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61雅思考试作文写作技巧与应注意事项
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+ 加入清单句子、词语。文章由句子组成,句子由词语组成。在着手写文章之前,应该提醒自己注意下面几点
1)句子与词语的正确用法。这是最基本的一点。这里包括单字的正确拼写、词语在特定句子中的正确应用、正确的句子模式。注意:千万不要在文章中出现中国式的英语。这就要求在构思的时候不要用中文进行思考,写的时候要仔细斟酌文章的语句。
2)句子的多样化。这点的实现必须在句子与词语的正确上来实现。句子的多样化是体现一个人英语语言水平的关键也是使文章获得高分的重点。如非谓语从句、定语从句、宾语从句等,以及简单句、复杂句的综合使用。
3)标点的正确使用
文章的整体风格与气氛。
作为考官或者是阅读你文章的人,在第一次接触到你文章时就可以感受到文章的特点与风格,或者活泼或者呆板,而依据模板写的文章很难做到活泼或者是吸引读者。
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篇1:期中考试引发的思考学生作文
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+ 加入清单期中考试已经过去了,成绩已经发下来了,眼睛也就直了。
我的期中考试成绩令我很不满意,语文93.5分,数学103分(105分满),英语92分。在班级排第13名。和我上一次考试下降了8名。
我的语文,在考试前胸有成竹,以为自己能考满分的语文。却考了93.5分,有的错了一些不该出错的题。就说第一课《山中访友》中的填空吧!“重新梳妆”我只写了“梳妆”但“重新”不知道丢到那里去了。
数学错的就更不应该了,那两分丢在了一个最基础的判断题上,而且,那题我还做过。
英语,我也错了一些马虎题,但这不是借口,是我做题时没往心里去,才造成所谓的“马虎”许多单词都错了,许多不应该错的都错了。
期中考试虽然已成为过去,但深深地记在我心里。也同时给我敲了一记警钟,叫我不再自高自大,不再叫我轻“敌”更叫我不再马马虎虎。我会努里,希望在期末考试中取得好成绩。加油!
篇2:2024年雅思考试写作基础
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+ 加入清单1.先进的科学技术advanced science and technology.
2.经济的快速发展the rapid development of economy
3.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard .
4.面临新的机遇和挑战be faced with new opportunities and challenges.
5.人们普遍认为It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6.社会发展的必然结果the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention.
8.不可否认It is undeniable that…/There is no denying that …
9.热烈的讨论/争论a heated discussion/ debate
10.有争议性的问题a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点a totally different argument
12.一些人…而另外一些人… Some people… while others…
13.就我而言/就个人而言As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14.就…达到绝对的一致reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用play an increasingly important role in …
18.对…必不可少be indispensable to …
19.正如谚语所说As the proverb goes:
20.…也不例外…be no exception
21.对…产生有利/不利的影响exert positive/ negative effects on …
22.利远远大于弊the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
23.导致,引起lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感/成就感sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26.竞争与合作精神sense of competition and cooperation
27.开阔眼界widen ones horizon/ broaden ones vision
28.学习知识和技能acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素take many factors into account/ consideration
31.从另一个角度from another perspective
32.做出共同努力make joint efforts
33.对…有益be beneficial / conducive to…
34.为社会做贡献make contributions to the society
35.打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for…
36.综合素质comprehensive quality
37.无可非议blameless / beyond reproach /above (或beyond) reproach
39.致力于/投身于be committed / devoted to…
40.应当承认Admittedly
篇3:雅思考试10个作文题目预测
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+ 加入清单写作:六月份考试重点注意文化类,科技类和教育类,(写作题不要看了就行,一定要好好写完十篇 “才10篇,不多嘛”,尤其是打×号难度大的题目,最好找专人修改)。
1.Some people think that the earlier technology has changed our life more than the recent technology. Do you agree or disagree?
×2.Some people think there is no drawback to ethnic in the multi-cultured country. Multi-cultured does more benefit to a country than the problems it brings about. Do you agree or disagree?
3. Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution. What extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think more effective?
4.Many countries have spent vast sum of money on armament for the sake of self defense. Some people think they should spend on helping the poverty and other disadvantages rather than on weapons. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
5.Should criminals be sent to a jail or let them do something else as punishment instead of sending into a jail? Why and give your reasons.
×7. Do the negative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?
8.Government should protect culture. Therefore, some people believe that new building should be built in traditional style. Do you agree or disagree?
×9.Memorization of information by frequency repetition (rote learning) plays the most important role in education system. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
10. As scientists contribute more to the development of our society than other people ,science student should get more financial support from the government than other student get ,do you agree?
或According to recent survey, more and more people are paying less attention to basic science. Is this phenomenon also true in your country? What do you think about the causes of this trend and give your recommendations.
篇4:我的期末考试总结——五年级上学期
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+ 加入清单嗨!时间真如江河之水,一去不复返。一个学期怎么就这么短,转瞬便已过去。这个学期结束了,我也该对自己做个期末总结了吧!
昨天刚考完期末考试,回家后我还一直是信心满满。今天上午老师叫我去帮忙登一下分数。同去的还有班上的熊雨欣和罗文杰。我在抄写分数的时候,我留心了一下自己的考试成绩。语文和数学考的还行,就是英语考的太差了,只得了90分,我原本对父母夸下海口说一题都没错,这下简直令我羞愧得无地自容。我实在是该好好的反省一下了。回想在期末考试的前一个多月,我几乎没有读一下英语课本,父母每次提醒我听读,我根本就没有去做,只是忽悠他们说:“我全都会了”。俗话说:种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。我以前每天种下的恶因,现在轮到我尝苦果的时候了。相比之下,那几位得高分的同学,就比我刻苦得多了,据我所了解,英语得高分的冯文涛和戴妮娜,每天听读英语至少一小时,他们得不到高分才怪呢!我付出的实在是太少了。那些得高分的同学都有一个共同的特点:就是熟读课文,擅写单词。而英语原本就是我的弱项,我却从来没有好好的用功。所以也只能得这样的分数了。幸好,我的语文进步了一点,数学没退也没进,但英语落后了这么多,这似乎是在告戒我:没有好的学习态度,自以为是的心理,拖拉懒惰的毛病……种种坏习惯如果不改正的话,是永远也考不出好成绩的。
总而言之,这个学期我是进步不大,却退步不小。今后我一定要好好的反省自己的过错,力争下学期纠正这些诸多缺点。要知道:“虚心使人进步,骄傲使人落后‘。这是我们每个人都应该遵循的道理。
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篇5:雅思考试A类小作文解题策略
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+ 加入清单在雅思考试A类小作文的四大基本图形(即曲线图、柱形图、饼图和表格图)中,表格图往往是广大考生所最头疼的图形了,很大一部分考生会碰到以下状况,比如表格看懂了,但是因为数据繁多而且凌乱,一时半会儿找不出很明显的特征,不知从何下手;或是找到了很多特征,但是不知道用什么样的顺序、结构和衔接方式把这些特征条理清晰地传达出来;又或是大体清楚该写什么,怎么写,但是在具体写的时候,老是丢三落四的,把一些信息给遗漏掉了等等。这时,考生所面临的主要不是语言方面的问题,而是写作步骤和写作思路方面的问题,也就是不知道应该用什么样的步骤和思路把表格图中那些看似复杂无序的数据自然而且毫不遗漏地贯穿起来。本文中,专家将主要就表格图的写作步骤及其写作思路展开探讨。
The table below lists the number of nights of occupancy of hotel rooms in Australia during the peak month of September in the years 2000 and 2001 and the difference expressed in percentage.
首先,拿到考题以后,快速浏览题目中的文字信息,即The table below lists the number of nights occupancy of hotel rooms in Australia during the peak month of September in the years 2000 and 2001 and difference expressed in percentage,重点关注研究对象(nights occupancy)、数据类型(number and percentage)和时间(2000 and 2001)这三大要素,明确在主体段的写作中要注意数据类型的变化和时态一致问题。
其次,看题目中的表格图形,看图形时也要先看文字说明,包括标题、标注和单位,弄懂数据所代表的信息,而非数据本身。一般情况下,表格图中的文字说明还是比较容易识别的,就如同曲线图中的横纵轴一样。上图中横向的代表不同的时间,纵向则代表不同的地区。但是通常表格的最后一列和最后一行要特别注意,有可能是数据的叠加、平均或者对比,这张图也是如此,最后一列代表不同时间之间的变化趋势及幅度,最后一行则是数据和变化的总结,曾经就有比较粗心的同学,出现了“Australia Total”的数量最多的笑话。同时,标题下方的单位(in thousand)和change前面的%千万不能遗漏,不然后面写的数据都是不准确的。
然后,筛选信息,圈关键数据。表格图写作不是记流水帐,需要面面俱到,但是关键数据可是一个都不能少的。为了防止遗漏,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生可以在看题的过程中把这些数据都圈出来,通常包括总数、极值、突变值等等,就上图而言,以下数据必不可少:总数(2000年3562.6、2001年3476.0),总变化(2.4),极值(2000年最大1299.9,最小71.2;2001年最大1135.8,最小70.9;变化增长最多21.8,减少最多12.6),一共9个数据可视为必要数据,在文章中必须要提及,至于其他数据就可写可不写了。
再则,整理写作思路,也就是写作顺序。作为总数、平均数或者对比数据,通常放在文章开头总起或者结尾总结,所以这些数据可以先不考虑。剩余的数据,则只有两种写作顺序,横着写或者竖着写,肯定不可能斜线写的。在上图中,横着写,就是对比相同地区在2000年和2001年不同年份之间的数据,其实也就是最后一列变化情况比例或者说趋势;竖着写,就是对比不同地区在2000年或2001年同一年份中的数据。此图中由于既出现了类别(地区),又出现了时间,所以既要横着写,也要竖着写。若是只有类别比较或者只有时间比较,那么横写竖写选其一即可。
最后,就是落笔成文了,运用平时积累和归纳的词汇句型以及连接手段,把必要数据和关系对比,遵循刚才整理清楚的写作思路,有机地串连起来,形成文字即可。时间允许的话,还可以进行快速的检查,看看有无数据遗漏、时态疏忽、单词误拼等小问题。
总之,表格图并没有想象中的那么难,了解图形特点,掌握解题策略,积累表达手段,辅以3-5篇的练习,一篇出色的表格图作文是完全有可能出自你的笔下的,因此“临渊羡鱼,不如退而结网”,现在就开始行动吧!
篇6:总结考试,根据自己学习上的漏洞,制定学习计划
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+ 加入清单根据考试中出现的某些现象,找出平时心态、身体、学习状态上的缺点和漏洞。,补弱项还是增强项?一般的,弥补弱项,比起强化强项,更容易进步。
原因之一是使用在强项中总结出的好的学习方法往往可以用于弱项的学习。
例如,如果你的英语处于中级阶段,语文处于初级阶段,那么,你就可以把已经证明有效的英语的学习方法用于语文,如把英语背单词方法用于背语文字词,把英语阅读的解题技巧用于语文阅读题等。
其次,学习差的课程,使用相对低级的学习方法就能取得进步,而越低级的学习方法越容易掌握。
篇7:雅思考试作文常用句子
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+ 加入清单导语:雅思词汇虽然不作为一门单独的考试,但是词汇是雅思考试四大板块最基础的核心,没有词汇就不成句不成篇。以下是小编为大家分享的雅思考试作文常用句子,欢迎借鉴!
1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。
2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...
3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。
4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...
5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了...
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。
7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...
8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何...
9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解...
10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论...
11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...
12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...
13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...
14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。
15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...
16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了...
17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。
18.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。
19.this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图,描述了...
20.as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of... 如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。
21.over the period from...to...the...remained level. 在...至...期间,...基本不变。
22.in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...
23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998... 1995年至1998三年里...
24.from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...
25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。
26.the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...
27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and... ...至...期间...的比率维持不变。
28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year) ...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点,为...
29.the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...
30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of... ...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。
31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and... ...与...的区别不大。
32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of... 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。
33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily. ...逐年减少,而...逐步上升。
34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%]. ...的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点,为...百分点。 35.the figures/situation bottomed out in... 数字(情况)在...达到底部。
36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。
37.a is ...times as much/many as b. a是b的...倍。
38.a increased by... a增长了...
39.a increased to... a增长到...
40.high/low/great/small/ percentage. 比低高(低)
41.there is an upward trend in the number of... ...数字呈上升趋势。
42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to... ...到...发生急剧上升。
43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down. 从...到...,下降速率减慢。
44.from this year on,there was a gradual decline/reduction in the...,reaching a figure of... 从这年起,...逐渐下降至...
45.be similar to... 与...相似
46.be the same as... 与...相同
47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and... ...与...之间有许多相似(不同)之处
48.a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。
49.the difference between a and b lies in... a与b之间的差别在于...
50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in... ...年...急剧上升。
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篇8:考试后的思考
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+ 加入清单5号的期末考试结束了,可是我很担心,不知道考的怎么样,因为考试前我和奶奶有个约定,如果我三门功课考不到90分以上,奶奶就要回家,不管我了,所以我的压力很大,只能等结果。
我担心的事今天有消息了——考分下来了,我考得不理想,和奶奶的要求只差一步,语文考了87。5,没上90分,和同学比,我还差一些,没有达到平均分,我就不由自主地哭了,心里特别的难受。在复习的时候,我也没少用功,为什么我就考不了高分呢?我把自己关在房间里,越哭越伤心,恨不得打自己几下,奶奶和妈妈把门推开,劝我不要哭了,现在哭又有什么用呢?只能在下学期好好努力,把功课赶上去,但是我还是很上心,我怕奶奶回老家,以后家里空荡荡的,因为爸爸妈妈要上班,事情比较多,经常家里只剩我一个人,我真害怕,所以越来越伤心,奶奶可能看出了我的心思,就把我抱在怀里,认真又严肃的说:“这次原谅你,也取消约定,在下学期一定要好好学习,在这个假期里,除了完成作业,还要找找差距,主要改变学习的浮躁,满足于一知半解,没有真正地理解,所以题稍微有变化就不会了,马虎大意,不看清题就下笔,所以就造成不该错的题了,而且学习的自觉性不够。”听了奶奶的话,我决心在新的一年里,发扬成绩,克服缺点,百尺竿头更进一步!
篇9:中学生反思考试的作文
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+ 加入清单时光飞逝,岁月流梭。怀揣着紧张的心情,进入了5好考场。一张答题卡,承载了我的希望,我这半学期的努力全靠这一张纸,传递出去。当我拿到我的成绩,我为我感到开心。虽然只拿到了250名的成绩,但对于我三月份月考320名的成绩,我已经进步了70名,但是我并不会满足,我会继续努力冲进前200.我并不认为我的能力只局限于250名,现在反思自己为什么不能拿到高分。
语文,分数101分。其实这个分数我并不满意,我的阅读题其实可以拿更高分,并不只有0,3这些分数。我觉得是因为我不够认真看阅读,因为我感到时间紧迫,所以便放松了,这是不对的,就算只有几分钟,也要认真将题做好,做到位。我的作文只拿了38分,但是我不会轻易放弃。我会这此为警告,是自己多练习作文,争取拿到42、43的高分。我的作文,一想到是39,一直没突破,这说明了我的水平还不够,需要多看些作文书,来吸取精华,创造新成绩。我的古文,一项很烂,这次也不例外。但是,我还是会将家中的古文书《世说新语》、《古文观止》等看完,使自己对古文的理解更透彻、清晰。我平时上课会偷懒,老师的笔记有时也不抄,这些都是导致成绩下降的元凶。所以,以后上课我不能分心,要全心投入到课堂中去。将老师笔记熟背,将老师布置的作业、背诵按时完成。考完试仔细检查,不能马虎大意。我期待着下一次月考我发挥的水平,加油!
数学,分数60分。数学是我最薄弱的一刻。也正是因为这样,我对数学渐渐失去了信心失去了动力。每次教师,我对数学都抱着爱怎样怎样的心理,所以总不能拿高分。我对数学一直都不认证。对平方更、算数平方公里都会弄混。刚开始一直都在30、20几风之间徘徊。后来经过自己的努力提高了许多,现在慢慢地宋雪莲,上了初一下学期,开始不认真,直接导致了我只考60分。我有时许多地方都搞不懂也不回去问老师、同学。出在“三人行”白板上不懂的数学题别人帮我解答了,我也不会撕下来,就贴在那儿不管不顾。每次下定决心好好学习时,便开始认真,课时三分钟热度,一会儿便将决心跑到九霄云外去了。不是我没有毅力,是自己的潜意识就懒。我上课不应该低着头不看黑板,不应该上课就走神分心。我想如果我懂得吸取教训,那么,我应该会更好。以后,我会将老师的作业完成好,上课听讲,认真做笔记。不会再与旁人上课时说话、玩耍。我会配合好张老师的工作,不会让她失望了。她给予了我希望,我不饿能辜负他的期盼。
英语,分数89分。我承认这次考得不好,以前一直都是90多分的,这次这个分数,让自己、家长都很担心,担心成绩退步地这么快,以后该怎么办?成绩下滑,唉,还不是不认真惹的祸。我现在学习英语越来越放松,写周报不认真改预学案不认真。我不能因为会了而骄傲和放松,这样会使后面的同学追上来。我们在同样的起跑线上,同样是在年级排名与成绩中追逐的运动员,当你有一个障碍时,便要勇敢地跨越过去,因为后面也有人在试图冲刺,当他们与你擦肩而过时,一切都已成定局。所以每当看到英语成绩变回害怕,怕万一有一天成绩下滑,便有人要超过自己了,到那个时候,便有二倍的努力去超越。改预学案时,要认真。不要认为只打勾勾错错就行了,书上自己写错的知识点,不要走马观花,看完就行,要取其精华,缩在脑海中。周报上的题,我总是做完就不理了,其实,这上面的题都是精华,我应该认真听老师讲解,不应该马虎对待。每次知识对下答案而已,从不听老师讲解题目。
历史,分数83分。历史是我自认为的强项,课时身为历史课代表的我却考得这样差。虽然班中只有11人上了80分,但是这不重要,重要的是这证明,已经有11人多在努力了,我这次都没超过一些以前成绩平平的人。题纲我都没有好好背诵,知识胡乱看了几遍,没有真正用心去背。书上的笔记,有一些也没有记住。老师上课讲的话,我也没有去认真的记。有时,连作业也是等快收时才开始做。有时,只是将笔记及在树上,然后再也不去看。这都是需要注意的。
地理,分数80分。地理在近一个学籍一直都不错,至少没掉下80分。但是书上笔记却做得很少。比如说欧洲西部,日本这两章都没有去认真学、背、做。老师说的重点,也没有认真国,背过,知识光靠画线去记,只是有个形而已,其实根本心不在焉。欧洲西部,书上也没一点笔记,只是将老师黑板的笔记记下而已,没有自己的理解,只是自己将老师的当成自己的,所以学习效率非常低。有时还分不清W、S,这些东西南北代号。如果自己能积极起来,那么便太棒了。
生物,分数……60分以下,不及格。以前生物也是70多,现在降到这么低,实在出乎我意料。我一直没在生物这一学科下功夫,都是在别的科上功夫,总是遗忘了这一科的重要性,血管、体循环、呼吸这些都没有好好背过知识一扫而过,所以才得了不及格。不只是出乎意料,还是意料之中了。我现在很苦恼,怕以后还会犯同样的错误。我要多请教办理生物学霸的学习方法,多请教老师,以后啊还要将这次的生物分数到红灯,告诫自己要认真学习这一薄弱之项。
政治分数81分。感觉较于上一学期,进步了许多,从70——80,十分的飞跃。但是这不是最还得成绩。我的题纲都没怎么背,书也没怎么看。我感觉自己没有认真。我不知是我什么,是因为运气让我这次考81分。我没有真正用心。回家也没有好好复习,只是草草地看了一下,我这次终于争了一口气,突破了八十大关,相信以后如果我更努力,可以拿到90分得好成绩。以后我要努力背题纲,老师上课时要认真听讲。老师布置的作业要认真做完。
我相信,下次一定会更好。
篇10:雅思写作雅思考试秘笈作文
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+ 加入清单作文中常用句套:
下文中出现的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),
要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换.
开头:
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of ...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
... but that is only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is ...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
举普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事
(先说故事主体),this story is not rare.
..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for ...
Why .... , for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obiviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
进行对比:
The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...
Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...
承上启下:
To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...
A study of ... will make this point clear
让步:
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
结尾:
>From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw
the conclusion that ...
In summary, it is wiser ...
In short...
在作文中引用合适的名言警句,会给你的文章增色许多。这里收集了我本人喜爱的一些名言,可能会对你有用。我们使用引用的位置可以在开头结尾或正文段落中,
常见的使用形式如下:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
Useful quotations
逆境
by Robert Collier
In every adversity there lies the seed of an equivalent advantage. In every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory next time.
努力与成功
by Ann Landers
Opportunities are usually disguised as hard work, so most people dont recognize them.
坚持
by Ralph Waldo Emerson
No one can cheat you out of ultimate success but yourselves.
Confucius 孔子
Our greatest glory is not in never falling...
but in rising every time we fall.
坚持
Mother Teresa
To keep a lamp burning we have to keep putting oil in it.
Henry Ford
Nothing is particularly hard if you divide it inuo small jobs.
Winston Churchill
Never, never, never, never give up.
Albert Einstein
In uhe middle of difficulty lies opportunity.
努力与成功
by Crassus
Those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly.
Thomas Edison
There is no substitute for hard work.
Leo Tolstoi
The strongest of all warriors are these two- Time and Patience.
Thomas Jefferson
Im a great believer in luck,
and I find the harder I work...
the more I have of it.
Robert Collier
Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.
Ray A. Croc
Luck is a dividend of sweat. The more you sweat, the luckier you get.
实际经验与间接经验
Youll learn more about a road by traveling it...
than by consulting all the maps in the world.
动机与结果
Vince Lombardi
Winning isnt everything...
but wanting to win is.
John F. Kennedy
We choose to go!to the moon and other things , oot because they are easy, but because they are hard.
Thucydides
The strong do what they will.
The weak do what they must.
为人态度:
John Wooden
Talent is God given--Be Humble.
Fame is man given-- Be Thankful.
Conceit is self given --Be Careful.
行动:
Theodore Roosevelt
Do what you can , with what you have , with where you are.
Publilius Syrus Maxim
No one knows what he can do till he tries.
Terence
There is nothing so easy but that i
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t becomes difficult when you do it reluctantly.
Thomas Fuller
A wise man turns chance into good fortune.
William Hazlitt
Prosperity is a great teacher;
adversity is a greater.
William Penn
No pains, no palm;
no thorns, no throne;
no gall , no glory;
no cross, no crown.
Will Rogers
Even if youre on the right track, youll get run over... if you just sit there.
Opportunity rarely knocks on your door.
Knock rather on opportunitys door if you ardently wish to enter.
成功与失败
Vince Lombardi
Its not whether you get knocked down.
...Its whether you get up again.
Winston Churchill
An optimist sees an opportunity in every calamity;
a pessimist sees a calamity in every opportunity.
热情(年轻/年老)
Ralph Waldo Emerson
Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.
信心
James Allen
The will to do springs from the knowledge that we can do.
Samuel Johnson
Few things are impossible to diligence and skill.
Aughey
Lost time is never found again.
Voltaire
No problem can stand the assault of sustained thinking.
Napoleon
Victory belongs to the most persevering.
细心
Euipides
Leave no stone unturned.
计划与工作
Norman Vincent Peale
Plan your work for today and every day;
then work your plan.
Henry Ford
Failure is only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.
Thomas Edison
I start where the last man left off.
理想与现实
What the mind of man can conceive and believe,
the mind of a man can achieve.
勤奋
Benjamin Franklin
Plough deep while sluggards sleep.
目标
Henry David Thoreau
In the lone run men hit only what they aim at.
幸运
Emily Dickinson
Luck is not chance...
Its toil...
Fortunes expensive smile is earned.
勤奋
Thomas Edison
Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.
Useful Quotations
想象力
Albert Einstein
Imagination is more important than knowledge.
挑战:
Walter Begehot
The great pleasure in life is doing what people say you cannot do.
机会与准备
Abraham Lincoln
I will prepare and some day my chance will come.
信心与事实
Henry Ford
Whether you think you can or think you cant -- you are right.
English Proverb
Where theres a will theres a way.
There is no failure excepting no longer trying.
Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.
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篇11:雅思考试
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+ 加入清单Dont confuse a university degree with a successful life, even though higher education canopen doors to a range of economic options. It is one thing to make a good living, and yet it isquite another to make a good fortune. In various aspects of life, success is to be measurednot so much by the education that one has as by the effort that one makes, plus of course lotsof luck.
Undoubtedly, there are some types of success in professional life that are dependent on auniversity education. You need a college degree to have a career in a profession such as law,medicine, engineering, or teaching. In todays workplace, job opportunities and academicdegrees are linked in such a way that it seems difficult, if not impossible, for an individualwithout good qualifications to make any career success happen. According to national statisticsshown by economists, bachelors degree holders earn upward of 40 percent more than high-school graduates. Based on this pattern, income levels rise as educational levels rise. Manystudies also reveal that university education introduces you not only choices of career but alsolife goals and the power to reach these goals. In short, being able to go through highereducation increases ones employability and earning potential as well as ones self-esteem.
Having a degree, however, does not mean that one will be successful in life. In some work fields,what is crucial are hard work and being lucky. To begin with, you do not have to have a highereducation to become successful people like business-persons, sports players, political leaders,movie and music stars. While hard work is motivated by the desire to triumph, success bydestiny is associated with that old ABC--ability, breaks and courage. Not all success stories aretold about university graduates, nor are academic degrees particularly essential when it comesto becoming wealthy. Ironic but true, successful entrepreneurs even benefit from not havingacademic qualifications, because going to college and taking examinations forces people tolearn and think like other millions of graduates. This actually makes it less likely that they willcome up with creative ideas and truly mould-breaking insights on which amazing successes arebuilt.
There is no arguing the importance of a university education as long as employability andincome are concerned, but success also comes from effort to do the right work at the righttime. If you think a successful life means having a lot of money, you are far from wrong.Nevertheless, it does not follow that the door to success is closed for people who do not haveacademic results.
篇12:雅思考试作文复习经验
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+ 加入清单1,个人认为一本好的IELTS写作书对提高写作很有帮助。所谓读书破万卷,下笔如有神就是这个道理。推荐新东方的IELTS写作,里面大作文都是非常不错的范文,多读并且与自己所写文章进行比较,进而改善。不是很推荐大量写作,那不过是在练习写作速度而已,对要想拿到7分乃至8分的帮助不大。我当时每周只写一篇文章,但是因为每次写完后都能认真总结,并将理解应用到下次作文中,所以后4篇文章的写作质量上每一次的飞跃都曾令自己也惊讶。
2,要能够区别formal写作和informal写作的差别在哪里。大家都只到这主要体现在2方面,语法和词汇。譬如语法中被动语态被认为是formal写作里非常重要一种表达方式,那么用it is considered that 要明显比people all believe that更使语言提高档次。而词汇的formal使用也很重要,比如用complete不用finish,用occur不用happen等等。
3,文章要显示出严密的逻辑性,这不仅包括所谓banlance自己的观点,也只要把话说到位,就是言之必尽。banlance自己的观点就是在文中要从事物的两方面来说,至于是平衡还是有侧重的来说要根据文章题目的要求来进行阐述。而具体到段落里就是在承认一方面的同时又要说明另一方面会带来什么效果,说白了就是不能让人尽量少留给予对方反驳的机会。这点很多同学都在英文写作中作不到,在大家的想法中能阐明自己的观点已经不易了,疏不知这正是文章能否拿到7分的关键。话要说尽也就是这个道理,要让自己说的每一句话都能明确的证明自己的主题,而不仅仅是只和主题相关。
4,词汇和语法结构的复杂多变。曾经我们称赞冰心用词的多变,数千言没有重复的词汇,英语其实也是如此。比如basic,radical,fundamental,如果翻译成中文意思其实差不多,但其实还是有不同,那么一篇文章中如果同时准确的用到了这三个词汇,那么给考官的感觉肯定是不同凡响的。而语法结构的复杂不只是体现在句子长上,重要的体现出多变。比如为了加长句子我们可能总是说people who care。其实换成people caring 。不过少了一个词,但却是展示了另一种高层次的语法。(口语里比较多见,但不是说informal)其实字数我从来不认为是一种达到7分的障隘。
就写这些吧,都是一些心得,说的比较空泛。我是不背例句啊什么的,所以我考完后朋友让我重新把自己文章写出来时我只能说是按照题目和思路完全重新写了一篇。我觉得IELTS写作考的是到底对英语掌握到什么程度,没有一定的词汇量,语法基础和清晰的写作思路是不可能拿到7或者8分的,即使有再好的技巧。所以奉劝各位还是脚踏实地多加强自己对句子和词汇的掌握,而不要浪费到不停的写文章上。
篇13:雅思考试作文检查重点
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+ 加入清单1.是否使用了正确的语法结构,比方说,动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确、词性(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、名词单复数、冠词错误和介词错误。
2.句式是否有变化 (如各种从句的使用、分词结构等 )
3.使用了一定的词汇量 ( 如用同义词或词组来避免过多的重复)
4.标点、拼写没有错误。
5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想,所有扩展句都紧扣主题。
6.使用了过渡性词语,因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。
7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。
8.提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。
9.明确的观点。
10.每一段话都紧扣文章的主题。
1、3、4、6为考试时检查的重点,最先检查首段,和每段的首末句。
除了最为基本的单词,语法,句型变化外,我们还需要注意文章本身的逻辑性以及完整性,最后小编祝大家都能考出好成绩。
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篇14:期中考试总结主题班会
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+ 加入清单活动目的:
通过这次班会使学生明白取得好成绩不是一件轻而易举的事。每个学生在求学时代都面临着两大学习任务:既要学习许多新的知识,又要学会获得新知识的方法。前者是学习的内容,后者是学习的能力。一个人掌握的知识毕竟是有限的,而且还容易遗忘,相对于知识而言,能力则是永久的,它能给学生带来终生的益处——离开了学校,他们仍然可凭借这种能力继续获得知识。
活动重点:
1.提高学生的思想认识——优秀的学生不可骄傲,中等的学生不可迟疑、松懈,落后的学生不可气馁、灰心。坚信“一分耕耘,一分收获”。
2.传授各科行之有效、事半功倍的学习方法。
活动过程:
一、导言:
同学们,初一下学期期中测试已经结束,成绩已揭晓,有的同学取得很大进步,有的同学停止不前,有的同学略有退步,有的同学退步很大。一样的试卷,一样的教师,一样的上学,一样的教室,为什么所取的成绩却参差不齐呢?导致成绩下降的原因很多——基础知识底子薄、学习习惯不好、学习态度不端正、学习方法不得当等。失败并不可怕,只要我们善于分析和总结,最终就会取得成功。今天,我们班会的主题就是要研究探讨解决这个问题的方法,我们先请这次考的好的同学介绍他们的学习方法,以达到提高学习效率之目的。
二、过程:请同学介绍各自的学习方法和学习小窍门。
陈婉欣:(语文课代表)课本是一课之本,哪一门课的学习都应首先抓住课本,学习语文课本最有效的方法莫过于认真预习、认真听讲、认真记笔记、认真复习这四个“认真”。另外,课外阅读和写作也很重要,课外书籍无论是中外名著、文学小说还是诗歌散文,多去阅读既可以帮助自己更好的理解课内所有知识,又可以提高阅读水平和写作能力。此外,还要做一些语言分析基础知识的训练,只有多记多练,才能达到熟练的境界。写作方面,可以每天记日记,多练笔,这样时间久了就会培养出兴趣和灵感。总而言之,只要多读多背,端正态度,肯努力肯吃苦,学习语文不是难事,而是乐事。
王可:(数学课代表)学习数学要背定义定理和多做题目。背定义定理不提倡死记硬背,记住它们要建立在对其有深刻认识的基础上,要了解它表达的数学规律,它的应用范围。背完后,要做一定的题目辅助记忆。做同一题型的题目不应多,而应题型广泛。题目要循序渐进,从基础题到开放性试题都要有所了解。在平常的学习中,要时常总结题型、解题方法和易错点,这些总结会成为复习的第一手材料,对应试有很大帮助。
关湘南:(英语课代表)英语没有懂和不懂之分,只有学过和没学过之别,只有会和不会之说,目前我们在英语课上的目标就是,所有学过和讲过的单词、句子和语法要会;语法知识只要了解就可以了,不需要深入研究,更不能钻牛角尖;英语是一门可感知的学科,它是活动的,是有生命的,是无法固定的;学习英语,要进行大量的实践,就是多听、多说、多读、多写、多练。最后总结一下,学好英语,自信是关键,方法是基础,坚持是保证。
王艺儒:(地理课代表)地理学习起来并非难事。地理是一门非常实用的科学,要学好它首要培养兴趣。如果你没有兴趣,可以从生活的一点一滴开始,培养兴趣。兴趣是要学好地理的基础,但要学好它关键还是要做到以下几点:1、做好课前的预习工作,2、上课是认真听讲,认真做好笔记,3、认真做好复习工作,注意总结。
油晓晨:政治是需要背的,但不应死记硬背,而应该在理解的基础上去熟记这些知识,使它们成为自己分析问题,解决问题的方式方法。对于解决一些实际问题,则应该注重老师上课时反复强调的解题技巧。除了书本上的知识外,平时还要了解时事政治。学习政治千万不可偷懒,我们应做到“节节清”、“课课清”、“天天清”、“周周清”、“月月清”,做到今日事今日毕,不可明日复明日,这样在考试前夕,就不会手足无措地去背政治了,只要在考试的前几天把所学的内容大略复习一启遍,就可以了。主持人:六位课代表的发言,使我们受益匪浅。让我们吸取他们先进的学习方法,改进自己的方法。下面我们来请成绩有所退步的学生来谈谈感受和决心吧。
王海成:期中考过后,本来成绩不佳的我,又退步了,一时之间我不知如何是好了,今天的班会课对我的启示很大,课代表的学习经验之谈,使我找到了新的航标,找到了和优秀生的差距。比如政治来说吧!我没做到课代表所说的“课课清、“节节清”、“日日清”、“周周清”、“月月清”,而我却每次都临时抱佛脚,所以导致政治考试成绩不理想。还有大部分的课代表要求课前预习,课后复习。可
我呢?大多做不到。由此看来,成绩差并不是头脑不灵活所造成,而是应做的事没有做好。说明我有能力,只要我努力,我能行。
最后,请几位同学谈一谈如何做好学习的几个重要环节。
王晓倩:要想学好一门功课,光学一遍是不行的,只凭上课听讲是远远不够的。若能把学习的内容事先预习一遍,到听讲时就等于是第二遍了,这样,可以对老师讲述的内容加深印象。经过预习可以知道难点所在,听讲时就更有针对性。
刘辉:我讲的是听课。苏联教育家赞可夫说:“教师和学生在课堂上的交流,跟人们相互之间进行说话有类似的地方。”因此,成功的听课,要在听课的同时,与粮食进行思想对话,即上课时学生要在思想上做好一种向老师提问的准备:老师在这节课里到底要讲一个什么主题?这是什么性质的问题?从而使自己的注意力高度集中。
刘婷:我说的是笔记。听讲时记一点笔记,有助于理解和复习课堂上的教学内容。但要注意,记笔记不是目的,目的还是理解内容。那种追求笔记的完整,在形式上过多地下功夫的倾向是不足取的。怎样记笔记?这要看老师的教学风格和自己的学习习惯。具体地说,书本上有的内容可以少记,没有的内容要多记。笔记不要去照录老师的原话,而要反映出内容的关键。记与听发生矛盾怎么办?宁肯牺牲笔记,也要力求听懂。
三、班主任总结。
同学们,今天的班会开得很好,发言的同学理论联系实践介绍了自己的学习经验。这些经验对同学们今后的学习有一定的帮助和指导作用。科学文化日新月异,同学们务必善于借鉴,善于总结,善于创新,不断总结出更好的学习方法,以优异的成绩报效祖国。
篇15:雅思考试作文常用单词整理:形容词副词
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+ 加入清单absurd 荒唐的
addictive 上瘾的
affectionate 有感情的
aggressive 有上进心的
alert 敏锐的;警惕的
arduous 费劲的
artistic 艺术的
authoritative 权威性的
awkward 尴尬的
balanced 平衡的
cogent 使人信服的
cold-blooded 冷血的
cold-hearted 无情的
compassionate 富有同情心的
compatible 兼容的
complicated 复杂的
confident 自信的
contemptible 可鄙的
contributive 有贡献的
corrupt 腐坏的
delicious 美味可口的
demanding 要求高的
describle 值得要的
detrimental 有害的
devious 偏离正道的
dishonorable 不光彩的
disturbed 受到干扰的
eccentric 古怪的
economical 经济的
enlightened 开明的;文明的
evil 邪恶的
exotic 异国的
fallacious 荒谬的
篇16:名师的另类解读雅思考试作文的失分点
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+ 加入清单一般来说,雅思大作文的模式可以分为三种:单边支持型、双边型以及分析解决型。2009年大作文的题目总体来说也在此范围内,但还是出现了极个别的绝杀题,让不少烤鸭一片迷茫。
People think that a hundred years ago,the human race was steadily improving inevery area of life.Nowadays,there is no cer-tainty of this case.In which areas do youthink we have made important progressnowadays?In which areas do you think westill need tomake progress?
出自2009年5月21日雅思考题
这个题目咋一看似乎应该用双边型结构来写,但仔细阅读这道题目,大家可以发现其实它没有所谓的两边,也并非分析解决型的题目,而是要在主体段论述中回答题目的2个问题。那么我们该如何安排主体段的结构和段落数量呢?
对此,上海培训中心诸瑞琪老师的建议是,遇到有2个问句的题目,主体段写三段比较合理。而在这三段里,用两段来回答第一个问题,再用剩下一段回答第2个问题。
从篇幅来讲,第三段的长度需大于前2段每段的长度。从写作思路来讲,第一个问题要你罗列一些人类取得重要进步的领域,这个其实不难,生活中有很多例子,比如电话、汽车、飞机、电脑等,从大方向上来说还有金融、经济等。只要考生能够将这些具体的例子提升一下层面,就变成了通讯、交通等问题。这样一来,每段的主题就都已经呼之欲出了。
篇17:英语雅思考试作文经典句子
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+ 加入清单雅思写作有规律可循,掌握一些有用的句型,对你的写作必然是有百益而无害的,下面是小编整理的相关内容,希望对你有帮助。
1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking。
依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework。
最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet。
没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation。
人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation。
越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。
6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study。
说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。
7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness。
许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。
8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism。
应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。
9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution。
越来越多的专家相信移民(微博)对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,像犯罪和卖淫。
10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers。
许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。
11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it。
无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。
12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement。
一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。
13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy。
一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。
14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price。
任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。
15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus。
当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。
16. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse。
考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。
17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets。
大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure。
无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。
19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place。
尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。
20. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life。
篇18:雅思考试议论文思路扩展方法
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+ 加入清单议论文,作为雅思写作中举足轻重的一部分,锻炼的是烤鸭们在遇到一个受人关注的话题时说理和自圆其说的能力,它培养的不仅是考生在应试时的临场反应能力,更是将来在国外生存时完成essay以及与他人沟通和交谈的能力。因此在雅思写作考试中,议论文占了将近三分之二的分值。
雅思官方对该篇作文的字数要求为不少于250字,此要求和国外留学时所需要的1000字起步的essay相比虽存在差距,但已经使许多考生头疼不已。为什么如此多的中国考生在写作过程中存在字数不达标和无话可说的情况,归根结底是由于对议论文思路扩展的那些重要切入点不够了解,没有掌握说理时的方法和技巧。下面专家将对论文思路扩展方法一一分析。
一、因果推理法
所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:
(一)一味重复主题,空洞解释。
此类段落不论字数多少,都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多,但仔细体会永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。
(二)论述浮于表面,不达根源。
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
二、举例法
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做:Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法(exemplification)。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非,然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
(一)局限于自己或朋友的例子。
此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力,由于第一人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白,个人不代表整体。
例:I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.
这样的例子让人犹如在看记叙文,和议论文很不搭调。
(二)引用过多数据。
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
(三)中国式的例子。
一个国家同样难代表世界。雅思是international的考试,不应将范围框的太局限。此外考官来自各个国家,过分使用一个国家的例子会引起他们的反感。
例:Many children in China like to play computer games for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.
只需小小改动便可成为成功范例。
举例是为了更加形象地叙述事情。朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们要注意以下原则:
(一)要来源于生活,要具有生动的论述效果。
不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
(二)要客观表达。
虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式:
for example,/for instance,(后加句子)
Such as/ like (后加词组)
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。
1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。
改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)
2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。
改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)
3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。
改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。
“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe
【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood) throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.
篇19:篇雅思考试写作范文:独自学习
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+ 加入清单Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience.
Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable?
Model Answer:
From my everyday experience and observation I can stand that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. However, some people think that it is wiser to learn about life through listening to the advice of family and friends. It does not mean I totally disagree with this way of learning. Moreover, I think that it is wise for a person to take an intermediate position because each of these ways has its own advantages. Bellow I will give my reasons to support my point of view.
From the one side, learning through ones personal experience brings many benefits. First of all, scientists say that personal experience has greater impact on a person. I have to agree with this. Take for example children. They will not believe their parents that something can hurt them until they try it and make sure in it. Furthermore, most likely they will remember this experience longer. Second of all, people learn how to analyze their mistakes, make conclusions and next time try to avoid them. So, I think it is a great experience that makes people stronger, more self-confident and persistent. They gain more knowledge and experience that will be very helpful and valuable in the future.
From the other side, listening to the advice of family and friends brings many benefits too. Parents with great patience pass down their knowledge and experience to their children. They teach them all they know and they want their children do not make the same mistakes. In addition to those practical benefits, learning from someones advice is painless. For example, parents nowadays very often talk to their children about drugs. I think it is a great example when one should not try drugs in order to gain new experience. I think it is a case when children must trust their parents.
To sum up, I think it is wise to combine both of these ways to learn and try to analyze personal mistakes as well as not personal. I think together they can greatly simplify ones life and make the way to success shorter.
篇20:语文期中考试后反思与总结100字
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+ 加入清单随着期中考试的结束,答疑网小编推荐语文期中考试后反思与总结100字供大家查看,祝各位考生金榜题名!
令人紧张的语文考试结束了,考试的失败与成功还是一个未解之谜,可是,当考完最后一门功课时,老师简短的几句话却成了我们心情的晴天霹雳,使一下子松弛下来的我们像打了霜的茄子——蔫儿了!
今年的期中考试题非常简单,但老师说过:“考试题越简单越是会错题连篇。”因此,我们都不敢轻视这次考试。但是,最终简单的考试题把我们征服了,使快速答完题的我们闲下来,并且认为:“这么简单的考试题,一定不会错误百出”有了这个念头,我们便不去仔细检查,而是飞快的游览着卷面,任凭让错题在那里摆着,即使特别显眼,我们也无法发现它,更不会去将它们改一下,就这样我们交了卷儿,考后家长问:“考得怎么样?”我们一律回答说:“可以的。”
可是,老师给我们判卷,告诉我们卷子的阅读的二、六、七八题丢分儿丢得很多,这下我心里也没底了,因为我平时老也写错字,而且还有一个给“高”字加部首组成新字的题不会,平时还不注意留心这种类型题,使这次考试造成了无法弥补的失误!
唉!考试已经过去,考试的过失也无法弥补了,只能今后注意、并改正。以后,我会认认真真地做题,做完题后也要仔仔细细地反复检查。我要多积累错题,分析错题原因,对比正确答案,使我更好掌握丰富的语文基础知识,活学活用。
考试题是多变的,我们不但要积累,还要灵活运用,这样我们才能对考试应对自如!