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1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。
2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...
3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。
4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...
5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了...
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。
7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...
8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何...
9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解...
10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论...
11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...
12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...
13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...
14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。
15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...
16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了...
17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。
18.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。
19.this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图,描述了...
20.as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of... 如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。
21.over the period from...to...the...remained level. 在...至...期间,...基本不变。
22.in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...
23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998... 1995年至1998三年里...
24.from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...
25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。
26.the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...
27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and... ...至...期间...的比率维持不变。
28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year) ...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点,为...
29.the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...
30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of... ...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。
31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and... ...与...的区别不大。
32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of... 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。
33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily. ...逐年减少,而...逐步上升。
34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%]. ...的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点,为...百分点。 35.the figures/situation bottomed out in... 数字(情况)在...达到底部。
36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。
37.a is ...times as much/many as b. a是b的...倍。
38.a increased by... a增长了...
39.a increased to... a增长到...
40.high/low/great/small/ percentage. 比低高(低)
41.there is an upward trend in the number of... ...数字呈上升趋势。
42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to... ...到...发生急剧上升。
43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down. 从...到...,下降速率减慢。
44.from this year on,there was a gradual decline/reduction in the...,reaching a figure of... 从这年起,...逐渐下降至...
45.be similar to... 与...相似
46.be the same as... 与...相同
47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and... ...与...之间有许多相似(不同)之处
48.a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。
49.the difference between a and b lies in... a与b之间的差别在于...
50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in... ...年...急剧上升。
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篇1:雅思写作雅思考试秘笈作文
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+ 加入清单作文中常用句套:
下文中出现的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),
要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换.
开头:
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of ...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
... but that is only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is ...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
举普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事
(先说故事主体),this story is not rare.
..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for ...
Why .... , for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obiviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
进行对比:
The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...
Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...
承上启下:
To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...
A study of ... will make this point clear
让步:
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
结尾:
>From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw
the conclusion that ...
In summary, it is wiser ...
In short...
在作文中引用合适的名言警句,会给你的文章增色许多。这里收集了我本人喜爱的一些名言,可能会对你有用。我们使用引用的位置可以在开头结尾或正文段落中,
常见的使用形式如下:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
Useful quotations
逆境
by Robert Collier
In every adversity there lies the seed of an equivalent advantage. In every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory next time.
努力与成功
by Ann Landers
Opportunities are usually disguised as hard work, so most people dont recognize them.
坚持
by Ralph Waldo Emerson
No one can cheat you out of ultimate success but yourselves.
Confucius 孔子
Our greatest glory is not in never falling...
but in rising every time we fall.
坚持
Mother Teresa
To keep a lamp burning we have to keep putting oil in it.
Henry Ford
Nothing is particularly hard if you divide it inuo small jobs.
Winston Churchill
Never, never, never, never give up.
Albert Einstein
In uhe middle of difficulty lies opportunity.
努力与成功
by Crassus
Those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly.
Thomas Edison
There is no substitute for hard work.
Leo Tolstoi
The strongest of all warriors are these two- Time and Patience.
Thomas Jefferson
Im a great believer in luck,
and I find the harder I work...
the more I have of it.
Robert Collier
Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.
Ray A. Croc
Luck is a dividend of sweat. The more you sweat, the luckier you get.
实际经验与间接经验
Youll learn more about a road by traveling it...
than by consulting all the maps in the world.
动机与结果
Vince Lombardi
Winning isnt everything...
but wanting to win is.
John F. Kennedy
We choose to go!to the moon and other things , oot because they are easy, but because they are hard.
Thucydides
The strong do what they will.
The weak do what they must.
为人态度:
John Wooden
Talent is God given--Be Humble.
Fame is man given-- Be Thankful.
Conceit is self given --Be Careful.
行动:
Theodore Roosevelt
Do what you can , with what you have , with where you are.
Publilius Syrus Maxim
No one knows what he can do till he tries.
Terence
There is nothing so easy but that i
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t becomes difficult when you do it reluctantly.
Thomas Fuller
A wise man turns chance into good fortune.
William Hazlitt
Prosperity is a great teacher;
adversity is a greater.
William Penn
No pains, no palm;
no thorns, no throne;
no gall , no glory;
no cross, no crown.
Will Rogers
Even if youre on the right track, youll get run over... if you just sit there.
Opportunity rarely knocks on your door.
Knock rather on opportunitys door if you ardently wish to enter.
成功与失败
Vince Lombardi
Its not whether you get knocked down.
...Its whether you get up again.
Winston Churchill
An optimist sees an opportunity in every calamity;
a pessimist sees a calamity in every opportunity.
热情(年轻/年老)
Ralph Waldo Emerson
Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.
信心
James Allen
The will to do springs from the knowledge that we can do.
Samuel Johnson
Few things are impossible to diligence and skill.
Aughey
Lost time is never found again.
Voltaire
No problem can stand the assault of sustained thinking.
Napoleon
Victory belongs to the most persevering.
细心
Euipides
Leave no stone unturned.
计划与工作
Norman Vincent Peale
Plan your work for today and every day;
then work your plan.
Henry Ford
Failure is only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.
Thomas Edison
I start where the last man left off.
理想与现实
What the mind of man can conceive and believe,
the mind of a man can achieve.
勤奋
Benjamin Franklin
Plough deep while sluggards sleep.
目标
Henry David Thoreau
In the lone run men hit only what they aim at.
幸运
Emily Dickinson
Luck is not chance...
Its toil...
Fortunes expensive smile is earned.
勤奋
Thomas Edison
Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.
Useful Quotations
想象力
Albert Einstein
Imagination is more important than knowledge.
挑战:
Walter Begehot
The great pleasure in life is doing what people say you cannot do.
机会与准备
Abraham Lincoln
I will prepare and some day my chance will come.
信心与事实
Henry Ford
Whether you think you can or think you cant -- you are right.
English Proverb
Where theres a will theres a way.
There is no failure excepting no longer trying.
Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.
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篇2:雅思写作模板介绍雅思考试大作文用词和句法的技巧
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+ 加入清单本文来自雅思作文网《介绍雅思考试大作文的用词和句法技巧》。 西方人有一句话说:Your boss has a big vocabulary than you have,that is one good reason why your boss is your boss. 这句话翻译过来就是说:你老板的词汇量比你大,这是他之所以是你老板的一个很好原因。可见词汇量大不但对一个人的工作起着决定性作用,而且也是获得雅思写作高分最有力的武器之一。
(一)词汇运用的层次
通过对雅思写作评分标准,官方范文以及考生所写的文章的分析,考生在用词方面可以分为以下几个层次:
1. 正确(Correct):表达你想表达的意思,对于同一个意思可能有好几个词,那么同义词基本上都是正确的。
2. 合适(Appropriate):在不同语境下要使用不同的词,比如在肯定的语义中要用褒义词,而在否定的语义中要使用贬义词。
3. 精确(Exact):要联系上下文,尽可能用词到位,因为有些词是不够精确的。比如: allocate part of the fiscal revenue,allocate是分配,不能用divide来替换。
4. 灵活(Smart):英语本身就有很多约定俗成的表达方法,用我们的话来说,就是有很多潜规则。因此,我们要注意培养地道英语表达,还要注意词汇的固定搭配。
(二)词汇的变换技巧
在写作评分标准里有明确的关于词汇的标准: Lexical Resource: 词汇资源。它考察词汇的运用是否多样恰当且准确。词汇的多少并不能决定文章的好坏,但用词精确性是可以加分的。一般来说,词汇的准确表达可以通过两个方面达到,一是在用词的难度上拔高,二是在近义词的多种表达上提升。值得提醒的是,不要过分堆积华丽的,会给考官留下华而不实的感觉。
1. 使用同义词进行替换
使用同义词的好处在于首先可以向考官展示考生词汇量的丰富,其次也可以使文章富有变化。因此,同义词的运用是衡量考生英语水平的一个很有力的标准,考官认同你的同时,自然也会给你高分。请看下面的例子:
School teachers used to be the source of information. However,some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because there is an increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion? (08年4月24日考题)
2. 使用各种形式的同根词进行替换
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英语里面有很多同根词,通过单词的变换来吸引阅卷者眼球并获得高分是一个很好的办法。一些单词通过添加前缀或者后缀的方式可以衍生出很多新的词汇。而使用这些词汇可以避免重复原文当中的词条,也可以向阅卷者展示你变化词汇的技巧。
比如写作中我们经常会用到“知道”这个概念,我们可以用know这个词以及它的其他形式和它们的同义词来表示“知道”这个意思。
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篇3:雅思考试A类小作文解题策略
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+ 加入清单在雅思考试A类小作文的四大基本图形(即曲线图、柱形图、饼图和表格图)中,表格图往往是广大考生所最头疼的图形了,很大一部分考生会碰到以下状况,比如表格看懂了,但是因为数据繁多而且凌乱,一时半会儿找不出很明显的特征,不知从何下手;或是找到了很多特征,但是不知道用什么样的顺序、结构和衔接方式把这些特征条理清晰地传达出来;又或是大体清楚该写什么,怎么写,但是在具体写的时候,老是丢三落四的,把一些信息给遗漏掉了等等。这时,考生所面临的主要不是语言方面的问题,而是写作步骤和写作思路方面的问题,也就是不知道应该用什么样的步骤和思路把表格图中那些看似复杂无序的数据自然而且毫不遗漏地贯穿起来。本文中,专家将主要就表格图的写作步骤及其写作思路展开探讨。
The table below lists the number of nights of occupancy of hotel rooms in Australia during the peak month of September in the years 2000 and 2001 and the difference expressed in percentage.
首先,拿到考题以后,快速浏览题目中的文字信息,即The table below lists the number of nights occupancy of hotel rooms in Australia during the peak month of September in the years 2000 and 2001 and difference expressed in percentage,重点关注研究对象(nights occupancy)、数据类型(number and percentage)和时间(2000 and 2001)这三大要素,明确在主体段的写作中要注意数据类型的变化和时态一致问题。
其次,看题目中的表格图形,看图形时也要先看文字说明,包括标题、标注和单位,弄懂数据所代表的信息,而非数据本身。一般情况下,表格图中的文字说明还是比较容易识别的,就如同曲线图中的横纵轴一样。上图中横向的代表不同的时间,纵向则代表不同的地区。但是通常表格的最后一列和最后一行要特别注意,有可能是数据的叠加、平均或者对比,这张图也是如此,最后一列代表不同时间之间的变化趋势及幅度,最后一行则是数据和变化的总结,曾经就有比较粗心的同学,出现了“Australia Total”的数量最多的笑话。同时,标题下方的单位(in thousand)和change前面的%千万不能遗漏,不然后面写的数据都是不准确的。
然后,筛选信息,圈关键数据。表格图写作不是记流水帐,需要面面俱到,但是关键数据可是一个都不能少的。为了防止遗漏,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生可以在看题的过程中把这些数据都圈出来,通常包括总数、极值、突变值等等,就上图而言,以下数据必不可少:总数(2000年3562.6、2001年3476.0),总变化(2.4),极值(2000年最大1299.9,最小71.2;2001年最大1135.8,最小70.9;变化增长最多21.8,减少最多12.6),一共9个数据可视为必要数据,在文章中必须要提及,至于其他数据就可写可不写了。
再则,整理写作思路,也就是写作顺序。作为总数、平均数或者对比数据,通常放在文章开头总起或者结尾总结,所以这些数据可以先不考虑。剩余的数据,则只有两种写作顺序,横着写或者竖着写,肯定不可能斜线写的。在上图中,横着写,就是对比相同地区在2000年和2001年不同年份之间的数据,其实也就是最后一列变化情况比例或者说趋势;竖着写,就是对比不同地区在2000年或2001年同一年份中的数据。此图中由于既出现了类别(地区),又出现了时间,所以既要横着写,也要竖着写。若是只有类别比较或者只有时间比较,那么横写竖写选其一即可。
最后,就是落笔成文了,运用平时积累和归纳的词汇句型以及连接手段,把必要数据和关系对比,遵循刚才整理清楚的写作思路,有机地串连起来,形成文字即可。时间允许的话,还可以进行快速的检查,看看有无数据遗漏、时态疏忽、单词误拼等小问题。
总之,表格图并没有想象中的那么难,了解图形特点,掌握解题策略,积累表达手段,辅以3-5篇的练习,一篇出色的表格图作文是完全有可能出自你的笔下的,因此“临渊羡鱼,不如退而结网”,现在就开始行动吧!
篇4:雅思考试写作作文论点:文化和道德
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+ 加入清单文化和道德本来就是雅思大作文中较难的两个话题,而近来这两个话题考的频率又很高。考生不防也从这两个角度来准备一下主体段落的观点。
反对强势文化入侵:
Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.
该不该撒谎:
The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on ones personality.
总之,在大作文的主体段落写作过程中,考生可以将以上的思路结合题目的特点综合应用,切忌生搬硬套。平时在读文章时也要多总结别人的观点角度,而后为我所用。这样定能让你逐渐形成西方的思维习惯,在考试中能才思泉涌,下笔有神。
以上就是雅思为大家整理的雅思写作论点分析:文化和道德,非常实用。更多资讯、资料尽在雅思。最后,雅思预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!
篇5:雅思考试学术类图表作文分析
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+ 加入清单考试学术类图表作文要求考生观察一幅图表并用自己的语言呈现出图表中的信息。而对图表的描述旨在考查考生组织、表达及比较分析图表中各种数据,描述过程中的步骤,阐明事物工作原理等的能力。但就09年上半年以及历年的考试情况来看,通过柱、线、饼、表四种常规图表及其组合,考查得最多的还是考生的第一种能力。描述过程步骤的流程图,阐明事物工作原理的示意图等题一直也会有所涉及,但比例甚低。这类题在今天上半年出现了三次。这一考查趋势和比例预计仍将在2009年下半年延续下去。
线形图单独考查的比例依旧不会很大,也较可能出现在综合图表的考查中,且多会是多条曲线并存,因为它对趋势变化的表现形式相对单一和具体,比较好入手。但它也是唯一一种始终有时间变化(即纵比)的图形,所以对考生来说,线形图的操练是对纵比的趋势等描述的非常基础和重要的练习,词汇和相关表达都能从中得到很好的积累。如果能很好的掌握线形图中的纵比描写,那么在其他图表中出现纵比的情况下,写作起来也会显得游刃有余,且能较好的把握顺序性。
e.g. The line graph illustrates the world demand of five energy sources from 1970 to 2030.
(2009.06.20)这个曲线图描写的主要思路是按时间顺序分别描写在这段时间中的纵向变化情况。但千万注意,此题的题目中提到的时间涉及过去与将来,所以分段的依据应以此为基础,分两段来分别描述过去以及预测的量的变化,再穿插五种能源量的一个横向比较。大家可以参考剑桥上关于三个国家老年人人口的变化的那幅图。
篇6:英语雅思考试作文经典句子
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+ 加入清单雅思写作有规律可循,掌握一些有用的句型,对你的写作必然是有百益而无害的,下面是小编整理的相关内容,希望对你有帮助。
1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking。
依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework。
最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet。
没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation。
人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation。
越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。
6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study。
说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。
7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness。
许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。
8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism。
应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。
9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution。
越来越多的专家相信移民(微博)对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,像犯罪和卖淫。
10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers。
许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。
11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it。
无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。
12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement。
一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。
13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy。
一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。
14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price。
任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。
15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus。
当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。
16. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse。
考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。
17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets。
大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure。
无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。
19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place。
尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。
20. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life。
篇7:篇雅思考试写作范文:独自学习
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+ 加入清单Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience.
Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable?
Model Answer:
From my everyday experience and observation I can stand that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. However, some people think that it is wiser to learn about life through listening to the advice of family and friends. It does not mean I totally disagree with this way of learning. Moreover, I think that it is wise for a person to take an intermediate position because each of these ways has its own advantages. Bellow I will give my reasons to support my point of view.
From the one side, learning through ones personal experience brings many benefits. First of all, scientists say that personal experience has greater impact on a person. I have to agree with this. Take for example children. They will not believe their parents that something can hurt them until they try it and make sure in it. Furthermore, most likely they will remember this experience longer. Second of all, people learn how to analyze their mistakes, make conclusions and next time try to avoid them. So, I think it is a great experience that makes people stronger, more self-confident and persistent. They gain more knowledge and experience that will be very helpful and valuable in the future.
From the other side, listening to the advice of family and friends brings many benefits too. Parents with great patience pass down their knowledge and experience to their children. They teach them all they know and they want their children do not make the same mistakes. In addition to those practical benefits, learning from someones advice is painless. For example, parents nowadays very often talk to their children about drugs. I think it is a great example when one should not try drugs in order to gain new experience. I think it is a case when children must trust their parents.
To sum up, I think it is wise to combine both of these ways to learn and try to analyze personal mistakes as well as not personal. I think together they can greatly simplify ones life and make the way to success shorter.
篇8:2024年雅思考试写作基础
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+ 加入清单1.先进的科学技术advanced science and technology.
2.经济的快速发展the rapid development of economy
3.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard .
4.面临新的机遇和挑战be faced with new opportunities and challenges.
5.人们普遍认为It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6.社会发展的必然结果the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention.
8.不可否认It is undeniable that…/There is no denying that …
9.热烈的讨论/争论a heated discussion/ debate
10.有争议性的问题a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点a totally different argument
12.一些人…而另外一些人… Some people… while others…
13.就我而言/就个人而言As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14.就…达到绝对的一致reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用play an increasingly important role in …
18.对…必不可少be indispensable to …
19.正如谚语所说As the proverb goes:
20.…也不例外…be no exception
21.对…产生有利/不利的影响exert positive/ negative effects on …
22.利远远大于弊the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
23.导致,引起lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感/成就感sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26.竞争与合作精神sense of competition and cooperation
27.开阔眼界widen ones horizon/ broaden ones vision
28.学习知识和技能acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素take many factors into account/ consideration
31.从另一个角度from another perspective
32.做出共同努力make joint efforts
33.对…有益be beneficial / conducive to…
34.为社会做贡献make contributions to the society
35.打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for…
36.综合素质comprehensive quality
37.无可非议blameless / beyond reproach /above (或beyond) reproach
39.致力于/投身于be committed / devoted to…
40.应当承认Admittedly
篇9:雅思考试作文检查重点
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+ 加入清单1.是否使用了正确的语法结构,比方说,动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确、词性(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、名词单复数、冠词错误和介词错误。
2.句式是否有变化 (如各种从句的使用、分词结构等 )
3.使用了一定的词汇量 ( 如用同义词或词组来避免过多的重复)
4.标点、拼写没有错误。
5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想,所有扩展句都紧扣主题。
6.使用了过渡性词语,因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。
7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。
8.提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。
9.明确的观点。
10.每一段话都紧扣文章的主题。
1、3、4、6为考试时检查的重点,最先检查首段,和每段的首末句。
除了最为基本的单词,语法,句型变化外,我们还需要注意文章本身的逻辑性以及完整性,最后小编祝大家都能考出好成绩。
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篇10:雅思考试议论文思路扩展方法
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+ 加入清单议论文,作为雅思写作中举足轻重的一部分,锻炼的是烤鸭们在遇到一个受人关注的话题时说理和自圆其说的能力,它培养的不仅是考生在应试时的临场反应能力,更是将来在国外生存时完成essay以及与他人沟通和交谈的能力。因此在雅思写作考试中,议论文占了将近三分之二的分值。
雅思官方对该篇作文的字数要求为不少于250字,此要求和国外留学时所需要的1000字起步的essay相比虽存在差距,但已经使许多考生头疼不已。为什么如此多的中国考生在写作过程中存在字数不达标和无话可说的情况,归根结底是由于对议论文思路扩展的那些重要切入点不够了解,没有掌握说理时的方法和技巧。下面专家将对论文思路扩展方法一一分析。
一、因果推理法
所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:
(一)一味重复主题,空洞解释。
此类段落不论字数多少,都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多,但仔细体会永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。
(二)论述浮于表面,不达根源。
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
二、举例法
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做:Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法(exemplification)。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非,然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
(一)局限于自己或朋友的例子。
此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力,由于第一人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白,个人不代表整体。
例:I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.
这样的例子让人犹如在看记叙文,和议论文很不搭调。
(二)引用过多数据。
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
(三)中国式的例子。
一个国家同样难代表世界。雅思是international的考试,不应将范围框的太局限。此外考官来自各个国家,过分使用一个国家的例子会引起他们的反感。
例:Many children in China like to play computer games for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.
只需小小改动便可成为成功范例。
举例是为了更加形象地叙述事情。朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们要注意以下原则:
(一)要来源于生活,要具有生动的论述效果。
不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
(二)要客观表达。
虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式:
for example,/for instance,(后加句子)
Such as/ like (后加词组)
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。
1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。
改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)
2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。
改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)
3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。
改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。
“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe
【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood) throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.
篇11:我的期末考试总结——五年级上学期
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+ 加入清单嗨!时间真如江河之水,一去不复返。一个学期怎么就这么短,转瞬便已过去。这个学期结束了,我也该对自己做个期末总结了吧!
昨天刚考完期末考试,回家后我还一直是信心满满。今天上午老师叫我去帮忙登一下分数。同去的还有班上的熊雨欣和罗文杰。我在抄写分数的时候,我留心了一下自己的考试成绩。语文和数学考的还行,就是英语考的太差了,只得了90分,我原本对父母夸下海口说一题都没错,这下简直令我羞愧得无地自容。我实在是该好好的反省一下了。回想在期末考试的前一个多月,我几乎没有读一下英语课本,父母每次提醒我听读,我根本就没有去做,只是忽悠他们说:“我全都会了”。俗话说:种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。我以前每天种下的恶因,现在轮到我尝苦果的时候了。相比之下,那几位得高分的同学,就比我刻苦得多了,据我所了解,英语得高分的冯文涛和戴妮娜,每天听读英语至少一小时,他们得不到高分才怪呢!我付出的实在是太少了。那些得高分的同学都有一个共同的特点:就是熟读课文,擅写单词。而英语原本就是我的弱项,我却从来没有好好的用功。所以也只能得这样的分数了。幸好,我的语文进步了一点,数学没退也没进,但英语落后了这么多,这似乎是在告戒我:没有好的学习态度,自以为是的心理,拖拉懒惰的毛病……种种坏习惯如果不改正的话,是永远也考不出好成绩的。
总而言之,这个学期我是进步不大,却退步不小。今后我一定要好好的反省自己的过错,力争下学期纠正这些诸多缺点。要知道:“虚心使人进步,骄傲使人落后‘。这是我们每个人都应该遵循的道理。
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篇12:雅思考试作文复习经验
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+ 加入清单1,个人认为一本好的IELTS写作书对提高写作很有帮助。所谓读书破万卷,下笔如有神就是这个道理。推荐新东方的IELTS写作,里面大作文都是非常不错的范文,多读并且与自己所写文章进行比较,进而改善。不是很推荐大量写作,那不过是在练习写作速度而已,对要想拿到7分乃至8分的帮助不大。我当时每周只写一篇文章,但是因为每次写完后都能认真总结,并将理解应用到下次作文中,所以后4篇文章的写作质量上每一次的飞跃都曾令自己也惊讶。
2,要能够区别formal写作和informal写作的差别在哪里。大家都只到这主要体现在2方面,语法和词汇。譬如语法中被动语态被认为是formal写作里非常重要一种表达方式,那么用it is considered that 要明显比people all believe that更使语言提高档次。而词汇的formal使用也很重要,比如用complete不用finish,用occur不用happen等等。
3,文章要显示出严密的逻辑性,这不仅包括所谓banlance自己的观点,也只要把话说到位,就是言之必尽。banlance自己的观点就是在文中要从事物的两方面来说,至于是平衡还是有侧重的来说要根据文章题目的要求来进行阐述。而具体到段落里就是在承认一方面的同时又要说明另一方面会带来什么效果,说白了就是不能让人尽量少留给予对方反驳的机会。这点很多同学都在英文写作中作不到,在大家的想法中能阐明自己的观点已经不易了,疏不知这正是文章能否拿到7分的关键。话要说尽也就是这个道理,要让自己说的每一句话都能明确的证明自己的主题,而不仅仅是只和主题相关。
4,词汇和语法结构的复杂多变。曾经我们称赞冰心用词的多变,数千言没有重复的词汇,英语其实也是如此。比如basic,radical,fundamental,如果翻译成中文意思其实差不多,但其实还是有不同,那么一篇文章中如果同时准确的用到了这三个词汇,那么给考官的感觉肯定是不同凡响的。而语法结构的复杂不只是体现在句子长上,重要的体现出多变。比如为了加长句子我们可能总是说people who care。其实换成people caring 。不过少了一个词,但却是展示了另一种高层次的语法。(口语里比较多见,但不是说informal)其实字数我从来不认为是一种达到7分的障隘。
就写这些吧,都是一些心得,说的比较空泛。我是不背例句啊什么的,所以我考完后朋友让我重新把自己文章写出来时我只能说是按照题目和思路完全重新写了一篇。我觉得IELTS写作考的是到底对英语掌握到什么程度,没有一定的词汇量,语法基础和清晰的写作思路是不可能拿到7或者8分的,即使有再好的技巧。所以奉劝各位还是脚踏实地多加强自己对句子和词汇的掌握,而不要浪费到不停的写文章上。
篇13:雅思考试分有哪些小技巧呢
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+ 加入清单simple and easy tips for at least securing a 7 band score in writing.
1. spend 5 minutes on jotting down points on your question paper.
2. First impression is the last impression. Heard of this expression?
( It means that your intro should be rock soild, that further means it should be devoid of silly spelling and grammar mistakes. It should be delicious in taste that keeps a checker/reader at their sit edge for wanting more and more).
3. Your body paras should be stick to 2-3 good points on either side you choose. They can be based on your personal experiences or from history or from current events. Develop your essay around those points.
4. Your concluding para should be short and it is no more introducting points but rather reinforcing your firm stand on the topic. A three-four line conclusion is good enough.
5. When you write an essay. Write it straight from your heart. There must be a soul behind the writing. There should be some emotions in the essay.
6. Keep your writing sentences short. If you want to write a long sentence, its length should not be exceeded over two short sentences.
7. Use some $5 vocabulary words (lets say 6-7 in the whole essay). So that they can stand out and the checker can notice them easily. Those $5 vocabuary words are common words that you see in newspaper articles over and over again.
8. Dont worry about essay length. A 260 word essay can secure a good band than a 350 word essay.
9. Dont ever give a single chance to your checker to pick up speeling mistakes. If you write the essay with that mentality, youll do weill in the real test.
10. Learn to relax so that you can come up with good points for your essay. Writing essays should be a past time activity for you rather than a cumbersome chore which is forced upon you by a third party.
篇14:雅思考试中克服写作障碍的方法
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+ 加入清单在多年的雅思教学中,我发现学生在实际考试中面临着不同的写作障碍,影响了考试成绩,雅思考试中应该如何克服写作障碍。归纳起来大致有以下几个方面:
一、真情流露,无从下笔;
有的考生在考试时见到作文题,顿感思路塞车,好像有许多话要说,但又不知究竟应从那里写起。明智的做法是“投其所好、尽情发挥。”考生不妨把作文的要求量化到每一个段落,一篇250词左右的作文一般不会超过15句话,把这15句话根据题目要求分配到各段中去,每一段大概只说那么几句话,事实上往往是说得越多错误越多。因此,每句话紧扣提纲,见好就收,这才是最稳妥的对策。
二、心里明白,难以表达;
在考场上有的考生题目看得懂,提纲也明白,就是不知道该说什么,头脑里一片空白。这是在雅思写作考试中的一种常见的现象,针对这一现象,最有效的办法就是要善于联想到一些具体的事实,具体的例证和具体的现象。事实上,雅思的作文题目一定是一个具有社会普遍型话题,其目的是让不同教育背景的考生都有话可说。因此,考生一定能就题目联想起具体细小的事情再形成观点。把看得见摸得着的事物带来的思考变成作文里的实质内容,这不失为一种很好的策略。
因此,当头脑出现空白时,应该由具体细小的、琐碎的、微不足道的事物所引发的思考形成观点,再进行论述。这种定式思维的形成需要多下功夫多练习。
三、一味追求标新立异,导致无从下笔;
考试时通常发现有的考生聚精会神的坐在那里冥思苦想,非要想出一个与众不同的观点。陷入这种境地的考生,显然犯了一个根本性的错误,参考时间为40分钟的作文,一般应在35分钟之内完成,再用几分钟的时间检查语言错误。可有的考生十几分钟一句话都写不了,就是因为他太进入角色了,这是考试中一个很大的误区。
考作文的目的纯粹是通过这一命题形式,考查考生的英语水平如何,其它英语写作《雅思考试中应该如何克服写作障碍》。命题人关注的是书面表达能力,而不是看一个人有没有内容,思想有没有深度,所以“一味追求标新立异”是没有必要的。
四、构思、写作不统一,落实有困难;
实事求是的讲,要求考生完全运用英语思维来写作文是不现实的。很多考生在实际写作过程中,脑子里想的是中文句子,然后再把中文句子译成英文。因此采用“得其意,忘其形”的方法,忘掉中文的语法结构,句法形式则可能要整个地打乱.,“钻进去,跳出来”。所谓“钻进去”就是要看意思是否到位了,“跳出来”就是要忘记中文的语言形式。实际上把英文译成中文,关键是要在转换中把意思表达出来。
针对构思、写作不统一,落实有困难情况。必须摒弃翻译中追求一一对应的关系,并机械地把中文译成英文的方法,应该把中文句子结构彻底地忘记,然后用比较简单的“万能”英语表达。平时不妨做一做这样的练习,通过阅读不认识词条的英文注解,然后试着把单词译成中文词,再去对照英汉词典的汉语释义,慢慢地就会开始领会用英语表达的门道了。
五、被动心态压抑新构思。
尽管雅思考试作文为规定式命题,但考生仍可积极主动地发挥。其主动性在于采取回避的策略,表达上采取迂回的方式,即运用不很复杂的语言。内容的取舍上避重就轻地写比较易于表达的内容。很多人在写作过程中从头至尾都处于被动状态,当有内容想要表达清楚的时候,却又发现种种途径都不可能表达好,只好硬着头皮把自己意识到没把握的东西勉强写上去。连自己都意识到可能是错误的东西,只会产生于己不利的负面影响。所以,当有的内容感觉一点找不着,英语实在表达不清楚的时候,就应该彻底地放弃。单词拼写错误也是雅思考试作文写作的一大问题。常用单词是不能拼错的,有的单词平时会拼写,考试时突然没把握了,不妨换一下或许还能想起另外一个难度大一点、拼写有把握的来代替。应该回避明确知道自己不会拼写的词。如果没法换一个词,将句子改换一种说法亦未尝不可。有的考生在考卷上没把握的地方标上问号,或者把两种可能都写上,让判卷老师选择,这个方法是不可取的。
总之,不能让自己陷人被动,想说什么,用什么方式说。说多少,说到什么程度。一切都应由考生主动把握,这样才会减少心理上的压力,更好地发挥出自己应有的写作水平。
篇15:雅思考试小作文的五个技巧
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+ 加入清单柱状图:“比较”(找出similarity)和“对比”(找出difference),是写作的关键,既要横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征,也要分别描写各个柱子的个性特征。
饼图:是所有图表题中最好写的一种,值得注意的是要处理好如何丰富百分比的表达和“占”的表达。不要一直用数字加百分比的格式,如25%。特定的数字可以采取多样性的表达,如25%=a quarter of, 50%=half of, 50%=a,or the majority of。
曲线图:关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势,学会general classification,即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰。接下来在分类描述每个阶段的specific trend,同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据!可以使用一些比较native的单词和短语来描述trend。
表格题:考察例举数字的能力和方法。注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。
流程图:注意流程图里的“因果关系”或每一流程的“承前启后”关系;表达每一流程的主体内容,阐明这种关系;揭示其内在联系或规律;最后,给予简要归纳和总结。
篇16:雅思考试
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+ 加入清单Contrary to the common belief that good communication skill is vital to becoming a leader,actually leadership is practiced not so much in words as in actions that inspire confidence. Itmay be said that leaders are usually good talkers but the reverse is not necessarily true. Aleader had better be recognized as a dealer in confidence, one who knows the way, goes theway and shows the way and, in addition, is good at the art of communication as the languageof leadership.
A leaders right actions plus perhaps effective words can do magic to get the message carryingconfidence across to others and guide them to hope more, dream more, become more, andeven fly higher. This refers particularly to an extraordinary leader as a politician whose betterideas lead to popular trust, as often happens in more difficult times. Remember a Chineseproverb to that effect? "Not the cry, but the flight of a wild duck, leads the flock to fly andfollow." Ones good communication skill, like talking more and speaking louder, mightotherwise be just hollow words, should ones deeds not match that kind of virtue which winstrust from followers. Accordingly, it stands to reason that the greater one is in power aboveothers, the more one ought to excel them in virtue since none ought to lead who is not betterthan others.
To do justice to good communication skill, it is better to look at it as a big advantage ratherthan a great virtue in the moral sense of the word. As can be seen ever so often, what mattersto the audience is the singer and not the song, meaning a crafted talker can move the mob,even though the message may be far from correct politically. And that is probably why so manyordinary leaders are seen, who represent the power of persuasion and not the real aspirationsof their followers. From this viewpoint, good communication skill alone may actually make anordinary leader, but may still be short of making a good leader, let alone a great leader. Thedifference lies in that a good leader can inspire people to have confidence in the leader. And agreat leader can further inspire people to have confidence in themselves as well.
The confidence factor aside, good talkers have always ruled and will continue to rule, with theresults of some cases ending well and some ending badly. Therefore it is desirable having thecombination of the virtue of leadership and the art of eloquence. Nevertheless, the ultimatetruth must be acknowledged that true leadership is always associated with virtuous actionsrather than simply with skillful communication in words.
篇17:雅思考试作文技巧及应试步骤
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+ 加入清单各位同学:
何钢将于2月24日至3月3日离京,在此期间可能无法及时回复各位的帖子。为帮助大家提高作文水平,了解雅思写作要求,在此公布本人用心批改的一篇学生作文,供大家参考。版权所有,请勿随意转贴。如欲转贴,请注明(北京新东方何钢)。
题目:
Now many people think that we are spending too much time and money on protecting animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree?
学生作文:
In reality, a large number of money have been funded on the development of human population in order to enhance the living standand. Although government and animal lovers have started to assist in conservation of animals, lacking of money and social awareness is still a key problem of animal conservation progam. now people should care and pay more for animals rather than living in luxury.
Government have put certain fund on wild animals, while a few part of them was spent on protecting animals legally. Instead, large account of money has been cost to murder them. eg. in scientific research, animals are more like victims whose body might suffer a lot even damaged through experiment in aimning of coming out a result from experiment, rather than lucky ones who can benefit lots care and love from hunman being. From long term view, government should not only spend money for current profits but aslo pay more for our generations.
Admittedly, although money has been gathered to set covervation program for animals, it is so limited that animals could not get a better care in zoos. Lacking of money is the mainly problem to maintain the running of zoos, which cause the animals have to transform to another area, and some of them could die for the frequently traving and uncomfortable weather. Animals are facing awful fate unless government could settle the financial issue by all means.
To sum up, animals lovers should do more effort to save the endanged animals especially rare species, by wakening up the social awareness and donating money. where people could save money for animals ,when we will get benefit from wildlife.
何钢的评点:
文章共275字,基本符合要求。
1) Arguments, ideas, and evidence.
审题:现在许多人认为我们在保护动物方面花了太多的时间和金钱。这些时间和金钱与其用来保护动物,不如用来花在人身上。你同意不同意这个观点?
此题结构与《高分作文》第8页范文类似。在写作这篇文章的时候,首先应该分析我们目前在动物保护方面的现状:是否花费过多,并提出自己的观点。如果认为的确花费过多,要说说为什么。并且应该进行比较分析,为什么更应该花钱在人身上。如果认为花得值,那么要说说原因,然后谈谈保护动物对于人类的作用和意义。
篇18:期中考试总结
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+ 加入清单期中考试在我们紧张而又忙碌的复习中结束了,好也罢,坏也罢,成也罢,败也罢,喜也罢,愁也罢,都已经过去了,我们现在要做的就是认真总结,积极反思,调适心态,再决将来。
星期四,我们学校举行了期中考试期中考试终考完了,我心里的一块石头落了下,可是又有一块大石压得我喘不过气,那就是考试分数。一下课,同学们都在议论难题、分数什么的,弄得我紧张死了。
早上第二节上数学课,我早早把书拿出,听几个同学说我考了93分。可我还是很担心,万一他们看错了怎么办?就这样,在紧张的气氛下,数学老师走进了教室,怀里抱着我们的卷。我报一下成绩!数学老师说着拿起了试卷。这时,教室里的空气一下子凝固了起,同学们的脸上充满了焦急、担心。同学们的成绩有好有差。有的听到成绩,立刻变得兴高采烈,眉飞色舞;有的却垂头丧气,后悔不已,后悔自己当初怎么不认真复习。教室里顿时陷入了紧张的气氛里。此时,我的心提到了嗓子眼,手心里也开始冒汗。93分;还不错,我心里的大石头落了下。当试卷发下后,我急忙在试卷上找错误。原自己在列方程式时把上面的数字写倒了。我不由地在心里说怎么这么粗心大意!语文,科学试卷也发了下,语文考了5分,科学考了96分。
我觉得自己最大的毛病就是太粗心。我曾经无数次向粗心宣战,但每一次都以失败而告终。时常闹出笑话,我成为了同学们的笑柄。还有一个缺点就是做试卷的时候不认真。我做试卷的时候觉得时间很紧,就飞快的做起,不免字迹潦草。有的时候连自己也看不清自己写的字。
我在以后的考试中一定要认真仔细,做题目时要看清之后在写。以后,我要再接再厉,养成认真的好习惯,争取得到更好的成绩!
记住一句话:“无志之人常立志,有志之人立长志”。
篇19:数学期中考试后的反思和总结350字
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+ 加入清单本次期中考试,我的各门科目都进步了,虽然离优异的成绩还有很大的差距,但是至少都向前迈进了一小步。
我的数学成绩有一段时间特别糟糕,基础计算不过关,难题没思路,是算啥啥不行,看见题目就头疼。但我静下心来,仔细想想如果一味地躲,怕,是从根本上解决不了问题地,困难像弹簧,你弱它就强,所以我暗下决心,一定要打败困难,战胜自我。
先从基础下手,细心练,用心写,养成好的书写习惯,不因为潦草而造成错误。接下来在难题上做到每天两三道,画辅助线,找线索,套公式,总之是想尽办法努力克服困难,多做,多练,多问,熟能生巧,终于在考试时突破了以往见到倒数两道题根本没思路,而是一鼓作气地做出了倒数第二道题,并且10分全部到手,最后一道题由于时间的问题只拿到了一分。
这说明自己在做题的速度上还存在很大的问题,以后要再继续多练习的基础上提高速度,提高效率,而且不在不应该丢分的题目上轻易丢分,一分一分地扣,一分一分地进步,相信付出一定会有所回报。
而且要将自己在数学练习上成功的心得,贯穿到其它科目,取长补短,找到可以借鉴的共同点,争取再各科都有所突破。相信功夫不负有心人,我不仅要有心还要用心,相信我一定会继续努力,继续前进,加油!
首先继续刻苦努力学习,端正态度,按时完成段老师布置的各项作业;第二在学校的学习中争取在期末考试时在前进至少一百名,进入前五百名,班级进入前35名。总分达到560阅读扣分在8分以内,作文扣分在8分,第三,学情总分达到8000分一定要进入前一百。