初二英语作文满分1000字(最新20篇)
环境围绕我们身边,例如:空气、水、动物、建筑等。它们从各个方面影响着我们的生活,与我们的生活密切相关,人们离开环境就无法生存。下面是小编为大家分享的初二英语作文满分1000字,希望大家喜欢!
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546篇1:介绍家乡的初二英语作文
全文共 1028 字
+ 加入清单The Longhu villa in my hometown Pengshui County, where the fog is floating, (.) is a magical and beautiful place.
The flag up to an altitude of about 1000 meters high, halfway up the mountain air is very sweet, very refreshing. The mountain long rows of trees under the tree is a wild profusion of vegetation, and insects and other small animal snake, so you walk can hear small animal sounds.
The most interesting, is that the top of the thick fog, one or two months a year, on the top of the mountain will have a thick layers of fog, you can put the fog blowing a "hole" in one breath, but it closed in neither fast nor slow, steep peak, have a piece of egg shaped stone. Its a good place to watch the fog, but prone to hallucinations sitting on the stone, you will feel as if you are sitting in the clouds is Sun Wukong, somersault cloud, all of a sudden to jump down! And its easy to sit on the stone and jump down! You know, this stone is surrounded by a cliff! So, its better not to sit on the stone, because its a safe one!
篇2:高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信
全文共 961 字
+ 加入清单Dear Jeff,
Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.
To Jeff
Dear Jeff,
Im Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.
While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home. So we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
[高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信
篇3:历年小升初英语满分作文:自我介绍
全文共 1004 字
+ 加入清单I am a 10 years old boy. Smart and handsome. I am proud of myself. Because I can get perfect scores in Chinese, math and English. It is not good enough, I am also proud of being an elder brother. That is a Friday evening, my baby brother was crying all the time. My parents were both cooking for dinner. I said to my mum, let me look after this little thing. My mum said, “Are you sure you can?” “ Yes ,believe me I can.” I answered. Then mum went to the kitchen. I went towards my baby brother. “ Oh baby, don’t cry. I will sing a song for you…” I carried him and sing songs for him. After a while, he was asleep. I was so tired. My parents were happy and praised me a good boy. This is my first time to look after my baby brother and I feel proud of myself.
我是一个10岁的男孩。聪明英俊的。我为自己感到自豪。因为我可以得到完美的成绩语文,数学和英语。它不够好,我也感到自豪的是一个哥哥。那是一个星期五的晚上,我的弟弟哭了所有的时间。我的父母都煮晚餐。我说我的妈妈,让我照看这个小东西。我妈妈说,“你肯定你能吗?“是的,我相信我可以。”我回答。然后妈妈到厨房去。我对我的弟弟。“哦,宝贝,不要哭。我会为你唱一首歌……“我把他给他唱歌。过了一会儿,他睡着了。我太累了。我的父母非常高兴,夸我是个好男孩。这是我第一次来照顾我的小弟弟,我为自己感到自豪。
篇4:我的英语老师初二作文
全文共 977 字
+ 加入清单可爱的你,带给我温暖。
——题记
刚来这个班时,我第一个遇见的是你,我因为不会叠被子,而你却在寝室里像妈妈一样的帮助我,那时,我就有点喜欢你了。
当你让我当你的英语课代表时,我就毫不犹豫的答应了。因为你不仅年轻,长得也很清纯,并且还有一颗少女心。
可惜,时间长后,我发现我厌恶你了。
教学方式不好,单词好写错,知识点没讲全,我感觉我的英语快要死了,每天都和一些成绩好的同学们在背后说你的不好,真是越想越烦,可惜没人敢对你说你的不好,我们大家都很纠结。看着你脸上的微笑,我不禁有点觉得虚伪,心里也在郁闷的滴血。
直到有一天,你喊我出去谈话,心平气和的跟我说:我是不是讲的不好啊,同学们好像不喜欢我,我们俩好像也不像以前那莫默契了。我才终于把我想说的话终于说了个遍,老师和我聊了许久,我感觉心暖暖的,原来老师也在纠结这个问题,可是每天还装着心情很好来上课,不想打扰大家的情绪。老师原来也会换位思考,身为权威的老师,却向我请教,这要有多大的勇气啊。我的脑海突然想到老师认真起来得模样,想起她的书上全是密密麻麻的笔记。
直到现在,我已经爱上你了。喜欢你上课时轻松的气氛,不像语文老师的迅速激昂;数学老师的严肃安静;物理老师的紧张费神。而是轻松愉快。喜欢你甜美的声音,让人专注;喜欢你可爱的模样,让人发笑;喜欢你认真的态度,让人钦佩。
我有时都搞不懂你,每天下三你都会准时来到,一坐坐一节课,即使整节课没一人写英语作业,你也会想办法挤点时间让大家学英语,教育差生,或者说默默坐在椅子上改听写。你很乐观,即使我们班英语不是很好,你也总是失落会就会满血复活。你很年轻,所以你课后总会和我们打成一片,很懂我们的心思,同学们也会把心里真实的想法告诉你,而不告诉别的老师。你很努力,即使独自一人站三节课,嘴里也在抱怨很累,但精神总是那么饱满,仍拼命地站着,讲着。你有点傻,当班主任把体育老师的课给你时,你总会把可爱的笑容露出来,说什么班主任很贴心,难道多给你奖钱吗?你上了那么多节不累吗?你不想休息吗?你不怕同学们埋怨你吗?你就是这么傻,愿意奉献自己。
可爱的你,给了我很多机会,让我能够好好学习英语;每天都不厌其烦的指点我,开导我,在我危难时,也会伸出援助之手,你很信任我,所以我不会让你失望。
可爱的你,请一直微笑,因为我会和你在一起。谢谢你,谢谢你带给我可爱的温暖。
[我的英语老师初二作文
篇5:以网吧为话题的初二英语作文
全文共 995 字
+ 加入清单Teenagers like to computer games so much, some even drop out of the class and they hang around the street, going to the Internet bar, and are immerged themselves in the computer games. As we all known, Internet bar is not a good place for teenagers to come. First, there are all kinds of people in that places.It has been reported that many accidents have happened in the Internet bar, some people have fought each other and then cut people, even people died there. It is so dangerous. Second, as the teenagers are so innocent, they may be seduced by some bad people in the Internet bar, the teenagers may be adducted to other places and never come home again. Internet bar is not a safe place for teenagers, so they should learn protect themselves and stay away from it.
青少年很喜欢玩电脑游戏,一些人甚至旷课,他们在街上到处晃荡,去到网吧里面,沉浸在电脑游戏里面。我们都知道,网吧对于青少年来说不是一个该去的好地方。第一,网吧里面有形形色色的人。据报道,很多事故发生在网吧里面,一些人彼此间打架,然后砍人,甚至有人死掉。这是多么危险啊。第二,青少年相对比较天真,他们可能会在网吧里面收到坏人的诱导,也有可能被坏人绑架到别的地方,永远不能再回家。网吧对于青少年来说不是一个安全的地方,所以他们应该学着保护自己,远离网吧。
篇6:以成功需要坚持初二满分
全文共 967 字
+ 加入清单有人说,成功要靠机遇和坚持不懈的精神;还有人说,谋事在人,成事在天。 Some people say that success must rely on opportunities and unremitting spirit; others say that things are in people and things are in the sky.
但是,人们是不是有了一定的机遇和执着,就会有创造、有成功呢?
一种人认为,精诚所至,金石为开,所以一直在努力,那么创造离我们将不再遥远;反对者说,没有机遇你一辈子努力也出不了头,这就好比姜太公钓鱼。
是机遇造就了成功,还是不懈的努力造就了成功?这两者一时反而成了矛盾的统一体,成了纠缠不清的谜团。
这究竟是怎么回事?
杨振宁先生相信大家都很熟,是诺贝尔物理奖获得者,是创造与成功的典范。恰恰在不久,他参加了浙江大学的百年校庆,而记者也恰恰问了他我们正在探索的问题:人们怎么才能获得成功?
杨振宁先生是这么回答的:我们要想成功,第一要有机遇,第二要了解你从事的事业的尖端和你自己,第三就是个人坚持不懈地努力。
记者又问杨振宁先生,“你是不是总是成功,而没有失败过?”
杨振宁先生斩钉截铁地回答:“不是的。我失败过,而且败得很惨。我在美国读过一年半的研究生,搞实验物理。但是,我天生动手能力差,我搞的实验失败了。当我充分认识了自己后我转而搞理论物理的研究,后来我成功了。”
从杨振宁先生的回答我们可以总结出来,杨振宁先生的成功也正在于他说的那三点:一是机遇,二是智慧,三是努力。
试想,如果杨振宁先生没有客观地认识自己,而是一味地蛮干,一味地投入于实验物理也许直至今天他还一无所获。
同样,法国科学家别涅迪克要不是细心地留意实验中一只烧杯掉到地上,没被摔碎的现象,没把他看到一辆客车发生车祸,车窗上的挡风玻璃碎片划伤了司机和乘客那篇报道,加以联系,深入研究,他能发明出新型材料制成的挡风玻璃吗?不能。
成事在天,并不意味着我们要想获得成功,就得等待上天的降临机遇;说到努力,我们就只管强调坚持不懈,努力也需要巧,需要动脑,需要智慧,如果不发挥自己的智慧,则努力只能是蛮干,那就会南辕北辙,越努力,离机遇越远,离成功越远,而离失败可能是越近。因为它背离了真理和事物的客观规律。
所以说,智慧是维系成功的纽带。
篇7:2024年高二期末英语满分
全文共 1002 字
+ 加入清单I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It
took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We
stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in
the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road.
It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of
people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs
of trousers for the ing summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white
because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On
the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full
of people. I played many kinds of gamesthere. I had a good time. The other days,
I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV
Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t
forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.
篇8:有关交通英语初二
全文共 972 字
+ 加入清单Nowadays, motorcycles are popular around us. They have become an important
means of transport in Chinese cities. Compared with the bike and the car, the
motorcycle has its own advantages. First, it is quite flexible. When there is a
traffic jam, it can go through the cars that are held up in the street. Besides,
it doesnt consume much petrol. Most important of all, it can carry another
person at the back. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also
apparent. To begin with, its very complicated to get qualified fur riding a
motorcycle. Youll have to go through a series of procedures to get a riding
license. Furthermore, the maintenance is expensive. Worst of all, it costs a big
sum of money to pay fur the license plate, especially in big cities.
In conclusion, it has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. However, if
the authorities concerned simplify the procedures and reduce the cost of the
license plate, the motorcycle will be accepted by more people.
篇9:关于我的英语老师的英语满分作文
全文共 999 字
+ 加入清单Our English Teacher
Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.
She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says,"Practice makes perfect."
She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English playS.
She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her.
Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.
我们的英语老师
黄老师是我们的英语老师,她1970年来到我们学校,已经当了30多年的英语老师。她工作努力,多年来一直是模范教师。
课下,她对我们很友善,但课堂上却对我们要求很严。她经常带鼓励我们多说多读英语,常常说“熟能生巧”。
她教得很好而且尽可能使每节课都上得生动有趣。她常给我们放幻灯片,教我们唱英语歌曲,还帮助我们排演英语小话剧。
她不仅是我们的老师,同时又是我们的朋友,我们都尊敬和爱戴她。
明天,她将出席一个重要会议,而且由于她的先进事迹将在会上受到表彰。
[关于我的英语老师的英语满分作文
篇10:初二关于暑假的英语作文
全文共 974 字
+ 加入清单Every year the summer vacation, my life is very different, than at school life more interesting, more rich, more meaningful.
After the summer vacation, my life became interesting. Its hot in summer, and friends to go to swimming pool swimming is the happiest thing in my summer vacation.
Every afternoon 1 point, about on a few good friends, take swimming equipment, take some pocket money, to 95 troops in the swimming pool to swim. Plunge into the water, the sun wilting, we immediately restore the vitality, we are happy, like a fish swim in the water.
We can do some games in shallow water, can be in the water, a water fight, spark white spray also seems to be infected by our happy atmosphere, playfully.
This is my summer vacation life.
每年到了暑假,我的生活就大不一样了,比在学校的学习生活更加有趣、更加充实、更加有意义。
放暑假以后,我的生活开始变得有趣。夏日天气炎热,和朋友去游泳馆游泳是我暑假中最快乐的事。
每到午后1点,约上几个要好的朋友,带好游泳装备,带点零花钱,去95部队的游泳馆游泳。一头扎下水,被太阳晒萎蔫的我们,立刻恢复了勃勃生机,我们快乐得像鱼儿一样,在水里遨游。
我们可以在浅水区做一些游戏,可以在水里打水仗,四溅的白色水花似乎也被我们的快乐气氛感染了,顽皮地活蹦乱跳。
这就是我的暑假生活。
篇11:高考的满分英语
全文共 969 字
+ 加入清单Zhang Dong is my best friend. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. Besides,football is our favourite sport. We like watching football match. Zhang Dong works hard at his lessons. He often studies late into the night. No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects. He loves popular songs and classical music, too.
There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He dreams of being a lawyer in the future.
Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. I highly value the friendship with him.
张东是我最要好的朋友,他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语,因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。此外,我们两人都喜欢足球,爱看足球赛。张东学习很努力,他经常学习到深夜。不管他多么累,他都坚持完成他的功课,所以他各科功课都很好。他喜欢流行音乐,也喜欢古典音乐。
他家有三口人,他是独生子。父亲是个医生,母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕,但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他梦想将来当个律师。
这就是我的朋友,一个聪明、友好的男孩。我珍视同他之间的友谊。
篇12:浙江中考满分英语作文:MyEnglishLearning
全文共 1027 字
+ 加入清单Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示:
When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)
What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)
中考英语满分作文:
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
篇13:初二英语作文:我最好的朋友
全文共 1016 字
+ 加入清单Everybody has a best friend that they can share everything with.I also have a best friend.We met in school,and were in the same grade.
My best friend is a good student because he is very hardworking.I learn a lot from him.He helps me with math;I help him with English.We always help each other.besides that,hes honest and reliable.I trust him completely and we share secrets all the time.
My best friend is also loyal and brave.Once when a bully teased me,he came to my rescue right away.He always remembers my birthday and he is fun to be with.He tells funny jokes and stories.He always makes me laugh.Finally,he is a very good listener and he knows how to cheer me up when Im down.
My best friend is really one of a kind.I hope well stay friends forever.
每个人都有一个最好的朋友,他们可以分享一切。我也有一个最好的朋友。在学校时我们见过面,我们在同一个年级。
我最好的朋友是一个好学生,因为他非常勤奋。我从他学到很多东西。他帮我复习数学,我帮他复习英语。我们总是互相帮助。除此之外,他的诚实和可靠的。我完全信任他,我们互相分享秘密。
我最好的朋友也是忠诚和勇敢。一旦当欺负嘲笑我,他马上来到我的救援。他总是记得我的生日,他很有趣。他经常讲有趣的笑话和故事。他总是让我发笑。最后,他是一个很好的倾听者,他知道如何鼓励我当我下来。
我最好的朋友是真正独一无二的。我希望我们能成为永远的朋友。
篇14:高考英语的满分作文:Failure失败
全文共 1029 字
+ 加入清单Everyone knows that failure always accompanies us in our life. No matter what we do, none of us can say we will surely succeed, because there is no such thing as plain sailing.
大家都知道,失败总是伴随着我们的生活。无论我们做什么,没有人能说我们肯定会成功,因为没有所谓的一帆风顺。
About failure, different people have different opinions. Generally speaking, on one hand, people think "failure is the mother of success". They think we wont understand the profound meaning of success until we go through failure. On the other hand, for some people, failure is frustration. They think if a person goes through too much failure, he will collapse and lose confidence in his life.
对失败,不同的人有不同的观点。一般来说,一方面,人们认为“失败是成功之母”。他们认为我们不会理解的深刻含义成功直到我们经历失败。另一方面,对于一些人来说,失败是失望。他们认为如果一个人经历太多的失败,他将会崩溃,在他的生活中失去信心。
In my opinion, failure is the footstone and catalyst of the edifice of success. "You dont know what you have until its gone." If you have never lost it, and always get it easily, you will not cherish what you get and own.
在我看来,失败是成功的基石和催化剂的大厦。“你不知道你所拥有的,直到它消失了。“如果你没有失去它,总是很容易,你不会珍惜你所得到的,自己的。
篇15:有关交通英语初二
全文共 1006 字
+ 加入清单In modern society, the problem of heavy traffic has aroused a wide concern.
Concerning with this problem, different people hold different opinions. As far
as I am concerned, to solve this problem, we need to begin with the following
steps.
First, limiting the number of private cars is a significant step to solve
the problem of heavy traffic. Private car occupies a larger space and it is
responsible for traffic jam to a large extent. Less private cars will accelerate
the flow of traffic. Second, it is also a good means to open up the special
roads for buses. By doing this, the phenomenon that the buses block the street
when passengers get on or get off the buses will not occur again. At the same
time, it will upgrade the efficiency of buses. Finally, reinforcing punish
toward the over-speed cars and drunk driving so as to reduce the rate of traffic
accident, and then decrease traffic jam.
To put it in a nutshell, only we put the above advice into practice
together can we solve the problem of heavy traffic.
篇16:历年小升初英语满分作文:我的英语老师
全文共 990 字
+ 加入清单Ms Jerry is an english teacher. She comes from New Zealand. She is thirty-one years old. She has fair hair, white skin and gray eyes. She is tall and slim. She looks very kind. And in fact, she is kind indeed.
杰里小姐是一位英语老师。她来自新西兰。她三十一岁了。她有金色的头发,白皙的皮肤和灰色的眼睛。她高而苗条。她看起来很好。事实上,她是真的。
Ms Jerry is a good teacher. Although she only comes to our school twice a week, yet she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students. Once. she was ill, but she went on giving us lessons. When we learned this, we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.
MS杰里是个好老师。虽然她只有两周来我们的学校,但她是她的工作,她的学生非常严格责任。一旦。她病了,但她仍坚持给我们上课。当我们知道这个情况后,我们都听得比平时更用心。
Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm:" Each lesson she will bring us new pictures, new stories, new games and new songs. Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.
杰里小姐教我们英语,以极大的热情:“每节课她都会给我们带来新的图片,新故事,新游戏和新歌曲。她的课堂上总是充满着愉快的笑声和欢乐的歌声。
Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.
杰里小姐是一位好老师,我们都敬爱她。
篇17:2024小升初英语满分作文:我的美好的假期
全文共 984 字
+ 加入清单小编导语:小升初英语满分作文:我的美好的假期是小编为你准备的小升初英语满分作文:我的美好的假期。想要写好英语作文同学们就一定要多看看优秀范文。供你学习参考。
I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.
Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.
At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
This is a good holiday on the sun.
篇18:初二年级英语作文带翻译:myfamily
全文共 950 字
+ 加入清单I have a happy family.My family have five poeple:grandpa,grandma,father,mother,and me.
My grandparents live in countryside.They have six rooms.The room is big.There are two apple in the ground.They have sixteen goats and three cows.The goat is white.The cow is yellow.They are healthy.
My parents and me live in city.My father is a worker.His work is hard.My mother is a high schools Chinese teacher,She take bicycle go to work at sevenclock.In the afternoon,she doesnt go home.In the evening,she make supper.The food is delicious.I am a student.I have Chinese,math and English everyday.That is boring.I have many friends.After class,I play with my friends.
We are tried,but we are very happy.I love my family
我有一个幸福的家庭。我的家庭有五人:爷爷,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈,和我。
我的祖父母住在乡下。他们有六个房间。房间是大的。有两个苹果在地上。他们有十六个山羊和三头牛。山羊是白色的。牛是黄色的。他们是健康的。
我的父母和我住在城市。我的父亲是一个工人。他的工作是很难的。我妈妈是一个中学的语文老师,她在7点带自行车去上班。下午,她不回家。在晚上,她做晚饭。食物是美味的。我是一个学生。每天我有语文、数学和英语。这是无聊的。我有很多朋友。下课后,我和我的朋友玩。
我们试过了,但是我们很开心。我爱我的家庭
篇19:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧
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+ 加入清单下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧,欢迎阅读。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
篇20:我的时光机初二英语作文
全文共 954 字
+ 加入清单When I see the cartoon, I like to watch the cat machine very much, he has a time machine, he always helps his friend to fine something with time machine. The cartoon makes me think of what would I do if I have a time machine. If I have a time machine, the first thing I want to do is go back to the time when I play with my friend, he now moves to another place, I never say goodbye to him, I want to make it up and say goodbye to him. The second thing is I want to go back to the time when I shout at my mother, I regret about this all the time, I wish I had a chance to say sorry at that time. Now I have to face the truth that I will never have time machine, I should cherish the time and thing I own now, be nice to my mother.
当我看卡通片的时候,我很喜欢看机器猫,他有一台时光机,他总是用时光机来帮助他的朋友找到一些东西。这个卡通片让我想到了如果我也有一台时光机,我会做什么。如果我有一台时光机,第一件事做的就是回到我和朋友玩耍的时光,他现在已经搬到另外一个地方了,我没有和他道别,我想要补偿并道别。第二件事就是我想回到我反驳母亲的时光,我总是为此感到悔恨,我希望我那个时候有机会道别。现在我必须得面对现实,我不会拥有时光机,我应该珍惜现在是时间和所拥有的东西,对母亲友好。