高一英语期末考试作文汇编2篇 作文大全1000字(经典20篇)

In our accommodations, many students have computers. Also we can see in the electronic reading room and the cybercafés, rows of students sit in front of the monitors. Computers play an important role in our everyday life.

We use computers to cope with files and photos etc. And the internet is just a large database and we can get on the internet to search for anything we need through the computers. We can keep in touch with the others with the emails, msn and QQ etc. Enjoying ourselves in music, games and movies can loosen us after nervous classes.

Each coin has two sides. Disadvantages of the computers can also do harm to us. Most of us students use the computers more to play games and chat with strangers than searching for useful information. That’s a waste of time. There is so much rubbish on the net, which are some medium messages about crime or sex. It does harm to our minds.

From all above, we should learn to use computers in our own right ways. The computers doesn’t have no responsibility, it depends on the way we use them.

今年期末复习时间长达一个多月，无论是老师还是学生都付出了艰辛的劳动。有付出就会有收获，期末考试许多学科的成绩都取得了很大的进步。

我们班的英语平均分提高了10分，一共有37个学生成绩进步在5分—40分之间。王蕊老师为了提高学生的英语成绩，与班主任老师协商补差计划，并和班主任一起到班上做复习动员。作为班主任我建议王老师在班上建立帮带小组，聘请学习好、乐于助人的学生当老师的“助教”，坚持每天检查补差学生的单词背诵任务。选两名责任心强的小干部将助教和帮带学生的名字记录在册，记录每天单词背诵情况，当天亲自向我汇报。英语一周只有一个早读，为了使学生重视英语，为了加强巩固学生识记单词的能力，复习阶段我让学生利用早读最后10分钟时间读记七八个英语单词，并把背会的单词默写在练习本上，不会背的课下完成。补差学生不会读的单词向助教请教，会背后背给助教听。为了激发学生学习的积极性，有时我也向学生请教和学生一起读背。执行“帮带”措施以来，我发现学生学习英语的积极性提高了，看到学生利用课余时间给“助教”背单词我很欣慰。

我们班的数学平均分提高了8分，一共有16名学生成绩进步在5分—40分之间，这与闫慧芳老师的功劳是分不开的。期中考试之后，闫老师发现班上学生数学成绩尾巴很大，基础很差，就决心从最后一名学生抓起，利用每天的课余时间辅导后进生的学习，坚持让学生每天做10道计算题，尽量做到面批面改，从培养基本技能、基本能力做起。孩子们从内心感受到老师的关心，对数学也都付诸极大的热情。午间自习，闫老师总是来得很早到班上辅导学生。每测验一次，闫老师总结经验教训，及时制定下一步的复习计划。因此，成绩的背后凝结着闫老师和孩子们的心血和汗水。

以上是令我感到欣喜的，唯一让我感到自责的是我执教的语文学科成绩退步了，名次落后了两名，平均分与第一名有2分的差距。退步的主要原因在于后进生成绩与期中考试相比退步很大，尽管优等生的进步很大，但两极分化这种局面就注定了落后的结果。反思自我，辅导后进生的功夫应该放在平时，临时抱佛脚只会水过地皮湿，甚至适得其反。

下学期我会吸取教训，从平时做起，从最后一名学生抓起，争取提高学生的整体语文素养。同时，我将一如既往地大力支持学科老师的工作，在班上形成浓厚的学习氛围，形成良好的班风，使班上的孩子全面、积极、健康的发展。

I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It

took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We

stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day， I just stayed in

the hotel and rested. On the second day， my brother and I went to Nanjing Road.

It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there， there were lots of

people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs

of trousers for the ing summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white

because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On

the third day， my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full

of people. I played many kinds of gamesthere. I had a good time. The other days，

I went to some other interesting places， such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV

Tower， the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t

forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.

If you start preparing for the exams ahead, you’ll feel a lot better about getting everything accomplished.

Here are some ways to help you prepare your mind and body for a successful final exam season:

First,you should focus your time on difficult classes.

If you always do well in a course,then you obviously don’t need to spend as much time studying for that course.You should spend most of your study time on the difficult courses where your grade is borderline.

Second,spending time reviewing notes is also necessary.

By simply going over all your class notes, you’ll get a good overview of the specific areas you should start studying. This will also provide your mind with a good summary of everything you’ve been learning

Besides,you can design a study schedule and stick to It.

By setting aside time now to focus on the final exam, you’re preparing your mind for what’s ahead. And you’ll also find areas that you have questions about. This will provide you plenty of time to get answers from your professors.

Many years ago, when the online business first became popular among the

public. The manufacturers tried to make some slogans so as to catch more

customers. Then the day of November 11th was named the single day, and they gave

great discount. Today, it has become a shopping day.

There is no doubt that e-commerce is the future. With more young people

rely on the Internet, they get used to purchase online. Looked at the past five

years, November 11th gala has been famous around the world for the great profit

gained on that day. According to the report, the total income of e-commerce on

this gala surpasses the rest days of the year! What a surprise data.

The businessmen sense the great market potential and they advocate people

to make purchase on that single day, because there is great discount. If they

miss it, they will be regretful. With the successful marketing strategy, all the

people are so crazy about this gala. No one can resist the temptation, because

there is always something they want.

Mid-Autumn Festival The 15th day of the 8th lunar month The joyousMid-Autumn Festival was celebrated on the fifteenth day of the eighth moon， around the time of the autumn equinox（秋分）。 Many referred to it simply as the "Fifteenth of the Eighth Moon".This day was also considered as a harvest festival since fruits，vegetables and grain had been harvested by this time and food was abundant. Food offerings were placed on an altar set up in the courtyard. Apples， pears， peaches， grapes， pomegranates（石榴）， melons， oranges and pomelos（柚子） might be seen. Special foods for the festival included moon cakes， cooked taro（芋头）and water caltrope（菱角）， a type of water chestnut resembling black buffalo horns. Some people insisted that cooked taro beincluded because at the time of creation， taro was the first food discovered at night in the moonlight. Of all these foods， it could not be omitted from the Mid-Autumn Festival.l love Mid-autumn Festival very much！

[Mid-Autumn Festival高一年级中秋节英语作文

There is an old saying in China“people need face while the trees need skin”，the meaning is that Chinese people pay special attention on the dignity. Loving face is most people’s behavior, so they like to brag, they enjoy being adored by others. About the face problem, I think we should not take it serious, we are not living for other people, we are living for ourselves. The real self-esteem is from our hearts, not from other people. Chinese people like to brag, they brag about their property, hoping that people will respect him. The funny thing is that only the fake successful people will brag, the real one is silent, they keep working hard, the successful career supports their self-esteem. If we want people to respect us, we should show our reality, be nice to them, never brag about ourselves.

在中国有句老话“人要脸树要皮”，意思是中国人很注重尊严问题。爱面子是大多数人的习惯，他们喜欢吹嘘，享受被人崇拜。关于面子问题，我认为我们不应该把它看得很重，我们不是为别人而活，是为自己而活。真正的自尊是出于我们的内心，不是看别人。中国人喜欢吹牛，他们夸大自己的财产，希望人们尊重他们。有趣的是只有不成功的人才会吹牛，真正成功的人是沉默的，他们努力工作，事业的成功支撑着他们的自尊。如果我们想要别人尊重我们，我们应该展示我们真实的一面，对人友好，不要吹牛。

这次月考结束了，我觉得英语成绩不太理想。因为总分才127。5，而且还是加上附加分以后的成绩。自我很不满意，相信老师您也是吧！这次必须要好好反思自我到底哪里做得不好。最近我觉得自我的表现也比较差，A组的作文很少交，而且上课也不是很专心，总是和旁边的同学开小差，害得连旁边同学的成绩也一同退步了。背书那方面也不是很用心，记单词短语也马马虎虎，笔记抄了就算，也没有用心去记去背，所以导致这次月考的退步。

从试卷上分析，听力扣了2。5分，比以前都有进步。而单项选取、语法选取、完型填空这些题都是全对的。比较以前算是有很大的进步，因为之前做语法选取和完形填空总会错那么一两题。但阅读题失分就比较严重。错了三题，扣了6分。可能是考试时不够仔细，又比较焦急怕后面的题做不完，所以导致出现了错误。但是最糟糕的还是二卷的部分，作文满分十五分，自我竟然才得了八分。除了有点惊讶外，还有点后悔。后悔没有每一天写好Ａ组的日记，自我的语法错误又错得离谱。可能作文的资料还有点欠缺，而且我看高分的同学的作文字数都写好多，我的字数才她们的一半。所以才丢掉了这么多分。完成句子和单词填空这方面完成的也比较好，就因为完成句子没有注意时态被老师扣了分，虽然没有全对但相比前几次都是有所进步的。附加题部分就做得比较一般，才对了６个。做的时候不是很懂文章的意思，不会的那些都是乱选上去的，所以觉得完型填空这方面还是要多多加强练习才行。不然下次月考又又完型填空附加题，我就好吃亏了。

本人在今后的学习计划是继续坚持做阅读理解和努力背单词，争取能听写都能全对。保证以后认真落实每一个知识点，多点看笔记本和多记笔记里面的知识点，把此刻不会的都补回来，做阅读理解的时候再认真谨慎一点，在保证做题目的速度的同时也要保证正确率。有不会的知识点要及时问问同学或老师您，要及时解决当天课堂上的疑惑，写好课堂的反思，及时给您反馈意见。Ａ组作文要天天坚持写，就算再怎样样也得每个星期写几篇，作文写得太差，不写真的不能提高作文的分数。还有做好笔记，要及时抄，不能拖到回家的时候再抄。还有要整理和背好笔记，因为笔记真的挺重要的。上课必须务必要专心，坚决不和旁边的同学讲话或者开小差，不能影响别人同时自我又听不到老师您讲课。作业也要自我认认真真地写，不能因为一时的懒惰就去抄袭别人的作业。最后就是要在早读时大声并有感情帝朗读好英语，为听说考试做好准备。要好好对待英语，努力学好英语，时刻提醒自我英语需要进步。我不会让老师失望的。

I live with my father and mother in a very big house in Dongguan. My parents are both very busy. they leave for work very early in the morning and don’t return home until late in the evening.

When I am home on weekends from school, we spend a lot of time together. We talk about my studies, my health and my school life. I love my parents very much.

My grandparents are still living, but they don’t live with us. their health is good and they both do sports very early in the morning. My grandmother does gymnastics with elderly women her age in the park. Both of my grandfathers play basketball in the morning and sometimes they go swimming.

Chinese people eat rice for every meal, but I don’t like rice because I think it is tasteless! We eat meat, fish and vegetables. My family eats noodles and congee. My favorite is noodles.

I often play computer games because I like it so much. I often watch Japanese cartoon movies with my parents on the weekends. On long holidays we take trips, too.

That is my description of typical family life in China.

I live with my father and mother in a very big house in dongguan. my parents are both very busy. they leave for work very early in the morning and don’t return home until late in the evening.

When i am home on weekends from school, we spend a lot of time together. we talk about my studies, my health and my school life. i love my parents very much.

My grandparents are still living, but they don’t live with us. their health is good and they both do sports very early in the morning. my grandmother does gymnastics with elderly women her age in the park. both of my grandfathers play basketball in the morning and sometimes they go swimming.chinese people eat rice for every meal, but i don’t like rice because i think it is tasteless! we eat meat, fish and vegetables. my family eats noodles and congee. my favorite is noodles.

I often play computer games because i like it so much. i often watch japanese cartoon movies with my parents on the weekends. on long holidays we take trips, too.

That is my description of typical family life in china.

初中生活转眼间已经过去近两个月的时间，学得不亦乐乎的我们，迎来了第三次期末考试。经历了几次失败的我，仍以满怀信心的态度迎接了这次考试。

“叮铃铃……”，一声清脆的上课铃声响起。等了许久，不见老师走进教室，于是音乐委员孙雅欣起了一首《小情歌》，我们在一片歌声中等待着老师的到来。随着一句“写下，我时间和轻琴声交错的城堡。”，这一首歌就算唱完了，老师也出现在了教室门口。只见$2老师手握一沓卷子，神情庄重地走上了讲台，双手撑在桌子上，宣布：“这节课考英语。”说罢，她粉红的脸上露出一丝微笑，我们知道那是对我们的鼓励，可仅仅是简单的鼓励吗?不，我想不是的，那更是对我们必胜的信心。

时间很紧，仅有一节课，听力又要浪费不少的时间，我和熊瑞林这些急性子自然不会放松。握起笔杆，本来悠闲的心在这时突然紧张起来。环视四周：有的人怕时间不够而奋笔疾书，有的人怕书写不好而轻描慢写;有的人因题目简单而早早做完，有的人因不会做题而乱抓纸团;有的人紧握笔杆从容地答题，有的人东借尺子西借橡皮。$2老师没有为此苦恼，而是欣慰的笑了笑，因为她知道，让有人作弊和人很乱比起来，当然是后者更让人人心舒畅。我从容地握起了笔杆，猛然开始飞速答题，与三分钟前的闲谈形成了鲜明的对比，钟上秒针的抖动还不及我笔尖的一小半儿速度快，填上了几个“A”、“B”、“C”，写上了几个“That”和“This”,一张英语试卷就完成了。匆匆扫视了几眼，无聊至极的我便

翻开数学书，打开作业本，开始悠闲地做起数学作业，猛啃那绝对值。数学还剩一点儿，听力又开始了。该快不快，该慢不慢的不说，报之前还按门铃。我拜托，磁带大哥，这是让你报听力，可没有让你挨家挨户拜年啊!况且，离新年还远呢!我不耐烦的听着磁带，做着听力，就在最后一道题时，慢吞吞的它一反常态，像吃了火药一样，我们还没反应过来就报完了，第二遍也一样，它以迅雷不及掩耳之势完成了自己的使命，可我们班内呢?一片鬼哭狼嚎，想时光倒转，再听几遍，可现实就是这么残酷，就在这时，该死的下课铃响了起来，顿时一片哀求。

考罢，我问到了自己的分数：118!全班最高!结果老师又加一句：别的班有120的，我想唱的“我得意的笑”，却变成了“只要你考得比我好，我就受不了”，带着一点哀叹，这场期末考试算是过去了。

接下来就是等待期末考试出来了。

尊敬的老师：

由于我在考试的时候使用手机传答案，造成严重的作弊行为。今天，我怀着无比愧疚和懊悔的心情在此做深刻的检讨。事情经过是这样的。

2014年12月10日上午，我们举行了专业必修课《工程建设项目管理》的考试。由于这门课平时没有学好，加上考试前复习不充分，等到快考试的时候，我还有很多东西没记好，等到考试的时候，我发现很多题目都不会做，我一时糊涂，就用手机向同学发了考题，希望他能给我发答案。正在这时，老师您发现了我的行为，就将我的手机和卷子一起没收了。当时我脑中一片空白，心中涌起愧疚，后悔，不安各种情绪。回来后我寝食难安。然后江辅导员找我谈过了话，我才认识到自己犯下了一个极大的错误。

对不起!我不仅对不起长期默默支持我的家人，对不起和我同甘共苦的同学，更对不起细心教导我的老师，辅导员。我的作弊行为严重影响了考试的公平，影响了学校，学院和班级的荣誉，也影响了我个人的形象。我很后悔我所造成的这些严重后果，如果早知道后果这么严重，我绝不会做这种事的。

发生这件事情，所有的问题都在我。监考老师是很尽责的，老师和辅导员也对我进行了耐心的教育。这些都让我深刻认识到自己的错误。首先，我没有好好学习。由于上大四以来，我一直无心学习，导致我此们课没有学好，如果我好好学习，就不能犯下这么严重的错误。21世纪是知识的世纪，是人才的世纪，作为一个学生，一个大学生，尤其是这么好的一个学校的大学生，我应该努力学好科学文化知识，提高自身素质，而我却马马虎虎，虚度光阴，实在是枉为大学生。其次，我没有注意自己的道德素质的修养。考试作弊是一种严重的原则性问题。这是我个人诚信的倒退，以及做事不认真踏实，不考虑后果的结果。古人说“人无信不立”，一个人要是没有信用如何能够立足啊。我现在才深刻体会到思想道德的重要性。最后，我没有听从老师的教诲。老师是人类灵魂的塑造师，老师教我们知识，教我们如何做人，如何做事。老师们经常教育我，考试千万要诚信，万万不可作弊。而我却没有听进去，这也导致了我犯下如此重大错误。如今大错已成，我深深懊悔不已。

从今往后，我要牢记这次教训， 努力消除影响，牢记老师们对我的教诲，改过自新，努力学习，诚信做人，坚决不犯类似错误。我还要改善现在的生活方式，努力学好剩余的课程。犯下如此严重的错误，我愿意承担一切后果与责任。只是我即将毕业，面临找工作的压力，我知道这件事对我将来会产生极大影响。望老师能看在我是初次犯错，诚心悔改的份上，从轻处理为盼。

检讨人：XXX

More and more college students choose self-help trayelijig rather than arranged tours when they plan to travel. The reason inay be that by ananging the route, booking cheaper hotels and taking cheaper transportation means 2.W by themselves, they can save a lot of money.

Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, it still has some potential problems Perhaps the most important one is the safety hazard. Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e. robbery, wild animal attacks, etc. In addition, they are more Eikely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a strange city or in the remote countryside.

In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging which is worth trying. However, before setting out alone on a tour, travelers should make good preparations. Besides, they should hear security in mind all the time and keep ia touch with their friends or relatives. By doing soa they can enjoy the pleasure of exploring a strange city safe and sound.

现实生活中没有完美的人生,正如舞台上没有纯粹的喜剧.

海浪不回避礁石的撞击,才得以壮观,人生不拒绝遗憾的存在,才得以乐观.

--题记

这两句话我很喜欢,正和我这次考试一样,这次考试不是完美的,但现实中没有全是完美的,正如第一句现实生活中没有完美的人生,这次的失利不代表失败,一次的失败不代表永久的失败,这次的失败并不能说明什么.只要在哪里跌倒,就在哪里爬起,这次的失败不是给下次的成功有了经验吗，有了失败才有成功,失败乃是成功之母嘛.而返回到前面说，人的一生不可能是一帆风顺的,哪能不经历点风风雨雨,"不经历风雨怎么见彩虹,没有人能随随便便成功",这句话说的不也就是吗.这次考试考完了就过去了,不要再去想,只要知道自己错在哪里,就是最好的，也可以说是一种进步,知道了哪里错还要去填补这快空缺,补得严严实实,缝不可透.第二句名句也是说不经历点挫折失败,哪能有成功胜利.

虽然刚才一直都在安慰自己,可是我还是按捺不住自己的情感,豆大的眼珠总是在眼圈晃动,这回考试辜负了太多人的期望,就不用一一再提,我真的自己也很不甘心,很伤心,辜负了你们,对不起,真的对不起,辜负了你们的一片苦苦期望,爸爸妈妈.我的全家人.好友.y友.老师....都对我们寄予了很高的期望,可是我却....虽然老师对我的成绩十分满意,可就是让我数学再努努力,而我的其他家人好友们都对我的成绩难以置信，怎么才考这么点，怎么别的时候不失礼，非要在这个时候失礼，这是多么重要的一次考试，但是我还是希望过去就过去了，不要再提了，提也只能让我更伤心。这次考试是普遍的没考好，可大姨对我说，不要把普遍当作理由，我会记住的257d，深深地记住。爸爸也对我说，第一名只有一个。难道不是吗，虽然是普遍没考好，但也有考好的呀，我还是要象他们奋进，需要的则还是努力，假期里好好弥补自己的不足,再一步地提高提高,我相信,只要有我的努力,就一定会有我的成功,只要我努力了，我能行.不经一番彻骨寒,怎得梅花扑鼻香.我到下次考试时一定不会再辜负你们了,争取升学考试时一鸣惊人.你们相信我吗.你们还会一如既往地鼓励我支持我吗.我在你们眼里还是个优等生吗.我希望还能象以前一样,你们还能鼓励我支持我相信我,好吗.在升学考试时我一定要给你们一个惊喜.

不再想了，过去就过去了,笑对人生,人生路上坎坎坷坷,这算什么."风雨中,这点痛算什么,擦干泪不要怕,至少我们还有梦...."抬起头扬起胸,以后的路还很长....

i have a dream that a lot! but some macant do but i heard: "a person, have a dream, have goals, have goals, there ipower; a power; hathe power, life ifull of meaning." so im going to like the wordof one layer upward, become a successful person!

from third grade i have a dream ito have been admitted to the universitdepartment of insects, or other subjectabout biological, although thiroad itough, but i believe that: "along ahave a dream can come true in all things." so i trto effortto tragain upwards.

i have thiverbig dreams, because i have a passion for biologand insect, love, i think everone of umust have complete mission in the world, and i came into the world should be dedicated to the insect world.

anyway, everyone hagoaland dreamhe will be vertrmbest to make their own dreams, no matter adults, children and old grandpa and grandma must have been hidream, but someone hadied still unfinished, so be sure to cherish their own dreams, let him not onlthe big dreams, but most true eternal dream, everone of the world must come on!

scores are undoubtedly important for students。 so today when i saw the score， 96，on my chinese test paper， my happiness was beyond words。 i believed that mum would also be very happy and perhaps she would reward me。

as soon as i got home， i raised the test paper before mum and said proudly， "mum， look at my score!" out of my expectation，mum said calmly， "good， but i hope you can find out the reason why four points were taken away。" hearing the words， i stood in amazement at first。 then i understood mums words and nodded with all my strength。

then iunderstood that the most important thing that we get from examinations is not whether we have got high scores but whether we know what we have grasped and what we havent。

“考试之后”英语作文译文：

成绩对学生来说无疑是重要的，所以今天当我看到语文试卷上的96分时，我高兴得无以言表。我相信妈妈也会为此高兴，可能她还会奖励我呢。

我一到家就将卷子高举到妈妈面前，骄傲地说：“妈妈，看我的成绩!”出乎我的意料，妈妈平静地说："很好，但是我希望你能找到丢掉另外四分的原因。”听到这些话，一开始我惊愕地站在那里，然后我理解了妈妈的话，用力地点了点头。

我明白了我们从考试中得到的最重要的东西不是我们是否得到了高分，而是我们是否知道自己学到了什么，没有学到什么。

We are always trying to find the way to success, which stands for power,

pride and glory. There have been strings of stories of success I was told since

I was a child. From then on, I have been fascinated with being successful.

Whatsuccess? Different people have different opinions towards this

question. To start with, some people, such as accountants, workers and so on,

are longing for being rich, which allows them buy what they want, and enjoy

luxury. They treat it as success. Furthermore, some contestants, such as boxers,

are always trying their best to defeat their rivals for success. And once they

win, they confirm that they are stronger than others. The last but not the

least, there are some other people who enjoy helping others. As a good saying

goes, the roses in her hand, the flavor in mine. With helping others, we can

also feel satisfactory.

As far as I am concerned, life is short, and we must achieve something

during our life. So I regard striving and working hard important. When comes to

we reap what we sow, it’s the time of success.

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

通过期中考试我才了解学生的学习不扎实，他自己也知道考的不理想，打算在期末考试把成绩赶上去，只要想到了，在以后的学习当中一定要下苦功，在课堂上还有专心听讲，理想才会实现，你是个聪明人，会想到做到的

希望能够做到认真对待每一门功课。通过这次考试，还有妈妈看到你对学习所做的反思及总结，觉得你本学期收获的与付出的是成正比的，希望你继续再接再厉，争取到期末在此取得较好的成绩。

继续努力，认真学习。

希望言行一致，保证尽心努力，一定会达到目标。

这次考试虽不理想，但也是个教训，希望以后更加努力，我相信你会上去的，加油!

我希望我的孩子身体健康，知道照顾自己。作为父母，孩子健康幸福是最重要的。希望以后，能够知道自己的目标，知道自己怎么样做会更好，希望他能够快乐生活和学习。

看到你的成绩，虽然不理想，但是你考完试后对我说的那一番话，让我感动，希望你能记住你说的话，实现你的诺言。学习是很辛苦的，希望你能静下心来，把基础知识学好，每天不光是完成作业，还要复习每一天学的知识，并且背过它。

望该生在校努力学习，积极上进。

期中考试成绩不是很好，应该进行深刻的反思，改变学习方法，制定切实可行的计划。希望能勤奋、刻苦学习取得好的成绩。

从这次期中考试得知你平常的学习成绩，最关键的初二，你应该比家长更懂得，去好好努力吧!你的付出会得到好的回报。家长不要求你最好，愿你不断地超过你前边的那位，努力吧。

你努力了，虽然成绩不理想，但是我相信你在今后的学习中，再加倍努力，我坚信你一定能取得一个好成绩。

继续努力，全面发展。

希望你在学习上更进步，端正学习态度，扎实的进步。再就是希望你在以后的日常生活中多留心身边的事情。对班级的人和事都要做到心中有数。

万丈高楼从基础打起，学习亦然。又云：好的开端是成功的一半，牢固的基础亦是取得好成绩的保证。

希望你在今后的学习中要细心，勤奋，争取每门功课都达到优异，不会的问题及时向老师和同学请教。希望能看到你刻苦学习取得的优异成绩。

期中考试只能证明前段时间的学习，要保持正确的学习态度，奋勇向前，不可骄傲自满，你离一中高中学习还有距离。必须奋发努力，才能驶向学习高峰的彼岸。

谢谢各位老师的辛劳，期中考试的成绩是一时的，希望***更加端正学习态度，和找到更好的学习方法，希望老师严加管教，帮助找出弱点和解决问题的方法，让我们一起努力!

能够认识自己的不足之处，这是很好的。希望在上课的时候听老师讲课。自习课要好好复习，不能浪费时间。一定要努力哦。

My home village is a beautiful village far from the town. There is a clear brook arcs around the village, making the vil]age like a peninsula.

我的家乡是一个远离城镇的美丽村庄，有一条清澈的小河弧形环绕着，看起来像一个半岛。

On one side of the brook, are farmlands stretching as far as the eyes can see with farmers busy in the fields. The sunshines brightly through the pure, fresh air. After dark, I liked to roam around the fields along footpaths. The feeling was excellent.

从小河畔望去，你会看到农民们在无垠的田地里忙碌的身影，明亮的阳光透过纯净的、清新的空气射过来。黄昏，我喜欢沿着田间小道漫步，那种感觉真是妙极了。

On the other side of the brook, there are many trees. There are lots of green bamboo groves. The trees offer nice shade in the summer, and birds like singing in them. The bamboos sway gently in the fresh summer breeze. The brook runs calmly anti quietly through all this greenness, making a very nice picture.

在小河的一边有许多树木，还有一片翠绿的竹林。夏天，绿树成荫，鸟儿们喜欢在这里唱歌，竹林在夏天的微风申轻轻摇摆,小河静静地在绿色中流淌，这些构成一幅美丽的。

This is my home village. It is far away in the country, but always with me,wherever I am.

这就是我的家乡。它虽远在乡下，但不论我身在何方，它都会伴随着我。