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以广场为话题的初一英语作文附翻译(推荐20篇)

导语:现在在校园里有很多勤工俭学的学生。他们在尽量不影响学习的情况下做很多的兼职赚取生活费。对于这种现象你怎么看?以下是小编为大家收集的以广场为话题的初一英语作文附翻译。供大家参考阅读。希望喜欢。

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今天就是英语外研比赛的日子了,我被安排在下午2.30那场,老妈的单位离考场比较近,上午我便跟她去单位值班。

我在老妈的办公室里,一直都在背稿,时间过得很快,稿纸在我的手中不停地抖动,说好的不紧张呢?

简单吃了点饭,老妈看我这副状态,她提议说,咱们提前溜达着去吧,就当散散步。

午后的街道有些冷清,看到不错的景致,老妈竟不忘给我拍张照片啥的,她可真有兴致。不觉中就来到了“宝睿国际未来小学”门口,我们是下午考生中来得最早的。

等了好久一些家长才陪着孩子到来,有接待老师把我们安排在家长等候区,并给选手们讲了些注意事项,接着老师又读了考场名单,我被安排在第三考场。

这是初赛,演讲的内容是自我介绍加才艺表演。我看到有的选手准备得真棒!不光自己化了淡妆,还梳了很复杂很漂亮的辫子,有的还穿了美丽的裙子。有不少同学手里拿了画板,上面是他们精心绘制的图画,他们边指着自己的画边小声念着英语,看来他们的才艺表演一定是用英语介绍自己的画了。而我的才艺显得多么的微不足道,我只打算读一首英文小诗。

上午考完的同学在群里发来信息,他们说很简单,评委主要看你的口语能力,觉得背不好的,也可以直接读,我终于有了一些安心。

马上就轮到我了,听到老师念我名字,稿子在我手中抖的更厉害了。原来考场里只有三位评委老师,但其中有一位外国人。我的心开始咚咚跳个不停,手心也开始冒汗。我刚说一句“Hello everyone.”,三位评委老师便微笑着向我点头示意。他们这一微笑,我反而不自在的很,我僵硬的站在他们面前,机械地象在用英文诵经一般,我甚至听到自己的声音就象一只大苍蝇在我周围嗡嗡着飞,它飞飞停停,停停飞飞,可恶极了。我发现三位评委老师都在低着头,记录着什么,也不知他们听清了这“嗡嗡”声没有。自我介绍环节很快就完了,我看没人看我,便拿出稿子,直接读那首“四季”的小诗。依然没人看我,平时读得一点问题都没有,此时竟卡了好几下,自己都觉得糟糕透顶。

三分钟终于结束了,我向三位评委鞠了躬说了“thank you”之后,心情才平静下来。

因为我是最后一场,所以,我来到家长区没多久,就有老师进来,当场宣布进入复赛的同学名单了。老师神采飞扬,声音洪亮,她说:“非常高兴地通知大家,祝贺以下进入复赛的同学,读到名字的同学也请家长一起上台!”

接着老师便念“张三,李四”,没有我的名字!

我沮丧极了,连为大家鼓掌的力气都没有了。

也许从我站到台上的那一刻就被评委老师“秒杀”掉了。老妈反倒安慰我说:“你在这里登过台,已经很棒了。但一定记住,台上一分钟,台下十年功啊。”

是的,通过参加这次比赛,我也找到了自己努力的方向。

路过一家烘焙店,我说:“老妈,给我买点吃的吧,我要化悲痛为力量!”

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Winter is like your room, if you can clean it very well, you will like it, but if you throw things in a mess, you dont want to know, you must hate it. "Winter" is the same, you use a good attitude to look at it, you will definitely like me, step by step slowly falling in love with the "different winter".

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Anyway, there are also its shortcomings in winter. Of course, there are cold and cold currents that make the nose and water direct. They will make us want to hide in the quilt, but occasionally, this is not a bad thing. In a word, I like it in spring, summer, autumn and winter, and each season has its own characteristics, of which, winter is a very special one. But every trip to winter makes me feel different.

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反正不管怎么说,当然冬季也有它的缺点,像是有冷到令人鼻水直流的寒流等,都会使我们想躲在被窝里不要出来,但偶尔这样,也不是件坏事吧!总而言之,春夏秋冬我都喜欢,每一季都有它的特色,其中,冬季是很特别的一个喔!但是每经过一趟“冬之旅”,都让我有不同的感受。

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如果Parants负起责任,也应受到惩罚,如果他们的孩子表现不好?

事实上,家长在儿童的成长是非常重要的作用。但是,我们不能认为父母应该负起责任,受到惩罚,如果他们的孩子表现不好。否则,这将是不公平的,一些家长,我们应该客观地考虑这个问题。

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当然,也有父母,谁是忙着自己的事日夜其他种类,忽略了儿童的教育。虽然他们提供最好的生活,他们的子女,他们忽视教导子女如何正确地思考。在这种情况下,家长应该受到惩罚,如果孩子表现不好。

总之,我们应考虑不同情况,作出客观的决定,对于许多因素可能导致儿童不良行为。也许父母的因素之一。除了上述情况,还有其他。这些父母是谁表现bodly可能导致他们的孩子表现不好。这类父母应该受到惩罚。

因此,不负责任的父母应该受到惩罚。我们应该给予全面考虑这个问题。

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This is a good start, the world for her coming lit up all the lights in between heaven and earth, she picked up the breeze of the pen, draw the mind carpet of flowers of the earth. In this world, the spring is coming.

Start from now, the world is like open space, after she started her unique prosperous. All things recovery, the creatures of the world have started to busy to complete the mission of nature gives them, to life hard for the prosperity in the world, the flowers grass grow hard, that used to sorrow, now taken on a new look! The cold night, be light cut, deported from warm, everything begins to exclamation busy!

Arrogance arrogance was away, instead, the tenderness of spring, gentle hand to comfort the frightened animals, leading them go out of his house; Spring breeze gently calling underground) awoken elf, they go up from the soil, eventually turned into a small animals like to eat fruit, to appease these lovely children of nature.

The small pool in the distance, the duck mother followed by many cute little duck, the happy fish swimming in the water, the water unconsciously become very warm. Nearby, in the warm sunshine, the petals flying in the sunshine, full of the flower branches near the grass. Those beautiful flowers, as long as gently touch will have dropped.

Then under the sky began to rain, accompanied by more and more rapid "tick tick" melody, rain, and the fairies began to scour the chill of evil, for you weave with air of filar silk cool and refreshing, this is the beginning of spring.

这是一个美好的开始,世界因她的来临点亮了天地之间所有的灯,她拿起微风的笔,画出心目中繁花似锦的大地。在这个世界里,春天来临了。

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How happy I am. Yesterday I finished all the work very quick, so I have a

lot of time to do myself. Sometimes finish work early is a good thing, we can

have more interests to do the next work. Because of this, I write English dairy

eight in the morning. But I wrote it in the evening in the pass day. Everyone,

if you can finish the work quickly, not lazy, try your best.

我有多么的高兴,昨天我很快完成了所有的工作,所以我有很多时间用来自己分配。有时提前完成学习任务是件好事,我们会有更多的兴趣去做下一件事情。正因为如此,我写英语日记都是在早上八点。但在过去的晚上我还是要在晚上写。任何人,如果你能完成这项工作得很快,不要偷懒,尽自己最大的努力。

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The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It s not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It s really a nice place to visit.

黄山是中国最著名的山脉之一。它位于安徽的南部。每年都有成千上万的中国人和外国人去那里参观。离这儿不远。乘公共汽车到那儿大约需要三个小时的时间。你也可以乘火车或乘飞机去那里。当你在爬山的时候,你可以欣赏到你周围的云朵,奇异的松树和独特的岩石。清晨,太阳升起时,天空看起来很漂亮。这真是一个很好的地方。

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When I got home, it was very dark. Why? There is no electric. Every year in

Beijing, there is lack of electric to supply. Because there are a lot of

factories. And it is very cold in winter. So the government decided: supply

electric to resident and the factories must stop working. My house is in the

manufacturing district. I was unlucky. It was very cold. So my father use the

electric making machine to make electric. Oh! What a unlucky winter!

当我回到家,这是非常黑暗。为什么呢?没有电。每年在北京,还有就是缺少电力供应。因为有很多工厂。这是非常寒冷的冬天。因此,政府决定:供应电对居民和工厂必须停止工作。我的房子是在生产区。我是不幸的。这是非常寒冷。所以,我的父亲用途电制造的机器使电。哦!什么是倒霉的冬天!

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The Spring Festival, every family, bursting with happiness decorated, our family is no exception.

On the thirty day of the year, I came to grandmas home with my mom and dad. Morning, the street is always a "crash" huge crowds of people, and the "bite" sound. I asked my sister strangely, "what are these people doing, sister?" My sister smiled, but did not speak, so I put all his strength into the crowd, there is a pair of men are dragon dance. The dragons aunt and uncle are dressed in white clothes and red pants, they catch the dragon, the Dragon stretching from Voldemort swinging, gongs and drums accompanied by the sound of the dragon. They are praying for peace for people through every street and lane. At this time, we followed the team to the river. They were around the big boat by the river, praying for prosperity. The end of the dragon, we listened to the distant sound of gongs and drums, gazed at the dim figure.

In the evening, our family sat on a stool, eating a reunion meal. After dinner, we stood on the balcony upstairs and looked at the downstairs fireworks. The first one is the flower basket. The flower basket is made up of six circular holes. The flower basket first sprayed sparks, then suddenly flew up to the sky and burst into many colorful sparks. So it sprayed six times. It seemed to be blessing for people. Sister feel good, could not wait to pick up the Butterfly King, the elder sister quickly ignited in their hands, "flutter" sound of fireworks, to a light butterfly, dancing in the sky, the last "bang", divided into many a spark in the sky slowly and gently. Float to the ground. I took a bowl, hold in the hand, "bang", "bang", ten guns, resounded through the night sky symbolizes our joy and happiness.

The sky was getting dark. Our family went to the room to watch the Spring Festival Gala, say and laugh, how happy the Spring Festival is!

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇9:英语封信带翻译

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How to have a healthy body? First of all, you have to play sports like

playing basketball and running. You should also eat more fruits and vegetables,

such as apples and bananas, which are rich in vitamins. If you do that, you

wont get sick often. And you can not stay up late, to early to bed and early to

rise, you should speak hygiene, clean themselves, often to drink lots of water

every day, not to eat junk food, and so on are conducive to a healthy body, the

most important thing is to pay attention to safety.

怎样拥有一个健康的身体?首先你必须经常运动比如打篮球,跑步。你还要多吃蔬菜水果,例如苹果,香蕉,它们含有丰富的维生素。如果这样做,你就不会经常得病。并且你不可以熬夜,要早睡早起,你要讲卫生,经常清洁自己,每天要喝很多水,不能吃垃圾食品等等都利于身体健康,最重要的是注意安全。

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篇10:有关交流英语初一

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In the last century, the government carried out the policy of family

planning to control the increasing population. So most families have only one

child, but recently, a new policy has been announced and people can have the

second child. It sounds like the good news for the family, as the only child can

have a sibling to company. While for some parents, they seem to be not the

qualified parents. A boy complained that his parents’ second child was the smart

phone, because they lowed down their heads all the time. Many parents did not

realize the lack of communication with their children. If they want another

child, they’d better learn to communicate their kids first.

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篇11:英语初一

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Do you have any hobbies? If not ,what do you do in the holidays ? I have

many hobbies .On weekdays ,when I study in school ,I play with my classmates

.Sometimes I play volleyball with them,sometimes I play football with them .I

think playing football is very interesting and exciting .But when I get home ,I

like listening to music alone .Also I like reading story books.When I am not

happy about something ,I usually draw some pictures though I am not good at

drawing .On weekends ,there is no class ,I like shopping with my friends and my

parents .

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篇12:给英语老师的一封信英文带翻译

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Dear Mr. Lai,

尊敬的赖老师

I am writing this letter just want to say thanks to you. I am going to graduate in two weeks. You have been my class adviser for three years. During these three years you have spent lots of energy on us. You are not only teaching knowledge in the class, but also care our life. Sometimes we are afraid of you, because of your strict requirement for our study. However, you are so helpful in the daily life. No matter what difficulties we are in, you will help if you can. So, I also want to say sorry to you for making so much trouble. But you bear all my trouble. I don’t know what kind of class adviser I will meet in the future study, but I will remember and appreciate you forever. I want to say thank you again.

我写这封只是想跟你说声谢谢。还有两周我就要毕业了。你做了我三年的班主任。在这三年你花了那么多精力在我们身上。你不仅仅在课堂上传授我们知识,而且在生活上也很关心我们。不过有时候我们有点怕你,因为你对我们学习的严格要求。不过,在日常生活中你是那么的乐于助人。无论我们遇到什么样的困难,只要能够帮得上忙你都会帮我们。所以,我还想对你说声对不起,给你带来那么多的麻烦。但是你都一一包容了。我不知道我会在今后的学习中遇到什么样的班主任,但是我会一直记得你、感激你的。我想再次说声谢谢。

Regarded

Student

学生

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篇13:英语日记带翻译

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I bought a jeans today

Today,I went shopping with my intimate.We set out at 11:00 by riding Ofo

bicycle.Because both of us hadn‘t eaten breakfirst.,as soon as we arrived the

street,we ate a cheese iscream respectively.Then we went to underground

market.In the market,I bought a blue jeans,and my intimate bought a short

jeans.After three hours of hanging around the street,we were very tired and

hungry,so we bought a new chicken cutlet,and then went home by bus.We were so

hungry that we ate the chicken cutlet on the bus.After I backed home,I tried my

new jeans on,my mother said that looks old,let it be,as long as I happy.

参考翻译

今天我买了一条牛仔裤

今天,我和我的闺蜜去逛街。我们上午11点就骑小黄车长发了。因为我们都没有吃早餐,所以我们一到那就各自吃了一个奶酪冰淇淋。然后我们就去地下商场。在商场里,我买了一条蓝色长牛仔裤,我的闺蜜买了一条短牛仔裤。我们逛了3个小时的街之后,又饿又累,所以我们就买了正新鸡排并且坐公交车回去。因为我们实在太饿了,于是就在公交车上吃了鸡排。我回家之后,就试穿了我的新牛仔裤,我妈妈说那看起来太成熟了,管他呢,我开心就好。

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篇14:以眼泪为话题的初一

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泪水,是什么?她是感情的流露,是真情的付出。在泪流满面的时候,那一颗颗晶莹的泪珠,诉说着,一段段动人的故事;浇灌着,每一个读者的心田……

慢慢的回首,搜索着我记忆宝库,一段往事来到了我的脑海:

那,姥姥的病床前,望着床上的姥姥,我哭了,并不清楚自己可以流出那么多,那么多的泪水……

姥姥安静地躺在床上,昏迷中的她被手术这么的筋疲力尽,那一双充满慈爱目光的眼睛,一直紧闭……

我哭了,泪水,一滴一滴轻轻抚摸着姥姥的手。这,是最悲痛的眼泪么?那一滴滴泪水,似乎带着我的思念,通过那一双温暖的手,一点一点注入了姥姥的身心……

我默默的离开了,不想让在场的人发现我内心的波涛,或者说,不想让无助的眼泪在医院消逝……

过了一个星期,我又来到了医院,推开了医院房门,姥姥那慈爱的目光定格在了我的身上,我那一颗颗金豆豆,又掉落了下来。但,那似乎是惊喜的眼泪。身形、记忆在那一望中珍惜、珍藏……

我坐在姥姥的床前,,抚摸着姥姥的双手,努力使心情平静下来。让那双无休止的手停止运动。正当我的双手触摸到那一个“机器”时,它竟停止了运动。那时的眼眶一湿,泪水又夺眶而出了……

那一天,暑假归来的我来到了姥姥家的院中,发现姥姥正在院子里看小麻雀吃小米。惊奇的叫了一声“姥姥竟回应了一声,泪水又夺眶而出了。伴着那喜悦的泪水,姥姥的眼眶似乎也湿润了几分……我,感到了人与人之间的感情,这都归功于那晶莹的眼泪……

泪水,是什么?是悲伤的表达,是喜悦的庆祝。在泪水中,我们一次次被感情所磨合,被爱所洗礼……

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篇15:端午节的初一英语

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Today is the Dragon Boat Festival in the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar. Every year, aunt will pack lots of delicious food. Sweet sweet jujube dumplings for us, especially my mother and I like it best. You can also eat with your elders and sisters at your grandmothers house, and enjoy the Dragon Boat Festival, but this year, it is not so lively. Uncle and aunt went out to earn money. Uncle went out with his sister. There were only three family members and grandparents. It looks very cold.

Early this morning, I have the mother will give me to eat dumplings package dates, who knows but mother was busy with housework. At noon, dad cooked a good meal and cooked food, called grandpa and grandma to come to dinner, but not a bit of a cheerful atmosphere. In the afternoon, in order not to let the festival have a little meaning, my mother and I went out for a stroll with my grandmother. We went to the market, but did not see the shadow of half of the dumplings, to buy dumplings but no jujube. I was disappointed. My mother comforted me and said, "next time you see the decision to sell the zongzi, you can eat it." Its a little better to hear that. Mom visited the clothing store and took us to the home supermarket, and bought some delicious food on the way. From the supermarket out, we have been fruitful.

Back home, I wanted my uncle and aunt, and my four year old sister, so I went online to chat with them, and the little aunt laughed and told me that a lot of jujube zongzi was given to me at the Dragon Boat Festival next year, so I could eat enough. Though we have not been together for Dragon Boat Festival this year, we can also enjoy seeing them online. Uncle and aunt also have an appointment with me. Next year, Dragon Boat Festival will definitely come back for the holidays.

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篇16:关于春节的英语作文带翻译

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the spring festival

the spring festival, chinese new year,is the most important festival for  all of us. all family members get together on new year’eve to have a big meal.at  the same time, everyone celebrates to each other.at about 12 o‘clock,some  parents and children light crackers.the whole sky is lighted brightly. we may  watch the fireworks excitedly.how busy it is!

on the first early moring of one year, many senior citizen get up early and  they stick the reversed fu or hang some couplets on the front door. some house’s  windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.

the chinese new year lasts fifteen days. so during the fifteen days, we  always visit our relatives from door to door. at that time, children are the  happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents,grandparents,  uncles, aunts and so on. the last day of the chinese new year is another  festival. it names the lantern festival.

so the chinese new year comes to the end.

关于春节英语作文带翻译五:

春节

春节,农历新年,是对我们最重要的节日。所有家庭成员都得到新year‘eve在一起有一个大meal.at同时,每个人都庆祝other.at每个约12点,一些家长和孩子光crackers.the整个天空亮起明亮。我们可以观赏烟花excitedly.how忙呀!

在第一期提前一年早上,许多老年人早早起床,他们坚持的反富或挂在门口的一些对联。有些房子的窗户都贴在红纸上cutlings。

在中国新年持续十五天。所以在十五天,我们经常访问我们的亲戚,从门到门。当时,孩子们是最幸福的,因为他们可以得到很多红包形成自己的父母,祖父母,叔叔,阿姨等。在农历新年的最后一天是另外一个节日。它的名字元宵节。

因此,在农历新年即将结束。

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篇17:初一英语作文MyCousin

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My cousin is only five years old. She comes to my house every weekend. We like her very much. Though she is very young she has ideas of her own. She says she wants to invite a fairy to help my mother to clean the kitchen. She prefers to be a super model. So she keeps on learning English and practising walking every day. Last week her mother told her to sleep in my bed. Half an hour later, she didnt fall asleep. Her mother was very angry. Then I went into the room, and asked whether she had slept. She closed her eyes tightly and said "Yes".

Shes such a naughty and clever girl.

[初一英语作文推荐: My Cousin

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篇18:英语自我介绍含翻译

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I have a bright character and a wide range of hobbies. During his study, I actively participated in various activities and organized some campus activities. Positive and positive, responsible for work certification, motivated, diligent in learning, continuous progress, like to face challenges with high difficulty, improve their abilities and comprehensive qualities. I am a person with a great sense of time. I can do everything positively and conscientiously. I am not afraid of hardship or fear of fatigue. I am not afraid of setbacks. I am honest with others. I am good at communication and coordination. I have strong organizational skills and teamwork spirit. I hope your company can give me a platform for learning and training, I will take a good grasp of it!

本人性格开朗,爱好广泛,在学习期间积极参加各种活动,多次组织一些校园活动。积极向上且对待工作认证负责,有上进心,勤于学习能不断进步,喜欢向高难度挑战,提升自身的能力与综合素质。我是一个很有时间观念的人,能积极认真做好每件事,不怕辛苦不怕累,更不怕挫折,待人真诚,善于沟通、协调,有较强的组织能力与团队精神。希望贵公司能给我一个学习和锻炼的平台,我会好好把握!

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篇19:给英语老师的一封信英文带翻译

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Dear Miss Brown,

I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for caring me in the last

two years. During the days of being your student, I learn a lot. Firstly, your

serious attitude towards teaching and our students moves me too much. You

inspire and push me to work harder and harder. Secondly, I fall in love with

English under the influence of you. As a student of science and engineering,

I’ve been thinking that English does no good to me, but you help me to find the

fabulous glamour of English that leads me to know a totally different world and

develop a different way of thinking. Finally, your continuous encouragement

supports me a lot when I meet challenges or difficulties. You said that

everything to the last will certainly become a good thing, if it is not, not yet

to the last. Every time, remembering your words, I am so inspired to keep

going.

Above all, I want to say thank you again and please accept my sincere

appreciation. Best wishes for you.

Cruse

敬爱的布朗老师

我谨以此向您表达我最真诚的谢意,感谢您在过去两年里对我的帮助。在过去的两年里,成为您的学生,我学到了许多。首先,您对教学和学生的认真态度使我深受感动。您鼓舞着我不断地努力学习。其次,在您的影响下,我深深地喜欢上了英语。作为一名理工科学生,我以前一直认为英语对我毫无用处,但您使我认识到了英语的魅力所在,带我走进了一个全新的世界,培养了不同的思维方式。最后,您的鼓励总在我遭遇困难或挑战是鼓励着我。您曾经说过:“每一件事情到了最后都会变成好事,如果不是,那说明还没有到最后。”每当想起您说过的话,我就有了坚持下去的动力。

最后,请允许我再次向您表达我的感谢,接受我真诚的谢意。献上最美好的祝福。

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篇20:珍惜时间初一话题作文

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珍惜,一个永恒的话题,唯有珍惜即时的拥有,生命的记忆里才能少一些悔恨,珍惜生命让自己活得很有价值,珍惜时间,让每分每秒过得有意义。

我已经是一名中学生了,如今我已不是刚刚步入中学生的人了。到了中学,才明白小学的快乐时光,想念小学的同学,小学的老师。

我在小学的时候,从来没有过向中学一样要排名次,中学考试的科目也逐渐多了起来,使我疲惫不堪。小学的时候,我就是一名偏科的学生,语文在班里也是数一数二的好,班主任是语文老师,只是偶尔教育一下我,让我不要偏科,当时的我也没有理会,是左耳朵进右耳朵出。

步入初中,我还有一身傲骨,认为我还会像小学那样受老师器重和同学们的尊敬。可是,我却错了,明白了偏科会给我带来的结果,最令我承受不了的就是我的语文成绩,竟然连前十都进不去。我不是注重成绩的人,可我本来就不善言辞,性格有些内向,倒是对老师有一种依赖感。可是如今,我却什么也不是,在班里没有朋友,班主任也是英语老师,我的英语很不好的。

一次放学却让我遇上了我做梦也想不到的事情。我在回家的路上看见了小学时候的班主任,她带着孩子,我恰恰在路的另一边,只是偷偷的看了一眼。看见是老师,就多看了一眼,谁知她好像发现了我注视她的目光,扭过头来,我却连忙收回目光,大步的向家的方向走去。

路上,我的鼻子有些酸,真的好难过。眼泪不知不觉的流了下来,我用手去擦。不可以让别人看见我这个样子,不可以。我飞快的向家跑去。

回到家,家里没有人,我把书包放在地上,自己就趴到床上哭了起来,默默的流着眼泪。回忆着我们刚刚见面的那一幕,如今的我和曾经已经不一样了。在中学如此的生活,我真的不想向您讲述,更不愿让你看到我如今这幅人不人鬼不鬼的样子。我希望在您的心中我依然是个好学生,步入中学依然是好的。我如今的这样子,还是不让老师看见比较好。

我的脑海里一直是小学时候的场景,同学们的打闹,老师因我们自豪:我们难过老师教育我们的的模样。我真的不想让老师看到这样子的我,我更希望我在她的心中永远是她的学生,曾经最好的学生之一。

而我的心,却是停不住的思念,但因为这时,我只能把这份思念埋在心底最深出。我通过一些曾经的关系网,打探到了老师以我们为榜样,教育下一代学生的场景,我心里十分自豪,老师曾经很少夸我们的,这次却这样子说,我真的好开心。

我很想念我的老师,或许那一次的相遇是一种缘分吧。每天那个时候,我都从哪里走,希望可以在多看她几眼,可是我等了好久好久,直到望眼欲穿………

[珍惜时间初一话题作文

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