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我的同学英语作文带翻译初一【汇编20篇】

导语:守望大海,或浓光粼粼,或汹涌澍湃,倾听大海,或温柔细腻或震撼人心。不再观望,闭上眼睛,用心倾听大海的声音,小编整理海的声音作文,欢迎阅读。

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grace is one of my classmates. she is not good at study, though she usually works very hard. maybe she just doesn’t find the learning method suitable for her. in my mind, she is clever. thongh she is not good at study, she is popular in our class. in all people’s mind, she is kind and optimistic. treating everyone as friend, she has no enemy. as she doesn’t study well, it is hard to avoid feeling sad. however, everytime she just feels sad for a while and then recovers for the first one. sometimes it is her who comforts us for not for not doing well in the exam. look, she is so cute!

格瑞斯是我的一个同学。她学习不好,虽然她平时非常努力学习。也许她只是没有找到适合自己的学习方法而已。在我眼里,她是很聪明的。虽然她学习不好,但她在班里人缘很好。在所有人的眼里,她是友好,乐观的。她对待每个人都像朋友一样,所以她没有敌人。因为学习不好,难免会感到悲伤。但是,每次她都只是难过一会,就第一个恢复了。有时候还是她安慰我们这些因为考试不好而难过的人。看,她是如此的可爱!

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篇1:英语日记带翻译

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The Wind And The Sun

风和太阳

One day the wind said to the sun, “Look at that man walking along the road.

I can get his cloak off more quickly than you can.”

有一天风跟太阳说: “看看那个沿着路上走的人.我可以比你快让他把披风脱下来.

“We will see about that,” said the sun. “I will let you try first.”

“我们等着看吧,”太阳说, “我让你先试.

So the wind tried to make the man take off his cloak. He blew and blew, but

the man only pulled his cloak more closely around himself.

因此风尝试让那个人把披风脱下来.他用力地吹,可是那个人把披风拉得更紧.

“I give up,” said the wind at last. “I cannot get his cloak off.” Then the

sun tried. He shone as hard as he could. The man soon became hot and took off

his cloak.

“我放弃了,”风最后说, “我无法让他把披风脱下来.”然后由太阳试试看.他尽可能地晒他.不久,那个人很热就把披风脱下来了.

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篇2:给英语老师的一封信带翻译

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Dear MrYang,

亲爱的杨老师

How iseverything going! Tomorrw is Teachers’ Day.I would like to express my sincerely wishes to you. You taught me English inthe primary school. That is the time to lay our foundation. And you help me laymy interest on English, which make me feel learn English easily in middleschool. I’m very appreciated that. Thank you very much. If it is convenient foryou, I would like to visit you this National Day. Happy Teachers’ Day again.

一切可好!明天就是教师节了。 我相向你表达我衷心的祝福。你在我小学的时候教我英语。那是打基础的时候。 是你让我对英语感兴趣。这让我在初中学习英语变得容易多了。我很感激。非常感谢你。如果方便的话,我想在今年国庆节去拜访你。再次祝你教师节快乐。

Best wishes,

Lucy

露西

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篇3:春天的英语作文带翻译

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This is a good start, the world for her coming lit up all the lights in between heaven and earth, she picked up the breeze of the pen, draw the mind carpet of flowers of the earth. In this world, the spring is coming.

Start from now, the world is like open space, after she started her unique prosperous. All things recovery, the creatures of the world have started to busy to complete the mission of nature gives them, to life hard for the prosperity in the world, the flowers grass grow hard, that used to sorrow, now taken on a new look! The cold night, be light cut, deported from warm, everything begins to exclamation busy!

Arrogance arrogance was away, instead, the tenderness of spring, gentle hand to comfort the frightened animals, leading them go out of his house; Spring breeze gently calling underground) awoken elf, they go up from the soil, eventually turned into a small animals like to eat fruit, to appease these lovely children of nature.

The small pool in the distance, the duck mother followed by many cute little duck, the happy fish swimming in the water, the water unconsciously become very warm. Nearby, in the warm sunshine, the petals flying in the sunshine, full of the flower branches near the grass. Those beautiful flowers, as long as gently touch will have dropped.

Then under the sky began to rain, accompanied by more and more rapid "tick tick" melody, rain, and the fairies began to scour the chill of evil, for you weave with air of filar silk cool and refreshing, this is the beginning of spring.

这是一个美好的开始,世界因她的来临点亮了天地之间所有的灯,她拿起微风的笔,画出心目中繁花似锦的大地。在这个世界里,春天来临了。

从此刻开始,世界就像初开的宇宙,开始了她独特的繁华。万物复苏,世界的生灵们开始忙碌的完成大自然给予它们的使命,为了世间的繁华努力生活,花儿草儿拼命生长,那曾经凄清之地,现在焕然一新!那寒冷的夜,被光芒划破,被温暖驱逐,万物开始感叹繁华!

嚣张的气焰被赶走,取而代之的是春天的温柔,温和的手安慰着受惊的动物们,引领它们放心大胆走出自己的家;春风轻声呼唤着地下沉眠的小精灵,它们从土壤中奋发向上,最终变成了小动物们爱吃的果实,来安抚这些大自然的可爱的孩子们。

远处的小池边,鸭子妈妈后面跟着许多乖巧可爱的小鸭子,水中的鱼儿欢快的游着,池水在不知不觉中变得十分温暖。近处,在温暖的阳光照耀下,花瓣在阳光下飞舞,开满花的树枝几乎垂到青草上。那些美丽的花儿,只要轻轻一碰就会纷纷落下。

这时的天空开始下微雨,伴随着越来越急促的“嘀嗒嘀嗒”的旋律声时,雨,这个小精灵开始冲刷罪恶的寒气,换来用空气织出的丝丝清凉,这就是春天的开始。

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篇4:初一我的梦想英语作文

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I have had a dream since my boyhood. I want very much to be a doctor.

I want to be a doctor because doctors can cure patients and thus make people healthy and happy. Doctors can offer their help to the poor people so that more people can get medical help.

If I were a doctor, the more patients I cured, the happier I will feel. That is the very reason I want to become a doctor.

I will study hard so that my dream can come true in the future.

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篇5:马克吐温的《百万英镑》英语读后感带翻译

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百万英镑》这部小说你有看过吗?下面是为大家带来的英语读后感,欢迎参考选择。

Mark Twains short story of "one million pounds" is a very good work. The article on the "money is everything," "money is omnipotent," the idea of a satire, to expose the ugly face of capitalist society.

"One million pounds" is about a poor, honest man, that is, the *** of this story has received a pair of brothers, the letter sent to him inside one million pounds. The brothers had made a bet, gambling, if a poor, honest people who come knocking on the door received the one million pounds, he will be what kind of results? Brother that he would starve to death because he could not prove that the money was his own, will be subject to other peoples doubts, and even the banks do not let him save money. His younger brother that he would lead a very good, and therefore they have the brothers of one million pounds will be loaned to check the poorest people, and spent 30 days abroad. Did not expect that during this period of time, people have the rare fortune suddenly rich, has tried to cozy up to him, from the free food, buy clothes, free accommodation, like a beggar, like to please him, and continue to improve his social status until the exception of the highest outdoor Wang Duke on! Not only that, he also has been a good wife and 30,000 pounds of bank interest, and finally from two brothers got a very good job. Lived a very, very happy life.

See here, I am so envious of the "lucky" ***, but at the same time I would like to: people reason to curry favor with him, not just because when people value money too it? Worship of money is shameful and should not be reaping more! Money is not omnipotent, the world than money, there are many more important things ... ...

马克吐温著的短篇小说《百万英镑》是一部很好的作品。文章对“金钱就是一切”“金钱是万能的”的想法进行了讽刺,揭穿了资本主义社会的丑恶面容。

《百万英镑》是讲一个贫穷、诚实的人,也就是这个故事的主人公收到了一对兄弟的信,信里面送给了他一百万英镑。原来这对兄弟打了一个赌,赌假如一个贫穷、诚实的人收到天上掉下的一百万英镑,他会有怎样的结果?哥哥以为他会饿死,因为他无法证明这些钱是他自己的,会受到别人的怀疑,连银行都不会让他存钱。弟弟则以为他会过得很好,于是他们兄弟俩将一百万英镑的支票借给了这个贫穷的人,并出国呆了三十天。没想到在这段时间内,人们对这位突然暴富的罕见富翁,竟拼命地拉拢他,从免费吃饭,买衣服,到免费住宿,一个个像乞丐一样讨好他,并不断提高他的社会地位,一直到了除王室外最高的公爵之上!期末总结不光如此,他还得到了一位好妻子和三万英镑的银行利息,最后还从两兄弟那儿得到了一份很好的工作。过着非常非常幸福的生活。

看到这儿,我很羡慕这位如此“幸运”的主人公,但同时我又想:人们之所以讨好他,不就是因为当时人们太看重金钱了吗?拜金主义是可耻的,不劳而获更不应该!金钱不是万能的,世界上还有很多比金钱更重要的东西……

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篇6:英语作文带翻译:春天快乐的一天

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A Happy Day in Spring

It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.

春天到了,今天的天气晴朗,多云。在公园里有很多的树木。布莱克先生一家在公园有一个野餐。他们带到了很多食物。有水果,饮料和面包。布莱克夫妇彼此交流着。他们聊得非常开心。荌在看报纸。汤姆喜欢放风筝。风筝飞得非常高。他们现在饿了,想吃带的食物,他们非常开心。

[英语作文带翻译:春天快乐的一天

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篇7:我的家庭英语作文及翻译

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My family has a father, mother, grandfather, grandmother, and my family.

My father is a humorous dad, he would often make everyone laugh, speak some jokes to me, sometimes joke some fallacies, mother will said Dad, what did you teach your daughter, daughter are bad. Dad said nothing, not. In fact, he is very concerned about me.

My mother is a good mother, is not "free" at home what are not the wife. Eleven hard-working and beautiful wife and mother, mother often give us to do good, that smell, taste really called the people saliva. Say, now eat. My grandfather is a hard-working grandfather, grandfather every day very early, every time we get up, Grandpa back to the ground clean, clean up, the rice is cooked, but also to the field to turn back.

My grandmother is a frugal grandmother, grandmother if you see good-looking clothes, she will look at the store for a long time, the way to see the clothes in the eyes, go home to buy a cloth to do one, you do not say that, compared to buy a little also not bad, but a lot cheaper. Although the beauty of her grandmother, but very frugal, but also often education I do not spend money. To use on the blade.

This is my family.

我的家庭有爸爸,妈妈,外公,外婆,还有我这个大家庭组成。

我的爸爸是一个幽默的爸爸,他时常会把大家逗笑,讲一些笑话给我听,有时笑话有一些歪理,妈妈就会说爸爸,你怎么教女儿的,女儿都学坏了。爸爸却说没事,不会的。其实他是非常关心我的。

我的妈妈是一个贤惠的妈妈,不是“闲”在家里什么都不会的妻子。十一勤劳又美丽的妻子和妈妈,妈妈时常会给我们做好吃的,那个香味,味道真叫人流口水。说起来,现在就想吃了。我的外公是一个勤劳的外公,外公每天都起的很早,每当我们才起床,外公早把地扫干净了,拖干净了,饭煮好了,还到田里转了一圈回来了呢。

我的外婆是一个节俭的外婆,外婆要是看见好看的衣服,她会在商店看很久,把衣服的样子看在眼里,回家就自己买布做一件,你还别说,比买的一点也不差,却便宜了很多。外婆虽然爱美,却很节俭,也经常教育我不要乱花钱。要用在刀刃上。

这就是我的家庭。

[我的家庭英语作文及翻译

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篇8:以游泳运动员为题的英语作文带翻译

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Karen is on the swim team. She is on the swim team at school. She is a good swimmer. All the swimmers on the swim team are good swimmers. She swims every day. She goes to the pool after her last class. Her last class is her English class. After English class she walks over to the pool. She changes into her swim suit. She dives into the water. She swims for two hours. Her coach watches her swim. He gives her advice. He tells her how to swim better. Her coach is her swim instructor. He is a good instructor. She will win a race one day.

凯伦是在游泳队。她在学校的游泳队。她是一个很好的游泳运动员。游泳队的所有游泳运动员都是优秀的游泳运动员。她每天游泳。她上一节课,她去游泳池了。她的最后一节课是她的英语课。在英语课上,她走到游泳池。她改变了她的游泳衣。她潜入水中。她游泳游了2个小时。她的教练看她游泳。他给她的忠告。他告诉她如何更好地游泳。她的教练是她的游泳教练。他是个好老师。她将赢得一天的比赛。

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篇9:春节英语作文带翻译

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There are many festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival

most.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because

it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family

gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they

are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit

together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to

have some fun.

On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone

they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we

will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a

time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.

在我国,一年有很多节日,在这些节日中,我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日,更因为它是新一年的开始,给人们带来新的希望,也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方,人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。

通常,我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐,之后家人团座一起,分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一,人们通常会早起,会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里,人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之,春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。

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篇10:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇11:英语励志名言带翻译

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1. The greatest test of courage on earth is to bear defeat without losing heart.

世界上对勇气的最大考验是忍受失败而不丧失信心。

2. A mans best friends are his ten fingers.

人最好的朋友是自己的十个手指。

3. Only they who fulfill their duties in everyday matters will fulfill them on great occasions.

只有在日常生活中尽责的人才会在重大时刻尽责。

4. The shortest way to do many things is to only one thing at a time.

做许多事情的捷径就是一次只做一件一件事。

5. One never lose anything by politeness.

讲礼貌不吃亏。

6. Theres only one corner of the universe you can be sure of improving, and thats your own self.

这个宇宙中只有一个角落你肯定可以改进,那就是你自己。

7. The world is like a mirror: Frown at itand it frowns at you; smile, and it smiles too.

世界犹如一面镜子:朝它皱眉它就朝你皱眉,朝它微笑它也吵你微笑。

8. Death comes to all, but great achievements raise a monument which shall endure until the sun grows old.

死亡无人能免,但非凡的成就会树起一座纪念碑,它将一直立到太阳冷却之时。

9. The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.

伟人之所以伟大,是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。

10. Suffering is the most powerful teacher of life.

苦难是人生最伟大的老师。

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篇12:英语日记大全带翻译

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I got up early this morning。 After breakfast I went to the beach near my home with my friends。 We went there by bike。 As soon as we got there, we played with the sand and walked on the beach。 We also went boating。It was really fantastic。 In the afternoon I went to the library and read books there。 I also helped my parents make dinner。 After dinner I washed the dishes。 In the evening I did my homework。 Then I surfed the internet。 I had a busy and interesting day。翻译:我这天起床早。吃完早饭后我和朋友们去了我家附近的海滩。我们骑自行车去的。我们一到那里就玩沙子,在海滩走。我们也划船。很棒。下午我去图书馆看书。我也帮忙我的父母做晚饭。饭后我洗碗。晚上我做作业,然后上网。我这天很忙也过得很愉快

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篇13:相遇小学同学初一优秀作文

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今天可以当做我的幸运日吗?可以吗?

今天和伙伴约好去马巷玩,可无意中碰到了小学同学,我的第一反应是:马上跑过去抱住她们。我跑了上去,抱住了良久:“快被你抱死了。”我才放开了她们。真像是放久的拼图,今天把它拼凑齐了。我很开心,眼泪差点就流出来了。可是我的伙伴要出发了,我只好跟着她们去玩了。刚拼好的,又将它打散。

在离开她俩之前,我在一次的拥抱了她们,听到伙伴们叫我的时候,我才离她们而去。越想越难过。泪水不知什么时候灌满了眼眶,流了下来。其中一位伙伴发觉我哭了,问我怎么了。我抱上她痛哭了起来,没有声音,豆一样大的泪珠一个个跑了出来。一个个伙伴问我怎么了“露露,你怎么了?怎么哭了?”我猛的摇头,我不想因为我的事,不想把大家的心情搞砸了。

走的时候,我的头一直低,泪水一直流着。一个伙伴走来跟我说:露露,你不能一直停留在小学时的记忆里,你不是还有我们吗?”我抬起头来,笑了笑。这一路,又遇见了小学那边的好朋友,我们互相打了招呼,就擦肩而过了。真不知道看见我她们会想些什么?

人总会成长,不会一直停留在某些记忆里。

[相遇小学同学初一优秀作文

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篇14:初一英语

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Everyone has a hobby. I like doing sports and I like playing basketball the

best. So I decided to play basketball every morning with my classmates. Today,

the weather was nice. Early in the morning, I got up and worn clothes quickly.

When I arrived at the basketball ground, my classmates have already been there.

First, we ran around the basketball ground so that we could play better in the

game. After that, we began to play basketball. In the end, we beat another team.

Although we all felt tired, we were happy and proud.

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篇15:过生日英语作文带翻译

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Today is my birthday and Im so excited about it. In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said, "Today is my birthday, dont forget it!" At school, I got many gifts and cards from my classmates and had a lot of fun. But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

When it was time to leave school I couldnt wait to go home. When I open the door, there wasnt anybody in the house. There was only a note that said, "Coming home late tonight,mum and dad. "I try to call them but there was no answer.I was so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be! I was so sad that I couldnt eat anything. I just did my homework and waited for them.

And then,things changed completely. It was about time for dinner, my mother called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house. When I got there I couldnt believed my eyes. Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives, my friends and even my classmates. There was so many gifts and a big cake. What a surprising birthday party! We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.

今天是我的生日,我很兴奋。早上我把一张纸条放在桌子上对我的妈妈说,“今天是我的生日,别忘了它!”在学校里,我从我的同学那得到了许多礼物和卡片,我很开心。但我仍然期待放学后的生日晚会。

当放学的时候,我迫不及待的想回家。当我打开门的时候,没有人在房子里。只有一张纸条,说,“今晚会晚回家,妈妈和爸爸。”我试着打电话给他们,但没有人回答。我很震惊,他们忘了我的生日?怎么会是这样!我伤心的我不能吃下任何东西。我只是做了我的家庭作业,等他们。

然后,事情发生了变化。这是吃晚饭的时间了,我的母亲打电话告诉我去我家附近的餐馆。当我到那里的时候,我不能相信我的眼睛。大家都在那儿:我的父母,我的亲人,我的朋友和我的同学。有那么多的礼物和大蛋糕。多么令人惊喜的生日派对!我们都很开心,这是最好的生日晚会。

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篇16:英语日记大全带翻译

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Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents。 Kaifeng has many great snacks, such as steamed buns, sesame seed Gaul。 Kaifeng also on the famous Qingming River Park, I think it has to be very beautiful。 My parents will be opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night。翻译:下周我要和我的父母去开封。开封有许多十分棒的小吃,比如小笼包子、高卢烧饼。开封还有著名的清明上河园,我想那必须十分的漂亮。我和我的父母将会在开封见到我的叔叔,并住在他家一晚。

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篇17:英语封信带翻译

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My fathers name is ____. He has an English name, Jack. He is thirty-eight years old. My father is a worker. Heworks in a factory. He has two big eyes and two big ears. He has short hair. My father is very thin. He is only fifty kilograms. He likes learning English very much. He learns English everyday. My father likes watching TV. His favorite television channel is CCTV-10, because he can learn a lot English from the program Outlook English at that channel.

English is my fathers good friend. I am my father?s friend, too.

【参考翻译

我的父亲叫__。他有一个英文名字,杰克。他今年38岁,是一个工人。他工作在一个工厂。他有两个大眼睛和两个大耳朵。他有短的头发。我的父亲是非常瘦。他只有50公斤。他非常喜欢学习英语。他每天都学英语。我的父亲喜欢看电视。他最喜欢的电视频道是CCTV-10,因为他可以学到很多英语的项目前景的英语频道。

英语是我父亲的好朋友。我也是我父亲的好朋友。

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篇18:英语简单自我介绍带翻译

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Hello everyone.

Now let me talk about myself.

My name is _____.I was born in _____.There are _____people in my family, my father is a _____, my mother is a _______.And as everyone know,Im a student.Everyone has his own interests.As for me,I like reading books,playing basketball,listening to the music and so on.Now today we are in the same class,I hope we will get on well with each other.Thanks.

大家好。

现在让我来介绍一下我自己

我的名字叫______。我出生在_______。我家有_______口人,我的爸爸是一个________,我的妈妈是_______。那么就如大家所知,我当然就是一个学生了。每一个人都有他自己的兴趣。至于我,我喜欢看书,打篮球,听音乐等等。今天我们相聚在同一个教室,我希望我们将会相处愉悦。谢谢大家。

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篇19:父母教育孩子英语作文翻译

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如果Parants负起责任,也应受到惩罚,如果他们的孩子表现不好?

事实上,家长在儿童的成长是非常重要的作用。但是,我们不能认为父母应该负起责任,受到惩罚,如果他们的孩子表现不好。否则,这将是不公平的,一些家长,我们应该客观地考虑这个问题。

一些家长教导子女非常小心,告诉他们该怎么做,怎么做,什么是错的,什么是正确的。他们尽量引导他们childrn,为他们提供学习和生活的忠告儿童。随着父母的指令,有些孩子表现得很好。然而,还是孩子谁表现不好。在这种情况下,我们不应该批评孩子的父母,如果他们表现不好。

当然,也有父母,谁是忙着自己的事日夜其他种类,忽略了儿童的教育。虽然他们提供最好的生活,他们的子女,他们忽视教导子女如何正确地思考。在这种情况下,家长应该受到惩罚,如果孩子表现不好。

总之,我们应考虑不同情况,作出客观的决定,对于许多因素可能导致儿童不良行为。也许父母的因素之一。除了上述情况,还有其他。这些父母是谁表现bodly可能导致他们的孩子表现不好。这类父母应该受到惩罚。

因此,不负责任的父母应该受到惩罚。我们应该给予全面考虑这个问题。

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他喜欢笑。笑,露出两个小酒窝和一副洁白的牙齿,酒窝里填充了一些飞扬,告诉你有资本轻狂。

她喜欢幻想。月满西楼,她习惯趴在窗台上,打开心扉,任凭它随意地飘荡。追朔韵味无穷的童年,或幻想将来的一切,也总说,希望自己生如夏花之绚烂,死如秋叶之静美。然后,微微一笑,继续趴在窗台上。

她喜欢孤独。她说她不留恋车来人往的繁华的闹市,只是希望,能拥有一片皎洁的月光,在无垠的田野中,独自享受静穆的夜。森林中的一间小木屋是她的向往。

她喜欢看书。不,确切她说,是品书,品味张爱玲,品味三毛,品味米兰,昆德拉。“凡有所学,皆成性格”,她亦如此。

她喜欢的还有很多……

她喜欢冬日的宁静,她喜欢蔚蓝的天空,她喜欢缠绵的细雨,她喜欢圣洁的白雪……总之,她喜欢一切的诗情画意。

她,是一朵欲开未开的百合,藏了许多欲说还休的心事。

她,是一捧手心里的爆米花,甜甜的,却又不安分地跳动着。

她,是一片热带的阳光,炽热而又纯净。

她,是海边的空气,清新而自然。

她……

她是一个谜,她不喜欢风,因风潮起潮落,而风无法确定自己的方向,无法明白自己的价值。可她却十分清楚自己的目标。

她并非弱不禁风,相么的,它很坚强。她曾说她不会轻易落泪,虽然眼泪很美。她很出色,但她喜欢平庸。她很成功,但她喜欢失败。她很乘巧,但她喜欢叛逆。

同窗几载……

竟不知不觉成了好友!

大概我与她有太多相似点……

同窗的她!

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