小学英语作文常见错误（精选20篇）

I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents last month and we stayed there for a week.

To my surprise, Beijing is such a modern city that my parents and I all admire the development of it these years. We visited many wonderful places there, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. What impressed me most was that people there were all very friendly and some of them could even speak Enlish. But still I think that there are some problems of this city, which I dislike. Those are too many people there and the heavy traffic. If there were fewer people and less traffic, it would be better.

School eduction has played an important role in people’s life. When reaching three tears old, the little children will go to kindergarten for a preschool education. And then they will take part in the primary school, middle school, high school, college and so on. School eduction almost run through people’s whole life. So it is very important. We all know that thereare many knowledgeable teachers in school will teach the students. But it’s not enough. School eduction needs the coordination of family education. The British educator, Hosea Ballou once said,”Education commences at the mother’s knee, and every word spoken within the hearsay of children tends towards the formation of character. Therefore, we can see that the successful of school education needs the help of family education so that the children can have a perfect education. The promissing future is waiting for them.

学校教育在人们的生活中扮演着很重要的角色。在小孩三岁的时候，他们就会去幼儿园进行学前教育。之后他们会去上小学，初中，高中，大学等。学校教育几乎贯穿人的一生。所以它是非常重要的。我们都知道，学校有很多知识渊博的老师来教学生知识。但这是不够的。学校教育需要家庭教育的协调。英国教育家巴卢曾经说过，“教育始于母亲膝下，孩童耳听一言一语，均影响其性格的形成”。因此，我们可以看到，学校教育的成功需要家庭教育的协助，使孩子们拥有一个完善的教育。光明的未来在等着他们。

下面是由语文迷小编为大家整理的介绍My sister的英语作文范文，希望看过后对你写作有帮助。

英语作文1：My Sister

I have a sister. Her name is Li Xin. She is fifteen years old now. Like many other middle school students, she has black long hair and always ties them up. But she has a specialty that she can play piano very well. She began to learn the piano at the age of five. She likes piano very much, so she can practice it all the day. She once said that she is happy when playing piano. Until now, she has performed in many places. She is a piano player of some renown. I am proud of her.

我有一个姐姐，名字叫李欣。她今天十五岁了。和其他许多中学生一样，她有一头乌黑的长发，经常扎成马尾。但是，她有一项特长，那就是她弹得一手好钢琴。姐姐从五岁开始学习钢琴，她很喜欢钢琴，可以练习一整天。她曾说过，弹钢琴的时候她感觉很快乐。到目前为止，她已经在很多地方表演过了，是一位小有名气的钢琴演奏者。我为我的姐姐感到自豪。

英语作文2：My Sister

I have a pretty sister.She is twenty years old.Her name is ZengJie.She likes reading. So she is very clever.Her favourite sport is swimming.I sometimes swim with her.

She is a friendly girl,because she always be friendly to everyone.She is also my little teacher.She always helps me to do my homework. ?

I like my sister.I must learn from her.

英语作文3：My Sister

I have a sister. Her name is Hu Dan. She is twenty years. She is a high school student.

She has a round face, two big .bright eyes and a small nose.Her hair is long. Her favourite colour is blue. Her favourite sport istennis. In spring, she often plays tennis with me.

She is good at drawing. Her drawings are very nice. I like watching her draw pictures.

She is kind and friendly. She is always ready to help others.so she has many good friends.

This is my sister. I like her very much.

My School Life

My life the most unforgettable is my primary school. Because I do not have to early to go to school every day。 Need not very tired. And also very early from school in the afternoon. Work is very less. Knowledge is also simple. My primary school life is so colorful.

I like Leigang park.

In the Leigang Park, we can see many trees and flowers there. Some flowers are red, and some are purple. The trees are big and tall. We can see a hill in the park. At the foot of the hill, we can see many houses and many roads.

There are many people in the park. Some are walking and singing. Some are dancing or playing games.

All the families are having a good time in the park.

There are many animals in nature, swimming in water, running on land, flying in the air, and I like the most animal on land, the elephant.

I know the information of the elephant very well. It has a huge body, and even the lions and tigers are so frightened that they are afraid of it. Its stout, very heavy, and its not very fast. Its nose is very long, the heavy object will be lifted easily by it, and it can suck a lot of water. It sprays up as if a fountain is spraying. It is generous of ears, like two huge fan, it can use the ears fan when hot, very cool. The tail is very thick, like a thick and long whip.

Eleven, I have a chance to visit the world park in Beijing. I finally saw the elephant, although it is the same as I think, but they are flexible to my surprise, they can walk about sixty cm wide bridge. They are so smart that they can understand the words of the professional and do what they do. Its really interesting.

Through my trip to Beijing, I know more about elephants and more like elephants.

假期生活Life In Vacation

It was a sun day of the summer holiday. The weather was hot. My little brother and I decided to go to the resrvoir to swim by bike. It took us half an hour when we got there, many people were swimming. Then we dived into the water……

About an hour later, suddenly somebody called: “help! help!” We were surprised to see a boy struggling in the deep water. As quickly as possible. We swam towards him and pulled him to the shore. He lost his consciousness. We sent him to the nearest hospital at once luckily, he was saved.

In the end, we were worn out, but felt happy. That day was meaningful. We did a good deed!

这是暑假阳光灿烂的一天，非常热，我决定和弟弟骑车去水库游泳。我们花了半个多小时才到达，很多人在游泳，于是我们也跳入水中。

约一小时后，突然有人叫：“救命啊!救命啊!“我们惊讶地看到一个男孩在深水里挣扎，我们游向他尽快将他拉到岸边。他失去了知觉，我们立刻把他送到最近的医院，幸运的是，他得救了。

最后，我们都很疲惫，但觉得很开心。这是有意义的一天，我们做了件好事。

[小学英语作文译文：假期生活 Life In Vacation

To mark the Nationa I Day, celebrations will be held in the nearby Peoples Park on the morning of Oct. 1st. On the evening of the same day, there will be a colourful display of fireworks to be viewed in the Tianfu Square.

All are warmly invited to both the events and are advised to come to the office to get tickets.

Important：Fete goers are requested to gather in front of the No.3 Teaching Building at 7:50 a. m. to be taken to the celebrations and at 7:00 p.m.to the fireworks show.

My family lives on this street. In the morning, my father goes to work and all the children go to school. My mother takes us to school everyday. She does the housework. She always has her lunch at home, and sees her friends in the afternoon. In the evening all the children come home from school. They always get home early. My father goes home from work and he is often late. After supper my two brothers and I do our homework. We go to bed at ten.

I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 3. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.

I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.

What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?

There is a person, she is like the sun in the family, forever care of my tree "seedlings", she is - my mother.

Mother has a round face, inlaid with a pair of watery eyes. This pair of big eyes seem to speak, whenever I took Miyoshi students certificate, my mother will reveal the joy of eyes, smiling at me, I read the mothers eyes said: do well, to continue to work hard. Whenever I do the subject careless, made a mistake, my mother frowned, her eyes seemed to say: what should be careful, every job is like a small test.

Mother is particularly concerned about my study and life. I participated in the mental arithmetic, Go, etiquette and other games, my mother will support me, accompany me, encourage me. Win, she will say: "Do not be proud, not after the game will be smooth sailing." Lost, she would say: "Do not be happy, win or lose is commonplace, there are opportunities." Every time I was sick, my mother Particularly anxious, and quickly give me medicine, afraid of my illness more and more serious. Every summer, my mother will take me out to travel, increase my knowledge.

This is my mother, I love my dear mother.

My family lives in Hsi-hu. there are four people in my family. they are my father， my mother， my sister and I. My father is tall and thin. He is a handsome man. He has big eyes. His hair is straight. He likes to watch TV and movies and read books. My mother works in an office. She cooks very well. She likes to read books， too. She is short and thin. My sister is a student. She is an independent girl. She is very graceful. I am a student， too. But I study in a junior high school. I go to school every weekend. I like to play dodge ball and listen to music very much. much. I like my family because each family member helps me a lot.

As we all realized that every one of us will fail during our life. Take me

for an example, I fail in my exam. In fact, failure always does appear, which

also means that failure is a daily occurrence, however, when facing the failure,

different people have different attitudes.

Some people hold the view that failure is the meaning whenever they could

not be successful. Thus, if meeting with failure, they will feel so nervous that

they have no idea what they are supposed to do. As time goes by, they become

more and more dispirited while eventually, they could do nothing well.

On the contrary, there are some people tending to believe another idea.

From their point of view, failure is outstanding due to the fact that it can

give them plenty of encouragement. Therefore, if facing failure, they will be

quite courageous and then try their best to beat it, finally, they make their

dream come true.

From my perspective, failure is neither an excellent thing nor an

appreciating thing. Sometimes, it is capable to offer us with encouragement,

however, it can also make us unconfident now and then. Thus, if encountering the

failure, never could we be scared. What we should do is to face it bravely and

never give up.

In summary, I wish when failure appears, each one of us could confront with

it bravely and beat it, if possible.

【参考范文】

Summer holiday is coming . I want to go to Beijing . I go to Beijing with my father , my mother and my brother . We want to go there by plane because it takes less time . We can see many things in it .

First we can visit the Great Wall , it is very famous for the world ,so I like it very much . Second we can go to the zoo because I like to see animals . There are many foreigners in this city ,too . I want to talk with them in English . I want to learn English from them . I think we can have a good time then . I hope it is coming soon .

【参考译文】

暑假即将来临。我想去北京。我去北京和我的父亲,我的母亲和我的兄弟。我们想乘飞机去那里,因为它花费更少的时间。我们可以看到许多东西。

首先,我们可以去长城,它是非常著名的世界,所以我很喜欢它。第二,我们可以去动物园,因为我喜欢看动物。也有很多外国人在这个城市。我想用英语与他们交谈。我想向他们学习英语。我想我们可以度过一段美好的时光。我希望它快到了。

1、开头部分

How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

2、结尾部分

With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

我的同桌是一个秀气的小姑娘。她最大的特点就是爱笑。无论你什么时候碰到她，她都会像春风般朝你甜甜一笑，做了好事也是微微笑笑。即使受了委屈，挨了批评也只是一笑而过。她真是一个快乐的人。

My Desk-mate

My desk-mate is a pretty girl. The clearest characteristic of hers is the smile on her face. Any time you meet her,she will give you a sweet smile that is just like spring wind. When she does something good, she might as well smile. And even when she is wronged or criticized, she will smile away it. What a happy girl she is!

语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程当中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程当中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。

1。句子成分残缺不全

we always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)

we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)

we should read books may be useful to us。 (误)

we should read books which may be useful to us。 (正)

2。句子成分多余

this test is end， but there is another test is waiting for you。 (误)

one test ends， but another is waiting for you。 (正)

the driver of the red car was died on the spot。 (误)

the driver of the red car died on the spot。 (正)

3。主谓不一致

someone/somebody think that reading should be selective。 (误)

some think that reading should be selective。 (正)

my sister go to the cinema at least once a week。 (误)

my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week。 (正)

4。动词时态、语态的误用

i was walking along the road， and there are not so many cars on the street。 (误)

i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street。 (正)

we have little time to read some books which we interest。 (误)

we have little time to read some books in which we are interested。 (正)

i am a student who has studying in the college for two years。 (误)

i have been studying in the college for two years(正)

5。词类混淆

it is my point that reading must be selectively。 (误)

in my opinion， reading must be selective。 (正)

honest is so important for everyperson。 (误)

honesty is so important for everyone。 (正)

the old man was hit by a car when he across the street。 (误)

the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street。 (正)

[英语作文中常见的典型语法错误分析

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During the National Day, our family went to Yunfu Mountain Hot Springs.

To the hot springs, we swim for swimsuit. First of all we came to the childrens pool, where there are a lot of fun slides there are things, I did not even do not do the warm-up exercise could not help but jumped out of the pool, "wow, really comfortable." But the water there is too shallow , Do not move. Then we went to the fish treatment pool, I put the feet into, there are many small fish over my feet, very comfortable, but feel a little itch. There are many hot spring pools, there are ice pool, waterfall pool, gold pool, silver pool, pebble pool, surf pool, hydrogen pool, there are many large and small hot spring pool, there is really fun.

We played the whole hot spring, comfortable to leave.

This is my happy national holiday.

有人说，我们从错误中学到的知识，可能比从美德中学到的还多。犯错误能使我们保持清醒的大脑，及时认识到自己的不足，更关键的是我们应学会在错误中汲取。

汲取教训、美德、目标、勇气……人都是这样，都会犯错误。有些人能在犯错误中汲取教训，改变自己，从而不断成长进步，成为有所作为的人。这种人在错误中学到的知识就远胜于在美德中学到的。而有些人却不思悔改，执迷不悟，就会一直错下去，毁掉了自己的一生。

人的成长经历大大小小的错误、错误都是正常的，犯了错误，我们应该认真反省，想想为什么自己会失误，再重新为自己制定目标，鼓起勇气，勇往直前。爱迪生在发明电灯时，经历了千千万万次错误，如果他在最后一次实验错误后放弃了，我们现在仍生活在黑暗中。幸好，他没有，所以我们也不能放弃。海明威也说过，一个人可以被摧毁，但不能被打败。前面的错误都是为后面的成功做铺垫，只要我们有坚定的目标、执著的精神和不怕吃苦的态度，总有一天，我们一定会成功。在错误中一次次反省，汲取到更多有用的美德，离成功会愈来愈近。

相反，如果我们犯了错误，仍不思悔改，就会重复犯同样的错误，然后就失去耐心，放弃努力。这样的一生，不会痛苦吗?同样是犯错，一个人能走出泥潭，重新开拓新的天地，而另一个人会重复向泥潭跳去，甚至可能不愿再努力爬出来。因为他错误地认为所有的地方都是如此不堪。

我们每次写好作业、完成测试后，老师都会让我们改错，这就是汲取教训改正错误的机会啊!这时的我们决不应该厌烦，而应该怀着敬畏的心态改正错误，汲取教训。只有这样，我们才能不断完善自己，不断进步。

学会在错误中汲取是我们生命中最重要的课题，愿我们人人都能拿到满分。

Your enthusiasm, your both hands, can help others ; Your sincerity, your smile, can move others ; Your compliment, your blessing, can reciprocate others ……This, are all what you should do . Because you are accepting others help all the time , you should reciprocate them. No matter the friend or enemy, no matter the one that is familiar w-ith or strange one, whether he is a rich man or beggar. Help to be not to choose the target , choose time , choose the place. Go , make others warm with heart of you , g-o , help others with hand of you , go , persuade someone else with your action. This is what you should do . You should learn to pay , learns help, learn to present . So long as everybody can do so both, this world will be a cradle that is full of loving , the earth is that one is full of warm collectives!