情上好恶的云雾蒙蔽，身在高处，眼观四方不失为好的方法。岳家军威震四海，正是由于岳飞超越亲情，以军规处罚岳云，军风大肃，才有了"撼泰山易，撼岳家军难"的美谈。孔明事后挥泪斩马谩，以肃军纪，才没有因感情亲疏而再误军国大事。

一个公正的决断往往是建立在理性观察和思索基础上的。而摆脱感情上的干扰则是做出正确理性评价的先决因素。

也许真正完全超越情感的决定难以做出，然而，三思而后行，从多个角度思考是可以尽量避免感情上的误导。现今我国法规制度中"回避"和"协商"原则不正是对理性处事的指导和提倡吗?

"横看成岭侧成峰，远近高低各不同。"从各个方面的理性观察，将帮助我们迈过感情的误区，真正认识到事物的复杂与多变性。而在一览无余的层，摆脱情感辑绊的我们，或许可以长吟:"莫让浮云遮望眼

Mid-Autumn Day，all the country is celebrating。 The streets are full of people， the loves are holding each other tightily。Everyone has his day。However，I am lonely。No one to hold，no one to kiss，no one to talk!

I was walking around the street without purpose，seeing the lovers kissing，watching the fireworkes alone，walking backe room whist。

Suddenly，i think i must be good to myself。So i decied to bue a present to myself。I know I will be good soon，and will find my Mr。Right。So tonight， a little teddy bear will sleep with me。And i know:i will have another teddy bear as a present that not bought from myself!

中秋节，全国各地都在庆祝。街上到处都是人，爱情紧紧相依。每个人都有他的一天。但是，我很孤独。没有人可以抱，没有人亲吻，没有人来谈论!

我无条件地走在街上，看到恋人们亲吻，独自看着烟火，走回来的房间。

突然间，我觉得我必须对自己好。所以我决定给自己一件礼物。我知道我很快就会好起来的，会找到我的Mr.Right。所以今晚，一只小泰迪熊会和我一起睡觉。我知道：我会买另一只泰迪熊作为礼物而不是我自己买的!

自己选的路，跪着也要走完——题序

还记得三个星期前，我刚升入高一时的兴奋激动，那时我就想，我要抛开中招时的败绩，在高中开创我人生的辉煌。可是我却发现我的成绩依然很差，我就想知道，学霸究竟是怎样炼成的。

“我在想，不管付出多大的代价，付出多少光阴，我都要超过他们”。演讲台上，刘嘉森学长正在为我们讲述他学习的经历，他的家乡只是河北的一个小村庄，当他进入衡中时，他与我一样，亦是怀着满腔的热情去学习，但当他听到了周围同学的自我介绍后，他才知道天外有天。在他班里，有同学获得过奥数奖，有同学获得过国家英语演讲比赛的奖，还有同学早已把高中数学预习完了。他的热情被熄灭了，但他并没有因此气馁，随之而来的是他不断地拼搏，不断地奋斗。从年级568名到年级第1名，可想而知，要拉开如此大的差距，要超越那么多比他更优秀的人，他付出了多少心血多少汗水。我坐在台下，目光紧紧地跟随着刘嘉森学长，我似乎明白了些什么。

正如刘嘉森学长说的“如果我没有成功，唯一的原因是我没有拼尽全力去努力奋斗”。这句话在我心上深深地烙下了印记，我的成绩这么差，究竟是因为所学的知识太难，还是我从来就没有真正的努力过，或者我那所谓的“努力”只是一种虚幻的自我安慰罢了。“真正努力是明明只剩半小时，你已经虚脱了，但你必需还要挤出一丝力气去完成那半小时的计划。”但有人却会问，为什么要这么努力呢？如今这么现实的社会，寒门出贵子的情况又怎会发生呢？

那马云呢？难道他从小就是含着金汤匙长大的吗？不，我们所有人都清楚地知道他曾是一个地地道道的农民，并且高考连续考了三次。他能够上大学也只能用侥幸两个字来评论，就是这样一个人，他成为了中国首富，他成为了我们所有人的榜样，他成为了我们所有人赞叹不已的对象。他是怎么成为这样让人引以为傲的人呢？答案只有一个——他一直在一步一个脚印的去奋斗。所以，他，马云成为了站在山巅之上的人。

因此，我们每个人的机会都是平等的，如今我们能做的就是努力拼搏，努力奋斗，让自己的人生焕发出鲜亮的光彩。

“当时我就在发愁，我应该是去上清华还是去上北大呢？”当刘嘉森学长说完这句话后，在座的每位学生无一不发出惊叹的声音，我也因此感受到了自己的微不足道，与他相比，我何止是小巫见大巫，我有与他相提并论的资格吗？但我不想如此渺小，我也不甘心，别人都能做到的事，我又凭什么做不到，我也想有一天能够有春风得意马蹄疾，一日看见长安花的喜悦，群英见我皆俯首，雄心壮志搏世间的傲然，秦王扫六合，虎视何雄哉的成就。但我知道，唯有奋斗，才是我通向这些的唯一出路。

只要在学校努力奋斗三年，我便可以改变我的整个人生，我便有权利去过自己梦寐以求的生活，我便有底气去做我原来想都不敢想的事。

在这大千世界中，我们不过是寄蜉蝣于天地，渺沧海之一粟，但是我不甘心就如此平庸，我什么都没有，有的只是我自己，我现在能做的就是单枪匹马在自己的人生中杀出一条路来。只有奋斗，才能在广阔的天空中留下自己的痕迹。我不怕因为奋斗使自己满身伤痕。唯怕自己因无所事事而成为一个虚无的人。

听君一席话，胜读十年书，刘嘉森学长短暂而又怡然理顺的演讲结束了，我也明白了那个问题的答案：每个人不是天生就是学霸的，他们之所以会有这样一个代言词，仅仅是因为他们一直在奋斗。我敬佩这样的人，我想成为这样的人，我终会成为这样的人。

唯有奋斗。

Its about one and a half month away from the Chinese New Year, It is a festival celebrated by the Chinese people at the beginning of the lunar calendar year.

As of the Chinese traditional customs, our parents and grandparents will sweep every corner of the house and clean the windows until they gleam, and washing clothes, buying foods and goods for the new years future use and presents.

Children will be the most benefited group during this feast period. One month before that, they are expecting the new clothes, delicious foods. The firecrackers and the years allowance for their increased ages.

In recent years, with the rising of the standard of life, Chinese tend to make various holiday plans to spend a different and meaningful new year. Such as traveling abroad, or be absorbed in their hobbies, and even work.

Why today we try to spend our Chinese new year in such a different way? I think thats because this is a era of free life and personality high-ranking. Though there are still something traditional, our young generation is attempting to make something new and suitable for ourselves. And we would like to take something really worth to be cherished in our memorable treasures. Thats amazing and wonderful!

Ill always keep in mind that the Chinese new year is a great feast inherited from our ancestors, but if necessary, I would like to enjoy it by some ways personal.

last week i went to mount emei in sichuan province with my family. early in the morning, we took a taxi to beijing west railway station. the station was very lively.

half an hour later, we got on the train. on the train, we had a lot of fun. after 26 hours, we reached sichuan. there, we took many photos and had a goodtime. 5 days later, we came back to the beijing. even though my travel seemed really short, but my memory of the pleasant trip will last long.

【翻译】

上周我去峨眉山在四川省与我的家人。清晨，我们乘坐一辆出租车到北京西站。车站很热闹。

半小时后，我们上了火车。在火车上，我们有很多的乐趣。26个小时后，我们到达了四川。在那里，我们拍了许多照片，还不错。5天之后，我们回到了北京。即使我的旅行似乎很短，但我的愉快的记忆将持续很久。

五十六个民族，五十六枝花，五十六族兄弟姐妹是一家，正如这首歌中所唱，中国是一个拥有五十六个民族的泱泱大国，民族团结是一条重要的发展大计。

新疆更是一个多民族的聚集区，在这里民族团结显得非常重要。7?5事件之后，三个离不开成了这里的发展之大计。汉族离不开少数民族，少数民族离不开汉族，各少数民族之间相互离不开。

是啊，只有各民族团结一心，祖国才会有今天的辉煌!只有民族团结了，经济才能更迅速的发展;只有民族团结了，才不会发生昨天的悲剧;只有民族团结了，人民才会安居乐业。我们中华民族才能真正地，走向社会主义的伟大复兴。

纵观千百年来的民族发展史，我国自古以来就是一个多民族的国家，共有56个兄弟民族，生活在这片辽阔而富饶的土地上。各民族都有悠久的历史和丰富的文化，各有自己的文化传统、语言文字、宗教信仰和风俗习惯。尽管各民族之间，在历史上曾经存在着矛盾与不和，发生过冲突和战争，但各民族之间的经济文化交流和友好往来，一直是历史的主流。中华民族之所以能够融合成为团结的整体，并经历几千年的变故与动荡而永不分离，正是因为我们的祖辈们如此团结，如此有凝聚力。

昭君出塞，文成公主和亲入藏，土尔跋扈族在渥多锡带领还乡……这些事例虽然来自离我们非常遥远的古代，但至今仍然广为流传。

不光在古代，在今天也有很多这样的事例：

人们不会忘记，为了挽救尿毒症晚期的维吾尔族学生毛兰?吾买尔， 23岁的王燕娜姐姐，把自己的一颗肾，无偿捐赠给了素不相识的维吾尔族“弟弟”。

人们不会忘记，在天山深处偏僻的库车县栏杆村，维吾尔族老人卡德尔，用40年时间写下了1000多篇日记，记载了解放军与当地村民之间拥军爱民的故事。这位老人说，我的眼睛不行了，但要把写日记的任务交给儿子，这日记不会停，一定会一代代写下去。

人们不会忘记，被誉为维吾尔“音乐之母”的“十二木卡姆”在新中国成立前已濒于灭绝，新疆维吾尔自治区政府 将其列为重点抢救的艺术品种，组织力量收集、整理和保护;柯尔克孜族英雄史诗《玛纳斯》、蒙古族史诗《江格尔》、哈萨克族的《阿依特斯》等一批民族优秀传统文化项目被列入首批国家非物质文化遗产名录……

手握手、心连心、同呼吸、共命运、维护民族团结是刻不容缓的，这不是一句口号，而是要真正落实到行动中去的，让我们每个人从身边做起，从一点一滴的小事做起，滴水可以汇成江河，不传谣，不信谣，不参与违法犯罪活动，不利于民族团结的话不说;不利于民族团结的事不做，共同筑起一道维护祖国统一，反对民族分裂的铜墙铁壁。

一堆沙子是松散的，可是它和水泥，水，沙子混合以后，比花岗岩还坚硬。我们要团结，不要分裂，让我们民汉一家亲，永远这样相亲相爱吧，如果我们分裂了，别的国家就有机可乘，必将会让我们走向灭亡，如果我们心连心，手握手，筑起铜墙铁壁，那么，就算有再强大的敌人，我们也不会害怕!我们中华民族必将象巨人一样屹立在世界的东方。

Life is a long process, we have too many expectations, will inevitably encounter disappointments and frustrations. The ideal on the shelf, come back to find that we like a fish, always thought that I had wings are birds, but finally I know that I cant fly. Life like water, and sometimes cloudy, sometimes clear, we struggle against social this big VAT - "I often feel life owed me, why do people always happiness and joy than yourself?" In the face of setbacks, we complain about life deceives us, we thought there was no hope of their life. We often compared himself to lost the swan, but forget oneself want how to fly.

As a child, then established the goofys desire. So many years, has been trying to, in insist, waiting for, has vowed to make yourself proud fly. But the difficulty and the setback already ambush all around, lets get stuck here. We have very strong telling myself, dont because at present small setbacks, but let themselves to give up the dream life? Even if life has deceived me, but this is not fearful; The enemy attack me, also is not terrible, terrible is betrayed our dream and gave up. Even live tired, live hard, also want to insist on your dream, give their best confidence and courage, toward a glorious and brilliant tomorrow. But few people do it?

But grew up, social this big cylinder multifarious colors, we see more dazzling. But we think the bottom of my heart has its own principle, can easily be tempted by the outside world? When looking back to the historys dust, always feel oneself still maintain magnanimous feelings from the past, still with his own emotion, but always failed for himself and guilty about ideal life. We should think like this: one failure is nothing, still remains the most quality of the things we do, we insist the dream is still the most valuable. With the accumulation of time, looking at others get summer fruit, they themselves are empty。

[高中励志英语作文3篇

与其他文体相比，英治议论文的结构一般较为固定，有下列几个部分组成：

1.提出需要议论的议题;

2.摆出正反两方面的观点;

3.表明作者持何种态度;

4.论证自己观点的正确性从而使读者接受自己的观点;

5.小结。

在具体写作中要注意下列几点：

1.议题的提出要开门见山，不要拖泥带水，啰啰唆唆

2.正反两方面的观点一般都要摆出，有时也有只强调一种观点的，那么这就等于将上述第二点和第三点合在一起了

3.作者的观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可

4.论证自己的观点是议论文的最关键的部分。论证手段与英语说明文中的一些写作手法相同，常用的有罗列法、举例法、因果法、比较法等等。

5.对于较长的英语议论文还可以在文章结尾时对全文要点作一小结。

下面这篇学生作文是较为典型的一篇英语议论文：

Should Examination Be Abolished (取消)?

The examination system has come to be the main theme (主题)of modern education. One should take an examination andsucceed in passing it before he could be admitted， promoted or graduated. As it plays so important a role in the realm of education (教育的领域) it is under much criticism (评论) as to its validity (有效性) . People who are in favour of it try to develop this system more; those who are against it believe that such a system should be abolished. Should examination be abolished? In my opinion it should be.

Many people think that an examination is the only means to test knowledge， but， in fact， that is not true. A few questions given in an examination could by no means cover the whole field of the subject. Thus those who are able to answer them may be the poorest of the students and yet happen to know just a few points about that subject.

Id like to say that， because of the existence of the examination system， students pay so much attention to gaining high marks， that they often forget the chief purpose of education. The so-called clever students devote (贡献) themselves to the study of textbooks only. They， of course， know nothing but the skeleton (梗概) of knowledge. The end and aim of education， however， is to enable students to learn how to live. To do this， students must get themselves to do all kinds of training， physicalas well as mental. The present examination system has discouraged students from making such an attempt.

Moreover， since the students try so hard to put their lessons into memory in as short a time as possible， psychologically (心理上来看)， they soon forget the whole subject as soon as the examination is over. Surely this is one of the greatest wastes ever made in the history of civilization.

Lastly， in order to get high marks， there is a great temptation (诱惑) for students to cheat (作弊) in an examination. Indeed， such a practice becomes the means to the end. They cheat their teachers， their parents and also themselves. Such a tendency would impair (损害) our moral standards (道德标准) .

Therefore， I am of the opinion， in conclusion， that the examination system should be abolished.

I always hear about my friends’ complaining, they say their income is such low that they can’t not make ends meet.

At first, I would pity for them, but in the long run, I find their work is so easy, they just sit in the office from 9 am to 5 pm, they even don’t need to go out for business. While I see another friend, he works so hard, his working hour is very unstable, sometimes he even works until 9 pm.

The fact is that he earns the most between my friends.

It is true that no pain, no gain, if people want more, they need to pay out more. Comparing to be envy about other people’s great income, we’d better to work hard to realize what we want. There is not short-cut for people to get successful, working hard is the only way.

我总是听到朋友们的抱怨，他们说收入太少了，以至于无法收支平衡。刚开始，我会为他们感到遗憾，但是长期下来，我发现他们的工作很轻松，他们在办公室里朝九晚五地坐着，甚至不需要外出跑业务。

然而我看到了另外一个朋友，他很努力工作，工作时间不稳定，有时候甚至于工作到晚上九点。

事实上，他是我朋友之中赚得最多的。没有付出，就没有收获， 确实如此，如果人们想要，需要付出。与其羡慕别人的高收入，不如努力工作来实现我们想要的。成功没有捷径，努力工作是唯一的方法。

[高中英语作文：付出与收获

When we are very small, we dream to be the great person in the future, such

as the scientist, the policeman and so on. It is good for the children to own

the big dream, so that they will study hard and fight for their future. But the

fact is that not all the person can become the great person, most people are

doing the ordinary jobs. In my opinion, ordinary is beautiful, too. Though they

are not doing the fine jobs, they find their own place and make a contribution

to the world. Take the cleaner for example. They wake up early and do the

cleaning work. People dare not to do the job because it is so dirty, but the

cleaners decorate the city with their hard work. The cleaners are the ordinary

people while doing the great job.

如今相对开放的国际环境，使得各种地域文化交汇融合，过各种洋节日的中国人也越来越多，这使得中国的传统节日渐渐地不被重视。现今保护中国传统文化是我们每个人肩负着的使命。

中国的传统和文明需要传承。这些传统节日是中华民族几千年来生存和发展的产物。现在的中国人，未来的中国人，若是无法了解自己的祖先和民族的发展，轻视这些传统和文明，那么这样的中国人也就失去了属于自己的特色。

中国的传统节日和中华民族数千年来形成的品性的紧密联系，也使得中国的传统节日不容被西化。中秋节寄托了游子对家的思念;端午节展现了耕作的劳动人民对丰收的喜悦;清明节表达了亲人对逝去者的哀思;新年则体现了人民向往和平快乐生活的朴素愿望。这些节日背后所存在的意义，是任何一个洋节日无法替代的。

因此，越来越多的人开始提倡保护重视中国的传统节日。清明，端午从原来没有节假日变成了休假一天，电视媒体也日益加大了对中国传统文化的宣传，提高人们的了解和重视程度。

在这个受到外来文化强烈冲击的21世纪，我们太多地关注于西方万圣节的南瓜;情人节的玫瑰;圣诞节的白胡子老人。从而忽略了新年的“福”字，端午的艾草，中秋的月饼，对于我们每一个中国人来说这都是一种本土文化的丢失，没有了这些文化和传统，我们也将丢失自己的信仰，失去自己的特色。

身处于现今社会的我们依然要懂得不崇洋媚外的道理。外国的传统和特色往往不适合拥有古老历史的中国。就像君主立宪制不适用于中国;刀叉无法成为中国人吃饭的主要工具;直接的说话方式无法改变中国人的婉转一样，洋节日也不应该成为中国人的节日。

一个民族的传统节日，是历史文化在千百年里长期积淀和凝聚之后又经后人总结和实践而成的，从种种节日风俗里，后世的人们可以清晰地体验到先民生活的历史文化图景。当承载着民族传统文化的节日不再受重视，节日的文化内涵渐渐被遗忘，中国“文明古国”的盛誉也将不复存在。

我们需要加强对传统节日的宣传与弘扬，从自身做起，保护中国的传统文化。

1、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。

2、本文语言虽然并不华丽，但却极为准确生动，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味。

3、文章语言清新活泼，描写能抓住事物的主要特征，篇幅短小精悍，值得一读。

4、这篇作文取材新颖，构思奇妙，语言生动活泼。字里行间透露出清新的生活气息和儿童情趣。

5、文章按事情发展的顺序，记叙了…的事，语言比较流畅，层次较清楚，自始自终显得其乐融融。

6、全文节奏明快，语言清新，始终洋溢着诙谐与风趣，读来其乐无穷。

7、全文语言流畅，行文舒展自如，自然洒脱，称得上是一篇较成功的之作。

8、通篇文章语调轻松幽默，显得妙趣横生，读来令人爱不释手。

9、作者构思巧，善于选点展开，行文跌宕起伏，耐人寻味。

10、全文可圈可点的佳句不少，给文章增添了些文学情趣。

11、文章能过清新有趣的语言，描写了…的事。字里行间，充满童年真童趣，欢声笑语不绝于耳，不失为一篇佳作。

12、详略得当，虚实相生，是本文的两大特色，……内容更丰富、更生动。

13、全文清新秀逸，亲切委婉，朴素而不落俗淘，值得借见。

14、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。

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16、全文眉目清晰，生动紧凑，趣味性强。

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18、文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章生动具体

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21、文章杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出。

22、文章对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对文章重点…作了细腻而传神的刻画。

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24、这篇文章充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情。全文层次清晰，语句流畅。

25、事例叙述生动、具体、趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的情感，令人感动。

26、文章前后连贯，形成完整的形象。

27、特写镜头别开生面，情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣，读来倍感亲切。

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29、文章有详有略，言之有序，内容生动具体，不失为一篇佳作。

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my daddy was not happy because he thought it was not good for my study.Sometimes I felt I was not a free boy when my daddy was so strict with me,so I tried to talk to my daddy,and he said he was happy because I talked to him,and now he let me play games if I study well.From this,I understand a friendly talk can help people get along well.

自我介绍是向别人展示你自我介绍好不好，甚至直接关系到你给别人的第一印象的好坏及以后交往的顺利与否。同时，也是认识自我的手段。以下是小编整理的高中学生英语自我介绍，欢迎阅读！

Teachers，good afternoon. Allow me to briefly talk about myself.

My name is - Xianning graduated from the south gate of the private secondary schools. Tourism now studying at the school in Hubei Province. Studying hotel management professional.

I was a character，cheerful girl，so my hobbies is extensive. Sporty. In my spare time likes playing basketball， table tennis，volleyball，skating. When a person like the Internet at home，or a personal stereo. Not like too long immersed in the world of books，and family members have told me，Laoyijiege is the best. Talking about my family，then I will talk about my family has. Only three people my family，my grandmother，grandfather and my own. My grandfather is a engineer，I am very severely on peacetime，the Church me a lot. Grandma is a very kindly for the elderly，care for my life in every possible way. Therefore，I have no parents in their care，childhood and growth were full of joy.

I like this hotel management professional，because I like to live in a strict order of the management environment. I have my professional self-confidence and hope，as long as the efforts will be fruitful，this is my motto. Since I chose this profession，I will follow this path，effort，perseverance path.

Thank you teachers. I finished presentation.

中文翻译：

各位老师，下午好。请允许我简单介绍一下我自己。

我的名字叫——毕业于咸宁南门私立中学。现就读于湖北省旅游学校。学习饭店管理专业。

我是一个性格开朗的女孩子，所以我的兴趣爱好很广泛。热爱运动。在我闲暇的时候喜欢打篮球，乒乓球，排球，溜冰。一个人在家的时候喜欢上网，或者听歌。不太喜欢太长时间的沉浸在书的世界里，家人曾经告诉过我，劳逸结合是最好的。说到我的家人，那我就要说说我的家庭了。我家里只有三口人，我的奶奶，爷爷和我自己。我爷爷是个工程师，他平时对我很严厉，教会我很多东西。奶奶是个很慈祥的老人，对我的生活照顾得无微不至。所以没有父母的我在他们的照顾下，童年和成长都充满了快乐。

我喜欢酒店管理这个专业，是因为我喜欢生活在一个有严格管理秩序的环境里。我对我的专业充满自信和希望，只要努力，就会有收获，这是我的座右铭。既然我选择了这个专业，就会沿着我这条路，努力的，坚持不懈的走下去。

谢谢各位老师。我的介绍完毕。

Dear ______ ,

①I am ______(自我介绍). ②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______(要询问的内容).

③First of all, what are ______(第一个问题)? ④Secondly, when will ______(第二个问题)? ⑤Thirdly, is ______(第三个问题)?

⑥I would also like to inquire ______(将最重要的问题单独成段). ⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?

⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

This winter is freezing cold. I didn’t have any desire to go out for play.

I always stayed at home. Actually, most of the time I was in my bed. When I felt

anxious for staying inside too long, I will go near the window to wach the

children building snowman or throwing snowballs. It seemed very interesting. But

I just didn’t want to go out. Later my mother found that I was so lazy. Then she

forced me to go out. Since my mother said, I have no excuse to reject. My mother

is right. Though the outside was icy, it’s fantastic. Everything smells fresh.

Since then, I went outside everyday, and then did my homework and felt full of

energy. The holiday ended very soon. It was a lazy holiday.

汪国真说：“太深的流连是一种羁绊，绊住的不止有双脚，还有未来，选择逗留，拥有了一时的美丽，然而选择一条不寻常的路，走过去，真正的美丽才会赫然显现，选择走不平常的路，就是把祭品献给追求的祭坛。”

LadyGaGa，这个以其多变的风格，令人惊异的独特造型以及风格迥异的作品而拥有了庞大粉丝群的巨星，她的每一次出现，都能让人耳目一新，也在最初招来不少鄙夷的目光。有人说她哗众取宠，有人说她近乎疯狂，但她却毫不在乎，我行我素，拿取不少奖项，屹立歌坛不倒，成为一个神话。而她拥有的这一切，都是因为她不走寻常路的精神及其敢于坚持创新的勇气。

我国同样有一个这样的歌手，便是开创中国式说唱的歌者周杰伦。这个连说普通话都咬字不清的年轻人，最开始甚至要自修钢琴，自己作曲填词的作品并不被唱片公司看好，几乎都压在箱底无人问津。有人说他的作品太难，不好唱，更不好传唱。于是周杰伦做出一个大胆的决定：自己唱给人听。曾经被以为不会引起反响的“中国式说唱”，出人意料地传遍了当时的大街小巷，风靡一时，咬字不清却旋律优美的歌曲，一首一首成为经典。

不走寻常路，让一个普通的音乐青年走上了中国乐坛的巅峰。

同样，还有将京剧和摇滚融为一体的李玟，尝试实验性音乐的龚丽娜，改头换面重新崛起的萨顶顶…。

归根到底，成功的歌者，总是敢于以勇气打破常规，以才华打动人心，敢于不走寻常路，持久创新，他们精巧地塑造了自我，并且长久地保持这种旺盛的生命力，最后走向神坛和经典，被后来人景仰。

娱乐圈风云变幻，无数人来了又去，同为歌者，与这些成功者相反，有不少人默默无闻，有很多人昙花一现。他们的唱功或许不低，他们的外表也许美丽，可是他们总是在原地徘徊，依赖商业包装，没有创新和特色，人们见多了这种歌手，听多了一样的音乐，自然不会再感兴趣，他们也只能随时间而消失，以至于连姓名都淹没在乐坛的历史长河中。

高山仰止，景行行止，虽不能至，心向往之。作为音乐生，歌坛前辈的路给了我很好的启示：真正的美丽就在于你所走的不寻常路上，敢于走寻常路，就算不能如他们一般到达光明的顶点，也必然能在人生中留下灿烂的一笔。