中考英语作文30篇带翻译（汇编20篇）

在学校我有一个朋友。她是个女孩，她叫王旭，她1 3岁。我也13岁。我们在同一个班。她英语比我学得好，因此她经常帮我学英语。我也帮助她学习。

我们是好朋友。

I have a friend at school. She is a girl. Her name is Wang Xu. She is thirteen. Im thirteen, too. We are in the same class.She studies English better than I,so she often helps me with my English . I help her with study,too.

We are good friends.

我有一个非常好的朋友。她叫胡丽丽。她今年14岁。她有一双漂亮的大眼睛，短头发。她又高又壮，但不胖。她对人非常友善。

她喜欢做运动，比如打网球、羽毛球和踢足球。她有许多爱好，她喜欢听音乐、读书、画画、唱歌和跳舞。有时我们在校内说英语；有时我们在校外玩羽毛球。我们经常在星期六或星期日去游泳或去钓鱼。我们上学时，她非常刻苦地学习功课。

在下午，我和我的朋友胡丽丽在操场上玩游戏。我们总是玩得十分开心！

她永远是我的好朋友！

I have a very good friend. Her name is Hu Lili. Shes fourteen years old. She has big beautiful eyes,and short hair. She is tall and strong, but not fat. Shes very kind to people.

She likes doing sports,such as tennis, badminton and soccer. She has many hobbies:listening,reading,drawing,singing and dancing. Sometimes we speak English in our school. Sometimes we play badminton out of the school. We often go swimming or go fishing on Saturdays or on Sundays. When we are at school, she studies very hard at our lessons.

In the afternoon I play games on the playground with my friend Hu Lili. We always have a good time!

She is my best friend forever!

[我的朋友英语作文和翻译

It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a

appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the

Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I

waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And

in a year, we didn’t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes

left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball

in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我得到了在六时四十五分。我的任命，以满足九点钟。之后，我有我的早餐，我去了万家市场。这是热外面。当我到达，我的朋友们并没有达成。我等待着他前面的肯德基的大门。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内，我们没有接触到其他人频繁。约10分钟离开，我的朋友们来到一个又一个。在我们迎接，我们去打球荔湾体育馆。这场比赛最后的拖车小时.Oh

，我非常高兴今天填补!

I like holidays because I have enough time to relax. Last year, my

father and I went to Singapore by plane, there is a beautiful place, the four

seasons pleasant climate, there are many Chinese immigrants in Singapore, and

there are lots of Chinese food, like noodles, dumplings, rice, very delicious,

we shopping there, watching the scenery, and taste a lot of delicious food. It

was a very enjoyable

holiday.

我喜欢假期，因为我有足够的时间去放松。去年，我和爸爸坐飞机去了新加坡，那儿是个美丽的地方，四季气候宜人，新加坡有许多中国移民，而且那里有许多中国食物，比如面条，饺子，米饭，非常美味，我们在那里购物，观赏了美景，并且品尝了许多美味的食物。这真是一个令人愉快的假期。

We each have a best friend. My best friend, she will not speak. In school, of course, is my friend and I were like peas and carrots. But, in my opinion, good friends, some secret worries or to tell him/her, maybe he/she will feel very vexed, and it can reveal your secrets to others.

My for friends, she never like this. No matter whether anything unusual happened every day, I will tell her all my day of harvest. Talk with her, is my most happy thing. She makes my body and mind cheerful. Can I take a day of harvest, discontent, excited feeling to her. I am convinced that she is the best in the world of the audience.

In this week, Ill be out of many copies out the newspaper, there is only one time in the evening. And it came to pass, because I afraid too late, and told it to her.

She, make me understand myself. Her heart, is created by my joys and sorrows. Every little by little I grew up, she will keep in mind.

Who is she? Is not my classmate, not my mother. A friend of the silent -- diary.

我们每个人都有一个最好的朋友。我最好的朋友，她不会说话。当然，在学校里，我的朋友是和我形影不离的。可是，在我看来，再好不过的朋友，有些心事或秘密要告诉他/她，也许他/她会感到很烦，并且还会把你的秘密泄露给别人。

我的那为朋友，她从来不会这样。无论每天是否发生了什么不寻常的事，我都会向她倾诉我一天的收获。和她谈心，是我最快乐的事。她使我身心开朗。我可以把一天的收获、不满、兴奋等感受向她倾诉。我深信，她是这世上最好的听众。

在这周里，我要出许多张手抄报，只有一个晚上的时间。我因为害怕来不及出，便把这事告诉了她。

她，使我读懂自己。她的内心，就是由我的喜怒哀乐创造的。我成长的每一点一滴，她都会铭记在心。

她是谁呢?不是我的同学，不是我的母亲。一位无声的朋友——日记本。

In march in the wet air spring, I always imagine a picture: garden outside on the grass with small yellow and purple, the middle of the courtyard of the cherry tree tree tree full of flowers to bloom in a warm southerly breeze slowly, in the replacement of the four seasons of green fruit with wide bilge painful expression, from shiny branches grow out of it. Six in the middle of the night of spring, the old cat cant sleep all night, under the tree stamping, swan couples, bark, and the ducks who teams in pairs to fly to the moon.

And I always wake up in the middle of the night, look at the moon rose down-stairs branches long painting on the pebbles, which are covered with buds of green, please.

In the middle of the night I heard the spring is static. Lingering in the ear, there is a special sound short, and want to pour a spoonful of sugar into the tea when the sound, it should be a light rain slapping on to the leaves on the trees. They are reminiscent of the day the road leading to the village.

"Sand sand sand......", in the darkness, forming a slow rhythm.

Slow is composed in B minor. Followed the path of the night and smooth.

On the grass in the spring, filled with fluffy dandelion, with a light yellow colour and lustre, clusters into a cluster to hide.

Like the raindrops in the air.

Dont disturb them. Heavy sleep sleep. Gentle wind rustled gradually forming the flowers. In the gentle spring.

"But you and I as a life hasnt been crying, and gets a long sleep time."

Its just my fantasy. Can you see?

"-- - I can see it."

在三月春天濡湿的空气里，我总想象着一幅画面：花园外面的草地上开满了黄色和紫色的小花，院子当中的樱桃树树上满树的花都从熏风里缓慢地绽放，在四季的更替里青色的果子带着张大的胀痛表情，从发亮的枝条里长出来。春天的深夜六，老猫整夜不能安睡，在树下跺着步，天鹅夫妇发出叫声，而野鸭子们成队成对地向月亮飞去。

而我总在深夜醒来，看月亮把楼下的蔷薇的枝条长长地画在卵石上，那上面长满了青请的花苞。

我在深夜里，听见了春天的静。萦绕在耳边的，有一种声音特别短促，想一勺糖倒进红茶时发出的声音一样，那应该是小雨拍打到树上的叶子的声音。它们让人想起了白天那些引领着道路通向小区的梧桐树。

“沙……沙……沙”，在夜幕里，形成一段缓慢的旋律。

缓慢是沉稳的B小调。循着夜的轨迹滑着。

在春天的草地上，长满了毛茸茸的蒲公英，带着一种淡黄的色泽，成簇成簇拥挤地隐藏着。

像是空气中的雨滴。

没有惊扰。沉沉眠眠。温柔的风拂过逐渐成形的花海。在温和的春里。

“而你我如同尚未啼哭的生命，时光切不断绵长的沉眠。”

这一切只是我的幻想。你看得见么?

“―――我看得见。”

Today, Wang took us to the library.

In the library door, a gray-haired old teacher told us a lot of library rules. Subsequently, Wang gave each made a library card.

When I get a library card, excited. The library is very quiet, rows shelves, a layer lattice book makes me themselves.

Each book has a different knowledge, every book has exclusively own color, every book give you a different surprise, as long as you go to discover its mysteries and secrets, it must be its real charm The infection! In so many wonderful book, which I have chosen this? Is a fairy tale, or a riddle? is fiction, or dictionary? Just when I hesitate, Wang suggested that I want to read a useful book, I point nodded, she walked to the bookshelf. Precisely, I met HE Jia Luo and 罗玲惠, I asked 罗玲惠 borrowed what book, Luo Linghui confidently say:! "" Riddles "" I think what is good and 罗玲兴 interest Luo congenial, select the same is certainly I hurried to leave.

Finally, I selected a "eloquence." "Eloquence" is about how a super eloquence training methods. Among them, my favorite 199, because 199 tells the American success guru Napoleon Hill with eloquence to overcome all difficulties, so I very much admire.

You find the most suitable for your book?

今天，王老师带我们去图书馆。

在图书馆门口，一位白发苍苍的老教师对我们讲了许多借书的规则。接着，王老师给每人发了一张借书证。

我拿到借书证时，兴奋不已。图书馆里很安静，一排排书架、一层层书格令我眼前一亮。

每一本书都有不同的知识，每一本书都有专属于自已的色彩，每一本书都带给你不同惊喜，只要你去发现它的奥秘与秘密，就一定被它真正的魅力所感染!在那么多精彩的书中，我选哪一本呢?是童话，还是谜语?是小说，还是字典?正当我犹豫不决时，王老师提示我要阅读有益的书，我点了点头，向书架走去。正好，我碰见了何佳洛和罗玲惠，我问罗玲惠借了什么书，罗玲惠自信满满地说：“《脑筋急转弯》!”我想到何佳洛是和罗玲兴趣相投，选择肯定是一样的，我便匆匆地离开了。

最后，我选中了一本《口才》。《口才》讲述的是如何训练成超级口才的方法。其中，我最喜欢199页，因为199页讲述了美国成功大师拿破仑·希尔用口才战胜了一切困难，令我十分敬佩。

你找到最适合你的书了吗?

The First Day in New Term

Today is September 3rd, the first day of the new semester. I am happy to see all of my classmates come back to school. Today is the first day for school, so we get our new textbooks. I open them generally and I find that I am interested in most of the contexts. Today we have Chinese, math, English, physics and so on. In the Chinese class, our teacher greets to us and then she suggests us talking about our holidays to others. All of us share the interesting things with classmates. I find that we all have a good holiday. I hope we can make progress in study together.

今天是9月3号，新学期的第一天。我很高兴看到所有的同学都已返校。今天是开学的第一天，我们领取了新的课本。打开课本我发现我对大部分的内容都感兴趣。今天，我们有语文，数学，英语和物理等课程。在语文课上，老师向我们问好然后建议我们向其他同学讲述我们的假期。所有人都和同学分享了有趣的事。我们都度过了愉快的假期。我希望我们能够在学习上一起进步。

[新学期第一天英语作文及翻译

“失火了！失火了！”一声声叫喊吵醒了我。我揉着蒙眬的睡眼向窗外一看，呀，对面王阿姨家的小平房烧着了！那熊熊大火像恶魔一样吞噬着平房，滚滚浓烟从中涌出来。大火越来越猛，可却没有出来。我们都为王阿姨及她的家人捏了把汗。

"Fire!

Theres a fire! " A shout woke me up. I rubbed Mengs sleeping eyes and looked

out of the window. Ah, the small bungalow opposite Aunt Wangs house was

burning! The blaze devoured the bungalow like a demon, and smoke poured out of

it. The fire grew fiercer and fiercer, but it didnt come out. We all sweat for

Aunt Wang and her family.

在众人都在担忧时，王阿姨和她的家人却平安无事地逃了出来。原来，当大火来袭时，王阿姨没有惊慌失措，而是镇定地把家中的被子、棉衣全用水浸湿，裹在身上，并用湿毛巾捂住口、鼻，等火势稍小时逃了出来。没一会儿，消防员来了，他们立即扑灭了大火。

When

everyone was worried, Aunt Wang and her family escaped peacefully. It turned out

that when the fire hit, Aunt Wang did not panic, but calmly soaked the quilt and

cotton padded clothes in her home with water, wrapped them around her body,

covered her mouth and nose with a wet towel, and escaped a little later. After a

while, the firemen came, and they put out the fire immediately.

这次起火的原因，就是家里的易燃物品被烧着了，虽然是小物品，但是烧着了火势可不小哇！

The

reason for the fire is that the inflammables in the house are burned. Although

its small, the fire is not small!

我们身边处处都会有安全隐患，同学们，我们要把消防安全牢记心中！

There

will be hidden dangers around us. Students, we should keep fire safety in

mind!

如果Parants负起责任，也应受到惩罚，如果他们的孩子表现不好？

事实上，家长在儿童的成长是非常重要的作用。但是，我们不能认为父母应该负起责任，受到惩罚，如果他们的孩子表现不好。否则，这将是不公平的，一些家长，我们应该客观地考虑这个问题。

一些家长教导子女非常小心，告诉他们该怎么做，怎么做，什么是错的，什么是正确的。他们尽量引导他们childrn，为他们提供学习和生活的忠告儿童。随着父母的指令，有些孩子表现得很好。然而，还是孩子谁表现不好。在这种情况下，我们不应该批评孩子的父母，如果他们表现不好。

当然，也有父母，谁是忙着自己的事日夜其他种类，忽略了儿童的教育。虽然他们提供最好的生活，他们的子女，他们忽视教导子女如何正确地思考。在这种情况下，家长应该受到惩罚，如果孩子表现不好。

总之，我们应考虑不同情况，作出客观的决定，对于许多因素可能导致儿童不良行为。也许父母的因素之一。除了上述情况，还有其他。这些父母是谁表现bodly可能导致他们的孩子表现不好。这类父母应该受到惩罚。

因此，不负责任的父母应该受到惩罚。我们应该给予全面考虑这个问题。

[父母教育孩子英语作文翻译

knowledge comes, but wisdom lingers 知识来了，智慧却迟迟不前。

knowledge is one thing, virtue is another知识是一回事，美德是另一回事。

learning without thinking leads to confusion; thinking without studying results in tardiness学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。

life is short and art is long 人生短暂，学术无涯。

much learning shows how little mortals know博学而后始知人类所知有限。

no matter how much one has experienced, he can’t enrich his knowledge without reading books无论亲身经历如何丰富的人，如果不读书，知识不可能丰富起来的。

reading is not only beneficial to widen your horizon but also helpful to master the language读书不仅有益于开阔视野，也有助于我们驾驭语言。

reading make a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。

reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles读万卷书，行万里路。

the art of being wise is the art of knowing what to overlook智慧就是懂得该忽略什么的技巧。

the three foundations of learning; seeing much, suffering much, and studying much 求学的三个基本条件是：多观察，多吃苦，多研究。

those who expect to reap the blessings of freedom must undergo the fatigue of supporting it想要收获自由之果的人，必须承受维护自由的劳苦。

time is a bird for ever on the wing时间是一只永远在飞翔的鸟。

a man dies still if he has done nothing, as one who has done much既然无所事事亦难逃一死，何不奋斗终生。

after you have read more than ten thousand volumes, you will find it easy to write as if god were there helping you读书破万卷，下笔如有神。

all books are divisible into two classes: the books of the hour, and the books of all time一切书籍都可以分为二类：即：一时之书与永久之书。

books are the food for the hungry of great mind书籍是伟大的饥饿的粮食。

books are to mankind what memory is to the individuanl 书之于人类，犹如记忆于之个人。

books are treasure banks storing wisdom passed down from generation to generation书籍是贮存人类代代相传的智慧的宝库。

classic a book which people praise and don’t read “经典之作”是人人皆称赞却不愿去读的书。

coping with problems in our real life is the end, and reading is only one of the means to reach the end处理现实生活是目的，读书只是达到这个目的手段之一。

friends are not books, yet books are friends friends may betray you, while books are always loyal朋友不是书，书却是朋友。朋友可能背判你，书却永远忠实。

he that knows little soon repeats it知识浅薄者，很快就回重复他所知的话题。

if a man empties his purse into his head, no one can take it from him如果一个人倾其所有以求学问，那么这些学问是没有人能拿走的。

ignorance is not innocence but sin无知并非纯真，而是罪恶。

isn’t it a happy thing if you review what you have learned on time 学而时习之，不亦乐乎?

it never will rain roses when we want to have more roses we must plant trees天上永远不会掉下玫瑰来，如果想要更多的玫瑰，必须自己种植。

在小红的铅笔盒里，有四位好兄弟。其中，铅笔是老大，橡皮是老二，削笔刀是老三，笔盒是老四。

一开始，他们都很团结。可有一天，铅笔开始傲慢起来，铅笔召集橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒开会，铅笔说 ：“从今天开始，你们都要为我服务。”橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒答应了。从那时起，铅笔故意刁难他们：铅笔故意在纸上乱画，让橡皮为他美容，为此橡皮瘦了一大圈；铅笔常找削笔刀为他剃头，这让削笔刀的牙齿都磨平了；铅笔躺在软绵绵的笔盒里，稍感觉有一点儿不舒服，就对笔盒破口大骂。可是他们从不说苦，因为他们认为铅笔永远是他们的好兄弟。

不久后，小红的铅笔盒里又添了几支新铅笔，他们对铅笔老大说：“瞧瞧你的熊样，小主人早该把你扔了。”铅笔听了，赶紧跑到镜子前，想看看自己的模样，只见镜子里的自己又矮有瘦，样子真像一根火柴。铅笔见了，伤心地哭了起来。此时，橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒来到铅笔面前，说：“在你刁难我们的时候，其实也毁了你的面容，只要你和我们团结一致，咱们还是好兄弟。”听了他们的话，铅笔惭愧地低下了头。

……

Dear Friend,

亲爱的朋友，

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember me?

最近过得怎么样?我很想你。你还记得我吗?

To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my life.

老实说，我很荣幸成为你的朋友。我还记得我们在一起的日子。我觉得你是世界上最善良的人。我们在一起的时候，我们总是亲如兄弟，所以在我的心里我很感激你。你离开后，我总是想起你。下一次如果我们有机会见到对方，我会对你说“谢谢你”。谢谢你的善良。让我现在的人生有了意义。

Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.

虽然现在我们在两个不同的地方，但我们依然在一起，因为我们总是心连心。我相信我们还能再次见面。 因为我们是亲密的朋友，亲爱的兄弟。因为你，我的人生总是那么的有意义。无论我在哪里，我都会为你祈祷好运。

Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright future.

最后但并非最不重要的是我希望你能有一个光明的未来。

Sincerely yours,

Jason

詹森

I used to pouring away the water directly after I using it. Someday, my

mother asked me to help her wash the clothes, as I was about to pour away the

water, my mother stopped me and she told me that most water can be recycled. It

can be used to water the flower or to wash other things. From then on, I realize

how to save water.

我过去常常在用完水后直接倒掉水。有一天，妈妈叫我帮助她洗衣服，就在我要去倒掉水的时候，妈妈阻止了我，她告诉我说大部分水可以循环利用。那么水可以用来浇花或者洗别的东西。从那时候起，我就意识到如何节约用水。

新学期开始了，同学们都返回学校重新见面。他们正在谈论自己的暑假生活。我更高兴，迫不及待地想告诉他们我是怎么过的。终于轮到我，了，我告诉他们我暑假期间在一家餐馆当服务员。他们起初并不相信。“是真的。”我说，“刚开始时可惨了，但几天我就做得很好了。暑假我挣了600元钱呢。”他们都目瞪口呆地看着我。

a new term began. students all returned to school met again. they were talking about what they had done in the holidays. i was happier. i couldnt wait to tell my story. now its my turn. i told them i got a job in a restaurant. i worked as a waitress.

they didnt believe at first.

"yes, its true. "i said," i really had a hard time at the beginning. but several days later, i could do a good job. i earned six hundred yuan this holiday. "they all looked at me with their mouths open.

哲学家苏格拉底曾说：“世界上最快乐的事，莫过于为理想而奋斗”。每个人都有自己的理想，并一直朝着这个目标奋斗着，这的确是一件快乐的事。我也有我自己的理想--做一名英语翻译家。

你们一定想知道我为什么要做英语翻译家？因为我从小就喜欢英语。在我上幼儿园，第一次接触英语的时候，老师教我们读“apple苹果”，“banana香蕉”，老师怕我们不懂，还特意拿来香蕉，指着香蕉对我们说：“这是不是很像‘b’呢？上面瘦瘦的，下面胖胖的。一个个香蕉就成了banana，这样，香蕉的英语是不是很容易拼出来。”老师还教我们学了很多英语单词。从那以后，我就喜欢上了英语。

虽然这个理想对我来说是一件非常遥远的事情，但我愿意为这个理想而努力拼搏。每当我听到别人那一口流利的英语，我都非常羡慕，同时我的心灵也一样受到了鼓舞。我相信只要努力就一定可以做到。现在我会从身边的每一步开始做起，努力学好英语。我希望通过我的努力，可以实现我的梦想。

通向理想的道路是遥远的，艰辛的，但我坚信自己只要为理想奋斗，为理想拼搏，就一定能实现理想。

中考英语作文范文 我梦想的工作my dream job

Since i was an innocent child, i had the idea to be a doctor in the future. I always see the people died in the TV, i feels

frustrated about it. therefore, a dream to be a doctor came into my mind. I want to be the person who can save people＇s life just like God Jesus

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

In the growing up, each person will not be smooth, often will encounter a lot of sorrow and troubles.

Remember I carefree as a child, had to play, play to eat. But as the growth of the age, to enter the school, homework more and more every day, to back of the book is also more and more. Will be at six in the morning mother cried at 7 o clock that into an endorsement, and carrying a heavy schoolbag go to school. Always because of a composition in school and exams, and they were afraid their exam is bad, being criticized by the teacher, be mother scold.

Remember once, I got eighty, found that is not careful to do wrong, the in the mind is very sad. Thought after go home, mom to give me some comfort, but given my surprise, my mother did not give me comfort, but also scolded me, said: "not, you wont do, you are careless, as in this case, how can you get into a good high school? Go, take my mother to buy the homework do 2 pages, and then show it to me check." My in the mind very sad, but still dragging tired ShenQu walked into the study, I saw the textbook of word, dizzy, I thought, if only I could lie on the bed to sleep ten days that how good ah! But thats impossible.

You know, in the process of the growth of life there are a lot of joy, nor without trouble, when you have had a trouble of "attack", that youre one step closer to success.

在每个人成长的过程中，都不会一帆风顺，经常会遇到很多伤心事和烦恼事。

记得我小时候无忧无虑，吃了玩，玩了吃。可是随着年龄的增长，进入学校，每天的作业越来越多，要背的书也越来越多。每天早上六点就会被妈妈谎说成七点叫起来背书，并且还要背着沉重的书包去学校。在学校里总是因为作文和考试而烦恼，就怕自己考不好，被老师批评，被妈妈骂。

记得有一次，我考了八十几分，发现都是自己不小心做错的，心里非常伤心。本以为回家之后，妈妈能给我一点安慰，可出科我意料的是，妈妈不但没有给予我安慰，而且还骂了我一顿说：“看，不是你不会做，都是你粗心大意造成的，像这样的话，你怎么能考上一个好中学呢?去，拿妈妈买的课外作业做二页，然后拿给我检查。”我心里很难过，但还是拖着疲倦的身驱走进书房，我看到课本上密密麻麻的字，头发晕，心想，要是我能躺在床上睡个十天八天的那该多好呀!可那是不可能的。

要知道，在人生的成长过程中有很多欢乐，但也少不了烦恼，当你经历了一次烦恼的“袭击”，那你离成功就更近一步。

导语：写英语作文是有规律可循的，你记住了一些英语句型，就可以直接套用。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

1.welcometosp欢迎到某地

Eg.WelcometoChina。

2.What’sthematterwithsb./sth?

出什么毛病了?

Eg.What’sthematterwithyourwatch?

3.bedifferentfrom与---不同

Eg.TheweatherinBeijingisdifferentfromthatofNanjing。

4.bethesameas与……相同

Eg.Histrousersarethesameasmine。

5.befriendlytosb。对某人友好

Eg.Mr.Wangisveryfriendlytous。

6.wanttodosth。想做某事

Eg.Iwanttogotoschool。

7.wantsb.todosth。想让某人做某事

Eg.Iwantmysontogotoschool。

8.whattodo做什么

Eg.Wedon’tknowwhattodonext。

9.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事

Eg.Lethimentertheroom。

10.letsb.notdosth。让某人不做某人

Eg.Lethimnotstandintherain。

11.whydon’tyoudosth?

怎么不做某事呢?=

Eg.Whydon’tyouplayfootballwithus?

12.whynotdosth.?怎么不做某事呢?

Eg.Whynotplayfootballwithus?

13.makesb.sth。为某人制造某物=

Eg.Myfathermademeakite。

14.makesthforsb。为某人制造某物

Eg.Myfathermadeakiteforme。

15.What…meanby…?

做……是什么意思?

Eg.Whatdoyoumeanbydoingthat?

16.likedoingsth。喜爱做某事

Eg.Jimlikesswimming。

17.liketodosth。喜爱做某事

Eg.Hedoesn’tliketoswimnow。

18.feellikedoingsth。想做某事

Eg.Ifeellikeeatingbananas。

19.wouldliketodosth。愿意做某事

Eg.Wouldyouliketogorowingwithme?

20.wouldlikesb.todosth。愿意某人做某事

Eg.I’dlikeyoutostaywithmetonight。

21.makesb.dosth。逼使某人做某事

Eg.Hisbrotheroftenmakeshimstayinthesun。

22.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事

Eg.Letmesingasongforyou。

23.havesb.dosth。使某人做某事

Eg.Youshouldn’thavethestudentsworksohard。

24.befarfromsp离某地远

Eg.Hisschoolisfarfromhishome。

25.beneartosp离某地近

Eg.Thehospitalisneartothepostoffice。

26.begoodatsth./doingsth。

擅长某事/做某事

Eg.WearegoodatEnglish。

Theyaregoodatboating。

27.Ittakessb.sometimetodosth。

某人花多少时间做某事

Eg.Ittookmemorethanayeartolearntodrawabeautifulhorseinfiveminutes。

28.sb.spendssometime/money(in)doingsth。

某人花多少时间做某事

Eg.Ispenttwentyyearsinwritingthenovel。

29.sb.spendssometime/moneyonsth。

某事花了某人多少时间/金钱

Eg.Jimspent1000yuanonthebike。

30.sth.costssb.somemoney。

某物花了某人多少钱

Eg.ThebikecostJim1000yuan。

31.sb.payssomemoneyforsth。

某人为某物付了多少钱

Eg.Jimpaid1000yuanforthebike。

32.begin/startwithsth。开始做某事

Eg.Thestartedthemeetingwithasong。

33.begoingtodosth。打算做某事

Eg.WearegoingtostudyinJapan。

34.callAB叫AB

Eg.TheycalledthevillageGumtree。

35.thanksb.forsth./doingsth。

感谢某人做某事

Eg.Thankyouforyourhelp。

Thankyouforhelpingme。

36.What……for?为什么

Eg.WhatdoyoulearnEnglishfor?

37.How/whataboutdoingsth.?

做某事怎么样?

Eg.Howaboutgoingfishing?

38.S+be+the+最高级+of/in短语=

Eg.Lucyisthetallestinherclass。

39.S+be+比较级+thananyother+n。

Eg.Lucyistallerthananyotherstudentinherclass。

40.havetodosth。不得不做某事

Eg.Ihavetogohomenow。

41.hadbetterdosth。最好做某事

Eg.You’dbetterstudyhardatEnglish。

42.hadbetternotdosth。最好别做某事

Eg.You’dbetternotstayup。

43.helpsb.todosth。帮助某人做某事

Eg.LucyoftenhelpsLilytowashherclothes。

44.helpsb.dosth。帮助某人做某事

Eg.HeusuallyhelpsmelearnEnglish。

45.helpsb.withsth。帮助某人做某事

Eg.Isometimeshelpmymotherwiththehousework。

46.makeit+时间把时间定在几点

Eg.Let’smakeit8：30.

47.takesb.tosp带某人到某地

Eg.Mr.WangwilltakeustotheSummerPalacenextSunday。

49.havenothingtodo(withsb)

与某人没有关系

Eg.Thathasnothingtodowithme。

50.主语+don’tthink+从句

认为……不……

Eg.Idon’tthinkitwillraintomorrow。

When you were born, you need to face the ups and downs in our life. For

example, you need to learn to speak, learn to walk, learn to write, learn to

read, and so on. Whenever you learn a new thing, you will be always full of joy.

But the hardness only you know. Perhaps, you have thought about giving up, but

in the end you insist on. In this world, there is no difficult, only those who

do not adhere to. As long as you can hold on, thats not a thing. Perseverance

prevails! This is the eternal law! Come on.

Early this morning,my mother and i went for a walk in the park.we were

having great fun talking when suddenly a wallet,lying in the path, came into my

vision.i picked it up and opened it,trying to find any possible information

about the owner of the wallet.In great luck,we found a card with a telephone

number on it.so, we decided to call the owner.surprisingly,its right the owner

of the wallet.we agreed the meeting place and time for giving back his wallet on

the phone.finally,we returned the wallet right to the owner.he thanked us a lot

,and we feel pleased to.

what a nice day!

今天一大早，我和妈妈去散步在公园玩。正当我们玩得很高兴讲时，突然一个钱包在路上进入我的视野。我把它捡起来打开它，看能否找到任何关于钱包失主的信息。很运气，我们发现了一张卡片与住一个电话号码，我们决定通知失主。令人惊讶的是，这是正是失主的钱包。在电话里，我们约定了见面的地点和时间归还他的钱包。他很感谢我们，我们也感觉很开心。