高三关于清明节的英语作文精品20篇

Last week, I saw a very impressive documentary about panda. A professor

studied panda in the early 1980s went to the wild life and kept trace of wild

giant panda for many years. As a result, he found that it was human being that

made these lovely animals die out. At that time, many people believed that giant

panda became less because of the low rate of newborn babies. But it was not

true. People cut trees for making profit at that time. Panda lose homeland and

they lacked of food. Thanks to these valuable data, the government took the

policy to protect the animals. So today, the number of giant panda is

increasing. People realize the importance of protecting the environment and it

is the best way to protect wild animals, they are the indispensable part of the

nature.

“民以食为天”。食品安全（fd safet）指食品无毒、无害，符合应当有的营养要求，对人体健康不造成任何急性、亚急性或者慢性危害。“瘦肉精”事件尘埃未落，“染色馒头”“回炉面包”“牛肉膏”又接踵而来……近期食品安全恶性事件频频出现，监管到底缺失在哪儿？我们还能吃什么？食品安全成为老百姓关心的一个热点问题。请你以普通百姓的身份，给某报社写一稿件，说明这一现象，并提出你的建议。

稿件须包括下列内容：

1） 食品安全问题屡见报道；

2） 分析上述问题产生的原因；

3） 提出应对的措施。

注意：

1）词数不少于100；

2）不可逐条翻译；

3）可适当增加细节，以使连贯；

4) 开头以为你写出，不计入总词数。

古人云：“清明时节雨纷纷,路上行人欲销魂,借问酒家何处有,牧童远指杏花村”。当我想起唐代大诗人的这句诗歌时就想到似乎清明节快要到了，清明的脚步已经不远了，只剩下了一步之差。

由于，清明节是在学校过的不能在家里过。在家里，吃上那平时吃不到的的清明果，那可真是佳肴啊!而且不能在家里和家人一起往乡下扫墓(踏青)，给死往的故人请安，给他们拜年，送上家中做出来的佳肴——清明果。让他们保佑我的学习更好，学业成功。

于是，星期六爸爸在家很空，决定带我回乡下往给奶奶扫墓。我立即拿来自己家里做出来的清明果，拿来一个篮子在下面展了一张干净的报纸，然后小心翼翼的把清明果平展在里面，以免发生一想不到的“事故”。最后，我把篮子放在车子的后备箱中。一切预备停当，我们全家就坐上了车子。在坑坑洼洼的山路上车子不停的颠簸，这时我想起了后备箱中的佳肴非常担心，心急如焚。我叫爸爸开慢些特别是有坑的地方。我们就慢慢悠悠的坐车，就像老牛拖慢腿。

经过，半个小时的颠簸，我们终于到了奶奶的坟前，我拿出清明果放好，拿香深深的鞠了一个躬，拜了几拜。给奶奶请了安，向他问好。对他行完了中华民族的礼节以后，就拿出鞭炮“劈劈啪啪”的响了起来。那声音震耳欲聋，就像天上打雷一样。把弟弟吓的呜呜大哭起来。后来我又默默的在宅兆前许愿“希看奶奶能保佑我学习快些进步，全家生活快乐，身体健康，学业有成”。

不愧这是我们中华民族的一种传统节日啊，是那么的有意义，不平常好多了了，是那么的有趣不同平常。又有活动，又有学问，还有佳肴。是一个与其他节日不同的节日。比西方节日有趣多，有深刻的意义。

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

Sky blue white clouds, the wind light warm sunshine. White leaves, green grass, dedicated to the beautiful green campus. When we are doing their own thing, ever imagined that one day we will lose the beautiful campus?

"Recess, when you are in the hallway, with students on the playground to chat, play, see the paper scraps, dont be afraid of ugly, bent down to pick them up, nobody will laugh at you mind their own business. Im green, my beautiful! When you see someone on the wall the scri le book, practice painting, should be stopped. Because you want to environmental protection. The campus, is so fascinating, because it is deep in the perceptual and rational thought, let the young heart from naive to mature. The campus, is really want to stay, because it gives each student memories of the vast space, how many heart lost in the wind and rain to find yourself in the twilight. Green campus, students from the holy land, green grass, tree flower, wood on all of us students mutual care, will often in the awaken of spring. So, we need to protect the environment, to create a beautiful campus.

The green campus is beautiful. But she taught us, the more is the enlightenment of the mind, the mold of thought and the cultivation of the inner temperament. When spring quietly but go to, all things recovery, full of vitality in the trees. A day after the end of the course, the campus into our happy amusement park. Badminton, basketball, table tennis... .. All corners of the land have classmates laughing sound...

"The school is our home, we are the master of the school, construction by us. Let us start from the intravenous drip, take good care of the campus environment, self-restraint, mutual inspection, clear the status of their environmental protection work in school. The school green need you, need me, need we all work together."

天蓝白云伴，风轻阳光暖。白的叶，绿的草，专属于美好的绿色校园。当我们正做着自己的事的时候，是否曾设想有一天我们将失去这个美丽的校园?

“课间，当你与同学们在走廊上，操场上聊天，嬉戏时，看到纸屑，不要怕丑，弯腰拾起，没有人会笑你多管闲事。我环保，我美丽!当你看到有人在墙上信笔提书，大练画技时，应当制止。因为你要环保。校园，是如此令人神往，因为它深情灌输着感性与理性交织的思想，让年轻的心从幼稚走向成熟。校园，是如此令人留恋，因为它给予每位学子回忆憧憬的广阔空间，令多少颗失落的心在风雨晨昏中找回自我。青青校园，学子圣地，碧树芳草，一花一木，靠我们全体学子共同呵护，才会春意常在。所以，我们要保护环境，创建美好校园。

绿色校园是美丽的。但她给我们的，更多的是心灵的启迪，思想的陶冶，内在气质的培养。当春天悄然而至，万物复苏，盎然的生机弥漫在树梢。一天的课程结束之后，校园变成我们快乐的游乐园。羽毛球，篮球，乒乓球…。。各个角落空地上都有同学们的嬉笑声……

“学校是我们的家，我们是学校的主人，建设靠的是我们。让我们从点滴做起，爱护校园环境，自我约束，相互检查，明确自身在学校环保工作中的地位。学校绿色需要你，需要我，需要我们大家共同努力。”

Its Sunday today. I got up early and did my homework on the table. All of a

sudden I remembered the mothers day, a picture of my mind, remembering a past

thing that moved me.

Thats the case. After coming home from school that afternoon, my mother came

back. I found that my mother was very tired, his eyes were squinting, and I

yawned. So she sent me to do my homework at home. But I felt very sad to see my

mother working so hard, so I decided to share the housework for my mother. I

began to pick up the stuff in my home, first fold the newspaper, and then the

glass was cleaned.

I put the glass on the pot filled with water, and then picked up the cloth, a

brush up. I found a little dirty in a cup, and I took some detergent to wash it.

Suddenly, the cup from the hand slipped, piercing sound startled me. I hastened

to pick up the pieces of glass on the floor. At this time, I found that my

mother was standing in front of me, and she said, "dont pick up the pieces with

your hands. Let me come." I stood up and bowed my head embarrassed and said,

"Im sorry, mom, Im too careless." I thought: this must be closed. Mother

walked over and touched my head and said, "kid, dont frighten you?" Let mommy

pack up, you go out and watch TV. " Mothers words are very gentle, but make me

more difficult, unwittingly I cry.

Looking back on this, I felt very warm. It told me that maternal love is

selfless and great, and I want to repay my mother on Mothers day.

Nowadays, there is a growing focus on health care. People are pursuing a

healthy lifestyle. A healthy diet is one of the most important parts of it. As

the saying goes, bread is the staff of life, eating healthily and deliciously is

the goal we pursue. From my point of view, in order to build healthy eating

habits, we should eat more vegetables and less fat and sugar. Vegetable is the

best source of s vitamin, because vegetables are rich in vitamins. Among them,

vitamin C and vitamin A are the most important. Too much fat and sugar can lead

to obesity, which is harmful to health. Besides, eating more fruits and drinking

more water is of great help.

Nowadays, as the development of high technology, people like to use

computer, they use computer to read the news, to play the game and so on. Now

more and more computer functions have been developed, people like to do business

on the computer, it saves people a lot of time and it is very convenient.

Shopping online is most people’s choice today, but it has disadvantages. First,

the products will be not in good quality, people can’t touch the products, they

only can see the pictures, so they can’t figure out the real products’ quality.

Second, when people pay the money online, they will have the chance to leak out

their message, their online account will be attacked by the hackers and thus to

lose the money. Of course, shopping online is more and more popular, we must

take care of personal message when shopping online.

为什么写到微光，和写到脉博一样

在土地上，你或者你们的理想

以什么名义存在，在诗歌中一再呼之欲出

又吞吞吐吐

扶不好我的坐姿——你这无用

而无情的参照

恨起祈祷人的黑纱，破坏的队形

使人明白绝别是严酷的经历

谁在角落里忍着咳嗽，爱护着平淡的空气

但转瞬又好了，天地无言

像失忆的人不爱提迷惘

只有微光了。对峙，折煞繁华

在生者面前，压碎的真实产生了多少幻像

每个名字都是死了一回的故乡

而石板上始终是一个人

端坐着，看烟散

谁在心里伸出手抚逝者的脸

谁偷了风，抚逝者的脸

就像世界是个大人，摁一下小小的苍生

就像小小的照片锁进扣儿里

多么紧实啊，几十年的滋味不再翻身

大地不再醒来

为了收纳我们，土地打开胸膛

微微隆起，用柏树、青草、野花

缀饰居所，用黄泉水为焦燥的魂灵

解渴，用树木包裹肉身，用方石

为后代指引。土地有条不紊地做着

这一切。我们在大地上走过，在河流上

漂过，最后像粒种子，回归母腹，

开始植物的枯荣。

每年清明，我们被鞭炮吵醒，原始的通讯手段

依然管用，黄裱纸写满泪痕，金元宝和通货膨胀的

纸钱，勾不起兴趣。既然贫困一生，现在送再多的钱

也没处花。死亡在今天不再是禁忌，而是节日。

春和景明，阳气上升，适合踏青。

在这片土地上，埋葬了先人。在这片土地上没有空地

留给后人。原先长庄稼的地方，长出烟囱和楼房，

我们不怕烟尘，不再咳嗽。折根柳条，做管柳笛，

那是儿时魂牵梦萦的曲调，告诉世界，

我们曾来过，爱过，恨过，终于放下了一些。

那道门在身后轻轻关上，月光如水，植物的拔节声

应和蟋蟀的奏鸣。皇天厚土啊，我们的来处和归程。

Mid-autumn day is a special festival in China, which is one of the

traditional Chinese festivals. Itfalls on the 15th day of august lunar month

every year. Our Chinese will celebrate it on that day. I think there are not too

many people can reject he temptation of it. I like this festival very much. I

have two reasons.

First of all, mid-autumn has the deep meaning of reunite. In china, people

regard mid-autumn day as very important, so no matter where they are, they will

come back to their family if there is a chance. They don’t like celebrate this

festival outside, which will make them feel lonely. Thus, they will go home by

all means. Luckily, the government also pays great attention to this traditional

festival. There are laws to make sure people have holidays in that special day.

In the other word, mid-autumn festival gives a chance for family get

together.

Secondly, every family will prepare a big meal in that day. All the food is

delicious. It is good to have a big meal. I think nobody will not interest in

delicious food. The mooncake is a necessary decoration for mid-autumn day. It

tastes good, too. It is the traditional for a long time. How pleased to enjoy

the glorious full moon with mooncake!

This is why I love mid-autumn festival so much. It is funny and happy

time.

Ching Ming Festival/Grave-Sweeping Day清明节

Cold Food Festival 寒食节

day of sacrifice 祭祀节日

offer sacrifices to ancestors 祭祖/上供

online tomb-sweeping 网上祭扫

Internet memorial 网络纪念馆

condolence 哀悼之情

hell note/joss paper 纸钱

funeral supplies/products 殡葬用品

funeral services 殡葬服务业

mortician 殡仪业者

burn incense 焚香

tomb-sweeping 扫墓

tomb sweeper 扫墓的人

kite flying 放风筝

spring outing 踏青

gods lantern 神灯

memorial tablet 纪念碑

willow branches inserted on each gate 门旁插柳

online funeral 网上葬礼

online tribute 网上悼念

cremation urn 骨灰盒

mourning ceremony 哀悼仪式

inhumation 土葬

cremation 火葬

sea-burial 海葬

boat-coffin burial 船棺葬

tree burial 树葬

celestial burial 天葬

flower burials 花葬

national mourning 全国哀悼

national mourning day 全国哀悼日

filial piety 孝顺 孝心

Day of the Dead(亡灵节，墨西哥传统节日，人们通过守灵、上供等方式祭奠逝去的亲人。)

Today is Dragon Boat Festival. Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in China. It is also the most solemn and characteristic festival in our local area.

Of course, on the day of Dragon Boat Festival, mothers wear five silk threads to their children, and five silk threads are full of their mothers yearning for their children, hoping that their children will live to the age of 100. My mother gave me the five thread long thread.

In the Dragon Boat Festival, people eat dumplings, in memory of Qu Yuan. More than two thousand years ago, in the early May, five, people stood on the Miluo River and threw food into the river so as not to let the fish and shrimp and other underwater animals eat Qu Yuans body.

After lunch today, my mother took me to the supermarket. My mother bought me a sachet as a gift for the Dragon Boat Festival.

I had a great time today!

In the past few decades, our Earth has changed a lot, but to the bad

direction. Among these changes, the air pollutions resulting from a huge number

of automobiles and coal-burning is almost the severest. The severe air pollution

alarms humans of the heavy load we have exerted on Earth by our insatiable

production and usage of automobiles. However, with the deepening of

urbanization, more cars are needed, which will make the air pollution worse.

Therefore, the following actions should be taken. First, we should apply the

most cutting-edge technologies in order to adopt new forms of energy as

substitutes for fossil fuels. Second, try hard to develop possible

transportation means, which are enviromental friendly. So that the citizens can

reduce the dependence on cars. In short, our humans should take responsibilities

for the air pollution and have to find ways to solve this problem.

清明节，是一个中国的传统节日。它富含了许多深刻意义。人们在这一天都去祭拜自己的祖先，去祭拜先烈……这天，我走在大街上，走在山上，走在大自然中，看到了许许多多奇妙的，有趣的景象。

我走在大街上，发现一个有趣的现象。在大街上，卖鸡的人特别多，满街都是，数以数不清有多少家。其中更有趣的是：卖的鸡全是公鸡!为什么全是公鸡呢?我怀着满脑子疑问去问爸爸，爸爸说：因为我的家乡富川清明节祭祖要杀公鸡，用公鸡的血来祭拜祖先，表示对祖先怀念。这让我想到了歃血为盟。难怪，大街小巷满是卖公鸡的人。

我来到郊区的，山间小道上，看见人来人往，大家都有一个共同的目标，那就是祭拜一下自己已逝世的老祖宗，陪他们说说话，聊聊天，向老祖宗报告一下今年家里的事情。他们有的背着铲子，有的拿着贡品，有的拿着香火，有的拿着……一群人浩浩荡荡的向老祖宗的坟墓进发了。

我来到山上，看见山头上到处都是些“等待”人们来扫的坟墓，这些坟墓或高，或低;或华丽，或朴素;或高贵，或平庸……无数的大大小小的坟墓，无数已逝世的人们，他们的子孙都会在这时来祭拜他们。

清明节，是一个神圣的节日，在这一天，新鲜、奇趣的事情接连不断，真是一个无与伦比的节日呀!

1、认真回顾课本知识

这个阶段过程主要是用于高中三年全部课程的回顾。这时候希望大家在回顾的过程中能够找到自己知识遗漏的部分。

这个阶段相当的冗长，最主要的是要会学回归课本。无论如何，高考绝大部分内容都贴近课本的。高考试题的80%是基础知识，20%是稍难点的综合题，掌握好基础，几乎能上一个比较不错的大学。因此高三前期，希望同学们老老实实把课本弄懂。弄懂课本不是光记住结论，而是要通读。即理科全部的原理要弄清、语文课文内标注的字词句摘抄、英语课文至少要达到念的通顺、文史类知识主线及同类型知识要素要学会整理等。

注意，第一轮复习十分重要，大家千万不要埋头做题，而是先看课本，再“精”做题目。在复习过程中一定先将课本看明白了，然后再做题，做题过程中不许看课本，不许对答案。会就会做，不会做一定要先想哪些内容遗忘了，哪里想错了，先做后面的，等隔一定时间再看不会做的，马上看的话效果打折扣的。

2、把握好自己的节奏

很多学生因为在复习过程中跟不上老师的节奏，导致前面部分没弄懂，后面部分更是拉下，学校在教学节奏控制上又不能根据学生本身制定。

因此建议学生一定要提高自学能力，如果实在跟不上节奏，就先关注最基础最简单的题目，将遗漏的课本部分做好画线标记，或将页面折起做标记，以利于及时的回顾。

在学的过程中不要因为面子问题不敢发问，建议学生在弄不懂的问题上多问同学，多问老师。最好能够找到水平相当的同学，互相约定好给对方做考察，给对方讲解双方对知识点的认识，互相研究题目。

同学之间相互沟通时所掌握的内容比问老师的效果更好，因为在互相沟通的时候可以带者任何疑问，可以很容易的将思维的漏洞补齐。

3、正确处理作业练习

在处理作业上，千万不要死磕题目，记住两个原则：

一、不要和自己过不去。第一遍做不出来或做错就直接先放弃，但是要保留这道题，每天抽1——2分钟看下这类不会做的题，无论是看课本也好，听老师讲解也好，做到一眼看出这题怎么做时，再动手做，并将这类题型留好。

二、要加强互动性。不仅是和同学之间的互动，还要和课本进行互动。做完作业不要看对答案，留到第二天把有困难的和同学交流，或第二天看别人怎么做，然后问他怎么想的。

当基本弄懂一个章节后，一定要定期回顾，如一周的时间后，翻一下课本，这周学了什么，然后给自己限制时间做几道题，用以验证自己哪些内容真正是明白了。通过这么练习，远远比大量做题效果好的多。

4、如何利用每一次考试

处理考试上，要认同自己。分数很重要，重要的是你得到的那些分数和你得不到的分数，毕竟不是高考，当前阶段分数的高低没有任何意义。你只需做三件事：

一、根据你所获取分数的部分，整理你当前会的知识，会做的题型。

二、根据你所丢的分数，立即回归课本，看完课本后再做一遍。

三、拿着卷子问自己，当时做对的题自己是怎么想的，不会的题当时是怎么想的，现在会的题和当时不会做时差距在哪里。

总之，制定高三英语一轮复习计划一定要根据自己的学习情况根据自身的条件，抓住每一个时间点和时机，规划好自己的进度，全力做好一轮复习工作，让自己的基础知识地基打的牢固一点。一轮复习时间最长，是高考复习和高考能否取得高分的关键。所以同学们一定要高度重视一轮复习的重要性，一定要制定好高考一轮复习计划。

Today is the Ching Ming Festival. The ancients said: Qingming season rain have. This is heavy overcast weather, we have a go Ta-Qing Chihu.

On the way we are going to see that a strong grass and indomitable perseverance, with its staged to greet the spring, not to be outdone, it put on the new green clothes, green flowers in the movie, there is red, there is green, yellow has the ... ... we go for a road, came to a field, the eyes are a feast for the eyes everywhere in gold, stood the rape in high spirits, and for many pearl-like dew-like in the golden slip slide small rolling on ... ... chee lake, willow willow braid a section on green leaves and shoots have decoration, is the first girl more than any jewelry would also like to look good.

After Chihu cemetery, we can not help but go inside. Looking at the graves of martyrs and watched a wreath of small white flowers looked pure, my mind is not fluctuating. I think many, many: of us happy today, a better life for us by the revolutionary martyrs created, but also with their paid for in blood. So, my mind had an idea: the succession of martyrs want behest, studying strenuously strive to become the pillars of the national construction.

Next, we went to the yellow folder Ao, the mountains are packed, everyones face is filled with nostalgic, looking at this picture, my mind, there has been some regret. I hope all my elders a long life and good health.

The Qingming Festival Ta-Qing to my feelings more, and once again I know the nature of the mellow side, my great harvest ah well!

Since I was a little child, I had a dream that I wanted to be a doctor.

When I was little, I watched many TV series and movies about doctors. I thought

they were so great. Therefore, I made up my mind to be a doctor. In my opinion,

doctor is the people who can help patience get out of sickness and pain.I want

to be the person who can help others. However, being a doctor needs so much

professional knowledge and there is a long way to go. So I have to try my best

on my study and go to a good college.

Ive been to the Great Wall, I have seen the Great Wall long, because it took me more than two hours to go right to the end of it a little bit.

Standing on a distant hillside, it like a long dragon, the Great Wall winding between mountains. Listen to mom and dad said that the Great Wall from shanhaiguan east to west of jiayuguan, has more than thirteen thousand long. Is the worlds only can see the spectacular scenery in the space.

Starting from Beijing, but in the more than one hundred came to the foot of the Great Wall. This section of the Great Wall built in badaling, tall and strong. The Great Wall is like a giant, stretched his arms, people like to walk in the giants arm.

I stood on the giants arm, the distant scene at a glance. On the distant mountains, trees grow luxuriantly green cage cage. This wall is a magnifying glass!

Look at the countless stone, there have a two or three one thousand catties. That is no trains, cars, no crane, rely on countless countless hands, shoulders step by step, carry on the steep mountains.

Here, I want to say that our ancestors under the extremely poor material conditions, with the most primitive, the simplest tools to finish this before does not see the head, after the Great Wall of no tail!

Verve as grand project, is a great miracle in the history of the world!

我去过长城，我见识过了长城的长，因为我用了两个多小时才走完它的一小段。

站在远处的山坡上看，长城它像一条长龙，在崇山峻岭之间蜿蜒盘旋。听爸爸妈妈说，长城从东头的山海关到西头的嘉峪关，有一万三千多里长。是世界上唯一能在太空上看到的壮观景物。

从北京出发，不过一百多里就来到了长城脚下。这一段长城修筑在八达岭上，高大坚固。长城就像一位巨人，伸展开双臂，人们好像在这位巨人的手臂上行走一样。

我站在这位巨人的手臂上看，远处的景物一目了然。在远处的群山上，树木长得葱葱笼笼。原来这长城还是个放大镜哩!

单看这数不清的条石，一块有两三千斤重。那是没有火车、汽车，也没有起重机，就靠着无数的肩膀无数的手，一步一步抬上这陡峭的山岭。

在此，我想说，我们的先民在极其贫乏的物质条件下，以最原始、最简单的工具才完成了这前不见头，后不见尾的万里长城!

这样气魄雄伟的工程，在世界历史上是一个伟大的奇迹!

全国卷英语作文最后几天的备考资料。备考目的性、指导性、猜押性都很强。最后几天一定

要看的。

一、全国卷书面表达分析

2015全国I：应用文、写信约稿、介绍美节日风俗和中学生生活。

2015全国II：应用文、邮件邀约、去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。

2014全国I：应用文、写信咨询、英语学习班广告的咨询。

2014全国II：应用文、报社正文、十年后的我

2013全国I：应用文、写信问是否接机（带着中国画）

2013全国II：应用文、写信让友代卖中国结

2012课标卷：应用文、写邮件、申请参加夏令营

2012大纲卷：应用文、邀请信、邀请外教参加生日聚会

二、综上分析，干货如下：

1.都是应用文。

说明文、议论文、夹叙夹议文不考，尤其要杜绝那些高大上的，平时经常训练的正反观点对

比的文章也要果断抛弃。

2.与学生生活、学习、交友息息相关。

生活相关：15I、15II、14II、13I、13II、12大纲

学习相关：14I、12

交友相关：12大纲

注意生活、学习、交友三大话题。有些作文也许会跨其中两个话题。凡是不符合这三个话题

的作文，高考最后这10几天少复习，甚至不复习的好。地震、环保、食品安全、雾霾、河流

空气污染、交通拥挤、良心道德、服不服等等的高大上，都抛弃吧（这些都是大学作文解决

的问题）。所以与学生生活、学习、交友相关的词汇、句式还是好好总结的。

3.渗透传统文化的元素。

传统文化：2015II重阳节、2013中国画。

这方面的词汇还是要适当准备一些滴。例如：paper cutting 剪纸，Lantern Festival 元

宵节， Mid-autumn Day 中秋节，tang yuan/ sweet rice dumpling 元宵，Chinese New Year’

s Eve 除夕，Dragon Boat Festival 龙舟节，DoubleNinth Festival 重阳节, Chinese tea

中国茶

4.生活、学习、交友三大话题·必须掌握的【词汇 + 短语】

①schools English newspaper,Chinese / foreign cultures， more information,

volunteer, great fun,opportunity, confidence in, experience,lecture,

excellence in, speech competitions, a better idea,

②be popular with/among,especially, exciting,excited, patiently,be

patient with,be interested in,the most important, various, outgoing,

successfully, successful, be good at/for, more than glad, be willing to help you

with,be familiar with，delicious, with joy

③welcome, spend their holidays,invite you to join us,make dumplings,intend

to join,enjoy,invite sb. to, gave him a warm welcome, have a try,give

me a piece of advice, takeseriously,depend on, get a higher education,

improve ourselves,would like to, interview,I believe,learn a great deal

fromabout, organize class activities,deal with, stick to, share

with,express myself, go for an outing, manage to do,persuade, accept,

receive,have a good/wonderful time,benefit, benefit from,different,

give up, have a picnic, go to a museum, have lots of fun,take pains to improve,

get prepared for, be able to, get along well with,have a good command of,

appreciate, made up my mind to do, make a great difference (to someone), think

highly of, pay much attention to,take notice of,keep it in mind that,in

return, helpwith, feel nervous, make you familiar with, long to, broaden

my mind, have trouble doing,communicate,suffer from, speak English fluently,

visit some famous places, chat with， participate in， take part in, won prizes,

take into consideration, it’s necessary to do,respect, trust,protect

from,agree with, in order to,encourage sb. to do,organize

5.必须熟练运用的【句型 + 连接词】

Im writing to tell you

I wonder if youd like to

Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I am writing an e-mail to tell you something about

Only in this way can we make a great contribution to

If I could ,I would

Hard work pays off.

We shouldWe’d betterIt is better to do

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if

you could give me a kind consideration.

Only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make great progress

Could you give me some advice on how to

If you are able to come with us, please let us know and

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Looking forward to your reply.

May I have your attention

First,Second,Third

so long as，even though, at the same time, By the way, Besides, not onlybut

also, What’s more, as well as

6.三大从句和非谓语的运用是必不可少的。每篇文章这两类至少运用一次。同学们都知道，

在此不必多说。

三、透过2015年全国Ｉ的作文，看清标准范文的猫腻

假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。

请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1.栏目介绍； 2.稿件内容； 3.稿件长度：约400词；4.交稿日期：6月28日前。

注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

下面把标准答案给与了分解，同学们务必要逐字逐句地研读，找出标准范文为什么这样

写，发现范文写作时的思考过程，挖掘范文和作文原题中的一一对等的字眼提示。通过研读

分析，再回扣题目本身。写作也就那么回事儿，其实一点也不难。希望同学们可以悟出基本

的写作思路、技巧。以下英语连起来就是标准范文。

称呼，已给：

Dear Peter,

开头语，已给：

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

开篇，介绍“外国文化”栏目概况 (要点1：点出栏目名称、特点popular、进行栏目介绍)：

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.

It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home

countries. (搭配be popular among、carry一词用得好、过去分词短语written by作后

置定语)

进行约稿 (写作目的，这可是正事儿)：

Would you please write something about the culture in your part ofthe United States

稿件内容 (要点2）：

And (and一词虽然简单，但用得巧妙，呈上衔接，过渡自然，读起来还有抑扬顿挫之感觉) we

would especially (强调递进) welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays

and festivals (节日风俗，扣栏目) and the life of American high school students (中

学生生活，扣栏目).

适当拓展，根据字数灵活安排

You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. (高

级词汇、so long as好句式)

稿件长度 (要点3)：

400 words would be fine.

交稿日期 (要点4)：

Could we have your article before June 28

合适的结尾 (万能句式,一定背下)：

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

四、2016作文模拟猜押如下：

（一）书信/邮件

Passage 1（建议信、学习、文化）

你打算毕业后到美国留学, 想咨询你的美国朋友Chris。请你根据以下提示写一封信。

1．目的：增长见识，体验文化；2．困惑：语言障碍，学业压力；3．征求建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不

计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

Yours，

Joe

One possible version

DearChris,

I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school.

I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I

can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this

country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English.

I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure

from college courses.

I hope you can offer me some practical advice.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Joe

Passage2（学习、文化）

假如你是李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求

教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1.对英语学习的认识。

2.自己目前的英语水平。

3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题。

4.对英语教学的两点建议。

注意：1.词数100左右。2.信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher

_________________________________ Thank you!

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more

important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel

it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking

English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.

Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can

make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

Li Hua

Passage3（学习、文化）

作为班长，请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr. Smith 写一封信,向他表示欢迎并转达同学们

对英语课的希望：

1.介绍西方文化；2.组织多样活动；3.关注学生发音。

注意: 1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计

入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith,

_____________________________________________________________

Yours,

Chris

One possible version

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.

First, we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture. We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language. Besides, we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do. Thank you very much. Looking forward to meeting you!

Yours,

Chris

Passage 4（生活）

假定你是刘芳。今年暑期加拿大的一所中学将组织该校的学生来你所就读的学校访问。其间，Lucy将借住在你家。请你给她写封信，代表全家欢迎她的到来并告之有关事宜，内容要点如下：

上午：参观学校各教学场所及设施。

下午：游览繁华市区及周遍景点。

晚上：看电视、玩游戏、聊天等。

注意：词数100左右；

Dear Lucy,

_____________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Liu Fang

One possible version

Dear Lucy,

I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home.

My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. As far as I know, you will be shown around the school in the morning, but in the afternoon I’ll take you to the downtown and then some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, or meeting people. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time and learn more about Chinese culture.

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Fang

Passage5（生活、文化）

假设你是高三（1）班的学生李华。你的英国朋友Chris八月份来北京度假，来信向你咨询如

ChengDu is a wonderful place located in Sichuan province.This city is well

decorated and designed which attrects lots of tourists every year.

Chengdu has large amounts of tourist spots such as Wangjiang Park,Dujiang

Dam and so on.Such spots are all easy to get and they dont cost much.Whatmore

,with the rapidly developing economy,Chengdu has become an international

metropolis.

Why not come to this amazing city to get a rest and have a look of these

beautiful sceneries.Just cherish this hardly-get chance.Dont hestitate.